IMO, the first offset should be 590 and the second should be 34330. I'm noob for this timing section, sorry if it's wrong.
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Keiichi Suzuki - New Age Retro Hippie
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Topic Starter
34320 ms sounds better to me.
Done!
Done!
KUMUSTA HONEY!!!!
Remember! My nazi-mod is make interest to see!
[Practice Fight]
00:41:343 (3) - Move 1 grid up
[vs. Hippie]
00:46:435 (2,3) - Move 1 grid down
00:18:851 (2) - Make it like this
00:20:958 (2) - Must same like this
Not too bad....
STAR
Remember! My nazi-mod is make interest to see!
[Practice Fight]
00:41:343 (3) - Move 1 grid up
[vs. Hippie]
00:46:435 (2,3) - Move 1 grid down
00:18:851 (2) - Make it like this
00:20:958 (2) - Must same like this
Not too bad....
STAR
Topic Starter
Done
Practise Fight
00:14:988 (spinner) - maybe whistle and finish here
Vs. Hippie
00:23:768 (1,2) - fix spacing (maybe by moving the 1st beat a square down and a square left...)
Vs. Franky
It's SUPER! (maybe fix spacing in the section after the break time)
A short, good beatmap with lovely custom backgrounds: let's star it!
00:14:988 (spinner) - maybe whistle and finish here
Vs. Hippie
00:23:768 (1,2) - fix spacing (maybe by moving the 1st beat a square down and a square left...)
Vs. Franky
It's SUPER! (maybe fix spacing in the section after the break time)
A short, good beatmap with lovely custom backgrounds: let's star it!
Only suggestions from me.
Overall
Try to add more hitsounds. It sounds a bit empty to me. Circle Sizes should be different for each Difficulty. See suggestions below
Practice Fight
Increase Circle Size, HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty all by 1
vs. Hippie
Fine. Just add more hitsounds.
vs. Franky
Decrease Circle Size by 1.
Looks pretty good to me. Star ~ *
Overall
Try to add more hitsounds. It sounds a bit empty to me. Circle Sizes should be different for each Difficulty. See suggestions below
Practice Fight
Increase Circle Size, HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty all by 1
vs. Hippie
Fine. Just add more hitsounds.
vs. Franky
Decrease Circle Size by 1.
Looks pretty good to me. Star ~ *
Topic Starter
Increased HP Drain and Overall Difficulty on Practice Fight
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Why still added Break Times even the song is very short? =_="
~Practice Fight~
00:31:494 (3) - normal-hitclap!? D:
00:44:504 (2) - ^
~vs. Hippie~
00:23:768 (3,4) - wrong spacing
00:44:328 (1,2) - normal-hitclap!? D:
z~vs. Franky~
็ำHell jumps D:
btw, no major issues.
+Star
~Practice Fight~
00:31:494 (3) - normal-hitclap!? D:
00:44:504 (2) - ^
~vs. Hippie~
00:23:768 (3,4) - wrong spacing
00:44:328 (1,2) - normal-hitclap!? D:
z~vs. Franky~
็ำHell jumps D:
btw, no major issues.
+Star
A song this short really doesn't need breaks (and the breaks are mapable)
Practice fight:
looks fine
vs. Hippee:
00:23:768 (3) - move down to align with 1
00:24:119 (4) - move 1 tick right and 1 tick down
vs. Franky:
00:24:470 (1,2,3,4) - looks confusing but seems fine in playing
PM me after you fix that small spacing issue and map breaks (unless you really really don't want to) then I should be able to pubble.
*star*
Practice fight:
looks fine
vs. Hippee:
00:23:768 (3) - move down to align with 1
00:24:119 (4) - move 1 tick right and 1 tick down
vs. Franky:
00:24:470 (1,2,3,4) - looks confusing but seems fine in playing
PM me after you fix that small spacing issue and map breaks (unless you really really don't want to) then I should be able to pubble.
*star*
ok im not going to force you to map the breaks and I see no other flaws with this map so
Pubbled!
Pubbled!
Sorry that it took me so long to get to this D:! orz
[General]
Please add an audio lead-in for all difficulties. 1/2 - 1 second is enough.
[Practice Fight]
00:13:232 (3,4) - With snaking sliders turned off, it's hard to tell which of these is the slider and which is the circle, and so that makes this unrankable. Please change this. :V
[vs. Hippie]
Looks okay.
[vs. Franky]
Big spacing + jumps = D: my hand hurts, but it's fine xD
I hate to pop this, but I have to. ;~; Just send me a forum PM when it's fixed and I'll repubble!
[General]
Please add an audio lead-in for all difficulties. 1/2 - 1 second is enough.
[Practice Fight]
00:13:232 (3,4) - With snaking sliders turned off, it's hard to tell which of these is the slider and which is the circle, and so that makes this unrankable. Please change this. :V
[vs. Hippie]
Looks okay.
[vs. Franky]
Big spacing + jumps = D: my hand hurts, but it's fine xD
I hate to pop this, but I have to. ;~; Just send me a forum PM when it's fixed and I'll repubble!
waaaaay too many jumps in vs. Franky D:
try to reduce some, if you want to
try to reduce some, if you want to
Topic Starter
That's what I like about it
Aaaaand looks fine now~
Re-Pubbled
Re-Pubbled
Topic Starter
Thanks
[Storyboard]
Ugh... I hate storyboarded hitsounds.....
[Practice]
00:31:494 (3) - Make this 2 white ticks long with 2 reverse arrows.
[Hippie]
[Franky]
Ugh, i dislike the strange spacing/jumps on this difficulty Like 00:16:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6)....
Pretty good.
I dislike Earthbound but this theme is pretty good
*star*
Ugh... I hate storyboarded hitsounds.....
[Practice]
00:31:494 (3) - Make this 2 white ticks long with 2 reverse arrows.
[Hippie]
[Franky]
Ugh, i dislike the strange spacing/jumps on this difficulty Like 00:16:042 (1,2,3,4,5,6)....
Pretty good.
I dislike Earthbound but this theme is pretty good
*star*
Some storyboard tips brought via Irc. Good luck for ranking this! ;3
All
That combo colors.... blah
Pratice
Nothing
Hippie
00:09:018 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:408 (1) - ^
00:18:149 (1) - ^
00:24:470 (1) - really hard to see when it ends. change plz
Franky
HOLY F
Great map, star!
That combo colors.... blah
Pratice
Nothing
Hippie
00:09:018 (1) - remove new combo
00:13:408 (1) - ^
00:18:149 (1) - ^
00:24:470 (1) - really hard to see when it ends. change plz
Franky
HOLY F
Great map, star!
no problems found
nice SB
Star
nice SB
Star
Great! Have a star.
I love Earthbound.
I love Earthbound.
Good storyboard.
[Practice Fight]
all good.
[vs. Hippie]
all good.
[vs. Franky]
00:14:988 - add clap.
00:15:690 - ^
Oh, very hard jumps , but.. i dont think its bad~ star.
[Practice Fight]
all good.
[vs. Hippie]
all good.
[vs. Franky]
00:14:988 - add clap.
00:15:690 - ^
Oh, very hard jumps , but.. i dont think its bad~ star.
Topic Starter
Sorry but I want to keep that part silent[DBF] wrote:
[vs. Franky]
00:14:988 - add clap.
00:15:690 - ^
Oh, very hard jumps , but.. i dont think its bad~ star.
Overall: Something doesn't feel right on the first offset. As much as possible, never round the offset to a multiple of 10 because a skew on the offset by 1 can have an impact on the map. I tried playing the map at +5 ms. offset and it sounded better. So I concluded that the offset is around 594-596. You might wanna test it out.
Ness Kicks A Crow with Sunglasses' Butt!:
Ness Beats Up A Hippie Dude!:
Ness Doesn't Have Anything Left To Fight! :O :
Ness Kicks A Crow with Sunglasses' Butt!:
SPOILER
General: IMO, slider tick rate sounds better at 1. I can't find the the beat properly with a slider tick rate of 2. But this problem might have something to do with the timing.
Storyboarding: Crop the green part in gameshop.png. It doesn't look that good. For the first part, I think you should remove the background image but don't touch the other SB elements. It should look better. This should go for all the other diffs.
00:28:684 (1) - Suggestion: Remove clap at the end of the slider.
00:30:089 (2) - ^
00:31:494 (3) - Suggestion: Add a whistle at the starting part of the slider and also when it goes back to it (meaning 2 whistles at the same point of the slider).
00:42:748 (1) - Suggestion: Remove clap at the returning point of the slider (the one with an arrow).
00:46:260 (3) - Suggestion: I'm doubting this but can you check if putting the claps on the end part of the slider sound better?
Storyboarding: Crop the green part in gameshop.png. It doesn't look that good. For the first part, I think you should remove the background image but don't touch the other SB elements. It should look better. This should go for all the other diffs.
00:28:684 (1) - Suggestion: Remove clap at the end of the slider.
00:30:089 (2) - ^
00:31:494 (3) - Suggestion: Add a whistle at the starting part of the slider and also when it goes back to it (meaning 2 whistles at the same point of the slider).
00:42:748 (1) - Suggestion: Remove clap at the returning point of the slider (the one with an arrow).
00:46:260 (3) - Suggestion: I'm doubting this but can you check if putting the claps on the end part of the slider sound better?
Ness Beats Up A Hippie Dude!:
SPOILER
00:15:690 (2) - Suggestion: Relocate the clap at the end of 00:14:813 (1) -
00:17:798 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:557 (1) - ^
00:17:798 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:45:557 (1) - ^
Ness Doesn't Have Anything Left To Fight! :O :
SPOILER
General: Oh lord, the slider velocity is a little too slow. I suggest increasing it a bit, however, it might take a lot of time to fix this so you might not want to do it. Slider tick rate suggestion also applies here from what I said in [Practice Fight].
00:33:074 (1) - Move this farther away from the previous beats.
00:45:909 (2,3) - You might wanna align these.
00:33:074 (1) - Move this farther away from the previous beats.
00:45:909 (2,3) - You might wanna align these.
bubbled
Awww... you use the whole map, which is 3083 x 3341, just for the 640 x 480 background? it will be blame 
Topic Starter
If someone can crop the image for me...
I don't see of it as a large problem though. It's just a bigger file...
I don't see of it as a large problem though. It's just a bigger file...
crop it yourself, its your own map.
images that are too big are not allowed you know
images that are too big are not allowed you know
Don't give kudosu.
Change source to EarthBound.
:>
Change source to EarthBound.
:>
i dont need kudosu stupid.
and uhh... yeahhhhhhhhhh thumbs.db lol
and uhh... yeahhhhhhhhhh thumbs.db lol
Topic Starter
Done
ew
...
Ehm, i mean, starred~
roflxxheroxx wrote:
Ranked~
...
Ehm, i mean, starred~
Topic Starter
xxheroxx wrote:
...
Practice Fight
vs. Hippie
00:47:138 (1) - move this slider to the y axis?
vs. Franky
Nah nothing much but nazi
00:45:031 (5,6,7) - these beats aren't spaced out well
maybe moving 00:45:206 (6,7) - one grid downwards will do
Methinks this is already good for ranking. So yeah, here you go.
vs. Hippie
00:47:138 (1) - move this slider to the y axis?
vs. Franky
Nah nothing much but nazi
00:45:031 (5,6,7) - these beats aren't spaced out well
maybe moving 00:45:206 (6,7) - one grid downwards will do
Methinks this is already good for ranking. So yeah, here you go.
[Practice Fight]
Solid
[vs. Hippie]
0:18:149-0:22:714 Are my eyes tricking me? Could be, but the sliders look slightly off from being parallel with each other. Is that intentional (if my eyes aren't lying to me haha)?
0:39:938 Nazi spacing here. If you want, move the entire combo one unit to the left or move the following combo one unit to the right.
[vs. Franky]
0:21:134-22:890 (2)-(4) Flip across the x-axis? The stream at the beginning feels like it would flow smoother if you went in the figure-eight pattern. Plus the high notes and low notes would match the pitch of the bass sound being played.
0:47:138 (1) Flip combo across the x-axis? The ending of the song feels like you are constantly matching the foreground music, that electric harmonica/keyboard? sound. The pitch lowers here which would match the flow of the mouse blah blah blah. I'm rambling, but I think you'd get what I'm trying to say haha.
0:16:393 (1) Add clap hitsound
0:16:744 (1) ^
0:17:095 (1) ^ (Added and increased the clap beat to match the quick drum here)
0:17:446 (1) Add finish hitsound
0:23:065 (1) ^
0:28:684 (1) ^
0:30:089 (1) ^
0:34:320 If you add a note here and add a finish hitsound, it might go better with the little finish hitsound mod I was thinking of. If you do that, you might want to add the beat in the other difficulties too.
Cheers, bringing back more NES memories to me
Solid
[vs. Hippie]
0:18:149-0:22:714 Are my eyes tricking me? Could be, but the sliders look slightly off from being parallel with each other. Is that intentional (if my eyes aren't lying to me haha)?
0:39:938 Nazi spacing here. If you want, move the entire combo one unit to the left or move the following combo one unit to the right.
[vs. Franky]
0:21:134-22:890 (2)-(4) Flip across the x-axis? The stream at the beginning feels like it would flow smoother if you went in the figure-eight pattern. Plus the high notes and low notes would match the pitch of the bass sound being played.
0:47:138 (1) Flip combo across the x-axis? The ending of the song feels like you are constantly matching the foreground music, that electric harmonica/keyboard? sound. The pitch lowers here which would match the flow of the mouse blah blah blah. I'm rambling, but I think you'd get what I'm trying to say haha.
0:16:393 (1) Add clap hitsound
0:16:744 (1) ^
0:17:095 (1) ^ (Added and increased the clap beat to match the quick drum here)
0:17:446 (1) Add finish hitsound
0:23:065 (1) ^
0:28:684 (1) ^
0:30:089 (1) ^
0:34:320 If you add a note here and add a finish hitsound, it might go better with the little finish hitsound mod I was thinking of. If you do that, you might want to add the beat in the other difficulties too.
Cheers, bringing back more NES memories to me
Sup.
vs. Franky:
00:10:774 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:14:813 (1) - Claps are pretty cool, you know.
vs. Franky:
00:10:774 (2) - Remove whistle.
00:14:813 (1) - Claps are pretty cool, you know.
Hi hi!!
Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!
~All Diffs~
- There's a Thumbs.db on both folders of the storyboard =X
~Practice Fight~
No problems, good job!! :3
~vs. Hippie~
- Capitalize vs? o.o
~vs. Franky~
- Capitalize vs? o.o
So funny song and great SB, great job NoHItter <3 Good luck on ranking this! I don't think you'll need more time to do it *star*
Here are some suggestions for your map, you don't have to change them if you don't agree with me
Let's go!!
~All Diffs~
- There's a Thumbs.db on both folders of the storyboard =X
~Practice Fight~
No problems, good job!! :3
~vs. Hippie~
- Capitalize vs? o.o
~vs. Franky~
- Capitalize vs? o.o
So funny song and great SB, great job NoHItter <3 Good luck on ranking this! I don't think you'll need more time to do it
*star*
Topic Starter
Thumbs.db haunts me...
General:
-In every difficulty, the image in the storyboard cuts directly to the background image. Perhaps you could make it fade out to make it look a bit neater (though the way you have it is fine too).
Practice Fight: No problems
vs. Hippie: No problems
vs. Franky:
00:10:949 (3) - Perhaps place this equidistant from (1) and (2)? That way it'll form a nice triangle. (Note that if you do this, also move (4).)
00:13:408 (1) - Remove clap
00:13:583 (2) - Add clap
00:28:684 (1,1,1) - This looks strange stacked, but it might just be me...
00:47:840 (5,6,7) - Move (4), (5), and (6) down 1 level 3 grid and (7) down 2 level three grids (and then move 00:46:611 (4) down one to keep it stacked)
Overall, nice job! I especially liked the storyboard and the jumps on [vs. Franky]. *star*
-In every difficulty, the image in the storyboard cuts directly to the background image. Perhaps you could make it fade out to make it look a bit neater (though the way you have it is fine too).
Practice Fight: No problems
vs. Hippie: No problems
vs. Franky:
00:10:949 (3) - Perhaps place this equidistant from (1) and (2)? That way it'll form a nice triangle.
(Note that if you do this, also move (4).)00:13:408 (1) - Remove clap
00:13:583 (2) - Add clap
00:28:684 (1,1,1) - This looks strange stacked, but it might just be me...
00:47:840 (5,6,7) - Move (4), (5), and (6) down 1 level 3 grid and (7) down 2 level three grids (and then move 00:46:611 (4) down one to keep it stacked)
Overall, nice job! I especially liked the storyboard and the jumps on [vs. Franky]. *star*
Okay.... lets see.
The SB is going to need A LOT more work before trying to push this map to be ranked. The keyframes are cluttered up really bad and needs to be fixed. When you're doing the SB, just use the "+" and "-" buttons to control where the keyframes should be. If you set the keyframes while the map is playing, its going to look like what is there now, a bar of 100's of keyframes. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6696
For the time being, you can take the time to improve the map as well.
The SB is going to need A LOT more work before trying to push this map to be ranked. The keyframes are cluttered up really bad and needs to be fixed. When you're doing the SB, just use the "+" and "-" buttons to control where the keyframes should be. If you set the keyframes while the map is playing, its going to look like what is there now, a bar of 100's of keyframes. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6696
For the time being, you can take the time to improve the map as well.
Okay, I have no damn clue what the fuck is going on, but when I use this .osb, everything gets fucked up.
It's perfect, except that it causes an error and when force-loaded prevents beatmap from being saved.
I am gonna fix up the gamehouse at the beginning later, of course provided I can this crap to work.
Dammit. I'll try to look at it later, or maybe poke Larto, Kytoxid or m980.
Download: Keiichi Suzuki - New Age Retro Hippie (NoHItter).osb
It's perfect, except that it causes an error and when force-loaded prevents beatmap from being saved.
I am gonna fix up the gamehouse at the beginning later, of course provided I can this crap to work.
Dammit. I'll try to look at it later, or maybe poke Larto, Kytoxid or m980.
Download: Keiichi Suzuki - New Age Retro Hippie (NoHItter).osb
So.
This .osb still contains the broke storyboarded sound, but if I delete it, everything breaks. I have no idea what's going on.
I partially redid the part where he goes thru the building.
Download: Keiichi Suzuki - New Age Retro Hippie (NoHItter).osb
Also, use this:
outsideworld/blacksemi is not used anymore, delete it.
Make section-fail/pass 1x1? You could also trim the *enemys from battlesequence folder and fix their position, but I don't dare do that myself not to break something again.
This .osb still contains the broke storyboarded sound, but if I delete it, everything breaks. I have no idea what's going on.
I partially redid the part where he goes thru the building.
Download: Keiichi Suzuki - New Age Retro Hippie (NoHItter).osb
Also, use this:
outsideworld/blacksemi is not used anymore, delete it.
Make section-fail/pass 1x1? You could also trim the *enemys from battlesequence folder and fix their position, but I don't dare do that myself not to break something again.
Just need to have the section-pass and section-fail.png sized down to 1x1. I'll bubble after.
Edit: Fair enough.
Edit: Fair enough.
DA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA
NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA
DA NA NA NA
DA NA NA NA
DAAAAAAAAAA
Oh, sorry about that.
NA NA NA NA NA NA NA NA
DA NA NA NA
DA NA NA NA
DAAAAAAAAAA
Oh, sorry about that.
BATMAN!
Magical SB XD
You may want to credit me for assembling the fail-background.png. I compared the one on this beatmap and the original on my computer. They are exactly the same.
Heart fixed.