This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on July-10-14 at 8:32:35 PM

Artist: Silent Siren
Title: Amakusa
Tags: Acoustic 10crystalmask01
BPM: 95
Filesize: 4216kb
Play Time: 02:41
Difficulties Available:

1. 10crystalmask01's Hard (2.33 stars, 235 notes)
2. Normal (1.7 stars, 190 notes)

Download: Silent Siren - Amakusa
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New creator!!! First song in progress!!!
10crystalmask01: I'M BACK BEECHES! ]:)
Normal ~ 100%
10crystalmask01's Hard ~ 60%

Hello

So lets beginn it is not much so^^

Normal:

NOTE: i work with beat snap 1/6 and all the changes down below are done with beat snap 1/6

00:36:969 - it is better when the slider ends on 00:37:495 - it sounds better

01:39:179 - set there a circle and than at 01:39:495 (1) - the spinner it should end here 1:43:284 sounds better for me

when its done set a new combo here 01:35:705 (8) -

no need for a new combo there 01:44:547 (1) -

add a circle here 02:02:232 - sounds better.

remove the circle at 02:27:495 (8) - and instead of the circle set a slider here 02:27:179 - till it ends here 02:27:495 -

the slider at 02:28:758 - should end at 02:29:179 - than set a circle here 02:29:705 - sounds better.



Hard:

NOTE: here i work with beat snap 1/4

the slider at 00:11:547 (2) - can also end here 00:11:863 - for me it sounds better.

remoce the circle at 00:37:916 (3) - and move the slider at 00:37:284 (2) - to 00:37:442 - sounds better.


The map is good nearly perfect also love the song just make the Hard diff finish and i come back to take a look at it send me a PM when its finish

You dont need to do all my changes just make these where you agree with me

I hope could help a bit
Grettings Mosti

You requested for it .w.)/

Normal
00:02:863 (3,1) - DS (distance spacing) is 1.8x... there shouldnt be any jumps in a normal..
00:15:021 - doesn't hurt to add a 3/4 slider here (make sure to put the spacing right after adding it)
00:16:758 (1,2) - spacing again
00:20:547 (6,1) - aaaaaa use distance snap please, on easy's and normals they are kinda important
00:26:232 (3) - make this a 1/2 slider please, fits better with the vocals
00:36:969 - remove nc here and add nc here 00:38:863 -
00:42:969 (2,3) - spacing
00:54:021 - remove nc .w.)/
00:56:232 (2) - yeah idk,, i think it looks better when you make the slider a liiittle bit longer, i know it fits the vocal but it doesnt look right, it still sounds good if you make it a bit longer
00:57:495 - remove nc
01:00:337 - remove nc..
01:06:337 - remove nc & do the same as with the other one
01:07:600 - remove nc and add nc here 01:08:547
01:11:705 - nc here
01:11:705 (1,2,3,4,5) - hmm since its a normal I think its fine if you just make a huge circle slider of this, try experimenting with sliders owo
01:16:126 - no nc .w.)/ aaaaaa im too lazy to note down every nc problem.. just remember that you should add a nc at the big white line, and shouldnt put any besides there,, unless for a specific reason
01:22:442 (5,1) - fix spacing,, am also a bit too lazy to write down every spacing problem ;_;
01:25:284 (1,2) - try something like this? :3 I hate short sliders http://puu.sh/a6JpI/409e31590a.jpg
I feel like from this point a lot of stuff (short sliders, nc problems, distance spacing) are all repeating, jsut take a look at it and fix everything that seems out of order..

btw no hitsounds ;_; use whistle hitsounds, they sound great on slow/quiet songs

also didnt focus on design issues, decided to focus on other stuff first

10crystalmask01's Hard
idk why but the drum hitsounds on the 2nd beat sounds really weird, I think its alright if its only on the 4th beat (in the refrain it sounds alright if its both tho)
00:12:495 (4) - short slidersss whyyyyyy.. apparently you put more of them,, I guess i shouldnt complain too much
01:02:705 (3,4) - the drum clap made me think that the song was gonna accelerate or something idk why :I doesnt fit

aaanndd its not finished yet .w.)/

ugu .w.

Thank you for replying. I will work to fix the problems mentioned ASAP.

Hello there.
I don't know how much I can help, but I will try. I hope my words do not sound too harsh though.

Easy:
First of all, you can try curving some sliders more, to make it look nicer, because some of your sliders are just straight, which gets boring to play after a while and btw, dont listen to all issues of Ai Mod when it comes to spacing of seperate beats, because I find some beats a bit far away for normal though Ai Mod insists on them to be so far away.
00:17:390 (2) - closer to previous slider
00:23:705 (4,5,1) - I am not sure, whether you should make them overlap a bit, because it comes a bit sudden. It's up to you^^
00:27:495 (1) - can you make this point directly to the next beat?
00:34:126 (5,6) - you can make this a slider because I find the latter of the two hard to get
00:37:916 (2,3) - I am a bit against these, because I'm not sure, whether it's good pattern here... You can change 00:36:969 (1) to a returning slider and curve it around 00:38:547 (2) 00:45:495 (6) - The new combo starts here, remove it from 00:46:126 (1)
00:46:758 (2,1) - you can add a beat inbetween here to fill it
00:53:390 (1) - remove nc
00:56:232 (2) - wow, 1/4 slider? I find it odd and prefer it to be double its length
00:59:074 (1) - remove nc
01:06:337 (1) - same with the slider length, extend it a bit
01:12:337 (8) - add nc
01:16:126 (1) - remove nc
01:16:758 (2) - slightly to the right, so the slider points directly at it
01:18:021 (1) - extend this to be double its length and drag 01:18:653 (2) to 01:18:969 adjust the sliders position like you want
01:22:758 (1,2) - I find curved sliders pretty fitting here
01:26:547 (3) - double slider length
01:27:495 (4) - too far away from previous
01:37:916 (6) - you can make this curved and double so long
01:43:916 (1) - remove nc
01:46:758 (2) - double the length
01:54:021 (8,1) - too close. You can move 01:54:653 (1) a bit higher and to the left
01:56:863 (2) - extend length
01:57:811 (3) - nc starts here (? I dunno, you can leave it too)

That's for the rough over view^^'

Hard:
Wow, spacing is really pretty, crystal! I really like its flow, good job~
01:00:969 (5) - I have no problems reaching it, but this seems a tad too far away... and we want this map to be playable not only for tablet users...

That's it for now, I think, I'll come back in a while again.
Hope I could be of help.

PS: Crystal, Why cant I view your profile, btw? I thought you were banned or changed your name or so? What happened?

Thank you for all the advice. I now find it more easy to do spacing now that i have figured out why it went wrong before.
I am starting to understand sliders a little better, thank you for all the advice.
I really appreciate everyone taking time to look at the beatmap.

I will upload the changes to the beatmap once i feel that its worthy.

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