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Kumusta!

[General]
Set the Preferred skin to User's preference

[Easy]
00:04:881 (3) - Move backward to red tick
00:31:172 (3,4) - Move 3 grid left
00:32:946 (5) - New combo

[Hard]
00:27:624 (2) - New combo
00:27:785 (1) - No new combo
00:28:914 (1) - ^

Not bad
STAR

Easy:

Those large gaps are really not helping your map. You are missing a lot of very strong beats which just frustrates me to no end. On top of that, your notes don't come in on strong beats off of pauses, and you have unprepped syncopation. Some specifics.

00:04:720 (3,4) - Fill in the gap between these notes.
00:06:817 (5,1) - Change the length of the slider. It ends in an awkward spot musically. Also fill in the gap.
00:12:623 (2) - Move this note left a beat.
00:13:107 (3) - Move this slider left a 1/2 beat. Lengthen by a 1/4 beat.
00:17:139 (1) - Move this note right a beat.
00:17:462 (2) - Move this note right a 1/2 beat.
00:17:785 (3) - Make this slider go one way. 1 1/2 beats long
00:19:075 (4) - Add another note on the beat before this note.
00:22:623 (1) - Put another note on the beat before this note.
00:22:623 (1) - Move this not left a beat.
00:28:914 (3) - Put a note a beat before this one.
00:29:236 (1) - Move slider right 1/2 beat. Shorten by 1/2 beat. Put a note on the downbeat after it.
00:31:494 (4) - Move slider right 1/2 beat. Shorten by 1/2 beat.
00:32:946 (1) - Put another note a beat after this one.
00:34:881 (3) - Put another note a beat before this one.
00:38:107 (1) - Have this slider repeat 2 more times.
00:43:430 (1) - Move this note left 1/2 beat put another note a beat after it.
00:47:462 (6) - Put another note a beat before this one.

That'll get you started. There might be more changes after that.

Hard:

This is better. There are a few parts where you go into 1/4 rhythm where it doesn't fit the music. I'll point them out to you.

00:38:592 (4,5,6) -
00:48:431 (1) -
01:24:560 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -



Are you going to make another difficulty between those two?

arkiandruski wrote:

Are you going to make another difficulty between those two?

I might do a normal.. but yeah, i'm not that sure.

anyway, thx for modding

Mii~~

Easy: Place a slider at 00:37:139, and end it at 00:37:785.

Hard: Change the name to Insane.. Please? Or you could just make the circle size a bit bigger

STAR ! Used to be a big fan

Easy:
I don't think this is an Easy.
Feels like a Normal to me.

Normal:
00:51:172 (4): Move a tiny grid up

Hard:
Is it me, or is normal and hard like the same beats and placing?

00:22:462 (7): New combo

This map looks messy, try aligning the beats together. It will look much better.

Misaki Takahashi wrote:

Hard:
Is it me, or is normal and hard like the same beats and placing?

Ah lol. Normal is WIP, i've just saved a new difficulty out of hard so.. yeah.

Sorry for my late mod
Mod start go go go~

[General]

1. Delete osb.file, then full submit
2. Delete "American", "Idiot", and"Green Day" in tag, because they are in the title
3. set a preview time at the climax of the song, do in on all diffculties

[Easy]

1. song starts loudly, it scared me lol
2. I thinks easy is too short

[Normal]

1. 00:41:333 (4,5,6,7,8) - jumps on [Normal]? werid
2. some spacing is terrible to [Normal], like 00:44:075 (5) and so on, I think you'd better use the same distance spacing
3. 01:06:172 (2,3,4,5) - Why spacing changed suddenly lol
4. Maybe it should be called [Hard]

[Hard]

1. this diffculty look fine

ask more modder to mod it and improve it
star

Updated Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
If I found a beat who must be added, i'll write it.
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
Source: should be Green Day.
00:32:946 (x) Let Kiai Time starts here.
01:19:397 (x) ^.

[Easy]
00:27:785 (1) Delete this note and do a slider who starts in 00:27:623 and finish in 00:27:785.
00:39:881 (1) Let this spinner starts 2/4 after, same finish.

[Normal]
This is a Hard.

00:32:301 (1) Remove New Combo.
00:32:946 (2) New Combo.

[Hard]
Isn't this map TOO similiar to Normal? Change it.

And that's all for your map! It's a great on! Starred

Please use the uncensored version, the bleeps sound wrong in a music game.

[Easy]
Could be longer, and should be called Normal

[Normal]
00:47:462 (1) - I see the next note before I see this, this is wrong.
01:18:591 (1) - ^ And this one isn't even rankable, auto only gets 1000 bonus on it.

[Hard]
01:18:591 (1) - Auto doesn't get any bonus! And just so you know, that's not good.
02:21:172 (1) - This seems like a very odd spot to stop.

Good enough.

Its quite good.I cant find anything to fix now.

Good job,star^^

This still needs a lot of work as it is, but as a new mapper it's not bad, don't be discouraged.

Resnap your notes in Insane and Hard, try not to use sudden 2x BPM sliders, and if you use streams try to follow the music.

I'll recheck this when you have fixed the basics and have obtained more player modding.

Normal
[General] some beats after the breaks (like on 00:16:817 and on 00:21:978) are quite tricky and hard to click for players... remove them, please.
00:04:236 (2) - move it a square down and a square right
00:36:172 (8,9,1) - move them 2 squares left

Hard
[General] same as Normal. Beats after breaks in this song (like on 00:19:398 and on 00:27:140) can make the song's rhythm quite annoying...
01:17:947 (5,6) - fix spacing
01:38:430 (9) - new combo
01:38:430 (9,10,11,12,13) - quite cruel and disappointing spacing...

Insane
[General] same as Normal and Hard. Plus, spacing looks quite weird here... try to fix it!
00:39:882 (9,1) - ... WHAT is this? fix these beat and slider's timing, please...
01:06:173 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't think beat streams fit very well in this song...

I see this song isn't complete yet... spacing is quite irregular on every mode and even the use of hitsounds is randomized...
Plus, all the modes end in a different point one from each other... try to end them at the same point! (and maybe, set same break times...)

Hello~

• [Normal]
  00:14:236 (4) Finish?
  00:22:785 (3) Two 1/4 foward
  00:24:075 (6,7,8) Looks like.. Not normal as a [Normal]
  00:31:172 (4) New combo?
  00:45:204 (End of 5) Finish
  00:51:978 (4) New combo
  01:05:849 (6) Finish?
  01:18:752 (1) Whistle?
  
  [Hard]
  00:06:494(1,2) 1: Delete Newcombo, 2: Add new combo
  00:14:236 (4) Finish
  00:52:946 (4) Finish
  01:27:785 (6) Whistle?
  01:49:397 (9) End at 01:49:720
  
  [Insane]
  00:09:075 (1) Finish?
  00:27:946 ( ) Add note
  00:47:301 (7) Distance..
  00:59:397 (6) Align with 7?
  01:47:462 (3) New combo
  02:03:914 (6,7,8,9) People don't like this kind of distance :p

I think this is all..
Good map, star

rust45 wrote:

Please use the uncensored version, the bleeps sound wrong in a music game.

yeah, get the uncensored. This game is played around the world by mostly people age 12+. I think it's alright to have uncensored music . Get uncensored, replace old mp3 (keep same name) and then full submit

Overall
Very nice map. For a first timer, this is very good .

My only suggestion(s) is/are:
Make an Easy
Probably not going to do this since you're a beginner mapper, but I would've liked it better if you mapped to the end, but...

Anyway, star ~ *

0 stacking leniency is a bad idea, probably unrankable.

[Normal]
0.8 slider velocity and 0.9x distance snap? Those notes are waaay too close to each other.

Turn that stack leniency up.
00:12:139 (1,2) - It's not nice to the player to have two short repeat sliders next to each other if they repeat a different number of times, especially on Easy and Normal diffs
00:17:785 (3) - Turn off grid snap, turn on distance snap to 0.0x and make it exactly on top of that previous slider.
00:22:462 (2,3) - Spacing?
01:21:010 (6,7,1) - When the notes are this slow and closely spaced, it's better if there are no overlapping circles that aren't stacks.
01:49:397 (1) - 1/4 repeats suck on Taiko.

[Hard]
01:15:366 (5,6,7,8,1,2) - Eh. Could be nicer.
Resnap all notes.

[Insane]
Increase stacking.
Resnap all notes.

[Normal]

00:48:914 (2) - i think you should move this 1/2 back (and dont forget to change spacing if you do)

[Hard]
01:49:397 (9) - i think you should increas the slider length by 1/4 and remove 1 repeat.

[Insane]
01:49:398 (3,4,5,6) - these are too fast imo.
02:29:075 (11) - new combo


[Overall]
Censored MP3 =
You should have a difficulty with 3.5 stars or less

+Star

Just one reminder, next time try to plan your hitsounds setting before you map it, this gonna make your works in better orders.

Please post in my queue again when everything is done and I'll try to mod

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