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Yuuka - Kaze no Rhythm

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Tonoko
507 posts
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Topic Starter
Tonoko
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年3月30日 at 7:19:03

Artist: Yuuka
Title: Kaze no Rhythm
Source: Kanishino
BPM: 88
Filesize: 12286kb
Play Time: 02:07
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.76 stars, 71 notes)
  2. Hard (4.74 stars, 223 notes)
  3. Normal (4.25 stars, 167 notes)
Download: Yuuka - Kaze no Rhythm
Download: Yuuka - Kaze no Rhythm (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My theme song in osu!

Please play with the video >///<

all my love in this map

thanks for Zekira's timing help
special THANK ~[GHOST](high quality video) haruhiteamsos(great help) yongtw123(>///<)
Last edited by Gens , edited 89 times in total.
haruhiteamsos
81 posts
Joined August 2008
haruhiteamsos
Download: Yuuka - Kaze no Rhythm (Tonoko).osb
sb fix

good map

but the offset is not accuracy (a little slow)


3 star~
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
谢谢这个摆放建议啊...那个位置我一直都很苦恼...

至于摆放相似...额.../逃~
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
edit.....
Babble
230 posts
Joined July 2009
Babble
Heya!

Normal
01:04:617 - Remove kiai, I don't see anything particularly kiai worthy here

Hard
01:04:617 - ^
01:50:304 - ^
02:03:260 -(6) Re space this note, it's out of the distance space for some reason


Extremely well mapped, I doubt anyone will find any more problems unless a nazi modder comes and looks at his.


Star!
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
88.000BPM works fine~ (so you'll need to shift those timing panels, and resnap)
Suggestion: get a blank sliderslide custom hitsound?

Normal- Don't use lowest Stack Leniency!
Hmm.. the star rating is kinda high, but I think this is slow and easy enough~ the map's fine except the stacks

Hard-
00:40:069 (1,2) - kinda extreme jump?
00:56:435 (5) - new combo please
01:04:617 (4) - new combo for the decelerated spacing
01:07:685 (4) - maybe new combo this?
02:07:863 (10) - xD this is hard to catch when following the pace! add new combo to try to make it stand out a bit more?
The whistles after the break don't really make much sense to me :[ and the triplet's sound kinda... "loud" (cuz they are all whistles)

.... hmmm too much whistles in this slow soft song
Nevertheless, a pretty good map~
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for the second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. BPM = 88 | Offset = 25750 [?]
2. Is the source exactly right? Kanishino or kanishino? Make sure the source is typed correctly.
3. Delete kanishino from tags.
4. I don't like the kiai spamming. I suggest for this kiai time period. 01:31:211 - 01:47:576. Make kiai burst effect on 01:39:394.
5. Silence all the slider-slide.

[Storyboard]
I think the SB is unnecessary. No offense, but the video is better than your SB.

[Easy]
1. Increase the stack leniency 3 levels.
2. Increase slider tick rate to 2.
00:45:869 (1) - No jump for the easiest diff.
00:59:162 (2) - Check the spacing.
00:59:844 (3) - No jump for the easiest diff.
01:00:526 (4) - ^
01:04:617 (4) - Check the spacing.
01:09:049 (5) - ^
01:10:414 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I know you made a pattern. But, could you do it without jump?
01:14:504 - Add note. [?]
01:14:845 - Add note, then add finish. [?]
01:41:096 (4) - Add whistle.
01:43:141 (3) - ^

[Hard]
00:59:162 (2) - Check the spacing.
01:04:958 (5,6,7) - ^
01:32:916 - Add note.
01:34:961 - ^
Star.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal
Pretty fine! (Just make it easier... a 4.5 Star rating for a Normal mode is too much... >.<)

Hard
00:58:483 (1,2,3,4) - change these sliders's position... it's VERY similar to Normal mode...

...that was art. The 2 modes are well-organized,with never-annoying changeling spacing!
That's enough for star this. Keep up the good work!
yeahyeahyeahhh
osu! Alumni
2,850 posts
Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
Hard:
- 01:04:618 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, unless intentional? Dunno why though, would keep spaced like other similar notes (for example at this part 01:01:209 (1,2,3) - ) Not a major problem, but can cause some players to trip, and that's never any fun :X

- 01:31:721 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) AND 01:33:766 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Both should have another note at the end IMO, sounds better. So add a note at 01:32:914 - AND 01:34:959 -

- I'm not a fan of the spacing at the end starting 01:55:755 (1) - The notes you have streamed with the triple should be spread out, feels really awkward.

Normal:
- Perfect! Spacing is much better in this one too ^^

Overall:

Good map, and good tune, its relaxing. Hitsounds are very well done too, not something you see much these days. Only think I would really like see fixed in some of the spacing on Hard.
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Hard:
- 01:04:618 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing, unless intentional? Dunno why though, would keep spaced like other similar notes (for example at this part 01:01:209 (1,2,3) - ) Not a major problem, but can cause some players to trip, and that's never any fun :X fixed

- 01:31:721 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) AND 01:33:766 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Both should have another note at the end IMO, sounds better. So add a note at 01:32:914 - AND 01:34:959 - fixed

- I'm not a fan of the spacing at the end starting 01:55:755 (1) - The notes you have streamed with the triple should be spread out, feels really awkward. yes,you're right , the triple stream it hard to play well

Normal:
- Perfect! Spacing is much better in this one too ^^

Overall:

Good map, and good tune, its relaxing. Hitsounds are very well done too, not something you see much these days. Only think I would really like see fixed in some of the spacing on Hard.
thanks for you help
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
<Hitsounds>
claps byebye~ (sounds bad)
add the file to your song folderand use soft-custom 1 hitsounds (you will never hear that noisy slider sound)

<Normal+Hard>
I don`t get that bpm 66 section at all,i think it doesn`t fit (also X0.5 section in 01:37 is not so good )

<Hard>
00:40:074 (1,2,3,4) - look at picture
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2363
try this XD

star~

Download: soft-sliderslide.rar
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~~ >.<
Sorry my late modding. :(

[Normal]
01:50:641 (1) Arrange to low sound like [Hard].

[Hard]
00:41:778 (4) No sound or low volume sound?

00:38:024 (1) Unsnapped.
00:38:876 (4) ^
02:04:112 (2) ^
02:04:965 (5) ^
02:06:158 (2) ^
02:07:010 (5) ^


Starred~ >.<
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
:? I don't know what's wrong with those notes

could you tell me in detail ~ ~
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hmm...Maybe unsnapped note?

Yes, unsnapped is meaning, note isn't on tick exactly.

Then, You should resnap them.




In edit mode, click timing menu and click resnap all note. Then all note resnap.
That is solving this problem.
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
:) ok ~ fixed.thank you ~ ~
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
[General]
Fix the source&tag on Hard to be similar to that of Normal's.
Also...
Offset: -11 from current.
Turn up hitsound volume a bit; some parts on Hard need it, especially the chorus (or just turn up the volume on the chorus)

[Normal]
This seems a lot like something harder than Normal IMO, given the techniques used, but w/e.
The really short kiais are bothering me, and IMO they don't fit the song well.
00:58:465 (1,2,3,4) - New combo on 3? Because the spacing here's weird.

[Hard]
Again with the kiai.
I love the mapping style on this, though.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
[Normal]
00:41:767 - (4) Consider silence the end of this slider?
00:59:154 - (2) Spacing (see below)
01:50:630 - (1) I love this note :)

Personally, I would lower the hitsound volume for sections like those starting on 00:42:108 to 0057:449. But that will be up to you.

[Hard]
00:59:154 - (2) Ah I see, same thing with [Normal] on 00:59:154, it's 仁, right? I got tricked by this spacing though. Don't know if this is okay to a BAT or not.
02:03:926 - Hmm, I myself am fine with the spacing here but take note as some sections like this one have rather inconsistent spacing. Just take precautions.
01:31:198 ~ 01:36:823 - you can totally ignore my comment here. But I just want to say the beat is a bit... :? , that's all.

And by the way, I only ran this game once. I played Shino's route wwwwww.

Have a star~!
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
thanks for all your help ~

the 01:31:198 ~ 01:36:823 note..... T.T I have no idea here... this part is the most important part to this map...

T.T still trying a new style for that part (updated)
haruhiteamsos
81 posts
Joined August 2008
haruhiteamsos
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: sbfix.rar
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Normal~
  1. 00:36:824 (3) - Remove the whistle from the whole thing, then re-add it to only the beginning part of the slider.
  2. 00:59:154 (2) - Why is this so close to 1's endpoint?
  3. 02:01:880 (1) - Same suggestion as the first thing I mentioned.
  4. 02:02:732 (3) - ^ That way, it'll be like all the other sliders (sound-wise)
Hard~
  1. Your Stack Leniency is unrankable. Please move it off of the "Rarely Stack" portion of the line.
Also add about 10ms to each uninherited timing section you have and resnap all notes afterwards.
Oops, also get rid of the 66.00 BPM as well. It makes the notes after it, not properly synced with the song.
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
fixed all

I delete the 66 bpm section T.T and added new note.
digiaria
257 posts
Joined October 2008
digiaria
Star 拿去，做得不错
话说这游戏我到现在都没把所有角色都攻略完 OTL
tsuka
1,499 posts
Joined May 2009
tsuka
- -我居然没给星 我知道垫子你不稀罕这玩意

还有LS的请帮你的图给RANK了谢谢= =我很喜欢
Matsuri_old
109 posts
Joined May 2009
Matsuri_old
Star > w <~
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
finally ...I delete the SB... :(
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Breeze
osu! Alumni
4,949 posts
Joined March 2009
Breeze
nice map
make more map like this plz
Starrodkirby86
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
Starrodkirby86
Ah, this is a very peaceful map.

My only current qualm here would be the difficulty of [Normal]. 1/2s on 88 BPM with some interesting spacing might be a bit on the harder side, really...Yeah, sure, 88BPM is slow and all, but regardless, the density of the streams...Yeah.

Really, the most painless solution would be to make an [Easy] or something. XD If you don't mind...the song is nice and all anyway. We can also try making [Normal] a tad easier, but who knows.

If you want to discuss with me, feel free. :)
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
wow...

I try to make an EASY diff :D

EDIT: easy done ~ ~
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happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
nice map, no errors

fumoffu star :D
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
maybe hmm ... Is it good enough to get a pubble? :oops:
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
You've said you're "01:31:198 ~ 01:36:823 finding a good style", so may I try suggest a rhythm?


And for [Hard], add a note 01:37:004 may sound better.

Hope you find it helpful. ;)
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
I love this style :)

thank you very very much :oops:
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30

Tonoko wrote:

maybe hmm ... Is it good enough to get a pubble? :oops:
yes

pubbled
awp
osu! Alumni
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Here since the beginning
awp
I checked the timing and it sounded fine to me, not that I looked too too hard.

One thing I feel I need to comment on is that [Easy] is not what I'd call Easy. Since the song is slow, your mileage may vary, but you've got a lot of streams going on; the player isn't given a whole lot of breathing room very often. I'd flag the half-beat streams as an immediate no-no, but since it's 88BPM ho-hum that's not too bad. The use of off-beat combo starters and quarter snapping make the song difficult to play - not because it's "too fast", but because the player needs a good understanding of the song itself to play along. Easy mode should be the most accessible difficulty, requiring no prior knowledge of the song and a bit more recovery time between combos. What I'm seeing, is that the majority of the combos transition from one to the next without any space/breathing room/etc.

Also, I apologize for my thoughts being all over the place.
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
:) yes ,you're right ...I'll cut down the stream and make it easier to the beginner ...

hmm I'm just waiting for my free time :oops:

EDIT:wow,easy diff was finished,for the beginner
Nanashiro_Nanami
11 posts
Joined December 2009
Nanashiro_Nanami
I llike this map and this game.
star :)
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko

Nanashiro_Nanami wrote:

I llike this map and this game.
star :)
thx for your star ;)
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Basically, I have some rhythm suggestions for [Easy]. Hope you won't mind :oops:

00:44:164 (3,4) - how about remove (4) and make (3) a two-times repeating slider? (I mark this type of suggestion "甲")
00:48:254 (3,4) - 甲
00:54:391 (1) - maybe end this slider at 00:55:414?
01:00:527 (3,4) - 甲
01:04:618 (3,4) - 甲
01:10:414 (1) - suggest start this slider at 01:10:754 and shorten it by 1/2 beat (that is, this slider will repeat at 01:11:777 and 01:12:800)
01:31:209 (1) - maybe end this slider at 01:32:914?
01:33:254 (x) - maybe add a slider here that ends on 01:34:277?
01:41:436 (x) - maybe add a slider here that ends on 01:42:459? (delete the slider that was overlapped)

And generally try to make the notes more "inside" the screen. Some are almost touching the borders.

加油 :) ~
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
[Hard]
00:42:118 (5) - new combo
00:44:164 (1) - no new combo
00:58:482 (5) - new combo
[Normal]
00:44:164 (1) - no new combo
00:58:482 (5) - new combo
[Easy]
02:01:211 - unsnaped
02:03:597 - ^
02:05:302 - ^
02:05:653 - ^

edit.bubble
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Tonoko
:oops: fixed combo ~ ~ ~
kiddly
886 posts
Joined February 2009
kiddly
速度rank了来和我做collab~ ;)
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
go rank, star.
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
Ranked.
yongtw123
1,028 posts
Joined April 2009
yongtw123
Yay~ Congrats :)
SamiPale
766 posts
Joined October 2009
SamiPale
我等了这么久终于 <_<
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
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Tonoko
:oops: 谢谢各位支持
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