Yamazaki Maimi - Alive (TV size) · forum

KIA

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2009-12-26T08:55:45+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 5 февраля 2010 г. at 5:05:51

Artist: Yamazaki Maimi
Title: Alive (TV size)
Source: Ragnarok The Animation
Tags: RO
BPM: 99
Filesize: 15574kb
Play Time: 00:55
Difficulties Available:

Easy (3,85 stars, 85 notes)
Insane (4,99 stars, 200 notes)
Normal+ (4,32 stars, 130 notes)

Download: Yamazaki Maimi - Alive (TV size)
Download: Yamazaki Maimi - Alive (TV size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Ragnarok the Animation. ED <3

Normal done
Easy done
Insane done

Last edited by KIA 2010-02-05T02:11:02+00:00, edited 28 times in total.

[DBF]

1,827 posts

Joined January 2009

[DBF] 2009-12-26T12:32:32+00:00

Burn KIA Burn KIA!! o/

aesopl19193

572 posts

Joined March 2009

aesopl19193 2009-12-29T12:06:30+00:00

here just my suggest since i am still a beginner of mapping and modding~

set hitsound volume to about 60~70%

Normal
00:07:087 (2,3) - cancel clap , (4) - finish
00:23:451 (2,3,6,7) - cancel w
00:26:784 (6) - cancel all sound
00:28:299 (2,3,6,7) - cancel w
00:30:420 (2,3,4,5) - cancel all sound
00:31:633 (5,6) change it to slider
00:34:511 (7) - cancel w
00:34:966 (1) - cancel w

imo , too much w and clap just make the map noise .=[

Thunderstorm

437 posts

Joined May 2009

Thunderstorm 2009-12-29T21:11:38+00:00

Тащи. Карта жжот, анимэ, кстати, тоже) Лови звезду

Lokamp

2,530 posts

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-12-29T21:18:55+00:00

Easy
[General] ... 4 star of rating for an EASY mode? Looks like this mode needs to be easier for newbies... (the rest was fine!)

Normal
[General] Call this Normal+, it fits well with this mode's rating
00:07:394 (3,4) - link them with a slider
00:34:061 (5,1,2) - new combo on 5th and next 2nd; remove previous new combo

Hard
00:12:849 (7,1) - clap the 7th, finish on the other one

This short, good beatmap needs some fixes about spacing (Hard) and hitsound-placing (all modes), but this is already a good start.
Have your star ;3

KIA

1,754 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2009-12-29T21:45:37+00:00

nvm...

SPOILER

Mystearica

Mystearica 2009-12-29T21:57:36+00:00

Thanks for mapping this, one of my favorite songs. Would you happen to have a full mp3 of this? Would love it. (Would appreciate the OP song too if you have that. We are the stars I think?)

Too heavy on the hitsounds in Easy, reduce the number of claps and finishes, set a stable pattern. Also remove the whistles.

If too many people complain about the difficulty on Easy, just rename it to Normal as that clearly fits as well. I myself am fine with that difficulty though.

Same with Normal. Seems like you should also silence your sliderticks/sliderslide sounds.

Try adding a 1 second to 1.5 seconds lead-in time.

Won't touch Hard for now~

KIA

1,754 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2009-12-29T22:30:35+00:00

Yes, I have "We Are The Stars" in unsubmitted
And why everyone hates that whistles

Kamushi

41 posts

Joined August 2008

Kamushi 2009-12-30T14:56:43+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Yamazaki Maimi - Alive (TV size) (KIA) [Kamyk's Difficulty].osu

WyndII

777 posts

Joined October 2008

WyndII 2010-01-07T17:40:52+00:00

I don't like the song much (wth is wrong with me? o.o) but Hooray for the anime!!! lol

anonymous_old

0 posts

Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2010-01-08T22:20:31+00:00

Easy

SPOILER

00:04:061 (1,2) : Too hard for an easy.
00:30:424 (2,3,4) : Delete 3 and 4, then make 2 end at where 4 was.

Normal+

SPOILER

No visible errors.

Hard

SPOILER

No visible errors.
[*] Consider changing the whistle hitsound to something that matches the song better.

gdeath

1,598 posts

Joined May 2009

gdeath 2010-01-12T15:27:50+00:00

Overall :
[Easy] lead-in 1s
[Normal]lead-in 1.5s
[Hard]lead-in 1.5s
Set them all the same
00:23:152 --->>00:41:637 ~volume~40% or 45%(all diffs)
Normal-whistle is not suitable for this song.
use clap and soft-whistle only as hitsound.(suggestion)

[Easy]
00:04:970 (2) - make it 1/4 later and shorten this slider 1/4
00:09:515 (2) - make it end on 00:09:818
00:22:243 (3) - remove it and change to two circle.one set on 00:22:243 and another one set on 00:22:546
00:44:667 (2) - ^
00:54:465 (3,4) - change to slider.its hard to read this 1/8 beat for new players

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
its insane imo.reduce HD Drain to 7 at least(suggestion)
00:41:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly.you can leave this pattern,if you like.

star.

KIA

1,754 posts

Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2010-01-12T18:42:16+00:00

gdeath wrote:
Overall :
[Easy] lead-in 1s
[Normal]lead-in 1.5s
[Hard]lead-in 1.5s k
Set them all the same
00:23:152 --->>00:41:637 ~volume~40% or 45%(all diffs) k
Normal-whistle is not suitable for this song.
use clap and soft-whistle only as hitsound.(suggestion) already using as custom hitsound..hmm

[Easy]
00:04:970 (2) - make it 1/4 later and shorten this slider 1/4 okay
00:09:515 (2) - make it end on 00:09:818 k
00:22:243 (3) - remove it and change to two circle.one set on 00:22:243 and another one set on 00:22:546 k
00:44:667 (2) - ^ k
00:54:465 (3,4) - change to slider.its hard to read this 1/8 beat for new players

[Normal]
fine

[Hard]
its insane imo.reduce HD Drain to 7 at least(suggestion) no
00:41:940 (1,2,3,4,5) - ugly.you can leave this pattern,if you like. kay

star.

Cyril Scarlet

osu! Alumni

3,877 posts

Joined May 2009

Cyril Scarlet 2010-01-12T20:12:55+00:00

RO ~ ﾟ+.･ﾟ+｡(〃・ω・〃)｡+ﾟ･.+ﾟ

AngelHoney

2,155 posts

Joined May 2009

AngelHoney 2010-01-14T10:41:59+00:00

RO...^^

WyndII

777 posts

Joined October 2008

WyndII 2010-01-14T10:58:29+00:00

Osu!

[m{}d]

[Insane]
I can't find anything wrong here

But Here are some orzptionals:

SPOILER

00:08:606 (9) - finish?
00:11:030 (10) - soft finish hitsound?

00:11:940 (2) - ^
00:23:152 (1) - Kiai would be awesome here XD
00:30:121 (1) - whistle? XD
00:49:818 (1) - finish? and 00:50:121 (2) - and 00:50:424 (4) - get what I meant?

[Normal+]
oooh vewy simple and nice :3
but the Kiai issue?

[Easy]
decrease overall difficulty D:

STAAAR, oh wait, I starred already ._.

Noobita

597 posts

Joined June 2009

Noobita 2010-01-23T10:44:45+00:00

Star!! It's beautiful.

Teara

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814 posts

Joined June 2009

Teara 2010-01-23T20:05:05+00:00

Basically, all of the following are just suggestions, and does not need to be done, please use at own regard

Good beatmap, and Star!

[Easy]
00:06:637 (1) - clap at start? ( not sure about this, doesn't really fit sounds better with clap still ) :3

[Normal+]
00:11:940 (2) - with distance snap on, just move it slightly to the right ( to align with (4) properly. )

and that's it, good job.

[Insane]

00:14:818 (5) - move up a few squares and align with (6), plays better IMO
00:43:455 (4) - new combo to match vocals~

and thats that, great diff

dkey

1,276 posts

Joined June 2009

dkey 2010-01-24T06:29:29+00:00

Star~

Yuji Tokaji

776 posts

Joined March 2009

Yuji Tokaji 2010-01-25T12:17:41+00:00

Star~

blissfulyoshi

osu! Alumni

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Joined July 2008

blissfulyoshi 2010-01-28T22:27:36+00:00

I'm getting 125 as the BPM for the second section (pls test though)

Easy:
Audio lead-in time in 11ms less here, you might want to make all the diffs equal
Also the BPM for the second timing section is different than the other diffs second timing section.

Normal mod:
00:55:090 (1) - why does the spinner start earlier in this diff than all the other diffs

Timing section mod:
00:23:152 - a quarter note before this timing section, make a timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai (for the change in volume)

Normal+:
Combo mod:
00:34:970 (10,1) - add a new combo to 10 and remove the new combo on 1 to be consistent with 00:25:273 (1)

Timing section mod:
00:23:152 - a quarter note before this timing section, make a timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai (for the change in volume)

Insane:
Timing section mod:
00:23:152 - a quarter note before this timing section, make a timing section with the same hitsound settings but no kiai (for the change in volume)

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Nice map. Star.

KIA

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Joined February 2009

Topic Starter

KIA 2010-01-30T00:56:53+00:00

Fixed

arien666

6,290 posts

Joined May 2009

arien666 2010-02-04T23:39:25+00:00

All diffs are great :3
No problem XD

Anyway, good luck :3

Here's my star.

edit. /me waited for SB working

Last edited by arien666 2010-02-05T02:24:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.