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TERRA - Sacred Oath

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ouranhshc
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Topic Starter
ouranhshc
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, December 27, 2009 at 7:20:39 PM

Artist: TERRA
Title: Sacred Oath
Source: Dance Dance Revolution
Tags: Konami Jun Naoki Maeda
BPM: 170
Filesize: 3738kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.26 stars, 74 notes)
  2. Hard (4.98 stars, 228 notes)
  3. Normal+ (4.79 stars, 168 notes)
Download: TERRA - Sacred Oath
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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yay finally done
Last edited by ouranhshc , edited 38 times in total.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
More TERRA?... :(

[Hard] (you mean Insane, right?)

00:11:056 (2,3,4) - 4 on top of 2? (the angle is ugly right now)
00:14:021 (2) - Break distance snap; down 1 grid
00:14:038 (3) - down 1 grid
00:27:009 (4) - Make the red sliderpoint into a white one.
01:14:091 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Flawed symmetry
01:16:085 (2) - Right 1
01:17:003 (3) - Right & up
01:18:009 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Centered?

this is actually pretty awesome, *star
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 93
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
oops
i got offset 103
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Conflict detected lol.
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
lol
Matma Rex
586 posts
Joined March 2009
Matma Rex
Modded over IRC.

Cool map, starred.
happy30
Featured Artist
2,064 posts
Joined August 2008
happy30
Disable countdown?

Easy:
00:17:389 (1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,1,2,3) - I found this a bit weird, but yeah the map will get harder if you use red ticks D:

star
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

You might want to consider bringing down the slider velocity a bit. Might be a bit too fast for beginners.
00:06:094 (x) - Add a break
00:08:918 (x) - ^

[Normal]

00:06:094 (x) - Add a break
00:08:918 (x) - ^
00:12:447 (x) - ^
00:14:565 (x) - ^

[Hard+]

00:06:094 (x) - Add a break
00:08:918 (x) - ^
00:12:447 (x) - ^
01:09:271 (5) - New combo
01:10:683 (9) - ^

Starred~
Gens
osu! Alumni
3,485 posts
Joined August 2008
Gens
[Easy]
  1. I felt the Slider velocity was more like a normal. Maybe too high for newbies.
[Normal +]
  1. Delete the space between "Normal" and "+".
Umm... yes, that's all.
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
OFFSET : 101

i think diff name [Easy] [Hard] [Insane] is better .
and i prefer your last slider change to 2 notes with a jump .

any , your map get better :)
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Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Those other diffs, now

[Easy]
00:05:744 (1,1,1,2,1) - What logical reason is there for laying these out like this? Some sort of pattern would be nice.
00:17:391 (1,2,3,1) - These stacks are awful. Unstack please
00:20:214 (1,2,3,1) - ^
00:36:802 (1) - Red sliderpoint left 1.
00:38:214 (1) - ^
01:07:861 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Increase spacing. It's hard to tell which are 1/2 apart and which are 1 apart.
01:11:744 (2,1) - Decrease spacing.
01:19:155 (1,2,1,2) - These are too high because of the grid height increase

[Normal]
00:42:802 (6,7,8,9) - Either all stacked or all unstacked?
01:27:626 (1,2,3) - ^
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
[Easy]
00:17:391 (1,2,3) - Confusing~ nono
00:20:214 (1,2,3) - ^

[Hard]

01:27:979 (4,5) - :/ Overkill jump~

~

Like osu_CN_yaya suggested~ rename Normal to Hard, and Hard to Insane.
Agnes
osu! Alumni
1,153 posts
Joined July 2009
Agnes
Heh. You TERRAholic. <3


[Easy]

No errors.

[Normal]

This feels like a Hard other than a Normal... and it's a nearby five-star Normal, too. I don't think a few of the BATs will be pleased with it... Unless it's Normal+.

[Hard]

01:28:067 - Check spacing?


Other than the two things I pointed out, the map's pretty good. Star'd!
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
i REALLY think you should remove most of the finishes
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
eee
692 posts
Joined January 2008
eee
eeemod GO!!!

[Easy]
  1. There are no breaks in between those beginning beats. The one difficulty that actually needs to reserve HP Drain, doesn't. You can actually remove the breaks in [Hard] and place them in [Easy]
  2. I don't agree with 0.5x BPM in easy difficulties.
These are just suggestions, and, most likely, they don't have to be done >.<
I cannot find anything wrong with the map, great job
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Easy
00:18:273 (1) - Remove new combo
00:21:096 (1) - Remove new combo
00:26:744 (2) - Shorten 1/2
00:38:214 (1) - Remove new combo
00:50:214 (1) - maaaybe remove combo, though i guess it kinda works..
00:57:979 (x) - Add a note? It feels empty here
01:00:449 (1) - Start this on the next white tick so it matches the previous notes, right now the spinner kind of takes you by surprise.
01:13:508 (1) - This is the only jump in the whole map and it's a fairly large one, so it doesn't really fit well imo
01:25:508 (1,2,1,2) - This is just personal taste, but I think it would be a better ending if everything was symmetrical here, it makes a nice effect. Rotating it 90 degrees works pretty well imo.

Normal+
00:52:332 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:00:802 (4) - This repeat is a liiiittle bit hidden, it might throw some players off.
Again, it would be nice if the ending was symmetrical. Maybe:
01:26:391 (3) - Stack on 4
01:26:920 (1) - Move left 1 grid
01:27:979 (3) - Stack on 2

Hard
Just the symmetry ending thing, but again that's just my personal opinion ;)

nice
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc
done
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
IRC MOD
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
IRC mods/rage/whatnot =p
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
[Easy]
cool

[Normal]
good

[Hard]
:/ ohhh the breaks at the beginning...you need to stay consistant between difficulties, so put them in please
01:03:449 (8) - these finishes sound a bit odd off-beat
01:07:861 (1) - slightly hidden


so close and yet so far, call me back with fixes and I'll rebubble you :/
ouranhshc
2,338 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
ouranhshc

Saturos-fangirl wrote:

[Easy]
cool

[Normal]
good

[Hard]
:/ ohhh the breaks at the beginning...you need to stay consistant between difficulties, so put them in please
01:03:449 (8) - these finishes sound a bit odd off-beat im keeping them
01:07:861 (1) - slightly hidden remapped secting


so close and yet so far, call me back with fixes and I'll rebubble you :/
Yuukari-Banteki
1,534 posts
Joined June 2008
Yuukari-Banteki
easy, normal unchanged

[Hard]
rebubbled :3
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Well done.

Ranked!
ouranhshc
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ouranhshc
thank you
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