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Juanes - A Dios le Pido

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Gens
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jueves, 27 de mayo de 2010 at 10:24:19 p.m.

Artist: Juanes
Title: A Dios le Pido
Tags: Un Dia Normal collab #spanish Neo Adonis Lizbeth Lumiere Lissette Beuchi-chan darck360 sesito71
BPM: 97
Filesize: 3751kb
Play Time: 03:17
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4.91 stars, 385 notes)
  2. Dificil (4.96 stars, 261 notes)
  3. Facil (0.89 stars, 89 notes)
  4. Mediano (2.43 stars, 104 notes)
Download: Juanes - A Dios le Pido
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And... here it is! The first song in the #spanish collab. If you're interested, here's a link of the project thread (in spanish).

The mappers are as follows:
00:19:85 - 00:42:28: Gens
00:42:28 - 01:04:54: Neo Adonis
01:04:54 - 01:19:39: Lizbeth
01:19:39 - 01:39:03: Lumiere
01:39:03 - 01:58:98: -BREAK-
01:58:98 - 02:21:25: Lissette
02:21:25 - 02:36:09: Beuchi-chan
02:36:09 - 02:55:89: darck360
02:55:89 - End: sesito71

Besides the [Collab] difficulty AND the storyboard, everything else was made by me.

Huge thanks to Beuchi-chan for making up the storyboard for me!

Enjoy!
Last edited by Gens , edited 32 times in total.
Beuchi
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This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Juanes - A Dios Le Pido (Gens) [Collab].osu
Guzzzzm4n
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Guzzzzm4n
Biien Aqui te dejo la parte de el map x mi :)

Y Tambien Una Star :D

Download: Juanes - A Dios Le Pido (Gens) [Collab].osu

Saludos :)
Lissette
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Lissette
aqui esta mi parte ^^

PD: Gens recuerda poner los sliderslide silenciados en mi parte, grax!

Download: Juanes - A Dios Le Pido (Gens) [Collab].osu
Guzzzzm4n
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Guzzzzm4n
Perdon Me Olvide de La Star :(
Lizbeth
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Lizbeth
Bueno aqui esta mi parte... espero que les guste ^^

Download: Juanes - A Dios Le Pido (Gens) [Lizbeth].osu
Lumiere
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Lumiere
Yap, aquí mi parte ... *o* , ojalá les guste. >.<

pd:"grax Liss ;3 "

Download: Juanes - A Dios Le Pido (Gens) [Lumibot].osu
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Gens
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Gens
Everything has been updated to this point. :)
Beuchi
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STORYBOOOOOAAAAARD

:)

EDIT: Remove coutdown, please >3<

Download: Juanes Storyboard.rar
sesito71
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sesito71
ya acabe mi parte del collab, espero que os guste :D


Muy buenos vuestros aportes también <3


star*

Download: Juanes - A Dios Le Pido (Gens) [Collab].osu
Derekku
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[Fácil]
Mmmm I always love a nicely-made easy diff <3

[Normal]
*Rename to 'Mediano' to match the bg? o.o;
Nicely done~

[Difícil]
I don't understand why you made the stacking like this. but otherwise, this diff seems pretty solid. =)

[Collab]
*Add everyone's name that took part in this diff to the tags of this diff? o:
00:41:663 (1) - I hate to point it out, but auto can't get 2000 bonus on this. x-x
03:17:539 (1) - Perhaps lower the volume on this? It sounds a bit off because "a" starts 1/4th before, and "dios" doesn't start until after the white tick. Moving the slider back 1/4 sounds weird too, but maybe it's just my ears. XP

Nice job to everyone and beuchi for the cute sb! :3 I should've waited to mod this, but I've had the song stuck in my head for days, saw that there was a map for it, and couldn't resist modding. XP Call me back when SerChef has his part done and I'll gladly pubble this~
Gens
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Gens
<3

shame I can't update yet =[

Also, if you're curious, I did the stacking like that because some small things weren't stacking, I hope it's not a problem x:
I like being perfectionist and all that so yeah.
Derekku
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Derekku
I think that there are still a couple of stacking bugs, but since you have it like this, it should be fine.
Neo Adonis
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Neo Adonis
I'm replacing the SerChef's part.

Download: Juanes - A Dios Le Pido (Gens) [Collab].osu

Enjoy ^^


EDIT: Damn! My part is sooo easy comparing to the other ones! But I don't wanna spoil the beatmap by trying to do my part harder.
Beuchi
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Storyboard fix!

Replaced SerChef's part of the SB and changed the font of the text since I didn't have it on my laptop ( '-w-)

Download: Juanes Storyboard Fix.rar
Gens
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Gens
Finished and updated!

Ready for modding now. :)
Lumiere
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Lumiere
Mi estrella nunca la puse ... u.u
Derekku
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[collab]
00:54:807 (1) - extend to the blue tick
00:57:900 (8) - move back to the white tick and extend to the red
00:58:982 (1) - Doesn't get 2000 bonus. Have it start on the previous red tick and extend back to the white
01:02:075 (8) - I think that this would sound better by starting on the previous blue tick and ending on the blue tick before (9). You can either just make the slider longer and move it backwards to do this, or shorten it and have it repeat two extra times (I like the sound of the latter better).

[storyboard]
I like the new font, but at higher resolutions, it's a bit choppy. D: Also, the shadows on the bottom get a little bit cut off. =X

Other than these little things, I think that this map is pubble-ready. Call me back when everything is fixed and I'll gladly do it. :D
Linkred
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Linkred
Cheers here from sheer patriotism.

*star*
Gens
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Gens
Updated!
Derekku
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A few final things that I missed while doing a playthrough...

[Collab]
*perhaps lower Drain a tick?
*I wish that the second chorus had kiai too :(
02:20:323 (1,1) - The slider is only 1/4th after the spinner, which isn't a problem, but it's so far from the center that it's really hard to hit without leaving the spinner early. So, please move it closer to the center. Also, the spinner COULD be moved back a tick and extended to give it some extra time which is helpful.
02:26:354 (1) - I missed here because I expected this to be on the white tick (since it would follow the triplet beat in the background that the SB was also bouncing to AND the other two phrase sliders started on white ticks...)
02:28:828 (1) - ^

[Difícil]
01:27:281 - I expected a note here o.o;
02:43:982 - ^

I'll go ahead and pubble this, though, since I think that it's pretty solid otherwise and the song has been stuck in my head foreverrrrr. <3

EDIT: Also, tags should be the same in all diffs, so please add the collab names to all diffs. :3
Gens
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All fixed, thank you again~
Derekku
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Yay, kiai <3

No problem~ :3
Neo Adonis
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Gens: Could you move the circle at 01:03:467 (9) 1/4 tick before. and snapped with the end of 01:01:921 (8)? After the Derekku-Chan's mod, I think it could sound better on that place. Thanks Derekku for modding. ^^
Derekku
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Neo Adonis wrote:

Gens: Could you move the circle at 01:03:467 (9) 1/4 tick before. and snapped with the end of 01:01:921 (8)? After the Derekku-Chan's mod, I think it could sound better on that place. Thanks Derekku for modding. ^^
Ooh, yeah, I agree. :> You're welcome~
Gens
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Alright, sorry for the delay. Updated.
Gens
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Changed (every instance of) the title to "A Dios le Pido" instead of "A Dios Le Pido". Sorry, but everyone that has the map downloaded must redownload.
Armin
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This is in WIP section, move it in Pending maybe? <_<

Tags: Un día normal

[Facil]

Overall: Clean and very nicely made. Just some point of concern:
1) The circle size in my opinion should be increased;
2) Some symmetries are a bit forced
3) Too many new combo x_x
4)Some slider-arts are bit random (like 01:04:549 (1,2,1) - 01:09:498 (1)) try something like that?





But yeah, that's perfect.

Overall Rating: 9-/10

[Mediano]

Overall: All perfect. I can't find imperfections.

Overall Rating: 9/10

[Collab]

Overall: Ok, this is fine since the style of that mappers is great. I can't find anything of really wrong, just:

01:28:055 (5) The spacing of this beat doesn't fit with the previous 01:27:436 (1,2,3,4). Try to fix that turning off the grid snap.
01:37:951 (5) Same problem here
03:17:694 (1) What is that? o___o Replace this with a spinner maybe? xD

Overall Rating: 9-/10

[Dificil]

Overall: Perfect. I love this style, and the some patterns are awesome.

01:46:766 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) In this part the map is very confused. I suggest you to replace these hitobjects using another pattern.

Overall Rating: 9/10
Gens
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Yeah, I'm not that happy with [Facil], to be honest. But it should be good enough. Also, the patterns you posted... I'd use the first one but I'd have to modify the spacing around the previous parts, plus I'm lazy. Also the thing in [Dificil] wouldn't be as awesome with another pattern, though I can't deny it's confusing.

With [Collab] I already asked sesito but I still need to ask Lumiere about it. Thanks for modding!
Lesjuh
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Dificil is <3
0_o
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0_o
General
Not really a fan of the super long breaks, but eh.

Collab
00:42:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part didn't really play well for me, I don't really get what it's synced to? I would shorten 1 by a blue tick then move 2 back a blue tick and maybe add a note at 00:43:673? Then do the same thing with 3,4 (and the extra note if you want it)
00:58:518 (10) - This note feels a little weird to hit. I would either delete it or make 9 into a slider. (If you delete it move the spinner back to fill the empty space) Speaking of the spinner..
00:58:673 (1) - End this a blue tick earlier? It'll sync with the vocals and give the play a bit more time to recover
01:24:498 (2) - This threw me off since all of the previous times this note was a blue tick later - it's a little confusing. Stacking it under the slow slider makes it tough to predict as well =/
02:59:292 (1) - Remove new combo


Deficil
01:44:292 (1,2) - Can you align this with the stuff before it? Also the spacing a kind of decieving :U
01:54:189 (1) - Yeah the spacing threw me off here. Maybe add a circle at 01:54:034 to fill the gap? If you do you might want to move the finish at the end of 6 to the new 7
02:36:560 (2) - New combo?

Moar spanish songs plz
Gens
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Fixed up the small stuff but I still have to ask everyone else about their parts~
Just so you know, I agree with everything in [Collab].
Neo Adonis
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0_o wrote:

00:42:745 (1,2,3,4,5) - This part didn't really play well for me, I don't really get what it's synced to? I would shorten 1 by a blue tick then move 2 back a blue tick and maybe add a note at 00:43:673? Then do the same thing with 3,4 (and the extra note if you want it)
Mmm... disaggre... It's synced to the guitar... Oh well... Tried to do something different.

About the other stuff, at least on my part it was changed ^^

Changes 1: The changes I aggre
Download: Juanes - A Dios le Pido (Gens) [Collab].osu

Changes 2: The change I disaggre (along with the other ones):( ... Really
Download: Juanes - A Dios le Pido (Gens) [Collab].osu

Anyway, thanks so much for modding!! ^^


Download: Juanes - A Dios le Pido (Gens) [Collab].osu
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Garven
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[BG]
Is there a way to maybe lower the "Juanes-A Dios le Pido" text? It gets half-covered up by the default skin health bar.

I'm not seeing anything wrong at all. I'll just point out the soft whistle on slider slides (I find them to sound horrible in pretty much any occasion in music)
[Facil]
Up HP drain by 1. It's really hard to die with the short combos and high tick rate otherwise.
Whistle slider slides
SPOILER
00:20:477 (2) - Remove whistle from slider slide.
00:24:189 (2) - ^
01:40:426 (3) - ^
01:45:375 (3) - ^

[Mediano]
00:24:189 (1) - Remove whistle from slider slide
00:24:189 (1) - Remove new combo

[Collab]
Whistle slider slides.
SPOILER
00:42:745 (1) - Remove whistle from slider slide
00:43:982 (3) - ^
00:48:003 (5) - ^
00:50:323 (3,5) - ^
00:55:271 (2,4) - ^
00:58:209 (9) - ^ Also it was kind of weird seeing that this was the only thing that was stacked in that entire line.
01:01:921 (8) - ^
02:26:354 (2) - ^
02:28:828 (2) - ^
02:51:096 (8) - Remove whistle from slider slide
02:34:240 (3,4) - Maybe remove whistle?
02:53:261 (2,3) - [Nazi] Lower by one grid?
02:54:498 (6) - [Nazi] Maybe move this left one grid to make the curve a bit smoother?
03:15:683 (1,2,3,4) - This finish spam is a little over the top, hehe. Maybe do only the beginning of the slider with a finish?

[Dificil]
Slider whistles
SPOILER
00:21:714 (5,6) - Slider whistles
00:23:261 (1,3,4) - ^
01:20:477 (4,5) - ^
01:22:951 (4,5) - ^
01:30:374 (4,5) - ^
01:32:848 (4,5) - ^
02:37:178 (4,5) - ^
02:39:652 (4,5) - ^
02:47:075 (4,5) - ^
02:49:549 (4,5) - ^
01:41:817 (1) - Holy crap, this part is awesome.
Gens
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Thanks! Fixed what I saw necessary~ almost did nothing for my difficulties but a good bunch for the Collab diff.
Krisom
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Hola^^!

[General]
La verdad, no me gusta el fondo, creo que le vendría mejor algo como el collab que subió Beuchi, pero es tu estilo de fondos, asi que meh XD!
Los strobes en el SB se ven bien, pero cuando lo haces con el blanco es algo molesto IMO

[Dificil]
Ok, voy a hacer un comentario muy idiota, pero difícil lleva acento =3=
;)

[Collab]
01:24:652 - Muy poco intuitivo. Pareciera que va a seguir el ritmo, pero sigue la letra. Es dificil leerlo hasta que llegas a 01:26:044 IMO.
01:34:395 - ^
02:46:457 (6) - Un clap y un whistle a la vez, no suenan bien D:, remueve alguno
03:10:271 (3) - Remueve el finsih (?)
03:10:580 (5) - Remueve el finish...
03:10:735 (6) - Y agrega un finish acá quitando el clap
:D

[Normal]
00:24:189 (2) - Quitale el sliderwhistle a este slider D:
:3

[Facil]
Acento :3 (odiame, OOODIAAAMEEE >w<!)
01:51:560 (5) - Clap + Finish? seguro?
01:56:508 (4) - ^ ?
^^!

Esop, no hay mucho que decir, excelente, ojalá los beatmappers que no se han contactado lo hagan para hacer ajustillos a sus partes (o darles permiso de hacerlo :3)

Ojalá vaya lo de shakira con la Saku ^^! Star!
Gens
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Gracias~ no puedo utilizar acentos por el BSS. >:
Larto
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All diffs apart from Collab:
02:55:890 - that's a strange place to end the map

Dificil:
01:41:817 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - There's too much going on here.. it's really hard to read.
01:46:766 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
Gens
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Nah, I like that pattern. <3
And did you notice I placed breaks and stuff iNiS style? Just so you know. I like it~
Larto
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Larto
=| Well, okay...
BUNCKER057
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oh a gens topic abount help him
Gens
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Post Date wrote:

Fri Dec 18, 2009 12:55 pm (over 7 months ago)

Last Bubble wrote:

Fri May 28, 2010 3:22 pm (2 weeks ago)
This makes me sad.

Also:

BUNCKER057 wrote:

oh a gens topic abount help him
wat.
arien666
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Umm...

I don't know about 'Spanish' ;_;
Well, good luck to your song and your country :3
[FIFA #2]
Mogsy
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I have absolutely no problems with this map. Fun and technically sound/polished. Ranked.
Beuchi
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Finallyyyy~ o/ o/ o/
Neo Adonis
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Weeeeeeeeee!!

Grats, Gens!!
Andrea
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I've set this to Pop (Other), if it's wrong let me know.
Roddie
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We need more Spanish songs like this! :)
eMkay
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eMkay
i fu**ing LOVE spanish songs.
Please map more songs like this for example La Camisa Negra ;)
Great map
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