Shulin wrote:

General:

Tags: I think you can delete "2009", "2010", "christian protestan church jesus" because those really aren't relevant and "protestan" should be spelled protestant

You have 2 .osb files delete one.

Junior:

00:11:088 (4) - Move forward to the white tick.
00:13:092 (x) - Add a note?
00:20:061 (7) - Move forward one tick?
00:34:065 (2) - Shorten this slider so it ends at 00:35:201
00:35:047 (x) - Add a beat here or add an extra return (this will make the next blue tick beats easier to hit)

The rest is good, maybe too many blue ticks for the easiest difficulty that's why I made those suggestions

Senior:

01:17:020 (1) - This jump is too big imo.

You did a good job

~ Star

-SiN- wrote:

modded in IRC and last one:

01:22:079 (9) - move to white tick? and move the spinner about 1 tick?

1. 00:20:610(7) - Move one or two 2 grids up. This way is easyer to deduce that this note is a little bit earlier.
2. 00:22:656(3) - One grid up.

1. 00:50:474(6) - New Combo here, please >_< 14 combo is too big, I think.
2. 00:58:656(1) - Too close with the (7). Rise this distance, please.
3. 01:05:474(8) - Ends better at 01:07:110. don't forget to replace the timing sections.

1. I don't get it... why is your avatar rotating in the background?
2. The fail-background.png image doesn't fit IMO.
3. The CtB character is misaligned vertically... try playing it and you'll see.

1. Please try to avoid whistle-spam.

1. I was expecting a more relaxed, easier difficulty. Sometimes the rhythm feels strange; for example, at 01:17:088 (3,4,5). I know what you're mapping to, but I'd stick more to the white ticks. Maybe too hard for the easier difficulty?

fartownik wrote:

[WyndII's Xmas Present]
[00:29:878 - 00:30:424] - Make this section louder a bit. Silence is confused.
00:30:083 (4) - New combo. new combo should have started here 00:31:651 if you listen closely to the chords XD
00:55:037 (6) - Delete the repeat and move 1/2 forward. I know what you mean, but im sure it's fine I want long whistle sound >w<
00:58:065 (5) - New combo. ooh
01:27:001 (2) - It sounds really weird. Delete it and add a note here 01:27:028 with Finish hitsound and new combo. ooh nice idea~ but now new combo thing >.>
01:27:083 (3) - New combo. ^

Lizbeth wrote:

WyndII's Xmas Present
00:42:083 (8) - move 1/4 later (suggestion)

Senior
01:18:042 (1) - end spinner on white tick
Nope.

Junior
00:53:033 (3) - end this 1/4 later
Nope.
00:58:092 (2) - remove and move the next slider back here, with the reverse arrow on white tick
Nope.

Novice
00:51:028 (1) - remove a repeat, and stretch it so is 2 beats each repeat.
Done.

good luck!
Thanks for modding <3

Sinistro wrote:

[General]
+5 to offsets.
Remove "and" from tags.
(Novice, Junior and Senior only) What is the inherited timing section between 01:06:969 and 01:13:651 for? There aren't any notes here.
Looooots of whistles in this map, especially on the part before the break. Consider removing some?
Text 3.png is a little closer to Text 1/Text 2 than Text 4. Lower it slightly so it's exactly between them.
I'm keeping the 01:13:651 inherited timing section. I'm doing this on purpose.

[Novice]
- 00:48:969 (2) - Since this is an uncommon 3/4 away from the previous one, and this is the easiest difficulty, stacking its start with the previous slider's end isn't very intitutive for me. Space them properly, and don't forget to check if the things after that need to be nudged to keep the spacing.
Done.

[WyndII's Xmas Present]
00:28:651 (1) - Based on the rhythm pattern being followed at that point (the brass), maybe this should start 1/4 later?
How about setting the animation between the two kiais to go to the beat? (Make the delay equal to 546 ms).
Logo.png has horribly aliased edges!
WyndII.png has shadow around the edges of a rectangle, ruining the effect. Make the shadow appear around the words only.
Yae!