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La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error

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Beuchi
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on viernes, 02 de julio de 2010 at 22:09:15

Artist: La Quinta Estacion
Title: Tu Peor Error
Tags: collab #spanish soyah Zakiu sesito71 Astom Nerv_Mario
BPM: 98
Filesize: 3760kb
Play Time: 02:36
Difficulties Available:
  1. Collab (4,87 stars, 338 notes)
  2. Easy (0,99 stars, 120 notes)
  3. Normal (3,24 stars, 192 notes)
Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error
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5th map!! :)

Now it's time for a spanish song. One of the songs for a #spanish collab Beatmap Project.
Thanks to Gonzvlo for making a little skin! :3

Enjoy!! And as always thank you so much for starring and modding! ^_^

Added a Skin! Please redownload~

Collab Parts:
0:11:550 - 0:31:200: soyah
0:31:200 - 0:50:700: Zakiu
0:50:700 - 1:00:618: BREAK
1:00:618 - 1:20:100: sesito71
1:20:100 - 1:39:600: Astom
1:39:600 - 1:59:400: Beuchi-chan
1:59:400 - 2:09:150: BREAK
2:09:150 - End: Nerv_Mario

EDITS:
19 Dec (2:50): Added soyah's part of [Collab]
20 Dec (9:42): Added Nerv_Mario's part of [Collab]
6 Jan (11:37): Fixes by jockeytiyan and Leorda. Waiting for more parts for collab diff...
25 Jan (8:53): Omg it's an update!! Added sesito71's part of [Collab]
23 Feb (0:41): God this is going reaaaally slow xD Added Zakiu's part of [Collab] and fixed some minor things :3
16 Mar (5:27): OMG!! [Collab] it's finished!!! Added Astom's part of [Collab] and fixes by Glasslake.
22 Mar (6:25): Uploaded half of the storyboard. Names on [Collab] left. Made soome minor fixes.
25 Mar (8:47): It's finished!! Finally moved to Pending.
30 Mar (9:40): Fixes by NoHItter. Fixed rough edges on text images of the storyboard.
30 Mar (10:41): Fixes by yeahyeahyeahhh.
3 Apr (18:26): Fixes by BagnoGamer. Changed offset.
4 Apr (21:28): Fixes by Garven.
10 Apr (11:27): Fixes by SteRRuM. New mp3 file and Offset.
11 May (4:05): Revived ;_;. Made some changes on Easy and Normal.
11 May (11:33): Fixes by Sakura301.
14 May (18:56): Fixes by ErufenRito.
20 May (2:49): Fixes by Krisom.
26 May (3:18): Fixes by wanhyrzh.
27 May (6:45): Fixes by fartownik.
28 May (3:13): Fixes by MarioBros777
29 May (11:05): Added Skin by Gonzvlo.
23 Jun (19:40): Fixes by Gens. Added a spinner-approach circle and forced Default skin.
2 Jul (21:48): Fixes by Mogsworth.
Kerensa
hey ~

Normal:
it was fine ~
but i personally think that it's pretty confusing o.o maybe it's just be just i got a B on it >.> shocking right.. maybe not.. i dunno. it just felt weird.

Easy:
was fine >_<;;

well yeah i didn't see anything, but yeah, maybe i'm just anoob modder >_<;; nice map. cool song ~

star~
Revengexsoyah
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nerv_Mario
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error (Beuchi-chan) [Collab].osu
jockeytiyan
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! (Only suggestions. I fail to find some things that are wrong in the map)

Easy:
00:36:590 (1) - Place it somewhere else without getting it hidden.
00:46:385 (1) - ^
01:25:570 (1) - ^
01:35:366 (1) - ^

Repetitive much? ^^


Normal:
Nothing wrong. Just the repetitiveness of the patters. ^^


Good luck on the collab. :3
Leorda
Hola Beuchi-chan! Sorry for mod suddenly and I not to give you a permission :(

[General]
Source?

[Kiai]
The kiai is not set, set this for all difficulty
1) 00:31:080 - 00:50:672
2) 01:20:060 - 01:39:652


[Easy]
01:09:652 (1) - No new combo

[Normal]
00:22:815 (1) - No new combo
00:23:427 (x) - Add note here with finish hitsound
00:25:264 (1) - No new combo
00:34:448 (x) - Add note here

00:34:754 (1) - Move backward to blue tick
00:44:244 (x) - Add note here
00:44:550 (1) - Move backward to blue tick


Sorry I don't mod Collab difficulty :o
Nice Map ^u^
STAR!
[DBF]
Star for god of streams!
Topic Starter
Beuchi

jockeytiyan wrote:

AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! W-why are you laughing?... ;_;...

Easy:
00:36:590 (1) - Place it somewhere else without getting it hidden. Sure o:
00:46:385 (1) - ^ ^
01:25:570 (1) - ^ ^
01:35:366 (1) - ^ ^
Thanks jockey >w</ and sorry for fixing this so late xD...

Leorda wrote:

[General]
Source? Hmm,,, is it okay if I put Album's Name as Source? oxo

[Kiai] Sorry, no Kiai.

[Easy]
01:09:652 (1) - No new combo Naaah i like it xD

[Normal]
00:22:815 (1) - No new combo Done
00:23:427 (x) - Add note here with finish hitsound This would make a sudden jump... and I don't like it ;X
00:25:264 (1) - No new combo Done :3
00:34:448 (x) - Add note here Nah...
00:34:754 (1) - Move backward to blue tick Symmetry~
00:44:244 (x) - Add note here Same as before oxo...
00:44:550 (1) - Move backward to blue tick Same here~
Thank you Leorda, again sorry for being so late >x<...

Kudosu for you two!!
sesito71
ainss, tenia mi parte ayer aunque se me olvido ponerla, aqui te la dejo hoy xD


te modeo el map luego si eso ^^


salu2

Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error (Beuchi-chan) [Collab].osu
Astom
wenas, estuve jugando el beat map y creo que hay un pequeño error en el timing que repercute en varias partes de la cancion, estuve probando unas modificaciones espero que les sirvan.

[normal]

-Usar BPM en 98,000, offset 11.700 y "Beat Snap Divisor" en 1/6
-Si haces el cambio anterior deberes reposicionar todas los circles y adicionalmente cambiar algunos a una posicion mas acorde a la que estan, a continuacion les dejo los que encontre que quisa deban ser cambiados o eliminados:
+00:11:488 eliminar
+00:11:795 mover a 00:11:700, de aqui en adelante te daras cuenta de lo que quise decir anteriormente... te tomara algun tiempo hacer todo
+00:41:802 mover a 00:41:700
+01:15:271 mover a 01:15:373
+.......

Espero no ser muy intruso en su beatmap, igualmente aqui va su estrellita. Suerte :3
Topic Starter
Beuchi
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Astom
=)

cuando tenga algun kudosu suelto lo tirare por aka :3

Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error (Beuchi-chan) [Collab].osu
Glass
Hi :3

[?] = Opinion/suggestion
[!] = Need to be fixed

[Easy]
00:36:590 (1) - Remove new combo [?]
00:46:385 (1) - ^ [?]
01:02:305 (4,5,1) - Move them closer to each other, their spacing look the same as 01:00:468 (1,2,3) [!]
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo [?]
01:25:570 (1) - ^ [?]
01:35:365 (1) - ^ [?]

[Normal]
00:13:325 (x) - Add a note here [?]
00:15:927 (5) - Move this to 00:15:774, and then add a note at 00:16:080 [?]
00:33:835 (1,2) - Remove new combo [?]
00:35:366 (1,1,1) - ^ [!]
00:43:631 (1,2) - ^ [?]
00:45:162 (1,1,2) - ^ [?]
01:05:978 (1) - ^ [!]
01:16:386 (1) - ^ [!]
01:18:835 (1,2) - ^ [!]
01:33:835 (1) - ^ [?]
01:51:284 (1) - ^ [?]

[Collab]
I realized this wasn't finished yet so I'm not gonna mod this xD

Starred~
Topic Starter
Beuchi

Glasslake wrote:

[Easy]
00:36:590 (1) - Remove new combo [?] Nah.
00:46:385 (1) - ^ [?] Nah xD
01:02:305 (4,5,1) - Move them closer to each other, their spacing look the same as 01:00:468 (1,2,3) [!] Ooops, fixed :3
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo [?] Nah.
01:25:570 (1) - ^ [?] Nope xD
01:35:365 (1) - ^ [?] Same :3

[Normal]
00:13:325 (x) - Add a note here [?] I don't like how it sounds :/
00:15:927 (5) - Move this to 00:15:774, and then add a note at 00:16:080 [?] Symmetryyyy +_+!
00:33:835 (1,2) - Remove new combo [?]Okay :3
00:35:366 (1,1,1) - ^ [!] D:! How come this is like that? Fixed o_O
00:43:631 (1,2) - ^ [?] Fixed.
00:45:162 (1,1,2) - ^ [?] Done too.
01:05:978 (1) - ^ [!] Fixed.
01:16:386 (1) - ^ [!] Fixed.
01:18:835 (1,2) - ^ [!] Fiiiixed :3
01:33:835 (1) - ^ [?] It would make a too long combo.
01:51:284 (1) - ^ [?] Nope oxo
Thank you Glasslake~ *-* *Kudosu*
NoHitter
Is beuchichan.png and storyboardby.png meant to not have smooth edges? Maybe you can feather the edges?
Edit: Also the rest of the text images...

Easy
00:36:590 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:31:693 (1)'s location
00:46:386 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:41:488 (1) 's location
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:570 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:20:672 (1)'s location
01:35:366 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:30:468 (1)'s location

Normal
00:31:080 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move right by one grid.
00:40:876 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move left by one grid
01:51:590 (1) - Remove new combo?

Collab
01:49:448 (1) - Make beuchichan.png strobe once more here?
yeahyeahyeahhh
Collab:
Genera-
I think the text could use a bit more work, kinda rough edges. Make them smoother? D:
Fix preview timing, should be 31080 like the others.

This diff is fine, but I think your guest can do a better job on the hitsounds Beuchi xD More so towards the beginning, gets better at the end!

Normal:
00:12:101 (3,4,5) - Space these further apart? The current spacing kinda makes it feel to click sooner.
00:14:550 (3,4,5) - ^
00:32:305 (3) - Move this back 1/4 (blue tick)?
00:34:754 (1) - ^
00:42:101 (3) - Back 1/4 again
00:44:550 (1) - ^
01:21:284 (3) - ^ then add a note 01:22:509 (4) - ?
01:23:733 (3) - ^

Or you can do the previous two how you have here... 01:29:856 (1) -

Easy:
Fine

Good luck ^^
Leorda

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Sorry, no Kiai
HOLY F*****G S***!!!!!!
Es to prela no otela!
BEST SENTENCE EVAHHH!!!!!! *jump and crazy laugh*

OH! Ahem, since your diff is finish, I want recheck it

[General]
1) Your mp3 is a bit low, maybe try louder bit?

[Easy]
00:21:284 (1) - Ugly slider mommy.....
00:23:733 (2) - ^
00:26:182 (1) - Make it curve, I think it would be perfect if this make curve and symetric
00:28:631 (2) - ^
00:32:305 (3) - I think it's not bad if looks like this, maybe try make curve?
00:34:753 (3) - ^
00:41:488 (1) - Do not place the object near spinner in timing, since this easy diff. Because it's slow, I think it's ok, maybe?

[Normal]
PLEASE check this diff, are you follow rhythm of vocal? There's some part are following and the other part are following vocal
00:12:101 (3) - Maybe try make it curve?
00:14:550 (3) - ^
01:01:386 (4) - This slider is waaaaaay too ugly, make it curve
01:03:835 (4) - ^

Mommy~ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Topic Starter
Beuchi

NoHItter wrote:

Is beuchichan.png and storyboardby.png meant to not have smooth edges? Maybe you can feather the edges?Fixed :3

Easy
00:36:590 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:31:693 (1)'s location I like it there =x
00:46:386 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:41:488 (1) 's location ^
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo? Done :3
01:25:570 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:20:672 (1)'s location Same as before.
01:35:366 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:30:468 (1)'s location ^

Normal
00:31:080 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move right by one grid. Fixed :3
00:40:876 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move left by one grid Fixed too.
01:51:590 (1) - Remove new combo? Nah... oxo

Collab
01:49:448 (1) - Make beuchichan.png strobe once more here? Done :3
Thank you NoHItter~ *Kudosu*
Topic Starter
Beuchi

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Collab:
I think the text could use a bit more work, kinda rough edges. Make them smoother? D: Already done :P
Fix preview timing, should be 31080 like the others. Fixed :3

This diff is fine, but I think your guest can do a better job on the hitsounds Beuchi xD More so towards the beginning, gets better at the end! Hahahaha, okay :P

Normal:
00:12:101 (3,4,5) - Space these further apart? The current spacing kinda makes it feel to click sooner. It has Distance Snap on... :? I'll leave it for now =x
00:14:550 (3,4,5) - ^ Same.
00:32:305 (3) - Move this back 1/4 (blue tick)? Nope...
00:34:754 (1) - ^ Same.
00:42:101 (3) - Back 1/4 again Nope.
00:44:550 (1) - ^ Same.
01:21:284 (3) - ^ then add a note 01:22:509 (4) - ? No~
01:23:733 (3) - ^ Same xD
Thank you yyy <3~ *Kudosu*
Topic Starter
Beuchi

Leorda wrote:

HOLY F*****G S***!!!!!! BEST SENTENCE EVAHHH!!!!!! *jump and crazy laugh* o_o;

[General]
1) Your mp3 is a bit low, maybe try louder bit? I'll think about this, I don't really think it's that low o.o

[Easy]
00:21:284 (1) - Ugly slider mommy..... >: I don't think is ugly...
00:23:733 (2) - ^ Same...
00:26:182 (1) - Make it curve, I think it would be perfect if this make curve and symetric It's curved...
00:28:631 (2) - ^ Same.
00:32:305 (3) - I think it's not bad if looks like this, maybe try make curve? It's curved D: it just has a corner.
00:34:753 (3) - ^ Same.
00:41:488 (1) - Do not place the object near spinner in timing, since this easy diff. Because it's slow, I think it's ok, maybe? Yeah, also it's near of the centre of the spin so I don't think it would be a problem =x

[Normal]
00:12:101 (3) - Maybe try make it curve? ;_;... It's curved again
00:14:550 (3) - ^ Same :/
01:01:386 (4) - This slider is waaaaaay too ugly, make it curve ;w; I like it...
01:03:835 (4) - ^ Same xD

Mommy~ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ (ノ゚ω゚)ノ
Thanks for checking it again Leorda =X
bagnz0r
[Overall]
Change your offset to 1720ms and resnap notes.
Fix all your timing points that are off. They'll be really easy to discover.
Notes seem too loud as well.

[Easy]
Timing point 69,499 -> 69,679. Unsnapped/off.

[Normal]
Timing point 20,519 -> 20,699. Unsnapped/off.
Timing point 60,468 -> 60,495. Unsnapped.
Timing point 69,499 -> 69,526. Unsnapped.
01:33:862: Make this slider end @ 01:34:781 - sounds waaay better.

[Collab]
Timing point 20,549 -> 20,546. Unsnapped.
Timing point 69,529 -> 69,526. Unsnapped.
01:02:036: Missing note. Place another one here.
01:44:117: Annoying jump that could be real pain in the ass for us CtB players.
02:24:373: Missing *whistle* note. Place another one here.
02:28:964: Remove *new combo*.


Star.
Topic Starter
Beuchi

BagnoGamer wrote:

[Overall]
Change your offset to 1720ms and resnap notes. Okay~
Fix all your timing points that are off. They'll be really easy to discover. Done :3
Notes seem too loud as well. Okay, decreased hitsound volume :3

[Easy]
Timing point 69,499 -> 69,679. Unsnapped/off. As fas as I know, Timing Sections shouldn't be ON the notes because if the player hits the note earlier it will have the wrong sound, so I won't change this one.

[Normal]
Timing point 20,519 -> 20,699. Unsnapped/off. Same as above.
Timing point 60,468 -> 60,495. Unsnapped. Same.
Timing point 69,499 -> 69,526. Unsnapped. Changed.
01:33:862: Make this slider end @ 01:34:781 - sounds waaay better. Okay~

[Collab]
Timing point 20,549 -> 20,546. Unsnapped. Changed.
Timing point 69,529 -> 69,526. Unsnapped. Same thing as I said before.
01:02:036: Missing note. Place another one here. Huh? There's already a note there ._.
01:44:117: Annoying jump that could be real pain in the ass for us CtB players. Come on, it isn't even a dash note... I've seen it on Auto e.e
02:24:373: Missing *whistle* note. Place another one here. It will make an ugly jump... No :/
02:28:964: Remove *new combo*. It's a jump, so no.
Thanks Bagno~ *Kudosu*
Garven
[Easy]
Really well-done, though it feels a little heavy on the spinners.

[Normal]
Played very well. I like.

[Collab]
While this difficulty was kicking my butt, I noticed that the sectionfail sound is really loud compared to the song itself. Perhaps lower the gain a little bit? The sectionpass doesn't stick out as bad.
00:36:005 Add a soft finish here?
01:04:475 [3] Make this slider symmetrical with [1]?

Star~
Topic Starter
Beuchi

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
Really well-done, though it feels a little heavy on the spinners. Uhhh I don't really know what do you want to mean with "heavy", maybe hard? @w@

[Collab]
While this difficulty was kicking my butt, I noticed that the sectionfail sound is really loud compared to the song itself. Perhaps lower the gain a little bit? The sectionpass doesn't stick out as bad. Hmm... I didn't felt it that loud o.O
00:36:005 Add a soft finish here? Thank you <3
01:04:475 [3] Make this slider symmetrical with [1]? Done :3
Thanks Garven~ *Kudosu*
Armin
Starred *_*
Garven

Beuchi-chan wrote:

[Easy]
Really well-done, though it feels a little heavy on the spinners. Uhhh I don't really know what do you want to mean with "heavy", maybe hard? @w@
Ah, sorry.

What I meant was that it felt (to me) that there were a lot of spinners for the length of the difficulty. Maybe try to map through the first one? The second and fourth ones definitely feel right, and the third one seems fine if you only have to do it once. I suppose it's that there is a lot of copy/paste going on in this map, and although it plays just fine, giving at least a taste of some variety is nice. Either way, this is all more of a personal preference/suggestion, so it's not that important.

I hope this clears things up a bit. :)
Nazo_old
[General]
No problems here, I guess. The storyboard is real nice!

[Easy]
No obvious mistakes, really :X

[Normal]
Some overlaps, but decided not to force them on you since you like them. xD

[Collab]
No problems.


[Conclusion]
This is really nice, Beuchi. Starred.



~Nazo
Armin
Okay, all is perfect for me.
Pubbled!
SteRRuM
Offset with new mp3: 1 732

New mp3 and full submit
Topic Starter
Beuchi

SteRRuM wrote:

Offset with new mp3: 1 732

New mp3 and full submit
I love you <3 All fixed!!!
Cyril Scarlet
ヾ(´¬`)ノ
Larto
revived
Sakura
[Easy]
00:37:242 (1) - Maybe start it at: 00:38:772
00:47:038 (1) - I think it sounds better starting at: 00:48:568
01:05:405 (1) - I think it would be better split into more notes.
01:26:221 (1) - Start at: 01:27:752 ?
01:36:017 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:37:548 and ending at: 01:38:772 and then add a note at: 01:39:691


[Normal]
00:16:425 (1) - I think this spinner is better off as notes instead.
00:36:936 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 00:38:772 ending at 00:40:915 (However if it were me i think it should be ending at the blue tick before, but then there's just 1/4 before next note, so idk XD)
00:46:731 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 00:48:568 ending at 00:50:711
01:26:221 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:27:752 ending at 01:29:589
01:36:017 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:37:548 ending at 01:38:772
01:56:834 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:57:140 ending at same spot.
Edit: Didnt find any problems on the new things you added.

[Collab.]
01:05:393 (1) - I think this would sound better with notes instead of a spinner.
01:29:117 (1) - +2000 spinner whyyyyy ;_; also i think a slider would fit better.
02:16:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Move theese a few grids to the right so that the 02:17:944 (3) is centered? if this screws up the map, you can just ignore

Nice map ^^ dont kudosu till i mod your finished easy tho, i'll give star when it's finished
Edit: +Star :)
Topic Starter
Beuchi

Sakura301 wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:242 (1) - Maybe start it at: 00:38:772 [color=#BF0000]Done :3[/color]
00:47:038 (1) - I think it sounds better starting at: 00:48:568 Done~
01:05:405 (1) - I think it would be better split into more notes. I like it as it is =x
01:26:221 (1) - Start at: 01:27:752 ? Done ;3
01:36:017 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:37:548 and ending at: 01:38:772 and then add a note at: 01:39:691 Sure o:

[Normal]
00:16:425 (1) - I think this spinner is better off as notes instead. Removed the spinner.
00:36:936 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 00:38:772 ending at 00:40:915 (However if it were me i think it should be ending at the blue tick before, but then there's just 1/4 before next note, so idk XD) I just deleted the note after it.
00:46:731 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 00:48:568 ending at 00:50:711 Same.
01:26:221 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:27:752 ending at 01:29:589 Same~
01:36:017 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:37:548 ending at 01:38:772 I think I'm going to leave this as it is...
01:56:834 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:57:140 ending at same spot.Leaving this as well (Lol, you just pointed out spinners, I guess that's a good sign... xD)
Edit: Didnt find any problems on the new things you added.

[Collab.]
01:05:393 (1) - I think this would sound better with notes instead of a spinner. Maybe yes, but I think sesito followed the melody here, I'll ask him though xP
01:29:117 (1) - +2000 spinner whyyyyy ;_; also i think a slider would fit better. I knoooooooow I didn't want to kill it because it wasn't my part... But now that you said it I will do it +w+~
02:16:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Move theese a few grids to the right so that the 02:17:944 (3) is centered? if this screws up the map, you can just ignore. Sure o: It looks nice after doing it :3
Thaaaank you Sakura~ <3 *kudosu*
Luvdic
Easy:

If it were me, i would just delete 00:32:038 (2) - 00:34:487 (2) - 02:19:793 (2) - 02:22:242 (2), etc etc etc, im sure you know what i mean by now... all of them, throughtout the whole map
01:00:507 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part was horribly confusing to me... i blame it to the lower distance spacing x:

Normal:

Sighs... this map was so confusing... im blaming it on the 1/4th objects... You dont have to do anything, its just a opinion...
00:36:629 (4) - Not perfectly stacked, it is kinda noticeable if you look at the aproach circles

Collab:

Consider using OD of 7, 6 is too slow, but 8 is too much for me >_>
Check out the snapping issues
Topic Starter
Beuchi

ErufenRito wrote:

Easy:

If it were me, i would just delete 00:32:038 (2) - 00:34:487 (2) - 02:19:793 (2) - 02:22:242 (2), etc etc etc, im sure you know what i mean by now... all of them, throughtout the whole map Sorry but I don't know what you mean with this... I won't delete them, anyways.
01:00:507 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part was horribly confusing to me... i blame it to the lower distance spacing x: Changed.

Normal:

Sighs... this map was so confusing... im blaming it on the 1/4th objects... You dont have to do anything, its just a opinion...
00:36:629 (4) - Not perfectly stacked, it is kinda noticeable if you look at the aproach circles Fixed.

Collab:

Consider using OD of 7, 6 is too slow, but 8 is too much for me >_> Decreased to OD7
Check out the snapping issues Resnapped all the notes.
Thank you~ <3 *kudosu*
Krisom
HiHi! O debería decir "HolaHola"?

->Easy
-Con lo bien mappeada que esta esta dificultad, me pude centrar en los hitsounds. Eso si, la mayoría son sugerencias pero igual miralos ^^"
-00:23:772 (2) Agregale un clap al final y quítale el del inicio.
-00:28:670 (2) Justo a este repeat le falta un whistle. Aunque la verdad no me gusta mucho como suena el whistle en estos sliders.
-01:02:344 (4) Remueve el whistle
-01:04:793 (4) ^
-01:40:915 (1) Yo quitaría el clap del inicio y el final, y dejaría solo el del repeat.
-01:43:364 (2) ^
-01:45:201 (3) Agrega un clap.
-01:46:425 (1) Agrega un clap, pero solo al inicio.
-01:49:487 (1) No me agrada como suenan los whistles al final del slider =/, por que no los remueves y agregas un clap en 01:50:099 y en 01:51:323 ?
-01:51:936 (2) ^. Yo agregaría los claps en 01:52:548 y en 01:53:772.
-01:54:997 (2) Agregale un clap?
-01:56:221 (4) ^?
La amé o_o"!


-> Normal
-00:13:517 (5) Tal vez si lo mueves 1/4 atras a la linea blanca? Me costó darle allí donde esta la primera vez...
-00:15:966 (5) ^
-00:16:425 (1) remueve el whistle?
-00:37:854 (3) Agregale un clap?
-00:47:650 (3) ^?
-01:10:915 (3) ^?
-01:13:364 (3) ^?
-01:21:936 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat)
-01:24:385 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat)
-01:26:834 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat)
-01:31:732 (3) ^?
-01:32:956 (5) ^? (solo en este repeat)
-01:35:099 (2) Quitale el whistle
-01:35:405 (3) Quitale el whistle y agregale un clap
-02:17:038 (2) ^
-02:18:262 (4) ^ (solo al inicio)
-02:26:834 (2) ^
-02:28:058 (4) ^ (solo al inicio)
-02:29:283 (2) Agregale un clap
-02:31:732 (3) ^
La amé también OwO!!

-Collab
Increible, tu parte y la de astom son mis favoritas XD! Solo algunas cosillas.
-soyah- 00:26:221 (1) remueve el clap
-zaiku- 00:34:180 (1,5) Haz que tanto (1) como (5) tengan el mismo hitsound, ya sea clap o whistle, tu desición.
-zaiku- 00:37:701 (5) remueve el whistle
-zaiku- 00:37:548 (4,5) remueve el whistle del (5) y agregalo al (4)
-zaiku- 00:42:752 (3) yo le agregaría un clap al final
-zaiku- 00:43:058 (5) remueve el clap
-sesito71- 01:02:650 (7) =/ no puede tener otra forma el slider?
-astom- 01:23:466 (s) este spinner esta algo random allí XD!
-Neru_marío-02:10:150 (3) Quítale el clap (solo al final)
-Neru_marío-02:10:609 (5) ^ (solo al final)
-Neru_marío- 02:11:221 (7) agregale un clap.


EDIT:Agrega "spanish" en los tags, por que si buscan por spanish solo no lo van a encontrar (creo <_<>_>). lo que si sale es #spanish.

Creo que me centré demasiado en los hitsounds xD! Es que me gustó demasiado el mapa, así que le puse empeño ^^!

Suerte!

Star!
Topic Starter
Beuchi

Krisom wrote:

->Easy
-Con lo bien mappeada que esta esta dificultad, me pude centrar en los hitsounds. Eso si, la mayoría son sugerencias pero igual miralos ^^"
-00:23:772 (2) Agregale un clap al final y quítale el del inicio. Ok~
-00:28:670 (2) Justo a este repeat le falta un whistle. Aunque la verdad no me gusta mucho como suena el whistle en estos sliders. Le puse el whistle que faltaba o:
-01:02:344 (4) Remueve el whistle ;~; Queda muy vacio sin hitsounds... Y no me gusta como quedan las claps xD
-01:04:793 (4) ^ Igual.
-01:40:915 (1) Yo quitaría el clap del inicio y el final, y dejaría solo el del repeat. Ok :3
-01:43:364 (2) ^ ^
-01:45:201 (3) Agrega un clap. Ok~
-01:46:425 (1) Agrega un clap, pero solo al inicio. Tambien xD
-01:49:487 (1) No me agrada como suenan los whistles al final del slider =/, por que no los remueves y agregas un clap en 01:50:099 y en -01:51:323 ? A mi me gustan ahi ;x;
-01:51:936 (2) ^. Yo agregaría los claps en 01:52:548 y en 01:53:772. Lo mismo xD
-01:54:997 (2) Agregale un clap? Ok~
-01:56:221 (4) ^? ^

-> Normal
-00:13:517 (5) Tal vez si lo mueves 1/4 atras a la linea blanca? Me costó darle allí donde esta la primera vez... Hmmm... Esto va siguiendo la musica y no las voces, aunque varias personas me han dicho de cambiarlo asi que... ok xD.
-00:15:966 (5) ^ Lo mismo o;
-00:16:425 (1) remueve el whistle? No D:
-00:37:854 (3) Agregale un clap? Ok~
-00:47:650 (3) ^? ^
-01:10:915 (3) ^? ^
-01:13:364 (3) ^? ^
-01:21:936 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat) Hmmm no me gusta como suena :/
-01:24:385 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat) ^
-01:26:834 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat) ^
-01:31:732 (3) ^? ^
-01:32:956 (5) ^? (solo en este repeat) ^
-01:35:099 (2) Quitale el whistle Ok~
-01:35:405 (3) Quitale el whistle y agregale un clap No D:
-02:17:038 (2) ^ ^
-02:18:262 (4) ^ (solo al inicio) ^
-02:26:834 (2) ^ ^
-02:28:058 (4) ^ (solo al inicio) ^
-02:29:283 (2) Agregale un clap Ok~
-02:31:732 (3) ^ ^

-Collab
-soyah- 00:26:221 (1) remueve el clap Listo~
-zaiku- 00:34:180 (1,5) Haz que tanto (1) como (5) tengan el mismo hitsound, ya sea clap o whistle, tu desición. Whistle! :3
-zaiku- 00:37:701 (5) remueve el whistle Ok~
-zaiku- 00:37:548 (4,5) remueve el whistle del (5) y agregalo al (4) ^
-zaiku- 00:42:752 (3) yo le agregaría un clap al final Añadido xD
-zaiku- 00:43:058 (5) remueve el clap No D:
-sesito71- 01:02:650 (7) =/ no puede tener otra forma el slider? Arregle un pelin uno de los puntos, tampoco me gustaba demasiado xwx;
-astom- 01:23:466 (s) este spinner esta algo random allí XD! No lo veo tan tan random... o.o;
-Neru_marío-02:10:150 (3) Quítale el clap (solo al final) Listo~
-Neru_marío-02:10:609 (5) ^ (solo al final) ^
-Neru_marío- 02:11:221 (7) agregale un clap. ^

EDIT:Agrega "spanish" en los tags, por que si buscan por spanish solo no lo van a encontrar (creo <_<>_>). lo que si sale es #spanish. Bescando solo por spanish tambien aparece, asi que lo dejare como esta o3o
Graciaaas *-* Me alegro de que te haya gustado tanto el map xD *kudosu*
wanhyrzh
Hihi Beuchi~ :)
Just saw your Mod Request in #ModReqs :D
So I'm here...but I'm very noob in modding so I may not able to give useful advices for this great map... :(
But I'm just trying to do my best.
Hope some of them will be useful to you. XD

General:
SPOILER
1. The SB is great! But as it keep active in the whole map, I think it will be a little dazzling. I suggest you just keep SB active before the map starts, and in the break times, and times when the rhythm goes higher.
2. Ah why no source?

Easy:
SPOILER
00:38:772(1) shorten this spinner to 00:40:303 and add note at 00:40:915?
01:02:334(4, 5, 1) maybe a little hard to the beginners, maybe stack them in one place?
01:08:449(x) add a note?
01:27:752(1) same as 00:38:772(1)?
02:24:385(x) maybe add a note to keep the pace?
Normal:
SPOILER
00:12:140(3) shorten this slider to 00:12:446(red tick) and maybe add a note at 00:12:752(white tick)?
00:14:589(3) ^
00:32:344(3) shorten this slider to 00:32:650(red tick) and maybe add a note at 00:32:803(blue tick)?
00:34:793(1) ^
00:42:140(3) ^
00:44:589(1) ^
02:10:303(3) ^
02:12:752(3) ^
These above: I know you're following the song lyric but it makes me feel a bit strange when a slider ends at the blue tick in such a pace.
00:38:772(1) same as Easy?
01:01:425(4) It's shape is a little strange to me O.O
01:03:874(4) ^
01:15:201(x) add a note?
01:17:650(x) ^
02:21:017(x) ^
02:23:466(x) ^

Cokkab:
SPOILER
This diff is great! But...OMG HP DROP RATE 8! I suggest to reduce it by 1 or 2
00:13:976(x) add a note?
01:01:272(x) ^
01:02:191(x) ^
01:10:150(x) ^
01:10:762(x) ^
01:11:374(x) ^
These above are just my very personal opinion...for add these sound better to me myself, so it's just up to you! XD

Star!!
Hope to see this get ranked. It's old enough! :)
Topic Starter
Beuchi

wanhyrzh wrote:

General:
1. The SB is great! But as it keep active in the whole map, I think it will be a little dazzling. I suggest you just keep SB active before the map starts, and in the break times, and times when the rhythm goes higher. Well, the storyboard actually goes "down" when the music goes softer so I guess it's okay? Tha song is all happy and fast so... oxo
2. Ah why no source? I don't know any other Source for this except its alvum, but albums can't be on Source, you know xP~

Easy:
00:38:772(1) shorten this spinner to 00:40:303 and add note at 00:40:915? Okay o:
01:02:334(4, 5, 1) maybe a little hard to the beginners, maybe stack them in one place? Well, the whole map is OMGSOEASY, and they aren't so spaced out so I guess it's okay? xP
01:08:449(x) add a note? Sure ;o
01:27:752(1) same as 00:38:772(1)? Same as before xP
02:24:385(x) maybe add a note to keep the pace? I think I'll leave it as it is...

Normal:
00:12:140(3) shorten this slider to 00:12:446(red tick) and maybe add a note at 00:12:752(white tick)? Uhh... well I was following the background guitar there =x
00:14:589(3) ^ ^
00:32:344(3) shorten this slider to 00:32:650(red tick) and maybe add a note at 00:32:803(blue tick)? No streams pleaseeee ;x;
00:34:793(1) ^ ^
00:42:140(3) ^ ^
00:44:589(1) ^ ^
02:10:303(3) ^ ^
02:12:752(3) ^ ^
00:38:772(1) same as Easy? Okay~
01:01:425(4) It's shape is a little strange to me O.O ;x;
01:03:874(4) ^ ;X;!
01:15:201(x) add a note? It would be too much...
01:17:650(x) ^ ^
02:21:017(x) ^ ^
02:23:466(x) ^ ^

Cokkab: lol cokkab xP
This diff is great! But...OMG HP DROP RATE 8! I suggest to reduce it by 1 or 2 Reduced to 7 :3
00:13:976(x) add a note? Okay o:
01:01:272(x) ^ Nah... I like it like that.
01:02:191(x) ^ ^
01:10:150(x) ^ This section follows the drums, not the lyrics xP
01:10:762(x) ^ ^
01:11:374(x) ^ ^

Hope to see this get ranked. It's old enough! :)
Thank you!! And wow, I never noticed this map has almost 6 months old xP *kudosu*
fartownik
The current offset is way early. Please add +13-15~ to the offset value.

[Collab]

00:14:129 (1) - Following the main beat, and then suddenly go with the lyrics. Please place it at the previous white tick (1/4 back).
00:19:027 (1) - ^
01:38:772 (6) - Nazi, but I couldn't look how is this note placed - align it.
Topic Starter
Beuchi

fartownik wrote:

The current offset is way early. Please add +13-15~ to the offset value. Done, thanks~

[Collab]

00:14:129 (1) - Following the main beat, and then suddenly go with the lyrics. Please place it at the previous white tick (1/4 back). Moved.
00:19:027 (1) - ^ Done, I added another note, I think it fits better =x
01:38:772 (6) - Nazi, but I couldn't look how is this note placed - align it. Fixed, I guess.
Thanks <3 *kudosu*
Lilac
It's been stated in #modHelp.

That, and this is a collab. A SPANISH COLLAB. The song is even in my fad list.

[General]
Louder hitsounds.

[Easy]
01:02:35 (4,5,1) - Argh, replace that with a slider or something.
01:10:31 (1,1) - That neater?

There's a real difference in the mapping of the second half compared to the first half.

[Normal]
01:02:97 (5,1) - That jump stumped me. I didn't expect that in a Normal.

[Collab]
01:03:58 (1,2,3) - Center?
01:12:46 (7) - Whistle supposed to be on 6 instead?
01:14:90 (9) - I believe the whistle is supposed to be on 8. If you're following the trumpet that is.

What do you think of that mod?
Topic Starter
Beuchi

MarioBros777 wrote:

[General]
Louder hitsounds. Increased 2 ticks :3

[Easy]
01:02:35 (4,5,1) - Argh, replace that with a slider or something. Okay ;w;
01:10:31 (1,1) - That neater?

There's a real difference in the mapping of the second half compared to the first half. Hmm... Maybe because I mapped the second half around... 2 weeks ago? xD'

[Normal]
01:02:97 (5,1) - That jump stumped me. I didn't expect that in a Normal. Fixed o;

[Collab]
01:03:58 (1,2,3) - Center? Done.
01:12:46 (7) - Whistle supposed to be on 6 instead? That makes sense, changed ^^
01:14:90 (9) - I believe the whistle is supposed to be on 8. If you're following the trumpet that is. Same~

What do you think of that mod?
Well, tbh, I thought the post was longer xP I guess that's good. Thank you!! ^^ *kudosu*
Mismagius
Easy
Nothing :)

Normal
00:40:929 (1) - Finish

Collab
Great!

Sorry for the bad mod :( but it's because this is a great map. Star!
Topic Starter
Beuchi
Ahhh ahhh... Sorry but I won't add it ;___;...

Thanks for the star though! >w<
Gonzvlo
Great Map :)

Skin for u , Feel free to reject it :D


Download: Gonzski- La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error.rar
Topic Starter
Beuchi
=O

I like it!! Thank you very much!! I'll add it, though, I won't add the comboburst, I like pippi xP
sebastiangl
No encontré ningún error en ninguna dificultad.
El storyboard esta muy bueno :3
Me gusta el diseño del easy y normal. el collab es muy entretenido :)

Star! :)
choche_old
Ohh, lo veo perfecta chica, me encanta <3 te doy una estrellita :P
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