=)

cuando tenga algun kudosu suelto lo tirare por aka :3

Download: La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error (Beuchi-chan) [Collab].osu

Hi :3

[?] = Opinion/suggestion
[!] = Need to be fixed

[Easy]
00:36:590 (1) - Remove new combo [?]
00:46:385 (1) - ^ [?]
01:02:305 (4,5,1) - Move them closer to each other, their spacing look the same as 01:00:468 (1,2,3) [!]
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo [?]
01:25:570 (1) - ^ [?]
01:35:365 (1) - ^ [?]

[Normal]
00:13:325 (x) - Add a note here [?]
00:15:927 (5) - Move this to 00:15:774, and then add a note at 00:16:080 [?]
00:33:835 (1,2) - Remove new combo [?]
00:35:366 (1,1,1) - ^ [!]
00:43:631 (1,2) - ^ [?]
00:45:162 (1,1,2) - ^ [?]
01:05:978 (1) - ^ [!]
01:16:386 (1) - ^ [!]
01:18:835 (1,2) - ^ [!]
01:33:835 (1) - ^ [?]
01:51:284 (1) - ^ [?]

[Collab]
I realized this wasn't finished yet so I'm not gonna mod this xD

Starred~

Glasslake wrote:

[Easy]
00:36:590 (1) - Remove new combo [?] Nah.
00:46:385 (1) - ^ [?] Nah xD
01:02:305 (4,5,1) - Move them closer to each other, their spacing look the same as 01:00:468 (1,2,3) [!] Ooops, fixed :3
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo [?] Nah.
01:25:570 (1) - ^ [?] Nope xD
01:35:365 (1) - ^ [?] Same :3

[Normal]
00:13:325 (x) - Add a note here [?] I don't like how it sounds :/
00:15:927 (5) - Move this to 00:15:774, and then add a note at 00:16:080 [?] Symmetryyyy +_+!
00:33:835 (1,2) - Remove new combo [?]Okay :3
00:35:366 (1,1,1) - ^ [!] D:! How come this is like that? Fixed o_O
00:43:631 (1,2) - ^ [?] Fixed.
00:45:162 (1,1,2) - ^ [?] Done too.
01:05:978 (1) - ^ [!] Fixed.
01:16:386 (1) - ^ [!] Fixed.
01:18:835 (1,2) - ^ [!] Fiiiixed :3
01:33:835 (1) - ^ [?] It would make a too long combo.
01:51:284 (1) - ^ [?] Nope oxo

Thank you Glasslake~ *-* *Kudosu*

Is beuchichan.png and storyboardby.png meant to not have smooth edges? Maybe you can feather the edges?
Edit: Also the rest of the text images...

Easy
00:36:590 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:31:693 (1)'s location
00:46:386 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:41:488 (1) 's location
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:25:570 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:20:672 (1)'s location
01:35:366 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:30:468 (1)'s location

Normal
00:31:080 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move right by one grid.
00:40:876 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move left by one grid
01:51:590 (1) - Remove new combo?

Collab
01:49:448 (1) - Make beuchichan.png strobe once more here?

Collab:
Genera-
I think the text could use a bit more work, kinda rough edges. Make them smoother? D:
Fix preview timing, should be 31080 like the others.

This diff is fine, but I think your guest can do a better job on the hitsounds Beuchi xD More so towards the beginning, gets better at the end!

Normal:
00:12:101 (3,4,5) - Space these further apart? The current spacing kinda makes it feel to click sooner.
00:14:550 (3,4,5) - ^
00:32:305 (3) - Move this back 1/4 (blue tick)?
00:34:754 (1) - ^
00:42:101 (3) - Back 1/4 again
00:44:550 (1) - ^
01:21:284 (3) - ^ then add a note 01:22:509 (4) - ?
01:23:733 (3) - ^

Or you can do the previous two how you have here... 01:29:856 (1) -

Easy:
Fine

Good luck ^^

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Sorry, no Kiai

HOLY F*****G S***!!!!!!
Es to prela no otela!
BEST SENTENCE EVAHHH!!!!!! *jump and crazy laugh*

OH! Ahem, since your diff is finish, I want recheck it

[General]
1) Your mp3 is a bit low, maybe try louder bit?

[Easy]
00:21:284 (1) - Ugly slider mommy.....
00:23:733 (2) - ^
00:26:182 (1) - Make it curve, I think it would be perfect if this make curve and symetric
00:28:631 (2) - ^
00:32:305 (3) - I think it's not bad if looks like this, maybe try make curve?
00:34:753 (3) - ^
00:41:488 (1) - Do not place the object near spinner in timing, since this easy diff. Because it's slow, I think it's ok, maybe?

[Normal]
PLEASE check this diff, are you follow rhythm of vocal? There's some part are following and the other part are following vocal
00:12:101 (3) - Maybe try make it curve?
00:14:550 (3) - ^
01:01:386 (4) - This slider is waaaaaay too ugly, make it curve
01:03:835 (4) - ^

Mommy~ (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

NoHItter wrote:

Is beuchichan.png and storyboardby.png meant to not have smooth edges? Maybe you can feather the edges?Fixed :3

Easy
00:36:590 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:31:693 (1)'s location I like it there =x
00:46:386 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 00:41:488 (1) 's location ^
01:09:652 (1) - Remove new combo? Done :3
01:25:570 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:20:672 (1)'s location Same as before.
01:35:366 (1) - I suggest overlapping this with 01:30:468 (1)'s location ^

Normal
00:31:080 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move right by one grid. Fixed :3
00:40:876 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Move left by one grid Fixed too.
01:51:590 (1) - Remove new combo? Nah... oxo

Collab
01:49:448 (1) - Make beuchichan.png strobe once more here? Done :3

Thank you NoHItter~ *Kudosu*

yeahyeahyeahhh wrote:

Collab:
I think the text could use a bit more work, kinda rough edges. Make them smoother? D: Already done
Fix preview timing, should be 31080 like the others. Fixed :3

This diff is fine, but I think your guest can do a better job on the hitsounds Beuchi xD More so towards the beginning, gets better at the end! Hahahaha, okay

Normal:
00:12:101 (3,4,5) - Space these further apart? The current spacing kinda makes it feel to click sooner. It has Distance Snap on... I'll leave it for now =x
00:14:550 (3,4,5) - ^ Same.
00:32:305 (3) - Move this back 1/4 (blue tick)? Nope...
00:34:754 (1) - ^ Same.
00:42:101 (3) - Back 1/4 again Nope.
00:44:550 (1) - ^ Same.
01:21:284 (3) - ^ then add a note 01:22:509 (4) - ? No~
01:23:733 (3) - ^ Same xD

Thank you yyy <3~ *Kudosu*

Leorda wrote:

HOLY F*****G S***!!!!!! BEST SENTENCE EVAHHH!!!!!! *jump and crazy laugh* o_o;

[General]
1) Your mp3 is a bit low, maybe try louder bit? I'll think about this, I don't really think it's that low o.o

[Easy]
00:21:284 (1) - Ugly slider mommy..... >: I don't think is ugly...
00:23:733 (2) - ^ Same...
00:26:182 (1) - Make it curve, I think it would be perfect if this make curve and symetric It's curved...
00:28:631 (2) - ^ Same.
00:32:305 (3) - I think it's not bad if looks like this, maybe try make curve? It's curved D: it just has a corner.
00:34:753 (3) - ^ Same.
00:41:488 (1) - Do not place the object near spinner in timing, since this easy diff. Because it's slow, I think it's ok, maybe? Yeah, also it's near of the centre of the spin so I don't think it would be a problem =x

[Normal]
00:12:101 (3) - Maybe try make it curve? ;_;... It's curved again
00:14:550 (3) - ^ Same :/
01:01:386 (4) - This slider is waaaaaay too ugly, make it curve ;w; I like it...
01:03:835 (4) - ^ Same xD

Mommy~ (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ (ﾉﾟωﾟ)ﾉ

Thanks for checking it again Leorda =X

[Overall]
Change your offset to 1720ms and resnap notes.
Fix all your timing points that are off. They'll be really easy to discover.
Notes seem too loud as well.

[Easy]
Timing point 69,499 -> 69,679. Unsnapped/off.

[Normal]
Timing point 20,519 -> 20,699. Unsnapped/off.
Timing point 60,468 -> 60,495. Unsnapped.
Timing point 69,499 -> 69,526. Unsnapped.
01:33:862: Make this slider end @ 01:34:781 - sounds waaay better.

[Collab]
Timing point 20,549 -> 20,546. Unsnapped.
Timing point 69,529 -> 69,526. Unsnapped.
01:02:036: Missing note. Place another one here.
01:44:117: Annoying jump that could be real pain in the ass for us CtB players.
02:24:373: Missing *whistle* note. Place another one here.
02:28:964: Remove *new combo*.


Star.

BagnoGamer wrote:

[Overall]
Change your offset to 1720ms and resnap notes. Okay~
Fix all your timing points that are off. They'll be really easy to discover. Done :3
Notes seem too loud as well. Okay, decreased hitsound volume :3

[Easy]
Timing point 69,499 -> 69,679. Unsnapped/off. As fas as I know, Timing Sections shouldn't be ON the notes because if the player hits the note earlier it will have the wrong sound, so I won't change this one.

[Normal]
Timing point 20,519 -> 20,699. Unsnapped/off. Same as above.
Timing point 60,468 -> 60,495. Unsnapped. Same.
Timing point 69,499 -> 69,526. Unsnapped. Changed.
01:33:862: Make this slider end @ 01:34:781 - sounds waaay better. Okay~

[Collab]
Timing point 20,549 -> 20,546. Unsnapped. Changed.
Timing point 69,529 -> 69,526. Unsnapped. Same thing as I said before.
01:02:036: Missing note. Place another one here. Huh? There's already a note there ._.
01:44:117: Annoying jump that could be real pain in the ass for us CtB players. Come on, it isn't even a dash note... I've seen it on Auto e.e
02:24:373: Missing *whistle* note. Place another one here. It will make an ugly jump... No :/
02:28:964: Remove *new combo*. It's a jump, so no.

Thanks Bagno~ *Kudosu*

[Easy]
Really well-done, though it feels a little heavy on the spinners.

[Normal]
Played very well. I like.

[Collab]
While this difficulty was kicking my butt, I noticed that the sectionfail sound is really loud compared to the song itself. Perhaps lower the gain a little bit? The sectionpass doesn't stick out as bad.
00:36:005 Add a soft finish here?
01:04:475 [3] Make this slider symmetrical with [1]?

Star~

Garven wrote:

[Easy]
Really well-done, though it feels a little heavy on the spinners. Uhhh I don't really know what do you want to mean with "heavy", maybe hard? @w@

[Collab]
While this difficulty was kicking my butt, I noticed that the sectionfail sound is really loud compared to the song itself. Perhaps lower the gain a little bit? The sectionpass doesn't stick out as bad. Hmm... I didn't felt it that loud o.O
00:36:005 Add a soft finish here? Thank you <3
01:04:475 [3] Make this slider symmetrical with [1]? Done :3

Thanks Garven~ *Kudosu*

Starred *_*

Beuchi-chan wrote:

[Easy]
Really well-done, though it feels a little heavy on the spinners. Uhhh I don't really know what do you want to mean with "heavy", maybe hard? @w@

Ah, sorry.

What I meant was that it felt (to me) that there were a lot of spinners for the length of the difficulty. Maybe try to map through the first one? The second and fourth ones definitely feel right, and the third one seems fine if you only have to do it once. I suppose it's that there is a lot of copy/paste going on in this map, and although it plays just fine, giving at least a taste of some variety is nice. Either way, this is all more of a personal preference/suggestion, so it's not that important.

I hope this clears things up a bit.

[General]
No problems here, I guess. The storyboard is real nice!

[Easy]
No obvious mistakes, really :X

[Normal]
Some overlaps, but decided not to force them on you since you like them. xD

[Collab]
No problems.


[Conclusion]
This is really nice, Beuchi. Starred.



~Nazo

Okay, all is perfect for me.
Pubbled!

Offset with new mp3: 1 732

New mp3 and full submit

SteRRuM wrote:

Offset with new mp3: 1 732

New mp3 and full submit

I love you <3 All fixed!!!

ヾ(´￢｀)ﾉ

revived

[Easy]
00:37:242 (1) - Maybe start it at: 00:38:772
00:47:038 (1) - I think it sounds better starting at: 00:48:568
01:05:405 (1) - I think it would be better split into more notes.
01:26:221 (1) - Start at: 01:27:752 ?
01:36:017 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:37:548 and ending at: 01:38:772 and then add a note at: 01:39:691


[Normal]
00:16:425 (1) - I think this spinner is better off as notes instead.
00:36:936 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 00:38:772 ending at 00:40:915 (However if it were me i think it should be ending at the blue tick before, but then there's just 1/4 before next note, so idk XD)
00:46:731 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 00:48:568 ending at 00:50:711
01:26:221 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:27:752 ending at 01:29:589
01:36:017 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:37:548 ending at 01:38:772
01:56:834 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:57:140 ending at same spot.
Edit: Didnt find any problems on the new things you added.

[Collab.]
01:05:393 (1) - I think this would sound better with notes instead of a spinner.
01:29:117 (1) - +2000 spinner whyyyyy ;_; also i think a slider would fit better.
02:16:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Move theese a few grids to the right so that the 02:17:944 (3) is centered? if this screws up the map, you can just ignore

Nice map ^^ dont kudosu till i mod your finished easy tho, i'll give star when it's finished
Edit: +Star

Sakura301 wrote:

[Easy]
00:37:242 (1) - Maybe start it at: 00:38:772 [color=#BF0000]Done :3[/color]
00:47:038 (1) - I think it sounds better starting at: 00:48:568 Done~
01:05:405 (1) - I think it would be better split into more notes. I like it as it is =x
01:26:221 (1) - Start at: 01:27:752 ? Done ;3
01:36:017 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:37:548 and ending at: 01:38:772 and then add a note at: 01:39:691 Sure o:

[Normal]
00:16:425 (1) - I think this spinner is better off as notes instead. Removed the spinner.
00:36:936 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 00:38:772 ending at 00:40:915 (However if it were me i think it should be ending at the blue tick before, but then there's just 1/4 before next note, so idk XD) I just deleted the note after it.
00:46:731 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 00:48:568 ending at 00:50:711 Same.
01:26:221 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:27:752 ending at 01:29:589 Same~
01:36:017 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:37:548 ending at 01:38:772 I think I'm going to leave this as it is...
01:56:834 (1) - Sounds better starting at: 01:57:140 ending at same spot.Leaving this as well (Lol, you just pointed out spinners, I guess that's a good sign... xD)
Edit: Didnt find any problems on the new things you added.

[Collab.]
01:05:393 (1) - I think this would sound better with notes instead of a spinner. Maybe yes, but I think sesito followed the melody here, I'll ask him though xP
01:29:117 (1) - +2000 spinner whyyyyy ;_; also i think a slider would fit better. I knoooooooow I didn't want to kill it because it wasn't my part... But now that you said it I will do it +w+~
02:16:107 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - Move theese a few grids to the right so that the 02:17:944 (3) is centered? if this screws up the map, you can just ignore. Sure o: It looks nice after doing it :3

Thaaaank you Sakura~ <3 *kudosu*

Easy:

If it were me, i would just delete 00:32:038 (2) - 00:34:487 (2) - 02:19:793 (2) - 02:22:242 (2), etc etc etc, im sure you know what i mean by now... all of them, throughtout the whole map
01:00:507 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part was horribly confusing to me... i blame it to the lower distance spacing x:

Normal:

Sighs... this map was so confusing... im blaming it on the 1/4th objects... You dont have to do anything, its just a opinion...
00:36:629 (4) - Not perfectly stacked, it is kinda noticeable if you look at the aproach circles

Collab:

Consider using OD of 7, 6 is too slow, but 8 is too much for me >_>
Check out the snapping issues

ErufenRito wrote:

Easy:

If it were me, i would just delete 00:32:038 (2) - 00:34:487 (2) - 02:19:793 (2) - 02:22:242 (2), etc etc etc, im sure you know what i mean by now... all of them, throughtout the whole map Sorry but I don't know what you mean with this... I won't delete them, anyways.
01:00:507 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - This part was horribly confusing to me... i blame it to the lower distance spacing x: Changed.

Normal:

Sighs... this map was so confusing... im blaming it on the 1/4th objects... You dont have to do anything, its just a opinion...
00:36:629 (4) - Not perfectly stacked, it is kinda noticeable if you look at the aproach circles Fixed.

Collab:

Consider using OD of 7, 6 is too slow, but 8 is too much for me >_> Decreased to OD7
Check out the snapping issues Resnapped all the notes.

Thank you~ <3 *kudosu*

HiHi! O debería decir "HolaHola"?

->Easy
-Con lo bien mappeada que esta esta dificultad, me pude centrar en los hitsounds. Eso si, la mayoría son sugerencias pero igual miralos ^^"
-00:23:772 (2) Agregale un clap al final y quítale el del inicio.
-00:28:670 (2) Justo a este repeat le falta un whistle. Aunque la verdad no me gusta mucho como suena el whistle en estos sliders.
-01:02:344 (4) Remueve el whistle
-01:04:793 (4) ^
-01:40:915 (1) Yo quitaría el clap del inicio y el final, y dejaría solo el del repeat.
-01:43:364 (2) ^
-01:45:201 (3) Agrega un clap.
-01:46:425 (1) Agrega un clap, pero solo al inicio.
-01:49:487 (1) No me agrada como suenan los whistles al final del slider =/, por que no los remueves y agregas un clap en 01:50:099 y en 01:51:323 ?
-01:51:936 (2) ^. Yo agregaría los claps en 01:52:548 y en 01:53:772.
-01:54:997 (2) Agregale un clap?
-01:56:221 (4) ^?
La amé o_o"!


-> Normal
-00:13:517 (5) Tal vez si lo mueves 1/4 atras a la linea blanca? Me costó darle allí donde esta la primera vez...
-00:15:966 (5) ^
-00:16:425 (1) remueve el whistle?
-00:37:854 (3) Agregale un clap?
-00:47:650 (3) ^?
-01:10:915 (3) ^?
-01:13:364 (3) ^?
-01:21:936 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat)
-01:24:385 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat)
-01:26:834 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat)
-01:31:732 (3) ^?
-01:32:956 (5) ^? (solo en este repeat)
-01:35:099 (2) Quitale el whistle
-01:35:405 (3) Quitale el whistle y agregale un clap
-02:17:038 (2) ^
-02:18:262 (4) ^ (solo al inicio)
-02:26:834 (2) ^
-02:28:058 (4) ^ (solo al inicio)
-02:29:283 (2) Agregale un clap
-02:31:732 (3) ^
La amé también OwO!!

-Collab
Increible, tu parte y la de astom son mis favoritas XD! Solo algunas cosillas.
-soyah- 00:26:221 (1) remueve el clap
-zaiku- 00:34:180 (1,5) Haz que tanto (1) como (5) tengan el mismo hitsound, ya sea clap o whistle, tu desición.
-zaiku- 00:37:701 (5) remueve el whistle
-zaiku- 00:37:548 (4,5) remueve el whistle del (5) y agregalo al (4)
-zaiku- 00:42:752 (3) yo le agregaría un clap al final
-zaiku- 00:43:058 (5) remueve el clap
-sesito71- 01:02:650 (7) =/ no puede tener otra forma el slider?
-astom- 01:23:466 (s) este spinner esta algo random allí XD!
-Neru_marío-02:10:150 (3) Quítale el clap (solo al final)
-Neru_marío-02:10:609 (5) ^ (solo al final)
-Neru_marío- 02:11:221 (7) agregale un clap.


EDIT:Agrega "spanish" en los tags, por que si buscan por spanish solo no lo van a encontrar (creo <_<>_>). lo que si sale es #spanish.

Creo que me centré demasiado en los hitsounds xD! Es que me gustó demasiado el mapa, así que le puse empeño ^^!

Suerte!

Star!

Krisom wrote:

->Easy
-Con lo bien mappeada que esta esta dificultad, me pude centrar en los hitsounds. Eso si, la mayoría son sugerencias pero igual miralos ^^"
-00:23:772 (2) Agregale un clap al final y quítale el del inicio. Ok~
-00:28:670 (2) Justo a este repeat le falta un whistle. Aunque la verdad no me gusta mucho como suena el whistle en estos sliders. Le puse el whistle que faltaba o:
-01:02:344 (4) Remueve el whistle ;~; Queda muy vacio sin hitsounds... Y no me gusta como quedan las claps xD
-01:04:793 (4) ^ Igual.
-01:40:915 (1) Yo quitaría el clap del inicio y el final, y dejaría solo el del repeat. Ok :3
-01:43:364 (2) ^ ^
-01:45:201 (3) Agrega un clap. Ok~
-01:46:425 (1) Agrega un clap, pero solo al inicio. Tambien xD
-01:49:487 (1) No me agrada como suenan los whistles al final del slider =/, por que no los remueves y agregas un clap en 01:50:099 y en -01:51:323 ? A mi me gustan ahi ;x;
-01:51:936 (2) ^. Yo agregaría los claps en 01:52:548 y en 01:53:772. Lo mismo xD
-01:54:997 (2) Agregale un clap? Ok~
-01:56:221 (4) ^? ^

-> Normal
-00:13:517 (5) Tal vez si lo mueves 1/4 atras a la linea blanca? Me costó darle allí donde esta la primera vez... Hmmm... Esto va siguiendo la musica y no las voces, aunque varias personas me han dicho de cambiarlo asi que... ok xD.
-00:15:966 (5) ^ Lo mismo o;
-00:16:425 (1) remueve el whistle? No D:
-00:37:854 (3) Agregale un clap? Ok~
-00:47:650 (3) ^? ^
-01:10:915 (3) ^? ^
-01:13:364 (3) ^? ^
-01:21:936 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat) Hmmm no me gusta como suena :/
-01:24:385 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat) ^
-01:26:834 (3) ^? (solo en este repeat) ^
-01:31:732 (3) ^? ^
-01:32:956 (5) ^? (solo en este repeat) ^
-01:35:099 (2) Quitale el whistle Ok~
-01:35:405 (3) Quitale el whistle y agregale un clap No D:
-02:17:038 (2) ^ ^
-02:18:262 (4) ^ (solo al inicio) ^
-02:26:834 (2) ^ ^
-02:28:058 (4) ^ (solo al inicio) ^
-02:29:283 (2) Agregale un clap Ok~
-02:31:732 (3) ^ ^

-Collab
-soyah- 00:26:221 (1) remueve el clap Listo~
-zaiku- 00:34:180 (1,5) Haz que tanto (1) como (5) tengan el mismo hitsound, ya sea clap o whistle, tu desición. Whistle! :3
-zaiku- 00:37:701 (5) remueve el whistle Ok~
-zaiku- 00:37:548 (4,5) remueve el whistle del (5) y agregalo al (4) ^
-zaiku- 00:42:752 (3) yo le agregaría un clap al final Añadido xD
-zaiku- 00:43:058 (5) remueve el clap No D:
-sesito71- 01:02:650 (7) =/ no puede tener otra forma el slider? Arregle un pelin uno de los puntos, tampoco me gustaba demasiado xwx;
-astom- 01:23:466 (s) este spinner esta algo random allí XD! No lo veo tan tan random... o.o;
-Neru_marío-02:10:150 (3) Quítale el clap (solo al final) Listo~
-Neru_marío-02:10:609 (5) ^ (solo al final) ^
-Neru_marío- 02:11:221 (7) agregale un clap. ^

EDIT:Agrega "spanish" en los tags, por que si buscan por spanish solo no lo van a encontrar (creo <_<>_>). lo que si sale es #spanish. Bescando solo por spanish tambien aparece, asi que lo dejare como esta o3o

Graciaaas *-* Me alegro de que te haya gustado tanto el map xD *kudosu*

Hihi Beuchi~
Just saw your Mod Request in #ModReqs
So I'm here...but I'm very noob in modding so I may not able to give useful advices for this great map...
But I'm just trying to do my best.
Hope some of them will be useful to you. XD

General:

Easy:
Normal:

Cokkab:

Star!!
Hope to see this get ranked. It's old enough!

wanhyrzh wrote:

General:
1. The SB is great! But as it keep active in the whole map, I think it will be a little dazzling. I suggest you just keep SB active before the map starts, and in the break times, and times when the rhythm goes higher. Well, the storyboard actually goes "down" when the music goes softer so I guess it's okay? Tha song is all happy and fast so... oxo
2. Ah why no source? I don't know any other Source for this except its alvum, but albums can't be on Source, you know xP~

Easy:
00:38:772(1) shorten this spinner to 00:40:303 and add note at 00:40:915? Okay o:
01:02:334(4, 5, 1) maybe a little hard to the beginners, maybe stack them in one place? Well, the whole map is OMGSOEASY, and they aren't so spaced out so I guess it's okay? xP
01:08:449(x) add a note? Sure ;o
01:27:752(1) same as 00:38:772(1)? Same as before xP
02:24:385(x) maybe add a note to keep the pace? I think I'll leave it as it is...

Normal:
00:12:140(3) shorten this slider to 00:12:446(red tick) and maybe add a note at 00:12:752(white tick)? Uhh... well I was following the background guitar there =x
00:14:589(3) ^ ^
00:32:344(3) shorten this slider to 00:32:650(red tick) and maybe add a note at 00:32:803(blue tick)? No streams pleaseeee ;x;
00:34:793(1) ^ ^
00:42:140(3) ^ ^
00:44:589(1) ^ ^
02:10:303(3) ^ ^
02:12:752(3) ^ ^
00:38:772(1) same as Easy? Okay~
01:01:425(4) It's shape is a little strange to me O.O ;x;
01:03:874(4) ^ ;X;!
01:15:201(x) add a note? It would be too much...
01:17:650(x) ^ ^
02:21:017(x) ^ ^
02:23:466(x) ^ ^

Cokkab: lol cokkab xP
This diff is great! But...OMG HP DROP RATE 8! I suggest to reduce it by 1 or 2 Reduced to 7 :3
00:13:976(x) add a note? Okay o:
01:01:272(x) ^ Nah... I like it like that.
01:02:191(x) ^ ^
01:10:150(x) ^ This section follows the drums, not the lyrics xP
01:10:762(x) ^ ^
01:11:374(x) ^ ^

Hope to see this get ranked. It's old enough!

Thank you!! And wow, I never noticed this map has almost 6 months old xP *kudosu*

The current offset is way early. Please add +13-15~ to the offset value.

[Collab]

00:14:129 (1) - Following the main beat, and then suddenly go with the lyrics. Please place it at the previous white tick (1/4 back).
00:19:027 (1) - ^
01:38:772 (6) - Nazi, but I couldn't look how is this note placed - align it.

fartownik wrote:

The current offset is way early. Please add +13-15~ to the offset value. Done, thanks~

[Collab]

00:14:129 (1) - Following the main beat, and then suddenly go with the lyrics. Please place it at the previous white tick (1/4 back). Moved.
00:19:027 (1) - ^ Done, I added another note, I think it fits better =x
01:38:772 (6) - Nazi, but I couldn't look how is this note placed - align it. Fixed, I guess.

Thanks <3 *kudosu*

It's been stated in #modHelp.

That, and this is a collab. A SPANISH COLLAB. The song is even in my fad list.

[General]
Louder hitsounds.

[Easy]
01:02:35 (4,5,1) - Argh, replace that with a slider or something.
01:10:31 (1,1) - That neater?

There's a real difference in the mapping of the second half compared to the first half.

[Normal]
01:02:97 (5,1) - That jump stumped me. I didn't expect that in a Normal.

[Collab]
01:03:58 (1,2,3) - Center?
01:12:46 (7) - Whistle supposed to be on 6 instead?
01:14:90 (9) - I believe the whistle is supposed to be on 8. If you're following the trumpet that is.

What do you think of that mod?

MarioBros777 wrote:

[General]
Louder hitsounds. Increased 2 ticks :3

[Easy]
01:02:35 (4,5,1) - Argh, replace that with a slider or something. Okay ;w;
01:10:31 (1,1) - That neater?

There's a real difference in the mapping of the second half compared to the first half. Hmm... Maybe because I mapped the second half around... 2 weeks ago? xD'

[Normal]
01:02:97 (5,1) - That jump stumped me. I didn't expect that in a Normal. Fixed o;

[Collab]
01:03:58 (1,2,3) - Center? Done.
01:12:46 (7) - Whistle supposed to be on 6 instead? That makes sense, changed ^^
01:14:90 (9) - I believe the whistle is supposed to be on 8. If you're following the trumpet that is. Same~

What do you think of that mod?

Well, tbh, I thought the post was longer xP I guess that's good. Thank you!! ^^ *kudosu*

Easy
Nothing

Normal
00:40:929 (1) - Finish

Collab
Great!

Sorry for the bad mod but it's because this is a great map. Star!

Ahhh ahhh... Sorry but I won't add it ;___;...

Thanks for the star though! >w<

Great Map

Skin for u , Feel free to reject it

Download: Gonzski- La Quinta Estacion - Tu Peor Error.rar

=O

I like it!! Thank you very much!! I'll add it, though, I won't add the comboburst, I like pippi xP

No encontré ningún error en ninguna dificultad.
El storyboard esta muy bueno :3
Me gusta el diseño del easy y normal. el collab es muy entretenido

Star!

Ohh, lo veo perfecta chica, me encanta <3 te doy una estrellita

f(o3o)

Great map.

Nice Song.

Star. ~

Add an approachcircle and a spinner-approachcircle.
Use offset 1,760.

...;_;

Gens wrote:

Add an approachcircle and a spinner-approachcircle. Added the spinner circle. I like the default approach circle so I forced the default skin xD
Use offset 1,760. *-* Done

<3 *kudosu*

<3

Looks pretty sound. I've just got a few suggestions, though, take them as just that. :3

Easy:

1. 01:10:331 (1) - Remove the Claps. Add a Finish to the first point.
2. 01:12:168 (2) - Add a Clap.
3. 01:12:780 (1) - Remove the Claps.
4. 01:14:617 (2) - Add a Clap.
5. 01:49:515 (3) - Add a New Combo mark.

Normal:

1. 00:18:902 (4) - Add a New Combo mark.
2. 00:19:515 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark.
3. If you take the above suggestions: 00:19:208 (5) - Respace this, otherwise it'd look more awkward than it kinda already does.
4. 00:33:902 (5,6) and all other parts exactly like this - I feel like the first whistle on in this pattern is unnecessary. Could just be me.
5. 01:12:780 (1) - Remove the Finish, it feels really out of place in the middle of a phrase like this.
6. 01:49:821 (3) - I feel like a New Combo mark should be here, since it switches over to a different feel after 2.
7. If you take the above suggestion, 01:51:045 (1) - New Combo mark.
8. 02:09:719 (1) - Add a Whistle. It feels weird without one here.
9. 02:12:168 (1) - ^

Collab:

1. 00:16:453 (1,2,3) - Straighten this pattern out. It looks really sloppy, especially because the x-sliders aren't symmetrical. 3 isn't perfectly straight, either, which adds to this looking even messier.
2. 00:43:086 (4) - Remove the Clap. Three Claps in a row does not sound too good, and the delay used earlier (Clap-Normal-Clap) sounded really good. Why not remain consistent here?
3. 00:50:127 (4) - A VERY nitpicky thing, but any reason why this has 3 endpoints when it could easily be the same thing without the extra? ;P Sorry, that just kinda irked me when looking in the editor.
4. 01:23:188 (9) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle. This second Clap sounds really awkward.
5. 01:32:984 (11) - ^

Like I mentioned, these are all very nitpicky things, but they'll help your map feel more polished, IMO.

Mogsworth wrote:

Looks pretty sound. I've just got a few suggestions, though, take them as just that. :3

Easy:

1. 01:10:331 (1) - Remove the Claps. Add a Finish to the first point. Done~
2. 01:12:168 (2) - Add a Clap. Done~
3. 01:12:780 (1) - Remove the Claps. Done~
4. 01:14:617 (2) - Add a Clap. Done~
5. 01:49:515 (3) - Add a New Combo mark.Done~

Normal:

1. 00:18:902 (4) - Add a New Combo mark. I'll leave as it is now~
2. 00:19:515 (1) - Remove the New Combo mark. Same with this one~
3. If you take the above suggestions: 00:19:208 (5) - Respace this, otherwise it'd look more awkward than it kinda already does. I just respaced it anyways, also deleted the new combo there~
4. 00:33:902 (5,6) and all other parts exactly like this - I feel like the first whistle on in this pattern is unnecessary. Could just be me. Well, I was following the trumpets, but maybe it feels like too much whistling so I'll do it :3
5. 01:12:780 (1) - Remove the Finish, it feels really out of place in the middle of a phrase like this. Oops, that wasn't intended o_O Thanks for pointing it~
6. 01:49:821 (3) - I feel like a New Combo mark should be here, since it switches over to a different feel after 2. Done~
7. If you take the above suggestion, 01:51:045 (1) - New Combo mark. I guess you mean to delete the New Combo so I did it.
8. 02:09:719 (1) - Add a Whistle. It feels weird without one here. Deleted the clap and added the whistle.
9. 02:12:168 (1) - ^ Same here~

Collab:

1. 00:16:453 (1,2,3) - Straighten this pattern out. It looks really sloppy, especially because the x-sliders aren't symmetrical. 3 isn't perfectly straight, either, which adds to this looking even messier. I tried to make the X sliders symmetrical but I just make the pattern even more confusing because (2) is totally overlaped so I just changed the pattern. Tell me if there's something wrong with it when you recheck, please :3
2. 00:43:086 (4) - Remove the Clap. Three Claps in a row does not sound too good, and the delay used earlier (Clap-Normal-Clap) sounded really good. Why not remain consistent here? Right. Deleted the clap.
3. 00:50:127 (4) - A VERY nitpicky thing, but any reason why this has 3 endpoints when it could easily be the same thing without the extra? ;P Sorry, that just kinda irked me when looking in the editor. xDD Done.
4. 01:23:188 (9) - Replace the Clap with a Whistle. This second Clap sounds really awkward. Done~
5. 01:32:984 (11) - ^ Same here~

Like I mentioned, these are all very nitpicky things, but they'll help your map feel more polished, IMO.

Thank youuuu~ *kudosu*

One remaining problem addressed in IRC and fixed, rebubbled!

I hope no rebubble again


This is hard song than i think . low bpm with stream >< ( i'm bad at stream also)

cursortrail is fit with BG .it's pretty.

Goodluck ! Rank soon

Ranked.

Felicitaciones por el rank

Como q tomo arto time para q la rankearan xd