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Sound Holic - Love-Colored Dream

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Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, December 20, 2009 at 5:55:53 PM

Artist: Sound Holic
Title: Love-Colored Dream
Source: Tokoshie
Tags: Touhou Marisa roxkyuubiforever
BPM: 128
Filesize: 14550kb
Play Time: 03:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Dream (5 stars, 584 notes)
  2. Easy (2.68 stars, 120 notes)
  3. Hard (4.84 stars, 473 notes)
  4. Normal (4.1 stars, 324 notes)
Download: Sound Holic - Love-Colored Dream
Download: Sound Holic - Love-Colored Dream (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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~*happy holidays osu*~


[Dream]
beginning - 01:48:038 : roxkyuubiforever
01:48:038 - ending : Yes
Last edited by Yes_old , edited 43 times in total.
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
ahhhhh

Cute map Cute BG Cute pic Cute song ~~~~~~~~~ !!!!
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
General / All Diff's.
  1. Ofsset 570
  2. Slider ball is lol xD
Hard.
  1. 00:37:083 (8) - Off screen.
  2. (nazi) 02:36:042 (5,6) - Move both up by one grid level (grid level 3 / most precise)
  3. 02:58:069 (7) - New combo (?)
Normal.
  1. 00:28:068 (1,1) - It's a bit too hard for a Normal difficulty to have a spinner and 1/2 after it a note. Please shorten the spinner.
  2. 00:43:045 (6) - Fix this, now we have no idea whether to go Left or Right on the slider. (Fix by making the slider diffrent or placing in a SB element which will tell us which way the slider goes.)
  3. 01:29:062 (4) - Off screen.
Easy.
  1. 00:28:068 (1,1) - Same as at Normal. ^
  2. (nazi) 01:09:093 (3) - Move one grid level up.
Starred~
Shinxyn
osu! Alumni
1,179 posts
Joined June 2008
Shinxyn
Cute skin
Whistle stands out quite a bit in this song, so please remove some~ and love the custom clap
I got offset +20~ (582)??? O_o -stares at Gladi's post- -loses confidence-

Easy-
00:27:04 (1,2,3) - this sounds weird cuz you did 00:19:54 (1)~ (both parts sound the same in the song, but you mapped it differently)

Normal- overall +1? actually, it doesn't matter that much here
00:43:47 (6) - make it clear which way the slider is going (the end and start clearly overlapping), unrankable
01:20:73 (1,2) - I'd kinda prefer if this wasn't stacked... oh well (and maybe replace 1's whistle with clap...?)
The whistles really stand out for this diff... maybe lower soft volume.. but then that would ruin the clap's volume... D:
Hmmm, please map the rest of Normal to the same length as Hard? I don't see the point of having two shorter diffs, unless you want to make Hard shorter...

Hard- the jumps don't really match the song well, but they're fine >:
Nazi~
SPOILER
00:38:78 (3) - right 2 ticks!
00:39:72 (3) - mirror of ^, left 2 ticks!
00:47:22 (3) - right 2 ticks for flip of (1)
00:50:73 (2) - right a tick for flip of (1)
01:32:45 (5) - remove clap please and add whistle like you did for 02:50:26 (8)
01:35:73 (2) - if you were following the clap per second white note pace- this should be clap
02:36:44 (5,6) - up a tick~? (then align the note after...?)
02:49:56 (4) - new combo like 01:31:75 (1)?
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
thank you!!
fixed & i made [normal] longer!
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Howdy! Yes-kun!

[General]
Source?

[Easy]
1)Because Star Rating is 2.68, change difficulty name from Easy to Normal
00:36:663 (1) - Move 1 grid left
00:37:601 (3) - Make parallel
00:42:523 (2) - Move backward to red tick
01:41:820 (5) - Move 1 grid down
01:45:101 (2,3) - Move 1 grid up
01:46:507 (1) - Move backward to red tick and extend to 01:48:382

[Normal]
1)Because Star Rating is 4.20, change difficulty name from Normal to Hard
01:21:429 (1) - Move 2 grid down

[Insane]
1)Because Star Rating is 4.92, change difficulty name from Hard to Insane
00:43:226 (2) - Move 1 grid up
00:43:460 (3) - Move 2 grid up
00:44:866 (8) - Move 1 grid down

Nice map!
STAR
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
I see no problems with the gameplay, awesome :]
Just a few thing about the skin:
  1. Hit 300, 100 and 50 would be better with numbers on the pic. Instead of just a star for hit 300, maybe a star with a "300" or "perfect" tiped on the front.
  2. I don't like this spinneraproachcircles cuz my colorblindness makes it impossible to find >_< Something with more constrast would be better (I think)
I'm sending the WIP of my diff. Please, test and see if it's good until now ;__; ( you don't have to upload it if you don't want to)
Sound Holic - Love-Colored Dream (Yes) [Rox].osu

EDIT: My part is done! \o/
Download: Sound Holic - Love-Colored Dream (Yes) [Collab].osu

Star for ultra kawainess~
Last edited by GabrielRKF , edited 2 times in total.
Gabi
2,554 posts
Joined December 2008
Gabi
wow someone is mapping sound holic and it's not me?

my guess would be it's shihori if it's from sound holic. could you please tell me what SH album this is from?
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[General]
- I think sliderb5.png and 6 are useless. These are making weird slide-ball motion. Perfect rolling star made when without 5,6.
- I agree with roxkyuubiforever. about hit score appearance.


[Easy]
Fine


[Normal]
01:18:038 (4) - new combo
03:04:008 (1) - finish


[Hard]
02:51:019 (4) - finish at start of slider
03:04:008 (1) - finish


Funny spinner skin. :lol:
So cute song. star~ ;)
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Easy]

Slider Tick Rate: 0,5
01:06:019 (2) - End this slider here 01:06:898 and add a cricle here 01:07:366

[Normal]

01:31:507 - Add a break

[Hard]

It's ok

Starred~
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Spinner was kinda weird, lol.
Hard has a 320 video offset; the other diffs are 0.

[Easy]

01:30:057 (5) - Place this directly above 3?

Everything else looks fine. Nice skin.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
thankss :)
fixed pretty much everything and added a new difficulty~
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
By AL2e10 mod request !!

[Hard] YO
01:33:382 (1) Remove new combo ??
02:51:195 (1) ^
02:53:538 (1) ^ And new combo to 02:53:773 (2)
02:45:335 (6) wistle ??
03:04:085 (1) finish ??

[Collab] CRAZY
01:18:382 (1) Finish ?
01:21:312 (6) Clap ?
02:21:077 (8 Finish & 9 First) Clap ?
02:45:335 (5 finish ) Wistle ?
03:04:085 (1) finish ?

[Normal,Easy]

I think you can put some Clap on it.
It should be better ^^

[All]
Good map !!
STAR !!
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Skin:

~ I agree with ykcarrot about sliderb5 and silderb6.

~ Hit300, hit100, hit50 etc are confusing, I know these are color coded but without looking at the song folder itself I have no idea what each color means. I think you definitely need to add '300' '100' '50' etc on top of the stars, as it is it's difficult to understand.

~ One last thing I noticed while playing: the slider ball and hit300 are exactly the same color, this can be slightly off putting when hitting 300 all the time, just a thing to note :P

~ Skin is nice overall :D


Normal:

02:35:049 (1) - Some volume please.

Hard:

02:35:049 (1,2,3) - Add a little bit of volume to these notes, silent notes (especially when beats) are a little irritating.

Dream:

00:30:057 (6) - Jump is awkward imo, especially after a closely stacked stream.
01:27:005 (5,6,1) - Spacing is too close.
02:56:035 (1,2,3,4,5) - That's one huge jump, it doesn't really fit the music imo.

Overall, very nice :D

~ Star
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
There's a weird line on the skip button image.

[Normal]
00:43:046 (6) - Overlaps itself strangely? possibly unrankable
01:21:042 (1) - Make exactly halfway between previous two notes?

[Hard]
00:50:049 (1,2,3) - i don't like this one
DJPop
osu! Alumni
3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
Add more hitclaps in every diffs, many notes are lacked of clap sounds.

~Easy~
Fine.

~Normal~
Fine.

~Hard~
01:52:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - not symmetrical

~Dream~
00:19:032 (1) - add hitwhistle, remove hitclap
01:52:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - map in star formation
02:39:094 (4) - new combo
03:03:061 (4) - add hitclap


+Star
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
Trannnn ~~~~
Bass
1,846 posts
Joined January 2009
Bass
Blue = Suggestion, you mustn't fix this
Red = you must fix this



[Easy]
Fine

[Normal]
Fine

[Hard]

[Dream]
Fine!!!

Awesome map ;3!

Star~
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
:3

Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: ...awesome. *autostar*

[Easy]
01:17:067 (1) - may be a bit too soon for an Easy (note comes so fast after spinner)

[Normal]
00:30:080 (1) - may be a bit too soon for an Normal (note comes so fast after spinner)

[Hard]
00:52:083 (8) - a bit evil lol

That's it for now...
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
*sorry for double post* WAIT

01:18:382 -- put a red timing point with the same BPM here, the timing signature resets at this point...
02:36:194 -- here too.
pete2528
412 posts
Joined March 2009
pete2528
:) :) :)
very good i like it XD
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,945 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
S1: 128 / 582
S2: 128 / 78,412
S3: 128 / 156,215

Hurry up and fix this so I can get an otherwise perfect map on the ranking train.
arkiandruski
31 posts
Joined February 2009
arkiandruski
Overall: That spinner, while cute, is hard to tell that it's a spinner.

Easy:

00:32:091 (1) - Consider prepping whenever you have this rhythm. At least do it the first time so players can get it in their ear.
Other than that, looks good.

Normal:

02:27:028 (1) - I'd like another note a 1/2 beat before this one. I know you're following the lyrics, but this feels more natural.

Hard:

00:44:016 (4,5,6) - Maybe have the 1/4 beats a beat later?

That's all I can find rhythm wise. Star
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
okay i thinkk i fixed the timing issues (i hope i understood it fully)

thanks for the mod and stars :)!
Tonoko
507 posts
Joined June 2009
Tonoko
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
thanks Tonoko! :)
added a comboburst so please re-download!
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

The only thing I don't like is the skin. Add 300, 100, and 50 to the hit point. It'll be better. Ask me by PM if you want me to make it for you.
:P

Star since this is a good map.
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
ahhh

in regards to all the comments made about adding 300, 100 etc. to the hit stars,

it's really not that i'm lazy. i have tried adding the numbers; i don't like how it looks nearly as much as without the numbers. maybe it's because i'm picky and minimalist. i just can't make it look nice u_u

if the hitpoints without numbers are unrankable, then i shall add them but otherwise i really would muchhh prefer leaving them the way they are.

thanks (:
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
3,945 posts
Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
I can see no issue with the stars - fairly intuitive in my eyes.

On that note, bubble!
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
yay! thanks Ephemeral! :)
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
xD I am late and late... ;_; Map is nice. Star !
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Christmas present for you, Yes.

Have a rank!
Cyril Scarlet
osu! Alumni
3,877 posts
Joined May 2009
Cyril Scarlet
Congrat ! Yes ~

and Merry Chris mas ~ ^o^/ ~ ♥
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Yes_old
THANKS osuplayer111 and S i R i R u!!! hehe
Merry Christmas everyone :) :) :)
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