xtrem3x wrote:

Via PM (M4M)

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Kantan:

00:05:007 - d lo agrege pero en 1/2 del Beat snap divisor
00:05:781 - k ^
00:12:749 - d no d pero si D
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Futsuu:

Good... :3
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Muzukashii:

Good... :3
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Akemi's Oni:

Good... :3
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Oni:

00:06:168 (23,24,25,26,27) - borra la 24 y 26, la 27 hazla finish si lo encontre

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Inner Oni:

00:06:168 (26,27) - agrega 3 d's entre ese espacio lo encontre pero no puse ddd puse dkk

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Akemi_Homura wrote:

Charlotte wrote:

Akemi's Oni

00:11:103 (48) - delete fixed~
00:55:329 (306) - change d I think It should be a k.. because vocal is same. so changed to kkddk for better play.
01:07:040 - add d fixed~
01:16:516 - add d fixed~
01:17:297 (445,446) - ctrl + G no change~ I think k beat is better now~ :3
01:23:587 (22) - change D fixed~
01:24:263 - add k fixed~

Thank you~

http://puu.sh/9dfe8/57aaa65b9b.osu

Update~~

Lost The Lights wrote:

Yo o/ Mod requested via pm.

d=don
k=kat
D=Big Don
K=Big Kat
r=remove
(?)=suggestion

[General]
Hay un espacio muy grande entre las Onis y la Muzukashii, recomiendo hacer una de las Onis más fácil.
Remueve black bullet, fripSide, tu nombre y ブラック・ブレット de los tags, no son necesarios.

[Kantan]
00:07:329 (11,12,13) - Los pondría como k a los 3, pero si no te gusta, puedes probar k d k. el k d k le quedo mejor
00:10:426 (16) - kno d estaba bien y movería 00:10:813 (17,18,19,20) - a los ticks rojos, van a seguir mejor la música. btw borra este 00:12:361 (21) - esto si le hice
00:59:974 (99) - k, baja el ritmo, pero como antes pusiste un d queda mejor un k. no porque ese beat todavia pertenece al al ritmo anterior y los tres kkk que vienen marcan otro ritmo
01:12:361 (120) - k ^ ^
01:22:426 (137,138,139) - Muevelos un tick atrás, o sea, a los rojos. okis

Buen trabajo con esta diff n.n gracias

[Futsuu]
00:10:813 (25,26,27) - 1 tick más adelante, como en la kantan, pero remueve esta 00:11:974 (28) - ohh Yeah :3
00:34:039 (75,76) - Esto debería ser k d, sigue mucho mejor la música y la vocal. Usa ctrl + g Nop, esta bien asi... talvez seria una buena idea pero tendria que cambiar los del costado porque quedaría muy estático.
01:03:458 (145) - k para consistencia con 00:57:265 (128) -
01:06:555 (154) - ^
01:08:491 (160,161,162,163) - Conviene dejar esto como los demás, o sea, d k d k Se a lo que te refieres pero seria todo muy repetitivo, con eso no te digo que ponga cosas al azar sin ritmo solo para variar, si no variar con ritmo y si le encuentro el ritmo.
01:13:329 (174) - muevela a 01:13:523 - Oki

Tambien un buen trabajo. n.n gracias denuevo

[Muzukashii]
00:20:684 (78) - Borra esa y mueve 00:20:878 (79) - a 00:20:781 - Oki
00:26:007 (105) - No queda muy estético en una muzukashii muchos tripletes, recomiendo que borres esa nota y que 00:25:329 (101) - sea d oki
00:29:297 (120) - ^ Si se que se ve feo muchos triples en una muzu pero este le queda bien
00:36:168 (150) - d No esta mal pero asi esta bien
00:37:523 (157,158,159,160,161,162,163,164,165,166,167,168,169,170,171,172,173) - el patrón es muy largo :s, además tiene el triplete y los dobletes, queda muy difícil para una muzukashii. btw 00:40:232 (173) - para k. el largo lo deje así porque iva bien con la canciónel k si lo cambie
00:40:620 (174,175,176,177,178,179,180,181,182,183,184,185,186,187,188,189) - ^ ya lo parti :c
00:43:716 (190,191,192,193,194,195,196,197,198,199,200,201,202,203,204,205,206,207) - ^ Cada vez más largos lol ya lo parti
01:13:426 (320) - D para consistencia con 01:01:039 (268) - ups se me paso, gracias
01:15:071 (328,329,330,331,332,333,334,335,336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343) - Lo mismo que arriba. ala mitad xD
01:18:555 (346,350) - Te recomiendo borrar estos dos, y 01:18:749 (347,348,349) - k d k Oki
01:21:652 (360) - r Okidoki

Bastante bien, pero tiene patrones bastantes largos que hacen que sea muy difícil para un muzukashii. gracias y ya no tiene dichos patrones :3

[Oni]
00:02:103 (8) - k lo encontré
00:03:265 (13) - ^ achi ta bien :3
00:45:265 (248,249,250,251,252) - ddkkd (?) Oki
00:58:039 (326,327,328,329,330) - kkddk suena mejor Oki
01:13:329 (418) - d y 01:13:523 (419) - k Okidoki
01:21:265 (467,468,469,470,471,472,473,474,475) - d k d k d k d k d suena mejor. comparando entre los dos sonidos en velocidad de 50% el mio suena mejor
01:23:007 (476,477,478) - kdd (?) posteriormente hay una k y el ddd le va mejor

[Akemi's Oni]
Fine for me.

[Inner Oni]
Está bien para mí.

Welp, buen mapa. Hice lo que pude xD.
GL.

• [Kantan]

1. 00:03:071 (5,6) - delete and add k and d at 00:03:265 and 00:04:039 - respectively ? This could follow the rhythm in a way better.
2. 00:04:813 (7) - k ? Identical instrument sounds occur at 00:04:813 (7,8) -
3. 00:12:168 (20) - change to k could be better, as the vocal keeps increasing in pitch from 00:11:007 to 00:12:361 -
4. 00:18:942 (30,31,32) - k k d to follow the vocal better.
5. 00:20:491 (33,34) - swap notes to match the pitch drop ?
6. 00:25:136 (42,43,44,45) - D k k d would fit the music more imo.
7. 00:33:652 (54,55) - swap notes to match the pitch increase ?
8. 00:35:974 (59) - k ? Try it, it fits the vocal well :3
9. 00:37:523 (62) - I think you can add finish here, as this could mark the start of the transition.
10. 00:46:813 (76) - k for the high-pitched vocal ?
11. Maybe you can change like this: (cursor at 00:48:361 (79) - ) 79 is K and 80 is D. This could result in a better emphasis before the kiai time.
12. 01:17:394 (128) - k could make the flow better imo.
13. 01:24:361 (139) - I think D is better, as a dull drum hit occurs there.

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:12:168 (29,30) - k k would be better, as the vocal pitch is quite high there.
2. 00:32:878 (73) - k to follow the vocal ?
3. 00:34:039 (75) - k for the snare ?
4. 00:35:200 (77,78,79,80,81) - k d k k d would result in a better flow imo.
5. 00:37:523 (82) - same as Kantan
6. 00:46:813 (102) - k for the high-pitched vocal ?
7. 00:48:361 (106,107,108) - k k d would fit the vocal more.
8. 00:49:910 (109) - I think you missed a finish here ?
9. 01:10:813 (168) - d with respect to the vocal drop ?
10. 01:12:361 (171,172,173) - d k k would match the vocal better.
11. 01:18:361 (187,188,189,190,191) - k d k d k, ^
12. 01:23:394 (200,201) - same as 00:12:168 (29,30) -

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:03:845 (15) - d for pattern consistency ?
2. 00:05:200 (20) - K, as the sound is identical to 00:04:813 (19) -
3. 00:12:361 (41) - K for the high-pitched vocal?
4. 00:22:426 (86,87) - d k could fit the vocal better.
5. 00:37:523 (158) - k , ^
6. 00:44:491 (194,195,196,197,198,199) - kkk k d d , as vocal pitch decreases.
7. 00:48:361 (213,214,215) - K K D , ^
8. 00:59:007 (260,261) - swap notes, ^
9. 01:08:103 (298) - d , making it consistent to 01:01:910 (270) -
10. 01:10:813 (311) - d would be better imo.
11. 01:11:394 (312,313) - same as 00:59:007 (260,261) -
12. 01:12:749 (317) - k for pattern consistency.
13. 01:15:071 (327) - d , as the music is quite quiet.
14. 01:17:781 (341) - add finish. I think you have missed it.
15. 01:23:394 (363,364) - k K , same as 00:12:168 (40,41) -

• [Oni]

1. 00:12:168 (51,52) - K K , similar to Muzukashii
2. 00:23:103 - add d here ? The flow would become smoother.
3. 00:31:910 (161,162,163,164,165,166) - kkd ddk would be better imo, which could follow the vocal.
4. 00:48:361 (268) - K , same as Muzukashii
5. 00:53:200 - add d here for connection ?
6. 00:54:361 (301) - k ? The vocal pitch increases from 00:54:168 to 00:54:555 -
7. 00:56:200 (314) - move to 00:56:394 - then change to k , and 00:56:491 - change to d for a better flow ?
8. 00:57:845 (324) - d , the vocal pitch decreases here.
9. 01:00:555 (340) - k is better imo, as the previous note is high-pitched.
10. 01:09:071 (393,394) - k d could match the vocal better.
11. 01:11:297 (405) - delete ? The music is quiet that the quintuplet does not fit well.
12. 01:14:394 (425) - delete ? similar reason as ^

• [Akemi's Oni]

1. 00:14:878 (67) - k here ? As the vocal at 00:14:684 (66,68) - have lower pitch.
2. 00:15:458 (69,70) - swap notes to follow the piano ?
3. 00:28:039 (142) - d , as the music is a bit quiet imo.
4. 00:32:781 - add d here to improve the connection ?
5. 00:43:523 (234) - k would be better, as the sound there is similar to the previous 00:43:329 (233) -
6. 01:10:813 (403) - d , as the vocal has the same pitch as 01:10:620 (402) -
7. 01:23:394 (21,22) - K K like you did at 00:12:168 (52,53) - . This is for the consistency.

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:03:071 (12) - k could be better, as the pitch is higher than 00:02:878 (11) -
2. 00:05:974 (25,26) - K d . It is strongly advised that the first note of any 1/4 should be without finish.
3. 00:08:781 - add k here to map the sound ?
4. 00:51:845 (330,331,332,333,334) - kkddd to follow the decreaing vocal pitch ?
5. 01:04:620 (428,429) - d d , similar to ^
6. 01:23:007 (561) - K , for pattern consistency.

1. offset is a bit off change to 376(+14ms) (i use original offset )

1. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:25:136 - try to reduce some notes, because this part is more peaceful than 00:25:136 - ~ 00:37:523 -
2. 01:01:136 (100) - move to 00:59:587 - because the vocal between 01:00:749 - ~ 01:01:523 - is 3/4 rhythm not 1/1
3. 01:13:523 (121) - ^
4. 01:16:232 (125,126,127,128) - try use slider to replace note?
5. 01:23:394 (138) - move to 01:23:587 - to make the same gap with 01:21:652 (135,136) -

1. 00:06:168 (14,15) - i suggest you reverse these two notes, 1/2 note which contain different color is hard on futsuu
2. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:25:136 -same as kantan
3. 00:27:845 (63) - move to 00:27:071 - ? it is more suitable for vocal and drum
4. 00:25:136 - ~ 00:36:749 - this part is a bit like kantan, try to make a difference obviously ( make kantan easier )
5. 00:55:136 (123,124) - reverse? it is also suitable for vocal and more comfortable when i playing
6. 00:58:426 (133) - change to d the reason is same as above
7. 01:10:426 (166,167) - reverse and change 01:10:813 (168) - to k, i reference the using of kat on vocal's accent (01:04:232 (148,150) - )
8. 01:16:232 (181,182,183,184,185) - same as kantan

1. 00:12:749 - ~00:25:136 - same as kantan
2. 00:25:136 - ~ 00:27:845 - this part is a bit stiff to me, try use this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858122 other part also can use this pattern
3. 00:37:523 - ~ 00:48:942 - also try to reduce some note to make some gap so that can reflect the song well
4. 00:49:716 (207) - change to k , d is too heavy on here
5. 00:55:329 (232,233,234,235) - use the similar pattern with 00:57:265 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - to avoid hard parttern
6. 01:15:071 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329) - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858153 to make similar pattern as 01:11:394 (300,301,302,303,304) -

1. 00:05:200 (20,21) - reverse and change 00:05:974 (22,23) - to K K,it sounds better by following instrument's pitch
2. 00:11:200 (47) - remove? here is pretty peaceful
3. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:25:136 - same as kantan ,reduce some notes
4. 00:29:200 (148) - change to d?
5. 00:32:684 (168,169) - reverse? to reflect 00:31:329 (159,160,161) -
6. 00:49:523 (273,274) - remove finish , this is a bit weird
7. 00:49:910 (275) - add finish and 00:50:007 (276) - remove if you fix the above one
8. 00:56:103 (316) - add finish?
9. 01:02:297 (356) - ^

1. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:22:039 - try to reduce some notes, because this part is more peaceful than 00:25:136 - ~ 00:37:523 -
2. 00:57:652 (320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327) - change to this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858341 more suitable for vocal

1. 00:05:587 (24) - change to K to follow the instrument pitch
2. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:24:749 - same as kantan
3. 00:25:910 (147,148,149,150,151) - change to kkddk is better by following vocal
4. 00:28:813 (169,170) - change to k, the vocal 's pitch is similar with 00:28:620 (168) -
5. 00:29:587 (174,175,176,177) - i suggest you change to kdk d sounds better imo
6. 00:38:394 (237) - move to 00:38:200 - and 00:38:587 (239) - remove because the vocal's long tone is on 00:37:523 - to 00:38:297 -
7. 00:43:716 (272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279) - ^
8. 00:49:136 (312,313,314,315,317) - remove these notes, though there are drum sound but it is very peace
9. 00:50:684 (325) - change to d ,
10. 00:51:555 (332) - move to 00:51:749 - and add k on 00:51:361 - to enhance the drum and vocal's accent
11. 00:52:426 - add k and change 00:52:620 (339) - to d if you fixed the above one
12. 00:54:265 (352) - move to 00:54:845 - ,00:55:039 (358) - change to k and 00:55:232 - add d the reason is same as 00:51:555 (332) -
13. 00:55:523 - add note if you fixed the above one
14. 00:57:265 (373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390) - how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858462 more suitable for vocal and drum
15. 01:02:781 (418) - remove ,this note is a bit superfluous
16. 01:03:845 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432) - same as 00:51:555 (332) -
17. 01:05:781 (439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451) - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858473 sounds more clear to me
18. 01:07:813 (455) - move to 01:07:620 - and 01:08:007 (457) - remove to make the pattern more clear to emphasize the song

qoot8123 wrote:

Hi~ Hi~
request via in pm Thanks


[General]

1. offset is a bit off change to 376(+14ms) (i use original offset ) Oh, Thanks

[ Kantan]

1. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:25:136 - try to reduce some notes, because this part is more peaceful than 00:25:136 - ~ 00:37:523 - fixed
2. 01:01:136 (100) - move to 00:59:587 - because the vocal between 01:00:749 - ~ 01:01:523 - is 3/4 rhythm not 1/1 fixed
3. 01:13:523 (121) - ^ fixed
4. 01:16:232 (125,126,127,128) - try use slider to replace note? fixed
5. 01:23:394 (138) - move to 01:23:587 - to make the same gap with 01:21:652 (135,136) - fixed

[ Futsuu]

1. 00:06:168 (14,15) - i suggest you reverse these two notes, 1/2 note which contain different color is hard on futsuu fixed
2. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:25:136 -same as kantan fixed
3. 00:27:845 (63) - move to 00:27:071 - ? it is more suitable for vocal and drum fixed
4. 00:25:136 - ~ 00:36:749 - this part is a bit like kantan, try to make a difference obviously ( make kantan easier ) fixed
5. 00:55:136 (123,124) - reverse? it is also suitable for vocal and more comfortable when i playing fixed
6. 00:58:426 (133) - change to d the reason is same as above fixed
7. 01:10:426 (166,167) - reverse and change 01:10:813 (168) - to k, i reference the using of kat on vocal's accent (01:04:232 (148,150) - ) fixed
8. 01:16:232 (181,182,183,184,185) - same as kantan fixed

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:12:749 - ~00:25:136 - same as kantan No, because here is not the same as kantan and futsuu, here 00:12:749 - ~00:25:136 I'm following the vocal and here 00:25:136 - ~ 00:37:523 is not the same sound
2. 00:25:136 - ~ 00:27:845 - this part is a bit stiff to me, try use this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858122 other part also can use this pattern fixed
3. 00:37:523 - ~ 00:48:942 - also try to reduce some note to make some gap so that can reflect the song well fixed
4. 00:49:716 (207) - change to k , d is too heavy on here fixed
5. 00:55:329 (232,233,234,235) - use the similar pattern with 00:57:265 (241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248) - to avoid hard parttern fixed
6. 01:15:071 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323,324,325,326,327,328,329) - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858153 to make similar pattern as 01:11:394 (300,301,302,303,304) - fixed

[ Oni]

1. 00:05:200 (20,21) - reverse and change 00:05:974 (22,23) - to K K,it sounds better by following instrument's pitch fixed
2. 00:11:200 (47) - remove? here is pretty peaceful fixed
3. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:25:136 - same as kantan ,reduce some notes Same as Muzu
4. 00:29:200 (148) - change to d? fixed
5. 00:32:684 (168,169) - reverse? to reflect 00:31:329 (159,160,161) - fixed
6. 00:49:523 (273,274) - remove finish , this is a bit weird fixed
7. 00:49:910 (275) - add finish and 00:50:007 (276) - remove if you fix the above one fixed
8. 00:56:103 (316) - add finish? fixed
9. 01:02:297 (356) - ^ fixed

[ Inner Oni]

1. 00:05:587 (24) - change to K to follow the instrument pitch fixed
2. 00:12:749 - ~ 00:24:749 - same as kantan Deleted only 3
3. 00:25:910 (147,148,149,150,151) - change to kkddk is better by following vocal fixed
4. 00:28:813 (169,170) - change to k, the vocal 's pitch is similar with 00:28:620 (168) - fixed
5. 00:29:587 (174,175,176,177) - i suggest you change to kdk d sounds better imo fixed
6. 00:38:394 (237) - move to 00:38:200 - and 00:38:587 (239) - remove because the vocal's long tone is on 00:37:523 - to 00:38:297 - fixed
7. 00:43:716 (272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279) - ^ fixed
8. 00:49:136 (312,313,314,315,317) - remove these notes, though there are drum sound but it is very peace fixed
9. 00:50:684 (325) - change to d , fixed
10. 00:51:555 (332) - move to 00:51:749 - and add k on 00:51:361 - to enhance the drum and vocal's accent fixed
11. 00:52:426 - add k and change 00:52:620 (339) - to d if you fixed the above one fixed
12. 00:54:265 (352) - move to 00:54:845 - ,00:55:039 (358) - change to k and 00:55:232 - add d the reason is same as 00:51:555 (332) - fixed
13. 00:55:523 - add note if you fixed the above one fixed
14. 00:57:265 (373,374,375,376,377,378,379,380,381,382,383,384,385,386,387,388,389,390) - how about this? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858462 more suitable for vocal and drum fixed
15. 01:02:781 (418) - remove ,this note is a bit superfluous fixed
16. 01:03:845 (426,427,428,429,430,431,432) - same as 00:51:555 (332) - fixed
17. 01:05:781 (439,440,441,442,443,444,445,446,447,448,449,450,451) - try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1858473 sounds more clear to me fixed
18. 01:07:813 (455) - move to 01:07:620 - and 01:08:007 (457) - remove to make the pattern more clear to emphasize the song fixed

That's all
Good Luck to rank Thanks, I learned a lot

Akemi_Homura wrote:

Thank you~! :3
and sorry for late.
http://puu.sh/aCC4q/8ef03fe432.osu

Sanjenin Nagi wrote:

Taiko Mod
But your Choose


Oni

00:06:859 - add don fixed
00:07:150 (26) - change don fixed
00:07:343 (27) - Delete fixed
00:07:634 - add don fixed
00:09:956 - ^ fixed

Inner Oni

00:59:408 (387) - move 00:59:311 - Nope, I decided to delete this
00:59:601 (388) - move 00:59:505 - fixed
00:59:601 - add don fixed
01:03:182 (417) - change don fixed
01:03:279 (418) - Delete fixed
01:13:053 (496) - Delete fixed
01:13:150 (497,498,499) - add Finish sound fixed


Done :>

Thank you for mod

Genocide wrote:

Requested from 3 Messages xDD :3
by Shini~ ~~
Shiden Kanzaki <33!!! :3 xD
give me a loli!!! ahaha :3

[Inner Oni]
00:00:569 (2) - mini don please fixed
00:00:763 (3,4) - ctrl + g fixed
00:12:763 (62) - don fixed
00:12:956 (63) - move this kat to 00:13:053 (63) - or 00:13:150 (63) - fixed
00:13:150 (64) - delete fixed
00:21:666 (116) - don fixed
00:30:859 (180,181) - ctrl + g | :\ why placed with kd kd ? fixed, I don't know xD

00:49:924 - and 01:17:795 , at here,, can you change this part with 1.10 sv ? I think it's ok now

[Oni]
00:02:117 (8,9) - ctrl + g | dkk more good than kdk fixed
00:06:859 (25,26,27) -

fixed
00:07:634 (29) - kat fixed
00:40:150 (215,216) - ctrl + g fixed, omg xD same as Inner Oni
00:41:698 (225,226) - ctrl + g fixed ^
00:49:924 (275) - D fixed
from 00:50:698 to 00:51:085 - change it as ddddk - http://puu.sh/aRYgx/3caac192f2.png I tried with other pattern but is a good suggestion

[Muzukashii]
00:56:505 (232,233,234) - dkd / dkk I decided for dkd
00:58:440 (242) - k fixed
01:18:956 (318) - delete fixed
01:22:440 (331) - don ?? big Don? because is don now...

[Futssuu]
00:17:408 (38,39,40) - dkk fixed
00:31:343 (65) - kat please, i hear like tribal sound fixed
00:58:246 (127,128) - kat fixed
01:01:537 (136) - kat fixed

[Kantan]
00:36:375 (59,60) - ctrl + g fixed

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

• All fine

• 00:30:956 (49) - Cambiar a d?
  01:09:279 (111,112) - control+g?
  
  La kantan yo la veo bastante bien, asi que solo son esas pequeñas sugerencias :3

• 00:48:569 (103) - suena muy raro, muevela a 00:48:666 -
  
  Por lo demas, creo que esta bien

• 00:41:408 (166,167) - control+g
  01:02:698 (256) - cambiar a k
  01:07:343 (277,278) - esta no se.. pero control+g?
  01:08:892 (283) - cambiala a k
  01:10:827 (293) - ^
  01:15:763 - muevela a 01:15:666 - no tiene mucho sentido que este en el tick azul

• Por que sv 1,60 en la oni normal si en la inner oni tiene 1,40? yo lo haria lo contrario, Oni sv 1,40 y Inner 1,60, ademas, tambien deberias dejar los sv's del kiai a x1,00 (en el caso de la Oni de Akemi no dire nada ya que es otra oni a parte como si se tratase de una inner, aunque bueno, no lo es xD)
  
  00:53:892 - Yo creo que iria bien añadir un k
  
  No encuentro nada mas que sugerir en esta oni

• 00:31:343 (156) - K finish missing
  00:34:440 (176,180,184) - ^
  00:40:246 (209) - ^
  00:56:795 - add a d, sounds good for me :3
  
  Good diff and fun to play ^^

• Si le bajastes el sv a la oni a 1,40 subele el de esta oni a 1,60, veras que se hace mas divertido al jugarla :3
  
  00:11:988 - aqui recomiendo añadir un d
  < 00:12:182 (61) - esta cambiala a k >
  < ahora añade k en 00:12:472 - 00:12:569 - 00:12:666 - (si hicistes esto quitale el finish a la nota 00:12:375 (62) - ) >
  00:42:569 (269) - cambiala a k
  00:47:214 (302) - cambiala a k
  00:56:698 (370) - cambiar a k?
  01:09:472 (469) - ^
  01:23:988 (565,566,567,568,569) - no estoy seguro de este pattern, es decir, estoy de acuerdo en que acabe en D pero kdkkD tal vez sea algo dificil y me recuerda a una diff convertida de standard, asi que prueba a cambiarlo a ddkkD cambiando esta nota 01:23:988 (565) - a d :3

Aldwych wrote:

Hi M4M
Before modding, i'll just say that i don't really mod taiko this is just a bonus with o!std mod if i want, i'm only playing it so let's try lal. Thanks :3

[Kantan]

00:00:376 (1,2) : i'm feeling a bit confuse for theses two notes, because the distance between them is 1,5 and after it's 2 so i think that a begginer could be confuse here. yeah, it can be confuse for kantan but I think that here It follows better the rhythm, So I'll change if one more modder tell me about that
00:07:343 (11,12,13,14,16) : For these notes, if you didn't applied something for above, i advise you to put them 1/2 tick earlier, i find that it fits better. Good option with vocal but I want to follow the music
00:53:021 (84,89 etc...) : why there's no D here? Yes, fixed
01:18:375 (124,125,126,127) : ^ This is OK following the vocal

[Futsuu]

Nothing special found, same thing about the D.

[Muzukashii]

00:25:537 : this should be at 00:25:440 fixed
00:54:666 : You should add a d here, this makes your pattern a bit consistent. fixed
00:55:537 : I advise you to remove the stream (just keep the last of 3 of course), i don't find the utility and why there's a stream here because this part is not similar to the others. fixed
01:19:730 : How about delete this circle? I found it too much. fixed

Same thing for the D notes of course blablabla.

[Oni]

00:09:956 : I don't understand the 3/4 distance. here and why a note here. keep
I'm sorry i found nothing special also, i'm not a pro mapper player and modder of taiko, but it sounds good so i think it's fine.

[Inner Oni]

lel

Hope it could help you.

Hanjamon wrote:

Hi! Here a #late mod via pm

• d=Don
  D=Big Don
  k=Katsu
  K=Big Katsu

[General]

• All fine

[Kantan]

• 00:30:956 (49) - Cambiar a d? fixed
  01:09:279 (111,112) - control+g? fixed
  
  La kantan yo la veo bastante bien, asi que solo son esas pequeñas sugerencias :3

[Futsuu]

• 00:48:569 (103) - suena muy raro, muevela a 00:48:666 - fixed
  
  Por lo demas, creo que esta bien

[Muzukashii]

• 00:41:408 (166,167) - control+g lo mantendre asi porque creo que como esta suena bien
  01:02:698 (256) - cambiar a k fixed
  01:07:343 (277,278) - esta no se.. pero control+g? fixed
  01:08:892 (283) - cambiala a k fixed
  01:10:827 (293) - ^ fixed
  01:15:763 - muevela a 01:15:666 - no tiene mucho sentido que este en el tick azulYo creo que sigue bien el vocal en el tick azul

[Oni]

• Por que sv 1,60 en la oni normal si en la inner oni tiene 1,40? xD ni yo lo entiendo se supone que si habia cambiado eso xD yo lo haria lo contrario, Oni sv 1,40 y Inner 1,60 oks, ademas, tambien deberias dejar los sv's del kiai a x1,00 xD es Oni por lo tanto lo dejare asi(en el caso de la Oni de Akemi no dire nada ya que es otra oni a parte como si se tratase de una inner, aunque bueno, no lo es xD) :3
  
  00:53:892 - Yo creo que iria bien añadir un k Lo mantendre así pero no es mala idea
  
  No encuentro nada mas que sugerir en esta oni

[Inner Oni]

• Si le bajastes el sv a la oni a 1,40 subele el de esta oni a 1,60, veras que se hace mas divertido al jugarla :3
  
  00:11:988 - aqui recomiendo añadir un d Si, fixed
  < 00:12:182 (61) - esta cambiala a k >
  < ahora añade k en 00:12:472 - 00:12:569 - 00:12:666 - (si hicistes esto quitale el finish a la nota 00:12:375 (62) - ) > long fixed xD
  00:42:569 (269) - cambiala a k fixed
  00:47:214 (302) - cambiala a k fixed
  00:56:698 (370) - cambiar a k? fixed
  01:09:472 (469) - ^ fixed
  01:23:988 (565,566,567,568,569) - no estoy seguro de este pattern, es decir, estoy de acuerdo en que acabe en D pero kdkkD tal vez sea algo dificil y me recuerda a una diff convertida de standard, asi que prueba a cambiarlo a ddkkD cambiando esta nota 01:23:988 (565) - a d :3 fixed

Por lo demas esta bien, creo que esto es todo, diria que el mapset ya esta listo para rank, asi que puedes buscar ya algun TBAT (aunque ahora se llaman todos BATS xD xDDD), tambien puedes conseguir unos pocos mods antes de eso si quieres pero yo creo que ya esta bien. *-* yuppi xD :3 gracias

To Akemi and -Sh1n1-: If you have any questions talk to me in-game Ok, Thank you

Gooood luck! ^^ Thanks a lot Hanja

mintong89 wrote:

Hi, mod as your requested.

[General]

Akemi's Oni source and tags is garbled, please fix it.
Please be constant with your big note usage. For example you did 00:04:053 (15,18) - this with big note at Muzukashii but why not at Oni. Make sure to check all diff properly. (except Guest Diff if you want.)
Remove the Widescreen Support.
I think that the hitsound is quite loud, -20%?

[Inner Oni]

00:11:988 (60) - Why don't you just delete this and continue the K at 00:12:182 (61) - here?
00:12:763 (66,67,68) - These are not really fun in gameplay imo. I'd prefer the pattern like 00:14:311 (74,75,76,77) - this for the better gameplay
00:18:763 (104) - I think you should delete this note to constant with 00:15:666 - this.
00:25:150 (144) - How about K here and remove this 00:25:246 (145) - note? The cymbal at 00:25:150 - here is quite loud.
00:30:182 (180) - d here to more fit with pitch of the vocal.
00:37:537 (231) - Should be big note at here too, the drum cymbal is loud at here. Remember if you apply please delete 00:37:634 - this note.
00:39:085 - => 00:40:246 - How about k d k d kd dk here for the better rhythm?
00:43:730 (275) - Same as above, should be D and delete 00:43:827 - this note.
00:47:601 (304,305,306,307,308,309,310) - I think this pattern rhythm is so weird to gameplay, try kkkkddk?
00:51:956 (333) - d, I can't hear any vocal at here.
00:52:537 - Add a note here please, quite "feel empty" since this is Inner Oni.
00:59:892 (393) - Shouldn't be have a note at here, it doesn't fit any sound imo.
01:08:892 - => 01:09:472 - These note sound doesn't right and it didn't fit with song imo. Try kdkkddk?
01:11:408 - => 01:12:182 - Sound weird for me too, try kkd ddkkk?
01:12:763 (495) - D here and delete 01:12:859 (496,497) - this two note? The sound of vocal just like 01:13:150 (498,499,500) - you did here.
01:24:375 (569) - I prefer you did the spinner or not D here.

[Oni]

00:12:763 (54) - Big note for drum cymbal.
00:15:859 (71) - Any reason to put big note? I didn't hear any cymbal at here.
00:27:666 (139,140,141) - ddk here, because 00:27:859 - here is the drum snare?

[Muzukashii]

00:12:763 (41,42,43,44) - I think the pattern like this is too hard for Muzukashii player imo, the rhythm of the pattern should be more easy like this: (Please apply to all pattern like this for constant.)

SPOILER

00:17:021 - I think you should add a note at here because drum kick at here is quite loud.
00:20:117 - ^
00:40:150 - Add a note at here to constant your previous pattern. (You did some 1/4 pattern at before such as 00:36:763 (143,144,145) - these.)
00:41:408 (166,167) - ddd ^
00:45:279 (183,184,185,186,187,188,189,190) - Sound weird with this pattern, try this?

SPOILER

[Futsuu]
You shouldn't use SV1.2 at here. The BPM is just 155 and if it with SV1.2 then it's too slow! Plus that's have 1/2 pattern on it, so I don't really recommend you to use SV1.2 and change back to 1.4.

00:04:827 (10,11,12,13,14) - I think these are too hard for Futsuu player but you can easily fix it by 00:05:988 (13) - delete this note.

[Kantan]
Same as Futsuu, shouldn't use SV1.2 at here and change to 1.4.

00:00:376 - => 00:05:601 - I think that the beginning is really too hard for Kantan player, how about just change to 1/1 per note for better rhythm?

SPOILER

00:11:021 (14,15,16,17) - I think these are too hard for Kantan player too, so it would be better if delete these and just use normal d _ k k d (1/1).

Call me back.

mintong89 wrote:

Rechecked and everything is fine now.

Bubbled!~

XinCrin wrote:

Wow I didn't notice that a peruvian mapper was making awesome maps
Congrats, go for rank!

1. i couldnt find label of (TV Size) on official. it should be removed.
2. why is there ブラック・ブレット in tags? its really unnecessary.
3. each of diff has different volume changes...

1. 00:21:279 ~ 00:24:375 - i think that this part doesnt fit with the flow. try to change them to dkd k ddk
2. 00:35:601 (51) - remove? looks/plays kinda weird. so maybe you need to put some breaks at around of bignote.
3. 00:53:021 (77,78,79,80,81) - this pattern lacks consistency with previous pattern. try to D k ddd. its up to you.
4. 01:07:343 (101) - should be d for the consistency.
5. 01:16:246 (116) - i dont recommend to use a slider on Kantan. consider changing to spinner.
6. 01:21:666 (122,123,124,125) - why made complex rhythm suddenly? i dont think that it has a meaning.

1. 00:34:827 (71) - should be d because there is no high pitch sound here.
2. 00:57:279 (123) - remove. doesnt fit with the flow.
3. 01:20:505 (183) - k. the same parts have k.
   
   
4. im wondering about your way to use triplet or something.
   ex, look such pattern as 00:29:021 (60,61,62,63,64,65) - , the rhythm has changed suddenly from around pattern. it feels randombeat for me. so, this Futsuu lacks a lot of consistency imo.

1. 00:12:763 ~ 00:25:150 - should be reduced 1/4 patterns. these are really unnecessary for the flow.
2. 00:28:440 (107) - remove. suddenly long pattern only here.
3. 00:40:634 (165) - why is this finisher?
4. 00:41:795 (172) - the same, there is no cymbal sound. 00:42:182 (173) - add finisher instead.
5. 01:06:569 - actually the same sound with 00:54:182 - but patterns are much different. why?

1. dont use SV1.2x. it would be bad gap between Muzukashii if you do it.
   
   
2. 00:05:988 (22,23) - Muzukashii has kK here. Oni should be used KK. it sounds/looks so weird.
3. 00:12:763 ~ 00:25:150 - as i said in Muzukashii, you should reduce some notes. it really doesnt fit with the flow.
4. 00:37:537 (196,197,198,199,200) - where is 5-plet sound. such pattern is really meaningless.

1. dont use SV1.2x. i dont think that it works well.

1. 00:17:698 (77) - i guess that you should reduce such pattern. 00:12:763 ~ 00:17:408 this part doesnt have that pattern. so current pattern have very unbalanced pattern.
2. 00:52:246 (282) - should be d. because it seems that you followed the vocal sound on this part.
3. 01:04:440 (360,361) - swap them. the same reason as above.
4. 01:17:795 ~ actually the same sound with 00:06:569 ~ . i think that these need to have consistency.

TKS wrote:

[ General]

1. i couldnt find label of (TV Size) on official. it should be removed. Ok, removed
2. why is there ブラック・ブレット in tags? its really unnecessary. Deleted
3. each of diff has different volume changes... u.u fixed

[ Kantan]

1. 00:21:279 ~ 00:24:375 - i think that this part doesnt fit with the flow. try to change them to dkd k ddk
2. 00:35:601 (51) - remove? looks/plays kinda weird. so maybe you need to put some breaks at around of bignote.
3. 00:53:021 (77,78,79,80,81) - this pattern lacks consistency with previous pattern. try to D k ddd. its up to you.
4. 01:07:343 (101) - should be d for the consistency.
5. 01:16:246 (116) - i dont recommend to use a slider on Kantan. consider changing to spinner.
6. 01:21:666 (122,123,124,125) - why made complex rhythm suddenly? i dont think that it has a meaning.

All fixed


[ Futsuu]

1. 00:34:827 (71) - should be d because there is no high pitch sound here.
2. 00:57:279 (123) - remove. doesnt fit with the flow.
3. 01:20:505 (183) - k. the same parts have k.
   
4. im wondering about your way to use triplet or something.
   ex, look such pattern as 00:29:021 (60,61,62,63,64,65) - , the rhythm has changed suddenly from around pattern. it feels randombeat for me. so, this Futsuu lacks a lot of consistency imo. Yeah, I changed a lot of things to keep a strong consistency. Thanks

All fixed

[ Muzukashii]

1. 00:12:763 ~ 00:25:150 - should be reduced 1/4 patterns. these are really unnecessary for the flow.
2. 00:28:440 (107) - remove. suddenly long pattern only here.
3. 00:40:634 (165) - why is this finisher?
4. 00:41:795 (172) - the same, there is no cymbal sound. 00:42:182 (173) - add finisher instead.
5. 01:06:569 - actually the same sound with 00:54:182 - but patterns are much different. why?

All fixed

[ Oni]

1. dont use SV1.2x. it would be bad gap between Muzukashii if you do it. Ok
   
   
2. 00:05:988 (22,23) - Muzukashii has kK here. Oni should be used KK. it sounds/looks so weird.
3. 00:12:763 ~ 00:25:150 - as i said in Muzukashii, you should reduce some notes. it really doesnt fit with the flow.
4. 00:37:537 (196,197,198,199,200) - where is 5-plet sound. such pattern is really meaningless.

All fixed

[ Inner Oni]

1. dont use SV1.2x. i dont think that it works well.Ok

i think that the set needs more work yet. some parts are just awesome but all diffs still lack consistency. u.u I just changed a lot of things
some patterns really doesnt fit the flow. it makes player confused anyways. u.u I tried to fit the flow with your advices
so i think that this mapset is still too early to get rank. well, goodluck.

Thanks for your mod TKS *-*

XinCrin wrote:

Oh so sad

lZenxl wrote:

lol I've modded this map before, will mod again i guess hh

[Gen]

https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2022813

I would suggest to shift the BG up or down a bit, having a slightly covered face looks weird Ok I'll change the BG

[Inner Oni]

00:22:246 (123) - I would suggest to make this a kat, it plays more confortably imo since the (dd)(dk)(k) pattern is more confusing than (dd)(kk)(k) imo
00:29:795 - Feels like you missed out vocals here mapped with a kat, i would suggest to make 175 a kat
01:03:279 - I would suggest to add a note here since the vocal 5-plet here 01:02:311 (407,408,409,410,411) - is similar to this 01:03:085 (413,414,415,416) -
01:06:085 (436,437) - I would suggest to swap this | You always ended this specific 5-plet in the song with a kat ( e.g 01:05:408 (431) - 00:56:892 (367) - 00:56:117 (361) - ) Thus I would suggest to make this a kat for consistency
01:08:505 (455,461) - Similarly, this also applies to ^
01:23:988 (555,556,557,558) - Shouldn't this be kkdd? Since the pitch goes down
01:24:375 - Might want to have a decreasing volume using inheriting points on the spinner here, since the music fades out

[Oni]

00:56:117 (307,312) - Since the vocals here are similar, I would suggest to isolate those 2 notes or link them with a triplet or duplet so that you can clearly emphasize the vocals here
01:09:279 (390,391) - Triplet here? since you used a triplet for a similar vocal 01:08:505 (385,386,387) -
01:24:375 - Same Volume Suggestion as Inner Oni

[Muzu]
00:34:440 - This section may be a bit too hectic for Muzu, I would suggest to remove the notes after a finisher
00:47:214 (191) - I would suggest to move left by 1/4 - players might mistake this as a 1/4 as they were following the vocals previously

[Futsuu]

Same thing as TKS said,

The triplet here feels really weird due to the weird transition of rhythm ?

00:29:795 - According to 00:26:698 (54,55,56) - in which you mapped all the vocals, the triplet should start there instead of 00:29:021 (58) -
00:32:892 - Same thing here

Nothing else except that one

[Kantan]

00:12:763 (16) - change to K ? | This needs a finisher imo
00:35:988 (51,53) - I would suggest to swap this so that 53 becomes the finish instead, it feels better imo

Nothing else

All changed *-*/


For Akemi's Oni, pretty much everything i want to say has been covered by TKS o/

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is Finish don note
4. K is Finish kat note
   
   
5. Purple is UnRankable , Please change
6. Green is I would strongly recommend
7. black is Pointed out that

1. :3

1. Change SV 1.4 => 1.2

1. :3

1. 00:06:569 (23,24,25,26,27,28,29,30,31,32) - 01:17:795 (313,314,315,316,317,318,319,320,321,322,323) - In the same pattern pls.
   
   
2. Please check and paying attention to the pattern. don and kat is falling apart even with the same sound.

1. OD -1 Inner & GD's Oni use OD6 _(:3JL
   
   
2. 00:07:634 (29) - delete ( 01:18:859 - not notes. )
   
   
3. 00:56:117 (307,308,309) - Kkk Unrankable. change kkk ( some 01:08:505 (385,386,387) - )
   
   
4. 01:01:440 (340) - move 01:01:053 (337) - ? ( It's up to you. :3 )
   
   
5. 01:17:698 (443) - move 01:17:988 (444) - & 01:17:795 (444) - change D ( some 00:06:569 (24,25) - )
   
   
6. 01:20:601 (458) - Change k ( some 00:09:375 (38) - )
   
   
7. 01:21:182 (462) - add d , 01:21:279 (463) - change k , 01:21:666 (465) - add d or 00:09:956 (42,45) - delete.
   
   
8. why 00:12:182 (52,53) - K K . 01:23:408 (475,476) - d k ? some sounds.

1. I like your mapping style. Nice diff :3

1. SV1.6 => 1.4 _(:3JL
   
   
2. 00:12:182 (60) - Change D or 01:23:408 (555) - Change K
   
   
3. 00:17:311 (94) - move 00:17:698 (96) - ? ( It's up to you. :3 )
   
   
4. 00:17:601 (95) - move 00:17:505 (95) - ? ( some 00:14:311 (74,75,76,77) - pertern. xx xx pertern is good. )
   
   
5. 00:27:569 (161) - move 00:27:763 (162) - ( some 00:15:375 (81) - )
   
   
6. 00:43:440 - add k 00:43:537 - add d here ? ( have sounds. It's up to you. :3 )