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Sawai Miku - Gomen ne, Iiko ja Irarenai. (Anime ver.)

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Nacs
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Nice map thank you
Myxo
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Myxo
Popping over various major issues marked in bold.

[General]

There are lots of Unsnapped Objects in Hard & Insane, please check AiMod and fix them! 01:30:398 - In Insane, there is a red timing point here without a reason. Do not use pure white combo color (255,255,255); it makes Kiai blinding and hurts the eyes. Change it to a bright gray instead. The dark gray combo color is missing in the Insane difficulty. The hitsound-file "normal-hitclap2" is unused and must be removed. "soft-sliderslide3" also seems to be unused. I'm not 100% sure since I didn't check all objects in Lanturns diff if one slider uses soft-sliderslide3, but if that's the case, please remove the file and change the sampleset of the slider via the Sampleset/Addition Tool. "normal-slidertick3" is way too loud for a slidertick, or too similar to a regular hitsound addition. I turned it's volume down a bit, please use this one: http://puu.sh/cRyZp/5aa4378a3a.wav

[Easy]

  1. 00:05:773 (2,1) - The Spacing between these is a bit too high.
  2. 00:10:612 (2,1,2) - The 1/2-sliders don't really fit into an Easy diff because they are very short (= difficult to read) and make the rhythm more complex than it should be. Try this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/cRAiB/4635d5b065.jpg
  3. 00:14:483 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 3/2-gaps are not recommended for Easy, since they break the white/red-polarity and are difficult to read due to that. For songs with complex rhythms, like this one, they are acceptable when a slider follows afterwards, since it won't cause a miss when the newbies press the key a bit earlier / later on the slider. But here, a circle is following after the 3/2-gaps, so I'd highly recommend you to get rid of them. The best solution would be to use repeated sliders: http://puu.sh/cRABE/dd0ec99902.jpg
  4. 00:23:773 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Same as above.
  5. 00:39:838 (4,5) - This rhythm would sound much better here: http://puu.sh/cRAOE/5de5851209.jpg You'd also get rid of the 1/2-slider.
  6. 00:42:160 (3,4) - Try to use the same rhythm as 00:39:064 (3,4,5) - (with the above suggestion) to get rid of the 1/2-slider.
  7. 00:48:548 (1,2) - More short sliders ;w; Try http://puu.sh/cRAVv/d43472b458.jpg
  8. 00:50:677 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/cRAYj/39eceb301c.jpg Similar issues
  9. 00:51:644 (1,2,3,4) - You know the problem already, here's a solution: http://puu.sh/cRB1L/6e856ebb4c.jpg
  10. 00:54:548 (1,2,1) - Now you are mixing 3/2-gaps with 1/2-sliders. This is definitely too complex rhythm for an Easy difficulty. An appropriate way to simplify the rhythm would be: From 00:53:773 - http://puu.sh/cRBj6/9de5a893d4.jpg
  11. 00:58:031 (1,2,3,4) - To get rid of the high amount of 1/2-sliders: http://puu.sh/cRBmf/90ad09a98b.jpg
  12. The whole kiai section needs the most work rhythm-wise. In the whole difficulty, you are following mainly vocals, which is causing all those complex rhythms. Before the chorus, there wasn't really a better possibility, since the emphasized instruments were also playing mainly on red ticks, so it was fine to follow the vocals. But in the kiai, the drums and other instruments are often quite regular, so you need to make the rhythm as simple as possible by following these. I'd recommend you to remap the kiai section and try to keep the rythm simple by following other instruments / drums. Ofc you can still map on some red ticks to make it fit the rest of the map, but all those 1/2-sliders need to go imo.
  13. Your NCing needs work.
    1. 00:00:548 to 00:12:935 - NCing every big white tick here is inconsistent with the rest of the map and doesn't seem necessary to me - Just NC every second big white tick.
    2. 00:12:935 - NC because this measure is a transition to the following section
    3. 00:23:773 - ^
    4. 00:46:031 - I wouldn't put NC here, because this object seems to belong to the previous combo from the vocals and instrumentation. 00:47:193 - NC here instead.
    5. 00:56:096 and 01:23:967 and 01:27:451 - I don't know how you'll handle these, since I told you to remap the chorus before, but I'd not include any additional NCs in the chorus since I can't really see the reason.
  14. The hitsounding needs a lot of work too. Many loud sounds in the music don't get enough emphasis due to a missing hitsound addition.
    1. 00:04:999 - Add Normal Sampleset here or something else to fit this very emphasized sound.
    2. 00:11:193 and 00:11:580 - These cymbals need to be emphasized in some way by using hitsounding. Finishes would work.
    3. 00:12:160 and 00:12:548 - I'd use Normal Sampleset for those to emphasize the bass or whatever that dominant instrument is.
    4. 00:20:289 - Normal sampleset here?
    5. 00:20:677 to 00:24:935 - Use Normal Sampleset for every big white line + the red ticks that you mapped, it sounds better.
    6. 00:31:515 to 00:34:612 - Same as above.
    7. 00:35:773 - Missing clap.
    8. 00:37:322 - Normal Sampleset please.
    9. 00:39:064 - This strong cymbal is definitely missing emphasis. What about Normal Sampleset + Finish for consistency with 00:42:160 - ? Same for 00:45:257 -
    10. 00:39:838 - Normal Sampleset or something else for the special drum?
    11. 00:47:193 (2,3) - Here you also need some kind of hitsounding to emphasize the very loud instrument. 00:47:193 - Finish, 00:47:773 and 00:48:160 - Normal Sampleset could work.
    12. 00:49:902 - Normal Sampleset maybe.
    13. 00:52:999 - Same as above.
    14. I won't point out hitsounding issues in the chorus since you'll have to remap it anyways if you follow my advices, but I hope you see where the issues are: Try to cover all the emphasized cymbals (and similar beats) with hitsounding, otherwise it feels empty.
[Normal]

  1. 00:01:322 (2,1) - o___o
  2. 00:13:902 (5) - Drum Sampleset + Finish, otherwise you are missing this emphasized sound.
  3. 00:23:193 - The rhythm would sound better if you add a circle here. Also you'd get rid of the polarity issue.
  4. Some of the hitsounding and NCing issues I mentioned in Easy also apply for this difficulty. Please check them carefully.
[Lanturn]

  1. Try OD6.5? OD7 seems a bit too much and is also the same that Insane uses ><
  2. 00:13:902 (1) - Maybe you could move this circle so that the 1/1-gap looks more different from the 3/2-gap? http://puu.sh/cRFXM/edc72e80d2.jpg
  3. 00:19:128 (1) - Personally I don't like this slidershape, the red-anchors look a bit random to me o:
  4. 00:46:999 (1,1,1) - Could you space them a bit more, so they don't overlap slightly?
  5. 00:47:580 (1,1) - Both NCs are not really necessary for readability, but they mess up the HP-drain a bit. So it might be better to remove them.
  6. 00:55:322 (1) - ^
  7. 00:58:806 (4) - Maybe move to the axis, for symmetry? http://puu.sh/cRHes/4ad988ff28.jpg
  8. Personally I don't really like the hitsound samples, they are not so nice to listen to. But that might be only my opinion.
  9. The difficulty spread is bothering me in this mapset. The gaps between Normal / Hard as well as Hard / Insane seem really big. Hard is using some bigger jumps that need to be reduced imo in order to fit with lower difficulties:
    1. 00:03:644 (1,2,3) -
    2. 00:07:322 (2,3,1) -
    3. 00:14:483 (1,2) and 00:16:031 (1,2) -
    4. 00:32:677 (3,1) -
    5. 01:08:096 (3,1) -
    6. 01:24:160 (2,3,4,5) -
    7. 01:26:870 (3,1) -
    8. Try to reduce these a bit, but if possible don't get rid of them completely, because of the gap with Insane ;w;
[Insane]

  1. 00:05:967 (2) - I guess this NC is here for readability, but it makes the pattern more difficult to read - The 1/2-gap is more intuitive if you remove the NC.
  2. 00:11:967 (3,1) - Swap NCs for the same reason as above.
  3. 00:54:548 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Those triplets play and sound weird to me. I'd say the 1/4-rhythm is not really intuitive here, so I'd remove the notes on the blue ticks. If you want to keep them, make the placement for smooth for better flow and aesthetics (by which I mean, don't use such a sharp angle for the triplets). For example, you could do something like this: http://puu.sh/cRGGu/bea929d726.jpg
  4. 01:10:999 (1) - Remove this NC to avoid messing up the HP-drain here.
  5. I already mentioned in my mod on Lanturn's diff that the gap between Hard and Insane is quite big. Hard doesn't have many jumps (and it should even have less when he applied my mod, because some were too big) but the Insane is full of them. There is no easy way to fix this. One possibility would be to map a difficulty in between Hard and Insane. Another one would be to tone Insane's jumps down, but that will be pretty difficult to do since the whole map is really jumpy. I'd recommend you to wait with this and first of all fix the rest of the mod. After that, contact me ingame and I'll talk with other BATs about their opinion on the difficulty spread and what could be a good solution.
I like this mapset, but it definitely shouldn't have been bubbled yet. Sorry CDFA :( Please check the mod carefully and give a reason when you deny something. I'm sure we can get this done :)
samplefish
1,198 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
samplefish

Desperate-kun wrote:

Popping over various major issues marked in bold.

[General]

There are lots of Unsnapped Objects in Hard & Insane, please check AiMod and fix them! my aimod comes up empty 01:30:398 - In Insane, there is a red timing point here without a reason. taken out Do not use pure white combo color (255,255,255); it makes Kiai blinding and hurts the eyes. Change it to a bright gray instead. k The dark gray combo color is missing in the Insane difficulty. added The hitsound-file "normal-hitclap2" is unused and must be removed. takn out "soft-sliderslide3" also seems to be unused. I'm not 100% sure since I didn't check all objects in Lanturns diff if one slider uses soft-sliderslide3, but if that's the case, please remove the file and change the sampleset of the slider via the Sampleset/Addition Tool. ill leave it in there for now, just in case "normal-slidertick3" is way too loud for a slidertick, or too similar to a regular hitsound addition. I turned it's volume down a bit, please use this one: http://puu.sh/cRyZp/5aa4378a3a.wav done

[Easy]

  1. 00:05:773 (2,1) - The Spacing between these is a bit too high.
  2. 00:10:612 (2,1,2) - The 1/2-sliders don't really fit into an Easy diff because they are very short (= difficult to read) and make the rhythm more complex than it should be. Try this rhythm instead: http://puu.sh/cRAiB/4635d5b065.jpg
  3. 00:14:483 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 3/2-gaps are not recommended for Easy, since they break the white/red-polarity and are difficult to read due to that. For songs with complex rhythms, like this one, they are acceptable when a slider follows afterwards, since it won't cause a miss when the newbies press the key a bit earlier / later on the slider. But here, a circle is following after the 3/2-gaps, so I'd highly recommend you to get rid of them. The best solution would be to use repeated sliders: http://puu.sh/cRABE/dd0ec99902.jpg
  4. 00:23:773 (3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Same as above.
  5. 00:39:838 (4,5) - This rhythm would sound much better here: http://puu.sh/cRAOE/5de5851209.jpg You'd also get rid of the 1/2-slider.
  6. 00:42:160 (3,4) - Try to use the same rhythm as 00:39:064 (3,4,5) - (with the above suggestion) to get rid of the 1/2-slider.
  7. 00:48:548 (1,2) - More short sliders ;w; Try http://puu.sh/cRAVv/d43472b458.jpg
  8. 00:50:677 (5,6) - http://puu.sh/cRAYj/39eceb301c.jpg Similar issues
  9. 00:51:644 (1,2,3,4) - You know the problem already, here's a solution: http://puu.sh/cRB1L/6e856ebb4c.jpg
  10. 00:54:548 (1,2,1) - Now you are mixing 3/2-gaps with 1/2-sliders. This is definitely too complex rhythm for an Easy difficulty. An appropriate way to simplify the rhythm would be: From 00:53:773 - http://puu.sh/cRBj6/9de5a893d4.jpg
  11. 00:58:031 (1,2,3,4) - To get rid of the high amount of 1/2-sliders: http://puu.sh/cRBmf/90ad09a98b.jpg
  12. The whole kiai section needs the most work rhythm-wise. In the whole difficulty, you are following mainly vocals, which is causing all those complex rhythms. Before the chorus, there wasn't really a better possibility, since the emphasized instruments were also playing mainly on red ticks, so it was fine to follow the vocals. But in the kiai, the drums and other instruments are often quite regular, so you need to make the rhythm as simple as possible by following these. I'd recommend you to remap the kiai section and try to keep the rythm simple by following other instruments / drums. Ofc you can still map on some red ticks to make it fit the rest of the map, but all those 1/2-sliders need to go imo.
  13. Your NCing needs work.
    1. 00:00:548 to 00:12:935 - NCing every big white tick here is inconsistent with the rest of the map and doesn't seem necessary to me - Just NC every second big white tick.
    2. 00:12:935 - NC because this measure is a transition to the following section
    3. 00:23:773 - ^
    4. 00:46:031 - I wouldn't put NC here, because this object seems to belong to the previous combo from the vocals and instrumentation. 00:47:193 - NC here instead.
    5. 00:56:096 and 01:23:967 and 01:27:451 - I don't know how you'll handle these, since I told you to remap the chorus before, but I'd not include any additional NCs in the chorus since I can't really see the reason.
  14. The hitsounding needs a lot of work too. Many loud sounds in the music don't get enough emphasis due to a missing hitsound addition.
    1. 00:04:999 - Add Normal Sampleset here or something else to fit this very emphasized sound.
    2. 00:11:193 and 00:11:580 - These cymbals need to be emphasized in some way by using hitsounding. Finishes would work.
    3. 00:12:160 and 00:12:548 - I'd use Normal Sampleset for those to emphasize the bass or whatever that dominant instrument is.
    4. 00:20:289 - Normal sampleset here?
    5. 00:20:677 to 00:24:935 - Use Normal Sampleset for every big white line + the red ticks that you mapped, it sounds better.
    6. 00:31:515 to 00:34:612 - Same as above.
    7. 00:35:773 - Missing clap.
    8. 00:37:322 - Normal Sampleset please.
    9. 00:39:064 - This strong cymbal is definitely missing emphasis. What about Normal Sampleset + Finish for consistency with 00:42:160 - ? Same for 00:45:257 -
    10. 00:39:838 - Normal Sampleset or something else for the special drum?
    11. 00:47:193 (2,3) - Here you also need some kind of hitsounding to emphasize the very loud instrument. 00:47:193 - Finish, 00:47:773 and 00:48:160 - Normal Sampleset could work.
    12. 00:49:902 - Normal Sampleset maybe.
    13. 00:52:999 - Same as above.
    14. I won't point out hitsounding issues in the chorus since you'll have to remap it anyways if you follow my advices, but I hope you see where the issues are: Try to cover all the emphasized cymbals (and similar beats) with hitsounding, otherwise it feels empty.
everything done.

[Normal]

  1. 00:01:322 (2,1) - o___o
  2. 00:13:902 (5) - Drum Sampleset + Finish, otherwise you are missing this emphasized sound.
  3. 00:23:193 - The rhythm would sound better if you add a circle here. Also you'd get rid of the polarity issue.
  4. Some of the hitsounding and NCing issues I mentioned in Easy also apply for this difficulty. Please check them carefully.
fixed everything

[Insane]

  1. 00:05:967 (2) - I guess this NC is here for readability, but it makes the pattern more difficult to read - The 1/2-gap is more intuitive if you remove the NC.
  2. 00:11:967 (3,1) - Swap NCs for the same reason as above.
  3. 00:54:548 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - Those triplets play and sound weird to me. I'd say the 1/4-rhythm is not really intuitive here, so I'd remove the notes on the blue ticks. If you want to keep them, make the placement for smooth for better flow and aesthetics (by which I mean, don't use such a sharp angle for the triplets). For example, you could do something like this: http://puu.sh/cRGGu/bea929d726.jpg
  4. 01:10:999 (1) - Remove this NC to avoid messing up the HP-drain here.
  5. I already mentioned in my mod on Lanturn's diff that the gap between Hard and Insane is quite big. Hard doesn't have many jumps (and it should even have less when he applied my mod, because some were too big) but the Insane is full of them. There is no easy way to fix this. One possibility would be to map a difficulty in between Hard and Insane. Another one would be to tone Insane's jumps down, but that will be pretty difficult to do since the whole map is really jumpy. I'd recommend you to wait with this and first of all fix the rest of the mod. After that, contact me ingame and I'll talk with other BATs about their opinion on the difficulty spread and what could be a good solution.
fixed everything except for, well, everything else.

I like this mapset, but it definitely shouldn't have been bubbled yet. Sorry CDFA :( Please check the mod carefully and give a reason when you deny something. I'm sure we can get this done :)
done, for now at least
Last edited by samplefish , edited 1 time in total.
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
The unsnapped objects seem to be a Cutting-Edge Bug, sorry for that.
Lanturn
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3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn

samplefish wrote:

Desperate-kun wrote:

[Lanturn]

  1. Try OD6.5? OD7 seems a bit too much and is also the same that Insane uses >< Fine with me. Changed to 6.5
  2. 00:13:902 (1) - Maybe you could move this circle so that the 1/1-gap looks more different from the 3/2-gap? http://puu.sh/cRFXM/edc72e80d2.jpg I'm actually pretty attached to this as it is. It uses 0.20 spacing so I think it's fair enough.
  3. 00:19:128 (1) - Personally I don't like this slidershape, the red-anchors look a bit random to me o: I changed it to be something a bit uglier. hah!
  4. 00:46:999 (1,1,1) - Could you space them a bit more, so they don't overlap slightly? I guess. The overlap was to make the 1/1's a bit easier to tell apart
  5. 00:47:580 (1,1) - Both NCs are not really necessary for readability, but they mess up the HP-drain a bit. So it might be better to remove them.
  6. 00:55:322 (1) - ^ To me the NC's here really help show off the anti-jumps here. So I want to keep them
  7. 00:58:806 (4) - Maybe move to the axis, for symmetry? http://puu.sh/cRHes/4ad988ff28.jpg This is intentional as it helps prevent the player from thinking (4->5) is a jump.
  8. Personally I don't really like the hitsound samples, they are not so nice to listen to. But that might be only my opinion. ;_; I'm gonna go cry in a corner now. Blame that one map for making me have interest in hitsounding with table tennis sounds.
  9. The difficulty spread is bothering me in this mapset. The gaps between Normal / Hard as well as Hard / Insane seem really big. Hard is using some bigger jumps that need to be reduced imo in order to fit with lower difficulties:
    1. 00:03:644 (1,2,3) - Control+g
    2. 00:07:322 (2,3,1) - Tetris'd this in.
    3. 00:14:483 (1,2) and 00:16:031 (1,2) - Control+g
    4. 00:32:677 (3,1) - rotated.
    5. 01:08:096 (3,1) - I personally like this. keeping as is.
    6. 01:24:160 (2,3,4,5) - Done.
    7. 01:26:870 (3,1) - Keeping this. I really like it, and it fits nicely.
    8. Try to reduce these a bit, but if possible don't get rid of them completely, because of the gap with Insane ;w;
Diff has been reduced down to 3.07 now with most jumps gone. Hopefully enough to keep balance. This is a huge difficulty decrease as it used to be 3.08!

SPOILER
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Title:Gomen ne, Iiko ja Irarenai. (Anime ver.)
TitleUnicode:ごめんね、いいコじゃいられない。 (Anime ver.)
Artist:Sawai Miku
ArtistUnicode:沢井美空
Creator:samplefish
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Sampy. apply color fixes and what not that is needed to my diff cause I'm lazy and don't know what you did to your diffs yet. <3
samplefish
1,198 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
samplefish
everything is updated. getting ready to remap half of everything
Myxo
osu! Alumni
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Joined December 2012
Myxo
Recheck #1


  • General
  1. You still need to remove soft-sliderslide3, I tested to delete it and it seems unused.


  • Easy
  1. 00:04:418 (3) - This object is overlapping the HP-bar. Try to rearrange 00:03:644 (1,2,3) - somehow like this for example: http://puu.sh/d3wJr/e52efd169e.jpg
  2. 00:49:902 (3,4) - Might replace these with a slider? 4 consecutive 1/1-circles that lay on red ticks might be a bit too difficult for an Easy.
  3. 00:51:644 (1,2) - Try http://puu.sh/d3wQ5/40cfa02aa7.jpg to be consistent with 00:48:548 (1,2) - and get rid of the polarity issue.

I'll ask in the BAT Forum about the jumps in Insane. Next recheck (and hopefully final one) will include the conclusion of that discussion as well as more hitsound modding. It would not hurt to find some additional hitsound mods before I recheck.
samplefish
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Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
samplefish

Desperate-kun wrote:

Recheck #1


  • General
  1. You still need to remove soft-sliderslide3, I tested to delete it and it seems unused.


  • Easy
  1. 00:04:418 (3) - This object is overlapping the HP-bar. Try to rearrange 00:03:644 (1,2,3) - somehow like this for example: http://puu.sh/d3wJr/e52efd169e.jpg
  2. 00:49:902 (3,4) - Might replace these with a slider? 4 consecutive 1/1-circles that lay on red ticks might be a bit too difficult for an Easy.
  3. 00:51:644 (1,2) - Try http://puu.sh/d3wQ5/40cfa02aa7.jpg to be consistent with 00:48:548 (1,2) - and get rid of the polarity issue.

I'll ask in the BAT Forum about the jumps in Insane. Next recheck (and hopefully final one) will include the conclusion of that discussion as well as more hitsound modding. It would not hurt to find some additional hitsound mods before I recheck.
All fixed.
Rakuen
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Joined March 2013
Rakuen
Just taking quick look, no kds I guess 0.0

All of them are optional for your mappping stype, except the Normal is strongly suggested

For the hitsounds, I'd prefer more claps to be used especially at KIAI time to aid players when playing

Just my opinion, current "normal-hitnormal" is not suitable to be used as "clap" , mostly are used for constant beat / bass cover (drum / guitar)

Easy:
01:24:160 (3,4,5,6) - Prefer this to be slider (not strongly recommend tho) as mentioned by Desperate-Kun abt 00:49:902 (3,4) -

Normal:
01:10:031 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) - Unconsistency DS in this part, maybe try to unite them to 0.9x

Insane:
00:01:128 - There should be a circle here if you're following the guitar like 00:03:838 (2) - (kinda down beat)

After testing for a few times, the jumps are so far okay.

But maybe the jump distance of them could be reduced if you wish so.
Myxo
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Myxo
It's re-re-re-re-re-recheck time! o3o (After I forgot about it and had to be reminded *sigh*, I'm sorry)


  • Easy
  1. Rhythm and Placement seems fine now.


  • Normal
  1. HP and OD 4 for better spread?
  2. 00:00:548 (1,2,3) - Maybe make this movement a bit more round, to improve flow: http://puu.sh/dHAcy/17d8cdbad3.jpg
  3. 01:09:644 (5,1) - Spacing Error. (Was already mentioned by Rakuen)
  4. 01:12:935 (6,1) - ^
  5. Nothing else c:


  • Lanturn's Hard
  1. 01:25:709- & 01:26:289- & 01:27:064 - I think there should be regular Soft Finish, like you used for example at 01:20:870 -
  2. Nothing else.


  • Insane
  1. Remember that some of my suggestions reduce the jumps, in order to help the difficulty spread, which is absolutely necessary. I've asked several QATs and BATs for their opinion.
  2. 00:00:547 (1,2) - The flow between these might be a bit too sharp. Also, I'd recommend you to add a circle at 00:01:128 like Rakuen already mentioned. Something like this might work: http://puu.sh/dHAwN/9824c76cc1.jpg
  3. 00:01:322 (4,5,6,1) - This seems a bit too jumpy imo. The music is quite calm, the only strong note is 00:02:096 - So I think it would be better to use 1.3x spacing for this pattern except the jump that leads to 00:02:096
  4. 00:14:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This section also seems too jumpy / dense. It's mostly calm piano notes, so it would be logical to have less jumps and density than in the section before, for example. Also, 00:25:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) seems to be the exact same music, so it makes no sense to map them completely different. I'd recommend you to recreate something like you did in the second section, because it fits the atmosphere very well. Otherwise, please reduce these jumps 00:14:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)
  5. 00:23:386 (4,1,2,3) - Hmm, I think the flow could improve here if you move (1) and (2) a bit: http://puu.sh/dHARG/7acdc70cab.jpg
  6. 00:28:225 (4,1) - This jump is too extreme - ~2.5x Spacing, as used in the previous combo, seems more appropriate.
  7. 00:34:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern is really nice, but I fear the jumps are too big for the diff spread, so maybe you can just scale it a bit down (not by using the scale tool ofc) but keep the pattern?
  8. 00:40:806 (1,2,3,1) - Reduce the jumps a bit, to make it similar to 00:37:709 (1,2,3) - since it fits better imo.
  9. 00:46:418 (4) - Move to 324|188 for a perfect triangle 00:46:225 (3,4,5) - (nazi, but it would make the pattern look less random imo)
  10. 00:47:967 - I'd add a note for the strong (drum?) sound. Stacking it on 00:48:160 (3) would not be a problem I think.
  11. 00:51:257 (5,6) - Ctrl+G? And then switch hitsounds and make 00:51:064 (4,5,6) - spacing consistent.. Only a suggestion though.
  12. 00:58:031 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - Between each (1) and (2), the jumps are definitely too big for the spread. Please reduce them somehow.
  13. 01:00:160 (3) - I'd NC for obvious reasons c:
  14. 01:09:257 (3,4) - Too extreme jumps :<
  15. 01:22:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Again, the jumps need to be reduced a bit.. Suggestions: 01:22:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Could almost stay as it is imo, if you make some more clean patterns to keep the spacing relatively equal (for example two triangles which are rotated or something similar). 01:24:160 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - In the music, they are grouped in pairs, so a jump/antijump pattern would bring some variation and fit really nice here. For example: http://puu.sh/dHBAU/f80ecebeaa.jpg (I know this would not be your style, but I'm sure you get it from the example). Just try to keep the spacings consistent here, so it is clean and easier to play.
  16. 01:27:451 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce spacing just a little bit maybe.
  17. I don't want to force you to do these changes, since some may change the feeling and difficulty of the map alot. It is necessary for this mapset to be rankable though. If you don't want to change it, you could also map a Light Insane and keep this difficulty (almost) as it is. I tried to give another reason except the spread for some suggestions so they are more reasonable, but it wasn't always possible.

Yep, it's not the final recheck, since I need to leave now for christmas stuff and wasn't able to mod the hitsounding yet... This time I won't forget about it though.
Lanturn
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Lanturn
That mod took me a whole 1 minute 32 seconds to get through. ;_;

In that time I could have played a TV size map!

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232,120,41773,2,0,B|280:144|280:144|320:144,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,80,42160,6,0,P|311:144|352:208,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,276,42741,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,284,42935,2,0,B|100:284|100:284|60:312,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
28,236,43515,1,8,0:0:0:0:
152,132,43902,6,0,B|236:108|236:148|316:128,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
384,96,44483,2,0,P|392:56|376:16,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,140,44870,2,0,P|444:180|460:220,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,268,45257,6,0,B|312:292|312:252|232:272,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,240,45838,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,188,46031,2,0,B|288:168|348:192|348:192|384:176,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,140,46612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
177,79,46999,6,0,P|161:115|157:159,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
106,47,47580,6,0,P|89:83|85:123,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
29,16,48160,5,8,0:0:0:0:
12,168,48548,6,0,B|24:228|80:228|80:228|164:228,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,228,49128,2,0,B|279:228|279:228|335:228|347:288,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,336,49709,2,0,P|424:298|416:246,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
388,184,50096,6,0,B|376:144|324:144|324:144|228:144,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,116,50677,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,68,50870,1,0,0:0:0:0:
317,68,51064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
397,68,51257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
488,192,51644,6,0,P|448:212|424:248,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
500,272,52031,1,8,0:0:0:0:
360,216,52225,2,0,B|304:200|304:200|252:224|196:196,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,136,52806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,136,52999,1,2,0:0:0:0:
236,280,53193,6,0,B|181:276|152:248|152:248|72:248,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
1,137,53773,2,0,P|76:113|152:136,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,200,54354,1,8,0:0:0:0:
236,280,54548,6,0,L|324:296,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,248,55322,6,0,L|364:260,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,208,56096,5,8,0:0:0:0:
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472,132,56870,2,0,B|436:132|412:148|412:148|356:132|344:56,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,33,57451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
248,104,57644,6,0,P|268:164|364:236,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,252,58225,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,256,58612,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,332,58806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,252,59193,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,112,59580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,112,59773,1,8,0:0:0:0:
96,252,60160,6,0,P|104:312|132:344,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,228,60548,2,0,P|228:168|200:136,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
168,272,60935,6,0,P|236:308|304:272,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,212,61515,2,0,P|320:144|356:76,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
400,144,62096,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,216,62289,6,0,B|456:292|416:328|416:328|344:304,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,284,62870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
304,284,63064,1,2,0:0:0:0:
256,220,63257,2,0,L|164:220,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,156,63644,2,0,L|392:156,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,96,64031,6,0,B|164:96|164:96|124:100|100:148,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
64,196,64612,2,0,B|48:240|76:272|76:272|48:308|72:348,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,316,65193,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,268,65386,6,0,P|256:280|280:312,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,260,65773,2,0,P|344:248|320:216,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,180,66160,1,8,0:0:0:0:
460,224,66354,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,260,66548,1,2,0:0:0:0:
392,180,66741,2,0,P|376:136|400:92,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
468,140,67128,6,0,B|392:180|392:180|304:180,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,144,67709,2,0,P|200:120|180:76,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
120,184,68096,2,0,P|84:224|44:244,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
44,60,68483,6,0,L|120:124,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,164,68870,1,2,0:0:0:0:
180,244,69064,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,304,69257,1,8,0:0:0:0:
308,324,69451,2,0,P|376:296|408:204,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,148,70031,1,0,0:0:0:0:
338,92,70225,5,2,0:0:0:0:
260,108,70418,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,48,70612,2,0,P|184:84|188:139,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,196,70999,2,0,B|132:280|132:280|132:336,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,364,71580,6,0,P|272:328|344:368,1,160,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
420,353,72160,2,0,P|452:325|472:277,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,212,72548,1,2,0:0:0:0:
419,88,72741,1,8,0:0:0:0:
379,212,72935,1,8,0:0:0:0:
484,135,73128,1,8,0:0:0:0:
354,135,73322,6,0,B|276:135|240:120|240:120|192:136,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
124,168,73902,2,0,B|76:184|40:140|40:140|92:96,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,60,74483,1,8,0:0:0:0:
232,92,74677,6,0,P|280:116|384:88,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,48,75257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,48,75451,1,2,0:0:0:0:
460,152,75644,2,0,B|436:196|436:196|436:240,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,332,76031,2,0,B|360:288|360:288|360:244,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
279,252,76418,6,0,P|207:221|137:255,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
209,299,76999,2,0,B|209:179|209:179|184:135,1,160,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,116,77580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,68,77773,6,0,L|408:68,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
392,148,78160,2,0,L|484:180,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,252,78548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
380,296,78741,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,296,78935,1,2,0:0:0:0:
224,272,79128,2,0,L|144:272,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
68,240,79515,6,0,B|88:192|140:192|140:192|220:192,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
248,124,80096,2,0,P|276:152|292:204,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,176,80483,2,0,P|368:215|342:263,1,80,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,288,80870,6,0,P|395:316|344:332,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,300,81257,1,2,0:0:0:0:
212,264,81451,1,8,0:0:0:0:
136,284,81644,1,8,0:0:0:0:
100,356,81838,6,0,P|62:255|112:208,1,160,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,180,82418,2,0,L|240:180,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,124,82806,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,124,82999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
320,200,83193,6,0,L|412:200,1,80,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,140,83580,1,8,0:0:0:0:
456,140,83773,1,8,0:0:0:0:
496,212,83967,5,2,0:0:0:0:
452,280,84160,2,0,L|352:280,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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216,336,84935,2,0,L|216:244,1,80,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,228,85322,2,0,L|199:168,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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100,312,86870,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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396,92,87644,1,8,0:0:0:0:
328,192,87838,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,76,88031,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,76,88418,5,2,0:3:0:0:
samplefish
1,198 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
samplefish

Desperate-kun wrote:

It's re-re-re-re-re-recheck time! o3o (After I forgot about it and had to be reminded *sigh*, I'm sorry)

Insane


[*] Remember that some of my suggestions reduce the jumps, in order to help the difficulty spread, which is absolutely necessary. I've asked several QATs and BATs for their opinion.
[*] 00:00:547 (1,2) - The flow between these might be a bit too sharp. Also, I'd recommend you to add a circle at 00:01:128 like Rakuen already mentioned. Something like this might work: http://puu.sh/dHAwN/9824c76cc1.jpg remapped
[*] 00:01:322 (4,5,6,1) - This seems a bit too jumpy imo. The music is quite calm, the only strong note is 00:02:096 - So I think it would be better to use 1.3x spacing for this pattern except the jump that leads to 00:02:096 remapped
[*] 00:14:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - This section also seems too jumpy / dense. It's mostly calm piano notes, so it would be logical to have less jumps and density than in the section before, for example. Also, 00:25:322 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) seems to be the exact same music, so it makes no sense to map them completely different. I'd recommend you to recreate something like you did in the second section, because it fits the atmosphere very well. Otherwise, please reduce these jumps 00:14:483 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) remapped
[*] 00:23:386 (4,1,2,3) - Hmm, I think the flow could improve here if you move (1) and (2) a bit: http://puu.sh/dHARG/7acdc70cab.jpg changed
[*] 00:28:225 (4,1) - This jump is too extreme - ~2.5x Spacing, as used in the previous combo, seems more appropriate. okay
[*] 00:34:612 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - The pattern is really nice, but I fear the jumps are too big for the diff spread, so maybe you can just scale it a bit down (not by using the scale tool ofc) but keep the pattern? changed
[*] 00:40:806 (1,2,3,1) - Reduce the jumps a bit, to make it similar to 00:37:709 (1,2,3) - since it fits better imo. remapped
[*] 00:46:418 (4) - Move to 324|188 for a perfect triangle 00:46:225 (3,4,5) - (nazi, but it would make the pattern look less random imo) changed
[*] 00:47:967 - I'd add a note for the strong (drum?) sound. Stacking it on 00:48:160 (3) would not be a problem I think.added
[*] 00:51:257 (5,6) - Ctrl+G? And then switch hitsounds and make 00:51:064 (4,5,6) - spacing consistent.. Only a suggestion though. remapped
[*] 00:58:031 (1,2,1,2,1,1,2) - Between each (1) and (2), the jumps are definitely too big for the spread. Please reduce them somehow. changed
[*] 01:00:160 (3) - I'd NC for obvious reasons c: okay
[*] 01:09:257 (3,4) - Too extreme jumps :< changd
[*] 01:22:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - Again, the jumps need to be reduced a bit.. Suggestions: 01:22:419 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Could almost stay as it is imo, if you make some more clean patterns to keep the spacing relatively equal (for example two triangles which are rotated or something similar). changed01:24:160 (2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2) - In the music, they are grouped in pairs, so a jump/antijump pattern would bring some variation and fit really nice here. For example: http://puu.sh/dHBAU/f80ecebeaa.jpg (I know this would not be your style, but I'm sure you get it from the example). Just try to keep the spacings consistent here, so it is clean and easier to play. remapped
[*] 01:27:451 (1,2,3,4) - Reduce spacing just a little bit maybe. scaled
[*] I don't want to force you to do these changes, since some may change the feeling and difficulty of the map alot. It is necessary for this mapset to be rankable though. If you don't want to change it, you could also map a Light Insane and keep this difficulty (almost) as it is. I tried to give another reason except the spread for some suggestions so they are more reasonable, but it wasn't always possible.[/list][/notice]

Yep, it's not the final recheck, since I need to leave now for christmas stuff and wasn't able to mod the hitsounding yet... This time I won't forget about it though.
thanks for the recheck o/
samplefish
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Topic Starter
samplefish
remapped a few more parts

00:35:386 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
01:05:193 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) -
00:01:322 (3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
I should like finally...
Why does hitsounding even exist...
Be prepared
EDIT: I'll get you some mods for Insane because it needs to be tidied up a bit as well
Famous
404 posts
Joined April 2011
Famous
Came here because of Desperate-kun. I heard you need some mods for your Insane diff. ;)

Insane
  1. 00:01:128 - Feels like a note is missing.
  2. 00:02:289 - Also a note is missing.
  3. 00:15:064 (3) - Improve blanket.
  4. 00:20:677 (1) - NC isn't really necessary.
  5. 00:25:322 (1) - That cricle doesn't flow right to me. Just move it a bit more to right. Suggestion: x:440 - y: 128.
  6. 00:26:677 (4) - Add NC and remove NC 00:26:870 (1).
  7. 00:28:225 (5) - Same as above.
  8. 00:31:515 (1) - Make that slider more like this
    Picture
  9. 00:35:386 (3) - Move that circle to x:156 - y:100 for better flow.
  10. 00:37:709 (1) - Try to blanket that slider with 00:38:096 (2).
  11. 00:38:289 (3) - Improve blanket.
  12. 00:39:451 (2) - Also improve blanket.
  13. 00:41:386 (3) - Not a perfect blanket.
  14. 01:00:548 (2) - Same as above. Improve blanket.
  15. 01:04:612 (3) - This blanket is almost good. Just move the middle and last sliderpoint one grid left.
  16. 01:06:741 (6) - Ctrl + g
  17. 01:07:128 (1) - Improve blanket.
  18. 01:13:322 (1) - Blanket it to 01:12:741 (5)?
  19. 01:16:999 (3) - That's a really weird shaped slider.
  20. 01:23:967 (5) - Add NC and remove NC 01:24:160 (1).

Good luck! :3
pkhg
2,507 posts
Joined May 2010
pkhg
omg man I love this <3

Take my star and GL!! :D
AnreFM
781 posts
Joined September 2012
AnreFM
Hey there Samplefish and Lanturn! ヾ(　´∀｀)ノ

So uh Nao called me here and here I am :3 I'll try to mention some neating stuffs and others which will help tidy your Insane up! Again, most of these will be about some placings and shapes, so please don't mind it if it's way intentional :>

Let's go!


If there's anything unclear here or if the links are messed up somewhere, please state so and I'll try my best to explain it better \o/

[INSANE]
  1. 00:03:257 (4,5) - Consider to ctrl g this two? It will play smoother this way imo
  2. 00:09:064 (3) - uh what's with the spacing here lol. The anti-jump here doesn't match with anything in the background music, use a normal spacing here ouo
  3. 00:08:289 (1) - eh this slider feels a bit too curved compared with the rest of the sliders in the map and it kinda looked not neat as a result :< Consider to make it smoother like this?
    SPOILER
    It should match well with the sliders on the rest of the map :3
  4. 00:10:612 (4,5) - Consider changing the slider shape like this so that the flow become better?
    SPOILER
    A circular flow would fit better for here imo owo
  5. 00:18:354 (3) - hmm I feel that the clap at the tail is a bit off, since it's a passive hitsound :< I think making the rhythm like this should make the hitsounds more emphasized and powerful, also I think that this silent-ish part needs to have more to click imo :b
    SPOILER
  6. 00:19:902 (1) - How about making the SV slower here to emphasize the silence part? 0.80 should do nice here :3
  7. 00:21:838 (5) - Consider moving it a bit more downward so that the whole 00:21:257 (2,3,4,5) - creates a neat square pattern like this?
    SPOILER
  8. 00:22:612 (2,4) - eh As these two is still on the same combo(and is parallel at that), consider changing (4)'s shape to be similar with (2)? It'll look much neater :3
  9. 00:24:935 (5) - Consider making them a blanket like this?
    SPOILER
    The note on 00:25:322 (1) - can also be stacked on 00:24:354 (3) -'s head :3
  10. 00:30:741 (1,2,3) - hmm I don't really think these 3 circles fit here imo, considering how the background music is different from 00:19:902 (1) -, this part's guiter is stretched unlike the previous one. So yeah, consider changing the rhythm into something like this to emphasize that stretch sound
    SPOILER
  11. 00:32:483 (5) - Considering how jumpy the map is on various parts, having this part without jump feels a bit weird imo, especially since it's like a stop point before the 00:33:064 (1) - note. So yeah, I think adding a jump here would fit better for the gameplay; using ctrl g works nice :3
  12. 00:33:451 (2) - eh the fact that the loud drum on the tail isn't clickable doesn't play really nice imo, consider changing the rhythm into something like this instead
    SPOILER
  13. 00:48:548 (1) - As in 00:08:289 (1) -. This slider doesn't have to blanket the far 00:48:935 (2) -(I assumed you're going for that), just make it more smoother and less curvy, the current one looked untidy. Copying 00:47:580 (1) - looks nice owo
  14. 01:11:967 (1) - Consider adding a few soft-whistle(or normal claps) on this part since I think the drums are a bit dull here when it goes with the background music owo
  15. 01:16:999 (3) - ctr g will make the flow much smoother instead of the current one imo :3 Also the shape is actually okay but is all that points necessary? o.o Consider to remove a few to make the turn smoother
  16. 01:28:418 (1) - I personally feel that the ending here is a bit anti-climatic(though considering how the song ended, it can't be helped much lol), so yeah consider to even lower the volume here to something around 30-40% as I feel it's still a bit too loud compared to the vocal here
  17. Consider spicing the hitsoounds on the kiai parts beside using all the clap and finish every 2 stanza, Try to make a difference between the one in the verse and chorus :< Using some soft-whistle or claps patterns should work nice, also Lanturn's table tennis thingy sounds nice too imo, consider using that :3
I guess that's all from me, hope it helped! The map plays pretty nice already, it just needs some tweaking on the patterns and stuffs that I already mentioned. Good Luck!
samplefish
1,198 posts
Joined November 2010
Topic Starter
samplefish

-Famous- wrote:

Came here because of Desperate-kun. I heard you need some mods for your Insane diff. ;)

Insane
  1. 00:01:128 - Feels like a note is missing.
  2. 00:02:289 - Also a note is missing.
  3. 00:15:064 (3) - Improve blanket.
  4. 00:20:677 (1) - NC isn't really necessary.
  5. 00:25:322 (1) - That cricle doesn't flow right to me. Just move it a bit more to right. Suggestion: x:440 - y: 128.
  6. 00:26:677 (4) - Add NC and remove NC 00:26:870 (1). i dont see why
  7. 00:28:225 (5) - Same as above. ^
  8. 00:31:515 (1) - Make that slider more like this
    Picture
  9. 00:35:386 (3) - Move that circle to x:156 - y:100 for better flow.
  10. 00:37:709 (1) - Try to blanket that slider with 00:38:096 (2).
  11. 00:38:289 (3) - Improve blanket.
  12. 00:39:451 (2) - Also improve blanket.
  13. 00:41:386 (3) - Not a perfect blanket.
  14. 01:00:548 (2) - Same as above. Improve blanket.
  15. 01:04:612 (3) - This blanket is almost good. Just move the middle and last sliderpoint one grid left.
  16. 01:06:741 (6) - Ctrl + g i like this better
  17. 01:07:128 (1) - Improve blanket.
  18. 01:13:322 (1) - Blanket it to 01:12:741 (5)?
  19. 01:16:999 (3) - That's a really weird shaped slider. i think its ok
  20. 01:23:967 (5) - Add NC and remove NC 01:24:160 (1). feel like i should nc the doubles.

Good luck! :3
thanks for the mod! no comment is fixed
samplefish
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samplefish

AnreFM wrote:

Hey there Samplefish and Lanturn! ヾ(　´∀｀)ノ

So uh Nao called me here and here I am :3 I'll try to mention some neating stuffs and others which will help tidy your Insane up! Again, most of these will be about some placings and shapes, so please don't mind it if it's way intentional :>

Let's go!


If there's anything unclear here or if the links are messed up somewhere, please state so and I'll try my best to explain it better \o/

[INSANE]
  1. 00:03:257 (4,5) - Consider to ctrl g this two? It will play smoother this way imo i think theyre fine
  2. 00:09:064 (3) - uh what's with the spacing here lol. The anti-jump here doesn't match with anything in the background music, use a normal spacing here ouo remapped
  3. 00:08:289 (1) - eh this slider feels a bit too curved compared with the rest of the sliders in the map and it kinda looked not neat as a result :< Consider to make it smoother like this?
    SPOILER
    It should match well with the sliders on the rest of the map :3 remapped
  4. 00:10:612 (4,5) - Consider changing the slider shape like this so that the flow become better? i like the current better
    SPOILER
    A circular flow would fit better for here imo owo
  5. 00:18:354 (3) - hmm I feel that the clap at the tail is a bit off, since it's a passive hitsound :< I think making the rhythm like this should make the hitsounds more emphasized and powerful, also I think that this silent-ish part needs to have more to click imo :b i dont thihnk its a problem
    SPOILER
  6. 00:19:902 (1) - How about making the SV slower here to emphasize the silence part? 0.80 should do nice here :3 silence is already emphasized by the no notes part, guitar picks it back up pretty strongly
  7. 00:21:838 (5) - Consider moving it a bit more downward so that the whole 00:21:257 (2,3,4,5) - creates a neat square pattern like this?
    SPOILER
    sure
  8. 00:22:612 (2,4) - eh As these two is still on the same combo(and is parallel at that), consider changing (4)'s shape to be similar with (2)? It'll look much neater :3 okay
  9. 00:24:935 (5) - Consider making them a blanket like this?
    SPOILER
    The note on 00:25:322 (1) - can also be stacked on 00:24:354 (3) -'s head :3 sure
  10. 00:30:741 (1,2,3) - hmm I don't really think these 3 circles fit here imo, considering how the background music is different from 00:19:902 (1) -, this part's guiter is stretched unlike the previous one. So yeah, consider changing the rhythm into something like this to emphasize that stretch sound remapped to your example
    SPOILER
  11. 00:32:483 (5) - Considering how jumpy the map is on various parts, having this part without jump feels a bit weird imo, especially since it's like a stop point before the 00:33:064 (1) - note. So yeah, I think adding a jump here would fit better for the gameplay; using ctrl g works nice :3 i dont know, i think its alright
  12. 00:33:451 (2) - eh the fact that the loud drum on the tail isn't clickable doesn't play really nice imo, consider changing the rhythm into something like this instead remapped
    SPOILER
  13. 00:48:548 (1) - As in 00:08:289 (1) -. This slider doesn't have to blanket the far 00:48:935 (2) -(I assumed you're going for that), just make it more smoother and less curvy, the current one looked untidy. Copying 00:47:580 (1) - looks nice owo wasnt going for that, i think the curve plays well.
  14. 01:11:967 (1) - Consider adding a few soft-whistle(or normal claps) on this part since I think the drums are a bit dull here when it goes with the background music owo okay
  15. 01:16:999 (3) - ctr g will make the flow much smoother instead of the current one imo :3 Also the shape is actually okay but is all that points necessary? o.o Consider to remove a few to make the turn smoother wow nice.
  16. 01:28:418 (1) - I personally feel that the ending here is a bit anti-climatic(though considering how the song ended, it can't be helped much lol), so yeah consider to even lower the volume here to something around 30-40% as I feel it's still a bit too loud compared to the vocal here okay
  17. Consider spicing the hitsoounds on the kiai parts beside using all the clap and finish every 2 stanza, Try to make a difference between the one in the verse and chorus :< Using some soft-whistle or claps patterns should work nice, also Lanturn's table tennis thingy sounds nice too imo, consider using that :3
I guess that's all from me, hope it helped! The map plays pretty nice already, it just needs some tweaking on the patterns and stuffs that I already mentioned. Good Luck!

thanks for the mod! very helpful stuff!!
Okoratu
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Okoratu
A3elkjd;lsaasdlkjrasd,fmn

i think this song is quite annoying how can you sit through and map it a
I'm here thanks to Nao.

General
  1. normal-slidertick3 is a fucking pingpong ball hitting a table i'm so done already
  2. the 1 ms before the soft-hitclap doesn't really do much, but well it's a wave so it's your choice if you want to cut out the barely anything from it or not
  3. soft-hitfinish3 thing looks like it's cut off in the end i'd recommend having it fade out
  4. soft-hitwhistle is the same with fade out thing except that this has like yea 1 second of silence which boosts filesize to 216 kb lel
  5. Sony Music Records tag no? The rest of these people is tagged in there, you could also add the kanji for them because artist and title use Kanji things but tags don't so why
  6. 01:12:354 - would end the kiai on this held down guitar here, to have a more noticable kiai flash thing or in 01:11:580 - idunno

Insane
  1. AR 9 feels too fast for your object density and 155 bpm imo, 8.7 or 8.8 is less stressful for this imo
  2. i thought i saw some circles which were intended to stack but didn't due to weird stack leniency but lowering ar seems to solve that thing idk
  3. 00:02:870 (4) - this one looks like it's a bit over-curved in comparison to all other curvy sliders in this part, would reduce curve thing
  4. 00:04:418 (4,5) - i don't really get why you suddenly reduce the spacing between these 2 so drastically, like moving this circle up and 00:04:999 (1) - a bit to the left is smoother to follow imo
  5. 00:15:451 (4,5,6) - sound like they have same vocal pitch but 00:15:451 (4) - is pretty close to 3 and 00:15:838 (6) - pretty far away from 1 which might make this seem like slightly random jumps
  6. 00:19:902 (1) - having it as 3 circles would represent the strong sounds in 00:20:096 - and 00:20:289 - better
  7. 00:22:128 - is mapping the end of a vocal as a circle really necessary, i would remove the circle and make it an 1/2 more jumpy thing
  8. 00:22:806 - such a strong sound on a repeat, i would prefer to click this similarly to 00:16:418 (2,3) - rhythm wise
  9. 00:33:451 (2) - jump and edge in flow could be unnecessarily rhough for this rather smooth thing in the music
  10. 00:37:225 (4,5,6,7,8) - do you know why this stream feels a bit weird to play? there are multiple reasons why
    1. it doesn't start on a white tick but on a blue tick which is uhh not what players are used to polarity wise here
    2. the exact same sounds are mapped as 1/2 sliders in 00:36:548 (2,3) -
    in concluseion i would prefer the following rhythm to cover these the way you seemed to want while being less awkward:
    i'm just a suggestion, ignore me if you don't like me
    note that this ignores same sound in 00:36:451 - if it doesn't feel right the way depicted, try adding a circle there before disregarding suggestion
  11. 00:38:289 (3) - i can hardly tolerate how this and 00:41:386 (3) - skip stuff you would put normal sampleset on normally
  12. 00:42:935 (4) - but this onee ignores a sound that is pretty strong, i would rather see this one mapped at leasttt, doing thing like 00:39:838 (3,4) - would be a bit better here yea and
  13. 00:52:225 (3) - would skrew this stack here and do more spacing because 00:51:451 (6,1) - does same for equally strong vocal
  14. 00:55:322 (3,4,5,6) - would space this a bit further apart from 00:55:128 (2) - to match sspacing to 00:56:096 (7) - betterer yes
  15. 01:13:709 (2) - making spacing more even here would make direction change in flow in 01:13:902 (3) - less awkward
  16. also i think using 01:13:902 (3) - goes against your mapping vocals with red tick slider policy because held vocal ends on the white tick in 01:14:096 - a new held one starts in 01:14:289 - which is currently sliderend which is ugh
  17. the above might be reason why 01:14:483 (4) - feels slightly odd to play to me
  18. 01:16:999 (3) - explain how this slight bend thing looks neat
    if you're into weird slidershapes that bend somewhat these might be nicer


    a

other minor stuff

i do this in boxes because it's one of my first times modding something right
comboing
  1. 00:04:806 (5,1) - would swap these because 00:05:773 (1,2) - are the same thing and comboed differently, right?
  2. 00:10:999 (5,1) - ^
  3. 00:41:967 (1,2) - NC on 2 would make much more sense with 00:38:870 (4,1) - i guess
  4. 01:25:709 (3) - add one because 01:24:160 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - are all 2 object combos so the last 2 object combo should not have more than 2 objectss in its combo rightttt
  5. 01:27:451 (1) - would consider removing this one it goes slightly against your vocal mapping stuff to nc these

Hitsounds
  1. 00:00:354 (1) - using normal sampleset for whole slider is sounding better to me
  2. 00:00:548 - would use soft additions and normal sampleset for these because i think this fits song better because soft-hitfinish doesn't have some kind of fade out and ends earlier and that's what the finishes in song do, they don't really fade out they just end so using soft additions for these objects might be nice:
    1. 00:02:096 (1) -
    2. 00:03:644 (1) -
    3. 00:04:999 (1,2) -
    4. 00:11:193 (1,2) - also these don't follow same hitsounding as 00:04:999 (1,2) - while they probably should
    5. 00:12:160 (2) -
    6. 00:12:935 -
  3. 00:00:741 - should have normal sample set due to 00:03:838 (2) -
  4. 00:07:322 (3) - normal sampleset
  5. 00:08:289 (1) - normal set on head
  6. 00:10:612 - dunno why you use normal sampleset
  7. 00:12:548 - head should have normal set
  8. 00:17:580 (1) - missing normal set
  9. 00:20:289 - having no hitsound to cover this one is quite sad
  10. 00:22:806 - normal sampleset missing thanks
  11. 00:23:773 (1) - normal sampleset on head
  12. 00:33:064 (1) - normal sampleset on head
  13. 00:36:548 (2,3) - just saying that normal sampleset on both heads would make sense
  14. 00:37:321 (5) - ^ and hereee
  15. 00:38:483 - yes skipping this sounds even worse at lower music volume a
  16. 00:39:257 - normal sampleset here
  17. 00:39:451 - no normal sampleset here please
  18. 00:39:838 (3) - whistle on head compliments the red tick sound nicely
  19. 00:42:160 (2) - replacing normal sampleset with auto and setting addition to normal makes more sense here
  20. 00:42:354 - adding normal sampleset please
  21. 00:45:257- something about switching the normal to additions and keeping sampleset on auto
  22. 00:46:031 - if you added whistle to 00:39:838 - do here as well
  23. 00:47:193 - , 00:47:773 - , 00:48:160 - soft finishes are probably nicer than that
  24. 00:47:580 - normal sampleset thanks
  25. 00:57:451 - normal sampleset
  26. 01:01:128 - removing normal sampleset here would be consistent
  27. 01:02:677 (2,4) - sound like they could use either normal sampleset things or other hitsounds specially for them as well
  28. 01:04:806 - ): ):
  29. 01:05:773 (2,4) - are the same as 01:02:677 (2,4) -
  30. 01:10:612 (3) - normal sampleset idk not ssure
  31. 01:11:580 (2) - but sure that this one should havee normal sampleset
  32. 01:18:548 (3) - is similar to 01:02:677 (2,4) -
  33. 01:22:806 (3,4) - some kind of soft finishes in addition would be super cool
  34. 01:24:160 (1,1,1,1) - ^
  35. 01:28:418 (1) - would not place a whistle for a vocalist exhaling.................

HoLy HiTsOUnDS
Edit: feels like i missed some stuff regarding hitsounds, if you encounter one that would make sense with everything else (the pattern should be really really obvious after going throug this) feel free do add dis

this needs a few more mods i might miss things
Eni
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Hi samplefish / lanturn / okoratu

I mapped the full version of this song a while ago (at least part of it), but never submitted it. :D So please take my suggestions seriously as I mapped this song as well lol
Love the background btw
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:354 - Remove the clap and add a finish. The clap does not sound right with the music, and a finish would make more sense since you put one at 00:05:386 -.
  2. 00:06:741 (1) - Remove finish
  3. 00:13:902 (2) - Use 50% Sampleset Auto clap here. It sounds much better.
  4. 00:36:548 -, 00:37:322 - Double click to select the Slider Tail and use Clap with Sampleset Auto.
  5. 00:51:644 (1) - Add clap
  6. 01:00:548 - Use 80% Sampleset Auto clap here.
  7. 01:10:999 (2) - Change to 1/1 slider and add another 1/1 slider at 01:11:580 (3) - to follow the song.


    ~
  8. 01:10:225 -, 01:10:612 - 01:10:999 -, 01:11:386 - Use Normal Sampleset with Whistle here.
  9. 01:04:999 -, 01:01:902 -, 01:08:096 -, 01:14:289 -, 01:17:386 -, 01:20:483 - Add Sampleset Auto clap
  10. 01:19:515 (1) - Add Finish to match 01:07:128 (1) -
  11. 01:22:612 (1) -, 01:23:386 (2) -, 01:24:548 (4) -, 01:25:322 (6) - Add clap to help the player hear during emphasis part of song.
  12. 01:28:031 - Add Sampleset Auto clap here.
  13. If you use the hitsound suggestions in Easy (which I recommend), remember to apply them to other difficulties as well.
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:418 (3) - Turn this into a 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat slider because there is an emphasis beat at 00:04:806 - that should be mapped.
  2. 00:09:838 (1,2) - I think you should turn this into a 1/1 slider.
  3. 01:02:289 (3,5) - Personal preference, I would not use two sliders facing the same way like this. Try using a different curve for slider 5.
  4. 01:22:806 -, 01:23:580 - Because this is Normal you should map this part to help transition from Easy -> Normal and Normal -> Hard. I suggest using 1/2 sliders.
[Lanturn's Hard]
  1. What Okoratu said about normal-slidertick3
Good luck :)
Myxo
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Mhm I should have realised earlier that it's better to search for more mods here than trying to do this alone.
to samplefish: Please contact me via PM when these are applied!
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00:19:515 - <3
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Okoratu wrote:

A3elkjd;lsaasdlkjrasd,fmn

i think this song is quite annoying how can you sit through and map it a :D
I'm here thanks to Nao.

General
  1. normal-slidertick3 is a fucking pingpong ball hitting a table i'm so done already idk what do to hitsonds/color]
  2. the 1 ms before the soft-hitclap doesn't really do much, but well it's a wave so it's your choice if you want to cut out the barely anything from it or not
  3. soft-hitfinish3 thing looks like it's cut off in the end i'd recommend having it fade out
  4. soft-hitwhistle is the same with fade out thing except that this has like yea 1 second of silence which boosts filesize to 216 kb lel
  5. Sony Music Records tag no? The rest of these people is tagged in there, you could also add the kanji for them because artist and title use Kanji things but tags don't so why
  6. 01:12:354 - would end the kiai on this held down guitar here, to have a more noticable kiai flash thing or in 01:11:580 - idunno

a[/list][/notice]

[box=Hitsounds]
  1. 01:04:806 - ): ): [color=#008000]:D

this needs a few more mods i might miss things
you take care of my map better than i do <3

everything is changed/fixed/remapped, except for those mentioned because idk how to file 1ms change and i like the slider

thanks so much okokokoko \o/
samplefish
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will look at porject railguns in a bit
Okoratu
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zzzzzzzzzzz
00:41:580 - missing normal sampleset
00:42:935 (3,4,5) - bg sounds are same as 00:39:451 (2,3) - so same hitsounding would sense yes (whistle on red ticks)
00:46:418 (4) - dunno if this is missing whistle due to aforementioned
00:47:773 - and 00:48:160 - shoiuld at least have some kind of special sound i guesssss
01:14:096 - you miss normal sampleset
01:21:838 - mpssdf;kl'ekjasd^
01:22:225 - jlka;sejrla
samplefish
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Project Railgun wrote:

Hi samplefish / lanturn / okoratu

I mapped the full version of this song a while ago (at least part of it), but never submitted it. :D So please take my suggestions seriously as I mapped this song as well lol
Love the background btw
[Easy]
  1. 00:06:354 - Remove the clap and add a finish. The clap does not sound right with the music, and a finish would make more sense since you put one at 00:05:386 -. k
  2. 00:06:741 (1) - Remove finish k
  3. 00:13:902 (2) - Use 50% Sampleset Auto clap here. It sounds much better. dont think so
  4. 00:36:548 -, 00:37:322 - Double click to select the Slider Tail and use Clap with Sampleset Auto. dont think so
  5. 00:51:644 (1) - Add clap nope
  6. 01:00:548 - Use 80% Sampleset Auto clap here. definitely no
  7. 01:10:999 (2) - Change to 1/1 slider and add another 1/1 slider at 01:11:580 (3) - to follow the song. i like this better


    ~
  8. 01:10:225 -, 01:10:612 - 01:10:999 -, 01:11:386 - Use Normal Sampleset with Whistle here. dont like whistle
  9. 01:04:999 -, 01:01:902 -, 01:08:096 -, 01:14:289 -, 01:17:386 -, 01:20:483 - Add Sampleset Auto clap no thanks
  10. 01:19:515 (1) - Add Finish to match 01:07:128 (1) - okay
  11. 01:22:612 (1) -, 01:23:386 (2) -, 01:24:548 (4) -, 01:25:322 (6) - Add clap to help the player hear during emphasis part of song. added auto finishes
  12. 01:28:031 - Add Sampleset Auto clap here. nope
  13. If you use the hitsound suggestions in Easy (which I recommend), remember to apply them to other difficulties as well.
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:418 (3) - Turn this into a 1/1 slider or a 1/2 repeat slider because there is an emphasis beat at 00:04:806 - that should be mapped. ok
  2. 00:09:838 (1,2) - I think you should turn this into a 1/1 slider. its ok
  3. 01:02:289 (3,5) - Personal preference, I would not use two sliders facing the same way like this. Try using a different curve for slider 5. ok
  4. 01:22:806 -, 01:23:580 - Because this is Normal you should map this part to help transition from Easy -> Normal and Normal -> Hard. I suggest using 1/2 sliders. i think this is alaright
[Lanturn's Hard]
  1. What Okoratu said about normal-slidertick3 ok
Good luck :)

thanks for the mod!
samplefish
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updated with oko and railguns stuff
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Wow you're alive!
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[Insane]

00:22:612 - Missing Clap.

After fixing that, please copy hitsounding over to Normal and Easy >w< (By using this)

[Easy]

00:23:773 (1) - Remove NC, it seems unnecessary since this object kinda belongs to the previous ones

I think this is finally ready! Call me~
samplefish
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fixed all above,

remapped on insane 00:23:386 (5,1,2,3,4,5,1) -
pkhg
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goww sampleturn <3

/me runs
samplefish
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pkhg pls
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[Insane, Normal, Easy]

00:39:064 - Finish with Normal Additions please, for consistency with 00:42:160 -

Sorry for missing that ><
samplefish
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updated
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After a very short amount of time
Okoratu
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i hope you're ready
General
  1. I spent so much time on your insane but never looked at the other diffs.
  2. you can click this, not sure if Sony Music records should be a tag or not
  3. your difficulties should all end in the same spot blah blah, insane and hard end in 01:28:418 - while easy and normal do in 01:28:031 - so adding like 1 circle in each diff with an 1/1 gap should be k or not asdf

Insane
  2. 01:07:902 (3,4,1) - this pattern's flow is rather ugh like could you not fuck the overall spacing by doing a tight blanket thing with this, instead moving something like this or remapping the pattern or whatever so that it at least flows mroe smoothly
  3. 00:04:806 (1) - shouldn't this have normal sampleset cuz 00:05:773 (1) -
  4. 00:13:902 (2) - could make this normal sampleset with soft additions in order to have the bass as well as the cymbals as feedback dunno if you like was just idea
  5. 00:43:709 (6) - why is there a whistle o.o the previous pattern did only 00:39:451 (2,3) - 2 whistles on the 2 red ticks there
  6. 01:11:386 (1) - adding normal sampleset cuz thing has a bass sound would be dunno fitting ?
how is this so short

Lanturn
  1. sup
  2. 00:07:322 (2) - why do you think this slight edge in the end of this slider looks visually appealing like really why
  3. 00:19:515 - there's not even anything like that in the music, i would decrease the volume of this tick to like 40-60% having a ping pong ball with 90% volume hit the table without any apparent sound being there is meh
  4. 00:20:289 (3) - this made me laugh, nice
  5. 00:30:354 - is same as yes also am i the only one annoyed about the slidertick of this slider not being in the middle of it of it like it's slightly shifted to the right
  6. 01:05:967 - 01:06:160 - 01:06:354 - should use same hitsounding as 01:02:289 (1,2,3) -
  7. btw i can't really comprehend what the hitsounding of 01:06:354 (4,5,6) - is suposed to follow but uhh would just do same as 01:03:257 (4,5) - maybe
  8. 01:17:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is also inconsistent with what i suggested above and with 01:05:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so uhh no clue what you doing
  9. 01:16:418 (1) - just saying blanket because you seem to do perfect ones in 01:21:838 (1) - so yes this could be better then
  10. 01:21:838 (1,2) - swapping NC would make so much more sense with 01:23:193 (1,2,3) -
  11. 01:28:418 (1) - would either make it more quiet or just using the soft-hitnormal for this instead of a drum hitwhistle, as it's just her exhaling and no cymbal thing
what

Normal
  1. 00:04:806 (4) - replacing it with just a circle in 00:04:999 - to not have the finish on the sliderend so much would be cool
  2. 00:19:902 (1) - easy doesn't have a 1 object combo here so removing the nc could be yes blabla save 2 measure comboing
  3. 00:23:386 (7,1,2) - i fucking hate you choosing that rhythm so you can't NC in 00:23:773 - but yes the current thing is the only thing making any sense so don't change it.
  4. 00:30:741 (1) - if you removed first 1 object combo remove this as well
  5. 00:56:677 (2,3) - this is literally teh onleh stack in this diff why don't you unstack asdf or stack some other notes but just having one stack in entire diff is random as ehlll
  6. 01:00:160 (3) - idk if you ever had a nc here or if someone told you to remove it but the only vocals without instruments surely don't belong in the same category as 00:59:193 (1,2) - drum crash things yes
  7. 01:28:418 - don't forget
most of this is my personal interpretation and it's up to you to agree or not since you rhythm this stuff rather weirdly by followling the strange vocals

Easy
  1. 00:49:902 (3,5) - using the same slider making this a symmetrical pattern would look so much betterrrrrrrr
  2. 01:28:418 - don't forget
mapping most red tick vocals is not the best idea for the easier diffs because it gives you a lot of weird rhythmss but you seem to manage that just fine

00:13:902 - in easy and normal is missing the volume decrease which makes so much sense in the insane samplefish p l s
00:47:193 - has a cymbal crash in the background thing but no hitsound anywhere


objectively i'd say this is all kinda messy dunno there are no real reasons to pop the bubble though i'm just concerned whether you really want to push it forward as it is now or not
Lanturn
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Lanturn
But I love the slider ticks :(

I'll be home in like an hour

Okoratu wrote:

Lanturn
  1. sup
  2. 00:07:322 (2) - why do you think this slight edge in the end of this slider looks visually appealing like really why The definition of "ART" is unique among every person in the world. I myself don't like it, so it was changed by samplefish.
  3. 00:19:515 - there's not even anything like that in the music, i would decrease the volume of this tick to like 40-60% having a ping pong ball with 90% volume hit the table without any apparent sound being there is meh I personally wanted to keep this as is, because it needs to match the volume of the other ping pong noises around it.
  4. 00:20:289 (3) - this made me laugh, nice I'm pretty sure it was just you headdesking.
  5. 00:30:354 - is same as yes also am i the only one annoyed about the slidertick of this slider not being in the middle of it of it like it's slightly shifted to the right I know right? I hate it when people can't make their sliders bounce right on the tick like this. Gonna go smack some sense into the mapper here.
  6. 01:05:967 - 01:06:160 - 01:06:354 - should use same hitsounding as 01:02:289 (1,2,3) -
  7. btw i can't really comprehend what the hitsounding of 01:06:354 (4,5,6) - is suposed to follow but uhh would just do same as 01:03:257 (4,5) - maybe
  8. 01:17:773 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is also inconsistent with what i suggested above and with 01:05:386 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - so uhh no clue what you doing Trying to make logic out of someone who uses ping pong balls as hitsounds.. Yeah good luck. I honestly listened through all of these, even if they aren't consistent, they still 'sound good' enough to me. I like the variety it gives, even if it isn't consistent.
  9. 01:16:418 (1) - just saying blanket because you seem to do perfect ones in 01:21:838 (1) - so yes this could be better then ok done. No funny stuff here :(
  10. 01:21:838 (1,2) - swapping NC would make so much more sense with 01:23:193 (1,2,3) - lol. I have no idea why I NC'd this section how it is. I fixed it up.
  11. 01:28:418 (1) - would either make it more quiet or just using the soft-hitnormal for this instead of a drum hitwhistle, as it's just her exhaling and no cymbal thing
Blame CDFA. I had it without a hitsound before! Actually I prefer it without the hitsounds myself.. so yeah, changed back.
what I hope you find your sanity soon :(
Thank you <3

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samplefish
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samplefish
Hi oko

I know my work is really sloppy, but i think it is my best. Tbh idk how everyone else poops out perfect maps ;_;

Will fix tonite or tomorrow
samplefish
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samplefish
well for the record everything above is applied
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