Hi, sorry for delayed >.<
from my modding queue :3
[General]
- In start part, you can add some notes, which I suggest that add a spinner at 00:08:043 ~ 00:11:043.
- 00:42:543 (1,2) - You didn't add circle at 00:44:043 - , and I felt these weird flow, too. So I suggest that add a circle at 00:44:043 ,and make pattern of (1,2) like this picture
- 00:44:418 (1,2) - This is next to my previous suggestion. When I compared between flow and rhythm, I felt these sliders don't fit with the rhythm. So please make pattern of these sliders like this picture, and switch NC between both sliders, too. I think these would more fit with the rhythm than.
- 00:54:918 (1) - Maybe make like this picture would look better.
- 00:57:168 (4) - I suggest that use a circle at here and add 1/1 slider at 00:57:543 instead would more fit with the rhythm than.
- 01:24:543 (1) - Try to make this slider blanket with 01:24:168 better than this.
- 01:25:293 (2,3) - I can make these notes better than by try to make (3) blanket with slider tail of 01:24:543 (1) like this picture. Another one, I think that move (2) to stack with slider head of (3) would be better than.
- 01:56:043 (3) - Try to male this slider blanket better than.
- 02:14:043 (2) - Move this to stack with slider tail of 02:11:793 (5). It would look better.
- 02:30:542 (1,2) - Please remove NC on (1). I think it's unnecessary to use, and maybe move these note like this picture would look and flow better.
- 02:35:875 (3) - In 02:36:208 - , please use N:C2 to cause this slider 1st tick follow the rhythm.
- 02:46:541 (3) - Use regular tick hitsound on 02:47:208.
- 02:53:542 (1,2,3,4,5) - These cause newbie player confused. So please make these are pentagonal like this picture. I think it can fix the problem about confusion.
- 03:03:292 (7) - Please end this slider at 03:03:854 - to follow the rhythm.
- 03:23:542 (1) - Using finish hitsound may too loud. I think that remove it would be better.
- 03:38:917 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Perhaps, I think this may unnecessary to add imo, because these melody aren't hard. However, It's up to you.
- 01:07:105 (2,3,4,5,6) - These cause me felt rather confuse. So please try to make these pattern to be better.
- 01:18:168 (7) - Add clap on slider head to follow the rhythm.
- 01:54:543 (1) - Try to make this slider blanket with slider head of 01:55:480 (2) better than this, and you can copy this slider after fix it to make 01:53:793 (7) symmetrical.
- 02:14:793 (6) - Remove clap on slider head, but add it on slider tail instead to follow the rhythm.
- 02:15:543 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These blanket rather weird for me, and it seem don't fit with the melody. So I suggest you make these slider like this picture. I think these would more fit with the melody than imo.
- 00:12:168 (3,4) - Please switch these notes. I think would more fit with the melody than.
- 00:18:168 (6) - Just move this to left a bit.
- 00:38:230 (2,3,4) - Rotate these about 55~60 degrees. Then move these to about x:112 y:132. Maybe flow better imo.
- 00:59:043 (5) - Add NC here?
- 01:17:793 (2,3,4,5) - Flow weird for me. Please make it better than this by circles (2,3,4) may avoid stack or overlap with slider (5)
- 01:26:043 (2,3) - Please remove these notes, because it don't follow any rhythm or melody.
- 01:44:886 - I heard the rhythm here. So please add a circle here.
- 01:45:261 (6) - Remove this note. I think it doesn't fit to use here, because I don't heard any rhythm or melody in that.
- 01:48:261 (9) - ^
- 01:50:043 (1,2,3,4) - You can add stream notes here, because I heard 1/4 rhythm.
- 02:05:043 (1) - Try to avoid stacking with slider tail of 02:04:480 (5) - since it would cause confuse to read.
- 02:21:875 (5) - Add NC to reading better.
- 03:31:979 (6,1,2,3,4) - You may make like this picture instead. I think these would more fit with the rhythm.
Good luck~