^ wow
Thanks, Mystyk!
You just ruined my lovely downbeats ;_; but your mod looks useful to me.Mystyk wrote:
Hi! Mod from my queue!
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00:59:793 (7) - I don't quite understand why you put a whistle to the end of the slider but it sounds very odd and out of place, so I would remove it I don't want a silenced sound in this part of track, it won't be hear-able to players, so i added it. No change
01:25:293 (2,3) - this is rather confusing imo and the reverse doesn't really fit here, so I would rather try something like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830476 - longer slider fits better because of the big beats in the music and it might be easier to follow too Okay, but made on my own way
01:45:168 (2,3) - I don't like it how you end (2) on a downbeat, so I would rather ctrl+g (2,3) on the timeline - http://puu.sh/agHc6/cf50267517.jpg example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830481 Okay
01:51:168 (6,1) - same as above ^ Okay
02:03:168 (5) - same problem here, try not the END things on a downbeat it plays and sounds better if you put a hit circle or a sliderstart on the downbeats, you could still change this without having to change that much actually - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830498 I think this rhythm is okay on this part, since i'm making symmetry here and blanketing with the slider on 02:03:918 (1) - , the flowing is still good. No change
02:31:208 (3,1) - I would rather not stack there, it's quite confusing imo (and also that you placed the slider beginnings under sliderbodies >.< so I would rather change it to something like this --> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830523 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830527 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830531 - I think this is easier to read Okay, thinking too much on this part DX
02:49:875 (6) - you should change this to a slider and a hit circle, because you end this on a downbeat again, it feels better to click on a hitcircle on a downbeat - http://puu.sh/agI64/ed2b103427.jpg Okay
02:58:792 (5,6) - ctrl+g on the timeline and replace them because of the previously mentioned downbeat reasons Okay
03:04:417 (1,2,3) - this was rather weird to play since I can barely hear them so at least you could change these to a slider? 03:04:792 (2,3) - Okay
03:10:792 (4,5) - ctrl+g, same reason as 02:58:792 (5,6) - I'm following a bit of vocals in this track, So a slider here is fit-able. No change
03:34:042 (3,4) - well this doesn't look good imo, try this? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830567 Since other modders says this too, I'll change it
[Hard]
00:50:418 (3) - it's rather annoying that you don't hit that big beat during the slider 00:50:980 - so I think you should try to remove the reverse and add a short slider to hit that beat If i add a 1/2 slider here, the "Spacing" would not consist well here, But i will think about it.
00:53:418 (3) - same here ^ ^
01:03:168 (8) - something should start at the end of the slider and not end >.< - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837509 Okay
01:06:168 (7) - same here ^ Okay
01:18:168 (7) - ^ Okay
01:23:418 (5,6,7) - I think something like this would fit better, because the beats are big so hit circles play better (and also the slider starting on red tick and ending on downbeat) so it would be better if you changed it - http://puu.sh/ajmkc/ff452d56da.jpg So you're telling me to change them to circles. What about the next ones? It might be tiring when clicking a lot. No change
01:45:168 (4) - same as 01:03:168 (8) - try not to END sliders on a downbeat OKAY
02:06:543 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look good, and it doesn't really play well either, I would rather do something like this - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837529 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837533 - while also making the blanket here 02:08:793 (4,5) - nicer Okay
02:14:043 (5,6,1) - you end (6) on a downbeat again, and you used a slider there, while the vocals already end at the start of (6) (or the middle), so I would rather remove that reverse from (5) and start (6) at 02:14:793 - and afterwards you can start a slider at the downbeat, so here 02:15:543 - http://puu.sh/ajmT7/3939b7f97f.jpg Okay
02:47:041 (8,9) - don't do this overlap please, it's so unappealing, I think this looks better and plays better too - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837555 - in your way you have to go back so that's why it is not that good to play - http://puu.sh/ajn5j/3c874eb3b4.jpg Well, I've seen some ranked maps did this kind of flow, but okay.
02:57:292 (3,4) - again this overlap >.< why not try something like this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837577 ^
02:59:167 (8) - again you end the slider on a downbeat, so it would be better if you changed this imo, an example - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837583 (if you follow the previous suggestion) Okay
03:08:542 (1,2) - don't overlap, I already explain that imo it doesn't flow well, so try this maybe? - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837590 Okay
03:16:042 (5,6) - don't end (6) on a downbeat >.< - example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837606 - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837615 Did a bit on my way, but okay
[Insane]
00:12:355 (4,1) - I already mentioned this on the Hard diff, please don't end the slider on the downbeat, this time it really doesn't fit, since that beat is really big, try this - http://puu.sh/ajDgM/67cfbce33d.jpg I'm making a triangle pattern in this part, No change
00:15:730 (1,2) - same as above ^ but you can also hear how to melody goes from 00:15:918 - to 00:16:105 - so the slider starting on the white tick would fit a lot better - http://puu.sh/ajDpl/4200a5b78d.jpg Okay
00:20:980 (10,11) - same as above ^ http://puu.sh/ajDvL/85609ea9d4.jpg I might break the flow of this Tornado formation. No change
00:39:730 (1,2,3) - same here ^ you can hear that both the guitar and vocals go like white tick --> red tick then white tick --> red tick etc... http://puu.sh/ajEbo/a5b7ec492a.jpg I heard that, but i don't think this rhythm looks fitting here. I actually follow the drums mostly, so No change
00:56:886 - and 00:57:261 - add hit circle, they would make a nice stream and you can hear it in the music I'm following vocals here, No change
01:06:168 (9) - same thing about downbeats - http://puu.sh/ajEtI/6cd9228026.jpg I think it's okay for an Insane diff here, No change
01:10:105 (4,5) - same as above ^ http://puu.sh/ajExK/67965ec14c.jpg ^
01:18:168 (5) - same here, you can hear that the vocals somewhat "start" here 01:18:543 - so it's not recommended to end a slider there >.<
01:24:730 - and 01:24:824 - it's quite weird that you didn't put any hit circles, I can see that you try to follow the vocals more but think about adding 2 hit circles here please, it's so empty like this in my opinion I'll think about this one...
01:25:480 (6,7,1) - this kind of rhythm would fit a lot better, since there are no big beats here 01:25:668 (7) - and because 01:25:855 (1) - in the middle of the slider the fast beats in the music already start, so try it please - http://puu.sh/ajEO7/bb7cee08d6.jpg The streaming you made looks weird here, but I'll try if it's Okay
01:43:105 (4,5,6) - same about downbeats, though this time it's rather because of the vocals too, this really fits a lot better :3 - http://puu.sh/ajFdO/9d6b78ecff.jpg If you hear the vocals closer with the current sliders, you'll know the answer. No change
ahh well I'll stop mentioning these I think you can also check the map for yourself (and if you agree with me then it would be nice if you actually did so) if you don't agree then I hope you'll give me a valid reason why you did so Okay, I'll find them. Since i suck at mapping Insanes, I'll try to improve it.
02:04:105 (4,5) - try this for better flow - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1838676 Okay
02:26:125 (5) - nazi but why is this put further from the stream? try playing it to x:368 y:80 Okay, but wth does "nazi" mean? I'm not being much with japanese... o.o
03:05:167 (2,3,4,5) - maybe I'm deaf but I really don't hear any sounds here that would ask for a stream, it sounds overmapped, I think you should remove these 03:05:260 (3,4,5) - Well, it doesn't sound "overmapped" to me, This is just my own track by making it as a "Supreme Mode" stream :3
03:35:167 (6,7) - at the previous point I mentioned an unnecessary stream but here where the stream would fit you only added a hit circle and a slider, I think here a stream would fit better Okay
03:38:260 - 03:38:448 - same at these 2 points, I would add a hit circle to make a stream because of the fast beats in the music Okay
That's all, the map looks quite okay, except those downbeat things that I mentioned, so good luck!
Thanks, Mystyk!