Hi! Mod from my queue!
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00:59:793 (7) - I don't quite understand why you put a whistle to the end of the slider but it sounds very odd and out of place, so I would remove it
01:25:293 (2,3) - this is rather confusing imo and the reverse doesn't really fit here, so I would rather try something like this -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830476 - longer slider fits better because of the big beats in the music and it might be easier to follow too
01:45:168 (2,3) - I don't like it how you end (2) on a downbeat, so I would rather ctrl+g (2,3) on the timeline -
http://puu.sh/agHc6/cf50267517.jpg example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183048101:51:168 (6,1) - same as above ^
02:03:168 (5) - same problem here, try not the END things on a downbeat it plays and sounds better if you put a hit circle or a sliderstart on the downbeats, you could still change this without having to change that much actually -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183049802:31:208 (3,1) - I would rather not stack there, it's quite confusing imo (and also that you placed the slider beginnings under sliderbodies >.< so I woudl rather change it to something like this -->
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830523 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830527 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830531 - I think this is easier to read
02:49:875 (6) - you should change this to a slider and a hit circle, because you end this on a downbeat again, it feels better to click on a hitcircle on a downbeat -
http://puu.sh/agI64/ed2b103427.jpg02:58:792 (5,6) - ctrl+g on the timeline and replace them because of the previously mentioned downbeat reasons
03:04:417 (1,2,3) - this was rather weird to play since I can barely hear them so at least you could change these to a slider? 03:04:792 (2,3) -
03:10:792 (4,5) - ctrl+g, same reason as 02:58:792 (5,6) -
03:34:042 (3,4) - well this doesn't look good imo, try this? -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1830567[Hard]
00:50:418 (3) - it's rather annoying that you don't hit that big beat during the slider 00:50:980 - so I think you should try to remove the reverse and add a short slider to hit that beat
00:53:418 (3) - same here ^
01:03:168 (8) - something should start at the end of the slider and not end >.< -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183750901:06:168 (7) - same here ^
01:18:168 (7) - ^
01:23:418 (5,6,7) - I think something like this would fit better, because the beats are big so hit circles play better (and also the slider starting on red tick and ending on downbeat) so it would be better if you changed it -
http://puu.sh/ajmkc/ff452d56da.jpg01:45:168 (4) - same as 01:03:168 (8) - try not to END sliders on a downbeat
02:06:543 (1,2) - this overlap doesn't look good, and it doesn't really play well either, I would rather do something like this -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837529 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837533 - while also making the blanket here 02:08:793 (4,5) - nicer
02:14:043 (5,6,1) - you end (6) on a downbeat again, and you used a slider there, while the vocals already end at the start of (6) (or the middle), so I would rather remove that everse from (5) and start (6) at 02:14:793 - and afterwards you can start a slider at the downbeat, so here 02:15:543 -
http://puu.sh/ajmT7/3939b7f97f.jpg02:47:041 (8,9) - don't do this overlap please, it's so unappealing, I think this looks better and plays better too -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837555 - in your way you have to go back so that's why it is not that good to play -
http://puu.sh/ajn5j/3c874eb3b4.jpg02:57:292 (3,4) - again this overlap >.< why not try something like this?
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183757702:59:167 (8) - again you end the slider on a downbeat, so it would be better if you changed this imo, an example -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837583 (if you follow the previous suggestion)
03:08:542 (1,2) - don't overlap, I already explain that imo it doesn't flow well, so try this maybe? -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183759003:16:042 (5,6) - don't end (6) on a downbeat >.< - example:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837606 -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1837615[Insane]
00:12:355 (4,1) - I already mentioned this on the Hard diff, please don't end the slider on the downbeat, this time it really doesn't fit, since that beat is really big, try this -
http://puu.sh/ajDgM/67cfbce33d.jpg00:15:730 (1,2) - same as above ^ but you can also hear how to melody goes from 00:15:918 - to 00:16:105 - so the slider starting on the white tick would fit a lot better -
http://puu.sh/ajDpl/4200a5b78d.jpg00:20:980 (10,11) - same as above ^
http://puu.sh/ajDvL/85609ea9d4.jpg00:39:730 (1,2,3) - same here ^ you can hear that both the guitar and vocals go like white tick --> red tick then white tick --> red tick etc...
http://puu.sh/ajEbo/a5b7ec492a.jpg00:56:886 - and 00:57:261 - add hit circle, they would make a nice stream and you can hear it in the music
01:06:168 (9) - same thing about downbeats -
http://puu.sh/ajEtI/6cd9228026.jpg01:10:105 (4,5) - same as above ^
http://puu.sh/ajExK/67965ec14c.jpg01:18:168 (5) - same here, you can hear that the vocals somewhat "start" here 01:18:543 - so it's not recommended to end a slider there >.<
01:24:730 - and 01:24:824 - it's quite weird that you didn't put any hit circles, I can see that you try to follow the vocals more but think about adding 2 hit circles here please, it's so empty like this in my opinion
01:25:480 (6,7,1) - this kind of rhythm would fit a lot better, since there are no big beats here 01:25:668 (7) - and because 01:25:855 (1) - in the middle of the slider the fast beats in the music already start, so try it please -
http://puu.sh/ajEO7/bb7cee08d6.jpg01:43:105 (4,5,6) - same about downbeats, though this time it's rather because of the vocals too, this really fits a lot better :3 -
http://puu.sh/ajFdO/9d6b78ecff.jpgahh well I'll stop mentioning these I think you can also check the map for yourself (and if you agree with me then it would be nice if you actually did soo) if you don't agree then I hope you'll give me a valid reason why you did so
02:04:105 (4,5) - try this for better flow -
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/183867602:26:125 (5) - nazi but why is this put further from the stream? try playing it to x:368 y:80
03:05:167 (2,3,4,5) - maybe I'm deaf but I really don't hear any sounds here that woudl ask for a stream, it sounds overmapped, I think you should remove these 03:05:260 (3,4,5) -
03:35:167 (6,7) - at the previous point I mentioned an unnecessary stream but here where the stream would fit you only added a hit circle and a slider, I think here a stream would fit better
03:38:260 - 03:38:448 - same at these 2 points, I would add a hit circle to make a stream because of the fast beats in the music
That's all, the map looks quite okay, except those downbeat things that I mentioned, so good luck!