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Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU

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blissfulyoshi
Some things about the song: (You should probably add some of these things to the tags)
Album: 風 -KAZE-
The translated name of the original song is: The Gensokyo The Gods Loved (a song from Mountain of Faith, so you should probably change the background to a mountain of faith inspired one)

orion's Easy:
Combo mod:
01:11:470 (5,1) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add the new combo to 5 instead
01:18:063 (1) - remove new combo for the change below this one
01:19:097 (2,1) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add the new combo to 2 instead
02:08:336 (1) - it fits the lyrics better if you remove this new combo

Normal:
Why is this the only diff with 0.5 slider tick rate?

Timing section mod:
00:57:58 - move back a quarter note
01:11:91 - ^
01:27:92 - unneeded timing section
01:30:15 - ^
01:30:60 - ^
01:38:77 - move back a quarter note
01:41:57 - unneeded timing section
01:41:68 - ^
01:42:254 - add a timing section here with the same hitsound settings as the kiai section afterwards
01:49:418 - ^

S i R i R u' Pleasant:
Combo mod:
The way you added combos seemed to vary throughout the entire song. In the beginning, you sometimes added new combos to claps, sometimes to the quiet section, and sometimes neither. Since I didn't really get your combos, I won't be modding them.
Besides the combo issue, the map is fine.

Hard:
Timing section mod:
01:41:57 - unneeded timing section
01:41:68 - ^
01:42:254 - add a timing section here with the same hitsound settings as the kiai section afterwards
01:49:418 - ^
01:55:34 - move back a quarter note

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Nice fun map. Star.
Cyril Scarlet
Thank you for modding.

I'll check about sounds in combo again.
Topic Starter
Aenna
Added tags.
Back ground is not changed... :( I like this image in the touhou.
Normal & Hard all fixed.
Thank you. :D
orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [orion's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Aenna
uploaded.
Cyril Scarlet
Topic Starter
Aenna
UPLOADED.
Andrea
Map is fine. No problems found.

But the mp3 is too long and 3 minutes are empty of mapping.

Can you cut the mp3 please? 5MB for an mp3 used only for 2 minutes is really too much.

When you're done with the mp3 Full submit, and contact me again.
pete2528
เอาไฟล์ตัดเวลามาให้ละครับ

MP3 Cut time :)

Download: KAZE NO KIOKU.mp3
orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Aenna
>osuplayer111
fixed.

>pete2528
Thank you !! :)
Andrea
Well done. Bubbled.
Furawa
:P
Topic Starter
Aenna
(- - *)
Cyclone
Ok, Somebody bugged me about a timing check before i could actually start modding this, but the cursor sucks and the hitsounds are WAAAAAAAAAY too quiet.
Topic Starter
Aenna

Cyclone wrote:

Ok, Somebody bugged me about a timing check before i could actually start modding this, but the cursor sucks and the hitsounds are WAAAAAAAAAY too quiet.
Fixed.
Andrea
[orion's Easy]

01:44:060 (6,1) - Spacing.
orioncomet
Topic Starter
Aenna
uploaded.
Andrea
Re-bubbled.
Mystearica
This map needs a lot of work on the hitsounds. All the difficulties vary in hitsound patterns...why?

The MP3 has a pretty bad cut there.

[Hard]

Hitsounds are way too quiet. You also used the "kiouclap," but it doesn't fit, maybe it's too loud? Try cutting it.

Okay there's a very clear pattern to the drums on this song, try following that with a soft/normal switch.

You should use normal-hitnormal more, especially in spots like:

01:11:246 - Clear drums here, why not try a 40-50% normal stream?
01:55:799 - Same here.

00:42:142 (1,2,3) - Sounds here feels like a mad rush.
00:43:261 (1) - Normal whistles? I don't think you should use normal whistles.

It's toooooooooo quiet.

[S i R i R u]

00:42:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - uguu @ hitsounds here. too many whistles at once, try cutting them down or use normal or something.

Okay not too bad with the normal usage here, kinda what I'm talking about, although in the latter half of the song it doesn't fit so much anymore. Just use more normal there imo.

Again, those spots with the clear drumrolls, why not use normal hitsounds? Follow the song when you set your hitsounds~

[Normal]

Suffers similar hitsound problems as Hard, and also the soft claps sound weird to me.

Normal whistles, these have to go.

[orion's Easy]

Soft clapssssssssss

Well...it's not too bad but perhaps try low volume normal claps? Fit them to the song's drums, might sound nice.
Cyclone
Please address everything in the above post. I want to mod this, but i can't even hear the notes. Also the skin makes everything VERY difficult to see.
Cyril Scarlet
I'm try to changed hitsounde :3

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [S i R i R u' Pleasant].osu
Topic Starter
Aenna

Mystearica wrote:

This map needs a lot of work on the hitsounds. All the difficulties vary in hitsound patterns...why?

The MP3 has a pretty bad cut there.

[Hard]

Hitsounds are way too quiet. You also used the "kiouclap," but it doesn't fit, maybe it's too loud? Try cutting it.

Okay there's a very clear pattern to the drums on this song, try following that with a soft/normal switch.

You should use normal-hitnormal more, especially in spots like:

01:11:246 - Clear drums here, why not try a 40-50% normal stream?
01:55:799 - Same here.

00:42:142 (1,2,3) - Sounds here feels like a mad rush.
00:43:261 (1) - Normal whistles? I don't think you should use normal whistles.

It's toooooooooo quiet.

[S i R i R u]

00:42:142 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - uguu @ hitsounds here. too many whistles at once, try cutting them down or use normal or something.

Okay not too bad with the normal usage here, kinda what I'm talking about, although in the latter half of the song it doesn't fit so much anymore. Just use more normal there imo.

Again, those spots with the clear drumrolls, why not use normal hitsounds? Follow the song when you set your hitsounds~

[Normal]

Suffers similar hitsound problems as Hard, and also the soft claps sound weird to me.

Normal whistles, these have to go.

[orion's Easy]

Soft clapssssssssss It leaves it to orion.

Well...it's not too bad but perhaps try low volume normal claps? Fit them to the song's drums, might sound nice.
Fixed.
Topic Starter
Aenna
>S i R i R u
UPLOADED.

>Cyclone
The skin was erased.
orioncomet
sorry that, I'm so late =.=

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [orion's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Aenna
UPLOADED.
ft1717492
:) star~
Topic Starter
Aenna
Thanks :)
Doomsday
Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

offset = 14,621 (A little later than yours)

Make the mp3 fade out instead of just stop? it sounds weird the way it is.

[ORION'S EASY]

00:39:119 (4) - Make this start 1/4 later.

[NORMAL]

No problems :)

[S I R I R U' PLEASANT] (is this supposed to be S i R i R u's Pleasant?)

looks fine. Some of the jumps feel awkward, but I've seen them in ranked maps so i guess they're fine ._.

[HARD] (call this Insane instead?)

looks good

Fun map. Nice storyboard too :)

star'd
Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [S i R i R u's Pleasant].osu
orioncomet
Topic Starter
Aenna
UPLOADED.
I thought that offset was 14,610.
Thank you Doomsday93. :)
orioncomet
Please, Re snap all notes ALL difficulty.
Topic Starter
Aenna
Done.
statementreply
Nice maps and song. Star~

Btw, I prefer offset 14584 for the new mp3 :P
Topic Starter
Aenna
fixed. :)
thank you ~
taNa
ranked lol
Topic Starter
Aenna
nice BAT lol
Cyclone
Eh, My internet went out yesterday , and i'm busy today and tomorrow. I'll try to get to this as soon as possible. Sorry for the delay.
Armin
Add on all the difficulties the tags "orion" and " Siriru".
Offset: +4ms 14588, then resnap all the notes.

[orion's Easy]

No problems.

[Normal]

01:54:434 (4) make it symmetrical with the (5)

[S i R i R u's Pleasant]

No problems.

[Hard]

No problems.

Omg XD have a star :)
Topic Starter
Aenna
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
ccbp
lol
star wo ageru~
Topic Starter
Aenna
star wo morau ~ ☆
Mafiamaster
Hawt background~
Great SB (Reminds me of S i R i R u)

Bubbled!
orioncomet
I hope,,, This map will be ranked soon and without poped again and again

この譜面は近い内にランクするよね、泡だけわって放置するサイクロンにまたわられなければ。
:(
Topic Starter
Aenna
Thank you Mafiamaster.

>orioncomet
lolwww
Takuma
this map is the shit ;O;~
RANKEEDDD
Cyril Scarlet
ランクおめでとう^^
Topic Starter
Aenna
Thank you all. :) :) :)
orioncomet
woa <3 Takuma
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