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Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU

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Aenna
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年12月26日 at 12:40:49

Artist: Shihori
Title: KAZE NO KIOKU
Source: Touhou
Tags: Shihori Touhou SOUND HOLIC -KAZE- orioncomet SiRiRu
BPM: 134
Filesize: 4789kb
Play Time: 02:09
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (5 stars, 336 notes)
  2. Normal (4.25 stars, 179 notes)
  3. orion's Easy (2.18 stars, 134 notes)
  4. S i R i R u's Pleasant (4.96 stars, 271 notes)
Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th map.

Shihori~
Original Song : The Gensokyo The Gods Loved.

2009/12/13 Added S i R i R u' Pleasant.
2009/12/13 Added S i R i R u's SB & Skin.
2009/12/14 Added orion's Easy.
2009/12/17 Mp3 changed.
2009/12/21 Mp3 changed.
Re-download plz!

thx!
Last edited by Aenna , edited 35 times in total.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
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Andrea
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Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: Yes.
Tags: Yes. (Add more tags if possible.)
File Size: 5,70MB/24,00MB

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 134,00 - Offset: 14.605 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Normal]

This difficulty is too hard for be the most easier one. You need to create an easy difficulty~

Spacing is high for a normal.

Seems "Hard".

01:40:068 (7) - New combo.

[Hard]

01:45:049 (2,3) - Adjust spacing.
01:54:089 (9) - New combo.
02:09:045 (10) - Weird slider. Adjust it, please.
Aenna
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Aenna
All fixed.
Space was changed from 1.4 into 1.2.(Normal)
Thank you mod & star osuplayer111 & S i R i R u.
Diasios
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Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Cut the mp3.

[Normal]

It's ok

[Hard]

01:55:079 (9) - New combo
01:56:002 (1) - Remove New combo
01:56:069 (7) - New combo

Starred~
Aenna
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Aenna
Because the voice starts at 01:56:022, Newcombo is done here.

xxheroxx wrote:

01:56:069 (7) - New combo
Fixed.
Thank you mod & star xxheroxx.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
終わったじぇぃ☆

どうもお待たせしました :3

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [S i R i R u' Pleasant].osu
Aenna
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Aenna
arigatou!! :D
orioncomet
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orioncomet
素晴らしい ！
Estelle18
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Estelle18
star for Flandre ~*
Aenna
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Aenna
ありがとう！
Thank you :D
Yes_old
525 posts
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Yes_old
this is great!
only things i could find -

normal
01:17:029 (4) - maybe one tick left to make it symmetrical
01:27:014 (2) - end 01:27:059 ?
01:57:059 (3) - no whistle at beginning
01:58:048 (4) - no whistle
02:00:027 (2) - finish beginning
02:03:085 (2) - no whistle at beginning
02:04:075 (3) - no whistle
02:06:099 (1) - clap
02:07:044 (2) - clap end
02:08:033 (3) - ^
02:09:023 (4) - maybe finish?
pete2528
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pete2528
สนุกมากๆ ถูกใจ

very fun :D
miccoliasms
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miccoliasms
:lol:

[Hard]
01:41:058 (5) - 個人的にはいらないと思います
01:55:001 (2) - ^
01:55:023 (4) - ^
01:55:057 (7) - ^

:oops:
Shinxyn
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Shinxyn
The music dominates the hitsounds... well, more like the music provides the hitsounds, ha
Though, your hitsound volume could be louder...

Normal-
This plays fine, don't need anything easier (though it could be easier)

S_i_R_i_R_u's-
00:40:57 (2,3,4,5) - kinda quiet compared to the last few streamy parts.. add whistles
01:13:93 (2,3) - sounds really odd, probably cuz the hitsounds actually dominate this part instead of blending into the music as you've done before this
01:16:61 (2) - ^
01:19:97 (2) - ^
01:28:93 (6) - ^
You used non-custom claps in the first kiai, but it sounded like it could be continued till the end of the song, instead of reverting back to custom claps...

Hard-
00:30:27 (5) - I would like it if you brought out the sound more by adding a clap to this (the start of slider)
00:32:06 (3) - ^ (start of slider)
00:33:85 (5) - ^ (just this note)
00:37:44 (7) - ^
00:38:78 (2,3,4,5,6) - if this is kind of your own beats, please strengthen it by adding hitsounds
01:35:98 (7) - ... I don't think this has to start on that 1/4 beat
Why did the custom claps die off when kiai started? not that I mind..
Those soft sections could be much louder...
Try adding a new combo for parts where you switched focus on music and vocal or if theres a slight gap in vocal

Good Job though :o
Cyril Scarlet
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yaya
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yaya
NORMAL OVERALL +1 :!:
nice map
AngelHoney
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AngelHoney
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Last edited by AngelHoney , edited 1 time in total.
Cyril Scarlet
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Shinxyn wrote:

S_i_R_i_R_u's-
00:40:57 (2,3,4,5) - kinda quiet compared to the last few streamy parts.. add whistles
01:13:93 (2,3) - sounds really odd, probably cuz the hitsounds actually dominate this part instead of blending into the music as you've done before this
01:16:61 (2) - ^
01:19:97 (2) - ^
01:28:93 (6) - ^
You used non-custom claps in the first kiai, but it sounded like it could be continued till the end of the song, instead of reverting back to custom claps...
Now, I'm try to changed Costum hitsounds and changed hit sounds point in mod.

I'll send file to Cyborg fot upload =w=b
Cyril Scarlet
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Aenna
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Aenna
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
ゴメンナサイ

最後の後半サビの音声忘れてましたｗ

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [S i R i R u' Pleasant].osu
Aenna
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Aenna
upload.
Tanmak
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Tanmak
nyan~ >w<
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
Please give me that wallpaper (with the biggest size you have) XD

- Need Easy diff.

~Normal~
Fine.

~S i R i R u' Pleasant~
00:30:050 (5,1) - too far
01:02:006 (3) - delete hitclap in middle
01:05:064 (3) - ^
01:16:061 (2) - delete hitclap at ending
01:19:097 (2) - delete hitclap in middle
01:28:093 (6) - delete hitclap at start
01:35:020 (5) - add hitclap at ending
01:36:009 (7) - delete hitclap at start
01:38:033 (5) - add hitclap
01:39:000 (1) - move ending 1/4 left

~Hard~
00:39:034 (5) - move 1/4 left
01:38:078 (11) - new combo


+Star
Aenna
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Aenna
>DJPop
uhhm... I think that Normal is Easy...
[Hard] Fixed.
Thank you.

>Tanmak
nyan~~ >v<*
Cyril Scarlet
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DJPop wrote:

~S i R i R u' Pleasant~

00:30:050 (5,1) - too far Changed
01:02:006 (3) - delete hitclap in middle Done
01:05:064 (3) - ^ Done
01:16:061 (2) - delete hitclap at ending Done
01:19:097 (2) - delete hitclap in middle Done
01:28:093 (6) - delete hitclap at start Done
01:35:020 (5) - add hitclap at ending Done
01:36:009 (7) - delete hitclap at start Done
01:38:033 (5) - add hitclap Done
01:39:000 (1) - move ending 1/4 left Done
Thank you DJPop m(_ _)m

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [S i R i R u' Pleasant].osu
Aenna
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Aenna
upload.
DeadAlready
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DeadAlready
nice map and song. :D
stared~ <3
Aenna
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Aenna
Thank you~ ^_____^
taka1235
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taka1235
go go ~!
Aenna
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Aenna
(_ _*)
orioncomet
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orioncomet
終わりました～

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [orion's Easy].osu
Aenna
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Aenna
ありがとー！
Thanks~ :)
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
れみりあ～♪
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Some things about the song: (You should probably add some of these things to the tags)
Album: 風 -KAZE-
The translated name of the original song is: The Gensokyo The Gods Loved (a song from Mountain of Faith, so you should probably change the background to a mountain of faith inspired one)

orion's Easy:
Combo mod:
01:11:470 (5,1) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add the new combo to 5 instead
01:18:063 (1) - remove new combo for the change below this one
01:19:097 (2,1) - fits the lyrics better if you remove 1's new combo and add the new combo to 2 instead
02:08:336 (1) - it fits the lyrics better if you remove this new combo

Normal:
Why is this the only diff with 0.5 slider tick rate?

Timing section mod:
00:57:58 - move back a quarter note
01:11:91 - ^
01:27:92 - unneeded timing section
01:30:15 - ^
01:30:60 - ^
01:38:77 - move back a quarter note
01:41:57 - unneeded timing section
01:41:68 - ^
01:42:254 - add a timing section here with the same hitsound settings as the kiai section afterwards
01:49:418 - ^

S i R i R u' Pleasant:
Combo mod:
The way you added combos seemed to vary throughout the entire song. In the beginning, you sometimes added new combos to claps, sometimes to the quiet section, and sometimes neither. Since I didn't really get your combos, I won't be modding them.
Besides the combo issue, the map is fine.

Hard:
Timing section mod:
01:41:57 - unneeded timing section
01:41:68 - ^
01:42:254 - add a timing section here with the same hitsound settings as the kiai section afterwards
01:49:418 - ^
01:55:34 - move back a quarter note

===
Nice fun map. Star.
Cyril Scarlet
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Cyril Scarlet
Thank you for modding.

I'll check about sounds in combo again.
Aenna
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Aenna
Added tags.
Back ground is not changed... :( I like this image in the touhou.
Normal & Hard all fixed.
Thank you. :D
orioncomet
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orioncomet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [orion's Easy].osu
Aenna
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Aenna
uploaded.
Cyril Scarlet
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あぃ=3

Download: Shihori - KAZE NO KIOKU (cyborg) [S i R i R u' Pleasant].osu
Aenna
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Aenna
UPLOADED.
Andrea
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Andrea
Map is fine. No problems found.

But the mp3 is too long and 3 minutes are empty of mapping.

Can you cut the mp3 please? 5MB for an mp3 used only for 2 minutes is really too much.

When you're done with the mp3 Full submit, and contact me again.
pete2528
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pete2528
เอาไฟล์ตัดเวลามาให้ละครับ

MP3 Cut time :)

Download: KAZE NO KIOKU.mp3
orioncomet
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Aenna
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Aenna
>osuplayer111
fixed.

>pete2528
Thank you !! :)
Andrea
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Well done. Bubbled.
Furawa
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Furawa
:P
Aenna
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Aenna
(- - *)
Cyclone
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Ok, Somebody bugged me about a timing check before i could actually start modding this, but the cursor sucks and the hitsounds are WAAAAAAAAAY too quiet.
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