1. Extinction (5.15 stars, 1086 notes)
2. Hard (3.39 stars, 650 notes)
3. Rakuen's Easy (1.59 stars, 264 notes)
4. Rakuen's Normal (2.43 stars, 424 notes)

Rumia- wrote:

lol sohai mod ~ no kd plz
[Insane]
00:06:240 (4) - moveto x:40 , y :76 ? flow better a little imo ~ I intentionally make a star pattern here. But now I look at it, the star look so sohai. Re-position a bit~

1

00:36:530 (1,2) - how about same spacing as 00:35:756 (1,2) - ? Just realize the stacks at this part has inconsistency in spacing, fixed
00:54:336 (2,3) - stack properly ? Nope, this part was intentional. For me stacking doesn't emphasize the music more than its current state
00:55:110 (2,3) - ^ ^
01:16:111 (1,5,6) - susun kasi cantik skit la Tak mau lah, susun kemas too mainstream. jkjk, fixed

2

01:28:401 (6) - move left a bit to the slider ? http://puu.sh/96cHm/28208fea23.jpg Nah, I don't think is necessary. I try to follow the same as 01:27:385 (1,2,3) this part
03:01:401 (1,2) - this part is actually 1/4 snap , the beat is at 03:01:401 , 03:01:594 , 03:01:691 , second slider oso same beat. I don't think so. 1/3 slider fits the music more imo
03:02:562 (1,1,2,3,4) - this one should be 1/4 instead , =3= can feel it when play oso Remapped this part. Yea, after listening closely for a long time, it is 1/4 instead of 1/6
03:04:885 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move up a little de , kasi neat skit stream pattern x:180 , y :276 like this Remapped that part

3

03:23:078 - add spinner til 03:24:433 ?Replaced 03:22:739 (3) to a slider 2/1 slider instead

1. 00:31:062 (5,6,7,1) - have them blanket the same distance
2. 00:31:062 (5,6,7) - a note about your triple short sliders: study Hanzversible's Extra a little more. They use 1/4 sliders for that part, not 1/3 sliders. Those don't fit the rhythm. This also goes for anywhere else you use those triple 1/3 sliders, like 01:48:480 (5,6,7) -
3. 00:51:771 (1,2) - blanket is a little off. move (1) to the left a grid
   00:52:739 (2,3,4) - have these all blanket 00:53:320 (1) - by the same distance
4. 01:01:061 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Try to arrange the spacing in a way that doesn't leave any confusion about the use of 3/4 and 1/2 here, like this for example: http://puu.sh/bg09e/ef060e08aa.png
5. 01:18:094 (3,1) - move middle point of (3) a little closer
6. 01:39:191 (1,1) - improve blanket too
7. 02:21:578 (3,4) - why not make a jump here to stay consistent with your other mapping at this part of the vocals?
8. 02:56:223 (1,2) - have them touch to confirm it's 1/4
9. 03:03:771 (1,2,3) - why are you using 1/3 here? listen carefully at 25% playback speed and you can very clearly tell it's still 1/4.
10. 03:04:158 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 03:09:965 (1,2) - This should all be 1/4. Please avoid mapping on 1/3 or 1/6 in a song that uses 4/4 time signature, since it won't fit the music and people won't play it right.
11. 03:10:449 (1,1,1) - no reason to have new combos here
12. 03:25:448 (2,3,4) - stack the slider head on the circles to stay consistent with 03:24:674 (1,2,1) -
13. 03:36:481 (5,6,7) - check spacing here
14. 03:47:900 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - please don't use this kind of spacing for streams that are 1/4 all the way through. Separating every group of 4 notes gives the impression that it is 1/2
15. 03:52:158 (1) - you want it to curve the same way as the 1/4 sliders before it because that's what the player is expecting, like http://puu.sh/bg2kv/41d5a54898.png
16. 04:00:965 (4,1) - don't separate 1/4 stream like i mentioned earlier
17. 04:11:126 (2) - I really don't feel 1/8 belongs here and 01:36:287 (2) - since nothing in the music indicates that it should be used. I get that you're trying to get the player to hold down the key for that part, but a slow slider like 01:42:480 (2) - would be much better.

The Girls wrote:

Hi, this is Nana from Nana's Beginners Queue~

[Normal]

SPOILER

1. 01:00:287 (1) Center the white ticks?
   
2. 01:49:062 (1) Ctrl + H, Ctrl + J, Ctrl + G the previous Slider?
   
3. 02:18:771 (2, 3) DS seems a little to close for what you have at the moment.
4. 03:18:868 (1, 2, 3, 4, 1) Shape up the star?

Sorry, Removed this diff @@. Added other Normal diff instead
[Hard]

SPOILER

1. 00:03:965 The combo pattern here makes more sense like this. Sounds better, fixed~
   
2. 00:30:868 (3) I think flows and looks better considering your AR. Not necessary, looks good as it is
   
3. 02:08:610 (3, 4 ) Stack the red boxes on the half-beat ticks. No really neccessary. Not much difference anyway
   
4. 02:52:352 (1) The way you center this around the four hit circles looks sloppy compared to how tightly structure and well-manicured the rest of your map is in terms of spacing. Can you try grouping around a triangle..? Like this? (I also moved 02:51:191 (1) away to make this not look like unevenly spaced.) Alright, fixed~
   
5. 03:51:191 This combo shape the hexagon? Opps, thanks for the reminder~
   

[Extinction]

SPOILER

1. The sampleset for this level in the text file is "None". Don't know if that's intentional or just an Osu! bug. I think is the bug
2. 00:05:900 (2) Center around the stream. To the left and up a little. Intentionally make a star pattern. Just adjusted a little to make it look nicer
3. (3) Either move to match my suggestions for Circle 2, orrrrrrrr make a criss-cross?
   
4. 00:44:804 (4) Anchor the slider so that the previous Circle is in the middle of it. color=#0000FF]Remapped this part ><[/color]
5. 00:59:900 (2) Can you this? Triangle hitcircles + rotate for better flow. Looks good. Fixed~
   
6. 01:14:804 (2) Rotate the slider a little to cut through the incoming slider evenly. Probably fix the notes following that that are stacked. Remapped this part
   
7. 02:04:545 (3) Blanket. Alright
8. 02:31:836 (2, 1) Reverse the order for these two. Flows better. Nah, this flow is fine here
9. 02:33:191 (3) Can you try this for me? Flows better. Hmm, maybe. but changed it differently
   
10. 03:05:707 (7) Is this rankable? It is, but I remapped this part because it looks ugly

    hanyuu_nanodesu wrote:

    Hi hi~ from my modding Q~!
    
    
    
    [Normal]
    

    1. Maybe AR 4 would be fine
    2. 00:13:062 (1,3) - Blanket them better
    3. 00:18:674 (4) - Put this a little downward so the flow with (3) would be better. Try x:232, y:344.
    4. 00:23:320 (2,3) - (2)'s tail could be blanketed better
    5. 00:26:223 (2,3) - They don't seem to be perfectly parallel... Just copy and paste (2) and press ctrl+> twice
    6. 00:32:804 (2,3) - Blanket better
    7. 00:44:029 (1,2) - ^
    8. 00:49:255 (1) - I think this spinner is kinda unnecessary...
    9. 00:50:997 (2) - Shorten this slider to 00:51:287 then add a note here 00:51:771
    10. 00:52:158 (3,2) - Blanket (2)'s tail with (3)?
    11. 01:06:868 (1) - Curve this the other way. http://puu.sh/bdEIQ/4c16b69a85.jpg
    12. 01:19:642 (1,2) - Nazi mod : Could blanket better
    13. 01:21:191 (1,3) - Blanket (1)'s head with (3)
    14. The power of copy-pasting~!
    15. 01:43:642 (2,3) - Aren't completely parallel.
    16. 01:50:223 (2,3) - Blanket better
    17. 01:55:255 (1,2) - ^
    18. 02:01:448 (1,2) - ^
    19. 02:06:674 (1) - Unnecessary spinner?
    20. 02:24:287 (1) - Curve the other way
    21. 02:38:610 (1,3) - Blanket (1)'s head
    22. 02:54:094 (1,2,3) - Don't look really nice imo
    23. 04:05:320 (1,3) - Blanket better
    24. 04:15:578 (2,3) - ^
    25. Well, since you copy-pasting your map, the mod is mainly the same.

    
    Removed this diff due to badly mapped orz
    
    [Hard]
    

    1. AR ---> 7.5? Hmm. I guess it is better
    2. 00:00:868 (2,3,4,5) - Remake the rectangle shape from these sliders head? Remapped this part
    3. 00:04:352 (3,4) - I think you better swap them in timeline. http://puu.sh/bdFHd/f27abcbb79.jpg sounds better imo. Remapped this part too
    4. If you applied the mod above, you can do this at the playfield http://puu.sh/bdFLR/aab58a9ce5.jpg
    5. 00:07:255 (2,3) - Could blanket better Alright.
    6. 00:13:062 (1,2) - Blanket better. Blanket (2)'s end with (1) as well if you can Nah, intentionally didn't blanket this
    7. 00:17:126 (1,2,3) - If I were you, I would tilt them the other way. The flow would feel better Maybe, but its current state seems better to me
    8. 00:22:739 (2,1) - Stack better Fixed~
    9. 00:32:223 (2,3) - Blanket better Hope is better now
    10. 00:36:287 (3,4) - ^ ^
    11. 00:42:481 (1,4) - Stack (4) with (1)'s end Alright
    12. 00:58:545 (5,6) - You could blanket this thing better. Use 2 points at the curve and use approach circle as a guide. http://puu.sh/bdG4M/55cc6be970.jpg Looks better~ Fixed
    13. 01:16:933 (4,6) - Could blanket better, or out of place? Hope is better now
    14. 01:23:900 (1,3) - ^ ^
    15. 01:57:384 (2,3) - Could blanket better ^
    16. Since you did another copy paste at the chorus, the mod will mainly be the same
    17. 02:51:965 (7,2,3,4) - Stack the triplets with (7)? Nah, for me stacking (7) creates a little weird flow
    18. 02:55:836 (1,2) - ctrl+g. If you want to make repeated pattern, it would be better if you make it the same direction. Hmm... Sounds good.
    19. 02:56:804 (5,1) - Stack Nope, keeping pattern consistent and stacking them makes it weird
    20. 03:11:126 (1,1) - Make them in line? Try to move 03:12:287 (1) - end point to x:496, y:200 Looks better~
    21. 03:26:997 (3,4) - Could blanket better Hope is better
    22. 03:56:030 (3,4) - ^

    
    [Extinction]
    

    This diff remind me of HW... Best mapper XD
    

    1. 00:18:868 (2,1) - These could be blanketed better Should be better now I guess
    2. 00:42:481 (1) - I think ctrl+g this would feel better Ctrl+G makes the flow even more awkward for me
    3. 00:50:997 (1,2) - Blanket better Fixed
    4. 00:51:771 (1,2) - ^ Fixed
    5. 00:53:320 (1,2) - ^ try the technique I told you at hard before Yup, fixed
    6. 00:57:964 (1,1) - The end could stack with the head better Fixed~
    7. 01:18:094 (3,1) - Blanket better ^
    8. 01:18:868 (3,1) - ^ ^
    9. 01:39:771 (1) - ctrl+g this Makes the flow weirder
    10. 02:22:351 (7,1) - Blanket Should be alright now
    11. 02:38:223 (1,2) - Make them identical. try to make (2) parallel with (3) as well Okayy
    12. 04:02:030 (2) - ctrl+g Following the 04:01:448 (1,2) pattern so no changes

    Rank this map~! I want to see some fun pro player replays

    
    Normal and Hard is good. Extinction is... something XD
    Good luck~:3

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I apologize if my mod was not as helpful. Especially your extinction, I don't play at that level. So much for beginner modsss dude! xD
Good luck with your map

Jere-Chan wrote:

Hey! o/ found this mapset in my modding que
Let's go!

Normal:
01:05:707 (1) - move the note away from the slider so it doesnt touch it
01:06:481 (3) - ^ (if i say that it means that do the same thing what is said above)
02:23:126 (1) - ^
02:23:900 (3) - ^
02:47:900 (1) - ^
03:40:546 (1) - ^
03:41:320 (3) - ^


Hard:
Nothing to mod cause its very good!

Extinction:
Its very good for a hard insane but you should get a guest diff or make a easier insane and name this one "extra" or "extreme" or something like that.
Altough good job!

xxdeathx wrote:

Super late insane mod from my queue. Whoa, this is my 100th kudosu

Well it's pretty clear from playing it that you've studied and borrowed extensively from the Insane and Hanzversible's Extra from Chloe's ranked mapset, because I've played that one enough to recognize a lot of the same patterns in yours :O Overall the map has the same style as the Extra with them 1/4 sliders overkill and patterns like 00:31:062 (5,6,7) - and 04:05:900 (1,1,1,1,1) - , and some patterns from Chloe's insane like 01:52:545 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - and the first kiai's jumps. Just my observations
Maybe our pattern might be similar, but I didn't really "study" their map though. Even a lot of other players said the same thing, so yeah ;w;

1. 00:31:062 (5,6,7,1) - have them blanket the same distance Hope the blanket is better now
2. 00:31:062 (5,6,7) - a note about your triple short sliders: study Hanzversible's Extra a little more. They use 1/4 sliders for that part, not 1/3 sliders. Those don't fit the rhythm. This also goes for anywhere else you use those triple 1/3 sliders, like 01:48:480 (5,6,7) - From what I hear is 1/3. Not too sure though. But keeping this for now.
3. 00:51:771 (1,2) - blanket is a little off. move (1) to the left a grid Alright~
   00:52:739 (2,3,4) - have these all blanket 00:53:320 (1) - by the same distance Hope is better now
4. 01:01:061 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Try to arrange the spacing in a way that doesn't leave any confusion about the use of 3/4 and 1/2 here, like this for example: http://puu.sh/bg09e/ef060e08aa.png Alright, seems nicer now~
5. 01:18:094 (3,1) - move middle point of (3) a little closer Blanket better
6. 01:39:191 (1,1) - improve blanket too There's no blanketing here
7. 02:21:578 (3,4) - why not make a jump here to stay consistent with your other mapping at this part of the vocals? I guess you have a point, changed pattern
8. 02:56:223 (1,2) - have them touch to confirm it's 1/4 I like the blanket here. I think is pretty readable and obvious that is 1/4 at this part. Seen lots of testplay and found nothing wrong with this
9. 03:03:771 (1,2,3) - why are you using 1/3 here? listen carefully at 25% playback speed and you can very clearly tell it's still 1/4.
10. 03:04:158 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 03:09:965 (1,2) - This should all be 1/4. Please avoid mapping on 1/3 or 1/6 in a song that uses 4/4 time signature, since it won't fit the music and people won't play it right. I guess it is 1/4 here. Nah, 1/6 does fit the song well. Just the way I mapped it is hard to read. So, kinda remapped some parts
11. 03:10:449 (1,1,1) - no reason to have new combos here Actually I NC-ed the whole stream. I want players to recover their HP drain after the 1/6 part
12. 03:25:448 (2,3,4) - stack the slider head on the circles to stay consistent with 03:24:674 (1,2,1) - Alright
13. 03:36:481 (5,6,7) - check spacing here Yea, kinda off. Fixed~
14. 03:47:900 (2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - please don't use this kind of spacing for streams that are 1/4 all the way through. Separating every group of 4 notes gives the impression that it is 1/2 Maybe, but that depends on whether the player is able to read it or not. For me is not hard to read and differentiate this part
15. 03:52:158 (1) - you want it to curve the same way as the 1/4 sliders before it because that's what the player is expecting, like http://puu.sh/bg2kv/41d5a54898.png You got a point. Fixed~
16. 04:00:965 (4,1) - don't separate 1/4 stream like i mentioned earlier Mentioned earlier about it. But made it a little closer
17. 04:11:126 (2) - I really don't feel 1/8 belongs here and 01:36:287 (2) - since nothing in the music indicates that it should be used. I get that you're trying to get the player to hold down the key for that part, but a slow slider like 01:42:480 (2) - would be much better.Yea, I wanted to get the player to hold for that part, but yea, slow slider might be better here. Fixed~

Overall, your map plays fine for the most part but the rhythm is extremely messy and out of the music at some parts. As far as I'm aware, 1/3 and 1/6 are used almost not at all, and the only acceptable times to use them are places like 00:30:868 (4). When the music is a certain rhythm, you don't want to overmap or ignore that rhythm with your own, especially on another beat snap divisor.

neonat wrote:

General

Add 1500 AudioLeadIn in notepad, currently doesn't have at elast 2000ms before first object Alright~

You need a difficulty below 2.0 rating for a complete mapset Yea, waiting for Easy and light Insane later

Hard

Check your AiMod, there are unsnapped objects
00:29:320 (3,1) - blanket nicely Hope is better~
00:32:223 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:33:191 (1,3) - ^ ^
00:54:094 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:54:094 (2,4) - ^ ^
00:57:191 (2,3) - ^ ^
00:57:965 (4,1) - maybe stack their ends Alright~
01:04:933 (7) - blanket perfectly, slider end is closer to circle compared to other end Hopefully the blanketing is better now
01:08:416 (4) - have a finish here as well It actually sounds great! Fixed~
01:13:062 (1) - end it at 01:14:223 - having it end 01:14:416 is just weird and doesn't fit well Felt kinda weird too, fixed~
01:55:255 (1,2) - blanket nicely orz, hopefully better now
01:59:126 (3,4) - ^ slider end further away than the other Alright
02:03:578 (2,1) - ^ ^
02:06:674 (1) - this spinner doesn't fit the song, it feels random and out-of-the-blue, especially because of the strong beat at 02:06:868 Kinda, removed slider and added circles
02:23:126 (1,3) - blanket nicely Hope is better now >.>
02:30:481 (1) - end it at 02:31:642 Alright
02:41:319 (1,3) - blanket nicely Okayy
03:18:868 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - really advice you not to use the same distance spacing for 1/1 and 1/2 rhythm here. The change in intensity is not very high because the change is just the vocals and not the music. Make some distinction between 03:18:868 (1,2,3,4) and 03:20:416 (1,2,3,4,5) because this just makes things more confusing than it should I guess is kinda confusing here. Changed pattern.
03:23:900don't skip this beat I guess skipping this beat here is fine. Giving slight pause here seems fine to me
03:28:158 (1) - stacking under 03:28:933 (3) doesn't feel right, it should be spaced I guess. Fixeds~
03:30:094 (3) - finish Alright
03:30:481 (5) - finish on end of slider ^
03:33:191 (3,6,1) - make it equal spacing between them Not really neccessary I guess. Sticking with this
03:35:900 (3) - finish Alright
03:56:030 (3,4) - blanket nicely Okay~
04:11:126 (6,1) - really weird honestly I guess. Changed pattern

neonat wrote:

General

Add 1500 AudioLeadIn in notepad, currently doesn't have at elast 2000ms before first object kk

You need a difficulty below 2.0 rating for a complete mapset Did an Easy

Rakuen's Normal

00:08:029 (3,1) - swap positions, circle before slider. At 00:08:223 the music is held up to 00:08:416 so it should be where the slider should be I can't see any prob atm now, keep it for a while
00:18:868 (6) - have some sort of finish sound on the start of this slider Fixed
00:25:062 (5) - perfect this blanket Fixed
00:43:255 (5,1) - blanket perfectly Fixed
01:01:062 (1,2,3) - this is hard to tell on the Normal. Before this, there was no instances of any 3/4 beats, it would be best to get them to familiarise with this by making this a repeat slider for the 1st time Will think of this
01:08:416 (4) - finish as well Fixed
01:21:771 (2) - same like the first one, 01:21:965 is where the music holds, having a slider end there makes it feel weak, I would just recommend you to replace this with circles01:53:513 (3,1) - blanket nicely Keep, want to stop a bit after vocal but not using circle
02:04:545 (1,2,3) - this flow might be confusing, especially 02:05:126 (2) which might be difficult to react as it's not following the usual flow here
03:29:707 (5) - the finish suits the end of the slider more Fixed
04:17:126 (4) - repeat this once, it would be nicer if things ended at 04:17:513 as the vocals don't immediately stop at 04:17:320 Fixed with new and longer slider

Sotajumala wrote:

Hello saw dis as m4m

[Extinction]

00:02:416 (4)
Replace with slider or replace the following slider with a circle Nah, I want to give a very slight pause here with a circle. I think it does kinda fit the music for me
00:04:158 (3)
Feels awkward to play, replace with a circle or reduce spacing to the following circle (and maybe start the stream on the 00:04:352 circle?)Alright, reduced the spacing of 00:04:158 (3)
00:08:610 (4)
Replace with slider or replace the following slider with a circle Same as above
00:10:836
This circle feels unnecessary, plays a lot smoother without it It feels weird without the circle here for me. The flow seems fine here too
00:11:320 (1,2,3,4)
maybe add a little more spacing? Not necessary, the stop in flow here fits the song
00:22:933 (3,4,5)
i dont think the stack of 3 fits here, i would remove (4) and rearrange ? I think triple here is fine.
01:00:287
uh pretty annoying to read, i would atleast remain the same combo color through the stream. Hmm, maybe. I felt the NC here is necessary to alert players the change of spacing here. See first.
01:13:062 (1)
i would make the slider 1 shorter I won't
01:25:449 (3)
same here, and i think these two should have the same kind of combo pattern, so maybe move the new combo on earlier note at 01:13:062 Fix NC here
02:47:126 (1,2)
Make these 1/8 shorter? Quite weird for me with that empty 1/8 part
02:59:900 (2)
kind of needs some sort of a hint that slider comes faster than the earlier ones Fixed NC for better reading
03:09:965 (1,2)
this doesnt really fit, maybe remove the second slider and snap the first one with 1/4 (so its from 03:09:965 to 03:10:158) Yea, remapped this part
03:36:674 (7)
spacing error? I don't think so?

thnx bai~

jesus1412 wrote:

[Extinction]

00:02:029 (3,4) - The spacing here makes it seem like a 1/4 jump thanks to the 1/4 sliders before it. I would recommend moving this. I'm not entirely sure about the start of this map to be honest, it feels kind of awkward but I can't pin point what exactly is wrong. Maybe you're right. But I wanna keep this style first. If there more people complaining about the start of the map, I'll likely remap it

Shortest mod ever. Every other part of this map plays perfectly apart from POSSIBLY this 04:05:900 (1,1,1,1,1) . I mess up on it but I feel like it's my fault and not the maps. It could possibly be because of the 1/4 slider into the jump but I'm not entirely sure. Anyways I'm really sorry for the small mod but everything plays very well do I don't have much to say! I think this part plays well I guess. Not entirely sure @@

Too short for kudos?

chainpullz wrote:

If you ever come back to this
03:05:320 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - overmapped should be 1/4 (the first 6 is correct with 1/6 but the guitar shifts back to 1/4 mid stream).