Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart · forum

digiaria

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digiaria 2009-12-09T20:58:37+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年6月9日星期三 at 下午 8:38:29

Artist: Kamishiro Ami
Title: Cherry My Heart
Source: Lovedere-shon!
Tags: Game OP
BPM: 152
Filesize: 4426kb
Play Time: 02:28
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.32 stars, 128 notes)
Hard (4.93 stars, 466 notes)
Normal (3.47 stars, 249 notes)

Download: Kamishiro Ami - Cherry My Heart
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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PC GAME 『らぶでれーしょん！』主題歌(OP)

Last edited by digiaria 2010-06-11T14:13:32+00:00, edited 27 times in total.

ReploidArmada

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ReploidArmada 2009-12-09T22:22:17+00:00

First off, having the "normal" difficulty last for so little time compared to the harder difficulty just looks like you're being lazy, and it's rather anti-climactic. On a related note, there isn't much difference between Normal and Insane besides the length and note placement; Having a 3rd difficulty, easier than the other 2, and renaming Normal to Hard or the likes would be a good idea in my opinion.

Second, on both difficulties it seemed like you were just placing beats where ever you felt like on the screen, without trying to space them properly or arrange them neatly.

The timing seemed okay to me, but chances are that those two points I mentioned are going to be the first obstacles you'll need to fix.

-RA

ZHAO YU

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ZHAO YU 2009-12-10T05:00:19+00:00

板凳~期待~试玩中~

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2009-12-10T05:06:13+00:00

感覺只要把insane改成hard就行了..XD

nice map

star~

digiaria

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digiaria 2009-12-10T17:57:05+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

tsuka

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tsuka 2009-12-19T08:15:13+00:00

别再沉了这歌很不错的图也很棒
01:36:055 (13,14) - 这两个跳跳的不是很明显所以很容易误判
以下建议：
00:57:047 (1,2) - 这里和后面的两拍的拍手声都是normal clap 我觉得soft clap更好听
当然我的建议是两拍soft clap 再两拍normal clap 你不喜欢也没关系:D
02:08:052 (1,2) - 这里和上面一样我觉得normal的clap不适合这首歌
01:54:051 (1) - 没有对齐其实关系也不大解决的方法是删除这个圈再放一个（系统会自动对齐到slider下:D)
02:05:017 (1,2,3) - 这里的音效我有两种建议第一种是用soft的三个finish音感觉还不错音量不需要动
另一个建议就是soft下 1不设置音效 2设置为whistle 3设置为finish
00:54:051 (1,2,3) - ^
~~02:44:064 (1) - 开始0.5x速~~02:52:073 (4) - new cobom
02:49:018 (3) - ^

改成hard
- =绿色的combo不贴这背景图啊换成天蓝色怎么样绿色太深了- -b

digiaria

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digiaria 2009-12-19T14:51:55+00:00

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hvick225

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hvick225 2009-12-20T08:23:19+00:00

star~

digiaria

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digiaria 2009-12-20T09:57:35+00:00

hvick225 wrote:
star~

Thanks

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2009-12-23T11:12:49+00:00

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yaya

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yaya 2009-12-29T13:14:25+00:00

good job .
其实你可以完全不必要这么多绿线~你设一个custom hitsound，用normal的声音，设成clap啊或者其他，用normal的声音直接用音效就可以，会简单很多
还有，记得给你Mod的人kudosu,比如触卡。~
一定是mod意见对你有用的人才给，普通打星的人不要给。

keep on going

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-01-02T14:09:19+00:00

感谢各位的支持，送触卡就免了，还是送好人卡才是王道（一人一张 -_,-）

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-01-06T05:33:03+00:00

kudosu 是 mapper对有帮助的帖子的感谢方式
贴内人物头像下方有个连接是给KUDOSU的
3个kudosu可以换可粉色星星=两颗普通星星。。

另外送KUDOSU是完全免费的。。也就是说不会从你的kudosu里扣除只能对有帮助的贴发放。。

别沉了。。另外：http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60 在这里把你的贴的连接发上去叫那些有经验的人来给你mod/star

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-01-06T09:35:30+00:00

tsukamaete wrote:
kudosu 是 mapper对有帮助的帖子的感谢方式
贴内人物头像下方有个连接是给KUDOSU的
3个kudosu可以换可粉色星星=两颗普通星星。。

另外送KUDOSU是完全免费的。。也就是说不会从你的kudosu里扣除只能对有帮助的贴发放。。

别沉了。。另外：http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewforum.php?f=60 在这里把你的贴的连接发上去叫那些有经验的人来给你mod/star

感谢你的帮助，这里的专业术语还真是多，很多我都不明白囧

SamiPale

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SamiPale 2010-01-07T10:15:46+00:00

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digiaria

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digiaria 2010-01-07T12:34:46+00:00

其实不给意见，支持我也会给kudosu的，不用不好意思

LKs

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LKs 2010-01-09T15:53:29+00:00

digiaria wrote:
其实不给意见，支持我也会给kudosu的，不用不好意思

传送而来帮着MOD 希望有用如果有用请给KUDOSU~
1.我建议你，你给KUDOSU如果管理员认为moder没有对你的map有帮助的的时候，会批评你的。。
2.好厉害的绿线群啊。。你一定花了很大功夫吧，佩服

开始MOD

NORMAL

[00:59:64] 你是想和上一个的slider对称放吗?可以使用CTRL+C来复制粘贴的，这样就不会出现不对称的情况了。在图里你可以把slider做一些旋转（如图）

SPOILER

其他跟这个一样的我就不说了

[01:36:95] 设成new combo

[01:56:29] 对齐（建议）

你的normal结束了之后的绿线可以删除

Hard
建议你美化一些slider。。例如

SPOILER

和背景有点不和谐。。我发现你的slider要有很多的点来确定，其实没有必要，用两三个点反而显得自然

hard的节奏很好，没有什么问题。
因为你用的是最密的网格，所以要特别注意一些间距
结尾的转盘可以直接无声（建议）

star 好歌好图!

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-01-10T13:39:10+00:00

LKs wrote:
digiaria wrote:
其实不给意见，支持我也会给kudosu的，不用不好意思
传送而来帮着MOD 希望有用如果有用请给KUDOSU~
1.我建议你，你给KUDOSU如果管理员认为moder没有对你的map有帮助的的时候，会批评你的。。
2.好厉害的绿线群啊。。你一定花了很大功夫吧，佩服

开始MOD

NORMAL

[00:59:64] 你是想和上一个的slider对称放吗?可以使用CTRL+C来复制粘贴的，这样就不会出现不对称的情况了。在图里你可以把slider做一些旋转（如图）
SPOILER
[attachment=1:bfda3].JPG[/attachment:bfda3]
其他跟这个一样的我就不说了

[01:36:95] 设成new combo

[01:56:29] 对齐（建议）

你的normal结束了之后的绿线可以删除

Hard
建议你美化一些slider。。例如
SPOILER
[attachment=0:bfda3].JPG[/attachment:bfda3]
和背景有点不和谐。。我发现你的slider要有很多的点来确定，其实没有必要，用两三个点反而显得自然

hard的节奏很好，没有什么问题。
因为你用的是最密的网格，所以要特别注意一些间距
结尾的转盘可以直接无声（建议）

star 好歌好图!

原来还有这样的规矩，作为英语小白感到压力很大＝＝
感谢你的意见

yaya

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yaya 2010-01-30T23:48:28+00:00

digiaria wrote:
其实不给意见，支持我也会给kudosu的，不用不好意思

这种kudosu是不被允许的。会被deny掉。:)

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-01-31T03:39:31+00:00

osu_CN_yaya wrote:
digiaria wrote:
其实不给意见，支持我也会给kudosu的，不用不好意思
这种kudosu是不被允许的。会被deny掉。:)

刚知道不能乱给kudosu，下次不会了

tsuka

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tsuka 2010-01-31T16:23:28+00:00

1. 你没设置preview time 就是OSU选单里的预览歌曲时间

timg -> set preview time 所有难度都要

2. normal难了真的难了隔一拍的话还是用0.8吧或者1.0 别太夸张了你那都2.0了 = =

3.new combo不能因为怎么好看怎么摆。。hard的就算了 normal的完全过分了嘛啊喂喂……

keep on going = =b no kds on this reply

Kana Anaberal_old

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Kana Anaberal_old 2010-01-31T17:18:46+00:00

cangushishamao

Breeze

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Breeze 2010-01-31T17:19:12+00:00

围观

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-02-01T07:26:22+00:00

heihuanana wrote:
cangushishamao

naimayeshishamao ＝＝

pokedigi

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pokedigi 2010-02-03T12:12:56+00:00

应该说还需要加强，有些Slider感觉不太自然呢……

Star

[Ghost]

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[Ghost] 2010-02-17T15:26:30+00:00

star

有些地方使用slider会使得节奏感不太好._.

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mao130

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mao130 2010-02-17T15:27:14+00:00

ehm tsukamaete said to me i have to star this map

but i like it so good work ^^

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-02-25T12:48:02+00:00

Thanks very much.

Asutarotto

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Asutarotto 2010-04-18T15:59:57+00:00

总的来说还是不错的~尤其是hitsound加的很用心~效果也确实挺不错，赞一个

希望slider能都使用smooth的，中间那个确实不太好看呢

还有就是有些note排列的不够规则，显得有些乱，希望能改进~

最后Normal似乎稍微难了点，试着降低些难度？

对于这种~~明显是骗kudosu的帖子~~不用给kudosu也没问题啦

nice map star~

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SamiPale

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SamiPale 2010-04-18T16:16:23+00:00

千世同学我12月等到现在

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-04-19T19:22:27+00:00

no-7 wrote:
总的来说还是不错的~尤其是hitsound加的很用心~效果也确实挺不错，赞一个

希望slider能都使用smooth的，中间那个确实不太好看呢

还有就是有些note排列的不够规则，显得有些乱，希望能改进~

最后Normal似乎稍微难了点，试着降低些难度？

对于这种~~明显是骗kudosu的帖子~~不用给kudosu也没问题啦

nice map star~

感谢你的意见

samipale wrote:
千世同学我12月等到现在

你再等几个月吧 -_,-

AngelHoney

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AngelHoney 2010-04-27T00:45:04+00:00

有空去找下yaya或者aba吧 :3

yaya

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yaya 2010-05-14T09:47:10+00:00

i still think that parts are bad.

Alace

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Alace 2010-05-14T14:21:54+00:00

無聲的tick現在已經不可以用了
所以如果不想要tick聲的話請用 0.5+無聲
不要為了分數把tick調高再放無聲檔案
(好啦我以前幹過一次,不知道有誰猜的出是哪張map?)

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-05-15T13:34:04+00:00

yaya wrote:
i still think that parts are bad.

感谢yaya能抽时间帮我mod,虽然图不能通过

Alace wrote:
無聲的tick現在已經不可以用了
所以如果不想要tick聲的話請用 0.5+無聲
不要為了分數把tick調高再放無聲檔案
(好啦我以前幹過一次,不知道有誰猜的出是哪張map?)

多谢老师的宝贵意见
继续努力修改去 OTL

Neethime

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Neethime 2010-05-29T18:05:16+00:00

Good map,star~

Pokie

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Pokie 2010-05-31T15:04:44+00:00

Neethime wrote:
;) Good map,star~

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-05-31T15:23:52+00:00

Pokie wrote:
Neethime wrote:
;) Good map,star~

Thanks =w=

abalee

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abalee 2010-06-01T00:06:05+00:00

Hard:
00:40:901 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that don't place slider under a string of circles, hit300 will block it.
00:50:770 (10) - new combo.
01:50:572 (3,4) - Spacing?

Normal:
nazi modding below, if you don't like them, don't change them

SPOILER

00:30:638 (4) - 2 gird left 1 grid up.
00:33:796 (3) - 1 grid down
00:40:112 (4) - 1 grid down
00:50:770 (6) - new combo
01:05:967 (10) - ^
02:01:822 (5) - 1 grid up
02:03:796 (9) - 1 grid up

Easy:
00:35:178 - new combo

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-06-01T10:08:15+00:00

abalee wrote:
Hard:
00:40:901 (1,2,3,4) - I suggest that don't place slider under a string of circles, hit300 will block it.
00:50:770 (10) - new combo.
01:50:572 (3,4) - Spacing?

Normal:
nazi modding below, if you don't like them, don't change them
SPOILER
00:30:638 (4) - 2 gird left 1 grid up.
00:33:796 (3) - 1 grid down
00:40:112 (4) - 1 grid down
00:50:770 (6) - new combo
01:05:967 (10) - ^
02:01:822 (5) - 1 grid up
02:03:796 (9) - 1 grid up

Easy:
00:35:178 - new combo

感谢阿爸的指点，已修正

deepsea

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deepsea 2010-06-02T06:16:55+00:00

Do some nazis

Easy

01:36:55(4)(5) This stack is confusing since there is a vocal sound on 01:36:95 but the note is on 1/2 beat after.

01:38:92(2)(3)(1) A stack has different beat difference is confusing for newers too.<_<

This is a great map after all.Starred.

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-06-02T10:03:41+00:00

Thanks,deepsea

yaya

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yaya 2010-06-08T16:55:54+00:00

bubbled

dvorak_old

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dvorak_old 2010-06-09T10:53:40+00:00

good

It won't make much difference but Rabudere-Shon! > Rabudere-shon!　or Lovedere-shon! (looks better for me)

(shon is same as tion in english and used to nominalize love and dere (treat as verb in title), but it is eroge limited slang
= not real japanese , just only native speaker feel some strangeness about capitall letter. Ask me if you want to know more

)

digiaria

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digiaria 2010-06-09T11:20:18+00:00

dvorak wrote:
good

It won't make much difference but Rabudere-Shon! > Rabudere-shon!　or Lovedere-shon! (looks better for me)

(shon is same as tion in english and used to nominalize love and dere (treat as verb in title), but it is eroge limited slang
= not real japanese , just only native speaker feel some strangeness about capitall letter. Ask me if you want to know more )

Thanks very much