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Lin-G - Remember

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MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 1월 26일 화요일 at 오후 2:38:47

Artist: Lin-G
Title: Remember
Source: DJMAX
Tags: Black Square TECHNIKA BBANG woodstock Miya
BPM: 150
Filesize: 7306kb
Play Time: 01:42
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.4 stars, 102 notes)
  2. Hard (4.93 stars, 281 notes)
  3. Normal (4.09 stars, 175 notes)
Download: Lin-G - Remember
Download: Lin-G - Remember (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Composed by Lin-G
Visualized by BBANG, woodstock
Vocal by Miya

DJMAX Song in DJMAX Black Square n TECHNIKA XD

- 12/24 mp3 flie's volume is increased. so please re-download map :3
- 12/28 resize the backgrounds' size, so please re-download map :3
- 2010 1/20 hitwhistle sounds are changed, so please re-download map :3
- 1/22 skins are updated :3
Last edited by MoonFragrance , edited 37 times in total.
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hitsound is very good~~ >w<

Then, when you finish it, please send PM or post my modding queue or whatever call me.
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
[Easy]
00:38:334 (1) vomlume up 2 tick.
00:46:334 (1) Whistle?
01:38:534 (8,1) Clap?


[Normal]
01:05:337 (4) 1 grid up.
01:36:534 (7) Completely stack with (6)

[Hard]
00:40:834 (3) remove?

Starred.
Last edited by Tanmak , edited 1 time in total.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hayonghaseyo!

[Easy]
00:54:134 (3) - Move forward to white tick
01:10:334 (4) - Allign with 3

[Normal]
00:32:134 (3) - Allign with 2
01:26:488 (2) - Move 5 grid up

[Hard]
00:19:734 (5) - Allign with 4

Wow, this song just like a Christian song
STAR4 U
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[General]
There are too many whistles. Whistles are very annoying.

[Easy]
01:33:093 (2) - down a grid
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
hmm..

This whistle sound will be good, maybe if You want to it.

Download: 11158_Lin-G_-_Remember.rar
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed ;3

Tanmak wrote:

hmm..

This whistle sound will be good, maybe if You want to it.
could you get only string? ;_;
and thank you for staaaaaaaar @_@
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 1538

Also, why is there such a large kiai time...?
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance

Zekira wrote:

why is there such a large kiai time...?
cause highlight of song is so long O_O
and thanks for offset XD
youngdow
321 posts
Joined May 2009
youngdow
태고 플레이 하기에 아주 좋습니다 >_<.

별 드려요 ~.~
Last edited by youngdow , edited 1 time in total.
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
Overall
So hard to find the places where to put kiai D:
I think this way is cool
Kiai Sections:
SPOILER
00:39:938 ~ 00:46:338, 00:53:138 ~ 00:59:738, 01:07:138 ~ 01:13:138, 01:19:738 ~ 01:26:138, 01:32:538 ~ 01:42:138.
Even not using this (^), you gotta end the kiai somewhere, and I think that 01:42:138 is nice. No Kiai until the end of the song.

Easy
I think you should use more White Tick notes. The gameplay is not really natural =/

Normal
- 00:19:734(6) - delet this one, make the (7)(00:19:934) start here and extend it a little, making this slider hit only red ticks. here is a pic to help you:
SPOILER
- 01:32:534(1,2) - Swap New Combos

Hard - Nice!
- 00:27:134(10,1) - Swap New Combo.
Cool custom hit sounds + Whistles~

Star :)
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Easy
[General] This mode's spacing is good, but its beginning is a bit tricky to understand the song's rhythm... fix timing and/or spacing on this mode's beginning, please.
01:12:073 (7,1) - there's a strange empty gap between these beat and slider... try to fill it with something or set a little break time!

Normal
00:37:013 (2) - move it a square up
01:12:073 (6,1) - see Easy mode...

Hard
00:22:033 (6) - no whistles here

Another lovely map for MoonFragrance! <3
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

[Easy]
A little boring at the beginning. Try to add some more notes.
00:55:053 (4) - Add clap.
01:30:073 (5) - Add whistle. Or add to both 4 and 5. Or add only 4. Your desire.
01:32:053 (1) - Remove whistle at the end.
00:46:033 (1) - Add finish.
00:52:073 - Add note here. Then add finish.
01:19:093 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.

[Normal]
00:52:073 (1) - Add finish.
01:19:093 (1) - Add finish at the beginning.
01:32:053 (1) - Add whistle at the beginning and the middle.

[Hard]
00:40:053 - Add note here.
00:40:093 - ^
00:52:073 (1) - Add finish.
01:19:093 (1) - Add finish.

That's the only mistake I found. You mapped this very well with those awesome hitsounds. Star!
Kytoxid
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Kytoxid
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
fixed ;3
and thanks for modding ;)
DJPop
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DJPop
I don't think these hitsounds are fitted to the music. Sounds weird - -"
Recommend to silence sliderticks and remove sliderwhistles.


~Easy~
01:10:338 (4) - new combo
01:30:538 (4) - ^
01:37:538 (6) - ^
01:38:938 (1) - remove new combo

~Normal~
00:55:538 (5) - add hitclap
00:58:538 (6) - ^

~Hard~
No major issues.


+Star, I wanna map this song too :D
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
By AL2e10's modmod ~~

[Hard]
00:34:638 (3) Go to 00:34:738 & Remain to check the spacing.
01:32:538 (1) remove clap
01:38:938 (4) also
01:39:038 (1, Spinner) ALso

[Normal]
00:38:338 (1) remove clap
01:32:538 (3) Remove clap
00:48:938 (5) New combo & 00:49:338 (1) remove new combo
**You need to check the new combo you have make.Because that is some problem of you.
And the one of modding is simple only.

[Easy]
00:04:738 (3) new combo

[All]
I think you should make the slider sound (the one which is " DE DE DE") come to nothing.
Because I think that is annoying.
**And I give you a remain. If you change the sound bigger.
YOU Should not put clap and wistle on it WITH FINNISH.

STAR !!
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

DJPop wrote:

I don't think these hitsounds are fitted to the music. Sounds weird - -"
Recommend to silence sliderticks and remove sliderwhistles.
- i deleted slidertick sounds, but not sliderwhistles - cuz it can fixed by only remove whistle sound in-edit mode :)
and please tell me how sounds are weird to fix it ;_;

~Easy~
01:10:338 (4) - new combo
01:30:538 (4) - ^
01:37:538 (6) - ^
01:38:938 (1) - remove new combo
- fixed :3

~Normal~
00:55:538 (5) - add hitclap
00:58:538 (6) - ^
- ^

I wanna map this song too :D
- thank you for your mind, but i don't accept any collab diff anymore ;_; becuz my computer is broken, so it's hard for admin collab diff ;_;

al2e10 wrote:

By AL2e10's modmod ~~

[Hard]
00:34:638 (3) Go to 00:34:738 & Remain to check the spacing.
- it sounds weird ;_;

01:32:538 (1) remove clap
01:38:938 (4) also
- they're sounds fine already, i think.

01:39:038 (1, Spinner) ALso
- fixed :)

[Normal]
00:38:338 (1) remove clap
01:32:538 (3) Remove clap
- same to hard

00:48:938 (5) New combo & 00:49:338 (1) remove new combo
- they're okay

**You need to check the new combo you have make.Because that is some problem of you.
And the one of modding is simple only.
- please tell me what combo colours have ploblem. i make my map by me best, so i can't find ploblems by my sight @_@

[Easy]
00:04:738 (3) new combo
- fixed :3

[All]
I think you should make the slider sound (the one which is " DE DE DE") come to nothing.
Because I think that is annoying.
- what is " DE DE DE "? i can't understand it @_@ could you tell me what part it annoying?

**And I give you a remain. If you change the sound bigger.
YOU Should not put clap and wistle on it WITH FINNISH.
- umm.... i think it's fine @_@
thanks for modding, DJPop, al2e10 XD
BananasGoMoo
206 posts
Joined March 2009
BananasGoMoo
[Easy]
Fine, but i felt like there was way to much time in between some notes. I realize its an easy, but it wouldnt hurt to add some more notes.

[Normal]
00:25:938 (3) - Hidden too much.
00:31:738 (x) - Put hitcircle here.

[Hard]
Fine.

[Overall]
Too many whistles :o

+Star
subarasikibuta
559 posts
Joined May 2009
subarasikibuta
beautiful song :3
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :3
thanks for modding, and thanks for star XD
Mok
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Joined August 2009
Mok
Momentanously I can't mod this map, that's the reason:

-Please find a LOUDER mp3 ;w;.

When you've found out, catch me in-game x3
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Normal]
01:13:538 (x) - 노트 추가
01:13:938 (x) - ^
01:14:338 (x) - ^
01:23:138 (1) - 슬라이더 머리와 몸통에 호루라기 (끝은 제외)
01:23:938 (2,3) - 위와 같음
01:25:338 (4) - 박수 추가

[Hard]
00:07:138 (1,2,3) - 거리를 더 벌려서 속도를 따라잡게 하는게 어떨까요? 점프가 되기도 하구요 ㅎ

음.... 하이라이트 부분에서 소리가 많이 죽는다는게 좀 아쉽지만 넘기죠 뭐...
개인적으로 멜로디보다 재미있음 ㅇㅅㅇ! 쿠도스 생기는 대로 분홍별 쏘겠습니다.
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance

bmin11 wrote:

[Hard]
00:07:138 (1,2,3) - 거리를 더 벌려서 속도를 따라잡게 하는게 어떨까요? 점프가 되기도 하구요 ㅎ
으음... 저거 무슨 말이 신지 잘 모르겠네용 ㅇㅅㅇ;;
다른건 다 고쳤으니 여튼 쿠도스 드렸습니다 ~_~
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
NoHitter
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NoHitter
This song is has 1/6 snap. listen to it in 25% or 50%

Also I would suggest that you check using AIMod, and if the notes are far apart in the timeline, add a new combo.
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance

ykcarrot wrote:

[Easy]
후렴구 첫번째랑 두번째 파트 뉴콤보 패턴이 서로 같지 않아서 맞춰봤습니다.
01:19:938 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:738 (2) - new combo
- i don't think it's fit <_<

[Hard]
00:27:138 (10) - new combo
00:27:938 (1) - remove new combo
01:32:538 & 01:32:588 - delete these useless timing points
- fixed :D

00:30:338 - add note
- that part is on synth sounds <_<

NoHItter wrote:

This song is has 1/6 snap. listen to it in 25% or 50%

Also I would suggest that you check using AIMod, and if the notes are far apart in the timeline, add a new combo.
- i think nothing wrong there <_<
Gens
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Gens
[General]
  1. Hitsounds are too quiet for my taste, consider increasing the hitvolume.
[Hard]

00:34:638 (3) - Sounds better 1/4 later, if you're going with the vocals. Recheck spacing after that.

Normal is a bit hard for a "Normal", but it should be okay.

~ ~ ~

Pretty good map, like always. Call me back and I'll proto-bubble. :)
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
[General]

The kiai seems a bit too long, maybe shorten [?]
Offset 1555.

[Hard]
  1. 00:34:655 (3) - Make this note 1/4 later.
  2. 00:41:555 (x) - Add extra note. [?]
  3. 01:33:955 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - This seems really out of place, make this diffrent or fix it. You can clearly hear the guitar solo, but the hit circles aren't following it. It's really weird to play.
[Normal]
  1. 00:35:338 (4,5) - Move both one grid level up (Grid level 3 / Most Precise)
  2. 00:54:138 (4) - This slider seems out of place, it doesn't follow rhytm of the music. Either fix or make the slider start 1/2 later.
[Easy]
  1. Seems fine~
Starred~
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MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed :3
thanks for modding XD
Gens
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Gens
Yep yep, good job fixing that, but some unsnapped notes appeared in Hard... I swear that wasn't there D=
Open AIMod and recheck them (all of them are caused by 1/8 snap issues with spinners).
Gens
osu! Alumni
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Gens
There we goo... actually, just noticed that you have the DJMAX tag in both fields (Tags and Source), but eeeh... I guess you have been waiting too long for such a minimal change.
I'll proto-bubble it anyway.
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's ( late >_>; ) mod DEKIMASHITA~! <33'

Suggestion.
Check this.

Easy:

01:42:355; I recommend two things here. First, you can make a spinner that will slowly fading to match the song...or you can make the 01:42:155 (2) a long slider, that fades out, too...A heart shaped slider would be good. Up to you, though.
Normal:

01:42:355; Same thing as easy.
Hard:

00:35:955 (7); New combo.
01:42:355; Same thing as easy.
Whoa, I totally like the hitsounds and the way you mapped. <3
So yeah, nice star~
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Skyripper
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Skyripper
Your kiai time runs for 52 seconds... The song is only 1 minute and 42 seconds long. Please reduce the amount of time you use kiai!

[Easy]
00:55:555 (4) - new combo
00:55:955 (1) - remove new combo

[Normal]
00:18:555 (3) - new combo
00:38:355 (1) - remove new combo
00:54:555 (4) - move this note to 00:54:355
00:54:955 (5) - move this note to 00:55:155

[Hard]
00:07:155 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:555 (1) - ^
00:20:755 (1) - ^
00:21:155 (2) - new combo
00:30:355 - confusing... consider adding a beat here
00:38:355 (1) - remove new combo
00:55:955 (1) - ^
00:56:355 (2) - new combo
01:19:955 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:155 (2) - new combo
01:32:555 (1) - remove new combo
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

Skyripper wrote:

Your kiai time runs for 52 seconds... The song is only 1 minute and 42 seconds long. Please reduce the amount of time you use kiai!
- i don't know where to apply kiai time ;_; it's unrankable?
or could to tell me the place that i should apply?

[Easy]
00:55:555 (4) - new combo
00:55:955 (1) - remove new combo

[Normal]
00:54:555 (4) - move this note to 00:54:355
00:54:955 (5) - move this note to 00:55:155
- IMO, they're don't fit ;_;

[Hard]
00:07:155 (1) - remove new combo
00:17:555 (1) - ^
00:20:755 (1) - ^
00:21:155 (2) - new combo
00:30:355 - confusing... consider adding a beat here
00:38:355 (1) - remove new combo
00:55:955 (1) - ^
00:56:355 (2) - new combo
01:19:955 (1) - remove new combo
01:20:155 (2) - new combo
01:32:555 (1) - remove new combo
- i fixed some combo but not others that be fitted to music section ;)
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
쉬트 디스 맵 스타 :)
Sushi
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Sushi
[Easy]
00:03:155 (2,1) - Symetry?

[Normal]
00:02:955 (2,3,4) - Symetry?

[Hard]
Fine~


The hitsounds are lovely, but I really don't like the fact that there is a silenced hitsound.you don't know when you make errors if you are before or after the rhythm. the fact that it is often used is annoying me.

But globally, that's a very nice map (and song :3)
You have my star
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
fixed :)
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Easy
SPOILER

No errors.

Normal
SPOILER

00:17:555 (1) : Use one slider instead of a repeating one.
00:45:555 (7) : Remove this beat.
01:09:755 (5) : Add the clap hitsound.
01:23:055 : End the Kiai-time here.

Hard
SPOILER

No Visible errors.
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed ;)
Wizard Of Orz
965 posts
Joined May 2008
Wizard Of Orz
dammit i was going to map this :/. oh well ill just map the redesign.
YGOkid8
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Joined February 2009
YGOkid8
General
omg, Kiai time goes for basically half the song! If you can, try to reduce it a bit more.

Easy
1:41:955 (1, 2) - Put in middle of playfield

1:42:355 - Maybe add a silent spinner here to 1:45:155?

Normal
Same as Easy.

Hard
Same spinner comment.
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi~

Reduce Kiai time >_<

[Easy]

01:41:955 (1,2) - Center this :)

[Normal]

00:04:755 (4) - Move this 1 grid down



Star*
yeahyeahyeahhh
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Joined December 2008
yeahyeahyeahhh
Hard:
Fine though not a huge fan of the hitsounds. Lots of silent/really soft notes make it kind of hard to play. The whistle at the end got really annoying too. But this can be seen as my point of view.

Normal:
Fine, same suggestions as hard though. Those whistles are painful.

Easy:
Good
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
Not touching the p-bubble, but here a few things i noticed.
Sadly having too much kiai is unrankable, so as everyone said, pls cut down on kiai use. Personally, I don't feel kiai fits the song very well since the song is quite quiet, even at the chorus.

Remove "DJMAX" from the tags since it is already in the source.

Easy:
Comb mod:
01:33:955 (4) - new combo for end of lyrics?

Normal:
Timing section mod
00:39:955 - unneeded timing section, please remove
01:32:555 - move back a quarter note

Hard:
Timing section mod:
00:40:005 - unneeded timing section

=================
Very few errors. Star.
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MoonFragrance
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Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
fixed hitwhistle sounds and some timing section :)
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
- in General

  1. Make the custom sounds louder, the slidertick even overpowers the normal hits..

- Easy

Nothing here.


- Normal

  1. Put HP Drain Rate 1 tick to the right.
  2. Take "DJMAX" out of Tags, since it's already in Source.

- Hard

  1. Put HP Drain Rate a few ticks to the right.
  2. Put Overall Difficulty a few ticks to the right.
  3. Take "DJMAX" out of Tags, since it's already in Source.
01:00:555 (5) - Put the endpoint of this 1 grid (level 3 grid) up so the slider looks nicer.
01:26:355 (1) - ^
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
fixed ;)
Armin
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Armin
The slider-tick is a little disagreeable to listen; consider to add a silence custom-hitsound?
Also, optimize the offset: 1569

[Easy]

Overall: A bit boring for an Easy. Anyway I think the difficulty doesn't have nothing of really wrong.

00:07:755 (2) Finish at the start
00:31:955 (3) Spacing
01:30:755 (5) Stack this with the previous (4), it would be nice

Overall Rating: 8/10

[Normal]

Overall: Nice difficulty, but the whistle-rythm sounds very bad in my opinion.

00:55:955 (1,2) Make a perfect quadrangle with the previous (5,6)
01:15:555 (5) In the "middle" of the previous slider (turn off the grid snap)

Overall Rating: 8,5/10

[Hard]

Overall: No problems found. Well done. :D

Overall Rating: 9/10
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