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nao - Miracle!Portable*Mission

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Hollow Wings
1,514 posts
Joined July 2010
Hollow Wings
as ur req

General

  1. 不用自定义combo color么

Insane

  1. 00:16:039 (3,7) - stack呗
  2. 00:42:971 (1) - 反向顺手点
  3. 01:10:755 (4) - 柑橘stack在01:10:414 (2) - 上比较好
  4. 其实还是不算那么的日本流（虽然我也不知道那是什么
  5. 还是砸个星

Fycho's Hard

  1. 01:01:209 (2) - 这边虽然ds大但是还是相对短了，我觉得反向一下这个对这里的停顿判定起来反而更简单一点
  2. 真没啥

Troogle's Normal

  1. 00:11:437 (3,1) - blanket没弄好简直是要逼死强迫症，后面不说了
  2. 00:42:289 (5,1) - 尤其这个
  3. 参加谷桶挑战，关爱强迫症患者

Easy

  1. 没啥
为何我以前会有这图捏，四暗刻

good luck
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
In-game request.

  1. Red words: Should be fixed.
  2. Blue words : Highly recommended suggestion.
  3. Black words : In my opinion.

[General]
1.Widescreen support keep consistent,check normal & ins diff and select it.
2.Why the mp3 is the 320kb? It is unrank element,reduce it to 192kb? (I try to delete a document few times,but still appear 320kb status :
SPOILER

[Easy] The diff star is 1.50?
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. But I look the creator words is 1.48 now :
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,then I'll try to reduce rhythm for this diff (But maybe can't reduce the diff star.).
00:25:925 (4) - Reduce slider end to 00:26:266 ? Have a drum rhythm here,I think if add it will be played better.
01:00:698 (2) - Feel missed a whistle in slider head ? (Compare with 00:59:334 (1),seem the same vocal part here,and add a whistle express it.)
01:21:834 (2,3) - Feel this rhythm place have a bit weird,because 01:22:516 (3) - has no rhythm here,and the last rhythm at 01:22:346 , so I suggest combine with a slider,will play cool,like this :
SPOILER

[Troogle's Normal] Suggest OD-1 keep the diff spread?
01:19:618 (4) - Missed a whistle hitsound in slider head? (Check the 01:22:346 (3))

[Fycho's Hard]
00:57:630 (4) - Feel this slider have a bit close with 00:57:289 (3) ,sounds like need a enlarge abit DS,try this ? :
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01:12:800 (4) - (161|228)? Hidden down the slider and have a good flow which I think.

[Insane]
00:16:380 (5) - NC here? (Feel add this will make read better,and distinguish between two colors are easy)
00:23:539 (5) - ^
00:25:073 (1) - Stack better?
00:30:187 (2,3) - 2 to 3 flow seems weird,perhaps use 3 place here :
SPOILER
00:55:584 (3) - Move this note make good pattern better?
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01:10:925 (5) - Have a bit bad flow here,perhaps use ctrl+g ?

[Other]
Good luck.
Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki

Hollow Wings wrote:

General

  1. 不用自定义combo color么 加了

Insane

  1. 00:16:039 (3,7) - stack呗 1,3,5等间距，感觉这里stack不stack问题不大
  2. 00:42:971 (1) - 反向顺手点 我自己打感觉差不多
  3. 01:10:755 (4) - 柑橘stack在01:10:414 (2) - 上比较好 好
  4. 其实还是不算那么的日本流（虽然我也不知道那是什么 我也不知道23333333
  5. 还是砸个星

Easy

  1. 没啥
为何我以前会有这图捏，四暗刻 四暗刻
good luck

smallboat wrote:

[General]
1.Widescreen support keep consistent,check normal & ins diff and select it. fixed
2.Why the mp3 is the 320kb? It is unrank element,reduce it to 192kb? (I try to delete a document few times,but still appear 320kb status : i dont know why you have this problem, mine here is 172 kbps
SPOILER

[Easy]
00:25:925 (4) - Reduce slider end to 00:26:266 ? Have a drum rhythm here,I think if add it will be played better. it has a slidertick here, so well here
01:00:698 (2) - Feel missed a whistle in slider head ? (Compare with 00:59:334 (1),seem the same vocal part here,and add a whistle express it.) added
01:21:834 (2,3) - Feel this rhythm place have a bit weird,because 01:22:516 (3) - has no rhythm here,and the last rhythm at 01:22:346 , so I suggest combine with a slider,will play cool,like this : fixed
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[Insane]
00:16:380 (5) - NC here? (Feel add this will make read better,and distinguish between two colors are easy) not necessary imo
00:23:539 (5) - ^ same here
00:25:073 (1) - Stack better? ok
00:30:187 (2,3) - 2 to 3 flow seems weird,perhaps use 3 place here : change in my way [spoilerbox]
00:55:584 (3) - Move this note make good pattern better? ok
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01:10:925 (5) - Have a bit bad flow here,perhaps use ctrl+g ? nope
thanks for modding
Fycho
Global Moderator
2,479 posts
Joined August 2012
Fycho
@sammy, clap音效改了其他没改，没必要
@hw, 那个改不改没实质意义
@smallboat, 第一个改了第二个我是为了放等腰三角形，不能完全遮挡，而且完全遮挡读图难
thanks.
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BeatDivisor: 4
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Title:Miracle! Portable*Mission
TitleUnicode:ミラクル! ぽーたぶる☆ミッション
Artist:nao
ArtistUnicode:nao
Creator:Minakami Yuki
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:超次次元ゲイム ネプテューヌ Re;Birth1
Tags:Choujijigen Game Neptune opening compile heart visual novel mtbbsben Troogle Fycho -Google-
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Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu

sammy711 wrote:

From QQ group
[Troogle‘s Normal]
00:55:584 (1) - 这个NC就不要了吧...从00:56:607 - 这个finish开始一个长白线一个NC比较好 唔。。我觉得应该从这里开始一个长白一个NC
从01:10:243 (3) - 开始的NC有点奇怪啊，有时候跟vocal分有时候跟长白线分，建议检查一下，稍微调整调整NC的地方Fixed 都跟长白了
01:17:402 (1) - 这里是不是应该像Insane里那样用S:C4的clap啊..Fixed
01:23:880 (2,3,4) - 这三个滑条尾和01:25:925 (5) - 的结尾加clap，因为有鼓点而且夹在01:23:880 和01:26:607 - 两个finish中间，完全可以构成一段clap体系K

Hollow Wings wrote:

as ur req

Troogle's Normal

  1. 00:11:437 (3,1) - blanket没弄好简直是要逼死强迫症，后面不说了
  2. 00:42:289 (5,1) - 尤其这个
  3. 参加谷桶挑战，关爱强迫症患者
就是要折磨你们这些强迫症（大雾）
All Fixed

smallboat wrote:

In-game request.
[Troogle's Normal] Suggest OD-1 keep the diff spread? The original Easy wasn't OD2...Fixed
01:19:618 (4) - Missed a whistle hitsound in slider head? (Check the 01:22:346 (3)) K
Thx for modding wwww
Also Congrats smallboat for BAT lol
code
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Koiyuki
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Topic Starter
Koiyuki
updated
smallboat
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Joined January 2010
smallboat
No kd.
Recheck.(Because I think this map have achieved a good quailty (And has been check and discuss before.))

Just a bit suggestion :
[Easy]
  1. 01:25:243 - Feel this part hitsound sounds like a bit loud,perhaps can turn down a bit the volume?
  2. 01:25:584 (4,5) - This pattern angle looks have a bit sharply,change a curve here ?
    SPOILER
    (If fix it ,don't forget to move next objects.)
[Troogle's Normal]
  1. 00:15:016 (1) - There is no downbeat in slider end ,why add the finish? Suggest remove it.
  2. 00:47:914 (4) - Remove clap in slider head will sounds like good better.
  3. 01:01:380 (1) - Move left a bit , avoid the overlap with 01:00:698 (4). (Looks like have a bit crowded now)
  4. 01:19:107 (2) - Turn an angle a bit ? Make flow better :
    SPOILER
[Fycho's Hard]
  1. 00:52:005 (4) - Suggest add a note make playing better.(Look some parts follow the vocal and put a note,why not add this note here(00:52:005),too?)
[Insane]
  1. 00:16:038 (3) - Move to(129|169)? Make these player playing easy (and hidden mode) better.
  2. 00:33:937 (4,1) - This DS seems a bit far , perhaps can stack 00:34:192 (2) reduce a bit DS make easy to read? (Suggest fix)
  3. 00:56:096 (7) - Sounds like have a rhythm here,add a note and change this part placement?
  4. 01:25:243 - As the same Easy diff.
If you done,Call me back in-game or forum PM .
Koiyuki
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Topic Starter
Koiyuki

smallboat wrote:

[Easy]
  1. 01:25:243 - Feel this part hitsound sounds like a bit loud,perhaps can turn down a bit the volume? to 70%
  2. 01:25:584 (4,5) - This pattern angle looks have a bit sharply,change a curve here ? k

[Insane]
  1. 00:16:038 (3) - Move to(129|169)? Make these player playing easy (and hidden mode) better. it's fine now imo
  2. 00:33:937 (4,1) - This DS seems a bit far , perhaps can stack 00:34:192 (2) reduce a bit DS make easy to read? (Suggest fix) it's fine when i play this, i keep it
  3. 00:56:096 (7) - Sounds like have a rhythm here,add a note and change this part placement? change to a stream
  4. 01:25:243 - As the same Easy diff. same
If you done,Call me back in-game or forum PM .
Fycho keeps his rhythm, so no fix.
Thanks for rechecking!

waiting for -google-'s reply
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu

smallboat wrote:

[Troogle's Normal]
  1. 00:15:016 (1) - There is no downbeat in slider end ,why add the finish? Suggest remove it.
  2. 00:47:914 (4) - Remove clap in slider head will sounds like good better.
  3. 01:01:380 (1) - Move left a bit , avoid the overlap with 01:00:698 (4). (Looks like have a bit crowded now)
  4. 01:19:107 (2) - Turn an angle a bit ? Make flow better :
    SPOILER
Fixed all thx :D
smallboat
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Joined January 2010
smallboat
Rechecked with mapper in-game, and it seems nice enough now.


Bubbled!

我再看看有什麼圖片能用泡泡跟Heart
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
Thanks smallboat!
Delis
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Joined May 2012
Delis
[■ General]
  1. The title should be ミラクル！ぽーたぶる☆ミッション I was not able to find the currect source of the CD though.
    1. http://puu.sh/bEfeQ/958166f122.png from the video
    2. http://puu.sh/bEf1R/4cf4b2638d.png from the official of re;birth1
    as they appear obviously (also VGMdb says in Japanese *unofficial*), there's no space between ! and the rest, also the exclamation mark definitely should be ！ instead. If you changed unicode title, we might have to remove the space in romanised title as well. (well I'm gonna ask japanese to correct my knowledge later.)
[■ Easy]
  1. 00:08:880 (3) - I wonder why you have used such a long slider here, players would catch the rhythm by the vocals if kind of song is so, the slider end at the drum sound feels awkward for me. Unless the sound is stronger like the cymbal or something, it's better to follow the vocals in my opinion.
    SPOILER

  2. 00:19:789 (3) - I hope a clap should have been on the head.
  3. 00:22:516 (3) - Add a clap on the tail, you have already added a clap for the SAME sound at 00:22:175 (2) so I don't think it's just intentional.
  4. 00:24:221 (2) - Add a whistle on the tail? I think the somehow clap sound is unignorable to hitsounding.
  5. 00:30:016 (2) - Add a clap on the tail DD:??
  6. 00:31:039 (3) - The end needs a clap as well, as you set custom to 4.
  7. 00:32:062 (1,2) - Where is hitsound, 00:32:573 actually there is a stronger beat than 00:32:743 though there is also a beat which can be emphasized with clap or something. For the circle, there's the clap sound obviously, S:C4 also fits there imo.
  8. 00:37:516 (1) - clap on the tail.
  9. 00:39:221 (3) - adafafad clap
  10. 00:42:971 (1) - You can use clap with the whistle on the head, it actually sounds better also tail too
  11. 00:53:027 (3) - clap on the tail z
  12. 00:57:971 (2) - I would add a clap on the head because why not
  13. 01:01:721 (3) - Try adding a clap, there is actually a sound to follow and ignoring it makes me feeling worse to play.
  14. 01:03:255 - Suddenly changing from S:C3 to S:C1 in Easy diff feels a bit weird, I would change the custom into S:C3 here or 01:02:062 - to S:C1.
  15. 01:04:789 (1) - A clap on the reverse would fit to the strong sound, try it out
  16. 01:27:289 (2) - I would shorten this slider by 1/2 so everyone can read the rhythm easier because following the vocals and a strong sound is better than current one, 2/1 doesn't make any sense at all here.
    SPOILER
[■ Troogle's Normal]
  1. 01:05:812 (3) - I would use a 1/2 slider instead, because there's no reason to ignore the beat also it doesn't hurt to use a 1/2 for Normal diff.
  2. 01:26:607 (1) - This overlapping with 01:25:073 (3) - could have been avoided, move few grid right to avoid it~
[■ Fycho's Hard (HELLO)]
  1. 00:45:016 (2) - Change sampleset into Normal to follow a strong sound? well I have no reason anything else to do, it just feels to be fitting better than current one.
  2. 01:05:471 (1,2,3,4,5) - I just wonder the spacing is fine for this diff, it looks totally for Insane x.x;
  3. 01:28:652 (3) - You can probably add a clap on the tail!
  4. 01:30:527 (1) - by the way you could have used S:C2 to add a clap, it sounds much nicer with the finish as Yuki did in his/her diffs.
[■ Insane]
  1. 00:06:834 (2) - Why is there a clap at the head and no clap 00:07:175 (3) - head, everyone can say there is stronger sound at 00:07:175 so try to add a clap there as well.
  2. 00:23:539 (5,6,7,8,9) - NICE RUINING THE DIFF.
  3. 00:39:221 (2) - clap at headd
  4. 00:57:630 (4) - clap on the head
  5. 01:06:493 (1) - Does this whistle make any sense here? this seems out of place to me.
Fycho
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Fycho
all fixed thanks delis o3o.
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Koiyuki
2,531 posts
Joined March 2013
Topic Starter
Koiyuki
Thanks Delis-chan!
All fixed in Easy and Insane.
And discussed with Satellite, we all think removing the space in the Romanised title is better.

Waiting for -Google-'s Reply.

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Last edited by Koiyuki , edited 1 time in total.
Nepu
211 posts
Joined September 2013
Nepu

Delis wrote:

[■ Troogle's Normal]
  1. 01:05:812 (3) - I would use a 1/2 slider instead, because there's no reason to ignore the beat also it doesn't hurt to use a 1/2 for Normal diff.This must be a stupid mistake..
  2. 01:26:607 (1) - This overlapping with 01:25:073 (3) - could have been avoided, move few grid right to avoid it~

All Fixed thx~

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Delis
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Delis
additionssssssss

[■ General]
  1. Add short ver (I have no idea need a dot) to tags for someone who finds only short ver / tv size to play.
[■ Insane]
  1. 00:08:198 (3) - clap at the reverse, well S:C2 would fit there I guess. also S:C2 clap must be fitting at the end as well.
  2. 00:11:096 increase the volume by 20? I didn't notice there's a clap on the head while playing.
  3. 00:15:357 (6) - Add a finish for the cymbal at head x.x?
  4. 00:22:857 (3,4) - I guess... you forgot to replace the hitsound when you did CTRL+G this. though adding a clap at 00:22:857 (3) - and then keep the clap at 00:23:027 (4) - as it is would nice to listen.
  5. 00:31:721 (5) - probably a clap on the head
  6. 00:32:573 (2) - clap for a strong beat?
  7. 00:33:083 (7) - is not kind of the drum but you can try to put a clap out.
  8. 00:33:425 (1) - clap head aff
  9. 00:34:618 (4) - clap on head?
  10. 00:43:312 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - you can probably add claps or something hitsound
  11. 00:47:914 (4) - clapp
  12. 00:49:789 (1) - clap on tail
  13. 00:50:641 (3) - I think a clap will fit here, just try to listen to the song without sample once.
  14. 00:53:539 (4) - clap on head ww
  15. 00:55:755 (4) - clap?
  16. 00:57:971 (1) - clap on headd
  17. 01:01:209 (7) - clap?
  18. 01:06:493 (1,2,3) - well these are 85% the SAME music as 00:06:493 - so we can try adding clap each heads.
[■ Easy]
  1. 00:12:289 (3) - clap or something else on the tail? probably S:C2 can be fit there if you added a clap.
  2. 00:15:016 (4) - same as I mentioned in Insane diff, try to add a finish on tail for the cymbal.
  3. 00:42:971 (1) - a clap on tail desu
  4. 01:05:982 (2) - I forgot, remove the whistle from end since I mentioned only in Insane diff and you have removed only in Insane.
  5. 01:06:834 (3) - clap on tail?
  6. 01:09:732 - this green actually doesn't work, remove it and then 01:09:902 too, because S:C3 / 80% green line is already existing at 01:07:516
  7. 01:20:641 - same
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
All fixed!
Sorry for my carelessness on hitsounding ;w;
Delis
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Delis
Ranked!

For QAT: This song is from a game on PSVita so genre should be Video Game (Japanese). Also I hope the kbps of the mp3 is fine for you, that actually has enough quality to me.
Koiyuki
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Koiyuki
Thanks Delis!
lkx_Shore
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Nepu
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Nepu
:) Finally
Pururut
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Satellite
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Satellite
Congrats !
Sellenite
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Wafu
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Wafu
For QAT: Referring to the official website, the source is supposed to be "超次次元ゲイム ネプテューヌRe;Birth1" (without a space at the end).

Not a disqualify request, but for case it would get disqualified, it can be fixed.
Last edited by Wafu , edited 1 time in total.
Blanc Kisaragi
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Blanc Kisaragi
Another Choujigen Game Neptune map!
Congratz!
toara_fict
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toara_fict
Gratz Yuki :3 :3
spogebob360
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spogebob360
話說這首歌有全曲可以抓，幹嘛不抓?
Virgo
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Congratz :3
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