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ALI PROJECT - Hizamazuite Ashi wo Oname (TV Size)

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Armin
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Topic Starter
Armin
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 29 gennaio 2010 at 17.52.45

Artist: ALI PROJECT
Title: Hizamazuite Ashi wo Oname (TV Size)
Source: Kaibutsu Oujo
Tags: ARI OST Kuroneko-sHerald Kuro
BPM: 180
Filesize: 12016kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:
  1. Kuro, the Invisible Man (1,83 stars, 88 notes)
  2. Princess' Revenge (4,97 stars, 229 notes)
  3. Vampires' deception (4,24 stars, 117 notes)
Download: ALI PROJECT - Hizamazuite Ashi wo Oname (TV Size)
Download: ALI PROJECT - Hizamazuite Ashi wo Oname (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Thank you Kuroneko-sHerald for the easiest difficulty! We love you!
Last edited by Armin , edited 46 times in total.
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Hard]

This is an Insane
Add kiai
00:22:053 (5,6,7) - These sliders are evil D: Are they necessary?
00:36:053 (6) - ^
00:39:020 (6,7) - ^
01:20:070 (1) - ^
01:17:070 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,2,1,2,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - D: Are these "New combo"s necessary?
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
lol....thiss insane!!! :3

nice map

star~ :) :)
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
star ~ :)
AngelHoney
2,155 posts
Joined May 2009
AngelHoney
01:27:786 (1) - end at the 01:29:036 ??

:) :)
HarryOrunitia
289 posts
Joined August 2008
HarryOrunitia
starred
cesc
1,066 posts
Joined August 2008
cesc
LUCA TONI!!! GOAL!!!



starred~
Armin
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2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Topic Starter
Armin

cesc wrote:

LUCA TONI!!! GOAL!!!



starred~


grazie ~→
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
Starred :D
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
star
DJPop
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Here since the beginning
DJPop
This map really needs Easy! DX

~Normal~
00:29:537 (1,1) - add hitfinish
01:01:703 (1) - remove hitfinish
01:24:702 (1) - not symmetry

~Hard~
Time Signature: 4/4
00:13:121 (1) - start at 00:13:371, end at 00:16:037, add hitfinish, silence spinnerspin(+spinnerbonus)


+Star
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor

DJPop wrote:

This map really needs Easy! DX
[Video]
Wat?

[Normal]
I think 01:12:703 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5) and 01:19:036 (1,2,3,4,5) is pretty hard for an normal.
Otherwise it was good

[Hard]
God...those sliders are so fast.....
00:47:037 (6,1) - (Suggestion) remove the circle and extend the slider to when the circle was before
00:49:703 (5,1) - (Suggestion) ^
01:26:786 (1,1) - I suggest you remove these spinner

Good but you need an easy!
*star*
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin

DJPop wrote:

This map really needs Easy! DX
I disagree.

General:

-- Delete "OST" from the source, you could add it to tags.
-- BG color to black.

Normal:

01:12:703 (2,3,4,5,6) - Maybe I bit too hard for the easiest difficulty, stack might be easier. (If you made an Easy this would be less of a concern)
01:14:036 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^

Hard:

-- All your inheriting sections are in 3/4 make them 4/4.

00:22:537 (5,6,7) - Extremely fast and unexpected, you need either a warning or new combo to indicate the speed up. Actually I think it would be better if you removed it because you don't speed up at say 00:27:871 (5,6,7) - or anywhere else.

That's all, this is awesome :D

~ Star.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
Normal
SPOILER

[*] 01:17:369 Start a Kiai-Time here.

Good.

Hard
SPOILER

No visible errors.
Lokamp
2,530 posts
Joined January 2009
Lokamp
Normal
00:10:704 (4) - new combo?
00:13:204 (spinner) - start it on 00:13:371 (same end point)
00:45:370 (6,1) - new combo on 6th; remove the other new combo

Hard
Simply awesome!

Your great slider shapes are always a quality guarantee!
Star, with no doubt. ;3
Card N'FoRcE
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Card N'FoRcE
- General:
  • BPM 180,000 pls
- Normal:
  • .Suggestions:
    00:13:204 (1) - fallo finire a 00:16:037?
    00:19:870 (1) - Può essere confuso per uno spacing da 1/2
    00:27:870 (2) - ^ in questo caso anche peggio, perché non c'è la nuova combo
- Hard:
  • .Opinions:
    00:22:537 (5,6,7) - LOLWUT
    Ottima mappa e belle slider-art.
Ottimo lavoro, mi piace molto la Hard, stavolta te la kd-starro pure ^^
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Very good~
The map fit song well~
Nothing I can pick~
Star~
GladiOol
4,475 posts
Joined August 2008
GladiOol
[General]
  1. 01:27:869 - Make this timing section soft please. Sounds better in my opinion~
You should delete the .osb file (unless you make a SB-warning, see Hard diff~)
Don't put in same TAGs as Source.

[Hard]

Wait, what? Hard? Change name to Insane please.
Also add in a SB-warning for the ''random'' speed ups. (180 bpm with slider speed 2.60, and then a 2.0x section? That needs a warning.)

[Normal]

Make overall difficulty one lower on this difficulty? Since it's the easiest difficulty.
  1. 01:19:036 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - This part seems out of place with all of the sudden the 1/2. It doesn't play nice.
Starred~
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sushi
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Joined October 2008
Sushi
[Sleepin]
Fine, but maybe a bit too jumpy and fast for the diff which is supposed to be the easiest

[Revenge]
velocity 2.60 Weeeeeeeeeee~
This is weird, but this FITS THE SONG =D

huh huh
Kuroneko-sHerald
1,081 posts
Joined August 2008
Kuroneko-sHerald
Se ti può essere utile ho fatto la easy. Altrimenti niente :lol:
Il nome si può anche cambiare.

Download: ALI PROJECT - Hizamazuite Ashi wo Oname (TV Size) (Armin) [Kuro Easy].osu


Download: ALI PROJECT - Hizamazuite Ashi wo Oname (TV Size) (Armin) [Kuro Easy].osu
sesito71
398 posts
Joined July 2008
sesito71
Hi~

[Sleeping Kuro]

00:24:037 (5) - New combo here?
01:04:705 (1) - Move this 2 grids left (lvl3)
01:06:038 (3) - Move this 2 grids up and 2 right (lvl 3)
01:06:537 (1) - Start this in 01:06:704 and finish it in 01:08:698

[The princess is sleeping!]

00:07:037 (1) - Remove new combo :S
00:08:037 (2) - New combo
00:09:371 (1) - Remove new combo
00:10:704 (4) - ^
00:16:046 - Add a note or end the spinner here?

You should revise the combos, some of them are kinda weird IMO...

[Princess' Revenge]

00:22:537 (5,6,7) - lol


Well, have a star! ^^
Lissette
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1,496 posts
Joined July 2008
Lissette
General
Remove Kaibutsu Oujo from tags, is already in source

Kuro, the Invisible Man
00:29:288 - unnecessary inherited timing section

The princess is sleeping!
increase the HP Drain by 1 tick
01:11:704 (5) - stack under end point of the prev slider because this note has different spacing that the other of this combo, also, this way look symmetrical *.*

Princess' Revenge
increase the HP Drain by 1 or 2 ticks
00:10:537 (1) - maybe remove?
00:22:537 - add a SB warning for that speed up o.o
00:36:423, 00:37:006, 00:37:506, 00:39:173, 00:40:174, 00:47:204, 00:48:037, 00:49:871, 00:50:704 -unnecessary inherited timing sections
01:03:038 (5) - maybe remove this note?
01:05:204 (6) - i think you should put a new combo here, so the change of spacing could be easier to read
01:20:704, 01:21:204 - unnecessary inherited timing sections

Great map ^^
Star!
Sonnyc
7,761 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
Hello
Another ALI map!

[General]
I think the hit sound is too small..
Maybe increase a little bit?..like [Princess' revenge]

[Kuro the invisible man]
  • 00:22:704 (3) None
    00:41:371 (2) ^
    00:44:704 (6) Finish
    01:21:371 (6) New combo
[The princess is sleeping]
  • 00:35:037 (1) Whistle at the end
    00:36:371 (3) ^
    01:19:371 (2) Whistle
[Princess' revenge]
  • 01:06:704 (1) More clean slider?
    01:22:704 (3) Whistle
(Sorry, you've already obtained my star :o)
Diasios
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Joined August 2008
Diasios
Pubbled~
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
Looks great!

Bubbled~
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request. Sorry for the delay.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
Lowercase all the tags.

[Kuro, the Invisible Man]
1. The spacing is too wide. Fix it!
2. Always use distance snap since you are not allowed to make any jump for easy diff.
00:05:371 (1) - Is this a jump or error spacing?
00:10:704 (1) - New combo.
00:13:537 (1) - Extend one 1/1 tick. Then, add finish.
00:28:037 (3) - Reduce one 1/2 tick.

[Vampires' deception]
There are some big jumps which is not fit for normal diff.
00:13:204 (1) - Add finish.

[Princess' Revenge]
00:11:371 (6,7,8) - I love this style.
01:00:121 (1) - Move forward one 1/4 tick. Reduce one 1/4 tick.
01:26:787 (1) - ^
01:27:787 (1) - Move forward one 1/4 tick. Reduce one 1/4 tick. Also, silence this spinner.
Star. Well, even the map is bubbled, I still suggest you to follow those suggestion.
ztrot
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