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1. 00:04:622 (4) It seems that is off the screen, you could move left
2. 00:13:271 (5) it could be the other way around, since being the only diff fairly easy, all players should be able to pass a song, and I think the other side would be much better
3. 00:34:892 (2) the red point it so ugly >:C
4. 00:39:217 (2,3) Replace for 1 slider, it's so better, more beautiful and easy
5. 00:43:001 (1) The red points look ugly in this song, as it is very quiet
6. 01:00:432 (4,5,6) why you change the pattern on a normal diff? it's so crAaAaAaAzZzYy xd, you would to change
7. 01:20:838 (3) this would be a blanket for 01:20:298 (2)

1. 00:05:974 (5,1) sounds bad
2. 00:13:001 (2,3) When this eye is not 100% parallel, please fix this
3. 00:13:947 (4,5) I think it is much better under the tail of 00:13:541 (3)
4. 00:16:784 Get the urge to do another click
5. 00:24:352 (6,7,8) looks better that way Click me! Grr..
6. 00:26:514 (2) It is unclear, should be between 00:25:703 (1,3)
7. 00:39:487 (2,3,4) Is not it hard?
8. 00:42:190 (8,9) 1/8?
9. 00:55:974 (1,2,3,4) I think everyone is confused here, do a little more noticeable
10. 01:03:271 (3,4,5) This is best
11. 01:09:757 (3,4,5) the same idea ^
12. 01:11:920 (5,6,7) ^ too

1. It's good that you've added Tachibana Marika to the tags, but aren't there some more important characters? Adding them as well would be a good idea, don't you think so? Also, add Shaft to the tags, they seserve a crdit for the amazing BG-Video since they've made it.
2. Colours in the video are not so bright, they're faded a bit, so I'd recommend you to do the same with your colours. It'll also make the map a bit more readable, so, please, go for it!

1. 00:11:920 (3) - I would go with just one circle at 00:12:190 - there're no any strong enough beats/vocals, so having a circle here feels a bit weird. Also, making the easiest diff of the mapset a bit earlier is always a good idea.
2. 00:14:352 (1,2,3,4) - the way how "love you~ love you~" sounds in the song can be represented with your mapping style. Vocals are the most important part for the song, so, you can try to emphasize them here! Here's an example of what I've got on my mind: le example
3. 00:23:541 (4) - the vocals at 00:25:703 - belong to a different part of the song, so mapping it with this slider feels quite weird. Consider finishing the slider at 00:24:352 - which will work with the vocals quite good there and place a circle 9with a new combo, of course) at the downbeat (00:25:703 - )
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4. 00:27:865 (4,5) - I undertand your point in using a 3/2 slider there, but i also think that the vocal at 00:28:676 - should be emphasized with a circle so using an 1/1 slider + a circle would work better here, imo. the part feels totally different from 00:38:676 - this part, so using different rhythm there sounds would work.
5. 00:48:406 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I am really unsure if tapping so many circles is a good idea for the easiest diff. I would replace (7,8) with a slider, it will sound quite good and make the pattern more interesting and playable!
6. 00:56:514 (3) - breaking your comboing once again to point out the soft sound at these 3 beats would work. Try to place a new combo here and see if it loos good to you or not!
7. 01:09:487 (5,6) - the flow here feels different from what I'm used to see in your maps and does not feel natural here. I think that you can make the transition more natural and understandable. this way, huh?
8. 01:20:298 (2,3) - I love blanket sliders, they're my weak spot. I wish you could turn (3) into a blanket slider, since this will make your diff look really amazing <3
9. 01:22:055 (1,1) - the second spinner appears way too fast and it is really hard for the easiest dfff. Moreover, it will cause some problems for taiko and o!m players (you have no mode-specific diffs, so they will have to deal with standard dffs). Consider mapping the first spinner, please!
   
   The diff is pretty nice, I didn't like the final spinners, everythng else is pretty much alright.

1. 00:01:920 (1,2,3,4) - I appreciate your style, but having the jumps in the very beginning of the song where EVERY beat sounds the same and the song feels calm is confusing. The jumps just don't work well with the song.
2. 00:19:487 - there's some echo ignored, it is fine to keep it this way, but I'd prefer to see it mapped since the beats are quite noticeable. So, here's an example of what you can do. example
3. 00:21:379 (1,2,3) - minor - making blankets there would be a good idea. It may tikee some time, but the outcome will look amazing, so, please, get a couple of free minutes and fix the blankets i the whole diff.
4. 00:37:325 (5) - NC here may warn players about the jump + it feels quite fitting there. It brteaks your pattern, buty i think it's fine since the NC here will be reasonable.
5. 01:18:676 - 01:19:217 - I would map these beats because they're quite strong and it seems quite confusing to have them ignored. One of them was also mapped in th Normal, so keeping it ignored here is kindabreaking the balance.
6. 01:22:055 (1,1) - if you did any changes to the sppinners on your Normal, do the same here. Consistency should be kept because there're only 2 diffs and it is not hard to do so
   
   That was relaxing and enjoyable, great diff!

1. 00:08:947 (4) - Remove the whistle on the head, then use Soft addition on the tail and add a whistle there instead? There is a bell-like song at 00:09:217 which is stronger than the instrument at 00:08:947.
2. 00:14:352 (1,2) - Ctrl+G for the rhythm, if possible? I don't think the vocal at 00:14:352 is connected to 00:14:892, but the vocal at 00:14:892 - 00:15:433 is connected, so it'd be better to use a slider at 00:14:892 - 00:15:433 instead to follow the connected vocal effect.
3. 00:27:865 (4) - Move this to (172,56) for a better flow from 00:26:784 (2,3)? You'll need to correct the spacing at 00:27:865 (4,5), though.
4. 00:47:865 - 00:51:109 - I personally would use Soft addition and add whistles for everything that lands on a white tick (be it circles, slider heads, and slider tails) to follow the piano here. Up to you, though, but you may want to try that!
5. 00:57:055 (4) - Add a whistle since the pitch of the piano is still as high as the one at 00:56:514 (3)? It just feels weird if only one of them has a whistle to emphasize the sound.
6. 01:15:974 (2) - ^ (As high as 01:15:433 (1).)
7. 01:18:136 (4) - ^ (As high as 01:17:595.)

1. 00:35:974 - Remove the whistle here and add one at 00:37:055 instead? It's hard to explain, but I think this hitsounding will emphasize the music more accurately.
2. 00:47:595 (2,3,4) - Move this to (360,72), then copy-paste and Ctrl+H at 00:48:676 (8,9,10)'s place? It'll make 00:46:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1) look symmetric and more organized since the distance is consistent.

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1. 00:46:514 (5,1,2) - Swap NC better, 00:46:784 (6,1,4) - This spacing is really awkward = =
   
2. 00:51:109 (1) - ^
3. 00:54:892 (4) - why end use whistle? I think Sampleset : N fit :3

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1. 00:08:947 remove whistle from the tail? if you notice is not the same bell sound that you was following, I guess is better to add a whistle in the reverse of 00:09:217
2. 00:09:757 (5,6,7,1,2) - the rhythm here can be better IMO, 00:09:757 (5,6,7,1) - if you notice should be a 5 circles streams, the sound at 00:09:892 is really important too and should be mapped IMO, if you do that maybe also you want to change 00:09:892 - 00:10:163 - 00:10:298 to drums sampleset for better empathise with the music, about the rhythm I guess this sound better:
   
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3. 00:12:190 (1,2,3,4,5) - try to follow the vocals instead? like you did here 00:14:892 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - , maybe like this:
   
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4. 00:18:676 (5,6,7,8) - this should be a 5 circles streams due to the music in 00:19:082 -, since is the same as the other ones
5. 00:38:406 for this case and other similars, I feel drums sampleset fit better the music than the normal ones
6. 00:41:244 add a circle here? should be a triplet, since you mapped some similar ones before and after this, also you don't need to move much stuff just stack them like:
   
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7. 00:55:703 add a circle with drum sampleset here? since is the point were the music end, you can place it in x: 236 y : 124
8. 01:12:730 (1,2) - swap NC, due to the stanzas? since the music change in 01:13:271

1. 00:11:920 mmm I feel a single circle will fit better the vocal line, remove the slider and add a single circle in 00:12:190 -, in that way the pattern will fit the music better and at the same time will be more new player friendly
2. 00:14:082 (6) - remove this circle, sound a bit weird, since it doesn't fit with your rhythm selections in this diff, also the transition slider circle slider in 1/2 can be a bit stressful for new players, just following the vocals is the best option here, I guess
3. 00:39:217 (2) - this slider doesn't fit the vocal <:, I prefer if you do something similar as 00:36:514 (4,5) - and 00:40:838 (5,6) - , since that places sound really nice, like:
   
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4. 00:59:217 (2,3) - a 1/1 slider will fit better the vocals, also for consistency with 00:58:136 (1) - , also you can make a cool pattern, maybe like:
   
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• Color guide

1. Normal suggestions.
2. Very suggestive stuff. Apply changes only if you like. Also applied for suggestions that don't affect your map at all.
3. Unrankable or highly recommended to change.

• [Normal]

1. 01:05:703 (6) - A clap at the end of this slider sounds nice with the music imo, try it out~
2. 01:06:244 (1) - How about a hitfinish at the end of this slider to emphasize the vocals and music?
3. 01:14:352 (6) - Clap at the end of this slider too if you applied my 1st suggestion. ^ ~
4. 01:18:676 (1) - Correct me if I'm wrong, but I think here's missing a whistle.
5. 01:26:244 - My headphones aren't good and I don't trust them at all, but I'm 80% sure that the bell sound you're following with this spinner end rangs here at 01:26:244, not at 01:26:176.
   
   Unlike others said when modding this map. I think the final spinners fit and are alright since this plays like an Easy and is veeery simple. They will also boost the total points you can get from the diff, which is nice since maps of slow songs usually don't give significant score points and even more when it's an Easy/Normal diff.

• [Hard]

1. 00:22:460 (3) - Perhaps add whistle at the end of this slider? I don't understand your whistle pattern on this diff at all xD but I think it sounds good.
2. 00:34:082 (8) - This note here breaks up the flow because it doesn't follow up 00:33:271 (7)'s curve at all :< I think it plays better if you place this note over here:
   
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3. 01:06:379 (7) - Here I suggest you the same clap like in Easy.
4. 01:06:784 (1) - Hitfinish to emphasize vocals and music again like I suggested in [Normal]?
5. 01:11:920 (5) - This slider curve like this breaks the flow imo. I'd change it like this to improve it. Plays more smoothly imo :3
   
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6. 01:24:217 (1) - Same issue mentioned about this spinner end in [Normal].
   
   Solid diff as I expected from you bakAndrea.
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