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NORMAL
00:28:947 (5) - I think it sounds better if there was a whistle at the end of slider to hint the end of the rhythm at this part
00:34:892 (2) - Flow might be better if it was directly underneath 00:34:352 (1) - , so try moving head of slider to (124,140)
00:57:055 (4) - adding whistle might make the quiet rhythm easier to follow
01:13:811 (5) - suggest NC here, since I think 7 combo is a bit high for Normal diff
HARD
00:09:757 (5) - I dont really hear anything at this point, so maybe remove?
00:26:514 (2) - distance spacing error I think (unless this was intentional). Might suggest moving to (12,236) to keep the DS even
01:17:055 (x) - I hear a faint sort of whistle here so I suggest adding a note to keep the 1/1 rhythm ongoing
Good luck!