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Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu - Precious Friends

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Lanturn
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Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Don

Don wrote:

[Lanturn]
Let me start out by saying that I really love your maps. <3 thank you!

00:26:077 (1) - Make the red tick fall in the middle of the slider so that it'll look more beautiful. Fixed. Good eye!
00:27:515 (1) - Here as well, try to land the red ticks on the drum beats. Nitpicky, but it can indeed be improved. Readjusted these.
00:44:776 (2) - ^ Alright. Done.
01:03:063 (3,4) - Make the blanket perfect between these sliders Nudged the tail down slightly I guess? Idk if that made it any better though.
01:54:640 (5,1) - Nitpicky, but maybe try and blanket this. No room, and it doesn't need a blanket.
01:59:777 (1,2) - Once again, this blanket can be improved. This is fine as is.
02:19:092 (5,1) - ^ Changed around slightly.
02:28:955 (4,1) - ^ Not needed. The (1) is blanketing the previous (3) on its tail.

Thanks for the mod :3


SPOILER
osu file format v13

[General]
AudioFilename: Precious Friends.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 88343
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 1
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 16214,56477
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Precious Friends
TitleUnicode:Precious Friends
Artist:Nanamori-chu * Goraku-bu
ArtistUnicode:七森中☆ごらく部
Creator:Setz206
Version:Lanturn's Normal
Source:ゆるゆり
Tags:yuru yuri マイペースでいきましょう Yuruyuri Lanturn Happy Go Lily Mikami Shiori Ootsubo Yuka Ookubo Rumi Tsuda Minami Yryr
BeatmapID:421038
BeatmapSetID:173956

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:3
CircleSize:3
OverallDifficulty:3
ApproachRate:4
SliderMultiplier:1.2
SliderTickRate:1

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Knotts
712 posts
Joined May 2013
Knotts
Hii, mod from my queue. My mods are usually just personal preference so just take whatever you want.

Insane
  1. 00:29:365 (3) - Move to (275,194) to place at the center of the pentagon.
  2. 00:33:269 (2,3) - The flow from (2,3) feels really nasty for me to play. I'd move (3) up a little or angle it differently.
  3. 00:44:776 (4) - A drum finish/clap sounds better.
  4. 00:45:598 (8) - Move this to somewhere like (248,155) to get rid of the overlap.
  5. 00:48:577 - You could possibly start a 1/4 slider here to follow the vocals.
  6. 00:51:865 - ^
  7. 00:58:132 (5) - Drum finish/clap sounds better.
  8. 01:09:022 (2) - Pretty nazi but this should be moved up a little to make a straight line if that's what you were going for.
  9. 01:12:515 (2) - I'd split this into two circles instead of a slider because I feel it'd emphasize those instruments more.
  10. 01:23:611 (1) - Remove finish
  11. 01:24:433 (3) - ^
  12. 01:28:337 (7,8) - Maybe switch these two out for a 1/4 slider for the vocals.
  13. 01:55:461 (3) - Maybe add a drum sample set for more feedback.
  14. 02:12:926 (1) - Remove finish
  15. 02:17:652 (5,4,5,6,1) - I don't even know what this flow is.
  16. 02:51:967 (4) - Why not just stack this onto (3)?
  17. 02:55:461 (6) - Move to (285,367)
  18. 02:56:693 - I'd just add a circle around here because it felt weird to end at 02:55:461 when it's building up.
Hard
  1. Pretty clean but there's an overuse of finishes and it doesn't sound nice. If you don't notice them then I guess it's fine
  2. 02:56:693 - Same as Insane
Lanturn's Normal
  1. So clean I used it to wipe my hands.
  2. 02:56:693 - Same as Insane

Good luck!

Best girl pls
Setz
1,419 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Setz

Knotts wrote:

Hii, mod from my queue. My mods are usually just personal preference so just take whatever you want.

Insane
  1. 00:29:365 (3) - Move to (275,194) to place at the center of the pentagon. I wanted this note to be in the center of the spinner, so no change.
  2. 00:33:269 (2,3) - The flow from (2,3) feels really nasty for me to play. I'd move (3) up a little or angle it differently. flows fine to me honestly
  3. 00:44:776 (4) - A drum finish/clap sounds better. I did this in Hard, because I was specifically mapping the drums. in insane, I am mapping piano with these jumps, so I think the whistle makes more sense.
  4. 00:45:598 (8) - Move this to somewhere like (248,155) to get rid of the overlap. fixed
  5. 00:48:577 - You could possibly start a 1/4 slider here to follow the vocals.
  6. 00:51:865 - ^ did this in hard, didnt do it in insane by choice.
  7. 00:58:132 (5) - Drum finish/clap sounds better. again, for the rhythm I am trying to highlight here, i think whistle makes more sense.
  8. 01:09:022 (2) - Pretty nazi but this should be moved up a little to make a straight line if that's what you were going for. on purpose, i wanted 01:09:022 (2,4) - to be on the same axis.
  9. 01:12:515 (2) - I'd split this into two circles instead of a slider because I feel it'd emphasize those instruments more. I like this, done.
  10. 01:23:611 (1) - Remove finish
  11. 01:24:433 (3) - ^ done for both
  12. 01:28:337 (7,8) - Maybe switch these two out for a 1/4 slider for the vocals. rather keep stream going instead of suddenly changing what i am mapping during it, just seems confusing.
  13. 01:55:461 (3) - Maybe add a drum sample set for more feedback. done
  14. 02:12:926 (1) - Remove finish ok
  15. 02:17:652 (5,4,5,6,1) - I don't even know what this flow is. huh? you linked a bunch of random notes.
  16. 02:51:967 (4) - Why not just stack this onto (3)? ruins spacing.
  17. 02:55:461 (6) - Move to (285,367) done
  18. 02:56:693 - I'd just add a circle around here because it felt weird to end at 02:55:461 when it's building up. this also feels weird, there is really no good way to deal with this. I wanted to map this ending but the timing for it is incredibly complex, you need a red line per object, so decided to go with whats there.
Hard
  1. Pretty clean but there's an overuse of finishes and it doesn't sound nice. If you don't notice them then I guess it's fine you have a point, I removed some of them finishes.
  2. 02:56:693 - Same as Insane

Good luck!
thanks for the mod!

and best girl is akari, pls.
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn
Going to follow Setz on this. thanks though for the suggestion :3
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
Precious bros B)

Also, fixed one stack in hard, but other than that, it's fine

EDIT: god dammit setz
Setz
1,419 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
Setz
Thanks, and I am sorry senpai, forgive me :o
Toy
Former osu! Champion: 2019 / Grilled Dodongo
1,505 posts
Joined June 2013
Toy

CDFA wrote:

EDIT: god dammit setz
hurry up god dammit setz
[ Setsuna ]
422 posts
Joined October 2013
[ Setsuna ]

[Toy] wrote:

CDFA wrote:

EDIT: god dammit setz
hurry up god dammit setz
^ <--- <--- setz pls
Xinely
5,014 posts
Joined April 2012
Xinely
someone requested me to check this one.




  • General
  1. 01:41:693 - it would be better to end the kiai of Hard and Insane diff here. because it has the cymbal, actually 01:41:796 - it doesn't give any sense for me
  2. 02:09:640 (1) - it just my taste, i prefer to do kiai fountain only here cause the music is more calm than 02:03:886 (2) -
  3. 01:40:050 - would be end of kiai for Hard and Insane diff for consistency with 02:21:146 -


  • Normal
  1. 00:22:378 - i would say to add note here for consistency with 00:19:091 (3) -
  2. 00:29:570 (1) - hmm it just my taste, rule said 2/1 gap for Normal but since this is Normal which is easiest diff, i prefer to set to 3/1, but it's up to you ~
  3. 00:42:515 (1) - inconsistency spacing (0,94x) here
  4. 00:59:776 (2) - just my taste but imo the curve of the slider is too curvy and different with next slider, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111389 instead?
  5. 01:02:241 (1) - add finish on head cause the sound of "psssh" here. sounds like cymbal
  6. 01:05:529 (1) - ^
  7. 01:10:461 (3) - finish at head. the music is cymbal here
  8. 01:12:104 (1) - ^
  9. 01:27:104 (3) - finish at tail, cymbal too~
  10. 01:38:406 (1) - same as 01:10:461 (3) -
  11. 01:52:996 (2) - finish coz the cymbal ~
  12. 02:06:352 (1) - ^
  13. 02:09:640 (1) - finish at head because the cymbal
  14. 02:16:215 (1) - ^
  15. 02:37:378 - for me, this time it should be mapped because the pitch of music and cymbal http://puu.sh/c3vTB/990a2f4591.jpg
  16. 02:21:146 - another suggestion, but try to end the kiai here cause the music become calm here
  17. 01:40:050 - same as above


  • Hard
  1. 00:28:543 (3) - kinda nazi but for me the flow can improved here, i would say something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111422
  2. 00:32:652 - i can't hear the finish sound here tbh, increase the volume around 60-70%
  3. 00:57:515 (1) - hmm i dont find a nice way for better hitsound here but i'm sure this is totally empty with soft whistle only
  4. 01:11:899 (6) - replace with a circle and then 1/2 slider. 01:12:102 - it has cymbal sound here so you must map that one
  5. 01:16:625 (5) - you can add whistle here for emphasize the crystal sound
  6. 01:21:967 (4) - if you do a high jump like this, it should be NC. but you NC'ed here based vocal, so.... aaa i can't find better way
  7. 01:26:693 (7) - ^
  8. 01:29:776 (5) - same as 01:16:625 (5) -
  9. 01:39:022 (6) - finish here since it has sound like "pssh" which is cymbal
  10. 01:41:693 (5) - just my taste but i prefer add finish here
  11. 02:20:118 (6) - same as 01:39:022 (6) -
  12. 02:29:570 (6) - should be NC here for consistency
  13. 02:43:748 (8) - should be 1/4 here as i hear, 02:43:851 - and 02:43:954 - trumpets 02:44:056 - drum
  14. 02:51:351 - you should map this one, cymbal sound
  15. 02:47:447 (5,9) - both NC please, combo is too long
  16. well NC pattern here is really messy Q_Q


  • Insane
  1. 00:26:077 (1) - add whistle here for emphasize the melody of music
  2. 00:29:365 (3) - nazi, move to 272,196 for better centre position with 00:27:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flower
  3. 00:32:652 - same as hard
  4. 00:33:474 (3) - shorten the slider to 00:33:680 - , definitely overmap for the blue tick
  5. 00:34:707 (1) - the blue tick sound is quite faint here. i prefer to shorten it to 00:34:913 -
  6. 00:35:940 (5) - should be NC here. based the music pattern
  7. 00:37:995 (1) - same as 00:34:707 (1) -
  8. 00:39:228 (5) - same as 00:35:940 (5) -
  9. 00:44:981 (5) - should be NC here because next circles are making new pattern
  10. 00:49:091 (5) - 00:52:378 (6) - add NC for both sliders, inconsistency NC pattern aaa
  11. 00:58:749 (8) - nazi, design can be neater by move to 168,192
  12. 01:14:878 (2) - why not to extend the slider to 01:15:289 - ? it still has a sound. if you do this one, dont forget about the placement
  13. 01:31:419 (5) - nazi but consistent spacing would be better and make design become neater here. move to 268,120
  14. 01:39:022 (3) - finish, same reason as Hard
  15. 01:41:693 (5) - same as Hard
  16. 01:41:899 (1) - end the spinner to 01:44:570 - , vocal ended at that time
  17. 01:48:680 (4,5) - swap the rhythm, i'm sure 01:48:885 - the crystal is main music here so it should be mapped with slider's head + a little bit jump
  18. 01:49:913 (2) - remove finish and change to whistle, inconsistency with hard diff here (hard diff uses whistle)
  19. 01:55:255 - should be a jump here because the music's melody. 01:55:666 - same here
  20. 02:10:872 (5) - you can add whistle on head here for emphasize the crystal sound
  21. 02:20:118 (2) - same as Hard
  22. 02:21:248 - the spinner music isnt really low until use 5% here. i prefer use 20% instead since it still has crystal sounds
  23. 02:43:748 (6) - same as Hard
  24. 02:51:351 - same as Hard
Lanturn
osu! Alumni
3,912 posts
Joined March 2012
Lanturn

Xinely wrote:

I'll let Setz do the Kiai stuff and copy it later on to my diff..


  • Normal
  1. 00:22:378 - i would say to add note here for consistency with 00:19:091 (3) - Made this a slider for the held guitar.
  2. 00:29:570 (1) - hmm it just my taste, rule said 2/1 gap for Normal but since this is Normal which is easiest diff, i prefer to set to 3/1, but it's up to you ~ Yeah. I wanted to allow enough spinner bonus and I don't really like it ending early. I moved it 1/2 back though so it catches one of the jingle sounds.
  3. 00:42:515 (1) - inconsistency spacing (0,94x) here Oops thanks.
  4. 00:59:776 (2) - just my taste but imo the curve of the slider is too curvy and different with next slider, how about https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111389 instead? Looks nice. Changed this close to your suggestion.
  5. 01:02:241 (1) - add finish on head cause the sound of "psssh" here. sounds like cymbal
  6. 01:05:529 (1) - ^
  7. 01:10:461 (3) - finish at head. the music is cymbal here
  8. 01:12:104 (1) - ^
  9. 01:27:104 (3) - finish at tail, cymbal too~
  10. 01:38:406 (1) - same as 01:10:461 (3) -
  11. 01:52:996 (2) - finish coz the cymbal ~
  12. 02:06:352 (1) - ^
  13. 02:09:640 (1) - finish at head because the cymbal
  14. 02:16:215 (1) - ^ For all of these I went through this section again and added/removed finishes as I saw fit. I don't want to overload the finishes so I only added them scarcely. I think I added roughly 3-4 and removed about 2-3
  15. 02:37:378 - for me, this time it should be mapped because the pitch of music and cymbal http://puu.sh/c3vTB/990a2f4591.jpg Alright. Made pretty big changes to this section.
  16. 02:21:146 - another suggestion, but try to end the kiai here cause the music become calm here Will fix once Setz decides what to do.
  17. 01:40:050 - same as above ^
Thanks for the mod :3

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236,340,57310,2,0,B|180:361|180:361|155:306|155:306|99:327|99:327|88:260|30:236|30:236|83:207|83:207|50:156|50:156|104:120,1,480,2|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
204,60,59365,6,0,L|272:60,1,60,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,80,59776,2,0,P|336:136|312:208,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,312,60598,2,0,P|387:296|440:217,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,264,62241,54,0,P|152:204|180:148,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
212,112,62858,1,2,0:0:0:0:
260,76,63063,2,0,P|312:96|392:72,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
464,160,63885,2,0,P|388:200|277:206,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
476,280,65529,6,0,P|436:328|368:340,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
324,332,66146,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,284,66351,2,0,P|304:248|304:216,2,60,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,344,67173,2,0,P|144:292|148:236,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
180,192,67789,2,0,P|192:140|168:76,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,28,68406,1,8,0:0:0:0:
312,68,68817,6,0,L|416:148,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
452,180,69433,2,0,B|448:244|385:271|385:271|392:312|364:336,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,356,70461,2,0,L|152:276,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
116,244,71077,2,0,B|120:180|183:153|183:153|176:112|204:88,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,132,72104,54,0,B|368:160|422:124|422:124|460:132|500:116,2,180,8|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,96,73748,2,0,B|153:143|195:206|195:206|153:274|206:311|206:311|268:276|332:324,1,360,4|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
436,348,75392,38,0,P|456:280|436:232,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
368,140,76214,2,0,P|296:180|256:172,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,144,77036,2,0,B|96:192|92:252|92:252|108:280|104:312,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,64,78680,5,2,0:0:0:0:
332,132,79091,1,0,1:0:0:0:
380,244,79502,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,324,79913,2,0,P|352:360|462:334,2,180,8|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,81556,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,136,81967,6,0,B|104:116|60:116|36:148|36:148|36:180|60:212|120:224,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,83200,1,8,0:0:0:0:
336,136,83611,2,0,B|376:116|420:116|444:148|444:148|444:180|420:212|360:224,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,212,84844,1,8,0:0:0:0:
144,136,85255,54,0,B|92:76|133:29|133:29|160:48|216:36,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,64,86283,2,0,P|328:36|360:16,2,60,2|8|4,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
412,120,87104,2,0,P|440:100|456:72,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
304,172,87926,2,0,P|272:196|260:224,1,60,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
208,320,88543,6,0,P|148:336|90:321,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
44,284,89159,2,0,B|81:221|48:171|48:171|84:168|112:128,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
184,56,90187,2,0,B|232:24|300:52|300:52|320:36|360:32,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,164,91830,6,0,P|288:192|368:176,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
404,160,92447,2,0,B|448:216|402:268|402:268|368:264|336:280,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,324,93474,2,0,P|176:344|112:320,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
52,228,94296,2,0,B|36:184|36:184|36:140,2,90,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
108,204,95118,54,0,P|168:184|236:216,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,272,95940,2,0,P|381:286|446:248,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
369,161,96762,2,0,P|356:104|380:51,2,120,2|0|2,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,117,97995,1,8,0:0:0:0:
381,51,98406,6,0,B|313:37|269:79|269:79|233:69|196:90,1,180,12|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,116,99228,2,0,P|184:176|152:232,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,328,100051,6,0,P|156:344|224:324,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
324,272,100872,2,0,P|376:260|424:276,2,90,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,101694,12,0,104571,0:0:0:0:
304,192,108270,38,0,B|308:264|355:295|355:295|352:336|392:360,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,196,109914,2,0,B|420:124|373:93|373:93|376:52|336:28,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
180,92,111147,1,8,0:0:0:0:
120,196,111556,54,0,B|120:268|120:268|116:328|44:344,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
72,160,112996,1,4,0:0:0:0:
152,72,113407,2,0,L|152:12,2,60,2|0|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
252,136,114229,1,2,0:0:0:0:
300,244,114640,2,0,P|364:168|356:82,2,180,4|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,160,116488,22,0,P|116:224|144:284,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
172,316,117105,1,2,0:0:0:0:
292,296,117516,2,0,P|356:284|416:308,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
480,208,118338,2,0,P|444:112|484:32,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
456,264,119777,54,0,B|392:296|341:267|341:267|280:284,1,180,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
164,272,120804,2,0,B|207:255|207:255|222:217|264:207,1,120,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,168,121626,2,0,B|440:164|481:124|481:124|504:152|492:196,2,180,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,144,123064,6,0,P|252:132|196:144,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
88,188,123886,2,0,P|132:236|188:252,1,120,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,232,124503,2,0,B|307:214|358:237|358:237|392:236|424:200,1,180,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,124,125530,1,2,0:0:0:0:
400,44,125941,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,126352,12,2,128612,0:0:0:0:
380,120,129640,22,0,P|316:144|272:120,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
232,80,130256,2,0,B|264:144|222:191|222:191|228:224|256:244,1,180,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
348,312,131284,2,0,B|409:278|462:307|462:307|488:280|520:288,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,356,132927,6,0,P|176:312|156:256,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
184,216,133544,2,0,B|244:236|294:190|294:190|312:224|356:236,1,180,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
460,224,134571,2,0,P|436:156|382:117,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
296,64,135393,2,0,P|256:76|208:60,2,90,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
352,48,136215,6,0,P|376:110|354:157,1,120,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
236,160,137037,2,0,L|316:272,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,308,137653,2,0,B|280:336|280:336|232:312|232:312|200:324|172:312,1,180,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
76,244,138681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,124,139092,1,8,0:0:0:0:
200,60,139503,54,0,B|230:123|204:177|204:177|252:224,1,180,4|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
293,254,140325,2,0,P|345:274|413:254,1,120,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
492,176,141146,6,0,P|468:112|496:64,1,120,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,32,141968,2,0,P|324:44|276:28,2,90,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,142790,12,0,145256,0:0:0:0:
392,96,146078,54,0,L|332:228,1,120,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
248,280,146900,2,0,P|191:262|136:280,1,120,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
70,381,147722,2,0,P|15:280|76:177,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,164,148955,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,236,149366,54,0,B|248:280|192:280|192:280|120:280,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
376,156,151009,2,0,P|408:228|400:280,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
496,192,151831,2,0,B|488:128|432:80,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,40,152653,6,0,B|284:92|224:56|224:56|164:92|116:40,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
32,128,153886,1,8,0:0:0:0:
58,245,154297,2,0,L|176:293,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
269,224,155119,2,0,P|281:167|255:111,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
144,68,155941,6,0,P|63:184|144:300,1,300,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
257,264,157378,2,0,B|323:186|241:175|311:96,1,180,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
401,23,158407,1,8,0:0:0:0:
498,93,158818,1,8,0:0:0:0:
436,196,159229,54,0,B|376:300|376:300|356:328|312:332,2,180,4|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,108,160872,2,0,P|264:92|240:104,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
152,180,161694,2,0,P|156:240|200:292,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,376,162516,6,0,P|38:284|41:158,1,240,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
94,60,163749,1,8,0:0:0:0:
188,132,164160,2,0,B|239:173|302:154|302:154|340:176|344:224,2,180,2|2|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,40,165804,6,0,P|380:53|455:143,1,240,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,264,167037,1,8,0:0:0:0:
348,328,167448,2,0,P|288:324|232:272,1,120,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
332,212,168270,2,0,P|292:166|289:90,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,112,169092,54,0,B|460:164|454:219|454:219|416:240|420:288,1,180,2|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
388,312,169914,2,0,P|332:332|276:312,1,120,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,228,170735,2,0,B|148:180|148:180|144:124|144:124|96:72,2,180,4|4|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,172378,12,0,175482,0:0:0:0:
Setz
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Topic Starter
Setz

Xinely wrote:

someone requested me to check this one.




  • General
  1. 01:41:693 - it would be better to end the kiai of Hard and Insane diff here. because it has the cymbal, actually 01:41:796 - it doesn't give any sense for me done
  2. 02:09:640 (1) - it just my taste, i prefer to do kiai fountain only here cause the music is more calm than 02:03:886 (2) - this i want to keep, I feel like the cymbal crash at 02:03:063 - deserves to be emphasized with kiai fountain.
  3. 01:40:050 - would be end of kiai for Hard and Insane diff for consistency with 02:21:146 - done


  • Hard
  1. 00:28:543 (3) - kinda nazi but for me the flow can improved here, i would say something like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2111422 Ok, followed your suggestion.
  2. 00:32:652 - i can't hear the finish sound here tbh, increase the volume around 60-70% increased to 60%
  3. 00:57:515 (1) - hmm i dont find a nice way for better hitsound here but i'm sure this is totally empty with soft whistle only added claps here to go with the drums in the background.
  4. 01:11:899 (6) - replace with a circle and then 1/2 slider. 01:12:102 - it has cymbal sound here so you must map that one done
  5. 01:16:625 (5) - you can add whistle here for emphasize the crystal sound done
  6. 01:21:967 (4) - if you do a high jump like this, it should be NC. but you NC'ed here based vocal, so.... aaa i can't find better way
  7. 01:26:693 (7) - ^ Switched NCs here to follow your suggestions
  8. 01:29:776 (5) - same as 01:16:625 (5) - done.
  9. 01:39:022 (6) - finish here since it has sound like "pssh" which is cymbal done
  10. 01:41:693 (5) - just my taste but i prefer add finish here done
  11. 02:20:118 (6) - same as 01:39:022 (6) - done
  12. 02:29:570 (6) - should be NC here for consistency NC'd at 02:29:365 (1) - instead so that it is consistent with 02:40:871 (1) -
  13. 02:43:748 (8) - should be 1/4 here as i hear, 02:43:851 - and 02:43:954 - trumpets 02:44:056 - drum good catch, fixed
  14. 02:51:351 - you should map this one, cymbal sound done.
  15. 02:47:447 (5,9) - both NC please, combo is too long
  16. well NC pattern here is really messy Q_Q cleaned up combos here, it should make more sense.


  • Insane
  1. 00:26:077 (1) - add whistle here for emphasize the melody of music done
  2. 00:29:365 (3) - nazi, move to 272,196 for better centre position with 00:27:926 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flower done
  3. 00:32:652 - same as hard increased to 60% like in hard.
  4. 00:33:474 (3) - shorten the slider to 00:33:680 - , definitely overmap for the blue tick done
  5. 00:34:707 (1) - the blue tick sound is quite faint here. i prefer to shorten it to 00:34:913 - done
  6. 00:35:940 (5) - should be NC here. based the music pattern done
  7. 00:37:995 (1) - same as 00:34:707 (1) -
  8. 00:39:228 (5) - same as 00:35:940 (5) - done for these 2.
  9. 00:44:981 (5) - should be NC here because next circles are making new pattern done
  10. 00:49:091 (5) - 00:52:378 (6) - add NC for both sliders, inconsistency NC pattern aaa moved combos here so they make more sense.
  11. 00:58:749 (8) - nazi, design can be neater by move to 168,192 done
  12. 01:14:878 (2) - why not to extend the slider to 01:15:289 - ? it still has a sound. if you do this one, dont forget about the placement going to leave this alone, this slider is mapping the drums, and it can be confusing enough as it is since its starting on a blue tick.
  13. 01:31:419 (5) - nazi but consistent spacing would be better and make design become neater here. move to 268,120 done.
  14. 01:39:022 (3) - finish, same reason as Hard done
  15. 01:41:693 (5) - same as Hard done
  16. 01:41:899 (1) - end the spinner to 01:44:570 - , vocal ended at that time done
  17. 01:48:680 (4,5) - swap the rhythm, i'm sure 01:48:885 - the crystal is main music here so it should be mapped with slider's head + a little bit jump done
  18. 01:49:913 (2) - remove finish and change to whistle, inconsistency with hard diff here (hard diff uses whistle) done
  19. 01:55:255 - should be a jump here because the music's melody. 01:55:666 - same here I prefer stacks here, because they have similar sounds.
  20. 02:10:872 (5) - you can add whistle on head here for emphasize the crystal sound done
  21. 02:20:118 (2) - same as Hard done
  22. 02:21:248 - the spinner music isnt really low until use 5% here. i prefer use 20% instead since it still has crystal sounds fixed
  23. 02:43:748 (6) - same as Hard changed to 5 note stream
  24. 02:51:351 - same as Hard Done
all changes updated, I went ahead and made the kiai changes to Lanturn's diff like I did with mine since he said he was waiting to see what i would do.

thanks for the mod!
Xinely
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Xinely
recheck

add 三上 枝織 (Shiori Mikami's japanese name) 大坪 由佳 (Otsubo Yuka) 大久保 瑠美 (Okubo Rumi) 津田 美波 (Tsuda Minami) to tags
Setz
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Topic Starter
Setz

Xinely wrote:

recheck

add 三上 枝織 (Shiori Mikami's japanese name) 大坪 由佳 (Otsubo Yuka) 大久保 瑠美 (Okubo Rumi) 津田 美波 (Tsuda Minami) to tags
Done, I did this, but without spaces between their given and family names, since I've been corrected in the past for doing that.
Xinely
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Xinely
since we fixed the 1/3 to 1/4 snap. i feel it would be better if one more BAT to check this map

have your bubble back (ノ>∨<)ノ
Setz
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Setz
thanks for your help :)
Tari
osu! Alumni
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Tari
Alright , did some irc mods

short irc
23:03 Setz206: all the diffs have these colors http://puu.sh/caeel/d4a611b425.png
23:05 Tari: yea
23:05 Tari: they are all correct to me
23:05 Tari: but
23:05 Tari: can you copy them for normal
23:05 Tari: to other diffs
23:05 Tari: just to make sure?
23:05 Setz206: ok
23:07 Tari: map looks fine after that
23:07 Tari: don't touch anything else
23:07 Setz206: yep, i just copied the colors like you said
23:07 Setz206: updated

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CodeS
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Joined September 2011
CodeS
WOW NICE!, I remember modding this like 5 months ago, glad to see it ranked now,.
Gz Best Yuru Yuri mapper!
Lanturn
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Lanturn

CodeS wrote:

Gz Best Yuru Yuri mapper!

omg yes <3

Grats Setz!
Setz
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Setz
thank you guys :D
Kinshara
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Kinshara
lmao i remember modding this a while back

Congratz!
TtmnZk
Elite Mapper
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TtmnZk
Congratz! :)
tewbs
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tewbs
awwwww yeahh :D Good Job mang
A Mystery
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A Mystery
Congratz!!!

Very nice
kakifly
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!! congrats on rank :>
Sky Trias
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Congrats! :D
Setz
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Woo safely ranked, thanks everyone 😄
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