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Owl City - Beautiful Times (feat. Lindsey Stirling)

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HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
HootOwlStar

VINXIS wrote:

remove the unused transparencies pls
nah
ac8129464363
1,560 posts
Joined October 2013
ac8129464363
its necessary e_e
Come[Back]Home
1,785 posts
Joined October 2011
Come[Back]Home
As fas as i know there must be at least 2 diffs made by yourself, otherwise it wont be rankable.

Easy

00:36:181 (2) Hmm, i think 1/1 or 1/2 slider would fit better, and its an easy, so there should be no problem
00:52:946 (1) Move slidertail too 504/320. It looks better and has better flow with 00:55:152 (2)
02:07:946 (2) Same as 00:36:181 (2

Veyron's Normal

00:59:563 (6,1) To me it feels weird that they are stacked. I think you should unstack them and move (6) too 324/228. The overlap with 01:00:887 (2) then is not bad either
01:23:828 (4) I think this one should be like 01:21:181 (1,2,3) Its weird that it is the only slider in the combo which isnt like them
01:42:357 (1) You could let the slider end here 01:45:005 and start mapping from here 01:45:887 . Fits better imo
01:58:902 (4) This one should be a slider till 01:59:343 . Its better when theres no slider starting on a blue tick

j_a's Light Hard

00:13:019 (5) Let this slider repeat here 00:13:460 . It fits better, and its a hard, so it should be better with it
00:20:740 (1) Delete NC, there is no need for a NC there
00:46:990 (4) Let this slider end at 00:47:431 and add a circle here 00:47:652 . I think it fits more the song since youre skipping a beat otherwise
01:07:063 (7) Add NC and delete NC 01:07:505 (1) for consistency
01:35:299 (4) Add Nc and delete NC 01:37:063 (1)
01:38:828 (5) Add NC and delete NC 01:39:710 (1)
01:42:357 (6) Add Nc

VINXIS' Hard

00:03:313 (5,6,2) Bad overlap
00:26:475 (5,6) ctrl+g this for a better flow
00:37:505 (2,3,4,5,6) I dont know how to fix it, but i think that the pattern itself looks ugly, you really should try something else
00:38:607 (1) There is no need for this slider to start on an offbeat
00:41:255 (3,4) ^

This diff has many cosmetical and flow issues. Ill skip this sorry. Its too much to point them all out.

6006's Light Insane

02:22:063 (3) ctrl+g for a better flow?

Nothing wron with this diff, i think it doesnt need further modding since its already polished enough

Fort's Insane

Awesome diff

Really nice mapset overall ^_^
Good luck on getting it ranked (after 1 year lol) :3
Rirakusu
218 posts
Joined November 2013
Rirakusu

Come[Back]Home wrote:

As far as I know there must be at least 2 diffs made by yourself, otherwise it wont be rankable.
Welp just to correct something, the ranking criteria never says that you must make 2 or more diffs in a map set to make it rankable. However it does state that no other guest mappers can make more diffs than the beatmap uploader.

In this case, HOS created 1 diff, while others also created 1 each, so it isn't wrong as no one created >1 diffs for this map.

BTW I'm on phone and I can't really check things out, so correct me back if the ranking criteria changes again. And HOS please help with applying the mods for me while I'm away from my computer thanks a lot :D
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron

Come[Back]Home wrote:

As far as i know there must be at least 2 diffs made by yourself, otherwise it wont be rankable. It is fine when the creator only mapped one diff, the criteria didn't ask for it. But if it's RREEAAAAALLLLY major, please don't be afraid telling us substantial reasons for us to accept the terms.

Veyron's Normal

00:59:563 (6,1) To me it feels weird that they are stacked. I think you should unstack them and move (6) too 324/228. The overlap with 01:00:887 (2) then is not bad either Okay
01:23:828 (4) I think this one should be like 01:21:181 (1,2,3) Its weird that it is the only slider in the combo which isnt like them I'm out of patterns lol so i made this as parallel with the next slider.
01:42:357 (1) You could let the slider end here 01:45:005 and start mapping from here 01:45:887 . Fits better imo I prefer spinner here, because the sliderslide would bother the player for hearing the song, or either rhythm would sound awkward.
01:58:902 (4) This one should be a slider till 01:59:343 . Its better when there's no slider starting on a blue tick There are parts that're similar to this, i won't change because of following the vocals. Since it's a really slow song, i don't think a player's brain cannot function fast to notice it quickly. So yeah, keeping this.
Thanks for the mod btw!

Updated http://puu.sh/ifEua/b48b31ed89.rar
HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
HootOwlStar

Come[Back]Home wrote:

As fas as i know there must be at least 2 diffs made by yourself, otherwise it wont be rankable.

Easy

00:36:181 (2) Hmm, i think 1/1 or 1/2 slider would fit better, and its an easy, so there should be no problem personally thinks 3/4 is okay here + it does follow vocal + laziness overwhelming xD, anyway it's time to give the beginners their lesson muAHAHAHA lol
00:52:946 (1) Move slidertail too 504/320. It looks better and has better flow with 00:55:152 (2) yea agree and fixed
02:07:946 (2) Same as 00:36:181 (2) as above

j_a's Light Hard
I have the permission to ruin apply mods for his diff so yea
00:13:019 (5) Let this slider repeat here 00:13:460 . It fits better, and its a hard, so it should be better with it did a lot of changes here
00:20:740 (1) Delete NC, there is no need for a NC there Fixed.
00:46:990 (4) Let this slider end at 00:47:431 and add a circle here 00:47:652 . I think it fits more the song since youre skipping a beat otherwise did sth else
01:07:063 (7) Add NC and delete NC 01:07:505 (1) for consistency
01:35:299 (4) Add Nc and delete NC 01:37:063 (1)
01:38:828 (5) Add NC and delete NC 01:39:710 (1)
01:42:357 (6) Add Nc
Fixed the combo things

6006's Light Insane

02:22:063 (3) ctrl+g for a better flow? Had the permission and fixed.

Nothing wron with this diff, i think it doesnt need further modding since its already polished enough

Fort's Insane

Awesome diff

Really nice mapset overall ^_^ Thanks!
Good luck on getting it ranked (after 1 year lol) :3 lol okay :3
Thanks for the mod
Anyway updated except Hard diff
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
only fixed overlap

offbeat isnt wot u think it is

http://puu.sh/igF5u/c138e83ba4.osu

this is dum its fine for like 1/2 the people and then the other 1/2 hate the diff nice 1
HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
HootOwlStar
ok all diffs are updated
Hard
696 posts
Joined February 2013
Hard
yo.

Mod from my queue and m4m

You said you only want hard an normal so here I go

[Vinxis' Hard]

  1. 00:01:990 (1,2) - i think you should avoid overlaps like this. It's easy to make this diff at least a bit prettier maybe try to change the pattern so 00:00:666 (2,3,4,5,6) - look more triangle-ish like this:
    SPOILER
  2. 00:05:078 (5,1,2,3) - this, again, looks messy. How about you clean it up a bit. Like this:
    SPOILER
    and then
  3. 00:30:005 (5,6) - how about you add some cool effect and stack those sliders.
  4. 00:32:100 (2,3,5) - i suggest you change the pattern so that those 2 don't touch
  5. 00:38:166 (5,6) - how about you change the distance from 4 to 5 a bit and then stack 6 with 00:37:725 (3) - this doesn't only look better, it also makes the flow better
  6. 00:40:372 (1,2) - why the sudden change of ds? i don't understand. please stay consistent with your map
  7. 00:43:902 (6,1,2,3) - again please consistent distance snap
  8. 00:50:299 (3,5) - stack them because of looks.
  9. 01:22:063 (5,7) - ^
  10. 02:23:387 (6,7,8) - how about you clean this up and make it look like this
    SPOILER
  11. 02:44:563 (6) - how about you put this 6 up a bit. so you don't overlap with 02:43:240 (3) - and also form a nice straight line with 02:43:240 (3,5,6,7) - which looks awesome
[Veyron's Normal]
  1. 00:39:490 (2) - i think you should delete this note. in normals you should put in 1/2's when they are really necessary and it's not. i think you're going with the vocals here and it doesn't fit to put a random 1/2 here.
  2. 00:43:902 (3) - ^
  3. 00:45:666 (6) - ^
  4. 00:57:137 - because the drums are so strong here maybe add a circle
  5. 01:58:902 (4,5) - i suggest to support the vocals you change this pattern. i think you should put the slider first and then a circle. so make a slider from 01:58:902 - to 01:59:343 - and add a circle at 01:59:784 - to support drums and vocals
  6. sorry for not finding much i'm not too good at modding normals and i don't do nazimodding.
Rirakusu
218 posts
Joined November 2013
Rirakusu
Hmm HootOwlStar something was changed and I didn't really like the effect..(not my style). Hence I did a quick edit.

Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Owl City - Beautiful Times (featuring Lindsey Stirling).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 77652
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Beautiful Times (feat. Lindsey Stirling)
TitleUnicode:Beautiful Times (feat. Lindsey Stirling)
Artist:Owl City
ArtistUnicode:Owl City
Creator:HootOwlStar
Version:j_a's Light Hard
Source:
Tags:Adam Young June 27 Ultraviolet EP Fort Gray Veyron orza6006 VINXIS jinhang_ang Arcubin
BeatmapID:669222
BeatmapSetID:172788

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:2.3
SliderTickRate:2

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Thanks for applying the mod anyway!
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron

Hard wrote:

[Veyron's Normal]
  1. 00:39:490 (2) - i think you should delete this note. in normals you should put in 1/2's when they are really necessary and it's not. i think you're going with the vocals here and it doesn't fit to put a random 1/2 here. Okay
  2. 00:43:902 (3) - ^ There's this vocals started on this part. So this one will be kept.
  3. 00:45:666 (6) - ^ Same reason as above.
  4. 00:57:137 - because the drums are so strong here maybe add a circle Right here, I started to follow some vocals mainly. I think the drums on the song track doesn't seem sound so high for a note, so it's likely the same reason as before.
  5. 01:58:902 (4,5) - i suggest to support the vocals you change this pattern. i think you should put the slider first and then a circle. so make a slider from 01:58:902 - to 01:59:343 - and add a circle at 01:59:784 - to support drums and vocals Hmm, I guess I'll give up on this rhythm, changed it anyway.
  6. sorry for not finding much i'm not too good at modding normals and i don't do nazimodding. Nahh, that's okay ;p
Thanks for the mod, Hard!

Updated http://puu.sh/iv3v4/f87115e4d7.rar
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
diff mods itself nice
[Vinxis' Hard]

  1. 00:01:990 (1,2) - i think you should avoid overlaps like this. It's easy to make this diff at least a bit prettier maybe try to change the pattern so 00:00:666 (2,3,4,5,6) - look more triangle-ish like this:
    SPOILER
    basicly manual stacks and equilateral triangles tho
  2. 00:05:078 (5,1,2,3) - this, again, looks messy. How about you clean it up a bit. Like this:
    SPOILER
    and then
    if u mean overlaps w. the previous combo then thats not a prob imo. nothing to worry about rlly
  3. 00:30:005 (5,6) - how about you add some cool effect and stack those sliders. bad to read when completly stacked so i did a manual stack thing kinda
  4. 00:32:100 (2,3,5) - i suggest you change the pattern so that those 2 don't touch dam
  5. 00:38:166 (5,6) - how about you change the distance from 4 to 5 a bit and then stack 6 with 00:37:725 (3) - this doesn't only look better, it also makes the flow better
  6. 00:40:372 (1,2) - why the sudden change of ds? i don't understand. please stay consistent with your map wha5^56????/??/?/////??
  7. 00:43:902 (6,1,2,3) - again please consistent distance snap literally wh?/??/
  8. 00:50:299 (3,5) - stack them because of looks. manual stacking > autostack
  9. 01:22:063 (5,7) - ^ ^
  10. 02:23:387 (6,7,8) - how about you clean this up and make it look like this
    SPOILER
  11. 02:44:563 (6) - how about you put this 6 up a bit. so you don't overlap with 02:43:240 (3) - and also form a nice straight line with 02:43:240 (3,5,6,7) - which looks awesome was manual stak but only moving it cuz line

sdgjhr

http://puu.sh/iATMn/54237c9c16.osu
Kareov
349 posts
Joined July 2013
Kareov
Placeholder.


This map's file is a bit large, so I'm still redling >:(
Kareov
349 posts
Joined July 2013
Kareov
Sorry I'm still a poor modder

[Easy]
02:55:593 (4) - 在太左上角了 建议把它移到右边或者变个形状。

[Normal]
01:30:005 (5) - It's very weird that you put a long slider here :<

[Hard]
01:45:005 (5) - This slider is very ugly, make it into another shape 'cuz my OCD
02:00:446 (1) - This slider is not a friendly slider to beginners, trust me.
02:45:005 (5) - Remove NC
03:00:446 (1) - Add NC here.

[VINXIS]
Got nothin to say, but Circle Size 4 please.This is hard diff and the circle size make it look like it's normal!

[6006]
Smooth, and nice. I love this diff. :P
01:01:769 (1) - Change this slider's shape?

[Fort]

SPOILER
LOL


Well, you can ignore this mod if it's useless, I'm still a poor modder ;_;
Cerulean Veyron
2,090 posts
Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron

Kareov wrote:

[Normal]
01:30:005 (5) - It's very weird that you put a long slider here :< I've done that on 02:54:710 (5) - too, so ehhh keeping for consistency.
I haven't change anything :''< But it's okay, don't feel down. I'm sure you'll improve better later on! C:
Rirakusu
218 posts
Joined November 2013
Rirakusu

Kareov wrote:

[Hard]
01:45:005 (5) - This slider is very ugly, make it into another shape 'cuz my OCD I didn't changed the slider shape but switched the slider head and tails for better flow.
02:00:446 (1) - This slider is not a friendly slider to beginners, trust me. Quite surprisingly that you are the first modder to say this. But. Sliders are lenient, they can just hold through the center of it and get an easy 300. Besides that this diff isn't aimed at beginners too, just for the players that can't handle Hard's 1/4 yet.
02:45:005 (5) - Remove NC
03:00:446 (1) - Add NC here.

I keep these NC settings first. I'm applying NCs according to vocal and these NC settings somewhat break the rule.

Well, you can ignore this mod if it's useless, I'm still a poor modder ;_;

Not really too useless, just that I hope that you can add reasons and maybe suggestions to fix stuff you have mentioned. Such that "this slider is very ugly" you didn't give me any reasons to convince me to change it so yeah. :D I'm sure you will improve 加油～！
Update for HootOwlStar
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Owl City - Beautiful Times (featuring Lindsey Stirling).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 77652
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Beautiful Times (feat. Lindsey Stirling)
TitleUnicode:Beautiful Times (feat. Lindsey Stirling)
Artist:Owl City
ArtistUnicode:Owl City
Creator:HootOwlStar
Version:j_a's Light Hard
Source:
Tags:Adam Young June 27 Ultraviolet EP Fort Gray Veyron orza6006 VINXIS jinhang_ang Arcubin
BeatmapID:669222
BeatmapSetID:172788

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:5
ApproachRate:6
SliderMultiplier:2.3
SliderTickRate:2

[Events]
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//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
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VINXIS
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VINXIS
cs3 best hard diff cs
Kareov
349 posts
Joined July 2013
Kareov
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HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
HootOwlStar

Kareov wrote:

[Easy]
02:55:593 (4) - 在太左上角了 建议把它移到右边或者变个形状。ok
感谢mod. Updated
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Hello again, HootOwlStar! Since this is a recheck there's no need for a kudosu.

j_a's Light Hard

  1. 00:41:916 (1) - I think it'll be better if a clickable object is placed on the downbeat 00:42:357 . It would sound better and play better.
  2. 02:20:078 (5) - This slider misses beats that could be hit, and the current doesn't hit anything in the music which sounds bizarre.
    Starting from 02:19:857 you can try this rhythm:
    SPOILER
    It can also apply to 02:37:725 (5) - 02:51:843 (5) -
  3. 02:35:740 (7,1) - I think the new combo should be switch if you follow the pattern. There's also 02:49:857 (7,1) .

VINXIS' Hard

Circle Size to around 3.5 ~ 4? 3.1 seems too big to me.
  1. 00:30:887 (6) - How about moving this slider to somewhere that won't get overlapped, like Ctrl + H and move it to x:310 y:119? Just to have a better readability. There's also 02:25:593 (2) which you can move it to x:212 y:300.

Fort's Insane

  1. 00:32:652 (3) - I would switch the head and tail (Ctrl + G). I think it would make a better flow through 00:31:769 (1,2) . For the pattern you can do this:
    SPOILER
Poke me back! Until then I'm leaving a star icon.
orza6006
156 posts
Joined January 2014
orza6006

Kareov wrote:

Sorry I'm still a poor modder

[6006]
Smooth, and nice. I love this diff. :P Thanks!
01:01:769 (1) - Change this slider's shape? Ehh, I think it's fine as it is

Well, you can ignore this mod if it's useless, I'm still a poor modder ;_;
Thanks for checking!
VINXIS
Featured Artist
3,161 posts
Joined April 2014
VINXIS
y does evry1 hate big cs omargod

ok changed the things

http://puu.sh/iOhaL/8ca8893fad.osu


cs is 3.3 tho
Rirakusu
218 posts
Joined November 2013
Rirakusu

sheela901 wrote:

j_a's Light Hard

  1. 00:41:916 (1) - I think it'll be better if a clickable object is placed on the downbeat 00:42:357 . It would sound better and play better. hmm okay changed this and a few more notes after it to make sure that it is still neat and playable.
  2. 02:20:078 (5) - This slider misses beats that could be hit, and the current doesn't hit anything in the music which sounds bizarre. okay although i don't see any problems with this slider but your skill level is higher than me (?) so anyway following your advice.
    Starting from 02:19:857 you can try this rhythm:
    SPOILER
    It can also apply to 02:37:725 (5) yeah- 02:51:843 (5) - fixed too but ruined some designs. however rhythm>design so okay.
  3. 02:35:740 (7,1) - I think the new combo should be switch if you follow the pattern. There's also 02:49:857 (7,1) . fixed
Thanks for rechecking <3

Update yayyy
osu file format v14

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AudioFilename: Owl City - Beautiful Times (featuring Lindsey Stirling).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 2000
PreviewTime: 77652
Countdown: 0
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StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.4
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
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Title:Beautiful Times (feat. Lindsey Stirling)
TitleUnicode:Beautiful Times (feat. Lindsey Stirling)
Artist:Owl City
ArtistUnicode:Owl City
Creator:HootOwlStar
Version:j_a's Light Hard
Source:
Tags:Adam Young June 27 Ultraviolet EP Fort Gray Veyron orza6006 VINXIS jinhang_ang Arcubin
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320,20,146034,1,0,0:0:0:0:
244,52,146255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
272,136,146475,2,0,L|216:160,1,57.5
152,116,146916,2,0,L|96:92,1,57.5
60,164,147357,5,8,0:0:0:0:
88,240,147578,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,292,147799,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,288,148019,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,328,148240,6,0,P|304:248|260:212,1,115,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
212,184,148902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,140,149122,2,0,L|400:104,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
340,44,149784,1,0,0:0:0:0:
264,64,150005,2,0,L|153:97,1,115
72,176,150887,6,0,P|72:256|200:320,1,230,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
191,321,152210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
268,292,152431,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,232,152652,2,0,P|320:152|192:88,1,230,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,86,153975,1,0,0:0:0:0:
124,228,154416,2,0,P|232:220|176:176,1,230,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,80,155740,6,0,L|284:24,2,57.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,140,156402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
384,184,156622,2,0,P|340:224|288:216,1,115
224,168,157284,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,188,157505,2,0,L|86:194,1,57.5
36,256,157946,2,0,L|56:372,1,115
136,364,158607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
180,296,158828,6,0,P|252:280|272:228,1,115,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,216,159490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
120,188,159710,2,0,P|154:143|210:139,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
284,164,160372,1,0,0:0:0:0:
364,190,160593,1,0,0:0:0:0:
413,127,160814,1,0,0:0:0:0:
368,60,161035,1,0,0:0:0:0:
290,83,161255,1,0,0:0:0:0:
224,132,161475,2,0,P|152:184|8:152,1,230,8|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
20,164,162799,6,0,L|1:223,2,57.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
116,100,163681,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,152,163902,1,0,0:0:0:0:
232,96,164122,2,0,P|252:184|228:212,1,115
91,255,165005,6,0,P|215:315|299:267,1,230,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
290,279,166328,1,0,0:0:0:0:
316,204,166549,1,0,0:0:0:0:
300,124,166769,2,0,P|176:64|92:112,1,230,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
101,100,168093,1,0,0:0:0:0:
88,260,168534,2,0,P|149:333|184:243,1,230,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,200,169857,6,0,L|368:228,2,57.5,0|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
232,148,170519,1,0,0:0:0:0:
164,188,170740,2,0,P|156:128|188:80,1,115
116,40,171402,1,0,0:0:0:0:
52,88,171622,2,0,P|24:108|-8:112,1,57.5
8,192,172063,2,0,P|-12:244|4:300,1,115
76,336,172725,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,268,172946,6,0,L|84:144,1,115
164,136,173607,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,212,173828,2,0,P|240:168|232:104,1,115,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,64,174490,1,0,0:0:0:0:
332,136,174710,2,0,L|396:152,2,57.5
276,192,175372,2,0,B|232:200|208:188|208:188|252:288|204:336|164:324|120:272|152:248|184:256,1,287.5,0|4,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,176696,5,0,0:0:0:0:
52,184,176916,2,0,P|64:132|116:104,2,115,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
132,184,178019,2,0,P|181:158|195:104,1,115
276,100,178681,2,0,L|356:204,2,115,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
196,104,179784,2,0,P|220:40|276:24,1,115
336,52,180446,2,0,P|396:80|452:68,2,115,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,104,181549,2,0,L|264:244,1,115
188,196,182210,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,264,182431,2,0,B|104:224|104:224|112:144,2,115,2|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
300,216,183755,5,0,0:0:0:0:
380,208,183975,2,0,P|360:152|300:136,2,115,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
332,272,185078,2,0,P|252:288|232:328,1,115
308,344,185740,2,0,B|264:236|264:236|200:272|156:232,1,230,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,300,186843,2,0,P|84:204|128:176,1,115
148,152,187505,2,0,P|196:104|188:36,2,115,0|2|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,188607,12,4,190593,0:0:0:0:

Well actual me behind the monitor
omg it's starredddddd rankkkk hypeeeeeeeeeee kay calm down please *breathes*
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
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Ciyus Miapah

sheela901 wrote:

Fort's Insane

  1. 00:32:652 (3) - I would switch the head and tail (Ctrl + G). I think it would make a better flow through 00:31:769 (1,2) . For the pattern you can do this: i think that flow a bit complicated than my recent pattern here
    SPOILER
Poke me back! Until then I'm leaving a star icon.
looks i didnt change here, but thanks for mods :3
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
Recheck.

j_a's Light Hard

  1. 01:25:152 (7,1) - I forgot to mention this too. The new combo needs a switch.

VINXIS' Hard

  1. 02:25:593 (2) - Add more distance between the previous and following sliders. Currently the distance looks like 02:26:034 (3,4) and other, and it can lead to confusion in my opinion.

Fort's Insane

  1. 02:44:122 (6) - The clap on tail is out of place, so you may want to delete it.
Just them and poke me again.
HootOwlStar
750 posts
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Topic Starter
HootOwlStar

sheela901 wrote:

Recheck. Since this is quite simple to fix I think I can help them to fix these

j_a's Light Hard

  1. 01:25:152 (7,1) - I forgot to mention this too. The new combo needs a switch. Done

VINXIS' Hard

  1. 02:25:593 (2) - Add more distance between the previous and following sliders. Currently the distance looks like 02:26:034 (3,4) and other, and it can lead to confusion in my opinion. I hope I fix it better

Fort's Insane

  1. 02:44:122 (6) - The clap on tail is out of place, so you may want to delete it. I think it is quite fun to apply a clap here so no change for this. But I deleted some similar ones in the same kiai part so ya
Just them and poke me again.
Updated.
sheela
2,651 posts
Joined October 2011
sheela
I guess it's good. Let's level it up!

ac8129464363
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Joined October 2013
ac8129464363
there are still improperly snapped objects in veyron's normal. nice
VINXIS
Featured Artist
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VINXIS
ravioli
HappyRocket88
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Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
go go go \(o.o)/
Flask
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined July 2011
Flask
可以睡覺惹

[Fort's Insane]
  1. 00:16:990 (8,9) - Probably placed a jump here? The vocal here is kinda like which is on 00:15:666 (5) -, so if you placed the jump on there, you should do the same thing here.
  2. 00:43:681 (4,5,6,7) - / 01:34:637 (4,5,6) - Tiny spacing thingy
  3. 02:14:343 (2,1) - I feel like you could just remove the new combo from current (1) and add it on current (2) instead. Just to left 02:12:357 (1) - as an individual combo o3o
  4. 02:45:887 (2) - You missed the finish here?
  5. Add some default-whistles on the objects in the last part? Since they're so quiet, and they're so lonely that need some whistles to be with them.
[VINXIS' Hard]
  1. This diff is more like an light insane diff though, or at least, a hard+. Not sure about how you think about this though, but this seems even harder than the current light insane (due to the higher spacing and some jumpy pattern)
  2. 00:04:857 (4,5) - There's no need to change the spacing here, since you didn't even do that in the same part.
    Some placements could be cleaner imo, but it's great enough. I like the flow there \o\
[Veyron's Normal]
  1. 03:06:181 (4) - You could add a reverse here, it's acceptable
[Easy]
  1. 最後那4個slider可以在他們的頭加上whistle (最後一個可加可不加)
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HappyRocket88
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Joined May 2014
HappyRocket88
The hype is real. \(o.o)/
VINXIS
Featured Artist
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Joined April 2014
VINXIS
HOS apply mods 4 me plz kthx
HootOwlStar
750 posts
Joined May 2014
Topic Starter
HootOwlStar
I think I can help the other mappers to fix stuffs

Flask wrote:

可以睡覺惹

[Fort's Insane]
  1. 00:16:990 (8,9) - Probably placed a jump here? The vocal here is kinda like which is on 00:15:666 (5) -, so if you placed the jump on there, you should do the same thing here. Instead of placing jump, I removed the jump as it is a little awkward
  2. 00:43:681 (4,5,6,7) - / 01:34:637 (4,5,6) - Tiny spacing thingy Fixed.
  3. 02:14:343 (2,1) - I feel like you could just remove the new combo from current (1) and add it on current (2) instead. Just to left 02:12:357 (1) - as an individual combo o3o Fixed.
  4. 02:45:887 (2) - You missed the finish here? Fixed.
  5. Add some default-whistles on the objects in the last part? Since they're so quiet, and they're so lonely that need some whistles to be with them. Fixed.
    Green line at 01:45:997 - and 01:56:475 - is added, green line at 01:45:887 - is removed
[VINXIS' Hard]
  1. This diff is more like an light insane diff though, or at least, a hard+. Not sure about how you think about this though, but this seems even harder than the current light insane (due to the higher spacing and some jumpy pattern) Don't think so lol sry
  2. 00:04:857 (4,5) - There's no need to change the spacing here, since you didn't even do that in the same part. idk I made it bad or not
    Some placements could be cleaner imo, but it's great enough. I like the flow there \o\ ya
[Veyron's Normal]
  1. 03:06:181 (4) - You could add a reverse here, it's acceptable Fixed.
[Easy]
  1. 最後那4個slider可以在他們的頭加上whistle (最後一個可加可不加) Fixed.
    Other parts changed includes 00:36:181 (3) - , 01:16:328 (2,3,1) - , 02:01:769 (3,4,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2) - , 02:30:446 (4,5) -
    Might need to concern 02:17:652 (1) - and 03:03:534 (1) -
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Cerulean Veyron
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Joined August 2012
Cerulean Veyron
waow i was abut 2 check but you fixed t 4 me tytytytytty hos <3333 idk wat 2 repay u
HootOwlStar
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Topic Starter
HootOwlStar

Gray Veyron wrote:

waow i was abut 2 check but you fixed t 4 me tytytytytty hos <3333 idk wat 2 repay u
tilde tilde
orza6006
156 posts
Joined January 2014
orza6006
Before ranking: On the SB, "Then the survivor" should be "Then to survivor"
Rirakusu
218 posts
Joined November 2013
Rirakusu

orza6006 wrote:

Before ranking: On the SB, "Then the survivor" should be "Then to survivor"
Time to summon Arcubin though. My image editing sucks and my image editor wasn't good enough plus what font was that?

Btw hypeeee
Arcubin
689 posts
Joined September 2013
Arcubin
Fixing this now.

Azlyric was write as "the" back then.

(I also think it's pronounce is like to then the :3)

EDIT : done, just replace "8.png" to new "8.png" http://puu.sh/jkZfd.png http://puu.sh/jl1NJ.png (fixed word) http://puu.sh/jl1Uk.png (fixed size)

tl;dr i don't really remember the opacity for shadow and glow... it's might slightly different
HootOwlStar
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Updated all, I think.
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