Sorry for inconvenience. This mapset has been taken out of the qualified section due to these reasons:
[Lunatic]
Insufficient quality.
The space, flow and some rhythm is not good enough and can be polished more before ranking.
Below is a modding that from my prospective. Just some examples of the issue.
Pattern00:03:531 (5,6) - Can be a lot better if the symmetry is well performed.
00:10:695 (1,2,3) - It is hard to hit in this flow. Although the distance is the same with 00:10:471 (5,1) . Example as a choice:
00:17:411 (5) - Reads like a 1/4. Can be a little misleading.
00:18:195 (2,3) - We often read it as 1/4 jumps but here is 1/2. And the distance between 00:18:531 (3,4) - is quite large. So it's confusing here.
00:25:023 (1,2) - You can make an comparision with 00:16:963 (4,5) , and the distance suddenly goes large.
00:50:545 (2,3,4,5,1) - Tricky spacing I guess. You can make the 1/2 rhythm larger in 5-1.
01:16:292 (1) - Unreadable slider.
02:38:904 (2) - This jump can be a little bit hard or not nature to hit. You can move the note 2 downward to make the jump not that hard to hit.
02:55:695 (2,3,4,5,6) - Unbalanced distance between 1/4 rhythms. You can make the distance equal to each other, or just stacking 2,3,4 is a good choice.
03:27:262 (6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - The stacking on 1,2 makes the part hard to read.
04:11:814 (1) - Also unreadable.
Rhythm00:31:963 (1,2) - In previous part and the starting part of the vocal you followed the drum. And now I am not sure what track you are following. If you are on vocal, the ending of the slider 2 is on a drum and the vocal is still strong.
00:57:150 - Here is a drum. And it's strong. A note is suggested to emphasize here.
01:22:560 - Just a suggestion but I know you are following the drum, but here the vocal is really strong.
More moddings are welcomed. Other diffs are done well. Good luck.
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