why I always forgoting something awww D:
I deeply sorry for the delay long away, I forgot about this and somehow get reminded by checking pending list
So i guess i'm qualifier then
Overall seems it's fine then
[Phantasm Stage]
02:59:419 (179419|0) - move to 2nd for the move balanced. kinda blank around here
03:47:103 (227103|2,227260|2,227418|2,227576|2,227734|2,227892|2,228050|2,228208|2) - somehow I feel it have a different pitch than 03:46:155 (226155|2,226313|2,226471|2,226629|2,226787|2,226945|2) -
04:11:514 (251514|1) - move to 3rd for balance
08:32:058 (512058|0,512058|3) - should be begin on 08:32:141 -
08:45:308 (525308|2) - imo, move to 2nd would be more better for hand balance and patterning thing
10:25:307 (625307|1,625390|0) - on here have kick sound, since you only follow kick sound on here so maybe make a rearrange and add more note to fit with this kick sound
11:52:058 (712058|3,712365|3,712673|1,712827|3,712904|2,712981|3,713134|1) - add clap sound for them
11:53:288 - to 12:03:134 - seems to be need kick sound (soft-hitclap)
11:53:288 (713288|3,713596|3,713904|0,714211|2,714519|2,714827|3,715134|3,715442|1,715750|1,716058|2,716365|2,716673|2,716981|0,717288|0,717596|2,717750|1,717827|2,717904|0,718058|1,718211|2,718519|3,718827|0,719134|1,719442|0,719750|2,720058|2,720365|3,720673|1,720981|1,721288|1,721596|2,721904|1,721981|2,722058|0,722134|1,722211|2,722288|1,722365|0,722442|1,722519|0,722596|2,722673|0,722750|2,722827|1,722904|2,722981|1,723058|0) - I marked them, you only need to add soft-hitclap
13:44:210 (824210|2,824755|1) - switch them, if you remain 13:44:210 (824210|2) - for pitch like you did for the part before
15:14:319 (914319|0) - unsnapped, should be on 1/6 15:14:337 -
15:55:194 (955194|2) - same pitch with 15:54:766 (954766|3,954873|3,954980|3) -
17:12:936 (1032936|2) - should be 1/6 (17:12:954 - )
17:23:249 (1043249|1) - should be on 1/6 (17:23:240 - )
17:56:980 (1076980|2) - move to 2nd, reason i mentioned before
17:57:520 - for outro pattern
http://puu.sh/qzztA/84cfc3da30.pngWell, only them left I guess so
Call me soon