1. Crystal's Rain (6.81 stars, 268 notes)
2. Cup (4.26 stars, 155 notes)
3. Platter (5.87 stars, 215 notes)
4. Salad (4.87 stars, 192 notes)

Thanks to

Kurokami - Mod
Artavia - Mod
-[ Asuna ]- - Mod
Wo Namu oD - Mod
Nazalion - Mod
Kandai-sa - Mod+Star
CLSW - Mod
Spectator - Mod+Star
CLSW - Guest Difficulty
Genocide - Mod
Kurokami - Mod
Last Bubble - Mod
alienflybot - Mod
Fatfan Kolek - Star
Keleron - Mod
Kurokami - Mod
ursa - Mod
Spectator - Mod
Kurokami -
Spectator -

Kurokami wrote:

Mod as requested.

[Cup]

00:10:664 (1) - I'm not against it, but having one object in a combo is kinda stupid and useless. Please use NC at every second big white tick - Fixed
00:21:507 (2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - I'm sure this rhythm can be simpler. Keep in mind that 1/2 is not always easy to catch. It depends on many thing thats why it is better to use mostly 1/1 on the easiest diff. - I'll think about this

The kiai is simpler that the rest of the map. o.o It should be the hardest part of the song. - yes i agree and trying to make it a bit harder

[Salad]

00:06:327 (1) - I have two problem with these type of sliders. First is, that you didn't used it during kiai. And second, since this is still an easy diff, how about to use easier patterns for slider during the non-kiai parts?- Fixed
00:25:122 (1) - Again one object in a combo.- Fixed
00:26:025 (1,2,3,4) - Maybe this part is a little bit hard. This diff is still for starter players and they sometimes can't control their fingers as freely as this patterns requires.

I found this diff kinda isteresting, but to be honest the kiai should be a little more harder.

I'm not sure but the difference between Platter and Salad is kinda high. Make that Platter easier and add a Rain if you want but currently I don't think this is a good spread. Work a little more on your hardest difficulty. o/

Artavia wrote:

[Cup]

00:26:025 (1,2,3,4) - 슬라이더나 다른 패턴으로 수정 - 수정완료

00:59:640 (1) - 슬라이더 모양 수정 - 수정완료

01:03:435 (3,4) - 패턴 수정 - 그냥 냅두기로 했습니다

01:27:291 (1) - 대신 스핀을 넣으시는게 어떨까요 - 수정완료


[Salad]

00:06:327 (1) - 패턴 수정 - 그냥 냅두기로 했습니다

01:16:447 (3) - ^ (얘같은 경우는 ex 스크린샷이 있긴 있는데 파일 사이즈가....생략) - 수정완료


[Platter]

00:16:357 (7) - 삭제 - 수정완료




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캐치 모딩은 처음해봐서 그런지 모르겠지만 셀러드는 그럭저럭 괜찮았는데 컵난이도는 컵치고는 좀 어렵네요. 전체적으로 힛사는 bb인듯

Marinska wrote:

Hi! from my Queue

[General]
add "ノーゲーム・ノーライフ" , "Yuu Kamiya" , "Mashiiro Hiragi" , "Atsuko Ishizuka" , "madhouse" , "super sweep"
and don't forget "Kuuhaku" ,to Tag coloum - Added everything
[Platter]
00:24:941 (6) - i think there not need circle , so i think better delete circle ..so (5) will be jump to (1) - Fixed
00:26:748 (4) - extend slider by 1/4 - Fixed
00:49:881 (1,2,3,4,5) - like this isn't not to hard for platter and.. it will be fun i guess - Fixed

00:27:290 (6,7,8,9) - so hard for platter.. in non-kiai time.. make theme a little closer and more to left.. - I think its fine
00:53:676 (4) - stack with (2) ?ノーゲーム･ノーライフ
01:03:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - make theme more easily.. oh (6) stack with (4) head ? - Fixed

01:05:604 - make more fun.. with Dash - Fixed


[Salad]
same as Platter
00:24:941 - you can remove this circle. - Fixed
00:53:315 - reduce distance .. so hard for salad.. - Fixed
reduce jump in this diff..

[Cup]
-_- this a cup ?
AR&OD 5 , Hp 3 - Fixed
00:06:327 - this a cup.. for beginner.. plz use a normal slider...
very boring.. mod.. plz remap this cup.. make it's like normal diff in std..
can played by HR HD DT.. and it's so much jump.. for a cup diff..

uh-oh sry.. for my bad mod.. but.. it's very boring mod...
PS : make cup and salad a little easily.. like reasonable cup and salad diff.. try to look other map with cup and salad diff - I'll try to fix these diffs. I don't play cup and salad diffs so im not sure how to make these diffs
and plz don't use more than 1.5 ds in cup diff..sry for my bad english..
hope this hlped.. and good luck with your map..

NGNL... fav song.. ~~~ <3

Wo Namu oD wrote:

[Cup]
00:59:640 (1) - Ctrl+G 해주세요.

[Salad]
01:20:966 (4) - 앞거리와도 멀고 뒷거리와도 멉니다.의도하신것이 아니라면 줄이시는 것을 권장합니다.

[Platter]
큰 문제점은 없는 것 같습니다.

Nazalion wrote:

From PM

[Platter]

00:06:688 - make like this more better i think (http://puu.sh/9ixqz/476c68b2a0.jpg) - Fixed
00:12:110 (1) - i think zig zag jump is not match with that song , maybe like this more better (http://puu.sh/9ixx1/cf868a6f2f.jpg) - Fixed
00:16:086 (3) - Stream start from here - Fixed
01:03:074 - http://puu.sh/9ixZD/47bcdfc4f0.jpg , moar jumpy - Fixed
01:11:025 (6) - u can add not here - Fixed
01:11:748 (4) - make a jump like 01:05:604 for more tricky - Fixed

i cant mod Cup n Salad sory no problem

n Good Luck

Kandai-sa wrote:

Hi, mod as requested!

General:

1. Remove the ''widescreen support'' This map does't have the sb or something. - Fixed
2. Remove the ''Letterbox during breaks'' I didn't see a break or something. - Fixed
3. Size of Your bg is incorrect, it should be 1024x768 or 1366x768. I fixed it for You (Background). - Fixed
4. Would You like to change those default colours to custom? - Fixed
   
   Custom colours

   

Cup

00:10:664 (3) - Try to make it easier. The player can easily lose 100 percent... - Fixed
00:24:037 (2) - Delete this note and lengthen the slider (1) to make it easier. Fits better imo. It should look like the previous combination (1,2) - Fixed
00:26:025 (1) - Hmm... Make it more horizontal, because it's too movable. - Fixed
00:43:194 (2) - Why is it ends up here? Should end here: 00:43:736 - - Fixed i don't know why that slider was like that D:
Ok. Your Cup has too many 1/4 in Kiai Time. Some of them are just too hard. - I left the rhythm the same, will make it more easier if more mods say this
01:03:074 (2,3,4) - What do You think to make just a repeat slider? - I left this xD kind of like the pattern
01:09:037 (2,3,4,5) - I think they are too far from each other (just a little bit). Reduce the distance a little bit. - Fixed
01:11:206 (1,2,3,4,1) - Sorry, but it looks ugly imo. I have an idea for this pattern (Here). - Fixed

NC's

00:15:001 (1) - Remove NC. - Fixed
00:26:025 (1) - Remove NC. - Fixed
00:59:640 (1) - Remove NC. - Fixed
01:05:965 (1) - Add NC? Then Remove NC = 01:06:688 (1) - - Fixed, but im not really sure. might change it back if i feel like it.

Salad

00:06:327 (1) - It has too large distance from (4). Try do reduce the distance. - Fixed
00:09:218 (1) - ^. - Fixed
01:05:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - They are too far away from each other. Reduce the distance between them. - Fixed

NC's

00:06:327 (1) - Remove NC. - Fixed
00:09:218 (5) - Remove NC. - Fixed
00:59:640 (1) - Remove NC. - Fixed
01:05:965 (1) - Add NC? Then add NC here = 01:06:688 (1) - - Fixed,same as cup
01:22:773 (1) - Remove NC. Then add NC here = 01:24:218 (5) - - Fixed

I didn't find more issues or something. Diff looks very nice. Maybe it's a little too difficult for Salad, but i like it. - yay

Platter

00:08:856 (3) - Change the locaion of this note (x:272) HDash is unnecessary here imo. - Fixed
00:18:616 (2) - ^. x:240, it makes more movable and interesting pattern. - Fixed
00:27:290 (6) - This HDash fits here, but it's too far away... Make it simple = x:256. After that, i came up with a new combination for those notes: - Fixed

Combination

- Fixed
00:39:218 (3) - What do you say to replace the slider to notes and make the HDash? Should be fine i guess. - Fixed
00:42:471 (1) - To be honest. Imo this HDash doesn't fit here. Change the distance and make just a Dash. - Fixed
01:11:025 (6) - Put a note here. It feels empty a little bit. - Fixed
01:11:387 (1,2,3,4) - I'm not sure about this pattern. It's harder than the previous one (01:05:604 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) Try to make something similar. - Fixed, changed the pattern

NC's

00:59:640 (1) - Remove NC. - Fixed

Good Luck! If You don't understand something, catch me in-game. ^w^ Star for You.

Genocide wrote:

Request from mod quehuehue

[General]
Cup, Salad, Platter, please applying the video to these dif

[Cup]
00:12:833 (3,4) - x=96 - Fixed
01:14:278 (1) - x=176 - ^
01:14:821 (2) - x=160 - I will leave this

[Salad]
01:16:809 (4) - ctrl + g - Fixed
01:17:170 (1) - ctrl +g - ^
01:17:712 (2) - move this note to x=384 - ^

[Platter]
No comment.
Nice pattern

Goodluck!~
[Other]
Genocide in the bad moods
Im crying

1. Add "ending" to the tags?
2. Tags and source conflict on Crystal's Rain difficulty via AIMod.
3. Try using "茅野愛衣" as the Artist name and "オラシオン" as the Title?

1. 00:38:676 (3,4) - Consider moving 00:38:676 (3) - to x:256 and 00:38:856 (4) - to x:176 for some movements.
2. 00:45:363 (5) - Try moving this to x:160, plays better.
3. 00:48:254 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try this for some consistency:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:59:278 (3) - Since this is on kiai, try moving to x:144 for some flow.
5. 01:06:327 (3) - Move to x:368? The spacing looks a bit odd, although it is playable.
6. 01:19:519 (5) - Move to the middle?
7. 01:20:965 (4) - Move to x:224 for some flow.

1. 00:06:327 (5) - Ctrl+H for some flow.
2. 00:17:712 (3) - Move to x:464? This is optional though.
3. 01:04:700 (6) - Move this to x:224, it will balance the jump between the previous and the next pattern.
4. 01:16:085 (2) - Try increasing the jump by moving to the middle.
5. 01:18:073 (3) - Move to x:192?

1. 00:12:110 (1,2,3,4) - Try this for a smooth flow:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:03:797 (4) - Make it horizon, then move to x:144 or maybe Ctrl+G? Both are optional since the current pattern works well.
3. 01:06:146 (5) - Maybe slightly reduce the distance by moving this to x:240?

1. 00:15:001 (1) - Move to x:368? Plays better for me.
2. 00:48:254 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Reduce the distance, maybe make it a consecutive jump like this?
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:04:339 (2) - Move to x:80 ( if you apply this then move 01:04:519 (3) - to x:176)
4. 01:07:953 (4) - Move to x:288?

QHideaki13 wrote:

Hi there~
M4M (via forum PM).

[General]

1. Add "ending" to the tags?
2. Tags and source conflict on Crystal's Rain difficulty via AIMod.
3. Try using "茅野愛衣" as the Artist name and "オラシオン" as the Title?

Here are some suggestions:

[Cup]

1. 00:38:676 (3,4) - Consider moving 00:38:676 (3) - to x:256 and 00:38:856 (4) - to x:176 for some movements.
2. 00:45:363 (5) - Try moving this to x:160, plays better.
3. 00:48:254 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Try this for some consistency:
   
   SPOILER

   
4. 00:59:278 (3) - Since this is on kiai, try moving to x:144 for some flow.
5. 01:06:327 (3) - Move to x:368? The spacing looks a bit odd, although it is playable.
6. 01:19:519 (5) - Move to the middle?
7. 01:20:965 (4) - Move to x:224 for some flow.

[Salad]

1. 00:06:327 (5) - Ctrl+H for some flow.
2. 00:17:712 (3) - Move to x:464? This is optional though.
3. 01:04:700 (6) - Move this to x:224, it will balance the jump between the previous and the next pattern.
4. 01:16:085 (2) - Try increasing the jump by moving to the middle.
5. 01:18:073 (3) - Move to x:192?

[Platter]

1. 00:12:110 (1,2,3,4) - Try this for a smooth flow:
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 01:03:797 (4) - Make it horizon, then move to x:144 or maybe Ctrl+G? Both are optional since the current pattern works well.
3. 01:06:146 (5) - Maybe slightly reduce the distance by moving this to x:240?

It is pretty strange that you mapped Salad difficulty with Grid Level 4 while Platter difficulty with Grid Level 3. But actually both works fine. - haha just to make some jumps that will be needed dashes but without making them too harsh
Overall, good map! Keep up the good work!

That's all from me. Good luck!

QHideaki13 wrote:

Hi there~
M4M (via forum PM).

[General]

1. Add "ending" to the tags?
2. Tags and source conflict on Crystal's Rain difficulty via AIMod.
3. Try using "茅野愛衣" as the Artist name and "オラシオン" as the Title?

Here are some suggestions:

[Crystal's Rain]

1. 00:15:001 (1) - Move to x:368? Plays better for me. not for me ;w;
2. 00:48:254 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Reduce the distance, maybe make it a consecutive jump like this? no. This one should be more challenging IMO.
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 01:04:339 (2) - Move to x:80 ( if you apply this then move 01:04:519 (3) - to x:176) fixed
4. 01:07:953 (4) - Move to x:288?

has not changed for some reason.

It is pretty strange that you mapped Salad difficulty with Grid Level 4 while Platter difficulty with Grid Level 3. But actually both works fine.
Overall, good map! Keep up the good work!

That's all from me. Good luck!

Genocide wrote:

@serena

fix them

1. You don't need to use "_" between words in the tags. Nobody search this way. Remove them.
2. Also there should be a space between "No_Lifeノーゲ" isn't it?

Kurokami wrote:

Mod requested. o/

[General]

1. You don't need to use "_" between words in the tags. Nobody search this way. Remove them. - Fixed
2. Also there should be a space between "No_Lifeノーゲ" isn't it? - I think there isn't a space between them on japanese due to this site

[Cup]

00:24:218 (2,3) - I think for easier rhythm these can be merged. - I think the note density is fine for Cup, Maybe i would have fixed it if it was Salad, but not on this diff
00:26:025 (2) - I don't really prefer this on Cup but... - ^
00:29:098 (2,3) - Merge these. The vocal at 00:29:278 is weak so its not that important on Cup. - Fixed
01:01:086 (1,2,3) - Delete (1,2) and move (3) back to 01:01:086 then add a repeat. I think that main beat for not is not that important to be mapped. - Fixed
01:02:170 (5) - Remove this and just add two circle where the head and the tail was. - Fixed
01:24:760 - Add a circle. - Fixed
01:25:302 (4,1) - Merge these and change 01:26:207 (2,3,4) into circles for better rhythm. I know this is the end and stuff but too be honest its not really strong. - Fixed
01:27:290 (1) - I dunno who suggested this short slider but its short even though the vocal is still goes on until 01:28:736. Make it last until then. - after listening it at 25%, i guess you are right, but i think it is fine, and on the ranked version, it has similar timeline, so i think it will be fine

[Salad]

AR/OD 6,5 for a little better spread.

00:13:556 (1,2) - A small jump here would fit nicely. - Fixed
00:15:001 (1,2) - If you apply the previous add jump to here too. - Fixed
00:35:061 (2,3) - I think a circle at 00:35:062 and a long slider between 00:35:423 - 00:36:146 sounds much better. - Fixed
01:01:266 (2,3,4,5) - Remove (2) and move (3) back with 1/2 then do the same with (4,5) and if you are done with this add a circle at 01:01:809 and 01:02:531. This will follows the vocal better. - Fixed
01:27:290 (1) - Same as on Cup. - Same as Cup

Everything else seems fine.

[Platter]

01:27:290 (1) - Same again. - Same as Cup

Oh, really nice diff. Really clean



Please don't come in my queue and say this and that is ready. Ask for a mod and I will decide it is ready or not. And I think this mapset is not. The easier diffs are fine but I'm not sure about the Rain. I want to enjoy it but its impossible. It contains element from Overdoses which makes it really hard. Get one (preferably 2) more mod then force CLSW to change things and call me back. If I see enough changes on Rain I will bubble it. Good luck till then. o/ - got that sorry x.x