No Dap wrote:

Hi~ long time no see XD The modding community made me quit mapping for a while ._.

Just to let you know, your normal MUST be 3 star in game or you need to make an Easy diff. Set back to WIP, will map that soon

Also a quick look on easier diffs

[Normal]

1. 00:00:714 (1,2,1,2,3) - this inconsistent spacing will be a trouble. I highly recommend you keep them consistent at 1.3 DS Changed
2. 00:04:909 (2,1) - here too Changed the Combo before that since it'd mess up the following combo
3. 00:24:210 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - ^ Changed
4. 00:31:343 (1,2) - ^ Same as the 2nd one
   I'll stop pointing them out, but you should fix them

[Hard]

1. 00:03:021 (4,5) - keep spacing consistent? 00:02:392 (1,2,3,4) - Yea that was a leftover from the "I think this will be my Insane" thought. Fixed
2. 00:09:944 (5,6,1) - this anti jump is really hard to read because they don't fit and is not intuitive Moved to overlap with the next Slider
3. Also I'd really prefer if you don't have random jumps. like 00:09:105 (1,2) -
   because 00:09:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - are all the same melody, you should keep DS consistent. It's not like 00:09:105 (1,2) - is strong to have a random jump and inconsistent spacing Tried one of those "jump to the other side" combos (is there actually a name for that?) I'll think about changing
4. 00:27:567 (1,2,3) - This flows awkward, Changed to a better Slidercombo
5. 00:41:623 (4) - I prefer to move this note like this for better flow Correct, changed
6. 00:46:238 (1,2) - you should consider reducing DS here. They are really far from each other

did so

Setz206 wrote:

Hi there. from #modreqs, going to take a shot at modding this since I love anything with Ootsubo Yuka in it
Short mod, hope this helps :

Insane

• -Just general comment here, the Insane is not much harder than the Hard, with the exception of one or two jumps. I don't know how you would handle this, either make the insane harder or the Hard easier, but I guess this is just my opinion. I have to agree to this, but that was my goal (to some extend) I wanted to map a playable, enjoyable beatmap. The other map Iam mapping is a 200 bpm streamy map - which Iam now remapping for the 4th time. I just want to get some experience in mapping. Easier maps are more enjoyable to map too.
  - 00:40:574 (2) - pretty strong beat in the music at 00:40:993 but right now it is at the very end of this reverse slider, it feels and sounds kind of weird, what I suggest is remove 00:40:364 (2) - , move the reverse slider back to that spot, and add a circle at 00:40:993 Agreed and changed. Sounds better this way.

Hard

• - 00:04:909 (4) - should consider reducing the distance to this note. it was a 2.34 distance snap jump. something like this is good on Insane diffs, but it seems a tad overkill in Hard.
  - 00:06:588 (4) - ^ to both: correct, I originally had a Insaneish map in my mind when mapping, turned out to be hard though. Reduced the DS a bit to ~1.8
  - 00:09:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - I think soft whistles would sound better here, the current claps here overpower the music and sounds spammy. if you do change these to whistles, remove clap from 00:10:574 (6) - changed
  - 00:10:783 (1) - remove clap, add finish to the head of the slider. changed
  - 00:47:077 (3,4,5) - consider stacking these, or making it into a repeat slider, or make them flow into the 00:47:497 (6) - , as it is right now, it is awkward to play. changed to a stack
  - 00:51:902 (2) - this sounds kind of strange, since you are following the vocals up to this point, and there is a strong vocal at 00:52:532 that is being ignored. what I would suggest is remove the reverse from the slider, and place circles in the next red and white line. Okay, this one is difficult to fix since I dont want to mess up the combo and placement. It'd have a weird spacing if I'd "just" add two circles.
  I tried to change the general flow so that the spacing fits. (Also, flipped the entire rest of the map for that - not that it matters)
  - 00:43:511 (3) - same here, there is a vocal being ignored at 00:43:720 Changed to a simple circle combo
  - 01:17:287 (4) - another kind of harsh jump, 2.0 DS. though I think you could get away with this since it is in the kiai, its up to you. I think thats okay since its, as you said, kiai. The pitch is veeery high aswell

Good luck with the map, love the song <3 thanks :3

Yales wrote:

Hi,
As you will, see I like adding some finish to give more rythme, your map lack of them anyway, check what you like or not .

[Insane]

1. 00:01:133 (5) - Move to x:124 ; y:212 Moved, but closer to the stream itself.
2. 00:01:972 (5) - x:388 ; y: 172 ^
3. 00:17:497 (1,2) - Ctrl + H ?
4. 00:18:336 (3) - ctrl+h ; ctrlj+j if you did the step above. As of right now, I like my setup more, as it flows more (for me atleast)
5. 00:42:672 (1,3) - You should curve one those 2 Curved the first one as it sounds more round (...yep)
6. 00:52:532 (4) - I find a bit awkward the fact that you let empty the big white tick for this slider. Also I think a slider 1/2 might fit better. Changed
7. 00:55:679 (2) - add a note maybe? stacked with this slider 00:55:888 (1) - so your pattern will be more constant. I wanted to set the focus on the actual beat in the background and not on the "nyaa"s. Otherwise I'd also have to map the "uuh" (I love those explanations)
8. 01:04:490 (1,2) - Ctrl+J I wanted to have this up-down-up effect there, so no change here
9. 01:06:797 (3) - Move to x:348 ; y:160 changed, made a blanket out of it too
10. 01:24:420 (7) - delete yep
11. 01:24:630 (1,2,3,4,5) - If you did the step above, make a higher spacing with 01:24:210 (6) changed
12. 00:57:776 (1) - finish yep
13. 01:01:133 (1) - finish
14. 01:03:651 (3,4) - 2 finish instead of 2 whistle maybe yep
15. 01:04:490 (1) - finish yep
16. 01:09:525 (1,2,3) - finish i like the claps more
17. 01:11:203 (1) - ^ yep
18. 01:15:399 (3) - ^ yep
19. 01:17:077 (1,4) - ^
20. 01:17:916 (1) - ^ yep
21. 01:22:951 (1,2,3) - ^ see above
22. 01:26:308 (1,3,5) - ^ ^
23. 00:03:651 (8) - remove finish
24. 00:04:070 (1) - add finish
25. 00:04:909 (4) - ^
26. 00:05:748 (1,4) - ^
27. 00:09:105 (1,3,5) - ^
28. 00:17:497 (1) - ^
29. 00:29:244 (3) - ^
    Iam not that big of a fan when it comes to finishes, but I've applied those in the kiai time. They seem to fit there

Project Railgun wrote:

hello i am railgun

[Easy]

1. 00:25:888 (2,1,2,3) - Ctrl+H and drag objects so that slider is with x:380, y:128 Like that one, changed :3
2. 00:51:063 (1,2,3,4,1) - Aim for symmetry here instead? 2 3 4 and 1 are fine on my screen x:
3. 01:07:846 (1,2,3) - I think you shouldn't do this in Easy changed
4. 01:21:273 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - I personally try to put more sliders towards the end so the newbie has a higher chance of SS'ing the map (I hate 1x100 circles near the end). Maybe change a few of these circles with sliders? I think the circles hit the beat and vocals better. I'll think about changing

[Normal]

1. Everything is OK from my perspective. Thanks :3

[Hard]

1. 00:13:301 (3,4) - I personally don't like this pattern; 01:08:686 (3,4) - is nicer IMO I use this pattern alot while mapping, I love it actually.
2. Nice diff Thanks :3

[Insane]

1. 01:17:916 (1,2,3) - I think it would look better if you changed the slider pattern here. made it round

Nice mapping! I can't find much of anything to criticize

Good luck~ :3

h0lyK0T wrote:

Hi! From my modding queue.

[General]
I would prefer offset to be changed from 714 to 720 (with 714 i have feeling that beat is just after the mark) seems to be correct, thanks!
[Easy]
00:07:427 (1,2,3,4) - that's a lot of clap ._. i suggest removing/replacing with other hitsonds some of those, also they seem kinda loud for me (you can ignore that) some of those were not supposed to be there, probably just didnt hear it when going over it (using quiet hitsounds myself)
00:12:462 (3) - i don't like hitsounding here, i think hitsounding from 00:00:714 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) would be better There surely is a loud beat there, so I guess the way it is right now fits :/
00:31:343 (1) - when i playtested it first time, i was sure there must be note (you can perfectly hear a beat). Since there's none, two next notes are kinda hard to read (atleast for easy), i suggest spacing them out so they are easier to read. changed
00:37:637 (1) - there's NC because it's next string in lyrics, but no hitsound here and strangely placed clap beat after (by the way i like hitsounding a lot here - 00:44:769 (1).) i also noticed other places like this one. I dont exactly know how I'd like to change that, might change it later on
[Normal]
00:10:160 (2) - maybe add a note here, as it fits vocal better? added
00:42:678 (4) - maybe rotate this slider to the left a bit, so it's a bit more flowy? changed
[Hard]
I think it's too hard (i actually passed it), some jumps are really hard to read (at least for me), this song feels flowy.
For example: 00:27:573 (1,2,3) - here vocal has no change at all I've changed the DS on several combos now
[Insane]
Can't spot any problems. (Actually i didn't passed it, but i liked it more than Hard) Thanks :3

That's all. Good luck!

Lust wrote:

modding from PM request
ah love this song~

General

1. There are inconsistencies in kiai time throughout the difficulties, make sure that they are all the same changed
2. BG is 1365x767, not 1366x768. Just a simple resize will do the job whoops
3. Remember to turn off widescreen support and letterbox during breaks in all difficulties changed
4. I recommend changing combo color 1, it is hard to see on the bg should be more visible now
5. No video? there's one now
6. Add 這いよれ！ニャル子さん to the source, and move what is currently there to the tags changed
7. Add 太陽曰く燃えよカオス to the title, keep romanised title the same changed

Easy

The easy is fine, although the patterns leave much to be desired Easy's not the best thing to map for me, so I'll agree on this one

1. OD +1 to fit the spread better changed
2. 00:10:789 (1,2,3) - Check spacing to make sure it is consistent between the objects. You can go up to the top left and find the yellow text that indicates the spacing there
3. 00:29:251 (1) - I recommend mapping out this spinner, here try this rhythm to replace it
   
   I say this because 00:30:929 - has a strong beat that needs to be accented by an active hitsounded object. A spinner end won't cut it. It'll be more satisfying to play and nicer to hear! changed, true dat
4. 00:42:678 (3) - This object's shape seems a bit arbitrary, I suggest using a regular 3 point slider instead i'll leave that for now, might change it if I get more opinions on this (I like weirdly shaped sliders)
5. 01:22:957 (1,2,3) - Instead of a boring linear pattern, why not make a curve? is now a curve

Normal

I feel as if there is a difficulty gap between the Easy and Normal, but I don't think that'll matter too much in lower diffs

1. 00:00:720 (1,2,1,2) - Check the spacing and make sure it is 1.30x throughout the pattern to keep consistent with the rest of the map I thought Ive changed that. changed now for sure
2. 00:20:440 (4) - If you do not follow my later suggestion, I would bring the anchor a bit further up the slider, and then use the later half of the slider to blanket 00:21:069 (1) - moved it a little bit after all
3. 00:20:440 (4,1) - Try this rhythm, there is a strong beat there that should be accented by an active hitsounded object
   http://lust.s-ul.eu/FSY2tF8t
4. 00:24:216 (1,3) - These slider shapes are strange and don't flow very nicely, I would suggest regular 3 point sliders in their place same as above
5. 00:29:251 (1) - Same spinner suggestion as in easy, map this out! I think the slider fits here, but I'll think about it
6. 00:31:768 (2) - Have this blanket 00:32:398 (3) - for a nicer looking pattern and smoother play changed
7. 00:37:643 (1,2,3) - Make sure these are all on the same X coordinates, and have 00:38:482 (1) - be a copy of 00:37:643 (1) - flipped around thought it was, changed
8. 00:50:230 (3,4,1) - Blankets can all be improved, use the approach circles to check for this. modified
9. 00:58:622 (3) - This red point anchored slider seems a bit random and inconsistent with the rest of the difficulty. I suggest making this a regular 3 point non-anchored slider changed
10. 01:14:566 (1,2) - Have (1) blanket (2) for smoother flow and a nicer looking pattern I cant really get a good looking pattern out of this without destroying the rest of the map. I've mapped this as some kind of linear divebomb, if that makes sense
11. 01:17:083 (3,4) - (3) can better blanket (4). Use (4)'s approach circle to check for this changed slightly
12. 01:21:699 (2,3,4) - Check the spacing between these, make sure that they are all 1.30x apart changed
13. 01:26:314 (4) - to 394:289, so the spacing to 01:27:573 (1) - is more consistent. Also, try this slider shape, it will look nicer and flow better in to the next object agreed, changed
    

Hard

Patterns are a bit sloppy, but the rhythm is great! I see you forming some structure which is a step in the right direction. Major improvements from the last time I've seen your mapping. Keep up the work thanks :3 workin' on it

1. 00:10:789 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved, use (2)'s approach circle to check for this changed, also adjusted the ds
2. 00:23:377 (4,5) - There is nothing in the music that demands for this big jump, I would space it evenly and have the jump on 00:24:216 (1) - originally mapped as insane in my mind, ive tried jumping to patterns. I guess i have to destroy this now ;w; RIP actually good looking combo
3. 00:29:251 (1) - Same spinner suggestions as in the earlier difficulties
4. 00:31:349 (3,4,5) - This pattern seems pretty random, I would make some structure here I wanted to have the 3 blanket 4, while 5 is the same slider as 4 but flipped (since its the same vocal). Makes sense in my head atleast
5. 00:40:160 (4,5) - Blanket can be improved, use the (5)'s approach circle to help you in fixing this yep
6. 00:47:083 (3,4,5,6,1) - Eh linear flow isn't very enjoyable, I would have these circles curve in to the next pattern! tried something
7. 00:56:524 (3) - Repeat does not land on any beat, I would rethink this rhythm it lands on the de, which was my intention
8. 00:57:153 (4) - I would replace this with a circle and then a 1/2 slider starting on 00:57:363 - for a better rhythm i actually like this alot, so no change yet
9. 01:01:559 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved, use (3)'s approach circle to assist you in this
10. 01:07:013 (3,1,2) - Make sure (1)'s approach circle meets the slider tracks all the way around evenly so the blanket is perfect
11. 01:13:726 (3,1,2) - I like this pattern that you have going here! Although one gripe i have with this is the strong hitsound on a passive object (the repeat). 01:14:985 (2) - 125:232 so that it perfectly stacks underneath 01:13:726 (3) - 's repeat thanks and changed
12. 01:15:824 (4,1) - Blanket can be improved changed both
13. 01:16:664 (2,3) - ^
14. 01:17:503 (5) - Have this form a triangle with 01:16:034 (5,3) - 's hitbursts!
15. 01:27:153 (5) - Replace this with a 1/2 slider and a circle changed

Insane

Patterns need some work, but other than that, fine insane for your first beatmap for rank! thanks :3

1. 00:04:496 (2,3,5,6) - Space out these anti-jumps, they are hard to read and play in such a low bpm song, especially since you space out the notes in the upcoming pattern, and then have 1/4 doubles on the ends of sliders! im a fan of such anti jumps, i miiight change them
2. 00:10:370 (8,1) - Try this rhythm, reason being it sounds and plays better + the strong beat will be accented by an active hitsounded object
   changed
3. 00:24:216 (1,2,3) - Make sure the blanket is perfect all the way around should be now
4. 00:27:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Excellent pattern! Very fun and I love your use of hitcircles here thanks :3
5. 00:29:356 (1) - Why ruin the buildup you had with the previous pattern? Map this out! i find it rather difficult to map those vocals in a good way. the beat itself is silent which is why I prefer a spinner here
6. 00:30:929 (3,2) - Blanket can be improved
7. 00:39:950 (4,2) - I am afraid this is unrankable. 00:39:531 (2,4) - 's hitburst cover the repeat of 00:40:370 (2) - . This must be fixed. whelp, fixed I guess
8. 00:51:069 (1,2) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved. It tails off at the end changed
9. 00:52:957 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved
10. 01:27:573 (2) - I would have this be a jump so that the end is accentuated nicely. It provides for a cool finish changed

Needs a bit more modding before this set can go anywhere, but it has potential. Good luck!

HouseForever wrote:

Mod4Mod here:

EASY:

Eigentlich schon perfekt!
01:27:153 (3) Vielleicht ersetzt du hier den hitcircle durch einen slider mit einem reverse-arrow bei 01:27:363 und dem ende bei 01:27:573. Habs zu nem normalen Slider geändert :3


NORMAL:

01:21:699 (2) Vielleicht machst du hier einen Knick in den Slider und an die Stelle des Knicks passend im Rythmus einen Hitsound, wie du es oft bei der EASY-Difficulty gemacht hast changed
Auch richtig gut gemacht!

Krfawy wrote:

Hello! I am Krfawy from my 'Bleeding Queue'. So here is my stupid mod! ;_;

Easy

1. Maybe reduce OD to 2?
2. 00:09:426 (4) - The "tick" hitsound is too loud, really. D: I advice to reduce the volume to 60%. There are more moments when I advice to reduce the volume because of the ticks:
   
3. 00:11:104
4. 00:12:782
5. 00:13:622
6. 00:24:531
7. 00:26:209
8. 00:27:048
9. 00:33:761
10. 00:37:957
11. 00:39:636
12. 00:40:475
13. 00:45:510
14. 00:48:027
15. 00:48:866
16. 00:51:384
17. 00:52:223
18. 00:54:740
19. 00:55:580
20. 00:58:097
21. 00:59:775
22. 01:01:454
23. 01:02:293
24. 01:04:810
25. 01:06:489
26. 01:08:167
27. 01:09:006
28. 01:11:524
29. 01:14:880
30. 01:18:237
31. 01:19:076
32. 01:21:594
    
    changed all of them above
    
    To be honest? These things are the only issues in Easy. Before the last update I've seen something with combos, but you've fixed it. XD

Normal

1. Would it be a problem if you reduce OD to 3? od4 is fine here imo, makes more sense with the diff spread
2. 00:10:999 (1,2) - There are a lots of the circles to the rhytm like this, but IMO it's really hard in Normals. :< Could you delete the (1) and make NC at (2)? You know, I understand you want to keep the rhytm, but I think it's too hard for players to keep playing with such amount of objects like this. But I think even without this one circle the music is still 'visible' and the music is still catchy to feel the melody. well, there's a loud vocal there and I think it'd be weird to start at the "Ko" instead of the "Ku" (I think its a ku? ;w;)
3. 00:25:475 (2) - Um... Could you this circle somewhere... between the sliders? Because... I'm sorry but it's really WEIRD. And hard as well. :< 00:27:153 (4) - That moment is the same problem. yea, I've finally changed it now since many people found that weird :/
4. 00:59:251 (4) - Please, remove this circle away. This Normal is still so hard. D: removed

Hard

1. 00:12:468 (1) - *A hell advice from me* Could you move this slider in "Y" position to Y=175? You know, anti-overlapping or something... xD moved it to overlap with 3, changed the 2 after that as well
2. 00:24:216 (1) - *Again* Maybe move two last points in this slider to make it more good-looking? I mean: move the second point to X=414 X=265 and the third point to X=496 Y=235. I think this will make the sliders look nicer. i think thats fine the way it is right now
3. 00:38:692 (4,5,6) - I don't know what exactly, but something is telling me the spacing here is a little bit misguided. Maybe use a half amount of circles from the CTRL + Shift + D combination to make it look better? I don't really know, but the spacing is really weird and uncool... Sorry. ;_; i'll catch some more opinions on this. It's working as intended right now, having 2 and 4 being a double, 3 and 4 being a double with slightly increased spacing from the double before and the same then with 1
4. *Please, don't hate me, I'm just a little blonde lost in the moment. ;_;* Could you move this 01:12:048 (4) slider a little bit? X=236 would be a better position. xD that'd create a weird overlap
5. 01:27:573 (6) - Move it to X=425 Y=61 please. Again something-like-a-symmetry-thing (I don't even know how to call it because it's a stupid thing to fix almost invisible ._.). changed

Insane

1. 00:33:027 (3) - Move it to X=275 please. changed for correct overlap
2. 01:27:153 (5,1,2) - The composition of those three circles aren't so cool, really. :< IMO it's something interesting what I like. X3 <3 BUT... the life is brutal, osu even more... I guess another modders or BATs will tell it's something to change, 'because it's not 2009 bbe'. I hate myself because I am saying that, but please: change this pattern to something like CTRL + Shift + D or something different. changed hit, hopefully its not complete garbage ><

Your mapset is really GORGEOUS. *____* I am pretty sure it will be ranked sooner or later, but it will.

Good luck! I wish my mod did something helpful. yup :3 :< Sorry I am a beginner modder! ;_;

LVU Bluddy! O3O

Lanturn wrote:

M4M, thanks for modding my map earlier!

[General]
Tags:
season 1 -> I don't really see a reason to this | Very few maps have even bothered to put the season number in the tags. "Season" should be reserved more for songs that have it in the source: such as this one. I guess so, took that one out

[Easy]

1. 00:00:720 (1) - I honestly think a finish would be better on the head of this note. changed
2. 00:09:111 (3) - Nudge the red node over a hair so the ball sits in perfectly when you are at 00:09:531 - | x208 y148 works nicely | http://puu.sh/8Ocbc.jpg changed
3. 00:10:789 (1,2,3) - Overall I think the flow would have been nicer if you had the (2) left more. | http://puu.sh/8OcfB.jpg | This means you would have to rework quite a bit ahead if you choose to do something like this. It just creates more natural flow this way. changed that and moved the combo after that
4. 00:16:664 (4) - Highly suggest a finish on this tail because you can hear a cymbal in the background. true, changed
5. 00:20:859 - I recommend adding a circle here. This will prevent people from trying to hit the vocals which you don't follow for the next slider. changed, I felt like something was wrong there, but I couldnt actually change it for whatever reason. Maybe I thought of something stupid
6. 00:24:216 (1) - Finish? This again matches the cymbals. Swedish! changed
7. 00:25:894 (2) - Nazi. Move this to x384 y124 (grid/distance snap on will help) for slightly better flow with the previous and also the upcoming note. changed
8. 00:29:251 (1) - Optional. How about adding a whistle to the Head / Reverse sections of this slider? It creates some nice build up for the finish you have coming up. good call, changed
9. 00:29:251 (1) - While we're on this. Consider aiming for a better blanket. The coordinates I used are | Middle Node: x86 y174 | Tail Node: x155 y219 | This might be hard to do, so try lining up the approach circle by moving to 00:30:720 - | Similar tricks like these can be used on any blanket. | If you find it hard to see, try dragging the (1) closer to the (2) in the timeline, and move it back after (ex: http://puu.sh/8OcVi.jpg ) Be sure to move it back after changed. God damn moving my mouse for 1 pixel is difficult
10. 00:37:643 (1) - Add a finish here as well. The cymbal is really strong. changed
11. 00:44:356 (1) - ^ I think the clap is enough here
12. 00:51:069 (1) - Finish on head here please for the same reasons as the others. changed
13. 01:03:657 (3,4,1) - Just a guideline. No change is needed, but preferred. | Stacking notes on Easy difficulties isn't recommended as it can cause them to misjudge. In this case, they may click too fast trying to follow the vocals.
14. 01:04:496 (1) - If you didn't already change everything around from above then consider lowering this slider so you can fit (2) nicely in like so | http://puu.sh/8Odkg.jpg | Right now you have a bit of a sharp turn. If you did adjust everything from the previous mod, still take this into consideration as well. changed that and the following combo
15. 01:07:433 (4) - Mostly the same reason as 10 seconds. This isn't as bad since the two sliders aren't symmetrical copies, but I would still recommend you trying to adjust so the map flows a bit nicer. Straight lines make me a little ^
16. 01:10:370 (3,1) - DS issues here. | Consider making a slider like this | http://puu.sh/8Odu3.jpg | or maybe customize one. Slider artwork is really fun for new players ^
17. 01:22:538 (2) - Maybe try this with a SC:1 clap instead of a SC:2 clap. oops, I actually forgot to set a timing point after the slidertick.
18. 01:24:636 (1) - cute. I love how this goes with the video :3 Thats pure coincidence, I mapped this beforew I put the video in All planned :3

[Normal]

1. 00:00:720 (1) - Finish, like suggested in Easy
2. 00:24:216 (1) - ^
3. 00:37:643 (1) - ^
4. 00:44:356 (1) - ^
5. 00:51:069 (1) - ^ changed all
6. 00:03:866 (4) - I'm not sure I understand this mapping to an invisible sound. If you want more density at the beginning, consider making some 1/2 sliders at 00:02:398 (1,2) - http://puu.sh/8Oemf.jpg well, i completely removed it.
7. 00:17:713 (1) - The spacing is off on these two notes. Take off grid snap and move this to | x242 y286 | to even out the spacing. changed
8. 00:22:957 (6) - How about trying something like this? | http://puu.sh/8Oefy.jpg | Just so it kind of fits nicely with the upcoming slider.++, really like this one o:
9. 00:25:475 (2,3) - No matter how many times I look at this. I always get the feeling of it being 1/2 spaced instead of 1/1 | The vocals are really strong here | I really suggest seperating these two if possible. | A good solution is to take (2,4) and stack them under the tails of (1,3) hum ... I dont really like them being stacked under the tails, but I see your point with the overlaps. I'll think about a way on how to handle this
10. 00:34:496 (1) - Straighten this slider? | Also consider moving (3) slightly further away from (2) so it looks more even | http://puu.sh/8OeEt.jpg i like it being round more
11. 00:38:272 (2) - same suggestion as in Easy for more flow. changed
12. 00:40:580 (3,1) - Consider making these two the same shapes. Both straight would be nice. Make sure they are a copy rotate if you do this. changed
13. 00:52:328 (2) - How about making the head higher than the tail? | http://puu.sh/8OeXy.jpg changed, i like this idea :3
14. 01:02:188 (3) - Consider moving this to around x436 y168 (with grid snap) or take grid snap off, and move it somewhere close to this. Move (4) to adjust for the extra distance. Mostly just for additional flow, a bit of a nazi mod. changed, nazi mods are always welcome
15. 01:05:335 (3,3) - If you want to stack these two, then move the second (3) to x342 y276 changed
16. 01:12:048 (3) - Try putting this slightly over to the left more so it creates nice flow. | http://puu.sh/8P9dZ.jpg changed slightly
17. 01:21:699 (2) - Missing clap oops
18. 01:26:104 (3) - I don't see a point to this note. Nothing is playing here ;_; I suggest removing it. agreed

You had an update at this point. There is a good chance some stuff will conflict

[Hard]

1. Consider the finishes suggested in Easy/Normal changed
2. 00:02:398 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Consider moving these down a bit so the (6) flows into (1) nicely | http://puu.sh/8P9YG.jpg changed
3. 00:10:580 (6,1) - & 00:14:356 (1,2,3) - Just a heads up. You don't need to manually stack like this. the game will automatically do it itself thanks to its stack leniency options. | The first one in particular. Maybe try moving (6) to a different spot because the stacking makes it a little odd. changed 6, and yea, it does, but i really like to see how it'd look in the editor itself. i think i got that from jenny's userpage
4. 00:27:573 (1) - I highly recommend a different shape. Try sending the tail end up either straight or in a curve? | http://puu.sh/8PbTa.jpg changed that combo completely with your idea
5. 00:44:146 (6) - either lower or raise this note a little. | Consider drawing a circular slider and adjusting the notes for it as well | Like this quick job: http://puu.sh/8PaP0.jpg | Of course delete the slider after if you decide to attempt something similar. (Honestly the best way though if you want to copy this is to just convert a slider when you have 1/2 scale selected at 1.00 DS) changed
6. 00:47:503 (6) - Very nazi: x182 y262 changed
7. 00:53:167 (2,4) - Try making (4) the same shape as (2) (copy + paste it) wasnt it?
8. 00:55:894 (1,2,3) - Try moving the (2) to x271 y92 and readjusting the (1) to x361 y92 | This will make the (3) and the tail of (2) connect in a line, and improves their flow. this one's actually intended to be like this (i have it with those combos from time to time)
9. 00:57:782 (1,2,3,4) - I'm a bit confused about this box you made here or something. The (3,4) has this 1.10 confusing gap while the rest is 1.0. I'm sure you have your reasons for doing what you did, but I'm just more curious than anything I dont, I probably just scrolled the DS up when i shouldnt do it
11. 01:13:726 (3) - More nazi, and requires a bit of tweaking. Move the red node over slightly so it snugs the ball in when you are at 01:13:936 - | http://puu.sh/8Pb7m.jpg changed
12. 01:21:279 (1,2,3) - Consider flipping (2) and straightening (3) | This creates more harmony between (1,2) while making (3) different | http://puu.sh/8PbvS.jpg changed
13. 01:26:524 (2,4) - It seems like you're trying to make a few triangles here. Highly recommended that you take off grid snapping and readjust these two so that you have 1.30 (x247 y61) for the (2) and 1.29 (x358 y249) for the (4) changed completely to fit the idea from insane more

Nice map. Really no issues with it

[Insane]

1. Same suggestions for finishes. yep
2. 00:03:657 (8,9) - As in normal. this (9) is really awkward to play because there is nothing in the music to back it up. If you want, make (8) a half slider changed, no slider though
3. 00:17:503 (1,3) - Not stacked correctly we need a "move 1 pixel" option ;w;
4. 00:27:573 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - I'm not really sure how you made this, but it feels a bit uneven. You can mostly tell by clicking on any (2), the distance spacing isn't consistent between all of these. You should balance the first (1,2,3) how you like, and then copy / paste / rotate slightly, and put them a specific distance apart, however you like. I just highly suggest the copy pasting thing if all possible. Keep your rotations consistent as well if you do them (like 10° or 20° each time I actually think its fine like this, even though i understand your point.Iam dumb. Ill change it. clarification: i rotate them by selection center. since its not a perfect triangle, the 2 wont rotate as much as the others
5. 00:46:244 (1) - Same thing as hard, nudge the red node so it properly snugs the ball in. changed
6. 00:47:293 (3) - consider sharpening this angle to improve the flow into 00:47:713 (1) - | Maybe something like this? http://puu.sh/8Pf3L.jpg changed that
7. 00:54:006 (4,1) - Move to x194 y249. This still doesn't stack them 100% perfectly, but it's much closer than what you originally had. I wanted to stack 00:54:006 (4,1) - and 00:54:426 (1,1) - (the first and last, the 2nd and 3rd, which is what i did there. I think its fine o:
8. 01:06:069 (5,1) - Consider sticking these off the end of (4)? | http://puu.sh/8Pffd.jpg as above, iam a fan of seemingly weirder combos (even though its not that weird, but you know what i mean) so I think I'll leave this I like my idea behind it ><
9. 01:09:111 (4,5) - Triangle? | http://puu.sh/8Pfjj.jpg | this is at 1.50 distance spacing. <3 changed
10. 01:27:363 (1) - Maybe change this to a whistle? It sounds a bit better since no instruments play at this point and leads into the finish. Consider this for your other diffs as well. changed :3

Not much else to say. nice mapset. Have a Thanks :3 even though the have a star confuses me :<

Samah wrote:

From queue:

[General]
There's a weird squeal at the end of your MP3. Fix it! Did that, actually had to set a new BPM as well (audacity probably messed sth up?)
Your background image is stretched. Steal this one: https://osu.ppy.sh/b/161349 I'd prefer a 16:9 though o:
Don't put loud hitsounds on slider ticks as per ranking guidelines: https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Ranking_Criteria

Slider tick hitsounds are discouraged. If you want to use them, then make sure that their volume is balanced (i.e. notably quieter than regular hitsounds). A very loud slider tick, especially when only used once or twice, would be extremely jarring.

[Easy]
I might suggest you redo the hitsounds on this map. Don't put in a hitsound just because it fits the song (ie. don't do loud hitsounds on slider ticks). Instead, make your map such that the notes are in the right place to begin with, and you won't need to mess around with green timing points. the thing ids that I was told that such things are fine as long as they'd fit, which they do imo. I'd agree that I could lower the volume. I'll probably ask a bat before though (i really like the way it is right now
00:42:678 (3) - Make this a 3-point curve instead. changed
01:03:237 (2,3,4,1) - osu! will offset these for you automatically when it loads the map at playtime, so you don't need to do it manually. changed

[Normal]
00:25:475 (2,3) - Same point about automatic stacking.
00:27:153 (4,1) - ^
00:54:845 - Add a note. same as in hard (i modded insane -> hard -> normal)
00:55:685 - ^
01:08:272 (2) - Shorten this to 01:08:482.
01:08:901 (3) - Delete this.
01:08:692 - Add a slider here to 01:08:901. did that
01:10:789 (4) - Bring this back to 01:10:580. added a circle and moved the slider
01:23:796 (3) - Shorten this so that it starts at 01:24:006 and ends at the same place. Then add a note here.
01:24:426 (4) - Delete this. did something to that

[Hard]
1.8 slider velocity is too high for Hard. wont happen again. the hard was supposed to be the insane, but .. well, lets not talk about it
00:04:496 (2,3) - Again, you're manually stacking these and you don't need to. This is throughout all your difficulties, so I won't mention it again. is that critical though?
00:14:146 - Add a note here with a finish.
00:34:286 - Add a note here (maybe a whistle). added both
00:36:594 (3,4) - This jump is bad. made it easier to deal with
00:37:643 (1,2) - Ending this slider on a blue tick doesn't make sense here. seems like people dislike 3/4th, changed :/
00:41:209 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Having ALL those whistles detracts from the sound itself. Remove some of the whistles (not all of them). removed some, but tried to keep the idea alive
01:15:405 (3,4) - This jump is weird, because it comes BEFORE 01:16:245 (1). You need to know the slider is there in advance for it to make sense. Personally I'd rearrange this. i think i fixed this quite well~
01:19:601 (1) - Bring this back to 01:19:810. Ending on a blue tick is weird here. changed

[Insane]
00:04:496 (2,3,5,6) - Not a big fan of these to be honest. Maybe put whistles on them to accentuate that they're non-standard distance spacing. did that, also set whistles on similar combos to keep consistency
00:10:265 (7,8) - Either delete (7), or change (8) to be just a note and not a slider. I think i did something similar in hard before, changed to circle
00:17:503 (1) - Finish on the start. yup
00:30:720 (1,2) - Delete these. I like these, so i'll keep them for now
00:45:405 - Add a note here.
00:46:034 - ^
00:48:761 - ^
00:49:391 - ^
00:54:845 - ^
00:55:685 - ^ all of them; i mapped them to fit the vocals, which fit more imo (and the last one has a nice effect imo). I'll consider changing when more people dislike this
00:57:573 (5) - Delete this. yup
00:58:202 (2,3) - Remove this jump. I'll try to figure a way out on how to change this
01:01:978 (3) - Get rid of the repeat. I like it though. Will consider changing
01:02:398 - Add a slider here that's a copy of 01:01:559 (2) but higher up (at 428,52).
01:02:608 (4) - Delete this.
01:04:391 (5) - ^ did so
01:12:048 (4) - This doesn't really play well. agreed, changed
01:15:824 (5,6) - Swap these. worth a try
01:27:573 (2) - Move this down near 01:26:943 (4) so that you keep that clockwise motion going. wasnt going for a clockwise movement there, as the vocals "suddenly" change

neonat wrote:

Normal

00:14:194 - this gap sounds very empty. Extending 00:13:774 (4) to this point might make it nicer
00:32:656 (4) - make it more curvy
00:41:047 - similar to first suggestion, it sounds empty
00:43:984 (7,1) - shift the repeat slider such that the flow is smoother, something like this:
01:09:579 (1) - sounds like there are cymbals here, finish?
01:23:005 (1,2) - ^
01:24:684 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:25:523 (2,3) - ^
applied every idea besidfes the last 2 finishes

Hard

00:04:544 (2,3,5,6) - why stack? I just like the idea behind the 3 different movements
00:09:369 (2,3) - gap between this should be the same as 00:09:159 (1,2) as 00:09:579 (3,4,5) is like another part of the phrase but 00:09:159 (1,2,3) are 3 separate notes changed it finally
00:17:551 - add a note with a finish
00:23:844 (6,1) - could blanket better changed
00:26:152 (1,2) - not really fond of how this looks, because it doesn't seem to have a purpose for having a irregular almost-stacked
01:23:005 (1,2,3) - finish I like normal claps more here
01:24:684 (1) - finish on start of slider
01:25:523 (1) - ^
01:26:362 (1) - finish same as on easy, i prefer no finishes here

Insane

00:04:544 (2,3,5,6) - I really cannot see the logic to having 2 anti-jumps before 2 jumps using the same rhythm and pattern, it just doesn't fit having 2 changing patterns here as well, i like to have the different movement in it
00:59:090 (4) - finish on the end of slider no other diff has it and it sounds weird to me, goes for the ones below as well
01:05:802 (4) - ^
01:09:579 (1,2,3) - finish
01:12:725 (6) - ^
01:17:131 (1) - start the jump here moved it a slight bit so that the idea of the DS change is still working
01:19:439 (4) - finish
01:23:005 (1,2,3) - ^
01:24:684 (1,1) - ^
01:26:362 (1) - ^


My feedback for this is that the slightly misaligned stacks look horrible if not used for certain purposes and all the time. There a specific instances where such patterns work fine, but it just looks weird in this song. I guess so, Ive changed that in every diff now (assuming i didnt miss any)

Good luck thanks :3

pishifat wrote:

\o/

mmmmmmmmmmmmm

order of difficulties listed is the order that i modded them in... which is a bad order

General

1. gonna need to add some sort of audio lead-in since there's less than a second of silence before the map starts. i'd put 1232 so you'd have 2 seconds of prep time over all difficulties. anything lower would be inconsistent because of approach rate differences. (see line 5 in any .osu file if confused) changed, i knew there was something off

Insane

1. 00:03:495 (6,7,8) - i think it would be best to stack these. you have 00:04:544 (2,3) - and 00:05:383 (5,6) - with the same spacing yet different rhythm, so it is kind of weird. you stacked the same rhythm at 00:10:208 (6,7,8) - so consistency bs yeah 0.2'd
2. 00:07:272 (6) - not stacked exactly under 4 changed
3. 00:21:747 (3,4) - should be combined into a 3/4 slider instead of what you have now considering you did that the other times that appeared in the music will recheck later, my head tells me that i slider'd the "a", circle'd the "na" and slider'd the "ta wa"
4. 00:43:774 (2) - missing le whistle *whisltes*
5. 00:46:292 (1) - what i said about 00:09:159 (3) - on the easy difficulty applies here and any other places that i may have missed with this sort of wing shape (caught this after modding easy so order of modding mroe screwed up dont questionl) changed completely
6. 00:51:956 (3) - could curve this more like 00:52:586 (4) - as well so it can blanket with 00:50:907 (7) - changed
7. 00:55:942 (1) - dat stack under 00:55:103 (1) - changed so that literally everything stacks
8. 00:57:411 - completely missing the chance for a stream into the fancy part of the song i'd consider putting in something like thing so the ascending instrument is mapped out true that, added
   
   xzxzxzxz

   
9. 01:00:977 (4,1) - should probably include a circle between these as you did at 00:59:404 (5) - since there's a very similar sound, and every other time it appears it's covered (by a slider so kind of not, but at least there's something going on during that part with sliders) changed

Normal

1. overall pretty intense distance snap/rhythm for a normal difficulty. i'd say tone it down but that would require remapping so meh dealing with it
   ---
2. 00:23:005 (6) - the slider slide noise on this. my ears dont know what it is. barely audible when playing equal hitsound/music volume, but i'd still get rid of it anyway
3. 00:24:264 (1) - should rotate this a bit so it forms a sort of perfect umbrella shape
   
   unnecessary Kappa

   
4. 00:25:942 (3) - ^except less umbrella
   00:43:984 (7) - again with the slider slide sound thing eww
5. 00:54:474 (1,2,3) - i'm not sure exactly, but something about polarity is kind of weird here (on a normal difficulty at least). it would be better if you had it so that there was a note on the white ticks before and after 00:55:103 (2) - for reading reasons. this video talks about it on harder maps and i think the same concept applies to this section pretty well
   
   char
6. 01:14:614 (1,2,3) - not a blanket? who are you again? LOL, can not not laugh about this (its not really supposed to be one though, changed to make it more visible). changed all on normal

Easy

1. 00:09:159 (3) - this may sound weird, but i think you should put the nodes inbetween the anchor and head/tail exactly between the anchor and head/tail (picture1). without that, your slider looks like two combined ugly sliders (imagine 2 of picture2 and mirrored cuz i screwed up -.-)
   
   equal length

   
   puke

   
2. 00:10:837 (1) - i'd replace the head on this with a finish since that's how you introduce new phrases elsewhere in the map
3. 00:42:726 (3) - going by your pattern, this should have whistles on head/reverse and finish on tail.
4. 00:46:502 (3,4) - the gap inbetween these feels really awkward rhythm wise. i get that the vocals are on offbeats and it's hard to map, but silence isn't great either
5. 01:06:222 (3,1) - should have the same curve. looks weird as it is. (symmetrical may be good too) i like to use different shapes and not too much symmetry in easy diffs, i might change it somehow though
6. 01:20:068 (2,3) - imagine what you made me imagine from the other mod in which i made you imagine this picture. it applies here
7. 01:24:684 (1,2,3) - feels kind of anticlimactic. i think it may have more of an impact as the last part of the song (if that's possible) by making the last combo centered and symmetrical like the screenshot except more nationalist-socialist-blanketting whatever that means D: changed the combo to be more rgasmic and all above[/color] <- fked up, but i dont even care

Hard

1. 00:09:998 (5) - that slider noise. i'm starting to think you put it there on purpose
2. 00:15:033 (1) - ^you are. for all of the sections like this on the hard diff, you've got the full slider with the "whistle" slider sound. as i already said, it's barely noticeable, but insane doesn't have it so i'd choose to have it on either both or none. if you don't know what i'm talking about, play with hitsound volume twice as loud as music volume (which is what i'm using while modding). it's not like it's a big deal to have them, but they are a pretty annoying noise to hear when focusing on hitsounds. accident. hard was the first one ive mapped, from time to time i used the normal "click and w" for hitsounds, instead of clicking on each hit
3. 00:17:551 - i think there should be a note here. each time after this soft phrase thing, you've placed a loud finish afterwards to indicate the start of louder stuff. see 00:24:264 (1) - 00:37:691 (1) - 00:44:404 (1) - . all the other times when it's going from loud phrase to soft phrase you have that gap, and since this isn't that, you dont wanna do that double reasoning changeitgoddamnit changedgoddamnit
4. 00:25:733 (4) - most nazi thing ever pointed out: this isn't perfectly linear i nazi this all the time
   
   selected slider shows linearness

   
5. 00:30:977 (1,1) - not really sure the new combo thing fits here as well as it does on insane. on insane you've got notes before the barline, so the combo-ing makes sense, while on hard you've got the NC on the barline, so it isn't really needed.
6. 00:55:313 (3) - may want to add a finish here because reasoning #vote. changed everything above

Kihhou wrote:

?_?

[Easy]

1. 00:22:586 (3,4) - spacing changed
2. 01:15:872 (2,3) - spacing changed
3. 01:16:292 (3) - rotate for a bit better flow? changed[
   img]http://i.imgur.com/haeOXMD.png[/img]

[Normal]

1. 01:03:705 (3,4) - keep consistent spacing of 1.3x is that critical though? I'd say its okay
2. 01:24:684 (1,2,3) - spacing ^ changed

[Hard]

1. 00:38:530 (3,4,5,6) - what kinda pattern is this o3o"
   maybe this? I like to use such .. well, idk how I'd call them, ... uh, anti divebomb? I think I had it like this (v) before, but that'd be too much of jumping in a hard
   

[Insane]

1. 00:04:544 (2,3) - this seems a bit too similar to the triplets & 00:00:768 (1,2,3,4) in terms of distance. consider stacking them of moving them farther apart so it's clear that it isnt 1/4 notes?
   heres what i would do o3o Iam really stuggling with this now. I see that they can be taken as 1/4ths, but I'd prefer not to move them at all I have changed it to your idea for now
   
2. 00:40:208 (1,2) - this is a new section! but before that section you have single taps. imo it would be better to indicate a new vocal section with a different kind of movement... idk if im making sense. but right now its single taps for section 1 00:39:369 (1,2,3,4) and then it continues to single tap at section 2
3. 00:40:208 (1,2,3) when they should be different :O try this rhythm? I understand your point and agree with it o: changed as you suggested and also fixed a littbe bit after it
   
4. 00:47:341 (3) - lower this a bit so it flows better aesthetically with 00:46:292 (1,2) - changed
5. 00:59:928 (2) - move 3rd anchor point to (248,96) for a better blanket o3o if bothers me changed
6. 01:00:977 (4,5,1) - lol wot triplet shape. if youre gonna do that, you should curve the slider so it looks nicer mustve been drunk D:
7. 01:06:117 (5,1) - move these to 398 on the y axis if you want it to go straight down from the tail of the previous slider. if you dont know how, ask me ingame~ changed
   

sorry couldnt find much -wrong- with it~ everythings so linear >.< I know, being done with a few other maps, this one seems kinda different to the style I have now.

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Hello~ m4m from your queue~

[General]

1. You might want to add more tags like the singers' name. Since "Ushirokara Haiyoritai G" is just the band name. Take a look at this: http://vgmdb.net/album/32003

[Insane]
Pretty neat~ Just some suggestion:-

1. 00:00:768 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not really a big fan of straight stream. Especially when it's mapped with the vocal.You might want to try this instead? ----> http://puu.sh/9oOHh/aa44447db8.jpg or curve streamz like http://puu.sh/9oOKu/3a576078c5.jpg
2. 00:01:607 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Same
3. 00:03:705 (8) - Maybe change this to a 3/4 slider? I think it fits the song more
4. 00:04:124 (1,2,3) - Maybe have the same distance of the (2) and (3) with the tail of (1) slider ---> http://puu.sh/9oP6I/f2bf3a2ff9.jpg
5. 00:04:963 (4,5,6) - ^ Same
6. 00:09:159 (1) - You might want to increase the jump here, the rhythm from the point starts to get louder.
7. 00:09:159 (1,2,3,4,5) - Try this pattern? ---> http://puu.sh/9oPqp/c8a07c977e.jpg
8. 00:10:208 (6,7) - You should follow the vocal here, triple here seems very awkward with the music. Maybe change this to 1/4 slider instead?
9. 00:10:418 (8) - Add finish? And then remove finish from 00:10:837 (1). Add a clap at 00:10:837 (1) sounds nicer~
10. 00:15:033 (3,4) - Maybe this? ---> http://puu.sh/9oPzq/ff8cd5fc05.jpg .I think if fits the song better and following up with 00:13:984 (4,1,2).
11. 00:17:131 (6) - I recommended you to change this to circles instead. The slider doesn't emphasize well enough with the vocals, and since you already mapped 00:16:712 (4,5) part with circles, you should do the same here too.
12. 00:20:698 (4) - Straight red ticked slider is usually used mostly for very high beat parts, this kind of slider definitely doesn't fit well in this kind of soft song. I think normal curve slider is good enough.
13. 00:22:900 - Add a circle here? Triples here sound pretty nice here.
14. 00:29:404 (1) - I think you should map this part.
15. 01:03:705 (3,4) - The finish here seems pretty noisy especially having 3 finishes in a row. You might want to change this to whistle instead
16. 01:24:684 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Mentioned in the beginning.
17. 01:27:411 (1) - 1/4 slider?

Overall, I think you should make this diff a little more interesting, like more jumps patterns. Most of your jumps here seems pretty random to me. >.>

[Hard]
Your Hard diff, actually looks nicer and neater than your Insane @@ Some suggestion~

1. 00:00:768 (1,2,1,2) - Maybe you should remove the (2) and repeat the slider 5 times instead. Is quite hard especially in Hard diff to read that part.
2. 00:06:642 (4) - The (4) seem pretty far off, maybe something like this? ----> http://puu.sh/9oRCf/9636fdaa5b.jpg
3. 00:36:327 - Add a circle? Following the vocal
4. 00:46:292 (1,2) - For a Hard diff, this distance is pretty far off. Make them closer
5. 01:05:383 (1) - NC here? To alert players there's a sudden jump here
6. 01:12:935 (1,2) - Same thing about the distance. Reduce the distance please
7. 01:24:684 (1,2,1,2) - Mentioned in the beginning

I find it difficult to mod this map, some part in this map is harder than your Insane. Gladly mostly is not.I think you should make your Insane a little harder, because your Insane is practically the same as a Hard diff just a little increased in DS.

[Normal]
I think 1.3x DS is a little too much for a Normal diff. 1.1-1.2x at most. But it should be fine I guess

1. 00:08:949 (3) - Delete this circle? I think is safer if you don't follow the bgm. Follow closely on vocal more for a Normal diff.
2. 00:10:418 (3) - Remove clap, add finish instead?
3. 00:11:677 (3) - Missing clap?
4. 00:24:264 (1) - Blanket this better. ----> http://puu.sh/9oSz3/91c3247781.jpg
5. 00:25:523 (2,3) - I would avoid the stack here. You should keep the flow on-going. The stack makes an awkward pause in the flow.
6. 00:55:733 (4) - NC here, the players might get confused this part because there's change in 1/2 beat here
7. 01:15:243 (2) - Blanket this, since you already curved the (1) slider.
8. 01:18:600 (2) - ^
9. 01:24:684 (1) - Maybe make the slider like this? ---> http://puu.sh/9oSZC/6cee0530bd.jpg . I think it fits the music nicer
10. 01:25:523 (2) - ^

[Easy]
Looks perfect, probably the best diff in this mapset for me~ No complaint.

That's it~ Take a star~ Good luck!