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YMCK - Hateshinai Sekai

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K-S-O
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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, September 24, 2010 at 9:28:56 PM

Artist: YMCK
Title: Hateshinai Sekai
Source: Slap Up Party ~Arad Senki~
Tags: 8bit Jpop Anime
BPM: 105
Filesize: 4261kb
Play Time: 03:11
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.24 stars, 227 notes)
  2. Hard (4.76 stars, 453 notes)
  3. Insane (5 stars, 526 notes)
  4. Normal (3.98 stars, 292 notes)
Download: YMCK - Hateshinai Sekai
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Hey, the first beatmap I completed in over a year!

This is the ending theme of some anime, but I don't really care about that. It's YMCK, and they're awesome!
Last edited by K-S-O , edited 38 times in total.
Kitty McWittles
141 posts
Joined September 2008
Kitty McWittles
[Hard]
00:31:028 (7) - Whistle?
01:38:014 (2,5) - ^
01:40:042 (2,5) - ^
01:42:071 (2,5) - ^
01:44:099 (2,5) - ^
01:53:056 (11) - Delete?

[Insane]
The short spinners are illegal, auto can just 300 them

[All Diffs]
02:33:085-02:51:056 - Needs a few hitsounds

Really couldn't find anything I didn't like, great map, have a star :D
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
[General]
Why you don't use distance snap? It's important!

[Insane]
00:50:996 (1) - Make parallel
01:53:997 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - No new combo
02:03:854 (2) - Make parallel
03:00:712 (1) - ^
03:00:998 (2) - ^

It's like 8-bit sound, but i like it!
STAR
K-S-O
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K-S-O
I did use distance snap.
Nharox
884 posts
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Nharox
Aww, I love this relaxing beatmap. Good job, all diffs are well done, the only thing I dislike is that the third break is too long with almost 20 secs. :\ Would be great if you could change that. Anyway, keep up the good work and get more priorty because I want to see this ranked. :)
K-S-O
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Okay, I made the 3rd break shorter.

@Leorda: In regards to your suggestions, I honestly like the way I made the Insane map. I'll see what others have to say before I change anything.
Wojjan
806 posts
Joined August 2008
Wojjan
I could nazi this map, but it's generally swell and fun to play, so I won't even bother nitpicking.

Some things that could really make it prettier:
INSANE
02:02:569 (4) -2 grids right, fix 5 accordingly. Makes a nice blanket combo.
02:13:283 (1) - 1 grid up, one right.
02:46:712 (3,3,3,5) - Whistles
02:59:713 (4) - see 02:02

HARD
00:27:281 (2) - Align with 5
00:49:710 (5) - Finish on start
01:37:854 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Move this entire combo one grid down, 2 will align with a previous note and the spacing with the next combo will remain okay!
The source isn't right. It's just a YMCK song.
All is well
bmin11
5,438 posts
Joined October 2008
bmin11
[Insane]
00:58:282 (2) - Remove whistle
00:58:425 (x) - add a note
02:04:426 (1) - Increase the slider to the white tick
03:01:570 (1) - ^

[Hard]
01:38:140 (2,3,4,5) - remove finish and maybe add whistle for #3 if it sounds too quiet
01:40:425 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:42:711 (2,3,4,5) - ^
01:44:997 (2,3,4,5) - ^
02:14:426 (1) - finish?

[Easy]
02:44:138 (1) - Whistle instead of finish

Nice job. Starred
K-S-O
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K-S-O

Wojjan wrote:

The source isn't right. It's just a YMCK song.
That is the name of the anime that YMCK did the theme song for. I don't know why you thought it was wrong.
blissfulyoshi
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blissfulyoshi
You can remove all the tags since they are covered by the source and the artist fields.
Remove the .osb file because it is not being used

Easy:
Combo mod: (Since most of your patterns were 4 whole notes long, I am modding based off that pattern)
00:33:852 (4) - new combo for the next set of 4 whole notes?
00:38:424 (4) - ^
01:06:424 (4) - add a new combo for this last set of whole notes (you might want to add a combo to 3 too)
01:40:138 (4) - new combo for the next set of 4 whole notes?
01:44:709 (4) - ^
02:12:710 (4) - add a new combo for this last set of whole notes (you might want to add a combo to 3 too)
03:09:853 (4) - ^

The copying and pasting make this map very boring after a while

Normal: fine, but the copying and pasting of patterns that were similar to each other got sort of repetitive

Hard: fine

Insane: fine

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Nice map overall. The higher diffs felt a little stiff with almost pure distance snap, but I guess that suits the song. Star.
Diasios
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Diasios
Pubbled~
K-S-O
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K-S-O
@BlissfulYoshi: I'll consider changing around the maps when I find the time.
K-S-O
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K-S-O
Hey, I've been off for a while but I finally made the changes to Easy and Normal.
Kim Jin Seok
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Joined December 2008
Kim Jin Seok
[Normal]
01:27:140 (2) - delete?
01:36:283 (2) - ^
01:52:569 (2) - ^
01:53:711 (4) - ^


Star+ :)
K-S-O
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K-S-O
I don't think that last change is needed. I did change the others though.
Sallad4ever
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Sallad4ever
As your request :D
Hey this is a cute song :oops:

[General]
Please re-snap all notes on all diff except insane :o
well the .osb is still there. Kill him if you're not using it then full submit

[Easy]
At first I kinda feel awkward of the blue tick notes, but after the later part of the song I guess it's fine since there's the lyric to follow and it have consistency
A bit nazi, end the kiai same with the other 3 diff
01:08:145 (x) - how about a note here?
03:00:995 (4,5,6,7,8) - too crowded, hard to read for novice, try unstack 4 and then stack 6,7,8 just like the previous triplet

[Normal]
hmm... some of the curve like in 00:32:424 (3), 00:34:710 (3), 01:38:711 (5), etc need more curve so that it wont touch the circle note try using lv3 grid to make it more detail
00:56:710 (6) - hey this is cool, fits the song very perfect :)
00:59:996 (1) - IMO this is too offbeat, move it backward to the red tick?
02:06:283 (1) - ^
03:03:434 (1) - ^

[Hard]
strangely enough the note that I wrote offbeat in hard actually works pretty well here :?
maybe because of the precedent slider :?

[Insane]
wow nice hitsound usage :)
This is my favorite diff, great
01:53:861 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - make them into 1 combo set instead of 1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1

cute song
But I found it weird that easy n normal seems lack on the hitsound :? meh it's only me I guess

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ah19980924
51 posts
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ah19980924
star

>_>
Sakura
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Sakura
Red = Major issue, you should fix this
Purple = Issue, It's better if you fix this, but you dont have to
Blue = Minor issue, you can ignore if you dont want to change
Green = Feedback / Comments
Black = Suggestion
[General]
Add some tags?

[Easy]
02:48:715 (1) - Awkward Spinner
02:54:144 (4,5,6) - Do NOT use 1/4s on Easy
02:56:430 (4,5,6) - ^
02:58:716 (4,5,6) - ^
03:01:580 (6,7,8) - ^
03:07:002 (2) - This slider sounds weird Maybe make it into a regular slider that ends at 03:07:574 then map the rest with regular notes?
03:04:716 (1) - Would sound better if you put a repeat at: 03:05:277
03:09:859 (1,2) - Move the new combo to (2)

[Normal] (This actually feels like a Hard)
02:48:719 (1) - Awkward spinner
03:04:719 (4) - Would sound better if you end att: 03:05:291 then add a note at: 03:05:719
03:10:433 (9) - New combo

[Hard]
03:10:434 (6) - New combo

[Insane]
I have no clue what tne notes are following
K-S-O
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Sakura301 wrote:

[Insane]
I have no clue what tne notes are following
I was trying to follow the notes in the background music. Is it a bad idea to go after notes that one would not normally hear in casual listening?

I will look into this.
K-S-O
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Okay, so I made changes to the first 3 difficulties.

I like what I did with Insane but I'll wait for what a BAT has to say before I do anything with it.
Sekuyi
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Sekuyi
Heyho~!

Could't find a thing which bothers me. And I also don't have a problem with your insane. I could easily follow the rythm - k, couldn't finish it 'coz I'm not good enough - but the rythm is ok. The notes are sometimes vocals only, then mixed with the synth. and sometimes only synth..

Have a cookie~* ^^
wmfchris
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wmfchris
[insane]
1:04:575 (5) left 1 grid
2:02:576 (4) left 1 grid
2:06:290 (2) spacing
3:03:434 (2) ^

[hard]
1:49:004 (8) spacing different from (6,7)

[normal]
1:04:146 (4,5,1) a bit higher than the stright line (1,2,3)?

[easy] nice

star~
DJPop
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DJPop
BPM should be 210 imo.


~Easy~
00:47:574 (3) - make it more symmetry

~Normal~
00:38:860 (2) - move left 7 grids & up 3 grids (Lv3)
01:20:004 (2) - move down 1 grid (Lv3)
01:22:290 (2) - move up 1 grid (Lv3)
01:37:575 (3) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
02:02:719 (5) - ^

~Hard~
Fine.

~Insane~
02:52:577 (2) - move right 4 grids & up 1 grid (Lv3)
Doomsday
Featured Artist
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Doomsday
Oh hey ;)

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to.
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these.
Red = major issues. you need to change these

  1. I got offset: 1,850 (yours feels a little late)
  2. Remove "YMCK" from the tags? Since its already in the title, so it doesn't need to be in the tags as well.
[EASY]

A few beats here and there are unsnapped. Resnap all notes

Map itself is pretty much fine. Feels a bit hard for an Easy difficulty though.

[NORMAL]

Looks good

[HARD]

A little overmapped for my tastes, but theres nothing that I can pick on.

[INSANE]

Kinda overmapped as well, but it makes more sense than hard to me, which is a plus.

Good stuff on the whole. Insane is pretty fun actually.

Starred
iDwarf
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iDwarf
~Easy~
  1. 00:30:992 (3,1) - Too much space between them. (Compared to others) Make it a bit closer.
  2. 00:36:135 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Make it symmetric.
  3. 02:03:849 (3,4,5,6,1) - Oh c'mon. Make a proper sqare.
~Normal~
  1. 00:20:993 (2) - Make it closer to (1)
  2. 00:30:136 (2) - ^
  3. 01:27:280 (2) - ^
  4. 01:36:423 (2) -
~Hard~
  1. 00:56:707 (7) - New Combo
  2. 01:07:279 (7) - ^
~Insane~

Looks accepatble to me.

Lolstar~
K-S-O
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@Midget:
In regards to the 2nd suggestion on Easy, I feel what I did with the arrangement is fine.
minyeob
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minyeob
Some of Easy&Hard notes aren't snapped yet <_<
K-S-O
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Took me a while to get back to this but I re-snapped those notes!
Kuroneko-sHerald
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Kuroneko-sHerald
o_o Star!

P.S. Just a suggestion. I've search on wiki jp and it seems that the correct source is "Arad Senki ~Slap Up Party~"
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