This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Thursday, October 23, 2014 at 12:23:01 PM

Artist: Jin ft. Lia
Title: days (TV Size)
Source: Mekaku City Actors
Tags: メカクシティアクターズ 自然の敵P Shizen no Teki-P Kagerou project
BPM: 96
Filesize: 7295kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

1. Hard (2.35 stars, 162 notes)
2. Normal (1.34 stars, 98 notes)

Download: Jin ft. Lia - days (TV Size)
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Hiyori <3
Mekaku City Actors !
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beatmap set:
Normal : done
Hard : done
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ready 4 mod !
Thanks Vicho for mp3 and Video www

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Mod suggestion only นะ ไม่เก่งแมพช้า

[Normal]

00:08:852 (1) - ลองตัดตรงนี้ออกแล้วใส่ Spin ตั้งแต่ 00:08:227 ดูนะ
00:12:914 (4) - ตรงหัวเปลี่ยนเป็น Whistle ดู
00:17:602 (4) - ตรง Reverse แบบด้านบน
00:24:164 (2) - Clap ออกดู
00:24:477 (3) - เพิ่มโน้ตดู เสียงมันจะได้ไม่หาย

[Hard]

AR, OD, Drain -1 ดีกว่านะเพลงช้าๆ AR8 แปลกมากๆ

00:02:602 (4) - ส่วนหางลองใช้ Whistle แทนดู
00:04:008 (2) - เอาออกดีกว่านะ เสียงเพี้ยนมากๆ
00:06:508 (2) - ^
00:12:602 (4) - เสียงตรงหางไม่เข้าเลย
00:19:789 (4) - Add note + Whistle
00:17:289 (4,5) - 1/2 แล้ว 1 Note ดูดีกว่านะ
00:39:164 (6) - ตรงนี้ที่มีเสียงคนร้อง ลองใส่โน้ตตามเสียงแล้วทำ small jump จะดีมากๆ
00:41:195 (2) - Add note
00:41:352 (3) - เปลี่ยนเป็นเสียง Auto แล้วใช้ default Whistle
01:01:352 (2) - เปลี่ยนเป็น note แล้วใช้ 1/1 หรือ 1/2 Slider เริ่มตรงเส้นแดงจะเข้ากว่า
01:05:414 (5) - Add Note
01:03:852 (1) - ใส่ Hitsound เพิ่ม
01:19:477 (1) - ทำ rework ตรงนี้ดู ทำตามทำนองดีกว่า

แค่นีี้แล Good Luck!

Taiko Mod via Queue!




good luck, not much to spot here (so sorry if my mod was poor ;;)

M4M from your queue.

[General]

1. Well, hearing on quite many generic bass sound on this song, maybe you would like to add another clap hitsound like puu.sh/8k3p6.wav so that the hitsound will give much better effect. If you consider this, I think this is really recommended since the hitsound currently doesn't really emphasize all of the sound element in this song imo
2. I see your background image is a bit off, since the size is 1022x768, so you should widen it a bit to 1024x768 to fit the 4:3 scaled monitor, or else you could resize the image into 1366x768 without crushing the pixel (well, since there's someone who can do it)
3. Don't forget to remove "taiko" from the diff name, since it doesn't necessary and there's rule about it, if you look on the rule stuff

Hm, I think it's enough of general stuff, since I don't really have any objection with the metadata, so I'll just check the diffs immediately~


[Normal]

• Um.. personally I think the normal diff maybe seems a bit plain imo, since the notes is dominated by merely straight slider so it lacks of aesthetic side. Well, I don't really try to criticize the style in general either, so I'll just try to point out any place which fit a curve slider the most

1. 00:11:664 (3) Well then, if we think about it, this slider can be made into a curved slider connected into the previous slider, hence those will make a nice-looking half circle, something like this
   
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   Actually there's many straight slider you can try with this pattern, but I think this one is the most eyecatching
2. 00:13:539 (5) It's better to curve this one a bit to make it a little more similar with the previous slider, and we will get a better view of those short slider
3. 00:23:227 (1,3) I think you could make it more similar to each other respectively, moreover making a blanket from these would be nice
4. 00:35:727 (1) Same with before, you could curve it to make a half circle with the next slider. In addition, I'd like to see more curve on (2) to establish a nice flow art
   
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5. 00:46:508 (2,3) Maybe same as before, since it looks fit imo
   
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6. 01:07:602 (3,4,5) I think trying to make 3/4 circle here won't hurt, here's an example (you could make it by copy-paste the starting slider and rotating it 90 degrees anticlockwise to make it looks neat)
   
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7. 01:26:352 (1) Remove the NC here, since it doesn't seem necessary
   Well, there's still many straight slider I'd like to point out which will look nice when curved, like 00:51:664 01:04:164 01:14:164 and 01:10:727 (especially the last I mentioned since there's only one straight slider while the others are curved). Well, those are optional, hence you could consider it up to your mapping style. And once again, it would be nice if you consider to emphasize the bass hitsound I linked before especially on the kiai time where there's much thing to emphasize there

[Hard]

1. 00:01:664 (3) Nazi, move the tail 1 grid to the right
2. 00:09:789 (1,2) It will be better if these notes have the same or a few more higher volume comparing to 00:08:695 (1,2,3) since the sudden changing volume from 10% to 30% there doesn't sound good imo
3. 00:34:477 (1) How about giving this slider a curve? Looks neat
   
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4. 00:51:039 (1,2,3) Nazi, move those note 1 grid upward to make a perfect blanket with (4)
5. 00:51:977 (4) Maybe a curved slider may fit here as well
   
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6. 01:25:727 (1) Hm, I'm still wondering what this red NC is intended to use but well, it's up to you

Yeah, the rest looks fine I guess, since it's a slow TV size map I can just say until that extent so, I hope you don't mind orz (really, it's not because I'm lazy ;_;)


[Muzukashii]

Looking this in overall, maybe it needs some more notes to fulfill the low-sounded part on this song, I'll try to help with it, so that the map doesn't feel lack of emphasizing (of course this is different with overmapping)

1. You could try adding k then d then d on 00:08:852 and 00:09:164 and 00:09:789 respectively so that the next part sounds consistent
2. 00:10:414 Considering add d here since I can still here a bass sound
3. 00:12:914 (28) Remove k since it doesn't sound necessary
4. 00:17:914 You could try this to fill the empty space, regarding it's a muzukashii yet the it really lacks of notes
   
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5. 00:42:289 Try to add k here
6. 00:44:477 Try adding d
7. 01:11:352 Change to k, sounds better
8. 01:19:945 (187) I think it doesn't really necessary to put this on blue tick, just put it on the next stanza on 01:20:102 would do
9. 01:20:727 (1) Actually it's kind of unusual to put a relatively long spinner on taiko diff, since taiko diff is focusing mostly on hitcircles, so I think it's better to map this part instead of putting that long spinner

And last, in case I forgot some space possible to map, you could try finding the rest yourself, but consider not to overmap it


[Oni]

Well, I'm not really an expert in oni diff, but there's something crucial I should tell you about

1. 00:08:852 I think putting the notes on the yellow tick won't solve it, since it just make the rhythm sounds more confusing. Maybe try to fill it on the blue tick instead starting from the stanza on 00:08:852
   
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   And remembering how you did the same on the other diff (if I'm not wrong) it's better to recheck the rhythm on the other diff on this part as well
   
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2. 00:18:852 You could do the same as before here
   

That's it, moreover I hope you could also fill out the part especially around 00:39:164 in detail, and ultimately the rest of this diff where a note on blue tick could be fitted. You should use the blue tick more or else it wouldn't be any different with muzukashii, hence this will need quite a lot of work

I still not get used to modding TV size map, so it's kinda weird looking this short mod orz, I hope you forgive me xD
good luck on your map anyway~

star~

tell me i you want M4M :3

A mod for M4M with this map http://osu.ppy.sh/s/170080 at your queue

[General] there is six combo color, and i think this is too much since two combo color nearly same like; combo color number 1 with number 6. i think you should remove combo color number 6.

[Easy]
00:00:727 (1) - move this one to x:108 y:266 it will give better flow
00:03:227 (1) - i think it's better like this one http://puu.sh/8p9YH.JPG
00:08:643 - i think it will be more nice if increase the volume from 10% to 20%
00:18:383 - ^
00:23:227 (1) - give whistle on the head
00:24:164 (2) - give whistle (additions: soft) here like this one 00:21:664 (3)
00:25:727 (1) - give whistle on the head and move the anchor point on the tail to x:232 y:56
00:32:289 (4) - move the anchor point on the tail to x:256 y:24 to give straight curve
00:35:727 (1) - give whistle on the head
00:38:227 - more better increase the volume from 10% to 20%
00:50:102 (3) - this one seems too close with the slider before, so move it like this http://puu.sh/8pbDn.jpg
01:15:258 (6) - for better flow, move (6) like this http://puu.sh/8pbQW.jpg

sorry for the nazi mods, your beat almost perfect btw :'3

[Hard]
00:08:643 - more better increase the volume from 10% to 20%
00:08:643 (1) - remove (1) because i think it didn't fit the beat and NC here 00:08:852
00:12:914 (4) - the clap at the tail didn't fit i think
00:17:758 (5) - add clap whistle on the head
00:18:383 - more better increase the volume from 10% to 20%
00:18:227 (1) - add whistle on the head
00:33:227 (4) - ^
00:38:227 - more better increase the volume from 10% to 20%
00:42:914 (5) - change this slider with a note, cause the slider didn't fit the beat
00:43:227 (1) - change this slider end to (00:43:539) | and place a note here (00:43:695)
00:44:164 (4) - i think make this slider 1/6 and end it here (00:44:581) more better
00:53:227 (1) - end this slider here (00:53:539) and place a note here 00:53:695
01:13:695 - i think it will be more nice place a note here
01:15:727 (1) - add whistle on the head
01:20:727 (1) - ^
01:23:852 (2) - maybe you could play with pattern like this http://puu.sh/8pef2.JPG and http://puu.sh/8pegT.JPG. this is just suggestion, and if you like this pattern here the code, paste it to the hard diff notepad

396,276,83852,2,0,P|400:232|392:204,1,67.5000025749208,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,136,84477,1,0,0:0:0:0:
240,104,84789,1,0,0:0:0:0:
396,132,85102,1,2,0:0:0:0:
358,58,85414,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,85727,5,0,0:0:0:0:

a bit messy with the beat in the hard diff, but overall this is great.
sorry i can't mod taiko
hope this will be rank soon uvu)/

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Good Luck

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