1. Please, try to remove or replace the following colour: Combo4 : 35,35,35 - why? Because it is way too dark and when BG is dimmed, it blends with the the black emptiness.
2. The SB seems to be fine. This upscaled thingy is used completely and gives a slightly different rain in each kiai. (thought that we should note it, just in case)

1. Try lowering your diff settings, I'd say that OD and HP set to 3,5 will do just fine.
2. AR 4,5 might feel a little better, give it a try and see how it works for you.
3. 00:46:809 (3,4) - as we can hear an audible slide sound, try to se a slider instead of these two circles?
   Note: 00:53:666 (3) - the same sound, so I'd try to have something similar here. example
4. 00:58:523 (5) - for the sake of simplicity on the easiest diff, you might want to remove the circle here as it has some tricky snapping. Afterwards, you'll have to check and probably fix spacing.
5. 01:09:095 (1,2) - minor- spacing is slightly lower than it's should be. Please, set it closer to x1.0 value.
   Note: 02:03:523 (5) and 03:06:523 (3,1) - and 03:42:952 (2,3) - similar with the suggestion above, try to kep it closer to x1.2?
6. 02:50:238 (1,1) - whoops, there should be a little more recovery time. Sorry. :c
7. 03:15:095 (2,3) - be sure to check the DS here, might be okay, but I'd like to be sure that it's your intention.
   
   Just a few minor things.

1. 00:39:309 (3,4) - minor - tthe blanket here is quite noticeable, so I'd suggest something to fix it.
   
   Lookin' good!

1. I wanted you to remove the black colour (3). Can you remove it and bring back the red one. (Sorry I didn't make it clear the first time)

1. 02:50:238 - should begin on the white tick.

1. 00:36:951 (1) - isn't this new combo unnecessary here. Probably we should remove it for consistency.
2. 00:57:094 (3,4) - minor - spacing here is a little smaller than it should be. use x1.2
3. 00:58:808 (1) - just change the combo colour to something gray on this one. For some reason both of these comobo colours are the same.
4. 02:09:996 (2) - this is getting way too tricky. Let's remove this one?
5. 03:15:119 (2,3) - spacing inconsistency here.

1. 01:11:987 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). Please, snap it to the vocals/music.

-Bakari- wrote:

Be sure to check AiMod's warnings. Kiais and some sliders are unsnapped!

Just give me a poke when we're ready!

Aight, let's see

[Normal]

1. 00:36:951 (1) - isn't this new combo unnecessary here. Probably we should remove it for consistency.
2. 00:57:094 (3,4) - minor - spacing here is a little smaller than it should be. use x1.2
3. 00:58:808 (1) - just change the combo colour to something gray on this one. For some reason both of these comobo colours are the same.
4. 02:09:996 (2) - this is getting way too tricky. Let's remove this one?
5. 03:15:119 (2,3) - spacing inconsistency here. this is blanket ._.

[Hard]

1. 01:11:987 (6) - Unsnapped slider (end). Please, snap it to the vocals/music.

Find me for a re-re-recheck. this will continue 4ever

Alarido wrote:

Checked, then...
H a b e m u s . . .
[BONUSES]

Türkçe

Bir melek vardı
Aşkı fısıldardı
Elimde o büyülü ellerin hayali kaldı
Uyku imkansız
Umut vicdansız
Güneş bile dedi ki kendine: Doğmak anlamsız

Ağladım delice
Elimde boş bir şişe
Kutladım bu gece sarılmanı başka kollara
Yapayalnız biçare
Ölüyorsam kime ne
Benzedim bu gece yine boş sokaklara

English

There was an angel
He whispered about love
Illusion of his magical hands was left in my hand
Sleep is impossible
Hope is remorseless
Even the sun has said to itself: rising is pointless

I was crying like crazy
Empty bottle in my hand
Tonight I was celebrating that you're in someone else's embrace
Miserable, completely lonely
If I'm dying - who cares
Today I was like empty streets again

Seylum

Ödjel astitvad
B havakar viszpad
Mahoitenyan vizlumber z tem balesduli
Nemu da mustahil
Vondar da nekesali
Aun bi solodim: bibekecz da mottainai

Malukele nakoduń
Kay l kanntarus, l üresi
Kes yoru ni, mi okazijaduluń: ti da al brakumya-ni
Zerabi, da polnostel koli
Fi kutabuń, dore lat?
Ojeni, mi deri novile prazani utcak

1. The artist you are currently using is wrong. MODEL should be capitalized.
   http://www.modelband.com/
   https://www.facebook.com/modelband
   https://twitter.com/model_band
   https://instagram.com/modelband/
   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c_-2OyeP4y8

1. There are wrongly snapped objects in this difficulty:
   00:57:951 (4,5) - , 01:11:987 (6) - , 03:20:262 (5) - These should all be snapped to 1/3 as they just sound off due to the wrong timing.

Mao wrote:

###0

Yo,

unfortunately we have to disqualify this beatmap after some internal discussion for the following reasons:

General

1. The artist you are currently using is wrong. MODEL should be capitalized.
   http://www.modelband.com/
   https://www.facebook.com/modelband
   https://twitter.com/model_band
   https://instagram.com/modelband/
   https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=c_-2OyeP4y8

Hard

1. There are wrongly snapped objects in this difficulty:
   00:57:951 (4,5) - , 01:11:987 (6) - , 03:20:262 (5) - These should all be snapped to 1/3 as they just sound off due to the wrong timing.

As most of these wrongly snapped objects occur due to the timing still being late as you can hear in sections like 02:31:400 - and 03:34:405 - for instance, a new .mp3 file will be provided by pishifat as well as a new timing as soon as he is done with it!
In case you refuse having a new .mp3, you will need to get a much more detailed timing.

----

We are sorry for the late disqualification here and apologize for the inconveniences this causes to you. Good luck on getting this requalified o/

Sniqht wrote:

I give up

Mao wrote:

Hard

1. There are wrongly snapped objects in this difficulty:
   00:57:951 (4,5) - , 01:11:987 (6) - , 03:20:262 (5) - These should all be snapped to 1/3 as they just sound off due to the wrong timing.

As most of these wrongly snapped objects occur due to the timing still being late as you can hear in sections like 02:31:400 - and 03:34:405 - for instance, a new .mp3 file will be provided by pishifat as well as a new timing as soon as he is done with it!
In case you refuse having a new .mp3, you will need to get a much more detailed timing.

Sniqht wrote:

now should I back to old timing?

Mao wrote:

a new .mp3 file will be provided by pishifat as well as a new timing as soon as he is done with it!
In case you refuse having a new .mp3, you will need to get a much more detailed timing.

pishifat wrote:

Mao wrote:

a new .mp3 file will be provided by pishifat as well as a new timing as soon as he is done with it!
In case you refuse having a new .mp3, you will need to get a much more detailed timing.

audio file without any of the fluctuation: http://puu.sh/i8h3T/a7e3d04c38.mp3

timing point for^ is offset 15428 bpm 140


the alternative mao mentioned is possible, but not practical (as Shiro explained). keeping your timing and risking another disqualification is an option, but thats pretty sketchy considering qat don't approve of it. it's your choice in the end so do what you want, gl

Sieg wrote:

hard
00:59:142 (4) - end must be on 1\6 00:59:428 () <3
00:59:785 (5) - must be on 1\6 00:59:713 () <3
01:13:178 (6) - head on 01:13:142 () , end on 01:13:428 () <3
03:21:428 (5) - make from this repeat to follow bass beats because they most stressed here http://puu.sh/ibSW6/795dee8d14.jpg this was repeat slider but u was say make straight but k

normal
00:59:142 (4) - same as for hard <3

fix timings for the storyboard there are no mistake

Alarido wrote:

Herşeyi doğru görünüyor. | Everything looks right. | Tul kirei videora.

soooo....

Diyan2007 wrote:

Why all objects are late? I tried to decrease the offset but nothing

Diyan2007 wrote:

Why all objects are late? I tried to decrease the offset but nothing

Sniqht wrote:

Thanks to everyone

Diyan2007 wrote:

Why all objects are late? I tried to decrease the offset but nothing

try to play without NF+HD+HR+DT+FL+SO

zigizigiefe wrote:

[Hard]
00:28:193 (1) - Niye buraya NC koyuyon la.
00:50:265 (8) - Niye buraya NC koymuyon.
01:18:768 (8) - NC koy
01:18:982 (1) - NC kaldır.
01:58:839 (7) - NC koy.
02:06:982 (9) - NC koy.
02:07:624 (1) - NC kaldır.
02:10:410 (7) - NC koy.
02:17:053 (8) - NC koy.
02:17:267 (1) - NC kaldır.
02:59:910 (8) - NC koy.
03:00:124 (1) - NC kaldır.
MOD.