1. Futsuu (2.25 stars, 205 notes)
2. Inner Oni (4.16 stars, 599 notes)
3. Kantan (SV100 ODHP10) (1.7 stars, 115 notes)
4. Kantan (1.69 stars, 115 notes)
5. Muzukashii (2.57 stars, 336 notes)
6. Oni (3.34 stars, 454 notes)

1. d is don note
2. k is kat note
3. D is finish don note
4. K is finish kat note

1. 01:30:057 (6,7,8) - k k k

1. 00:11:714 (15) - k
2. 00:17:200 (27) - D
3. 01:07:771 - k
4. 01:26:114 (22) - D
5. 01:27:143 (23) - k

1. 00:20:628 (72) - k
2. 00:26:114 (89) - ^
3. 00:42:571 (57) - ^
4. 00:48:057 (78) - ^

1. 00:17:714 - add d
2. 00:23:200 - ^
3. 00:39:657 - ^
4. 00:45:143 - ^

1. 00:16:857 (2,3,4,5,6) - ddkkk
2. 00:17:714 - add d
3. 00:23:200 - ^
4. 00:30:314 (67) - change to d
5. 00:39:657 - add d
6. 00:45:143 - ^

• [Kantan]

1. 00:11:714 (1) - add finish like 00:06:228 (1) - ? They have the same rhythm.
2. 01:12:743 (1,2) - d K ? Very high-pitched vocal can be heard at 01:13:257 (2) -
3. 01:14:628 (1) - d could be better if you change ^

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:17:200 (29) - add finish here ? I think you may have missed it, as you used D at 00:22:685 (37) -
2. 00:32:114 (10) - k to follow the vocal better ? It has a higher pitch than 00:31:943 (9) -
3. 00:54:057 (57) - ^
4. 01:12:914 (12,13) - d K ? Very high-pitched vocal can be heard at 01:13:257 (13) -
5. 01:14:114 (15) - d could be better if you change ^

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:16:943 (61) - move to 00:17:114 - and delete 00:16:857 - ? Placing the triplet at 00:17:028 - is better imo.
2. 00:27:143 (92) - d , as it has a lower pitch than 00:27:314 (93) - Moreover, this could produce a good contrast to 00:21:657 (75,76) -
3. 00:27:828 (95,96) - k d . Following the trumpet tune would be nice.
4. 00:33:657 (23) - add finish ? You used D at 00:55:600 (110) -
5. 00:37:600 (39) - k for the high-pitched vocal sound ?
6. 00:38:971 (45) - d ? The music goes down.
7. 00:49:085 (82) - d , refer to 00:27:143 (92) -
8. 00:49:771 (85,86) - k d . Refer to 00:27:828 (95,96) -
9. 01:12:914 (18,19) - d K ? Very high-pitched vocal can be heard at 01:13:257 (19) -

• [Oni]

1. 00:27:143 (120) - d , same as Muzu
2. 00:37:600 (53) - k to follow the relatively high-pitched vocal better ?
3. 00:33:657 (30) - add finish ? Refer to Muzu
4. 00:59:543 (5) - same as 00:37:600 (53) -
5. 01:13:257 (30) - K, as this is the highest vocal of the song, big kat could fit. A progressive increase in tension could also be experienced upon mapping 30 as K among 01:10:514 (18,24,30) -
6. 01:14:628 (38) - maybe you can add finish here, as a stressed sound can be heard.

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:08:457 (17,18) - d k to follow the rhythm better ?
2. 00:16:685 (1) - maybe you can also add finish as you did in 00:15:657 (1) -
3. 01:25:600 (27) - I think you can add finish here, as this is an Inner Oni.
   
   Nice Inner Oni~ :3

Soldsaga KunG wrote:

Taiko mod

d = don
D = Big Don
k = kat
K = Big Kat
> = change from

Kantan

00:06:914 (2) - k
00:08:285 (5) - k no change ,but I decided to break many dkdk patterns.
00:09:657 (2) - k
00:12:400 (2) - k
00:17:200 (1) - D no cahnge. unnecesarry for Kantan, I think.
00:19:943 (1) - D same as above.
00:20:628 (2) - k
00:25:428 (1) - D
00:39:143 (1) - D
00:42:571 (2,3) - k
00:49:085 (4) - k
00:49:428 (5) - d

Futsuu

00:06:914 (2,3,4) - k dk
00:08:285 (6) - k
changed other simple pattern.
00:12:400 (16,17,18) - as 00:06:914 (2,3,4) -
00:17:200 (29) - D no change. same as Kantan.
01:31:600 (36) - d

Muzukashii

00:31:257 (13) - k uum, no change. follow the drums . not vocal up.
00:32:971 (21) - k no change.
00:33:657 (24) - duum, already put don here...?

Oni & Inner Oni For Modder other

Good Luck

1. 00:07:600 (3,4,5) - What about moving these objects 1/2 beats earlier (you know, move them so (3) will be at 00:07:428, (4) will be at 00:07:771, and (5) will be at 00:08:114). The instruments are far stronger on the red ticks than the white ones. Don't worry, it won't be hard for newbies. In fact, this feels way more natural and comfortable to play. If you followed this suggestion, you can try adding a don at 00:08:628 so it won't feel empty.(Applies to 00:10:343 (3) and 00:13:085 (3,4,5) too.)
2. 00:17:200 (1,1) - Why don't you use big dons instead? The instruments are strong here and I believe newbies will still be able to play them well.
3. 00:25:428 (1) - ^
4. The rhythm feels a little hard to follow in the kiai time for some reason. Probably just me, though, but I do feel that the objects don't blend well with the music at times.
5. 01:28:515 (3,4,5) - Same as 00:07:600 (3,4,5).

1. 00:00:742 (1) - Change this to a kat and add a don at 00:00:571 to follow the music more accurately? Shouldn't be too difficult for a Futsuu, and I feel that this rhythm is less awkward compared to leaving 00:00:571 unmapped. (Applies to the harder diffs.)
2. 00:02:800 (6) - Move to 00:02:628 since the instrument is stronger there?
3. 00:14:800 - Add a don here? I feel that it is a nice way to keep the rhythm going.
4. 01:12:914 (12) - Change to a don since the music is only as strong as 01:12:571 (11) and the vocal isn't really that high either?
5. 01:28:171 (26,27) - Change from kd (1/2) to d k? I feel that it's following the song better and is more comfortable to play.

1. 00:01:943 (4,6) - Why not change them to kats since the instrument sounds are stronger than 00:01:428 (3)?
2. 00:16:000 (56,57,58) - Change to d k d? Seems to be better and follow the song nicer.
3. 00:55:943 (112,113) - Ctrl+G? The instrument sounds that are mapped by the two notes are of the same power, and the vocal pitch is higher at (112) compared to (113).
4. 01:27:828 (32) - Change this to a kat since the music gets noticeably stronger here compared to 01:27:657 (31)?

1. 00:11:028 (50) - Move to 00:10:857 since the instrument is stronger there?
2. 00:14:800 (73) - Change to a don? The music here is weaker than 00:14:971 (74); roughly as strong as 00:15:143 (75).
3. 00:49:685 (104) - Try changing this to a d since there isn't any powerful instrument here? Sounds fitting with the song, too.

1. 00:43:257 (144) - Make this a kat? I feel that the instrument here is as strong as 00:43:600 (148).
2. 01:09:657 (6) - Use a don instead since the instrument's pitch is considerably lower?

-Eternal Love- wrote:

Hi~ I'm late ....

Inner Oni

00:01:943 (7) - k uum...?
00:02:628 (9) - k no change both, keep to follow bass sound.
00:16:685 (1) - d? no change, linked 00:15:657 (1) - K .
00:17:114 (5) - delete 00:17:200 (6) - change to D? no change. I dont put 00:17:200 (6) - finisher. not loudest or louder on this sound.
00:20:628 (18) - k uum..?
00:22:685 (31) - D? nope, same as 00:17:200 (6) -
00:26:114 (44) - k nope.
00:43:257 (157) - k nope.
01:31:600 (65) - K? pitch was not changed. same as other D sounds.

plays better than sounds? I made this for sounds.

Oni

00:02:628 (8,9) - k d? nope
00:46:943 (84) - d? uum, I'm leaving for this.
01:31:600 (2) - ^ Inner Oni same as Inner Oni.

Muzukashii

00:44:628 (67) - D? nope, same as other finisher patterns.
00:47:200 (75) - k leaving for this. fixed.

JUDYDANNY wrote:

00:46:857 (72,73,74,75) - Follow Oni and change these 4 notes to kat? fixed.

01:31:600 (48) - ^ nope.

but sorry, no change

JUDYDANNY wrote:

-Eternal Love- wrote:

Hi~ I'm late ....

Inner Oni

00:01:943 (7) - k uum...?
00:02:628 (9) - k no change both, keep to follow bass sound.
00:16:685 (1) - d? no change, linked 00:15:657 (1) - K .
00:17:114 (5) - delete 00:17:200 (6) - change to D? no change. I dont put 00:17:200 (6) - finisher. not loudest or louder on this sound.
00:20:628 (18) - k uum..?
00:22:685 (31) - D? nope, same as 00:17:200 (6) -
00:26:114 (44) - k nope.
00:43:257 (157) - k nope.
01:31:600 (65) - K? pitch was not changed. same as other D sounds.

plays better than sounds? I made this for sounds.

Oni

00:02:628 (8,9) - k d? nope
00:46:943 (84) - d? uum, I'm leaving for this.
01:31:600 (2) - ^ Inner Oni same as Inner Oni.

Muzukashii

00:44:628 (67) - D? nope, same as other finisher patterns.
00:47:200 (75) - k leaving for this.
01:31:600 (48) - ^ nope.

Thanks for mod ! but sorry, no change

NeviltiS wrote:

Hi~ Hi~ o/

[Kantan]
good~ thx >_<//

[Futsuu]
01:31:771 (49) - K? Sounds like the same as 01:30:570 (7,8) because it sounded. no change, 01:30:057 (1,2) - , 01:31:085 (1) - and, 01:31:600 (1,2) - are same pitch.
[Muzukashii]
01:31:771 (49) - K? Same as Futsuu.

[Oni]
00:38:028 (48) - d? changed the pattern.
01:15:657 (5,6,7) - ddd? no change, for emphasize to 01:16:000 (8) - k >> Don sounds gap.
01:31:771 (49) - K? no change, same as others.

[Inner Oni]
00:14:114 (57,58,59) - kdd? changed the pattern.
01:15:485 (1,2,3,4,5) - ddddd? no change , same as Oni.
01:29:800 (59) - remove? no change, sounds strong as vocal for me.
01:31:771 (49) - K? no change same as others~.

Good map! but, 01:05:028 - 01:27:143 Thing I was anxious about this part had deviated from bar line.

I don't think so, it's unnecessary.Not changed as rhythm.
Try to listen to comparing that added "Night Core sounds".

Good luck!

1. 01:15:314 - ここは前の2つのノーツに比べてボーカルの声の高さが変わっているので高低差のメリハリをつけるためにdに変えたほうがいいと思いました。

1. 00:32:971 ~ 00:33:314 - ここの配置をdddkdにしてみるとかどうでしょうか。僕はこの配置に変えても違和感はないと思います。
2. 00:54:914 ~00:55:257 - ^
3. 00:38:457 ~ 00:39:143 - ここの配置をkdkkddkkdにしてみるのはどうでしょうか。これも同じくこの配置に変えても違和感はないかと。
4. 01:03:314 - ここをkに変えることで若干パターンが難しくなっていいでしょう。変えても違和感はないと思います。

SKSalt wrote:

どうも～日本人なので日本語で書きます～
[General]

大丈夫だと思います！

[Kantan]

良いと思います！

[Futsuu]

1. 01:15:314 - ここは前の2つのノーツに比べてボーカルの声の高さが変わっているので高低差のメリハリをつけるためにdに変えたほうがいいと思いました。
   sure, 1つ前のノーツをdonにしてkdkにしようか迷いましたがとりあえず今はピッチ通りの提案kkdにしました！

[Muzukashii]

特に指摘することはありませんでした！

[Oni]

この難易度もいいですね～

[Inner Oni]

個人的にはもう少し難易度を上げてもいいんじゃないかと思いました。そこで難易度を上げるためのいくつかの例を示しておきます。

1. 00:32:971 ~ 00:33:314 - ここの配置をdddkdにしてみるとかどうでしょうか。僕はこの配置に変えても違和感はないと思います。 ok, 毎回同じピッチアップよりボーカルの伸びによさそうでした
2. 00:54:914 ~00:55:257 - ^
3. 00:38:457 ~ 00:39:143 - ここの配置をkdkkddkkdにしてみるのはどうでしょうか。これも同じくこの配置に変えても違和感はないかと。 k,d,k,kkddkkkkd>>>k,d,kdkkddk,kkd
   dkdkパターン的に00:38:800 (138) - をdで閉めるのは抵抗があったので本来の鳴ってるタイミングに連打をずらして提案に似た形にしました。
4. 01:03:314 - ここをkに変えることで若干パターンが難しくなっていいでしょう。変えても違和感はないと思います。Oniのスネアでとってる形を重視したパターンにストリーム自体の色を変えました。
   
   その他、修正前後の連打構成も見直したり 全体的に詰めたり finisher また少し入れたりしました! Star diff 0.15 あがった ・。・　参考になりました^o^/

とてもいい譜面だと思います！頑張ってください

Jerry wrote:

Taiko mod :3

Sorry late ;w;

• [Kantan]

1. Can't find anything

• [Futsuu]

1. 00:00:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2) - This whole part sounds very weird and unnatural X_X Some of the notes does not hit on the sound of the music accurately. Try moving the notes like this :
   
   
   Suggestions

   00:00:742 - Move to 00:00:571 - kept.
   
   
   00:01:427 - Move to 00:01:257 - added 00:01:257 - instead of your suggestion.
   
   
   00:04:170 - Move to 00:04:000 - ^
   
   
   00:05:199 - Move to 00:05:028 - fixed.
   
   
   00:05:542 - Move to 00:05:371 -fixed.

• [Muzukashii]

1. 00:06:057 (23) - don for this note? The music's pitch going down here yeap.
   
   
2. 00:46:857 (72,73,74,75) - Follow Oni and change these 4 notes to kat? fixed.

• [Oni]

1. 00:54:914 (123) - Change this note to kat, and then change 00:55:085 (124,125,126) - to ddd? Makes a good consistency rhythm with 00:52:514 (111,112,113,114) -
   fixed, and also 00:32:971 (22,23,24,25) - k-ddd.
   
   
2. 01:00:743 (13,14,15) - Change these 3 notes to k d d? Keep constant "k k" rhythm with 00:59:371 (4,5) - sounds good!
   
   
3. 01:02:114 (21) - ^ same reason, change to kat. Keep constant "k k" rhythm with 00:59:371 (4,5) - ^

• [Inner Oni]

1. 00:58:257 (3) - move to 00:58:428 -? It improves the flow for this part imo :3 moved, and changed the color before 1 note d>k. it sounds better imo

Sorry short mod ;w;
Really good mapset >w< Good luck in rank!

mingmichael wrote:

add timing sections (the red lines) on 01:05:028 - and 01:27:142 - for every diffs please. the timings have changed there

Kantan needs more improvements for the patterns. actually i don't agree with the vocal patterns that you used on 01:05:885 - ~ 01:09:656 - and also 01:16:856 - ~ 01:20:628 - because these patterns are a bit confusing to follow the vocals for the Kantan players. try to consider this one for your patterns.

removed one note per one musical bar.

and also the Muzukashii diff, it needs some breaks more, i mean the breaks which are more than 1/2 breaks (like 3/4 break or more if possible). well yah, try to simplify the Muzukashii a bit too and avoid the dense patterns

deleted a few notes and decreaing the density in the some section.

i will mod this if this map has been improved more

TKS wrote:

no need to add more red sections because didnt change timing, it just changed the rhythm of vocal sound. please listen the snaredrum sound carefully once again. they are keeping the same.

大した問題じゃないですが最初の赤線前にノーツ置いてるのが何となく気になるので-628に引き直してもいいかも知れません...

sure.

また、現状のマップセットはUnrankableなので修正してください。
Ranking Criteriaにあるように、難易度は連続した順序である必要があります。
X : * EasyからHardにジャンプしているためUnrankable。
O :
O :

FutsuuのStar2.25未満にすればNormalアイコンになるのでそっちで合わせるのが楽だと思います。

Futsuu changed some

最近あまりモチベーション無いので後日改めて見ます！ぐっどらっく！

[I]MMoRTal[S] wrote:

your req on my forum pm

[Muzukashii]
00:01:943 (6,7,8) - k : Guitar not change to don , put 00:04:686 (16) - splash sound into focus.
00:46:943 - d : emphasize drum clearly ! uuumm... keep. plays better as muzukashii ..?

[Oni]
00:01:943 (6,7,8) - ^ like Muzukashii same as Muzukashii.
01:15:572 - add d : follow the drum better and it's simple pattern as you prefer (?) applied, sounds good!

[Inner Oni]
00:01:943 (6,7,8) - ^ like Muzukashii same as Muzukashii.
01:07:086 - k 1/4 streams pattern..
01:15:743 - d no change, I prefer to follow those sounds as a simple.
01:31:429 - add d sounds better? uum leaving for this.

Good Luck !

Genocide wrote:

[Oni]
00:16:172 (85,86,87,88,89) - kd dk trumpet sounds stopped on (88) , so I guess kk kd sounds better.
00:16:686 (89) - k no change cause of my dkdk pattern.
00:16:857 (90,91,92,93,94) - dddd 00:17:029 (92) - i wont ignore that snare sound.
00:27:657 (128,129,130) - ddk? it's better pitch is down, kkd sounds better.
00:44:629 (78) - D? sounds noisy , same as 00:17:200 (94) - , 00:22:686 (112) - , 00:39:143 (56) - . that put no finisher. and sounds not too loud comparing with 00:19:943 (100) - , 00:25:429 (118) - , 00:28:172 (1) - .
00:46:772 (83,84) - kd dk sure, applied.

sorry quick mod xD
my head confusing as hell
good luck~

Red fixed as your suggestion.
Blue no changed.
Green keep or changed some receiving your suggestion.

Senritsu wrote:

Outdated mod incoming

[General]

♦ Add 'eroge', 'game' and, 'hentai' to tags, referring to this map
♦ All diffs' SV must be 1.40x, due to this new applied rule

applied both of suggestions.

[Kantan]

SPOILER

00:06:229 ~ 00:15:829 needs more break, like 00:06:914 (2) - 00:09:657 (6) - and 00:12:400 (2) - can be removed. pattern like 00:10:343 (8,9,10,1) - comes too sudden, which causes a weird tune when played. this can be changed to a simpler version like this. welp, not my thing to say something lke this so.. it's up to you. the rest are also the same.　　yeap, fixed!
00:11:714 (1) - no need for a finish there, since music has same density as notes around it. applied.
00:15:657 (3) - ^, since here isn't as powerful as 00:06:228 (1) – applied.
00:47:371 (1) - consistency, add a finish here, like you add before lol mistaken XD fixed.
01:02:800 (4) - sounds weird here, because you're following the vocal like notes before them. actual vocal starts 01:02:286, but since this is kantan, i get your intention to make it 1/4. however, this 01:02:800 (4) - doesn't follow anything, yet 01:03:143 (4) - still acceptable because the vocal fading out there.sure.
01:21:657 (1,2,3,4) - i get your meaning here too, but actually for myself, i don't like a 1/2 out of nowhere comes at kantan. it makes beginner feel nervous, as to "when is the right time should i hit this so i will get a perfect score? if i hit it now, won't it be too fast? but it looks like i should hit it now" or something like that. the bar line (or what is that) will help the player to hit them in the correct time, so i suggest putting some of them at the white line. apply to others too, but i'm ok with some of them. uuum, no change. I think these are no problem. More addition is unnecessary imo.

[Futsuu]

SPOILER

00:00:743 (1) - tbh this plays weird. if i'm you, i will make the start same as kantan, and that's 00:06:229, to closure the gap between the starts at easy and normal. sure, removed them.
00:17:029 (2) - probably remove this? has the different kind of music with 00:17:200 (1) - . if you change it to k too will make player surprised with sudden different note there. removed~.
00:29:200 (4,4) - and 00:51:143 (4,4) - i get the idea here, but i prefer them being removed to them following the music. sounds awkwad tbh, knowing that you most follow the vocal.good idea~
00:38:457 (2) - remove for giving 1/1 breaks for player? uuuumm,, applied, 01:00:400 (2) - also.
00:41:372 (2) - move to 00:41:200, for rhythm consistency with 00:46:686 (12,13,14) - . i know that it will sounds weird, but it's (i think) much more better than the current one, because the different rhythm can make beginner confused with it nope, I wont put that sounds nothing.
01:00:057 (1,2) - these two can be removed too, to give breaks for player. yet, no need for removing 01:03:143 (1) - , since i can see clearly that you're following the loud music being played there. I decided to delete only 01:00:400 (2)-.
01:07:257 (6) - this doesn't follow anything imo i suggest moving it to 01:07:429 for following where the vocal starts, but it's up to you. same goes to 01:10:000 (4) - and others WIP
01:20:457 (6,7) - for consistency, change to kk (consistency with 01:08:972 (4,1,2,3) - WIP
.. i don't really sure about the futsuu, since i think it's too hard because there are some 2plets on 1/2... my personal opinion, i don't know how about other modders would say about this.

[Muzukashii]

SPOILER

00:01:429 (4,10,14) - i prefer them as d, for the plain start, warming up. since the low music that you follow can't be heard clearly when it's being played. and then, they started to weight up with k at 00:04:686 (16) - since there's no change on the prev music that changes dramastically. personal opinion, so it's up to you. no change~
00:07:772 (7) - change k for rhythm consistency. another reason is because it has different pitch from 00:07:429 (6) – nope, followed bass.
00:13:257 (26) - ^ same as above.
00:27:143 (67,68) - swap for k rhythm consistency? it suits the pitch change too. (the reversed way lol changed 00:26:800 (66) - k instead of your suggestion.
00:33:657 (21) - 00:55:600 (102) - no need for finish here, since nothing need to be emphasized fixed~
01:06:486 (5,6) - 01:09:229 (2,3) - 01:17:457 (2,3) - 01:20:200 (2,3) - they can be removed to give break, since the music is blank during that gap of time

changed almost your suggestion~

01:13:600 and 01:24:572 try adding d here for following the music, and mirroring 01:14:457 (7,8) –
no changed, make a little break ,and variation. ..not sounds good?
01:25:086 (22,23,24,25) - make this k kd for consistency with the part before? (01:14:457 (7,8) - ) i think it suits the vocal well. 01:25:257 (24,25) - make the same color sounds the best for me, not change.
01:26:800 (27) - change to d? lower pitch than 01:26:457 (26) - , and same with 01:27:143 (28) - nope, not sounds loud on bass.
01:29:286 try making it like this. it is mirroring the pattern before (kkdk)
not changed, I don’t prefer to put 01:29:886 (40) - for main part.

[Oni]

SPOILER

00:05:629 (21) - change to kfow following the drum on the music
00:07:600 try making this part like this. the current one isn't clear whether you follow the drum or the music mostly. but what i tried to do is following the music, yet minorly following the drum. i disagree with the current pattern, but i'm not forcing you to change it as same as mine. if you have another idea, you may try it as well. same goes to the other same pattern as this
I guess almost fixed as your suggestion.
00:10:343 and at here, you can try [url=http://puu.sh/d67We.jpg]this[url] pattern.
changed a little. 00:10:857 (52,53,54) - I don’t make a break cuz won’t ignore these sounds.
00:09:314 (42,43,44,45,46,47,48,49,50,51) - are following the drum, and 00:10:686 (52,53,54,55) - follows the music. i think it flows better like this
00:46:772 (83) - change to k for following the drum? welp i know it's mirroring the pattern after but.. since it follows the drum more, i suggest changing it. leaving for this now.
00:52:514 (111,112,113) - change to d kk, for following the d rhythm, and 00:52:686 (112,113) - vocal's pitch nope, but others changed some. I guess make a decreasing werid.
00:58:000 (1) - 00:58:686 (5) - same as above ^.
00:59:886 (6,7) - change to dd, because the guitar can be heard, they're the same. making their vibe sound same. and change 01:00:572 (11,12,13) - to kkd for d rhythm
changed some.
01:01:429 (16) - can be changed to d too as same reason as aboves. and, vocal between it and 01:01:600 (17) - are same, no need for changing the hitsound, right? fixed~

01:06:572 this stream can't be accepted by my logic, you aren't following anything that can be accompanied by the stream. don't be too harsh, give breaks too. try making it looks like this or another idea you have on mind. .3.
forgot to add d at 01:07:172 haha

changed almost your suggestion~

01:20:886 add d for following the drum
same problems on some places too. wrong placement of streams, and triplets on kiai time especially. didn't check any further, but kiai needs to be improved.

changed a lot~

[Inner Oni]

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00:02:800 (10) - change to k :> nope, pitch still not uped.
00:03:143 (1,2) - swap, for following what you follow on oni nope, I don’t make the mapping same as Oni.
00:16:857 (2,3) - obviously remove them. not a sound can be heard here, giving player a break is a nice thing to do. fixed~
00:27:829 (59,61) - swap? 59 needs to be changed for rhythm consistency, yet 61 needs to be changed since the pitch is even lower than 00:27:914 (60) - nope, 1/2 pattern “kdkd” sounds better for me on this diff.
00:36:229 (119) - i love how the whistle continues to be placed on the same lines, making it consistency. however, this is misplaced i think. swap 00:36:229 (119,120) - and you will get a mirrored 00:35:714 (115,116,117) - :3 it’s my strategy , not misplaced. However I changed 00:36:057 (118) - k , receiving your suggestion.
00:53:714 (232) - change to k, reason same as aboves. follows the vocal too, imo.
nope, I think sounds good that make the variation on this point sounds low comparing with surrounding bass.
01:00:229 (8,9,10,11,12) - try making this kdkdk for following the bass, as well as the rhythm consistency c:
fixed~
01:02:372 (11,12) - remove them, since vocal is holding up an this triplet is actually unecessecary.
necessary, make a enhance to next streams.
01:06:400 (4,5,6,7,8) - 01:17:372 (1,2,3,4,5) - same as oni, but changes may be vary, depends on what do you prefer.
neccesarry, same as above, next high pitch following 5-triplet.
01:07:086 (10,11,12,13,14) - 01:18:057 (1,2,3,4,5) - kkddd follows the guitar, imo
no change ,make the linked to start 01:06:400 (4) - colors.
01:12:914 (6,7) - swap? 01:12:914 (6) - has lighter vocal than 01:13:086 (7,8) - . d feels more lighter here, so suggest swapping them
fixed~
01:29:114 (51) - i think this can be removed also, since the music 01:29:029 (50) - stands alone, so if you connect it with 01:29:114 (51) - , it feels like the music is connected, but it isn't.
no change,sounds better to put. If removed , I’m not sure that 01:29:286 (53) - ‘s snare sounds weird.
short mod on Inner Oni, since i can't really mod hard diffs.

in general, this map needs more improvement, especially oni. kantan needs to be fixed a little, and it will be done. there are also some finisher problems but i'm too tired to point them but if you want to know what's on my mind, PM me and i will gladly help you again.

good luck, and sorry for the very late mod