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General
- Here is an HD video if you would like to use it. Doesn't look to nice on dropbox player but dl and see for yourself if you like
- Find some more tags to add? Like maybe character names
Oyatsu's Easy
Very clean easy! Reflects the song nicely
- This difficulty starts later than the others! Try and map the vocals at the beginning
- 00:11:195 (1) - Maybe remove this spinner? Two spinners in a row is tiring for newer players, the first one is kind of short anyway so it will be tough for them to react. You could replace it with a slider or just get rid of it entirely
- 00:20:287 (3,1,2) - Perhaps adjust the pattern so that (3) perfectly blankets (2). You can adjust this by moving (2) back in time and using the approach circle to fix
- 00:31:648 (3,4) - (Nazi) (3)'s slider body can blanket (4) better
- 00:52:239 (4) - Extend this to 1/1, the vocal here can compliment the hold better
- 00:52:949 (1) - This slider shape seems a bit arbitrary, maybe try to make it look a bit nicer?
- 01:20:642 (3,1) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved, use the approach circle to check this
Normal
Naisu normal~
- 00:11:195 (1,1) - As I stated before in Easy, having two spinners next to eachother in lower difficulties is pretty exhausting on newer players, especially a really long one like the second! Maybe remove the first one and try something like what alacat did in the hard.
- 00:28:097 (2,3) - Such a drastic movement change. The two straight sliders flow downwards but then there is a slider afterwards that goes immediately to the left! Try angling (2) towards (3), or change the pattern to something similar like this so its easier to play
- 00:30:227 (1) - Weird slider shape that is a bit awkward to play. The circles go up before it, and then down to the slider. Then the slider goes back up again!
- 00:39:458 (2) - Object is a bit high up, it is touching my life bar. Moving the pattern down a bit wouldn't hurt
- 00:44:784 (2,3) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved
- 00:52:772 (1) - Move the anchor up a bit so it better blankets 00:52:239 (4) - 's slider end. You can check for this by ctrl+g (4) and then use its approach circle to fix
- 00:54:369 (2,3) - (Nazi) Blanket can be improved
- 00:55:790 (1) - I feel like the anchor point here is too strong of an angle when going up. Maybe make it less harsh?
- 01:00:050 (2) - Nothing here in the music really demands for this repeat. Make it a 1/1 slider so the hold feels better with the music (or come up with something better lol)
- 01:16:026 (2,3) - (3)'s slider body can better blanket (2)'s slider end
- 01:20:464 (4,1) - Normally I would be against overlaps like this in a Normal or lower, but it compliments the music very well and its nice to play! Good job!
alacat's Hard
Wow, fantastic hard! Loved how this played, only had one issue though
- 00:28:985 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - I found this a bit hard to read. There weren't any other patterns this hard! Maybe in the kiai this would fit, but at the beginning of the map...eh. Change it if you want, just pointing out my thoughts
Unsfa's Insane
Incredible insane! Why haven't I seen more of your maps?
- Definitely wasn't a fan of those clangy hitsounds in the beginning. I feel as if the softer sounding ones will fit better, you can use whistles like captin1 used in his insane
- 00:25:701 (4,5,6) - I found this triplet after the slider pretty hard to play, mostly because the music doesn't really demand for it. It will sound and play better if you deleted all the circles except for 00:25:790 (4) - and changed up the pattern a bit to accomodate, maybe something like this?
00:25:790 (4) - is stacked on top of 00:27:032 (5) - if you would like to use this pattern. - 00:27:387 (1) - Perhaps loosen the anchor here, the curve sort of digs in to 00:27:032 (5) - and I think it would be better if it was further out
- 00:28:275 (3) - Change this in to two circles, having a strong beat land on a passive object, objects that are not actively being clicked on (slider ends, reverses. etc), is not very satisfying and almost awkward to play! I think it would better complement the song if you changed it to two circles.
- 00:28:807 (1,4) - (Nazi) This blanket can be improved. Move (4) back in time and use (1)'s approach circles to check for this
- 00:52:239 (4) - I really like how you faded and slowed down in to the quieter part. Players appreciate things like this! The mapping accents the softer section of the song very fluidly, and I am impressed!
- 00:57:032 (2) - Having a strong sound on a passive object (the slider end) is not very gratifying and awkward to play. Maybe replace the slider with two circles? If you do that you can set up some neat structure with 00:57:920 (1,2) -
- 01:12:298 (4) - Maybe move the anchor up a bit so that 1: it blankets 01:11:943 (3) - better and 2: it slings in to 01:12:831 (1) - more effciently
- 01:14:961 (1,2,3,1) - Wow, nice slowdown to speed up! Easy to play and read, not many people can pull that off effectively. Maybe the 1/4 distance is a bit big, but other than that, it is a satisfying pattern
- 01:18:867 (3,5) - Blanket can be improved, use the approach circle of (3) to help check this
- 01:26:677 (1) - Lower the volume of the slider tick, it takes away from the vocal fade out
captin's Insane
Fun insane!
- 00:25:612 (4,5,6,7,8) - Why a stream? The music doesn't really demand for it IMO, which makes it hard and awkward to play
- 00:53:304 - Sometimes, breaks can be powerful and can be great accents to the music. This is one of those times!
- 01:03:245 (1,1,2) - Oh man was I not prepared for that 1/4. The very slow slowdown coupled with big 1/4 spacing and a circle that is quite a distance away caused for a very awkward play. I would maybe try to end slow slider 1/4 back so that players can be prepared for the speed up
- 01:24:369 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The normal sample set doesn't really fit the stream imo. The normal-hitnormals should be used to put emphasis on certain parts of the music. Here I feel it a bit spammy
- 01:24:192 (1) - This 1/2 pause between streams is kind of awkward, maybe continue it?
Insane
You sure do love doubles on slider starts lol. Normally I wouldn't like those, but here they provide nice pressure
- 00:25:612 (6,7,8,9) - Why stream? The music doesn't really call for one
- 00:41:588 (8,1) - I also always found anti-jumps like this hard to read and play. Seemingly I always miss on these for some reason or another, maybe space it out?
- 01:01:470 (1) - Cool slider shape!
- 01:05:553 (1) - Having such a strong beat land on a passive object (the slider end) is not recommended. I found it very noticeable during play and actually slider broke here. Try this rhythm instead (you get to use another double on top of a slider!!)
- 01:07:506 (3,5) - (Nazi) I think you can have (5)'s slider end match better with (3)'s body
- 01:22:772 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - <3. I like what you did here, almost like you were making a heart around Enju in the video!
- 01:26:677 (1) - LONG LIVE THE xCHIPPY HEART SLIDER
Very nice mapset, good luck! Hope to see this ranked soon, its a great anime with great music
Thanks Lust!
Consider replacing them with just one spinner? 
No I feel the voice is quite fast. And there are so many 1/2 rhythm by voice. Also I could use this instead of keeping 1x speed in kiai time. It is enough for now?
