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ANZA - Tobira wo Akete

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Nekomiya Nono
44 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Nekomiya Nono
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009年11月27日 at 17:20:09

Artist: ANZA
Title: Tobira wo Akete
Source: CardCaptor Sakura
BPM: 120.95
Filesize: 6761kb
Play Time: 04:12
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.74 stars, 499 notes)
  2. Normal (3.3 stars, 303 notes)
Download: ANZA - Tobira wo Akete
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by Nekomiya Nono , edited 8 times in total.
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
:P good~
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
thank you for making so good beatmaps, its very good :D
but i think the offset is too low. i play better when i add +10 ms

star!
Furawa
554 posts
Joined April 2009
Furawa
>w< hanyuu ,hauu hauuu
v2b
504 posts
Joined October 2008
v2b
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
[Hard]

01:14:305-01:16:538 [4x (1)] - I would remove the combos for better orientation. ;)
01:38:117-01:40:349 [4x (1)] - Same as above.
02:53:520-02:55:752 [4x (1)] - ^
03:39:407 (1) - Remove combo
03:40:399 (1) - ^

[Normal]

You might want to lower the circle size by 1.

01:14:305-01:16:538 [4x (1)] - Same as on [Hard]
01:38:117-01:40:349 [4x (1)] - ^
02:53:520-02:55:752 [4x (1)] - ^
03:39:407 (1) - Remove combo
03:40:399 (1) - ^

Nice maps, I like her voice. :) 4 mins are a bit too long imo but w/e.
Sure
4,220 posts
Joined February 2009
Sure
[Normal]
03:51:031 (1) - start at 03:51:064


[Hard]
01:24:723 - add note here
03:46:035 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I suggest increase distance gradually at 1~6, and decrease distance at 7~8
04:10:065 (1) - How about change like this? 4 circles are jump. If you don't want it, keep current status.



Old anime song. I love it. :D
Also shoot a star~*
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
[Normal]
00:25:093 (1) - add finish on the start of the slider?
00:31:089 (1) - ^
00:33:087 (1) - ^
01:55:023 (1) - finish?
01:57:021 (1) - ^
02:05:015 (1) - add finish on the start of the slider?
03:06:066 (1) - ^
03:22:054 (1) - ^

[Hard]
fine

no problems found
dont give kds for this post.
star.
yaya
osu! Alumni
1,164 posts
Joined November 2008
yaya
for gdeath:
现在有BUG,你复制粘贴的时候注意一下，比如你复制01:11:111的note,他会显示01:11:011 。 你要手动改一下。不知道老板什么时候修-_-

for nono

[normal]
最后的spinner延后一点，从04:12:148开始。前面每个白线下一个note,可以做小点的Jump

[hard]
从31秒891开始这。看图。 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/455 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/456 这样好听些。
02:59:473 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - 可不可以换一种排法。这种排法不好看，像便便lol
结尾跟normal一样修一下。

nice map.
alvisto
881 posts
Joined April 2009
alvisto
Fulfilling PM mod request.

OMG, so pretty and so good.

NORMAL
03:28:049 (1,2,3) - I suggest don't stack this for NORMAL, because people would assume the 3 notes are on 1/2 tick, and not 1/2, 1/4, 1/2 (white blue white)

HARD
03:00:961 - 你可以在这边加个note吗？semi stream start at blue tick is hard to catch xD

Very beautiful map. Star.
abalee
osu! Alumni
1,994 posts
Joined June 2008
abalee
hard:
虽然我很想挑spacing,不过都是因为求对称而弄的...这个我觉得不太好,可以稍微改动一下
01:04:136 (1) -右移2 grid
01:04:632 (2) -左移2 grid
01:05:128 (3) -下移2 grid
这样看起来spacing会比较好。(orz很像nazi post)

00:33:62 (7,1) - 这个弄好spacing的话我建议从00:29:41 (2) - 到00:33:62 (7) - 往下移动一点，这样和00:33:87 (1) - 的spacing就显得好点。
还是附送一个改了之后的.osu会好点...

normal：
没东西说。

starz

Download: ANZA - Tobira wo Akete (Nekomiya Nono) [Hard].osu
Armin
osu! Alumni
2,454 posts
Joined May 2009
Armin
[Normal]

00:29:907 Remove the whistle at the start; add a whistle at the end
00:53:222 Whistle
00:56:199 Whistle
01:04:136 Whistle
01:05:624 Whistle on the first and on the third repeat; remove the whistle at the end
01:27:947 Whistle
01:45:806 Whistle
02:32:437 Whistle
02:35:413 Whistle
02:43:350 Whistle
02:45:831 Remove the whistle at the end; add a whistle on the repeat
02:59:721 Whistle on the first and on the third repeat
03:03:193 Whistle
03:12:619 Whistle at the end
03:13:611 Whistle at the end
03:14:603 Whistle at the end
03:19:068 Whistle?
03:36:926 Whistle at the start
03:52:801 Whistle

It's perfect, just for some hitsounds. Anyway the size is TOO long for a Normal.

[Hard]

00:06:592 Whistle
00:11:552 Whistle
00:11:800 Remove the whistle
00:12:048 Add a whistle at the start
00:16:017 Whistle
00:40:324 Stack with the previous (3)? And then make a vertical reflection of (2),(3),(4)
00:56:199 Add a whistle on the repeat; then remove the whistle at the end
01:20:010 As above
00:57:687 Whistle at the start
01:21:498 As above
01:01:656 Whistle at the end
01:42:334 Remove the whistle at the end; add a whistle at the start
01:42:830 Remove the whistle at the end
01:43:326 Whistle
01:45:806 Whistle
02:06:145 Whistle at the end
03:00:217 Whistle
03:03:193 Whistle
03:16:091 Whistle
03:16:339 Remove the whistle
03:16:587 Whistle at the start
03:36:926 Whistle at the start

Starred. :3
gdeath
1,598 posts
Joined May 2009
gdeath
>osu_CN_yaya

我失察了。多谢提醒<(_ _)>

>Nekomiya Nono

图谱很好，3分多钟的时间，几乎没什么重复的pattern.
很有节奏感。就是不该给我KDS。我那只是个nazi mod =P
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
this is sooo good <3333 nice jobb. i hope it gets ranked soon!!!

normal
01:27:094 (1) - whistle?
02:11:010 (1,1) - maybe whistle at beginning too
03:10:063 (5) - i think this part maybe better to make note at 03:10:063 and then 03:11:013 have slider repeat twice
04:03:021 (2,5) - delete notes. i think too hard for normal
04:05:020 (2,5) - ^

hard
perfect!
Alace
osu! Alumni
3,088 posts
Joined August 2008
Alace
you asked me modding
but i can`t
good enough
star it
Mystearica
Mystearica
Okay so I didn't find much to pick on, so I made a difficulty for you:

Download: Myst difficulty.rar

I used silenced sliders and silent spinnerbonus so make sure you unpack those in your song folder and do a full submission again.

Hope you like my difficulty!
Nekomiya Nono
44 posts
Joined August 2009
Topic Starter
Nekomiya Nono
thank you
Last edited by Nekomiya Nono , edited 3 times in total.
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Offset = 6580 (resnap all notes)

[Normal]

It's ok

[Card Captor Tear]

00:12:004 (5) - New combo
00:18:099 (3) - ^
00:24:094 (4) - ^
00:25:093 (6) - ^
01:51:026 (5) - ^
01:58:020 (3) - ^
02:04:016 (4) - ^
02:05:015 (6) - ^

[Hard]

It's ok

Starred~
Mystearica
Mystearica

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

Offset = 6580 (resnap all notes)

[Normal]

It's ok

[Card Captor Tear]

00:12:004 (5) - New combo
00:18:099 (3) - ^
00:24:094 (4) - ^
00:25:093 (6) - ^
01:51:026 (5) - ^
01:58:020 (3) - ^
02:04:016 (4) - ^
02:05:015 (6) - ^

[Hard]

It's ok

Starred~
No.
kioukiou
774 posts
Joined June 2008
kioukiou
Fine enough for me.

Could not find any problem.

star. o_o
James2250
osu! Alumni
4,059 posts
Joined July 2008
James2250
Normal:
nothing wrong but 4 min+ being ranked..? I would cut it down to where other diff ends but I guess wait until bats say something

Card Captor Tear
00:12:004 (5) - New combo
00:24:094 (4) - ^
00:25:093 (6) - ^
01:51:026 (5) - ^
02:04:016 (4) - ^
02:05:015 (6) - ^
(agrees with those from above.....but I guess if you really dont want to)

Hard:
03:14:060 (1) - move up to match the other 2?
same length comment as normal

*star*
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Cute Sakura~
=>w<=~

[Normal]
4mins is too long...End at 02:21:03?

[Card Captor Tear]
00:07:58(5)-Move 2 lv.3 grid up?
00:28:42(1)-Move to blue tick,so as 02:07:63(1)?
00:32:39(3)-Move to blue tick,so as 02:11:60(3)?
00:34:37(1)-Move to blue tick,so as 02:13:59(1)?
00:34:87(1)-Move to red tick,so as 02:14:08(1)?
00:41:81(5)-End here 00:43:80?
00:59:67(1,2)-Spacing?
01:18:27(6)-Move 1 lv.3 grid down?
01:21:99(4)-Move to blue tick?

[Hard]
00:21:97(9)-Finish?
00:36:85(5)-^
00:53:22-Try to add some clap here like 00:54:21(3),00:55:21(4),00:56:20(1),00:57:19(1) (即每隔一个白线一个Clap)and so on?
02:18:05-试下音量渐强?
03:35:44-^
04:09:17(3)-New combo for change spacing?

Star~
Mystearica
Mystearica
Can you remove my difficulty? You're changing it without even asking me, and what you're changing is utterly useless/or you're changing something I've intentionally wanted to arrange that way, it's not my map anymore. Please remove my difficulty from your map.

making shit maps is fun v2b isn't it? stop picking good songs you fucking ruin them like crazy, have a nice day
Last edited by Mystearica , edited 3 times in total.
mtmcl
mtmcl
Looooong map. Solid. Bubble.
Mafiamaster
osu! Alumni
3,460 posts
Joined July 2008
Mafiamaster
Ranked
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Great~! :D
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