1. Easy (1,57 stars, 84 notes)
2. Hard (4,84 stars, 374 notes)
3. Normal (3,09 stars, 110 notes)

EEeee wrote:

Easy
set preview point Done... I always forget this preview point thing xD
00:28:096 (4) - new combo Done :3
00:30:030 (2) - ^ here too, see what kind of pattern i'm aiming for?(1,2,3,1,1,1,1,2,3) Yeah, it looks better, thanks!
00:59:013 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - move all of these 1/2 forward, on the white tick, sounds way better >o< http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/822 like this Done, you're right, it sounds better x3

Normal
Set Preview point Done xD
01:14:096 (1,1,1,1) - move these 1/2 back, on white tick, sounds way better, also move those cool inherit stuff back as well Done, and fixed inherited timing sections

Hard
:O D:?!
set preview point Done... again xD
00:40:096 (2) - put that lol storyboard warning this one as well I know xD I tried to code a loop yesterday but yeeah I'm so noob and it failed, so I'm just doing it again xD
WOW MAP IS EPIC!!! Ahhh thank you >o<!

osuplayer111 wrote:

[Overall]

Timing: BPM: 180,00 - Offset: 298 (Remember to resnap all notes.) Fixed :3

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

00:16:063 (1,2,3) - This is a bit hard to read for new players. [color=#BF0000]I changed it, I think now it's readable :3
00:19:030 (1,2,3) - ^[/color] ^

[Normal]

00:18:030 (1) - Remove new combo. Fixed :3
01:14:096 (1,1,1,1) - Hitsounds here are too loud. Lower the volume. You mean the hitsounds on the inherited sections, right? D:, btw fixed now :3

[Hard]

Normal hitsounds are too loud here too. Lower the volume. Okaaay~ Fixed! :3

00:08:096 (2) - Slider repeat is completely hidden because of this note -> 00:08:030 (1). [color=#BF0000]Moved (2) to slider start point, so fixed :3
00:38:030 (2) - You need a better warning for the slider repeat. ;_;... I'll wait to another opinion to change it... sorry oxo.
00:40:096 (2) - Slider repeat is completely hidden because of this note -> 00:40:063 (1). I'm doing the same warning as the other slider oxo...
02:13:030 (3,1) - Spacing.[/color] Uhhh... spacing? :S Distance snap puts that circle so far to continue the next combo D:!

Shulin wrote:

Omg I love this ~ Random Mod ~

General:

Source: Kingdom Hearts II OST Fixed ^^

You have two .osb files, there should only be one. Yeah, I forgot to made the second SB warning only for Hard, now it's fixed xD

Easy:

00:56:096 (2) - Whistle? Sure
00:58:029 (4) - ^ I prefer to leave it without hitsound, too much whistles xD
01:05:013 (1,1,1,1) - All start on red ticks, map on white ticks to make it Easy? (Red ticks are hard to follow for Easy players imo). I don't like how does it sound on white ticks... :S

Normal:

00:16:029 (1) - Grid snap this please. .___.? Sorry but I don't get what you mean...

Hard:

00:40:096 (2) - SB warning for the repeat like at 00:38:029 (2) - though personally I don't like the repeat being covered and I thought the SB warning was a speed up section... ;<...
02:14:096 (5) - New combo? Hmm... I like it as it is now oxo
02:17:063 (5) - ^ ^

File Checking :

Size : 7,5 mb. Okay.
Tags and Source : Okay.
Nice skin, too. Nice background. Yeah, pretty good till now.

General :

Easy :

01:05:131 (1); Extend by 1/2 beat.
01:06:464 (1); ^
01:07:799 (1); ^
01:09:131 (1); ^. Change the hitsound at the final to finish instead of clap.

Nice map.

Normal :

00:10:976 (1); Shorten this by 1/2 beat.
00:13:631 (1); Push this back by 1/2 beat.
00:14:964 (1); ^

Hard :

00:12:131 (1); Feels weird. Push this forward by 1/4 beat, trust me. You will have a bit of problem with the spacing in this part, since the notes are constant and near, but I think you will do okay since your mapping skills rules. <3'
00:13:464 (1); ^
00:14:797 (1); ^
00:16:131 (1); ^
02:24:287 ~ 02:29:501; Push this whole session forward by 1/2 beat, trust me.

Dusty wrote:

change the source back to just Kingdom Hearts II. Ehhh... okay... xDDD

It's a little hard to tell where the center is on your spinner background. Hmmm... I don't think it's necessary to mark the center on the background o_o'...

[Normal]
00:39:096 (4) - +finish? It doesn't fit the music... imo oxo.
00:42:063 (4) - ^? Same.

[Hard]
00:42:096 (1) - +finish? Maybe. Or maybe not... I don't like how it sounds :S
00:53:063 (1) - +whistle? Okay :3
01:22:096 (1) - ^? Sure. ^^

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

I'm late. Sorries.

[Easy]
00:44:063 - Eh, this break felt a bit awkward, but it's alright. What do you mean with awkward Btw I re-added it oxo...

[Normal]
00:17:063 (5,6) - This jump to 1/2 was a bit hard to expect, since the first section was solely 1/1. (didn't fit in too well either, since you don't really have any other 1/2 hitcircles until the very end) Okay, I made the slider a bit longer and deleted the circle ^^
00:53:096 (1) - Ugly slider. D:? why ugly! >.<

[Hard]
00:10:096 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - Could follow the music a lot better, and there're way too many new combos.I don't know how to make it follow the music better, but I deleted a few New combos :3
00:26:096 (1,1,1,1,2,1,1,1,1,2) - Less new combos please. (maybe just keep one on 00:29:063 (1) and remove the rest).Done :3
00:38:029 (2,2) - Ehh. They're not too fun, but that's alright. I recommend starting the storyboard a bit sooner, or making it a bit clearer though; it's a bit ambiguous what's going on, and you don't really have time to think about it. Ahhh I always have problems with the SB's... xD
01:01:063 (1,2) - I felt this jump was harder than the rest of the map. Well... there isn't an Insane so I think it's not a problem oxo...
01:40:013 (7) - Although it looks nicer, it might be better to remove this note to properly follow the music, or to move it to 01:40:029. It follows the piano melody, so it follow the music ._.'
01:41:046 (6) - Same as before, it doesn't really feel nice with the music, since the rest of this map flows with it quite well.Same as before too xP
02:24:029 - Adding a note here might ease the transition into offbeats. I like how it sounds without that note ^^U

Overall, combos could be shorter, with less 1-note combos. Up to your own style though, most of the above are just suggestions. Like ztrot said, the map is pretty much bubble-ready already, I'm just pointing out what I felt as I played (which might vary person-to-person anyways). Thanks~ :3

jockeytiyan wrote:

Easy:
00:21:063 (1) - Change to a spinner? Sounds good. Thanks!
01:36:029 (1) - Unsilence I like the silence to finish the map oxo...

Normal:
00:18:063 (6) - Add clap I like the whistle. I think it fits more the song there oxo.
00:28:013 (3) - Map the part after it just like what you did in 00:31:046 (1) It would be a so high jump for a Normal D:!
00:53:096 (1) - Add a spinner after it? Yeah, good idea, but I think there would be too many spinners, the next one lasts 5 seconds oxo...
01:36:029 (1) - Unsilence. Same as before.

Hard:
00:18:013 (2,3,4,5,1) - Relocate the beats. Done.
00:20:063 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ Done too :3
00:53:096 (1) - Make this spinner longer. Okay o:
02:48:029 (1) - Delete the finish hitsound. Why? D: It fits perfectly! :<

[Colours]
Combo1 : 244,242,225
Combo2 : 223,0,0
Combo3 : 236,118,0

SliderBorder : 128,128,128

[Colours]
Combo1 : 244,242,225
Combo2 : 223,0,0
Combo3 : 236,118,0
SliderBorder : 128,128,128

MarioBros777 wrote:

Needs Kiai Time. You've got a great skin. Kiai time is perfect to show off all your star2. Yeeeah but... I hate kiai time so sorry, but I won't -w-

I also commend you for having the same mapping style as Starrodkirby. So with that out of way. Let's get down to business. Wow thank you n_n'

[Easy]
00:53:96 (1) - Align with 2 Done owo
00:58:29 (4) - Add a whistle or finish hitsound here. It's really up to you. I like it without hitsound oxo
01:14:96 - If the other difficulties have the Normal Whistle, why doesn't this diff have them? It's up to you really. I made it... but I don't like how it sounds with those circles :/
01:20:29 - Since you are mirroring one part then doing it again. I'd suggest you add a note here (new combo as well) It would make a mini jump... and I don't like it for an Easy oxo.
01:36:29 (1) - I would extend the spinner and end it at 01:41:63. It sounds more reasonable. Okay :3

[Normal]
00:19:29 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Despite this good looking pattern, there is a bit of uneven symmetry (Very Nazi, I'm sorry. I mean, you don't even have to listen to this! ) I'd use Ctrl+H and keep on using it so it becomes even. If you still don't get it, don't hesitate to ask. xDD Fixed :3
01:36:29 (1) - Same as the Easy post. Extend it to 01:41:63.

[Hard]
01:36:79 (3,3) - Ahh, Beuchi sliders. I love them. *////* Thank you!
02:24:46 (1,2) - They sound out of place. Maybe turn the 1/6 snap on and drag both of them 2 ticks back? They don't sound out of place, they follow the piano melody ._.' Like in 02:25:079 (1,2)
02:40:29 (2,4) - I love the sound of these sliders. <3 me too

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
Yay skin <3
Tags: 'Kingdom Hearts' is redundant since it's in the Source field.'Yoko Shimomura' is also redundant since it's in the Artist field. You can remove those from all diffs and resubmit. xp Okay, done xD

[Easy]
01:36:297 (1) - Expected this to end with a finish or something, but silent is okay too. I prefer the silence here oxo

[Normal]
blah blah spinner finish x3 xD same~ x3

[Hard]
00:37:964 (1,2) - I thought that this was unrankable at first, but after playing around with it for a moment, I see that it doesn't break combo, so it's fine. *w* yay!
01:04:298 (1) - Sight-reading error on my part. I felt like this would come up 1/2 after the previous slider and missed it. Hmm.. actually, a beat 1/2 after does sound good, too. Care to add one at 01:04:131? XP Yeah... I realized everybody misses there while playing on multi xD but... I like it~
01:20:131 - And one here. Same~
01:40:464 - And here XD Same~ x3
02:16:131 - Here? Okay owo
02:18:797 - ^ Okay too
02:24:297 - ^ I don't like circles being so close of a spinner end oxo
02:48:298 (1) - There's the finish I was looking for! XD hehehe

Larto wrote:

BPM: 179.98
Offset: 300?