eINess wrote:

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chat log

21:06 eINess: IRC
21:06 eINess: 괜찮죠?
21:06 [ Zzz ]: 끄..
21:06 [ Zzz ]: 지금들어갈려했는데..
21:06 [ Zzz ]: 스레드안ㄷ..?
21:06 [ Zzz ]: 꼭 irc면
21:06 [ Zzz ]: 지금해도되구용!
21:07 eINess: 저 포스트이거
21:07 eINess: 인터넷상태 이상해서 가끔 호구로되서 재대로 못해드리는데 쓰레드는
21:07 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅎ
21:07 [ Zzz ]: 그럼
21:07 [ Zzz ]: irc ㄱㄱ!
21:07 *[ Zzz ] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637505 Suzuki Konomi - This Game]
21:07 [ Zzz ]: 인센!
21:07 eINess: 쿨쿨님꺼만 하면 되죠?
21:08 *[ Zzz ] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637505 Suzuki Konomi - This Game [Insane]]
21:08 [ Zzz ]: 이거하나만
21:08 [ Zzz ]: 하시면되ㅏ요!
21:08 [ Zzz ]: 만약 인센없으면 리다운
21:10 eINess: 00:08:480 (1) - 헤드 피니쉬
21:11 eINess: 00:10:112 (1) - 이쪾헤드도
21:11 [ Zzz ]: 00:10:725 (2) -
21:11 [ Zzz ]: 이것도
21:11 [ Zzz ]: 00:11:745 (1,2,3) -
21:11 eINess: 그거는 앞에 리듬생각하면 그냥 뺴시는게 좋을듯
21:11 [ Zzz ]: 머리 피니시
21:12 [ Zzz ]: 'ㅅ' ?
21:12 eINess: 2번 아까 링크는
21:12 eINess: 패턴상 있으면 애매하고
21:12 eINess: 뒤에 123 링크주신거 거기 헤드 다 주세요 피니쉬
21:13 eINess: 00:12:970 (5) - 이쪽은 피니쉬 줘도 될거같은데 내키는대로 하세요 
21:13 eINess: 있어도 좋고 없어도 좋고
21:13 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:13 [ Zzz ]: 넣는걸로!
21:13 eINess: 00:12:051 (2) - 앞이랑 DS 1.3으로 맞춰주시고
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 오 ㄳ
21:14 eINess: 00:12:868 (4,5) - 이거 두개도 DS 맞춰주세요
21:14 eINess: 00:13:990 (1) - 뉴콤 넣는게 전 개인적으로 좋다고 봐요
21:14 [ Zzz ]: 굳
21:15 [ Zzz ]: 00:12:868 (4,5) - 이건 0.36 0.40이라
21:15 [ Zzz ]: 0.42가 되어버려서 ..
21:15 [ Zzz ]: 원 ds는 좀 그렇고 ㅇㅇ..
21:16 eINess: 두세요 어차피 스트림구간인데 문제없어보임 ㅋ
21:16 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ.
21:16 [ Zzz ]: 뉴콤은 굳
21:16 eINess: 00:21:439 (6) - 
21:16 eINess: 앞뒤로
21:16 eINess: DS 맞춰주세요
21:16 eINess: 00:22:255 (3) - 마찬가지
21:17 [ Zzz ]: 00:22:255 (3) - 이것도
21:17 [ Zzz ]: 맟출게요
21:17 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:17 eINess: 00:22:765 (5,6) - 그냥
21:17 eINess: 리버스 슬라이더 쓰시는편이
21:17 eINess: 여기만 어렵네요
21:18 [ Zzz ]: 음.. 여긴 재미를위해
21:18 [ Zzz ]: 두고싶어요!
21:20 eINess: 00:24:806 (1,2,3) - 헤드 둘다 피니쉬
21:20 eINess: 00:25:929 (3) - 이거만 테일
21:21 eINess: 00:28:072 (1) - 피니쉬
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 24초는 들리는곳만 하고싶어서 일부러안넣었어요
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 저것도 일부러 테일
21:21 eINess: 00:11:745 (1,2,3) - 이쪽이랑 같이 피니쉬 들리지않음?
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 28초 ㅇㅋ
21:21 eINess: 같은 피니쉬 계열인거 같은데
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 1 2 3번에
21:21 [ Zzz ]: 피니시 이미추가헀어요
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 추가해야될꺼같아서
21:22 eINess: 아
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 28번 근처에도 있고
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 28번도 추가했어요
21:22 eINess: 네
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 28초 ㅇㅇ.
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 00:27:663 (5) - 추가 여기머리에도 피니시추가했어요
21:22 eINess: 흠
21:22 eINess: 그럼 
21:22 eINess: 00:30:929 (5) - 
21:22 eINess: 이쪽도 주세요 헤드에
21:22 eINess: 통일성위해서
21:22 [ Zzz ]: 네
21:23 [ Zzz ]: 했어요
21:23 [ Zzz ]: 00:31:337 (1,2) -
21:23 [ Zzz ]: 이거어쩌죠 ?
21:23 [ Zzz ]: all 피니시 ?
21:23 eINess: 둘다 넣으세요 
21:23 [ Zzz ]: 어울리는데
21:23 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:23 eINess: 피니쉬 들리니까 그냥 리듬 자체를 피니쉬 패턴으로 바꾸면 괜찮을듯
21:23 [ Zzz ]: 00:32:561 (3) - 여기도하니까
21:23 [ Zzz ]: 어울림!
21:23 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:23 eINess: 아잠시만요
21:23 eINess: 00:24:806 (1,2,3) - 
21:23 eINess: 이쪾했어요? 그럼?
21:23 eINess: 이쪽 빼면 그쪾 위에꺼도 다빼야되는데
21:23 [ Zzz ]: 00:34:194 (6,1) -
21:24 [ Zzz ]: 넣는걸로
21:24 [ Zzz ]: 할게요!
21:24 eINess: 네
21:24 eINess: 위쪽 34초대 넣으셧으면
21:24 eINess: 00:37:663 (6,1) - 마찬가지 이쪽도
21:25 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:26 eINess: 00:45:929 (9,1) - 2개다 DS 맞춰주시고
21:27 eINess: 흠
21:28 [ Zzz ]: 흠
21:28 eINess: 마음같아선
21:28 eINess: 00:53:786 (9) - 
21:29 eINess: 이거 3/4슬라이더넣으면 좋겠는데
21:29 eINess: 모양떄문에 어찌할방도가없네
21:29 [ Zzz ]: 할수있음
21:29 [ Zzz ]: ㄱㄷ
21:29 eINess: 00:59:704 (3) - 이거 1서클 1/2 슬라이더 어떄요?
21:29 eINess: 옼ㅋ
21:30 eINess: 크.... 그나저나 노래 왤캐 좋을까요 젠장...
21:31 [ Zzz ]: 힣ㅎ힣
21:31 [ Zzz ]: 낄낄낄
21:31 [ Zzz ]: 좋죠!
21:31 eINess: 실력만 됬었더라면... 만드실떄 겟난 하고싶다고 말했을탠데 킄... ㅠㅠ
21:32 [ Zzz ]: ㅋㅋㅋ.ㅋ..
21:32 [ Zzz ]: ㅠㅠ..
21:32 eINess: 이거 하비님이 버블 언제준되요 그러고보니까?
21:32 [ Zzz ]: 모딩
21:32 [ Zzz ]: 인센
21:33 [ Zzz ]: 님꺼 + 아는지인꺼 + 하나더받고
21:33 [ Zzz ]: 리버블후
21:33 eINess: 아
21:33 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇㅅㅇㅅㅇㅅㅇㅅㅇㅅㅇ
21:33 eINess: 흠...
21:33 eINess: 그럼 있잖아요
21:33 eINess: 아니다...좀 아닌가
21:33 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ?
21:33 eINess: 아니 그냥
21:34 eINess: 지금 겟난 넣어달라고 부탁드릴럤어요 ㅋㅋ 만들고 모딩받는거정도는 금방하니까
21:34 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅎ..
21:34 eINess: 근데 좀 아닌거같음 이제와서 하자니
21:34 [ Zzz ]: 헿 ..
21:34 eINess: 크...그래도 포기할수없는 노래임 ㅠ
21:34 eINess: 아 하심?
21:34 [ Zzz ]: 'ㅅ' ..ㅇ?ㅁ?
21:35 eINess: 00:53:786 (9) - 이쪽요
21:35 [ Zzz ]: 하비님이 빨리해달라는데 ..ㅇㅁ
21:35 [ Zzz ]: 'ㅅ' ..ㅠㅠ..
21:35 eINess: 네?
21:35 [ Zzz ]: 잘하면 짤릴수도있다해서
21:35 [ Zzz ]: 'ㅈ'!!
21:35 eINess: 넹? 뭐가짤려요?
21:35 [ Zzz ]: 뱃
21:35 eINess: 엥?? ㅋㅋㅋ
21:35 eINess: 아니 그게아니라 
21:35 eINess: 00:53:786 (9) - 
21:36 eINess: 이쪽이요 ㅋㅋ
21:36 eINess: 하셧는지
21:36 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅎ
21:36 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅋ
21:36 [ Zzz ]: 했아ㅓ요
21:36 [ Zzz ]: ㄷ음껀
21:36 [ Zzz ]: 거절!
21:36 eINess: 00:59:704 (3) - 이쪾도?
21:36 eINess: 아
21:36 eINess: ㅇㅋ
21:36 eINess: 좀깐깐해지자면
21:36 eINess: 01:00:623 (6) - 
21:36 eINess: 이쪽 0.4로 해달라고할듯
21:36 eINess: 앞뒤로 ㅋㅋㅋ
21:36 eINess: 저긴 제쳐두고
21:36 eINess: 01:02:255 (5) - 
21:36 eINess: 이쪾 뒤에 DS 맞춰주세요
21:37 eINess: 01:03:990 (1) - 블랭킷 다시 봐주시고
21:38 [ Zzz ]: 0.4는 4단위가 아닌 좌표 2단위로 맟춰야되서
21:38 [ Zzz ]: 'ㅅ ..
21:38 eINess: 제쳐두세요 그냥 0.42 정도야 뭐
21:38 eINess: ㅋㅋ
21:38 eINess: 0.5인거만
21:38 eINess: 0.4로
21:39 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:39 [ Zzz ]: 01:03:990 (1) -
21:39 eINess: 그나저나
21:39 [ Zzz ]: 블렝킷완료
21:39 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇㅇ?
21:39 eINess: 아예 인센 네임 자체를 하이퍼로 하시지
21:40 [ Zzz ]: 라이트 인센!?
21:40 [ Zzz ]: 하이퍼 ?
21:40 eINess: 라이트인센보단 그냥 하이퍼가 좋죠
21:40 eINess: 네
21:40 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅋ
21:40 eINess: DS 일정한거보면 인센보단 역시
21:40 eINess: 하이퍼쪾이
21:40 eINess: 하드로바꾸자니 2.78인게 너무하드같음 ㅋㅋ
21:41 [ Zzz ]: zzz..
21:41 [ Zzz ]: 글쿤요!
21:42 eINess: 01:22:255 (2) - 이건 게인적인 의견인데 
21:42 eINess: 개인적인
21:42 eINess: 드럼에디션 클렙으로 해주시면 더 심명날듯
21:42 eINess: 만약에 바꾸시면 01:22:561 (3) - 이쪾은 드럼에디션 피니쉬로
21:42 eINess: 그냥 생각만해보시길
21:42 [ Zzz ]: 음
21:42 [ Zzz ]: 히트사운드는 한가지가 좋아서 힣힣
21:43 [ Zzz ]: 이대로둘게요!
21:43 eINess: 그리고 나머지
21:43 eINess: 비디오 오프셋있죠
21:43 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ?
21:43 eINess: -400으로해주세요 전난이도
21:44 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇ
21:44 eINess: 아 그리고 오프닝 태그에있는거
21:44 eINess: 그거 필요없다네요 
21:44 eINess: 뺴는쪾이 좋다고 하는데
21:44 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅎ
21:45 [ Zzz ]: 비디오 오프셋
21:45 [ Zzz ]: 어떻게설정하죠?
21:45 eINess: http://puu.sh/fJd5N/1d814e617a.png
21:45 eINess: 숫자 0만 -400으로 바꿔주세요
21:45 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅎ
21:45 [ Zzz ]: 넹!

Euny wrote:

• hyper

1. 00:17:868 (5) - 슬라이더 머리에 피니시 추가해줘!
2. 00:18:582 (2) - ^
3. 00:23:786 (3,4) - 각각 머리에 피니시 추가해줘!
4. 00:46:031 (1) - 슬라 머리에 피니시 추가해줘!
5. 00:46:643 (3) - ^
6. 00:49:908 (3) - ^
7. 00:50:521 (6) - x126y102로 이동하니까, 전 노트 치고 감싸지는 느낌들고 다음 슬라랑 이어지는 흐름도 괜찮은거같아.
   
   SPOILER

   
8. 00:50:521 (6) - 슬라 머리에 피니시 추가해줘!
9. 00:50:929 (1) - ^
10. 00:51:745 (2) - ^
11. 00:52:561 (1) - 슬라 머리랑 꼬리에 전부 피니시 추가
12. 00:53:786 (4,1) - 머리에있는 피니시를 스왑 or 1번 슬라에 피니쉬추가.
    
    키아이 다음에 피니시 좀 더 들어가면 듣기 좋아지는거같아.

UnLock- wrote:

복붙매퍼 쿨쿨님의 요청

IRC Moding

17:37 UnLock-: 아니 이 곡은...!
17:37 UnLock-: 시로땅이 있으므로
17:37 [ Zzz ]: ㅎㅎㅎㅎ
17:37 UnLock-: 전심전력으로 모딩해드림
17:37 [ Zzz ]: 헉!!
17:37 [ Zzz ]: 굳굳 :D
17:39 UnLock-: 그래도 귀찮은건 여전하니
17:39 UnLock-: irc로 달리죠
17:39 [ Zzz ]: ㅇㅇㅇ
17:39 UnLock-: 00:07:868 (3) - 
17:39 UnLock-: 이거 왜 반복으로 하셨죠?
17:39 UnLock-: 그냥 길게 하는게 더 듣기 좋아요 ><
17:40 [ Zzz ]: 넹
17:40 [ Zzz ]: 길게로 바꾸었어요!
17:40 UnLock-:  00:25:929 (3) - 
17:40 UnLock-: 그냥 추천입니다만
17:40 UnLock-: 꼬리부분에 박수 빼고
17:41 UnLock-: 샘플셋이랑 애디션 노말로 바꾸시는게 어떤가요?
17:41 UnLock-: 노말 피니시가 더 잘 어울리는 느낌
17:41 UnLock-: 아 말 안한게 있는데
17:41 UnLock-: 00:09:500 (3) - 
17:41 UnLock-: 요놈도 처음에 말한것처럼
17:42 [ Zzz ]: 했어요
17:42 [ Zzz ]: 힣
17:42 [ Zzz ]: 이미
17:42 UnLock-: 굿
17:42 UnLock-: 초보들은 지나갈만한걸 미리 하시다닛
17:42 [ Zzz ]: 흫힣ㅎ
17:43 UnLock-: 00:41:949 (6) - 
17:43 UnLock-: 피니시 추가해보세용
17:43 UnLock-: 00:53:786 (4) - 
17:43 UnLock-: 여기도 피니시
17:44 [ Zzz ]: 첫번째꺼는
17:44 [ Zzz ]: 들어가는 음이 아닌ㄱ같어서 거절하고
17:44 [ Zzz ]: 두번째는
17:44 [ Zzz ]: 넣을게요!
17:44 UnLock-: 넹
17:45 UnLock-: 01:25:214 (1) - 
17:45 UnLock-: 이거 마지막에 사운드가 너무 큰 느낌이 드네요
17:45 UnLock-: 15~20 정도로 바꿔보세요
17:45 [ Zzz ]: 네!
17:46 UnLock-: 01:03:990 (1) - 
17:46 UnLock-: 흐름에 맞춰서 Ctrl + G 추천
17:46 [ Zzz ]: 그래도 30%퍼가 어울리는거같아요
17:46 [ Zzz ]: 20퍼 해도 너무작은.
17:46 UnLock-: 30은 너무 커서
17:47 UnLock-: 힛사만 붕 뜨는 느낌이 들어요...
17:47 UnLock-: 어차피 바꾸던 안바꾸던 쿨쿨님 마음이지만
17:47 UnLock-: 저는 바꾸는걸 추천해봄
17:47 [ Zzz ]: 헿헿
17:47 [ Zzz ]: 10퍼단위가 좋아서
17:47 [ Zzz ]: 힣
17:47 [ Zzz ]: 20은 클렙소리가
17:47 [ Zzz ]: 안들림 ..
17:48 UnLock-: 으음...ㅇㅋ
17:48 [ Zzz ]: 흐름 컨트롤 g는
17:48 [ Zzz ]: 이대로할게요
17:48 [ Zzz ]: :3
17:48 UnLock-: 넹
17:48 UnLock-: 그러면
17:48 UnLock-: 모딩 끝!

복붙이라도 잘 하고 싶다....ㅠㅠ
GL

1. 00:06:847 (1) - 휘슬때메 피니쉬가 안들림 그냥 휘슬빼라
2. 00:13:786 - 여기 노트추가 이유는 보컬이 있기 때문
3. 01:05:214 (3) - 너무 패턴이 단순해서 그런데 이건 Ctrl+G
4. 01:06:847 (5) - 제안이긴 하지만 5연타 어떰?
5. 01:08:888 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬는 어색함 그냥 피니쉬 지우길
6. 01:25:214 (1) - 클랩 피니쉬 같이쓰는게 좋을듯

HabiHolic wrote:

에휴 ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ

[Hyper]

1. 00:06:847 (1) - 휘슬때메 피니쉬가 안들림 그냥 휘슬빼라
2. 00:13:786 - 여기 노트추가 이유는 보컬이 있기 때문
3. 01:05:214 (3) - 너무 패턴이 단순해서 그런데 이건 Ctrl+G
4. 01:06:847 (5) - 제안이긴 하지만 5연타 어떰? ( ㅇㅁ.. 5연타도 좋긴하지만 지금이 더 좋아서 ㅎㅎ.. )
5. 01:08:888 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬는 어색함 그냥 피니쉬 지우길
6. 01:25:214 (1) - 클랩 피니쉬 같이쓰는게 좋을듯 ( 그것도 그렇긴한데 .. 개인적으로 클렙하나가 더 마음에들어. 끝날떄 피니시 한번넣어봣는데 좀 그래서 .. )

call me back

268,40,35010,2,0,L|228:40,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,103,35214,2,0,L|197:103,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,166,35419,2,0,L|166:166,1,40,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,228,35623,1,2,0:0:0:0:

bbj0920 wrote:

메타데이터 체크가 있기 전에 Hyper에서 좀 짚고 넘어가죠.

일단 : Hyper은 보통 Basic -> Standard -> Hyper -> Another ~ 같은 데에서 사용합니다. 저는 Light Insane을 추천드리고 싶군요.
00:35:010 (3,4,5) - 너무 갑작스러운 점프입니다. 이 부분을 1/2 박자로 떼어진 1/4 3박자 슬라이더로 오해할 여지가 너무 큽니다. ( 다르게 바꾸었어요. )
저라면:


이런 모양을 추천드리고 싶네요.

268,40,35010,2,0,L|228:40,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
237,103,35214,2,0,L|197:103,1,40,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
206,166,35419,2,0,L|166:166,1,40,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,228,35623,1,2,0:0:0:0:

이런 모양을 원하시면 이 사진 기준 4번 슬라이더를 클릭하고 Ctrl + G를 누르시면 처음과 끝이 저렇게 바뀝니다.

00:45:010 (6) - 이 노트의 지점을 옮기시길. 박자로서는 3칸 - 2칸으로 1칸 차이가 나는데 00:44:296 (5) - , 00:45:214 (7) - 이 2개의 슬라이더와 동일한 디스턴스를 가지고 있군요. ( 대충 맞는지는 모르곘지만.. Done :3 )
01:19:704 (2,3,4) - 전부 휘슬 처리해주세요. 드럼 소리를 잘 따라갑니다.
01:23:276 - x:424 y:304에 노트 하나 추가해주세요. 난이도 상승이 있긴 하나 이 부분에 소리가 비게 들리는 건 어쩔 수가 없네요. 제 개인적인 추천입니다.
( 저는 지금이대로가 더 좋다고봐요. 개인적으로 파란색 선부터 시작하는건 조금.. )

이상 제가 플레이하면서 느낀 점들입니다. 도움이 되면 좋겠군요

Sonnyc wrote:

그냥 랭크 시키고 쾃들이 검사하면 됨

bbj0920 wrote:

Title : This game
(TV Size)의 여부가 불확실하군요. 일단은 붙이지 마시길

Underflow wrote:

bbj0920 wrote:

Title : This game
(TV Size)의 여부가 불확실하군요. 일단은 붙이지 마시길

http://ngnl.jp/goods/music.html

여기서 확인해본 결과 타이틀은 「This game」 맞네요
TV Size는 따로 앨범에 들어있진 않으니 붙일필요 없습니다.

bbj0920 wrote:

미디엄 만들고 있습니다. 필요하시면 완성해서 드릴테니까 답변해주세요~

W h i t e wrote:

랭크됬으면 큰일날뻔 ㅋㅋ...

스레드에 I마크 붙게 조금 어렵게 수정했습니다.

http://puu.sh/g2dRu/1baa81a7b5.rar

eINess wrote:

언제나 느끼는거지만 영어 어려움 ㅠㅠ

1. 00:12:051 (2) - 언스냅
2. 00:14:398 (2) - 뒤에 음이 들리므로 휘슬 넣어주시는 편이 좋다고 봅니다.

1. 00:02:561 - 휘슬
2. 00:19:704 (9) - Ctrl+G 가 좋을듯
3. 00:31:133 (8) - 이거 디스턴스가 너무 멀어서 햇갈릴듯 그냥 줄여서 배치하는게 좋을듯
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. 00:45:214 (2) - missing blanket
5. 00:53:786 (4) - 시작부분 휘슬뺴고 클랩
6. 00:54:194 (1) - 시작부분 클랩만 제거
7. 01:03:072 - 보컬 있으니까 여기 노트 넣는 편이 좋을듯
8. 01:23:684 (1) - 힛사가 너무 작아서 음이 뭍히는듯 그냥 소리를 올리는 편이 좋을듯
9. 01:23:582 - 피니쉬
   

1. 00:00:317 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 피아노에 맞춰서 휘슬 넣어봐
2. 00:21:541 (1) - suggust
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
3. 00:22:765 (5,6) - 5번 슬라이더를 반복 한번 추가하는게 좋을듯 6번 치기는 너무 부담되고 치기 힘들다고 생각함
4. 01:25:214 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬

HabiHolic wrote:

[Light Insane]

1. 00:00:317 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 피아노에 맞춰서 휘슬 넣어봐 ( ㅇㅋ 일단 1 3번에만 넣었는데 2번에도 필요하다 생각하면 말해줘 )
2. 00:21:541 (1) - suggust ( No )
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
3. 00:22:765 (5,6) - 5번 슬라이더를 반복 한번 추가하는게 좋을듯 6번 치기는 너무 부담되고 치기 힘들다고 생각함 ( 어렵긴 한데 칠사람은 더타도 치니까 'ㅅ'!! )
4. 01:25:214 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬 ( ok )

1. 00:02:561 - 휘슬
2. 00:19:704 (9) - Ctrl+G 가 좋을듯
3. 00:31:133 (8) - 이거 디스턴스가 너무 멀어서 햇갈릴듯 그냥 줄여서 배치하는게 좋을듯
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   
4. 00:45:214 (2) - missing blanket
5. 00:53:786 (4) - 시작부분 휘슬뺴고 클랩
6. 00:54:194 (1) - 시작부분 클랩만 제거
7. 01:03:072 - 보컬 있으니까 여기 노트 넣는 편이 좋을듯
8. 01:23:684 (1) - 힛사가 너무 작아서 음이 뭍히는듯 그냥 소리를 올리는 편이 좋을듯
9. 01:23:582 - 피니쉬
   

HabiHolic wrote:

Rebubbled

1. Remove Ai Kayano Matsuoka Yoshitsugu from tags, they aren't singing this song
2. Add NGNL and W_h_i_t_e to tags?
3. I keep getting a video playback error while switching between difficulties, try readding the video to every diff. Maybe it's because some diffs like Easy have Video,-400,"this game.avi" but the video file is This game.avi capitalized.

1. 00:00:317 (1) - 00:01:949 (1) - 00:03:582 (1) - 00:05:214 (1) - Are you sure you want 5% volume? It's too quiet for the main piano melody.
2. 00:22:663 - Main piano melody here, add note?
3. 00:53:990 (2) - Increase volume here
4. 01:23:378 (6) - Volume is too low

1. 00:00:317 - 10% volume is too low
2. No hitsounds at the beginning?
3. 01:19:500 (3,1) - Avoid stack?

1. 00:00:317 - 10% volume is too low
2. No hitsounds at beginning?
3. 00:24:806 (2) - Not too hot on this multiple repeating slider, better to break it up into individual sliders.
4. 01:23:582 (1) - Why does AIMod say Spinners need a new combo

1. No hitsounds at the beginning?

1. soft-hitwhistle.wav sounds weird at the beginning...
2. 01:23:378 (6,7,1) - should be snapped to 1/6

1. 00:06:847 (1,2,3) - Switch around like this makes more sense
   
2. 00:10:725 (3,4) - Delete (4) and extend slider, it's more comfortable to play when stream has an even number of circles.
3. 00:30:419 (5) - Accidental slider body whistle?
4. 00:55:316 - main vocal ignored?
5. 01:23:378 (5) - needs to be snapped to 1/6

xxdeathx wrote:

Something at the end of the song has got to be snapped wrongly, since W h i t e's Insane snapping at 01:22:357 (2,3,4,5,6) - conflicts with other Insanes.
01:22:629 (3) - This sounds like 1/4 at 01:22:663
01:22:902 (4) - seems to start correctly on 1/3 but ends too early
01:23:174 (5) - starts on nothing but ends correctly on 1/3
01:23:378 (6) - is snapped correctly, so it's snapped wrongly in K. Usagi's Insane and Light Insane
I guess you could follow vocals until we got this rhythm sorted out.

[General]

1. Remove Ai Kayano Matsuoka Yoshitsugu from tags, they aren't singing this song
2. Add NGNL and W_h_i_t_e to tags?
3. I keep getting a video playback error while switching between difficulties, try readding the video to every diff. Maybe it's because some diffs like Easy have Video,-400,"this game.avi" but the video file is This game.avi capitalized.

[Easy]

1. 00:00:317 - 10% volume is too low
2. No hitsounds at the beginning?
3. 01:19:500 (3,1) - Avoid stack?

[Normal]

1. 00:00:317 - 10% volume is too low
2. No hitsounds at beginning?
3. 00:24:806 (2) - Not too hot on this multiple repeating slider, better to break it up into individual sliders.
4. 01:23:582 (1) - Why does AIMod say Spinners need a new combo

[Hard]

1. No hitsounds at the beginning?

[Light Insane]
lol old style sliders?

1. soft-hitwhistle.wav sounds weird at the beginning...
2. 01:23:378 (6,7,1) - should be snapped to 1/6

[K. Usagi's Insane]

1. 00:06:847 (1,2,3) - Switch around like this makes more sense
   
2. 00:10:725 (3,4) - Delete (4) and extend slider, it's more comfortable to play when stream has an even number of circles.
3. 00:30:419 (5) - Accidental slider body whistle?
4. 00:55:316 - main vocal ignored? ( Yes )
5. 01:23:378 (5) - needs to be snapped to 1/6

No bubble no life orz ( orz )

xxdeathx wrote:

Thanks Gamu, according to his check this is the correct snapping rhythm for any difficulty in the end, in 1/12 scale with starting point 01:21:949. Blue combo color is vocal and green is drums.


these are the recommended rhythms for each insane with different beat snap divisors for reference:

SPOILER

W h i t e's Insane can use the following rhythm for following drums like he currently does (but as Gamu said, it's easier to follow vocals).

1/4: (1) and (3) are snapped to 1/4


1/6: (2), (4), and (5) are snapped to 1/6


The slider end of 01:22:902 (4) - is of confusion, and there are two things you can do. If you choose to follow vocal in this part, then there is a vocal on the 3/4 tick 01:23:072. If you follow drums like W h i t e, then should follow drum on 1/6 tick 01:23:106. I don't think these two should be mixed up.



K. Usagi's Insane seems to want to follow vocals at 01:22:765 (3,4,5) - so it's best to ignore drums there. Still following drums before and after, but the easiest way is to simplify the rhythm like this.

1/4: (1) and (3) are snapped to 1/4


1/6: (2) and (4) are snapped to 1/6




Light Insane seems to follow drums, so you can use this rhythm

1/4: (1) is snapped to 1/4


1/6: (2), (3), (4), (5) are snapped to 1/6


^ But you can choose to follow vocals instead, then use the same rhythm I recommended for K. Usagi's Insane.

Also, Gamu is right about snap at 00:12:868 (4,5) - and 01:06:847 (1,2,3,4), please fix for all difficulties.

After a talk with Atrue, we have agreed that following vocals at the end is the best choice for the insanes, since mapping to the drums will be confusing and hard to hit for the players. Like this (the simplest rhythm is the best), 1/4 beat snap divisor:

xxdeathx wrote:

Ok finally managed to clear up everything, so rebubbled!

To next BN: read through my previous posts and double check all snapping before qualifying, since objects may change while being moved around and stuff.

SPOILER

22:25 [ Zzz ]: !
22:25 xxdeathx: o
22:25 [ Zzz ]: :3
22:25 [ Zzz ]: Video,-400,
22:25 [ Zzz ]: = 0 ? - 400 ?
22:26 xxdeathx: ㅠㅠ
22:26 [ Zzz ]: !!
22:26 [ Zzz ]: ㅠㅠ
22:26 xxdeathx: what
22:26 xxdeathx: -400 video offset?
22:27 [ Zzz ]: What is the video you want to offset.
22:27 [ Zzz ]: Video,-400,"this game.avi"
22:27 xxdeathx: Video,-400,"This game.avi"
22:28 [ Zzz ]: o
22:28 [ Zzz ]: ok
22:28 [ Zzz ]: T..
22:33 *[ Zzz ] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637505 Suzuki Konomi - This game [Light Insane]]
22:33 [ Zzz ]: All done
22:34 xxdeathx: and other diffs?
22:34 [ Zzz ]: yes
22:34 [ Zzz ]: white
22:34 xxdeathx: k usagi and easy/normal/hard
22:34 [ Zzz ]: k usagi =Instead, I had to change.
22:34 [ Zzz ]: yes
22:35 xxdeathx: all fix?
22:35 [ Zzz ]: ok
22:35 [ Zzz ]: yes
22:35 xxdeathx: anything you don't want to fix?
22:35 [ Zzz ]: no
22:36 [ Zzz ]: Update Error
22:36 [ Zzz ]: Updating again
22:36 *[ Zzz ] is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637505 Suzuki Konomi - This game]
22:36 [ Zzz ]: ok
22:36 [ Zzz ]: Done
22:38 [ Zzz ]: g
22:38 *[ Zzz ] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/446846 Suzuki Konomi - This game [K.Usagi's Insane]]
22:38 [ Zzz ]: 01:23:446 (4) - Do i really need?
22:39 xxdeathx: need what
22:40 [ Zzz ]: 1/6
22:40 [ Zzz ]: slider
22:40 xxdeathx: if you want to follow drums, need 1/6
22:40 xxdeathx: if you follow vocals, then don't need
22:41 [ Zzz ]:
22:46 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/446846 Suzuki Konomi - This game [K.Usagi's Insane]]
22:46 xxdeathx: 00:12:765 (4) - this needs to be fixed
22:47 [ Zzz ]: yes
22:48 [ Zzz ]: Done
22:48 xxdeathx: 01:21:949 (1) - also fix thix
22:48 xxdeathx: this
22:49 xxdeathx: and 01:06:847 (4,5,6,7) -
22:49 xxdeathx: you didn't fix
22:49 xxdeathx: need to fix
22:49 [ Zzz ]: o!!
22:49 [ Zzz ]: Done
22:50 *xxdeathx is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637505 Suzuki Konomi - This game [Light Insane]]
22:50 xxdeathx: 01:23:480 (3) - you didn't fix
22:50 xxdeathx: need to fix
22:50 xxdeathx: ;ladfkl;jdsaflkdsaj
22:50 [ Zzz ]: oh..
22:50 [ Zzz ]: sorry
22:51 xxdeathx: these are all MUST FIX
22:51 [ Zzz ]: As far as I misunderstood.
22:51 xxdeathx: because wrong snap is unrankable
22:51 [ Zzz ]: I'm an idiot
22:51 [ Zzz ]: asdsadasd
22:51 xxdeathx: and 00:12:868 (4,5) -
22:51 [ Zzz ]: 01:06:847 (4,5,6,7) - How can I change?
22:52 xxdeathx: use 1/6 repeat slider like white's insane
22:52 xxdeathx: also need to fix 01:06:847 (5) - in light insane
22:53 [ Zzz ]: ok
22:53 xxdeathx: also need hitsounds in hard
22:54 xxdeathx: please don't say "all fix" unless you really fix all
22:54 xxdeathx: i recheck everything and almost nothing was fixed
22:55 xxdeathx: hard still needs hitsounds in beginning
22:55 xxdeathx: all insanes need to fix snap
22:59 [ Zzz ]: oh ..I'm so sorry. Check to make sure ... sorry..
23:08 xxdeathx: white's insane is good
23:09 [ Zzz ]:
23:09 xxdeathx: make sure your snaps match his insane
23:09 [ Zzz ]: ok!
23:25 [ Zzz ]: 01:06:847 (5) -
23:25 [ Zzz ]: Be nice to follow the vocals?
23:32 xxdeathx: this one?
23:32 xxdeathx: snap to 1/6
23:33 [ Zzz ]: ok
23:57 *[ Zzz ] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637505 Suzuki Konomi - This game [Light Insane]]
23:57 [ Zzz ]: Done
23:58 [ Zzz ]: Before that summary.
23:58 [ Zzz ]: t/200114/start=90
23:59 [ Zzz ]: Thanks Gamu, according to his check this is the correct snapping rhythm for any difficulty in the end, in 1/12 scale with starting point 01:21:949. Blue combo color is vocal and green is drums.
23:59 xxdeathx: i still said this needs to be 1/4
23:59 xxdeathx: 01:21:949 (1) -
00:01 [ Zzz ]: 01:21:949 (1) -
00:01 [ Zzz ]: os
00:01 [ Zzz ]: 01:21:949 (1) -
00:01 [ Zzz ]: sorry
00:02 [ Zzz ]: Misunderstood.
00:04 [ Zzz ]: sorry Please re-update
00:04 [ Zzz ]: insane
00:04 *[ Zzz ] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637505 Suzuki Konomi - This game [Light Insane]]
00:04 [ Zzz ]: 01:21:949 (1) - Fix
00:07 xxdeathx: extra space in tags between Sora W_h_i_t_e
00:07 xxdeathx: remove one space
00:07 xxdeathx: also add NGNL to tag
00:09 [ Zzz ]: Add NGNL?
00:10 xxdeathx: to tags
00:10 [ Zzz ]: ok
00:10 xxdeathx: and also fix extra space
00:11 [ Zzz ]: Sora NGNL W_h_i_t_e
00:11 xxdeathx: ok
00:11 [ Zzz ]: yes?
00:11 [ Zzz ]: ok
00:13 *[ Zzz ] is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/637505 Suzuki Konomi - This game [Light Insane]]
00:13 [ Zzz ]: Done!

Fast wrote:

1ms 언스냅된건 문제없을려나

Usagi:
00:03:175 (2,3) -

LexiaLovesU wrote:

Placeholder for a mod

OniJAM wrote:

Popped because of the title

http://ngnl.jp/special/

Title: This game(TV-Size)

ask me to rebubbled after you fix the title. I'll leave it to LexiaLovesU.

OniJAM wrote:

Rebubbled!

Genocide wrote:

is the tittle using strip ? i mean (TV-Size)

DirtyVibes wrote:

little mistakes, good map.

1. Romanised artist field must be "Konomi Suzuki"
   

   RC wrote:

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.

   http://konomi-suzuki.net http://puu.sh/h1Zzf/b2977e96e3.jpg
2. Song title, that's taken from karaoke game but well.. I've discussed this with Lanturn and this should be fine I guess
   http://ngnl.jp/news/20140521/

1. 00:00:725 (2,2) - I suggest you to remove this notes, there is no background in music and this also will be good progression to 00:03:990 (2,2) and to 00:07:153 (2,3)
   
2. 1st part is a mix of 1/4 and 1/6 snapping e.g. we discussed this with EvilElvis and here's some spots that needs attention
   00:07:153 (2) - since it has drum hitsound in 1/6 and piano on 1/4 I guess best solution will be http://puu.sh/h62pb/9f62d20856.jpg
   00:08:786 (2) - ^same \\ 00:10:419 (2)
   00:07:970 (5,7) - I also suggest you to remove this because wile this is on 1/4 next two 00:09:602 (5,7) - is on 1/6
   00:11:235 (5,7) - ^same
   
3. 01:22:663 (3) - must be snapped to 01:22:697 ()

1. 00:09:500 (4) // 00:10:316 (2) // 00:11:235 (4) - please see notes about snapping in 1st part on W h i t e's Insane
2. 01:22:765 (3) - repeat is placed wrong, should be on 1/6 snapping, so I guess you have to split this slider

1. 00:08:378 (5) // 00:10:010 (5) // 00:11:235 (3) - please see notes about snapping in 1st part on W h i t e's Insane
2. 01:21:745 (5,6,1) - overlaps with hp bar

1. 00:12:868 (3) - please see notes about snapping in 1st part on W h i t e's Insane
2. 01:06:847 (4) - must be snapped to 1/6
3. 01:22:765 (2) - repeat is placed wrong, should be on 1/6 snapping
4. Think about adding spinner to this diff for scores variety, this is also only difficulty that don't have one.

1. 00:12:765 (2) - 1/6 here
2. 01:22:765 (1) - same as for hard

Sieg wrote:

random placeholder

hello there, random check ( !!! ) Thank you Random check!!

[General]

1. Romanised artist field must be "Konomi Suzuki"
   

   RC wrote:

   Eastern artists must be written in the proper 'surname firstname' format (e.g. Japanese/Chinese/Korean). For artists which have a preferred romanisation, use this one. If you're unsure of your artist's name, then check previously ranked maps, Google, Wikipedia, or ask a BN for help.

   http://konomi-suzuki.net http://puu.sh/h1Zzf/b2977e96e3.jpg
2. Song title, that's taken from karaoke game but well.. I've discussed this with Lanturn and this should be fine I guess
   http://ngnl.jp/news/20140521/

Mapset is pretty polished, so I'll only mention general issues

[W h i t e's Insane]

1. 00:00:725 (2,2) - I suggest you to remove this notes, there is no background in music and this also will be good progression to 00:03:990 (2,2) and to 00:07:153 (2,3)
   
   00:00:317 (1) - ~ 00:06:847 (1) -
   00:00:725 (2) - fix , 00:01:541 (2) - no.
   
2. 1st part is a mix of 1/4 and 1/6 snapping e.g. we discussed this with EvilElvis and here's some spots that needs attention
   00:07:153 (2) - since it has drum hitsound in 1/6 and piano on 1/4 I guess best solution will be http://puu.sh/h62pb/9f62d20856.jpg
   00:08:786 (2) - ^same \\ 00:10:419 (2) ( All Fix~ )
   00:07:970 (5,7) - I also suggest you to remove this because wile this is on 1/4 next two 00:09:602 (5,7) - is on 1/6
   00:11:235 (5,7) - ^same ( ok~ All Fix~ )
   
3. 01:22:663 (3) - must be snapped to 01:22:697 ()

White is really busy for now !!

[Light Insane]

1. 00:08:378 (5) // 00:10:010 (5) // 00:11:235 (3) - please see notes about snapping in 1st part on W h i t e's Insane
2. 01:21:745 (5,6,1) - overlaps with hp bar

[Hard]

1. 00:12:868 (3) - please see notes about snapping in 1st part on W h i t e's Insane
2. 01:06:847 (4) - must be snapped to 1/6
3. 01:22:765 (2) - repeat is placed wrong, should be on 1/6 snapping
4. Think about adding spinner to this diff for scores variety, this is also only difficulty that don't have one. ( I think it's better to put a spin ... but my personal preference! )>ㅅ<~!!

[Normal]

1. 00:12:765 (2) - 1/6 here
2. 01:22:765 (1) - same as for hard

call me back after fixing this

Sieg wrote:

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hello there, random check

[K.Usagi's Insane]

1. 00:09:500 (4) // 00:10:316 (2) // 00:11:235 (4) - please see notes about snapping in 1st part on W h i t e's Insane
   fix
2. 01:22:765 (3) - repeat is placed wrong, should be on 1/6 snapping, so I guess you have to split this slider
   fix

call me back after fixing this

ziin wrote:

[k usagi's insane]
01:13:684 (9) -

fix

Thanks~ Ziin


Please don't use grid snap on 1/4 notes. This can be the difference between a good map and a great map.

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 54194
Countdown: 0
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:This game(TV-Size)
TitleUnicode:This game(TV-Size)
Artist:Konomi Suzuki
ArtistUnicode:鈴木このみ
Creator:[ Zzz ]
Version:K.Usagi's Insane
Source:ノーゲーム・ノーライフ
Tags:No Game No Life Shiro Sora NGNL W_h_i_t_e W h i t e [_Kuro Usagi_] TV Size
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Sieg wrote:

few more things before we can go, sorry for the inconvenience

easy
00:15:419 (4) - slider shape may be inappropriate for easy level, change to something with clear path, e.g. http://puu.sh/hi4oc/d199985736.jpg
01:00:725 (1) - ^same
00:59:092 (3) - better to end this on 00:59:908 () - because strong music beat and vocals lands here

normal
00:18:275 (1,2) - single 3\2 gap, better to avoid this for spread and general rhythm consistency, you can end slider on 00:18:684 ()
00:29:296 (3) - to avoid continuous combo it's better to convert this into circle, this also will help to keep spread in better state and general rhythm consistency
00:38:684 (2) - ^same

call me after

SPOILER

1. 00:45:214 (1) - Clap to the end sounds nice to follow the drums
2. 00:50:112 (5) - Add a whistle to follow the bass line.
3. 00:51:745 (1,2,3) - Consider to change them to the same rhyhtm as the pattern before since it flows much better with the intensity of the vocals.
4. 00:53:786 (1) - Change the hitsound on the head to Normal addition Finish, follow the enduring sound nicely.

This Sky wrote:

[W h i t e]

1. 00:45:214 (1) - Clap to the end sounds nice to follow the drums
2. 00:50:112 (5) - Add a whistle to follow the bass line.
3. 00:51:745 (1,2,3) - Consider to change them to the same rhyhtm as the pattern before since it flows much better with the intensity of the vocals.
4. 00:53:786 (1) - Change the hitsound on the head to Normal addition Finish, follow the enduring sound nicely. ( no. Change head clap :3 )

Call me.

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Qualified.