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La Roux - Colourless Colour

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Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Jarby
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Saturday, 28 November 2009 at 6:48:52 PM

Artist: La Roux
Title: Colourless Colour
Tags: Synthpop Elly Jackson Eleanor Ben Langmaid Symbolic m980 Color Colorless
BPM: 127
Filesize: 7625kb
Play Time: 02:23
Difficulties Available:
  1. Comatose (1.38 stars, 140 notes)
  2. Panic (4.86 stars, 453 notes)
  3. Relaxed (3.97 stars, 240 notes)
  4. Stress980 (4.65 stars, 343 notes)
  5. Symbolic's Tension (4.67 stars, 327 notes)
Download: La Roux - Colourless Colour
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Azure_Kyte made a pretty star2, Symbolic and m980 pretty difficultes. If you downloaded this map before 18/11/09, download it again to make the last note on Panic not sound terrible and the storyboard to stop flickering.
Last edited by Jarby , edited 26 times in total.
Xgor
Elite Mapper
2,534 posts
Joined April 2009
Xgor
[All difficulties]
Some tags would be nice (if you can come up with anything)

[Relaxing]
I suggest you make the circle size bigger..

[Panic]
:)

Great map :)
The speed up caught me off guard first time but it was actually pretty neat :D
It would be nice if you added a easier difficulty
*star*
Metroid
834 posts
Joined May 2008
Metroid
Relaxed
00:16:024(4) - it's a little too close to the (3) as you have 1/1 spaced notes having a sizable sapce between them on the grid.
01:00:657 -I personally don't think the kiai should stop and restart right away since there is not really anything that emphasizes the continuation of the chorus which a stop and retstart of kiai would be appropriate.
01:54:098 (4,5,6,1) - it's a little weird on how the (1) slightly overlaps the but others don't...
02:08:688 - Same kiai thing.
01:23:080 (3,4) - same as 00:16:024(4).

Panic
00:24:075 (6) - out of spacing a little as it's closer to (7) then it is to (5) yet both are equally the same length on the timeline.
01:00:657 - Same kiai thing in Relaxed..
00:45:053 - maybe SB in x2 slider warning? also for the other x2 areas.
01:14:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - that's a tad too confusing..
02:08:688 - Same kiai thing.
02:16:095 (2) - Nice Colourless Slider :3
02:59:071 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this random long stack seems boring, and it looks weird when it's in a random spot.
and the (9) is not fully under the other numbers..
03:09:016 (1) - kiai thing.
suggestion: 03:24:027 (1) - add an audible finish to the start of the slider and end without sound...

starred' for awesomeness
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
errrrr..

Download: La Roux - Colourless Colour (JarJarJacob) [Symbolic].osu
Tanmak
896 posts
Joined August 2009
Tanmak
Hello~~ :)

[Comatose]
00:30:421 (1,2) Undo stack? These note make to difficult in easy...

[Relaxed]
Fine~! :)

[Symbolic's Tension]
01:04:436 (1,2,3,4,5) Make more like pentagon.
02:07:744 (5) Clap?
02:08:216 (5) ^

[Panic]
02:45:301 (4) Unsnapped!
02:46:129 (6) Clap?


Great map~~! :)
Starred~
Symbolic
519 posts
Joined June 2008
Symbolic
some minor changes

Download: La Roux - Colourless Colour (JarJarJacob) [Symbolic].osu
Shulin
1,189 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Azure_Kite
osu! Alumni
3,217 posts
Joined February 2009
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod (woo, first mod for Azure's return)

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Comatose]
01:08:092 (1) - Clean this slider up a little? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/378
No problems found :)

[Relaxed]
00:43:017 (2) - Turn off grid snap here to align in the centre
01:51:020 (2) - ^
No problems found :)

[Symbolic's Tension]
No problems found :)

[Panic]
02:59:071 (1,3,5,7,8) - Move up one grid?
No problems found :)

Awesome song/map. Starred
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Jarby

Azure_Kyte wrote:

02:59:071 (1,3,5,7,8) - Move up one grid?
Did you actually test this?
m980
Elite Mapper
1,234 posts
Here since the beginning
m980
Try this osb (Your one kinda.. flickers)

Also m980 difficulty

Update
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Starts Suggestions:

All seems ok.

[Comatose]

Spacing is weird :S It's confusing and i don't like it

[Relaxed]

It's ok

[m980]

Nice :)

[Symbolic]

Nice :)

[Panic]

00:59:000 (6) - New combo
02:07:003 (5) - ^
03:02:031 (2) - i don't like this slider, make it better (look the screenshot)

03:17:042 (2) - i don't like this slider too

Starred~
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
m980
Could you use a name that fits the other difficulty names? [m980's Stress] is my suggestion
01:15:006 (1) - Verry hard to read jump, please change it.
01:15:006 (1) - ^

Symbolic's Tension
01:15:077 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - break here plz ;-;

Panic
03:22:038 (1,2,3) - Center, fag

Really nicely done, your best map yet Jar. I suggest you have the grey background fade in though, instead of just appearing.
Jarby
2,963 posts
Joined August 2008
Topic Starter
Jarby
Fine, there's a fade effect at the start now.
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
[Comatose]
Maybe make the storyboard half as fast?

[Stress980]
01:28:076 (5,6) - An echo effect (65% volume works best?) might sound good.

Truly awesome. *star
Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
1,369 posts
Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[General]

Consider using custom combo colours. (shades of grey?)

[Comatose]

Looks okay.

[Relaxed]

01:23:080 (3,4) - Too close.

[Stress980]

00:15:053 (1) - Probably should move this in the line with 2-5, looks neater and is less likely to throw people off with spacing.
00:45:053 (1) - ^, or move 2 up a bit; the spacing difference is too noticeable.
01:00:065 (1) - ^
01:15:006 (1) - Shorten by 1/2 and make it 1/2 later? The jump is very unexpected.
01:53:057 (1) - See before.
02:08:068 (1) - ^
02:23:009 (1) - ^
02:54:004 (1) - ^, but this pattern's gotten a bit boring around here, I'd say. Consider changing it a bit.

[Symbolic's Tension]

00:28:053 (1,3) - Move these a bit to overlap endpoints?
00:24:075 (1,2,1) - Stacking makes this look messy. :(
03:08:068 - Add a note?

[Panic]

00:15:030 (1,2,3,4) - Reflect 6 across and align so that these are more symmetrical? (then flip 6 back, of course)
00:45:053 (1) - Warn the 2x BPM sliders?
03:02:031 (2) - Oh dear. Not a field I specialize in though, can't really help.
03:17:042 (2) - ^

Star~
m980
Elite Mapper
1,234 posts
Here since the beginning
m980
I changed "gay" slider jump at the end of every chorus, since lots of people complained about that.
0_o
2,155 posts
Joined December 2008
0_o
Add "Colorless" to the tags for those weird people who spell it that way.

Comatose
I really feel this is too short, it just doesn't feel like a complete map. It shouldn't take that long to extend, just one more verse + flip of the first chorus would do it.

Relaxed
00:26:064 (1,2) - ahhh these aren't symmetrical (same thing in the next verse)
00:47:066 (1) - Maybe move this a bit further away to help make the speed-up more intuitive?
01:08:092 (1) - The repeat kinda took me by surprise, given the position of 2. Maybe line the endpoint of 1 with the beginning of 2?
01:39:087 (4) - symmetry, unless this was intentional
01:55:069 (1) - If you moved the last one up, move this too for consistency. Though it might look nicer if you moved it up a little anyway

Panic
02:38:045 (3,4,5) - This part tripped me up every time I played it, to me this plays and looks a lot better all stacked on 2
ztrot
osu! Alumni
4,378 posts
Joined February 2008
ztrot
lol looks good now get it ranked.
Larto
4,128 posts
Joined June 2008
Larto
hurr
EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
wow, this map is pretty tits
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