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Stan SB - Dead

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ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
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ProfessionalBox
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26. kesäkuuta 2014 at 20:54:29

Artist: Stan SB
Title: Dead
Tags: fox stevenson dnb drum and bass liquicity liquid big 174 epic vocal vocoder anyone out there marathon
BPM: 175
Filesize: 9697kb
Play Time: 06:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Rebirth (4,43 stars, 1220 notes)
Download: Stan SB - Dead
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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♪What did you change? Did it feel the same? Did it ease your paaaaaaaaaaaainn♪

This is my first ranked map ^^ !

Awesome song by Stan SB (nowdays knowns as Fox Stevenson). Hope you enjoy playing it as much as I enojyed mapping it!

This beatmap is dedicated to all my friends in osu! <3

How the diff name was decided

Awesome Modders/Helpers
SnickarN
ninja-hands
CerealeKiller
Winek (pls)
KillerGecko
Kamiya
inverness
Secretpipe
CDFA
guineaQ
Asphyxia
P A N
CrazyrabbitKGE
Dark Fang
Priti
Trust
Don - Converted the mp3!
Lach - Help with hitsound issue!

Nothing interesting here
Last edited by ProfessionalBox , edited 90 times in total.
Satella
155 posts
Joined September 2013
Satella
i'll mod this when it is finished, loving the map so far!

gogo finish~
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
I don't want to rush it too hard so that I won't mess it up lol

It will be done this week though ^^
Satella
155 posts
Joined September 2013
Satella
Stan SB - Dead by ProfessionalBox
Marathon
Firt of all, you should change the diff name to something more fun, like [Alive] or something you can come up with.
It's just a little more fun if the diff has a more fun name :P

00:10:349 (4,1) - You should try to match those up with the vocals. The 2nd slider should be 2 seperate sliders that match the vocals imo

01:19:264 (1,2,3) - You should consider moving these notes up a bit so it matched the slider a little better

01:38:464 (1) - You should move this note a little closer to the slider, the slider feels as a suprize otherwise

01:44:978 (3) - Move this slider a little closer

02:00:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You should flip this stream so it looks kinda like this http://puu.sh/8aTk5.jpg

04:12:064 (1) - Move this closer to the next slider

I don't personally have alot of problems with this map, I really love it! :D
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox

SnickarN wrote:

00:10:349 (4,1) - You should try to match those up with the vocals. The 2nd slider should be 2 seperate sliders that match the vocals imo I might change this if I come up with something more fitting, since I like how the slider slows down the part nicely

01:19:264 (1,2,3) - You should consider moving these notes up a bit so it matched the slider a little better To have it like that mirrors the slider, and there isn't really room for making it how I think you suggest putting it.

01:38:464 (1) - You should move this note a little closer to the slider, the slider feels as a suprize otherwise
Done!

01:44:978 (3) - Move this slider a little closerDone!

02:00:064 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You should flip this stream so it looks kinda like this http://puu.sh/8aTk5.jpgDone! But I made it a bit different from that pic, but the "sudden" jump is gone

04:12:064 (1) - Move this closer to the next slider Done!

I don't personally have alot of problems with this map, I really love it! Thank you!
Satella
155 posts
Joined September 2013
Satella
<3
Vivibes
18 posts
Joined April 2013
Vivibes
Great map, really fun to play :D
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Ty 8-)
Satella
155 posts
Joined September 2013
Satella
you changed the diff name i see ;D
ninja-hands
24 posts
Joined January 2013
ninja-hands
Hi there!! Saw your mod request on #modreqs. I have a soft spot for Stan SB/Fox Stevenson, see... ;)

As for the map, well... It was AMAZING!!! I love the style, kinda like Kyshiro and [Luanny] got in bed together and this was the outcome :lol:
There was almost nothing I could really find, except one slight detail, this is probably really picky though:

03:39:492 - The circle directly after the spinner is fairly easy to miss, seeing as it takes a little bit of time to recalibrate your aim after the spinner

Asides that, this is an awesome map, professionally and very well mapped and I look forward to seeing this ranked!!

Love the song, too :)

PS:
Enjoy the star! ;)
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Hello ninja-hands thanks for the mod!

ninja-hands wrote:

I have a soft spot for Stan SB/Fox Stevenson, see...
Who doesn't lol

ninja-hands wrote:

As for the map, well... It was AMAZING!!!
Thank you !!

ninja-hands wrote:

03:39:492 - The circle directly after the spinner is fairly easy to miss, seeing as it takes a little bit of time to recalibrate your aim after the spinner
Removed the circle - Could see why it's missable

ninja-hands wrote:

Enjoy the star!
I will :) !
CerealeKiller
110 posts
Joined May 2013
CerealeKiller
This post never existed LOL
Last edited by CerealeKiller , edited 1 time in total.
CerealeKiller
110 posts
Joined May 2013
CerealeKiller
Hello, saw your post on #modreqs and since I love this song I had to help you.
But I don't have a lot of experience in mapping/modding, but I'll try to do what I can :

00:12:406 (2) - I don't get why this slider starts here, I would rather make two circles at 00:12:749 (2) and 00:13:092 (3)

00:23:549 (1) - I think the spacing is a bit too high between this circle and the slider after, maybe consider to rotate or move the slider right before.

00:27:321 (4) , 00:32:806 (5) - Those circles aren't necessery, imo they overload the slow rythm.

02:12:064 (2) and 02:14:121 (1) - Maybe consider remapping this part to fit more with the vocals. I would see here more a single tap (1/2) combo with a few sliders

02:26:121 (8) - Sneaky circle.




Le wild edit appears (yeah because I would be stupid to post a third time)


As promised, here the end of my mod :

04:35:035 (1) - Again I don't get why you start again (I mean after the spinner) at this moment and why not earlier with the vocals, I would remap this 1st combo

04:41:206 (4,5) - I would delete those two sliders but you seem to love filling the "blanks" in the music.

04:56:292 (1) - Same as before, but here I can understand your choice because the "instruments" start again here


Sorry if you expected more but the rest of the map seem fine. There are still some little things I would map in another way but I respect your mapping style ;)


Anyway it's still a great map, you've done a nice job here, I hope you'll get it ranked !
Last edited by CerealeKiller , edited 1 time in total.
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Hello CerealeKiller and thanks for the mod!

Mod check

CerealeKiller wrote:

00:12:406 (2) - I don't get why this slider starts here, I would rather make two circles at 00:12:749 (2) and 00:13:092 (3)
Remapped the whole part

CerealeKiller wrote:

00:23:549 (1) - I think the spacing is a bit too high between this circle and the slider after, maybe consider to rotate or move the slider right before.
Repositioned the slider

CerealeKiller wrote:

00:27:321 (4) , 00:32:806 (5) - Those circles aren't necessery, imo they overload the slow rythm.
On the first one I agree on and removed the circle but I left the other 00:32:806 circle there because imo it fits there

CerealeKiller wrote:

02:12:064 (2) and 02:14:121 (1) - Maybe consider remapping this part to fit more with the vocals. I would see here more a single tap (1/2) combo with a few sliders
I thinks it's fine ;)

CerealeKiller wrote:

02:26:121 (8) - Sneaky circle.
Repositioned

CerealeKiller wrote:

Le wild edit appears (yeah because I would be stupid to post a third time)
XD

CerealeKiller wrote:

04:35:035 (1) - Again I don't get why you start again (I mean after the spinner) at this moment and why not earlier with the vocals, I would remap this 1st combo
I hate it when a circle / combo begins right after a spinner, I feel like one should get to finish the spinner completely and then prepare for following, but I just might do something with this part

CerealeKiller wrote:

04:41:206 (4,5) - I would delete those two sliders but you seem to love filling the "blanks" in the music.
Yes, especially at harder diffs it just feels weird if there is a sudden blank spot, so I'll leave them there :P

CerealeKiller wrote:

04:56:292 (1) - Same as before, but here I can understand your choice because the "instruments" start again here
Like mentioned before, don't like circles right after spinner

CerealeKiller wrote:

Sorry if you expected more but the rest of the map seem fine. There are still some little things I would map in another way but I respect your mapping style
Anyone who goes through the trouble of modding my map is equally honored, even if it's a tiny mod (not that this was a tiny mod lol).

CerealeKiller wrote:

Anyway it's still a great map, you've done a nice job here, I hope you'll get it ranked !
Thanks and I hope so aswell ^^!
Winek
888 posts
Joined September 2013
Winek
sup bro

unuseful IRC mod
2014-04-20 11:42 Winek: sup boxy
2014-04-20 11:43 ProfessionalBox: hello harpie
2014-04-20 11:43 ProfessionalBox: winek*
2014-04-20 11:43 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 11:43 Winek: fffffff
2014-04-20 11:43 Winek: 2 sec and we're back to your map
2014-04-20 11:44 ProfessionalBox: Sure
2014-04-20 11:44 ProfessionalBox: just say when youre ready
2014-04-20 12:33 ProfessionalBox: How long is your 2sec lol
2014-04-20 12:33 Winek: some time hue
2014-04-20 12:33 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 12:34 Winek: are you in a hurry or something? ~:3
2014-04-20 12:35 ProfessionalBox: Not really
2014-04-20 12:35 ProfessionalBox: it's just that practically I've been waiting 2 days xD
2014-04-20 12:35 ProfessionalBox: no need to rush, I can take it
2014-04-20 12:35 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 12:48 Winek: gonna play a game of touhou then your map
2014-04-20 12:48 ProfessionalBox: How long ;_;
2014-04-20 12:48 Winek: around 20 mins
2014-04-20 12:49 Winek: little impatient ~:3
2014-04-20 12:49 ProfessionalBox: 20min sounds good
2014-04-20 12:49 ProfessionalBox: atleast it isn't 2sec
2014-04-20 12:49 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 12:49 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 12:50 Winek: ok afk
2014-04-20 14:29 Winek: soz
2014-04-20 14:29 Winek: mom is forcing me to go to fkin beach
2014-04-20 14:29 Winek: we'll do it once ill be back
2014-04-20 14:30 ProfessionalBox: When will you be back?
2014-04-20 14:30 ProfessionalBox: can you say like how many hours
2014-04-20 14:30 ProfessionalBox: Or is it delayed to next weekend?
2014-04-20 14:31 Winek: im here tomorrow dw
2014-04-20 14:31 ProfessionalBox: Great
2014-04-20 14:31 Winek: and ill be back in something like 1~2 hours
2014-04-20 14:31 ProfessionalBox: oh ok
2014-04-20 14:31 ProfessionalBox: I'll be here
2014-04-20 14:31 ProfessionalBox: just message me
2014-04-20 14:32 Winek: k
2014-04-20 18:28 Winek: half-back
2014-04-20 18:29 ProfessionalBox: Can you wait 30min?
2014-04-20 19:34 ProfessionalBox: Are you back now?
2014-04-20 19:58 Winek: woopsee
2014-04-20 19:58 Winek: mom annoy
2014-04-20 20:01 Winek: sorry
2014-04-20 20:02 Winek: mom got annoying orz
2014-04-20 20:19 ProfessionalBox: lol
2014-04-20 20:20 ProfessionalBox: im readi if youn are
2014-04-20 20:20 Winek: that grammar pls
2014-04-20 20:20 Winek: ok wait up
2014-04-20 20:20 Winek: let me update my map
2014-04-20 20:20 Winek: thenn lets mod
2014-04-20 20:21 ProfessionalBox: sure
2014-04-20 20:21 ProfessionalBox: btw
2014-04-20 20:21 ProfessionalBox: I remapped one big part
2014-04-20 20:21 Winek: k
2014-04-20 20:21 Winek: which one?
2014-04-20 20:21 ProfessionalBox: so yoou need to update
2014-04-20 20:22 ProfessionalBox: 0:54-1:14
2014-04-20 20:22 Winek: ok
2014-04-20 20:29 ProfessionalBox: So I updated literally 5sec ago
2014-04-20 20:29 Winek: wait
2014-04-20 20:29 Winek: wait up
2014-04-20 20:29 Winek: i must arrange something on my map
2014-04-20 20:29 ProfessionalBox: sure, that's what I've been doing the whole day lol
2014-04-20 20:29 ProfessionalBox: k
2014-04-20 20:32 Winek: alright
2014-04-20 20:33 Winek: np coz im lazy to find it
2014-04-20 20:33 ProfessionalBox: lol
2014-04-20 20:34 Winek: are you lazy as wellw?
2014-04-20 20:34 ProfessionalBox: depends on the subject
2014-04-20 20:35 ProfessionalBox: school things = yes I'm lazy, Something fun = not
2014-04-20 20:37 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 20:40 Winek: so mod time?
2014-04-20 20:40 ProfessionalBox: yes
2014-04-20 20:40 ProfessionalBox: !
2014-04-20 20:40 Winek: k np
2014-04-20 20:40 Winek: im lazy
2014-04-20 20:41 Winek: np it
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: lol
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: oh
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: sec
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: ACTION is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/399221 Stan SB - Dead [Rebirth]]
2014-04-20 20:41 Winek: im too lazy to search it in my maps
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: you could have searched for my name but
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 20:41 Winek: LAZY
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: ok
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: ok
2014-04-20 20:41 ProfessionalBox: that must have been faster then
2014-04-20 20:41 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 20:42 ProfessionalBox: I guess you should check the remap first
2014-04-20 20:42 Winek: which part
2014-04-20 20:42 ProfessionalBox: 00:54:921
2014-04-20 20:43 Winek: look nice
2014-04-20 20:43 ProfessionalBox: pls osu highlight
2014-04-20 20:43 Winek: add a - after
2014-04-20 20:43 ProfessionalBox: great
2014-04-20 20:43 Winek: 00:58:505 -
2014-04-20 20:43 ProfessionalBox: 00:54:921a
2014-04-20 20:43 ProfessionalBox: >.<
2014-04-20 20:43 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 20:44 ProfessionalBox: I think those stacked sliders fit there quite nicely
2014-04-20 20:44 Winek: i agree<
2014-04-20 20:44 Winek: well lets check in the first kiai
2014-04-20 20:45 ProfessionalBox: Now the real fun begins
2014-04-20 20:45 ProfessionalBox: First kiai is meh but the rest of the song is mapped like a pro
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: i suck at hard shizze
2014-04-20 20:45 ProfessionalBox: since I'm a PROfessionalbox
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: nope
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: you're just a box
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: ACTION runs
2014-04-20 20:45 ProfessionalBox: ACTION is amused
2014-04-20 20:45 Winek: okok lets get serious
2014-04-20 20:46 ProfessionalBox: ACTION let's out an evil laugh
2014-04-20 20:46 ProfessionalBox: yeah xD
2014-04-20 20:46 Winek: crualbox
2014-04-20 20:46 Winek: namechange to this
2014-04-20 20:46 ProfessionalBox: ummm
2014-04-20 20:46 ProfessionalBox: nope
2014-04-20 20:47 Winek: fffuuu
2014-04-20 20:47 Winek: okok mod time
2014-04-20 20:48 Winek: tell my why you give a 1/4 triplet for [osu://edit/01:17:378 (2,3,4) this]
2014-04-20 20:48 Winek: ffffff
2014-04-20 20:48 Winek: tell my why you give a 1/4 triplet for [osu://edit/01:17:378(2,3,4) this]
2014-04-20 20:49 Winek: shiz impossible i give up
2014-04-20 20:49 ProfessionalBox: haha
2014-04-20 20:49 Winek: the triplet is quite unfitting here :o
2014-04-20 20:49 Winek: it's like the only one
2014-04-20 20:49 ProfessionalBox: I love triplets
2014-04-20 20:49 ProfessionalBox: there will be more
2014-04-20 20:50 Winek: like 01:19:264 (1,2,3,4,1) - sounds better
2014-04-20 20:50 ProfessionalBox: I guess it's just variation
2014-04-20 20:50 ProfessionalBox: triplet there - short stream there
2014-04-20 20:51 Winek: shouldn't there be a triplet in 01:19:606 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - as well then
2014-04-20 20:52 ProfessionalBox: The triplet is there for the pattern to work
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: I would have to reposition the whole thing without it
2014-04-20 20:53 Winek: well k
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: There's too much of a break without the triplet
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: But I guess it's the only one there
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: there will be more though, especially after the kiai time
2014-04-20 20:53 ProfessionalBox: I'll try to figure out something
2014-04-20 20:54 Winek: okok
2014-04-20 20:55 Winek: ok let's check obvious overall thingies
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: ohgod
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: I forgot to change the mp3
2014-04-20 20:56 Winek: 01:46:692 (5,1) - are you blind
2014-04-20 20:56 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: blind
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: huh
2014-04-20 20:56 ProfessionalBox: no I guess I can see fine
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: pls stackfail
2014-04-20 20:57 ProfessionalBox: How can I fix those xD
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: again
2014-04-20 20:57 ProfessionalBox: there will be more of those I guess..
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: are you blind 01:48:406 (1,2,3) -
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: hue
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: to fix them
2014-04-20 20:57 Winek: try ctrl + g
2014-04-20 20:58 Winek: stack them perfectly
2014-04-20 20:58 Winek: then ctrl+g again
2014-04-20 20:58 ProfessionalBox: so I highlight all of those
2014-04-20 20:58 ProfessionalBox: 1,2,3
2014-04-20 20:59 Winek: just ctrl+g 1
2014-04-20 20:59 Winek: and verify their position
2014-04-20 20:59 Winek: make them have perfect stack
2014-04-20 20:59 Winek: then ctrl+g again for 1
2014-04-20 21:00 ProfessionalBox: ok
2014-04-20 21:00 ProfessionalBox: I think I got it
2014-04-20 21:00 ProfessionalBox: nope
2014-04-20 21:00 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:00 ProfessionalBox: lol this is hard ;_;
2014-04-20 21:01 ProfessionalBox: Should I use bigger grid size
2014-04-20 21:01 Winek: opposite
2014-04-20 21:01 Winek: use nogrid
2014-04-20 21:01 ProfessionalBox: ok
2014-04-20 21:02 Winek: or
2014-04-20 21:02 Winek: select a note and directly click there http://puu.sh/8gEwe/ee05c145c9.jpg
2014-04-20 21:03 ProfessionalBox: does stack leniency affect how these circles behave
2014-04-20 21:03 ProfessionalBox: I have it like at 2 or 3
2014-04-20 21:04 Winek: nono its ok
2014-04-20 21:05 ProfessionalBox: Wow i can't seem to fix this
2014-04-20 21:05 ProfessionalBox: what is this sorcery
2014-04-20 21:05 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:05 Winek: 01:48:406 (1) -
2014-04-20 21:05 Winek: move y:334
2014-04-20 21:07 Winek: wait up
2014-04-20 21:07 ProfessionalBox: It wont work
2014-04-20 21:08 Winek: x:328 y335
2014-04-20 21:11 Winek: brb a lil while
2014-04-20 21:11 ProfessionalBox: I have all of them at the situation where prev is 0,00x and next is at 0,00x but still
2014-04-20 21:11 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:11 ProfessionalBox: it wont work
2014-04-20 21:11 Winek: not distance
2014-04-20 21:11 Winek: xy position
2014-04-20 21:12 ProfessionalBox: thats what I meant
2014-04-20 21:13 ProfessionalBox: they were at the same xy positions
2014-04-20 21:13 ProfessionalBox: but sill
2014-04-20 21:22 ProfessionalBox: So i fixed both of those that their xy position is the exact same
2014-04-20 21:23 Winek: k
2014-04-20 21:23 ProfessionalBox: when played it still looks the same as before
2014-04-20 21:23 ProfessionalBox: Have you modded my map further?
2014-04-20 21:23 Winek: im kinda brb can u wait 5 min
2014-04-20 21:24 ProfessionalBox: if it's really 5min and not 50min lol
2014-04-20 21:24 ProfessionalBox: then i can wait xD
2014-04-20 21:26 Winek: ok bek
2014-04-20 21:26 Winek: still on ovious thing
2014-04-20 21:26 Winek: 01:50:806 (3,4) -
2014-04-20 21:26 Winek: the distance is really weird and confusing here
2014-04-20 21:27 ProfessionalBox: made it smaller
2014-04-20 21:27 ProfessionalBox: and the following too
2014-04-20 21:28 Winek: ye
2014-04-20 21:31 Winek: 02:11:721 (1,2,3) - go to the eye doctor
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: dear god
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: I think I might be blind
2014-04-20 21:31 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: oh
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: I fixed that just a while ago but wasn't able to get the distance down to 0,00
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: only 0,01
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: is it good enough?
2014-04-20 21:31 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 21:33 Winek: xd yes
2014-04-20 21:35 Winek: im not very good for insanes
2014-04-20 21:35 Winek: ill try to shit on flow, etc...
2014-04-20 21:36 ProfessionalBox: The flow is quite nice
2014-04-20 21:37 ProfessionalBox: imo atlest
2014-04-20 21:37 ProfessionalBox: atleast
2014-04-20 21:37 Winek: yeye
2014-04-20 21:37 Winek: your map is good otherwise :o
2014-04-20 21:41 Winek: box
2014-04-20 21:41 Winek: 02:49:092 (2,3,4) -
2014-04-20 21:41 ProfessionalBox: is it :o
2014-04-20 21:41 ProfessionalBox: yay!
2014-04-20 21:42 ProfessionalBox: just fixed that
2014-04-20 21:42 ProfessionalBox: but I can only get that to 0,01 too
2014-04-20 21:42 Winek: blind
2014-04-20 21:42 ProfessionalBox: im srs
2014-04-20 21:42 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 21:43 ProfessionalBox: try it out yourself
2014-04-20 21:44 Winek: got a perfect stack and 0.01 doesn't matter
2014-04-20 21:45 ProfessionalBox: I just cant do that
2014-04-20 21:45 ProfessionalBox: all my stacks look awful
2014-04-20 21:45 ProfessionalBox: wtf
2014-04-20 21:46 Winek: i recall bullshit
2014-04-20 21:46 Winek: 03:00:921 (7,2) -
2014-04-20 21:47 ProfessionalBox: IM SUCH A BAD MAPPER
2014-04-20 21:47 ProfessionalBox: DEAR LORD
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: YOUR MAP SUCKSSSSSSS
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: LOOOL
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: loljk
2014-04-20 21:48 ProfessionalBox: I KNOW
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: just fix the unrankable stackfail
2014-04-20 21:48 ProfessionalBox: BETTER GO KILLMYSELF
2014-04-20 21:48 ProfessionalBox: ACTION is dead
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: ok
2014-04-20 21:48 ProfessionalBox: ACTION used extra life
2014-04-20 21:48 Winek: ye
2014-04-20 21:49 Winek: kewl
2014-04-20 21:49 Winek: u life again
2014-04-20 21:49 ProfessionalBox: still 2x more lives left
2014-04-20 21:49 ProfessionalBox: Can you puush me how you stacked those notes
2014-04-20 21:49 ProfessionalBox: I can update the map and show you how it still looks terrible even though they are at the exact same positions
2014-04-20 21:50 Winek: hmm
2014-04-20 21:51 Winek: http://puu.sh/8gIen/4b85db776b.jpg
2014-04-20 21:51 Winek: brb 1 min
2014-04-20 21:53 ProfessionalBox: I have it like that, just updated the map
2014-04-20 22:22 Winek: ok back
2014-04-20 22:22 ProfessionalBox: welcome back
2014-04-20 22:23 Winek: shit your map is too good
2014-04-20 22:23 Winek: TH2M
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: I told you that I learned how to map
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: atleast
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: almost
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: that stack thingy
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: xD
2014-04-20 22:24 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: But you really helped with the beginning
2014-04-20 22:24 ProfessionalBox: <3
2014-04-20 22:25 Winek: well let me check it again
2014-04-20 22:25 Winek: or else i feel poop
2014-04-20 22:25 ProfessionalBox: Remember to post something so that I can kudosu afterwards
2014-04-20 22:25 ProfessionalBox: check all you like
2014-04-20 22:25 Winek: like i'm a useless shit
2014-04-20 22:25 ProfessionalBox: it just means that less people need to mod
2014-04-20 22:25 ProfessionalBox: What I'm most worried about are the hitsounds
2014-04-20 22:26 ProfessionalBox: They suck from time to time i guess
2014-04-20 22:26 Winek: trye
2014-04-20 22:28 Winek: hmm
2014-04-20 22:28 Winek: your hitsounds are ok i guess
2014-04-20 22:28 Winek: but place like 03:33:149 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
2014-04-20 22:28 Winek: sounds weird .-.
2014-04-20 22:29 ProfessionalBox: In the kiai times theyre great imo
2014-04-20 22:29 ProfessionalBox: but
2014-04-20 22:29 ProfessionalBox: other places they suck xD
2014-04-20 22:29 Winek: lol
2014-04-20 22:31 Winek: so ye
2014-04-20 22:31 Winek: do i post?
2014-04-20 22:31 ProfessionalBox: If you think were done here
2014-04-20 22:32 ProfessionalBox: then go ahead ^^
2014-04-20 22:32 Winek: k
kds pls
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox

Winek wrote:

kds pls
pls
GuiltyGecko
57 posts
Joined December 2012
GuiltyGecko
Hey from Gecko's Mod Queue! Your advice was similar to everyone else's but it helped my get the timing and offset corrected so thanks! Now on to the mod!

Marathon:
SPOILER
General: Maybe it's intended, but it's a 6:00min map with no breaks! My hand started getting fatigued around 3/4 of the way through the song. Perhaps consider adding a break section to allow people a quick rest and time to re-position their hands.

00:10:399 The vocals that start here kind of drown out the hitsounds for me (I am using headphones too!). I can still hear them, but having them slightly louder would make it easier to hear the flow of the hitsounds.
00:31:314 (2) - Move this to x:444 y:172 to be lined up with the 3 slider
01:15:542 Where the Kiai time begins the hitsounds are drowned out again. I noticed that once I turned on the ignore beatmap hitsounds option I was okay. Perhaps just make hitsounds SLIGHTLY louder overall. Don't wanna go overboard lol.
00:54:971 (1) - I think it's really cool/great when the sound really makes you feel like you hit a different part/section of the music. I noticed you don't really have transition hitsounds throughout the whole song and parts end and begin on the same hitsounds that are consistent throughout the meat of the music. Because I am a stickler for hitsounds, I took the liberty of going through a few places and adding them where I deemed appropriate. It seems you ended sections with claps, and started next ones with finishes, so I tried to keep your style. Hope you don't mind. Ignore this if you do XD. So I added finish sounds as follows:
00:11:085 (1) - Added finish
01:27:885 (1) -Added finish on beginning of slider
01:37:485(1) -Added clap
01:38:856(1) -Added finish at at beginning of slider.
01:49:828(1) -Added finish at beginning
02:00:799(1) -Added finish
02:22:742(1) -Added finish to beginning
02:32:342(1) -Added clap
02:55:656(1) -Added finish
03:06:628(1) -Added finish to beginning
03:17:599(3) -Added clap to end of 3 slider.
04:01:142(2) -Added clap
04:11:085(9) -Added clap (Also to note, this section ends on a combo 9, but in similar sections you end on a combo 8, and then the 9th hit cirlce is a new combo. For consistency's sake, you should make a new combo here. It's similar to sections 02:32:342 and 01:37:742 )
04:12:456(1) -Added finish to start of 1 slider
04:23:428(1) -Added finsih to start of slider.
04:34:399-Added finish to end of spinner
04:56:342(1) -Added finish
05:29:256(1) -Added finish to beginning
06:02:171 - It's the last beat of the song! End it with a crash! lol.

Okay, on my sweep I think I got the most obvious hitsounds. Hope that helps you out! Love the song!
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Thanks for the mod, I really needed hitsound modding!

Mod Check

KillerGecko wrote:

General: Maybe it's intended, but it's a 6:00min map with no breaks! My hand started getting fatigued around 3/4 of the way through the song. Perhaps consider adding a break section to allow people a quick rest and time to re-position their hands. There is this slow part right before the end which is very easy on purpse, so that it can work as a break!

00:10:399 The vocals that start here kind of drown out the hitsounds for me (I am using headphones too!). I can still hear them, but having them slightly louder would make it easier to hear the flow of the hitsounds.Raised volume by 5%
00:31:314 (2) - Move this to x:444 y:172 to be lined up with the 3 slider Done!
01:15:542 Where the Kiai time begins the hitsounds are drowned out again. I noticed that once I turned on the ignore beatmap hitsounds option I was okay. Perhaps just make hitsounds SLIGHTLY louder overall. Don't wanna go overboard lol.If I turn up the volume here the clap soun starts to get annoyingly loud!
00:54:971 (1) - I think it's really cool/great when the sound really makes you feel like you hit a different part/section of the music. I noticed you don't really have transition hitsounds throughout the whole song and parts end and begin on the same hitsounds that are consistent throughout the meat of the music. Because I am a stickler for hitsounds, I took the liberty of going through a few places and adding them where I deemed appropriate. It seems you ended sections with claps, and started next ones with finishes, so I tried to keep your style. Hope you don't mind. Ignore this if you do XD. So I added finish sounds as follows:
00:11:085 (1) - Added finish Done!
01:27:885 (1) -Added finish on beginning of slider^
01:37:485(1) -Added clap^
01:38:856(1) -Added finish at at beginning of slider.^
01:49:828(1) -Added finish at beginning^
02:00:799(1) -Added finish^
02:22:742(1) -Added finish to beginning^
02:32:342(1) -Added clap^
02:55:656(1) -Added finish^
03:06:628(1) -Added finish to beginning^
03:17:599(3) -Added clap to end of 3 slider.^
04:01:142(2) -Added clap^
04:11:085(9) -Added clap (Also to note, this section ends on a combo 9, but in similar sections you end on a combo 8, and then the 9th hit cirlce is a new combo. For consistency's sake, you should make a new combo here. It's similar to sections 02:32:342 and 01:37:742 )^
04:12:456(1) -Added finish to start of 1 slider^
04:23:428(1) -Added finsih to start of slider.^
04:34:399-Added finish to end of spinner^
04:56:342(1) -Added finish^
05:29:256(1) -Added finish to beginning^
06:02:171 - It's the last beat of the song! End it with a crash! lol.Aaaand Done!

Okay, on my sweep I think I got the most obvious hitsounds. Hope that helps you out! Love the song!
[Kamiya]
637 posts
Joined November 2012
[Kamiya]
HI~~~
mod request
00:27:542 (1,2) - open distance
01:27:885 (1,2) - ^
03:32:685 (4,1) - ^

that all

gj veryvery love this beatmap~! :) :)
69653863
1,818 posts
Joined January 2012
69653863
Mod request from my queue
Guide
Red is unrankable and must be fixed.
Pink is you should apply this to any similar notes/parts/patterns/whatever it was stated on it.
Mods with question marks (?) are only suggestion/opinion. You're free to choose whether you're going to apply it or not.

Additional notes:
I cannot mod another game modes.
Please reply to my mods, I always looking forward to the replies so I could improve better.
If you think one or more points on my mod is unclear, feel free to ask about it.

General
  1. 00:54:971 - Move title text here, ask the BATs.
  2. Why did you put Netsky and Noisia on tags?
  3. Somehow I didn't think the background fits, just, I don't know it just didn't fit. Maybe, you know, you could use something more "sky" or "atmospherical" like this: http://puu.sh/8mznZ.png
    PS: If you take it, make sure to call me back so I can gave you fitting combocolours.
  4. 04:34:399 - 04:56:342 - Perfect break time. For a 6 minute map, this break worth it. I strongly suggest this so I won't mod this part.
  5. Some part has low hitsound ambience, such as 03:17:599 - 03:58:742 - .
Rebirth
  1. 00:06:971 (6,7) - Fix blanket?
  2. 00:08:342 (1,2,3) - I prefer that you manualstack it more to the right, to follow default stacks. Stacking it way down looks weird for me :/
  3. 00:14:342 (2,3) - Why don't you put (3) the way you put (2) against (1)? It'll form a nice slidercomb (or whatever it called) and looks better.
  4. 00:15:542 (4,1) - I guest you could space them farther? Seems way too close, especially after comparing to previous pattern
  5. 00:16:571 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
  6. 00:19:314 (1,2,3) - (1)'s sliderend is too close to previous hitcircle.
  7. 00:21:371 (4,1) - Blanket.
  8. 00:34:742 (2,3) - Yup, blanket.
  9. 00:49:485 (1) - Fix it this way http://puu.sh/8mzHI.jpg , it looks better I promise.
  10. 01:04:742 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Ouch, imperfect star formation. I would align (4) and (5) vertically with (1) and (3).
  11. 01:15:199 (4) - Mirror this slider from 01:14:514 (2) - ? Looks like imperfect slider windmills if you put it this way.
  12. 01:27:885 (1,2) - Spacing is too short, at least don't let the sliderend touch the circle.
  13. 01:33:885 (1) - Why NC?
  14. 01:36:114 (1,2) - Spacing '-'
  15. 01:48:799 (3) - If you make this slider straight (no curves) it'll look better! (-:
  16. 01:50:342 (2) - Put this on x:165 y:56 for perfect blanket.
  17. 01:51:885 (8) - Ctrl+G. Flows way better.
  18. 02:01:142 (3,4) - Blanket?
  19. 02:08:685 (2,3) - ^
  20. 02:14:514 (1,2) - (1) almost touched 02:13:656 (7) - and it looks bad )-:
  21. 02:17:256 (1,2) - Spacing aaa
  22. 02:27:371 (4,5) - Blanket (-:
  23. 02:34:228 (2,3,4) - Put them farther in order to fix blanket
  24. 02:38:342 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - Imperfect star formation?
  25. 02:50:856 (3,4) - Ctrl+G? Better flow you know
  26. 02:51:542 (1,2,3) - Why don't you blanket? (-:
  27. 02:58:914 (6) - Too close to windmill center.
  28. 03:04:914 (3,4,5,6,1) - Put it like this http://puu.sh/8mAjg.jpg ? Better flow I guarantee
  29. 03:12:799 (4,1) - Blanket is a little bit too close :/
  30. 03:24:799 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why don't you form a 5-point star formation?
  31. 03:29:942 (4,5) - It's best if you utilize blanket here.
  32. 03:37:142 (2,3) - Imperfect stack (-:
  33. 03:45:028 (1,2) - Blanket please :/
  34. 03:51:028 (3,4,5,6) - Doesn't look neat enough I suppose
  35. 03:53:599 (3,4) - Too close.
  36. 03:56:342 (2,3) - ^
  37. 04:03:371 (5,6) - Blanket )-:
  38. 04:14:171 (3,4) - Too close.
  39. 04:16:914 (7,8) - Imperfect blanket
  40. 04:20:342 (7,1) - Blanket aaaaaa
  41. 04:22:056 (1,2,3) - Stream spacing is not the same as the one on 04:21:714 (3,4,5,6,1) -
  42. 05:13:828 (1,2) - Yay blanket.
  43. 05:16:914 (17,1) - Broke flow. Merge it into a slider maybe and join the 05:17:256 (2,3,4) - slidercomb formation?
  44. 05:28:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Aaaa what is this lol, this didn't form anything and looks ugly )))-:
  45. 05:45:714 (1,3) - If you could blanket (3) it'll be nice! (-:
There are more bugs you should fix, mostly imperfect blankets and spacing. I skip those because they're way too much and leaving it for you to repolish them. Fix those and your map shall be near-perfect, I guarantee.

Really nice map. Your mapping style kinda reminds me to Kyshiro (as you also hitsound the same way he usually does).
If you made this to ranking, this map will be a booming map as Dead is Stan SB's best work so far.

Take my stars as you really did a very good job here. Good luck!
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Kamiya mod
Hello and thanks for the mod, fixed all ^^

inverness mod
Thank you SO MUCH for the mod (and the stars <3)

inverness wrote:

General
00:54:971 - Move title text here, ask the BATs. Okay, I just hope they know what you mean
Why did you put Netsky and Noisia on tags? Took the tags from the songs soundcloud xD https://soundcloud.com/foxstevenson/sta ... load-below
Somehow I didn't think the background fits, just, I don't know it just didn't fit. Maybe, you know, you could use something more "sky" or "atmospherical" like this: http://puu.sh/8mznZ.png I think you are right, I shall change it when I will find something fitting (Looks like I'm going to have real good fun today)
PS: If you take it, make sure to call me back so I can gave you fitting combocolours.
04:34:399 - 04:56:342 - Perfect break time. For a 6 minute map, this break worth it. I strongly suggest this so I won't mod this part.
Some part has low hitsound ambience, such as 03:17:599 - 03:58:742 - . Now with the new approval rule change I can remove the break and still get this approved ^^
I fixed everything you said and I'm too lazy to list it all here. The mod was AMAZING - I wish more ppl like you exist ^^ It's a shame I can only give you one kudosu :( Oh and thanks for the kind words :D
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
I'll mod it later :3
Secretpipe
3,316 posts
Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
Here's my mod as promise~

[Rebirth]
01:28:914 (5,6) - Bad overlap ?
01:34:399 (3) - Curv it ?
01:38:856 (1) - Remove NC ?
01:47:085 (1) - x:444 y:232
01:47:599 (2) - Flow is bad here I think ! Maybe remake this slider ?
02:00:799 (1,2) - Same , stream goes up and then , note is down ! Make something ?
02:01:142 (3,4) - Blanket my dear
02:02:085 (6) - Stack ?
02:11:428 (9) - Curv this in that way : Click!
04:53:771 - Spinner should start here
05:28:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a star pattern or something else cause it looks like random circles /o/
06:01:828 - Stop spinner here and add final circle here : 06:02:171 -

This. Is. Amazing!
Glad to discover a marathon with Stan SB's song ! :D
Good luck for this amazing map <3
Also , hope my suggestions were good >.<
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Hello Secretpipe :)

Secretpipe wrote:

Here's my mod as promise~
yay! ^^

Secretpipe wrote:

[Rebirth]
01:28:914 (5,6) - Bad overlap ? Fixed!
01:34:399 (3) - Curv it ? I like it as it is now :P
01:38:856 (1) - Remove NC ? It's like that before every chorus and it fits well imo!
01:47:085 (1) - x:444 y:232 I changed the slider entirely and made some adjustments to this part
01:47:599 (2) - Flow is bad here I think ! Maybe remake this slider ? I moved and remodeled the slider!
02:00:799 (1,2) - Same , stream goes up and then , note is down ! Make something ? Moved the (2) note!
02:01:142 (3,4) - Blanket my dear Done diddly done
02:02:085 (6) - Stack ? What is this?!?!?! Fixed immediately
02:11:428 (9) - Curv this in that way : Click! Changed the slider into something else :P
04:53:771 - Spinner should start here Done!
05:28:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Make a star pattern or something else cause it looks like random circles /o/ Changed pattern!
06:01:828 - Stop spinner here and add final circle here : 06:02:171 - I hate quick circles after spinners so nah :D

Secretpipe wrote:

This. Is. Amazing! :) :) :) :) :)
Glad to discover a marathon with Stan SB's song ! Glad that you discovered it ^^
Good luck for this amazing map <3 <3
Also , hope my suggestions were good >.< Don't worry, they were xD
Shohei Ohtani
Shohei Ohtani
For some reason I got turned on when I started modding this map. It might have been because I was looking at hentai. I'm not sure.

Diff:
00:01:142 (4) - I know pattern wise this is really cute, but from a playablity standpoint, there's no need to have this jump
00:06:799 (5) - ^
00:57:028 (1,2,3,4) - I know why (4) is doing what its doing, but it'd be better to include (4) in the pattern rather than having it just look like a weird outlier. Try re-imagining the previous notes in the combo.
01:24:971 (6) - aaaaaa. Not sure how achievable this actually is
01:28:742 (4) - ^. This one in particular feels really weird since you're forcibly jerking around in all directions that don't always feel so natural.
01:33:199 (6) - ^
01:45:542 (5) - ^. From now on assume that these are an issue for me
03:50:856 (2,3,4,5,6) - I know you're mapping to the drums and that's cool but ssgl;kdfjglk this should be closer to the lyrics. It just feels a lot more natural (Especially since you have a jump that's in the middle of a word and it's really not intuitive to play nor does it feel natural.)
04:34:571 - hi there timing points.
05:58:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - muh triples

my mods on approval maps usually end up being really small for whatever reason. The biggest issue is mostly just overmapping. Artificial difficulty is not always fun.
guineaQ
1,588 posts
Joined December 2013
guineaQ
Hai, just passing by

Inc essay mod

Comment: Since it's an insane, you might feel like some things will make the map too easy compared to other parts, and since it's a mod these are just recommendations. SUPER STRICT BLANKET NAZI MOD INC I looked through parts after 4 minutes by using 1/16 bsd and checking their blankets LUL

Color code \o/
No color - General issues or mixed issues
Blanket issues
Timing issues
Hitsound issues
Flow/rhythmical issues
Pattern issues

[General]
-Offset and BPM seems fine imo
-For me BG is way too happy and light mood for the song LULZ

[Rebirth]
00:46:742 (1,2) - He is still singing "Reco-ver" at this part and having two sliders cut the rhythm o_o, single long sliders maybe?
00:51:885 (1) - His vocal stops at the 00:53:428, the red tick, not white tick. So make the spinner end at red tick :S
01:24:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Personally this stream doesn't fit in the music for me but for diff sake you can keep it
From 01:19:314 (1) - to 01:37:485 (1) - Not a big fan of using streams when there is no drum roll or anything that resembles rapid hitting in the music, but since it's a marathon you can keep the streams.
From 02:22:742 to 02:31:485 (7) - Try reducing SV for this part and use long sliders for this part, but again for diff sake, you can keep it
02:30:628 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You can change this into spinner imo
03:33:199 (1) - Eeek yet again I'm gonna stop pointing them out
03:45:028 (1) - Blanket check
03:51:028 (3) - Improve blanket pls
03:53:599 (3) - TINNNNYYY blanket improvements can be made here hue
03:56:342 (2) - Hue
03:59:428 (1,2) - You can substitute these two circles into one long slider that fits Fox Stevenson's vocal (when he is saying "shout") or even a spinner
04:06:114 (4) - Hue
04:08:342 (1) - Huehue
04:09:371 (3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - You can either make this into a spinner or a deathstream lul
04:15:199 (1) - Huehuehue
04:22:399 (3) - Definitely can improve
04:23:942 (3) - Tiny improvements
04:30:628 (4) - Tiny improvements
04:57:028 (6) - You can try XD
04:58:742 (8) - ^^
05:13:828 (1) - You can improve here
05:19:656 (1) - Please
05:21:542 (2) - Yeah you can
05:22:056 (4) - ^^
05:24:799 (6) - Huehuehuehue
05:29:256 (1) - Yes I'm serious
05:34:056 (10) - >.<
05:41:599 (1) - hehehehe
05:48:456 (1) - Praise the blanket god \o/
05:50:171 (7) - Yeah
05:52:228 (1) - I'm running out of funny comments to write
05:53:256 (4) - ahem
05:55:314 (4) - Hue
05:58:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Change these into 1/4 tick long 1 reverse sliders stream?
05:59:428 (1) - Failed my blanket test

Other than this...(*^*)b have your self a cookie

PS Hell the list got big
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
CDFA
Hello CDFA and thanks for the mod ^^


CDFA wrote:

For some reason I got turned on when I started modding this map. It might have been because I was looking at hentai. I'm not sure. Lmao xD

Diff:
00:01:142 (4) - I know pattern wise this is really cute, but from a playablity standpoint, there's no need to have this jump Removed the jump
00:06:799 (5) - ^ Same as above
00:57:028 (1,2,3,4) - I know why (4) is doing what its doing, but it'd be better to include (4) in the pattern rather than having it just look like a weird outlier. Try re-imagining the previous notes in the combo. I repositioned (2)
01:24:971 (6) - aaaaaa. Not sure how achievable this actually is Since you apparently don't like these kicksliders (Why ;_;?) I repositioned some of them BUT only a few since I don't have a problem with them myself and I love them. I'm trying to create this as a map that I would love to play and therefore it has elements that everybody might not like.
01:28:742 (4) - ^. This one in particular feels really weird since you're forcibly jerking around in all directions that don't always feel so natural. Like explained I won't be changing some of these unless it's recommended/required from a bat
01:33:199 (6) - ^
01:45:542 (5) - ^. From now on assume that these are an issue for me
03:50:856 (2,3,4,5,6) - I know you're mapping to the drums and that's cool but ssgl;kdfjglk this should be closer to the lyrics. It just feels a lot more natural (Especially since you have a jump that's in the middle of a word and it's really not intuitive to play nor does it feel natural.) I didn't notice a vocal break in the middle of the sliders and imo this really fits here
04:34:571 - hi there timing points. These shouldn't be here xD
05:58:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - muh triples remapped

my mods on approval maps usually end up being really small for whatever reason. The biggest issue is mostly just overmapping. Artificial difficulty is not always fun. I love short streams in dnb maps and therefore there might be quite a lot of streams, but none of them are too ridiculous or unfitting imo :) .

guineaQ
Thanks for the mod guineaQ :)!

guineaQ wrote:

SUPER STRICT BLANKET NAZI MOD INC
Better prepare my an*s

guineaQ wrote:

00:46:742 (1,2) - He is still singing "Reco-ver" at this part and having two sliders cut the rhythm o_o, single long sliders maybe? I removed the circle on first slider but otherwise left it as it is

guineaQ wrote:

00:51:885 (1) - His vocal stops at the 00:53:428, the red tick, not white tick. So make the spinner end at red tick :S Done!

guineaQ wrote:

01:24:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Personally this stream doesn't fit in the music for me but for diff sake you can keep it I will keep all of the streams since I like them and love playing them. I will skip all spinner req or notifications on streams :s (because im lazy)

guineaQ wrote:

03:45:028 (1) - Blanket check Here come the blankets. I TRIED to make them all look nice and pretty, and now I'm exhausted :o

guineaQ wrote:

05:58:056 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Change these into 1/4 tick long 1 reverse sliders stream? Remapped
ninja-hands
24 posts
Joined January 2013
ninja-hands
Hi again!!

I have played this map soooo many times, it is SO GOOD NOW! This seriously needs approving it is perfect as it is, except one slight and picky detail:

01:22:399 (1,2,3,4) - These sliders can be hard to hit imo, they look good but I think quite a few people are going to have some trouble hitting this sequence...

I understand if you don't want to change it, that is perfectly fine with me. Other than that, the map is COMPLETE PERFECTION :D Loving it so much!!
I got the lyrics running through my head as I type this lol, I have played it too much :lol:

Peace 8-)
Satella
155 posts
Joined September 2013
Satella
im still waiting for this to get ranked pls hurry up
Satella
155 posts
Joined September 2013
Satella
00:54:971 (1) - 01:15:199 (4) : Make this part less jumpy, really annoying with inconsistent spacing, thats all

no kds
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
All mods applied now and made some changes of my own too!
Asphyxia
Beatmap Nominator
2,001 posts
Joined June 2012
Asphyxia
IRC Log
19:51 ProfessionalBox: Noniin, lopultakin. Tässä oli internetin kanssa ongelmia koko päivän niin en kyennyt keskustelemaan aikaisemmin. Satuitko saamaan sen viestin jonka laitoin aikaisemmin päivällä, koskien BAT modin tarvetta?
19:53 Asphyxia: sain jonku forum-pm viestin pelaaja_x:ltä mutten keneltäkää muulta
19:53 Asphyxia: ja seki oli erm
19:54 Asphyxia: 3-6 pvää sit?
19:54 ProfessionalBox: Aah ok
19:54 ProfessionalBox: no siis tosiaan
19:55 ProfessionalBox: Mulla on tossa pari kk vanha biisi ja sellasessa kunnossa että on muutamat kaverit sanonu että pitäs hommata BAT modi, katoin sun mod policyn tost ja huomasin et oot suomesta (Onnittelut BAT-asemasta!) ja katoin että saatat modata jos kysyy in-game
19:56 ProfessionalBox: Kappale on dnb genreä
19:56 Asphyxia: kiitti :D mut kuten ''current status'' sanoo, haluisin mennä omas järjestyksessä mappien kanssa, valita omat jnejne silleen etten ottais suoraan requesteja vastaan
19:57 Asphyxia: mut voin vilkasta sitä suoraan nopee ja sanoo et onk valmis BAT modille
19:57 Asphyxia: jnejne
19:57 Asphyxia: ja samalla antaa ehk muutaman vinkin!
19:57 ProfessionalBox: ymmärsin siis väärin xD
19:57 ProfessionalBox: oikeesti
19:57 ProfessionalBox: nice
19:57 ProfessionalBox: odotas hetki niin linkkaan
19:58 Asphyxia: latasin jo
19:58 Asphyxia: lel
19:58 Asphyxia: pitää tehä nopee juttu eka tosin
19:58 Asphyxia: brb
19:58 ProfessionalBox: op
19:58 ProfessionalBox: ei kiirettä
19:58 Asphyxia: tuntuu vaan niin oudolta puhuu suomee jos modaa mappia
19:59 Asphyxia: en ees tiedä mitä sanaa käyttää suomeks jos puhun flowista
19:59 ProfessionalBox: menee englantikin
19:59 ProfessionalBox: :D
19:59 Asphyxia: tai blanket
19:59 Asphyxia: xD
19:59 ProfessionalBox: Ajattelin vaan että kivempi lähestyä suomenkielel kun kerran oot suomesta
19:59 ProfessionalBox: xD
19:59 Asphyxia: joo joo sis tottakai suomee puhutaan mut en vaan osaa käyttää suomenkielisiä termejä läheskään kaikille sanoille
19:59 Asphyxia: :P
20:00 ProfessionalBox: ja silti oot bat?
20:00 ProfessionalBox: ppls
20:00 Asphyxia: lol
20:00 Asphyxia: :(
20:00 Asphyxia: reported
20:00 ProfessionalBox: pls mod my map
20:00 ProfessionalBox: ;_;
20:00 ProfessionalBox: no reporterino
20:00 Asphyxia: mut kuitenki
20:01 Asphyxia: ekaks mikä pistää silmään taustakuva
20:01 Asphyxia: ite en usko et tällanen kesäinen maisema mikä onkaa sopii kovin hyvin dnb kanssa
20:01 Asphyxia: riippuu biisistä tosin
20:01 Asphyxia: mutta tää nyt on vähä silleen ja silleen, joku tummempi teema kuten avaruus sopis paljon paremmin
20:01 Asphyxia: esimerkkinä
20:01 *Asphyxia is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/244230 Stan SB - Let This Go]
20:01 ProfessionalBox: Joo koitin katella useita
20:01 ProfessionalBox: mm
20:02 Asphyxia: jos meet esim google kuvahakuun / wallbase.cc niin voit vaan hakee
20:02 Asphyxia: ''space'
20:02 Asphyxia: ja sielt tulee varmasti joku mist voisit tykkää
20:02 Asphyxia: muista oikee reso!
20:02 ProfessionalBox: joo oon kattonu deviantartist mut ei oo kyl iskeny silmää sellasii kuvia
20:03 Asphyxia: mut siis mitä sanaa ite käyttäisit suomeks jos puhut flowista
20:03 ProfessionalBox: Toisaalta eihän tuo huonoin mahdollinen nyt ole kun kappale on sellanen menevä duuribiisi ja tuo sopii sellaseen
20:03 ProfessionalBox: käyttäsin sanaa kulku
20:03 ProfessionalBox: xD
20:03 Asphyxia: okei koska tääl on esim
20:03 ProfessionalBox: puhu vaa flowsta
20:03 Asphyxia: virtaus
20:03 Asphyxia: mm kulku on kyl aika sopiva
20:03 Asphyxia: ei vittu vihaan suomenkieltä
20:03 ProfessionalBox: virtaus ah
20:03 Asphyxia: paskin kieli
20:03 ProfessionalBox: :D:DD:D:D
20:04 ProfessionalBox: Koitan rakentaa mapit flown perusteella, sen jälkeen katellaan mikä on visuaalisesti hienoo yms
20:05 Asphyxia: okei no voin kattoo kertosäkeen perusteella + intron avul ettei mappi oo vielä valmis approvediks (anteeks jos rikoin unelmat, oon hankala ihminen ketä voi tyydyttää mapilla)
20:05 Asphyxia: se on kuitenki hienoa miten suomalaiset on ruvennu mappaamaan
20:05 Asphyxia: ja tää ei oo tosiaankaa paha
20:06 Asphyxia: ehk eniten flow virheitä + muutama rytmijuttu
20:06 ProfessionalBox: Lähinnä kiinnostaa tietää että mitä pitää parantaa
20:06 Asphyxia: mm joo annas kun annan esimerkkejä
20:06 ProfessionalBox: se builduppi enne kertosäettä on iha pain in the ass mapata
20:06 Asphyxia: joo esim
20:06 Asphyxia: 00:02:171 (7,1) -
20:06 Asphyxia: blanket ei oo täydellinen, jos pistät nuotin ja katot approach raten perusteel miten se menee
20:06 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9j4bc/db46d6b6f1.jpg
20:07 Asphyxia: niin se on väärin
20:07 ProfessionalBox: aaaaaaaaaa
20:07 Asphyxia: varmaan tiedät miten tehdään oikeanlainen vai näytänkö esimerkin miltä se pitäis näyttää?
20:07 ProfessionalBox: kiva noita on aina silmämääräsesti korjata
20:07 ProfessionalBox: kerro toki joku temppu
20:07 ProfessionalBox: noita on meinaa aivan helvetisti tossa mapissa
20:07 Asphyxia: jep sen takii en tykkää bubblee mitn mappeja jos kauheesti näit virheitä
20:08 Asphyxia: koska sen mapin laatu menee mulla huikeesti alas
20:08 ProfessionalBox: Siis ihan ymmärrettävää että pitää olla jotku standardit joiden mukaa buubbletaa
20:08 Asphyxia: no siis, esim jos laitat tohon nuotin, voit ottaa grid snapin pois hetkeks, muotoilla sliderii vähäsen sen keskipointin kaa, ja tadaa -> http://puu.sh/9j4k5/d60f8528ac.jpg
20:08 ProfessionalBox: virheet tietenkin korjataan
20:09 Asphyxia: täydellinen blanket
20:09 ProfessionalBox: enkää oo butthurt koska en odottanu saavani bubblea :D
20:09 Asphyxia: mut siis voin sanoo et sun intros on tehty yllättävin hyvin, ne flow virheet tulee vast vähä ennen ekaa kertosäet
20:10 Asphyxia: mut siis, jos sulla on esim00:03:371 (2,3) - tällanen tilanne, yritä pitää distance snap tasasena verrattuna muuhun mappiin verrattuna
20:10 Asphyxia: koska esim tossa musiikki ei oikeen muutu niin ei oo mitään syytä vaihtaa distance snappia pienemmäks EIKÄ suuremmaks
20:11 Asphyxia: 00:04:228 (1,2,3,4) - sama pätee tähän
20:11 Asphyxia: 00:05:256 (4,1) - blanket
20:11 Asphyxia: yleensä se ei oo niin paha asia jos kyseessä or maratoonimappi, mut jos yrität pitää spacinging kohtuullisen tasasena kohdissa missä ei musiikki muutu, sen parempi
20:11 ProfessionalBox: Uskon että lähes kaikissa blanketeissa on pientä hienosäätöä ja joo tosiaan vihaan distance snappiä
20:12 ProfessionalBox: käyn kylläkin nyt läpi sen kanssa
20:12 Asphyxia: 00:08:342 (1,2,3) - tää on tosi outo koska vika nuotti menee jotenkin sivuun
20:12 Asphyxia: vaikka tää näyttäis paljon paremmalta suorana viivana vaan
20:12 Asphyxia: eli jos haluut, pistä 00:09:714 (3) - x:65 y:273
20:13 ProfessionalBox: toki
20:13 ProfessionalBox: helposti korjattu
20:15 Asphyxia: 00:11:085 (1,2) - hyvä esimerkki miten flow on rikki tässä
20:16 Asphyxia: jos katot miten 1 siirtyy 2
20:16 Asphyxia: ei mee mee miten normaalisti pitäisi
20:16 Asphyxia: koska sun kursoris joutuu tekee ihme liikkeen ainaki editorin perusteella
20:16 ProfessionalBox: hmm
20:17 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9j4Wu/ffccf0ed30.jpg
20:18 Asphyxia: imo paljon parempi ku nykynen
20:18 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9j4Wu/ffccf0ed30.jpg
20:18 ProfessionalBox: hetkinen
20:18 ProfessionalBox: mitäs helvettiä tuo on
20:18 Asphyxia: heheh
20:18 Asphyxia: dat bancho
20:18 ProfessionalBox: odotas nyt
20:18 Asphyxia: mut siis mikä?
20:18 Asphyxia: 00:11:085 (1,2) -
20:18 ProfessionalBox: tuo on varmaan ties kuinka vanha versio
20:18 ProfessionalBox: mulla toi on näin
20:18 Asphyxia: o.o
20:18 Asphyxia: ootko updatennu sit?
20:19 Asphyxia: koska ''last pending version''
20:19 Asphyxia: että
20:19 ProfessionalBox: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1688917
20:19 ProfessionalBox: joo just tänää laitoin :D
20:19 ProfessionalBox: no odotas hieman
20:19 Asphyxia: siis
20:19 Asphyxia: tarkotat että sulla on toi kohta samanlaisena kun mun esimerkissä, joo?
20:19 Asphyxia: koska jos ei, muuta se sellaseks
20:20 ProfessionalBox: siis mulla on ollut noin joskus vanhemmassa versiossa
20:20 ProfessionalBox: sitten päätin muuttaa
20:20 Asphyxia: ei ollu hyvä muutos vaihtaa http://puu.sh/9j584/eeb557208e.jpg tähän
20:21 Asphyxia: saanko jatkaa vai...?
20:21 ProfessionalBox: jatka toki, oon vaan aivan hemmetin hämmentynyt
20:21 ProfessionalBox: siis onko tossa sun ekassa puush:issa se niinkun se näky sulla alunperin, vai muutitko sen tollaseks
20:21 Asphyxia: siis muutin sen sellaseks
20:22 Asphyxia: koska tolta (tai lähes tolta) se pitäis näyttää
20:22 ProfessionalBox: noniin
20:22 ProfessionalBox: no se selittää
20:22 ProfessionalBox: :D
20:22 ProfessionalBox: muutan toki
20:22 Asphyxia: eli siis jos sanon vaik et flow on rikki niin näytän aina sulle esimerkin miltä sen PITÄISI näyttää
20:23 ProfessionalBox: joo
20:23 ProfessionalBox: nyt ymmärrän
20:23 ProfessionalBox: Hämmennyin siis siitä että luulin että sulla on joku vanha versio kun oli niin samanoloinen
20:23 Asphyxia: 00:13:485 (4,1) - Okei tässä, nelosen ei tosiaankaan pitäis koskettaa ykköstä koska se näyttää vaan epäpuhtaalta
20:23 Asphyxia: joten, blankettaa ykkönen nelosen kanssa
20:24 Asphyxia: eli pistä se kurvi menemään toiseen suuntaan, ja että se pelais + näyttäis paremmalta, käännä sitä kanssa
20:24 Asphyxia: = tulos olisi tämä http://puu.sh/9j5p0/ae82f330ed.jpg
20:25 Asphyxia: ja yritä laittaa 2 missä se on tossa esimerkissä koska tossa on paljon parempi flow
20:25 ProfessionalBox: Roger that
20:25 Asphyxia: ja kerta muutat 2 spacingii, niin muista liikuttaa kolmosta kanssa
20:26 Asphyxia: 00:21:885 (1) - Vaikka tää sopii laulan ääneen ja miten pitkä ''faceee it'' on, et ottanut yhtään huomioon vahvaa beattia 00:22:056 -
20:27 Asphyxia: yleensä stanzat (isot valkoset tollaset paskat viivat) on ne tärkeimmät kohat
20:27 Asphyxia: mitä ei saa jättää välistä, ellei nyt siin satu olemaan iskua?
20:28 Asphyxia: sykettä?
20:28 Asphyxia: sama se
20:28 ProfessionalBox: pidennän 00:21:371 (4) - ja siirrän 00:21:885 (1) - ?
20:28 Asphyxia: nope
20:28 Asphyxia: lyhennät 00:21:885 (1) - 1/2:lla, ja lisäät nuotin 00:21:885 -
20:28 Asphyxia: eli rytmi -> http://puu.sh/9j5ER/efbd953ca5.jpg
20:28 Asphyxia: sopii paljon paremmin
20:29 ProfessionalBox: aah
20:29 ProfessionalBox: ookei
20:29 Asphyxia: 00:25:828 (1) - en ite tykkää tästäkään , mut sil nyt ei oo paljon välii sillä se sopii vokaaleihin ihan ok
20:30 Asphyxia: 00:25:828 (1,2) - sama juttu, siirtyminen 1->2 ois voinu tehdä paremmin, esim tällein; http://puu.sh/9j5Lk/ef3a2ddd29.jpg
20:30 Asphyxia: TAI
20:30 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9j5My/5dc6a69623.jpg
20:30 Asphyxia: mut ^ joutuu siirtämään kolmosta niin en suosittele
20:31 Asphyxia: sama jatkuu aina vähä väliin, esim 00:38:514 (1,2) -
20:31 Asphyxia: ja kerta näit muutaman esimerkin jo, tiedät varmaan hyvin (tai suunilleen) miten korjata
20:32 ProfessionalBox: mm
20:32 ProfessionalBox: keksin jotain
20:32 Asphyxia: 01:14:171 (1,2,3,4) - Okei, tää rytmi kelpaa pelattavaksi, mutta jos kuuntelet 25%:lla, siin on oikeesti striimi
20:33 Asphyxia: heikompi kun 01:15:542 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) -
20:33 Asphyxia: mutta striimi sekin
20:33 Asphyxia: joten, voit käyttää 1/4 repeat slidereita tähän hätään TAI tehdä uuden striimin
20:33 Asphyxia: sekin käy koska approved map
20:33 ProfessionalBox: Joo - en halua laittaa pitkää streamia siihen
20:33 ProfessionalBox: siks tossa on noi sliderit
20:33 Asphyxia: joten 1/4 slider
20:33 ProfessionalBox: laitan sellaset
20:34 Asphyxia: haluutko esimerkki rytmin
20:34 Asphyxia: mikä toimis tosi hyvin
20:34 ProfessionalBox: kerro pls ;_;
20:35 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9j67l/97c545ff66.jpg
20:36 Asphyxia: 01:16:571 (1,1) - plz älä laita niitä koskemaan toisiinsa + lisää spacing
20:36 Asphyxia: syy siihen on se että se poistais sen kosketuksen + pelais paremmin
20:36 Asphyxia: nyt aika tylsää vaan alottaa biisin kertosäe tollasesta
20:37 ProfessionalBox: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1688993¨parempi?
20:37 ProfessionalBox: vai suurempi spacing
20:37 Asphyxia: no ite laittaisin sen sliderin x:472 y:420, siirtyis paremmin seuraaviin objekteihin kans
20:37 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9j6gT/19200813ee.jpg
20:38 ProfessionalBox: Ei yhtään hullumpi - koitan keksiä jotain originaalia ettei tästä ihan tuu sun mappias xD
20:39 Asphyxia: ja siis, tällast ilmestyy aika monessa paikkaa, esim01:18:285 (6,7) - ja 01:22:399 (1,2,3,4) -
20:39 Asphyxia: vaikka 1,2,3,4 näyttää hienolta, se ei pelaa niin hyvin miten se voias
20:39 Asphyxia: vois*
20:41 ProfessionalBox: eli tällasissa on sun mielestä flow-onglema? 01:18:285 (6,7) -
20:42 Asphyxia: jep
20:42 Asphyxia: ja tohon 1,2,3,4 kohtaan kanssa, esim tällanen sopis siihe
20:42 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9j6zn/3124ff9dd5.jpg
20:42 Asphyxia: http://puu.sh/9j6C5/53f70a8321.jpg
20:42 Asphyxia: esim
20:42 Asphyxia: toi on mun mappaustyyli niin voit tehä sen miten haluut
20:43 ProfessionalBox: Korjaan tuon 1,2,3,4 tuollasella esimerkillä
20:44 Asphyxia: mut siis mapin ongelmana on enimmäkseen nää
20:44 ProfessionalBox: Mutta joo ite ku pelailen ni tuo 01:18:285 (6,7) - on tuntunut ihan luonnolliselta ja sen takia sitä mallia voi olla pari tuollasta
20:44 Asphyxia: mut siis esim 03:13:485 (1,2) - näyttää + pelaa aika varmasti paljon paremmin tohon verrattuna
20:45 Asphyxia: se voi olla vaan minä, tosin
20:45 Asphyxia: mut siis, jos saat korjattua enimmät tällaset + jos jaksaisit korjaa blanketit
20:45 Asphyxia: mappis ois tosi, tosi paljon parempi
20:45 Asphyxia: en tietenkää sano että tää nykynenkää ois mitenkää huono
20:46 ProfessionalBox: Joo no nyt kun on oikea tapa korjata blanketit
20:46 ProfessionalBox: ni korjaan jokasen
20:46 ProfessionalBox: ennen oon ihan silmämääräsesti vedelly
20:46 Asphyxia: oon itseasiassa yllättynyt miten hyvin osasit mapata alotteliaks
20:46 ProfessionalBox: oletin että kaikki tekee nin :D
20:46 Asphyxia: pysyit yleensä hyvin rytmissä mukana, tajuut mappaamisen perusidean
20:46 ProfessionalBox: äläs nyt imartele liikoja nolostuu ihan
20:46 ProfessionalBox: siis rytmi ei oo ongelma kun olen muusikko
20:46 Asphyxia: ehk vähän vielä sitä hienosäätöö niin oot oikeel polulla!
20:47 ProfessionalBox: kiitti ;_;
20:47 Asphyxia: postaanpa login sinne threadiin
20:47 Asphyxia: sori niin lyhyest modist, en jaksa käsitellä ihan jokasta asiaa nyt
20:47 ProfessionalBox: voinko tulla ruinaa bubblee sulta ku oon käyny kaikki noi läpi
20:47 ProfessionalBox: xD
20:47 Asphyxia: + ei ollu ees tavallaan tarkotus tehä modia
20:47 Asphyxia: ermmmm
20:47 Asphyxia: no jos haluut bubblee niin sit tarviit kyl monta modia viel
20:47 Asphyxia: tai ehkä et
20:47 Asphyxia: riippuu miten korjailet
20:48 Asphyxia: mut siis suosittelen et pyydät hyvä modaajia modaamaan mappias
20:48 Asphyxia: esimerkkejä vois olla esim
20:48 Asphyxia: ermmm
20:48 Asphyxia: Priti on ihan hyvä, Lanturn, Hinsvar, Mao, Desperate-kun, Natsu
20:49 Asphyxia: ja on niitä monta muuta mutten jaksa vaan luetella <-<
20:49 ProfessionalBox: En kehtaa pritiltä enää kysyä kun tuli jo kysyttyä mutta ei modia kuulunut vaikka lupasi
20:49 ProfessionalBox: :D
20:49 Asphyxia: jos se lupas modaa
20:49 Asphyxia: niin sanot sille että modaa sen
20:49 Asphyxia: lupaus on lupais
20:49 ProfessionalBox: annatko käyntikortin ni ottaa asian tosissaan
20:49 Asphyxia: lupaus
20:49 Asphyxia: sitä ei rikota
20:49 Asphyxia: joo sanon sille suoraa
20:49 ProfessionalBox: :D:DD:D
20:50 ProfessionalBox: Tuli ihan vaan mieleen että oothan sä ainoa suomalainen bat?
20:50 Asphyxia: mut siis, yritä ettii lisää modeja (tarvittaessa paljon koska haluut mappis olemaan mahdollisemman hyvä ennenku approved)
20:50 Asphyxia: mm joo täl hetkel oon
20:50 Asphyxia: Mara tais olla kauan, kauan sitten
20:50 Asphyxia: mutta nykyään alumni
20:50 ProfessionalBox: ei sillä että muilta ruinaisin
20:51 ProfessionalBox: Eli on ollut muita ennen sua
20:51 ProfessionalBox: nice
20:51 ProfessionalBox: Mut tosiaa jos sen login heitin threadii ni katon sen sielt
20:51 Asphyxia: uhh teen sen nyt
20:51 Asphyxia: pitää savee eka
20:51 Asphyxia: kiva ku kuuntelit ja suostuit korjaamaan :D
20:51 ProfessionalBox: Siis tottakai
20:51 Asphyxia: mut joo, lupaava mappaaja oot kunhan jaksat yrittää

I gave him suggestions how to improve the flow, blankets and some rhythm changes were done, mostly flow though. I think we have a very promising mapper over here! (Log is in finnish, of course). GL ~
Secretpipe
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I want learn finnish ;w;
ProfessionalBox
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Just put that on google translate, Secret :D
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Satella
google translate works flawlessy everytime 10/10
ProfessionalBox
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SnickarN wrote:

google translate works flawlessy everytime 10/10

True story :|
Myxo
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Wow, for some reason this really reminds me of Asphyxia's mapping o: Then that's finnish mapping style, I guess???
Nice map owo
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Desperate-kun wrote:

Wow, for some reason this really reminds me of Asphyxia's mapping o: Then that's finnish mapping style, I guess???
Nice map owo
I guess Asphyxia mapped the map for me with that irc chat :o

(I take that as a compliment btw - Thanks <3!)
Secretpipe
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I don't know why but I just earned a lot of KD o:
Have 3 stars !
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Secretpipe wrote:

I don't know why but I just earned a lot of KD o:
Have 3 stars !
<3
P A N
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m4m from my queue :3

01:04:742 (1,3,4,5) - select them all and move them until (1) is on 220|112 for better symmetry.
01:05:942 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - try this?
02:38:514 (3,4,5) - 68|288 , 216|288 , 68|200.
02:41:599 (3,4,5,6) - make like this is more flow imo.
03:25:485 (5) - should be on 295|161 imo, for symmetry.
03:40:571 - I think it need to be clicked, vocal and strong beat, feel weird.
05:28:056 (1,5) - 96|220 , 60|288.
05:31:828 (8) - what about move to 172|156 or other place where futher from next slider since the next slider is strong beat but you use just a little spacing.
05:39:628 (2) - 1 grid left

good luck :3
ProfessionalBox
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Thanks for the M4M P A N

I agreed with your points and changed the patterns to be exact, so basically I applied everything! :P
Satella
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Satella
BATs hurry up ples

we want this ranked now
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Just some fine Nazi adjustments to some blankets:

01:22:399 (1,2,3,4) -
screenshots and code


489,195,82399,6,0,P|488:284|401:337,1,184.000003509522,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
404,240,82914,2,0,P|399:163|485:97,1,184.000003509522
386,172,83428,2,0,P|313:214|222:170,1,184.000003509522,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
146,116,83942,2,0,P|223:75|312:125,1,184.000003509522
01:36:114 (1) -
screenshot and code!

119,211,96114,6,0,P|133:266|257:275,1,184.000003509522,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
02:24:114 (5) -
you know what's inside.

435,328,144114,2,0,P|462:279|427:199,1,136.000002593994
02:57:714 (1) -
;)

70,182,177714,6,0,P|163:165|177:69,1,191.999994140625,0|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
03:08:471 (1) -
8-)

257,244,188342,6,0,P|197:228|180:99,1,191.999994140625,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

You may not use some of them where you can barely sense any difference though... anyway, nice beatmap! I liked it!
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ProfessionalBox

SnickarN wrote:

BATs hurry up ples

we want this ranked now
xD
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox
Thanks for the mod CrazyrabbitKGE, Applied all of the blanket fixes!
Dark Fang
1,981 posts
Joined February 2011
Dark Fang
[General]

  1. just saying about Letterbox. 04:53:771 (1) - how about remove this spinner? because if you remove this spinner, the Letterbox active until 04:55:999 - here. that feel more good for this music. at least, i felt.
  2. need more strong hitsound. or not.
[Rebirth]

  1. 00:14:342 (2) - I think you should follow electric sound instead of vocal at these silent parts. generally, this song's electric sound is stronger than vocal. at the same time, at least, the vocal is stronger than electric sound at here. but most players will follow elec sound. because that sound is central of this song.
    00:21:371 (4) - this part too. and others :)
  2. 00:43:314 (4,5) - just suggest. I disagree about that. your map is very clear overall. but that 1/4 sliders break your map's cleanliness a little bit. how about reduce them 1/4 sliders. 01:28:571 (3,4) - like this too awkward.
  3. 03:14:856 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - please add Newcombo each jumpy part. that is little kindness for some players.
  4. 04:01:485 (1) - distance is too close with next note. how about move to (240,264) or yourself. at least, make distance more than current.
  5. 05:16:914 - how about stuff beat as follow drum. like use slider repeat, or your tech. like this anyway.. that fit with music more than current. IMO
    SPOILER
  6. 05:35:085 (4) - keep the spacing with (5) slider.
anyway good map then
NaxelCL
NaxelCL
Good Luck on this!
ProfessionalBox
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
771 posts
Joined September 2013
Topic Starter
ProfessionalBox

NaxelCL wrote:

Good Luck on this!
Thank you :) !
Secretpipe
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Joined December 2012
Secretpipe
It smells good for you :D
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