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The map is quite nice.
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- 00:03:035 - Maybe its just me, but the hitsounds here sound really loud, they are way too stronger than the music here, which is just instrumental. I think you can come lower the volume down to at least 60%
- 00:17:557 (4) - Whistle at the start sounds nice to me.
- 01:25:391 (3) - You missed a clap at the end.
- 02:14:499 (1) - I feel the slider here looks rather strange, I know you are aiming for a curve here, but I think if you improve the curve this will look much much better.
- 02:40:487 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it stacks with 02:38:576 (4) - , and well makes the map look cleaner overall here, just my personal thought on how this should be.
- 00:26:920 (5) - I really feel its unnecessary for ending the slider here, there is still the instruments going a better transition would be easier shown by if you reversed this all way to blue tick.
- 00:58:066 (1) - The finish with the strong beat is so weird with stacking, I feel with such a strong beat, there should be some movement with the cursor. perhaps unstack and move it down from previous circle?
- 01:23:098 (2) - I felt this was a jump, could you place them farther to make them more readable?
- 01:26:729 (4) - Move closer? or make them overlap more, so I don't think this begins 1 tick later.
- 01:54:627 (1,2,3,4,5) - Better to curve it to the right more and center, even if it looks symmetrical. It will look nicer centered and placed in the right direction.
- 02:35:710 (1) - So weird to click here, would just remove the note here and add a note at the white tick at the end of this slider or downbeat. feels more natural.
- 00:43:735 (4) - I would like this to blanket slightly better, just saying. cause your mapping really focuses on blankets and such, just want to clean this part up.
- 01:06:283 (5,6) - For here, increasing SV changes, work way better, for 5 , increase to 1.20 and 6 increase to 1.40 , I feel you get a better effect here from the sliders if done so.
- 01:56:729 (5,6) - ^
- 01:07:429 (2) - Fix the stacking, so it better fits 01:05:710 (1) -
- 01:33:417 (2) - I would move this down more to make this slightly overlap, you can obviously make it more readable, if you do so.
- 02:52:716 (1) - Same ^
- 03:16:410 (4) - Why didn't you blanket this one? seems unusual to your style. same for 03:16:792 (5) -
- 02:20:614 (7) - I would add a new combo here, to fit better with the downbeat.
The map is quite nice.