Random mod~ (I kinda like this song - also new modder, don't kill please QQ)
Good luck~
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Columns: 0/1/2/3
[AIMod/Timing/BPM/Offset/Settings]
[AIMod/Timing/BPM/Offset/Settings]
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- 01:08:999 - Maybe move to column 0 (relative position consistency with 01:08:076 (finish off pattern)?
-> Alternatively maybe move 01:09:230 to column 0 and 01:09:460 to column 1 (finish your left-right-left pattern)? - 01:17:999 - Missing note (instrumental consistency with 01:17:076 and other places) - maybe try moving 01:17:768 to column 1 and add a note here at column 2? (optional, it plays kind of ok without it)
- 01:21:922 - Maybe add note to column 1 (seems to be a missing note, this part is a pretty loud drum stream, kinda feels weird not having anything here. (also optional)
- 00:07:383 - Seems a bit overlayered, the main thing here is the vocal and there's no contrast between this and 00:08:307 where there's a burst in the background instruments (delete column 3 to follow pitch)?
- 01:11:999 - Missing note (consistency with 00:08:307)?
- (00:08:307 to 00:23:076) - Double usage seems nearly random (e.g. 00:19:845 and 00:22:614 would probably work as a double, but 00:20:076 probably wouldn't because there's no actual loud sound. A double at 00:20:307 would also break instrumental consistency with 00:19:383 and everywhere else where that instrument is playing) - maybe emphasise every other double white line (start of music phrase) and also use doubles wherever you hear this instrument at 00:15:230)?
->00:21:922 also seems like a missing note (but kinda faint so this is optional) - The first two vocal phrases can be divided into: (00:23:076 to 00:30:440) and (00:30:440 to 00:37:845) (they can probably be divided further but since this is NM, dividing it at every sentence seems fine)
->Keeping that in mind, add a LN to 00:30:460 (to the next double white line) for consistency with 00:23:076, and make 00:24:922 (24922|3) into a normal note for consistency with 00:32:307?
->00:33:691 to 00:36:691 - One of the lines seem to be following vocal suddenly - and this is inconsistent with (00:27:460 to 00:29:768):
->Maybe just stick to following background music since this feels a bit random, or alternatively...
->If you follow vocal here, then at least have one of the lines follow vocal for the other section (00:27:460 to 00:29:768) too?
->You can probably stop the vocal at 00:30:460 - the rest is technically fading away.
->00:37:845 - Double for emphasis (instrumental consistency with 00:23:076)? - 00:53:076 - Delete one - inconsistent with 00:56:768 / 01:00:460 / etc etc.
- 00:53:999 / 00:55:845 etc - Maybe emphasise this instrument as a double since the sound it's making is pretty loud?
- 01:06:807 - Misplaced stream (blue line is a ghost position) - and 01:07:383 would work as a double for emphasis since there's a loud burst in music... maybe try this? http://puu.sh/bCxqt/82c8709c93.jpg
- 01:32:999 / 01:34:845 - Inconsistent with 01:17:999 / 01:19:614 where you have LNs following vocal- maybe:
-> Add note and make into an LN (stop at 01:34:845), and
->Make 01:34:845 into an LN (stop at 01:35:537)? - 01:44:307 - Maybe just follow your previous two patterns for this (01:36:922 and 01:40;614) instead of two LNs (optional - two LNs also kinda work since this is the ending (seems deliberately placed), but keep in mind this is technically a consistency break so I'd recommend following your previous patterns).
- 00:07:383 - Just vocal here, can probably delete the normal note?
- 00:08:307 to 00:23:076 - A few inconsistencies in double and LN usage - Not sure if this is deliberate since the intensity only increases on the third playthrough, so maybe add one to:
->00:08:307 - Because this needs to be emphasised more than 00:07:845
->00:09:230 / 00:10:153 / 00:11:076 / 00:12:922 / 00:13:845 / 00:15:691 / 00:21:230 - for instrumental consistency with 00:08:307 / 00:16:614 / 00:17:537 etc (i.e. keep using doubles for that instrument)?
->00:11:999 - Two LNs to hold vocal - but you didn't use this at 00:08:307 so maybe change one into a normal note? Also gives you more space to add some notes from the point above
->00:14:076 - Not sure if deliberate or not, maybe move to column 1 to keep the trill pattern (optional)?
->Delete one from 00:20:999 (preferably column 0 to reduce awkwardness and for consistency with 00:14:537)? - 00:22:383 - Maybe delete one (music is roughly the same strength as 00:22:153 but weaker than 00:22:614)?
- 00:23:076 / 00:30:460 - Maybe use triples since this can be emphasised a bit more I think? (music burst)
- 00:24:922 - Add one for music emphasis?
- 00:25:153 - Add one for emphasis change (white -> red)?
- 00:27:691 to 00:28:614 - Emphasis change seems a bit early - maybe doubles on red until the double white line at 00:28:614, before changing emphasis to white line:
- Add one to 00:27:922 / 00:28:383 / 00:28:614, then delete one from 00:28:153?
- 00:33:922 to 00:35:999 - Somehow your pattern completely breaks down at this point after those random triples - but the music is pretty much consistent for most of this section... maybe try:
->Delete one from 00:33:922 / 00:34:845 (random inconsistent triples)
->Add one to 00:34:383 and 00:35:307 (pattern consistency)
->00:35:999 is a good place to stop the pattern - so maybe move 00:36:230 (36230|3) to column 1 at 00:36:460? (00:36:460 seems like a missing note / inconsistency)
->May have to move some notes around to avoid some awkward patterns - Add one to 00:40:153 / 00:40:614 / 00:41:076 / 00:41:999 / 00:42:460 / 00:42:922 / 00:43:845 / 00:44:307 / 00:44:768 for instrumental / pattern consistency with (00:37:845 to 00:39:691)?
- 00:50:768 - Missing a note - same instruments as 00:48:922 - I do realise that adding a full-length LN will mean that the pattern will "overflow" into the next pattern - but technically this is a consistency break, so maybe add an LN ending at 01:51:691 (on column 3 - and move the two notes that the LN cuts across)?
- 00:52:014 / 00:59:999 - Missing note (add one - wrong emphasis and for consistency with 00:56:307)
- 00:53:537 - I only hear vocal here - delete one to keep consistent with 00:57:230?
- 01:07:383 - Add one (music burst)?
- 01:09:230 / 01:12:922 - Add one for emphasis? Seems inconsistent with e.g. 01:11:076 and 01:14:768
- 01:13:614 - I don't hear much happening (compared to 01:14:537) so maybe delete one here?
- 01:14:537 - Move column 1 to 3 to follow pitch?
- 01:14:999 (74999|3,74999|0,75114|2,75114|1,75230|0,75230|3) - Maybe copy note position of 01:14:076 (74076|2,74076|1,74191|3,74191|0,74307|2,74307|1) - or it sounds a bit imbalanced (so you have two of those in a row which are white-pink-white and two in a row which are "inverted" (i.e. pink-white-pink) - image: http://puu.sh/bCEQr/957d97013b.jpg?
- 01:16:845 (76845|0,76960|1,77076|2) - Maybe either:
->Add one to each to "balance" the pattern at 01:15:922 (75922|1,75922|2,76037|3,76037|0,76153|1,76153|2) (maybe a white-pink-white pattern since your previous one was pink-white-pink?) (suggested - image: http://puu.sh/bCESz/bdbf773f5f.jpg) or alternatively,
->Delete one from each double of 01:15:922 (75922|2,75922|1,76037|0,76037|3,76153|2,76153|1) (not really suggested since this will probably break balance)
->Maybe move 01:16:614 (76614|3) to column 2 to avoid awkwardness as well if you decide to change the pattern)? - 01:20:307 - Maybe add one (column 3) for consistency with 01:18:460? (optional, since this is in the middle of a stream)
- 01:21:807 / 01:21:922 / 01:22:037 - Maybe doubles for consistency with 01:21:691? (But might have an awkward pattern if you do this so this is optional).
- 01:21:691 - the 4-note pattern here is sort of inconsistent with 00:52:153 (corresponding points) - maybe change 00:52:153 to match 01:21:691 :
->Add note to 00:52:268, then
->Delete a note from 00:52:383, then
->Add note to 00:52:499?
Good luck~