sweet ARMS - Trust in you (TV Size) · forum

wcx19911123

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2014-03-21T10:53:13+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2014年5月13日 at 15:09:50

Artist: sweet ARMS
Title: Trust in you (TV Size)
Source: デート・ア・ライブ Ⅱ
Tags: DATE A LIVE 2 opening Fycho
BPM: 190
Filesize: 17802kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:

Easy (3.23 stars, 105 notes)
Fycho's Hard (5 stars, 247 notes)
Insane (4.9 stars, 336 notes)
Normal (4.51 stars, 163 notes)

Download: sweet ARMS - Trust in you (TV Size)
Download: sweet ARMS - Trust in you (TV Size) (no video)
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anime「デート・ア・ライブⅡ」OP「Trust in you」

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Last edited by wcx19911123 2014-05-13T07:17:16+00:00, edited 17 times in total.

ZZHBOY

1,649 posts

Joined April 2012

ZZHBOY 2014-03-28T06:04:03+00:00

他的意思是说叫你别mod图了但是要你来mod这个

[general]
00:49:289 - 这里是不是可以加红线啊虽然不知道是不是有必要可以让后面的重音都在长白线上 KIAI也是可以从长白线起感觉靠谱些
[Easy]
00:11:706 (2) - 这里好几声鼓点又不能全跟上不如00:12:180 (2) 这里一个单点就可
01:07:765 (3) - ^yasashi跟不上让滑条头感觉奇怪不如01:08:239 (3) 这里一个单点就可
有两个地方为了遮挡让ds降低了应该没问题吧.-.
[Normal]
01:17:397 (4) - end not snapped
为什么不cs3啊
00:09:022 (3,4,1) - 一大团挤一块真zz 不如把3换成单点
00:11:390 (3) - 延长半拍也可啊
好多地方都死跟vocal然后就弄一坨坨好紧密的几个物件连一块感觉好丑.-.
[Hard]
00:25:129 (6) - 前后ds不一样太明显调整下呗
00:41:710 (5,1) - 没blanket好
01:00:659 (1) - 红点后那个描点是不是没用...或者把那个描点向右上拉点让这个滑条向下一个物件那边凹陷感觉flow好点
01:25:925 (4,1) - 这里本来就空antijump感觉不好.-.
[Insane]
00:26:550 (6,1) - 一定要全挡住吗...
00:34:288 (1) - ctrl+g感觉flow好些
建议hp-1如果hr的话从00:49:289 开始hp美丽

美丽

moonlightleaf

2,157 posts

Joined September 2011

moonlightleaf 2014-03-28T06:47:51+00:00

M4M

TV size 不是说不准用吗（大概

Insane:

00:10:206 能加个note

00:40:604 (1) - ctrl+g

00:27:103 转盘这起？

00:30:024 (4) - 折返？和后面00:43:605 (3)一样

00:49:368 转盘起 00:50:395 转盘收

00:57:817 (4) - 白线收 1x绿线同00:59:080 (6)

01:17:398 (2,3,6) - 要对称的话试试 2拉到x|360y|296 3拉到x|160y|216 6拉到x|368y|184 坐标可能有小偏差

飞秋H:

00:49:368 转盘？

00:56:711 (4,5) - 好像有点远了

01:18:503 (4) - 放 x|284y|280 这地方？

01:28:610 (1,2) - 都改折返么

Normal:

01:17:714 没扔到线上

我觉得cs3好点

01:31:768 (5) - 折返+1次？

00:24:655 (4) - 删

00:37:762 (6,1) - 我觉得延长到长白线把1删了好

00:39:183 (4) - 删

Easy：

00:11:548 (2) - 删

00:12:180 加note

00:13:759 (2) - 删

00:14:075 (3) - 拉到 00:15:022

00:15:338 (1) - 单点

00:17:233 (3) - 删

00:18:812 (2) - 删

00:20:076 (3) - 删

00:22:286 删

00:23:865 (2) - 删

00:24:181 (2,3,4) - 34删 2折返一次

00:28:919 (2) - 删

00:30:498 (1) - 删

00:36:183 (2,3) - 删 00:36:498 (2)拉到00:36:498

00:39:025 (2) - 删

00:40:604 (1,2,3) - 12删然后 00:40:920 note 再3拉到00:41:552

00:45:342 (3) - 删

00:46:605 (2) - 删

00:52:606 (3) - 换单点

00:55:132 (3) - ^

01:03:660 (1) - 删

纳尼！我居然发了2次删一次

PS：我觉得你的easy有点难了啊可以减低难度诶

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,485 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-03-29T08:16:37+00:00

ZZHBOY wrote:
[Hard]
00:25:129 (6) - 前后ds不一样太明显调整下呗这是故意的
00:41:710 (5,1) - 没blanket好人性，已经看起来很好了还要怎么强迫症orz,稍微改了下
01:00:659 (1) - 红点后那个描点是不是没用...或者把那个描点向右上拉点让这个滑条向下一个物件那边凹陷感觉flow好点 changed by myself
01:25:925 (4,1) - 这里本来就空antijump感觉不好.-. fine
美丽

moonlightleaf wrote:
M4M

飞秋H:

00:49:368 转盘？不喜欢转盘

00:56:711 (4,5) - 好像有点远了先放着，看看别人意见

01:18:503 (4) - 放 x|284y|280 这地方？为了跳

01:28:610 (1,2) - 都改折返么这里是鼓点，我倾向于用circle，折返没什么打击感

thanks

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Neta

536 posts

Joined May 2011

Neta 2014-03-31T10:05:43+00:00

Hi~ from your M4M Queue

[General]

you'll cut MP3 file right?
Preview Point is unsnapped

[Easy]

00:49:289 (2,2,2) - i think change this beats to (screenshot) is better i think this is fit on vocal
SPOILER
other looks fine

[Normal]

00:40:288 (7) - remove this note is better this note is not on vocal or make like (screenshot)
SPOILER
01:31:768 (5) - NC here?

[Fycho's Hard]

00:22:918 (1) - bend this little more will be nice
SPOILER
00:24:813 (5) - move to 160, 296 to make distance same with 00:24:813 (5,6,1) -
01:16:450 (2) - same reason with 1st one
SPOILER
01:26:294 (1,2,3) - umm.. maybe this is right beat
SPOILER

[Insane]

00:11:390 (1,2,3,4,5) - better change to this one i can't hear any beats on the song
SPOILER
00:27:024 (1) - better make this not to overlap
00:57:817 (4) - NC here because slider's speed goes different and i think this is right beat
SPOILER
01:31:768 (4) - NC here

GL~ and can i get a ticket ?

Sellenite

1,092 posts

Joined September 2013

Sellenite 2014-03-31T11:41:06+00:00

你好，来自你的M4M
看起来音效还没做就先不说啦
后面是应该都不做的了，建议剪掉

[Easy]
00:39:341 (3,2) - 有些重叠，玩起来很明显，将1移去右边一点然后整体调整DS？
01:18:503 (4,1) - 要么DS要么重叠比较好

[Normal]
CS-1?
00:09:022 (3,4,1) - 三个挤在一个三角形实在不好看
00:41:710 这里为什么又突然降低难度少了个note呢，有些不自然
00:44:078 (3) - 可以包好些

[Fycho's Hard]
00:00:179 (1) - 这个东西我不知道要不要用AudioLeadIn好，毕竟一开始就要转盘了
01:25:925 (4,1) - 叠起来？整个难度就只有这个风格不同了，有违和感
01:26:294 (1,2,3) - 这个超不自然，这个1/6的折返应该开始放在白线上比较好吧，说的是1，可能要想办法避免在那个1/6下物件，虽然那里有个音

[Insane]
00:10:285 (1,2) - 这1/4间距太大了
00:27:024 (1) - 哇这个..还是移开吧，这太坑了
01:08:239 (1,2,3) - 恩..这个也是，会误以为1/2的跳
01:27:346 (1,3) - 叠起来比较好
01:32:084 (6,7) - 虽然这样比较美观，但前面已经有差不多距离的1/2跳了，现在突然来了个差不多距离的1/4跳...

hope it help you！
good luck~

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,485 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-03-31T11:55:47+00:00

M4M from your queue

[Mod Info]

Black: Suggestions
Bold: Importance.You might consider
Red:Unrank issues. You Must Fix

[Insane]

00:09:653 (3) –这最好加个NC，前几PC太坑。。。难读出00:09:890 (4) –在蓝线上
00:12:180 (6) -^
00:26:550 (6,1) –交换NC？6在长白线上
00:43:131 (1,3) –这1和3的位置我觉得反过来比较好，00:43:131 –是重音，来个反flow，打着也更舒服。
SPOILER
00:57:817 (4) –加NC？减速滑条
01:12:976 (5,6,1) –我觉得这打着太绕手了，一个凹型滑条更好吧。或者这个形状，
SPOILER
01:15:977 (1) –这开始的梗NC这样更合曲
SPOILER

[Normal]

00:09:653 (4,1) –堆在一起难看死了，试试这个？
SPOILER
01:13:134 (6) –去掉？节奏密度会不会太大了

Easy没问题。

YoshinoSakura

472 posts

Joined January 2011

YoshinoSakura 2014-03-31T11:59:05+00:00

长喜小姐泥嚎

[General]
没看出来wip啊
可以剪一下mp3

[Insane]
好对称，有点三妖风格
00:44:078 (4,5) - 感觉不是很顺手，ctrl+g试试？
00:53:237 (3,4,1) - 比较容易误读啊
00:58:606 (3,4,5,6) - ctrl+g？然后00:59:079 (5,6) - ctrl+g
01:08:239 (1,2) - 略凶残

[Hard]
00:00:179 (1) - 你的转盘起步比长喜早
没啥可说的

[Normal]
00:58:922 (3) - 柑橘这个音不好把握，试试这样

01:09:029 (3) - ^

[Easy]
00:49:289 (2) - 很难把握，要不前面的滑调拆成单点，然后把这个组成一个滑调

美丽

~~其实俺是来m4m的，如果您看得上俺的mod就赏俺一张ticket吧~~
GL

keeeeeeko

353 posts

Joined May 2012

keeeeeeko 2014-03-31T12:21:31+00:00

Hi!
M4M from your queue.
[/list]

[Normal]

00:09:653 (4) - I think this rhythm is fit.(try hear 25%) http://puu.sh/7QFB3.jpg
00:12:180 (4) - ^
01:02:712 (5) - a bit down slidertale. http://puu.sh/7QFGC.jpg

[Hard]

00:12:180 (3) - I think this rhythm is fit.(try hear 25%) http://puu.sh/7QF6r.jpg
00:25:129 (6) - wrong DS?
01:09:976 (2) - How about this? Lyrics follow http://puu.sh/7QFg2.jpg
01:17:872 (1) - move to 151,325
01:18:503 (4) - move to 76,208 is same height as 01:18:345 (3) - & Symmetric pattern 01:17:872 (1,2,3,4) -

[Insane]

00:06:337 (1) - delete NC?
00:09:890 (4,5) - I think this rhythm is wrong. try this 00:09:864 (4) - & 00:10:074 (5) -
00:12:417 (7,8) - ^ 00:12:390 (7) - 00:12:601 (8) -
00:57:817 (4) - NC cuz changed SV

Easy is nothing to say!
Good Luck！

Xiaolin

1,857 posts

Joined April 2013

Xiaolin 2014-03-31T13:12:59+00:00

M4M from your queue~
[General]
-This map doesn't have a BG, try to use this one~

BG

-Kiai time start at 00:58:133 end at 01:19:767
-Add ''Fycho'' in the tags, since he made a GD
[Easy]
00:07:758 (1) -Move to x:440 y:328
00:09:653 (2) -How about changing the shape to this:

Example

00:11:706 (2) -Must move to 00:12:022
[Normal]
00:07:127 (3) -NC and then remove NC at 00:07:758 (1)
00:10:285 (1) -Its kinda of hard for someone to read it, please move to x:32 y:280
[Insane]
00:04:442 -Short spinner is unrankable, please make it a slider~ (Make it any shape you like)
[Fycho's Hard]
00:00:179 -Please remove spinner, it doesn't make any sense~

GL ~ owo (No kds stars at this moment~ :c )

wcx19911123

3,862 posts

Joined June 2010

Topic Starter

wcx19911123 2014-03-31T17:00:30+00:00

fixed some tiny things and updated
thanks for modding

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,485 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-04-01T04:57:42+00:00

Neta wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
00:22:918 (1) - bend this little more will be nice
SPOILER
I don't like bend slider
00:24:813 (5) - move to 160, 296 to make distance same with 00:24:813 (5,6,1) - It's on purpose
01:16:450 (2) - same reason with 1st one
SPOILER
01:26:294 (1,2,3) - umm.. maybe this is right beat
SPOILER
just follow drums

Sellenite wrote:
[Fycho's Hard]
00:00:179 (1) - 这个东西我不知道要不要用AudioLeadIn好，毕竟一开始就要转盘了转盘去掉了
01:25:925 (4,1) - 叠起来？整个难度就只有这个风格不同了，有违和感改了下，但是还是manual stack
01:26:294 (1,2,3) - 这个超不自然，这个1/6的折返应该开始放在白线上比较好吧，说的是1，可能要想办法避免在那个1/6下物件，虽然那里有个音跟着声音比较大的鼓点，因为是滑条所以玩起来不难的

@615, 转盘去掉了

keeeeeeko wrote:
Hi!

[Hard]
00:12:180 (3) - I think this rhythm is fit.(try hear 25%) http://puu.sh/7QF6r.jpg yea, you are right~
00:25:129 (6) - wrong DS? on purpose
01:09:976 (2) - How about this? Lyrics follow http://puu.sh/7QFg2.jpg not good imo , I prefer following drums
01:17:872 (1) - move to 151,325 lazy to fix
01:18:503 (4) - move to 76,208 is same height as 01:18:345 (3) - & Symmetric pattern 01:17:872 (1,2,3,4) - fixed

@Lapis Aoki, removed

thanks for modding~

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Trust in you (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 57264
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Trust in you (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Trust in you (TV Size)
Artist:sweet ARMS
ArtistUnicode:sweet ARMS
Creator:wcx19911123
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:デート・ア・ライブ Ⅱ
Tags:DATE A LIVE 2 opening
BeatmapID:392254
BeatmapSetID:158932

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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OblivioN

OblivioN 2014-04-02T17:02:06+00:00

比较强烈的建议;w;……
只是建议
普通建议:3
[Easy]

00:49:289 (2) - 觉得这个2放在00:49:132好一些，或者从00:49:132到00:49:289 之间拉一个短滑条打了几次这里都比较容易出100 OTZ

[Insane]
00:08:390 (2) - 这里的2的开头和00:07:127 (2) - 这里的2的开头重叠如何？
00:09:864 (5) - - 不对劲的样子……还是放在00:10:048这个蓝线上比较好
00:10:285 (1,2) - 和 00:57:817 (1,1) - 打起来不太舒服……
01:27:346 (1,3) - 这里是故意没有叠好的么？0.0不过建议叠好……

[Others]
其他难度也都打过看过觉得没有什么问题惹‘w' insane真是越来越难打了……

4anke

115 posts

Joined August 2013

4anke 2014-04-16T13:32:52+00:00

Insane
00:53:632 -和这里00:53:711 - 加两个note?
01:28:452 - 这里加个note?
00:56:711 - 把滑条删掉，在00:56:711 - 和这里00:56:869 - 加两个note?

yf_bmp

Elite Storyboarder II / Elite Mapper

1,631 posts

Joined December 2011

yf_bmp 2014-04-23T15:22:18+00:00

另需diff的话请叫上我吧……(蹭diff够

MirinH

726 posts

Joined January 2013

MirinH 2014-04-29T03:03:16+00:00

~~For M4M~~
[Insane]

节奏不是很密建议HP6
00:32:401 (3) - ctirl+g
01:32:085 (3,5) - 同排如何
01:36:507 (1,2) - 这个跳的毫无人性
~~这图怎么看都是EX啊这跳的毫无人性~~

BAD MOD CAN'T HELP

Last edited by MirinH 2014-05-02T00:00:46+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

LunarSakuya

osu! Alumni

1,704 posts

Joined August 2011

LunarSakuya 2014-05-01T03:00:48+00:00

=v=

General
- Delete Tobiichi Origami.jpg from the folder. Not used anywhere~

Easy
01:17:401 (2,3) - perhaps combining these into one repeat slider would be easier overal, just an idea ofcl

SPOILER

01:35:875 (4) - the Finish felt a bit overwhelming imo, consider replacing it with a whistle or something

Normal
00:21:822 (3) - I recommend extending this to the white tick and following the violins which are more interesting than the subtle drums imo. it also may throw off players having an abrupt ending like this (if you apply, delete clap at end i guess)
00:48:191 (6,1,2) - Try this rhythm:

SPOILER

Players may get a little freaked out with the 1/2 slider after coming out of the previous sliders? xD moreover, I think the red 1/1 slider introduces the new stanza/vocals better.
01:23:243 (5,6) - consider combining this into one slider. It'll catch the held-out tone of the vocals as well as the drum
A bit on the challenging side but nice xD

Fycho's Hard
00:48:349 (4) - Clap here too~
01:20:401 (2) - why not split this into a 1/2 slider and a note like similar patterns before?

Insane
00:30:191 (3) - Whistle would sound nice with the piano
00:35:875 (7,1) - i found this jump slightly disorienting bc this double stack usually indicates some sort of pause, especially with this spacing imo. Perhaps split this into a linear pattern like this:

SPOILER

00:37:454 (1) - i found this ok but other ppl may find this a bit sketchy maybe.. xD
00:44:717 (1) - Ctrl+G would have better oval flow, for both notes before and after imo
01:31:612 (1) - Consider deleting this note. I think it feels better to savor that violin for that moment instead of immediately going in on a subtle beat =v=
01:37:612 (6) - NC or move this further away from the previous note, to stay consistent with combo spacing
symmetry master!

Nice map and song

call me maybe~~

Fycho

Global Moderator

2,485 posts

Joined August 2012

Fycho 2014-05-01T08:44:40+00:00

Thanks sakuya, all fixed!!

SPOILER

osu file format v12

[General]
AudioFilename: Trust in you (TV Size).mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 67691
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.1
BeatDivisor: 3
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.9

[Metadata]
Title:Trust in you (TV Size)
TitleUnicode:Trust in you (TV Size)
Artist:sweet ARMS
ArtistUnicode:sweet ARMS
Creator:wcx19911123
Version:Fycho's Hard
Source:デート・ア・ライブ Ⅱ
Tags:DATE A LIVE 2 opening Fycho
BeatmapID:392254
BeatmapSetID:158932

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:8
SliderMultiplier:1.6
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples
//Background Colour Transformations
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wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2014-05-03T10:58:11+00:00

LunarSakuya

LunarSakuya wrote:
=v=

General
- Delete Tobiichi Origami.jpg from the folder. Not used anywhere~
used it for Easy, instead of the old easy diff bg

Easy
01:17:401 (2,3) - perhaps combining these into one repeat slider would be easier overal, just an idea ofcl
SPOILER
well the rhythm before is not that nice imo, I'm following the heavy beat at 01:18:191 - , fits the song better imo
01:35:875 (4) - the Finish felt a bit overwhelming imo, consider replacing it with a whistle or something
I'm following the music here so added the finish, sounds fine imo

Normal
00:21:822 (3) - I recommend extending this to the white tick and following the violins which are more interesting than the subtle drums imo. it also may throw off players having an abrupt ending like this (if you apply, delete clap at end i guess)
I really want to keep this, first the drums are the most clear track in this moment, following it instead of other tracks fits the song better imo. also the pattern is not hard to read or play, though the slider end a bit earlier than some other ones
00:48:191 (6,1,2) - Try this rhythm:
SPOILER
Players may get a little freaked out with the 1/2 slider after coming out of the previous sliders? xD moreover, I think the red 1/1 slider introduces the new stanza/vocals better.
I'm just trying to follow the drum at 00:48:349 - , this drum voice is a bit special because some other parts don't have it even the rhythm is same as this part in the music. follow some rare things make maps a bit more creative imo. on the other hand, the pattern is totally acceptable for the average of difficulty in this diff imo, I still want to keep this
01:23:243 (5,6) - consider combining this into one slider. It'll catch the held-out tone of the vocals as well as the drum
A bit on the challenging side but nice xD
yep I set a small challenge for the end of the kiai part in this diff(at first I was going to use a 1/2 repeat slider). I think it's still under the control, doesn't exceed the difficulty of the diff, hope its fine

Insane
00:30:191 (3) - Whistle would sound nice with the piano
uh.. I can't hear piano here.. well in fact here sounds nothing specially in the music, so I just left a note without any hitsounds here
00:35:875 (7,1) - i found this jump slightly disorienting bc this double stack usually indicates some sort of pause, especially with this spacing imo. Perhaps split this into a linear pattern like this:
SPOILER
look at this single jump, it's huge one indeed. but the overall spacing in this part is like more than 2.0x(some jumps even go to 3.7), so in fact this spacing is much smaller than the average of the spacing in this parts(it's a transition to next soft part). just don't worry
00:37:454 (1) - i found this ok but other ppl may find this a bit sketchy maybe.. xD
I hope this is acceptable, about 80% of approach circle is clearly visible, it's not hard to read even the note itself was hidden
00:44:717 (1) - Ctrl+G would have better oval flow, for both notes before and after imo
yep, the flow can be much better after fixing like that, but the spacing balance would be worse here(this part's spacing is much smaller than other parts before and after it if fixed the direction). on the other hand, I set jumps at 00:44:401 (5,1) - to follow the heavy beat at 00:44:717 - in vocal, the spacing expressed it well imo
01:31:612 (1) - Consider deleting this note. I think it feels better to savor that violin for that moment instead of immediately going in on a subtle beat =v=
uh, don't you think the rhythm would be empty here? I'd like to make rhythm more regular.. (it's not that sudden imo)
01:37:612 (6) - NC or move this further away from the previous note, to stay consistent with combo spacing
added
symmetry master!

Nice map and song
call me maybe~~

thanks for modding

all diffs updated

phi

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phi 2014-05-03T18:36:30+00:00

The insane is pretty fun, it feels great. One thing though, perhaps you'd change the drain to 6, as 7 feels a bit much, especially during 01:00:267

LunarSakuya

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LunarSakuya 2014-05-07T21:35:32+00:00

sry for the delay =v= good luck~

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2014-05-08T05:06:23+00:00

thanks for the bubble :3

to Vazkii: thanks for your advice, but I think HD7 is fine for the diff, 6 is really too low imo. on the other hand, the HP still has about 40% when auto playing by holding HR mode even at that thin rhythm part, so don't worry

captin1

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captin1 2014-05-12T21:25:58+00:00

hi
[Easy]

00:18:191 (1) - curve on the end of this could look a bit nicer, perhaps shift the white point over to the left a bit to help
SPOILER
00:44:717 (2) - whistle on the head sounds nice to fit with the whistle on 1 before, since the vocal is repeated

[Normal]

00:44:717 (4) - as in Easy, whistle on head sounds nice here
01:23:717 (1) - could do x144 y72 to make it a straight line with 01:23:243 (5,6,1) -

[Fycho's Hard]
gap is a bit large to Insane since this has very few jumps, but I suppose it's alright
would recommend ar7 for a nicer spread, I think this reads fine with it but up to you.

otherwise great diff
lolol pantsu
I'm cool with the insane as is

wcx19911123

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wcx19911123 2014-05-13T07:06:24+00:00

captin1

captin1 wrote:
hi
[Easy]
00:18:191 (1) - curve on the end of this could look a bit nicer, perhaps shift the white point over to the left a bit to help
well I think the current shape is better, it blanket well
SPOILER
00:44:717 (2) - whistle on the head sounds nice to fit with the whistle on 1 before, since the vocal is repeated
sounds nice, added to all my diffs
[Normal]
00:44:717 (4) - as in Easy, whistle on head sounds nice here
yep
01:23:717 (1) - could do x144 y72 to make it a straight line with 01:23:243 (5,6,1) -
in fact the shape is on purpose, I made 6 and 1 in an arc but not 5,6 and 1 in a line
otherwise great diff
lolol pantsu wcx: hope it's fine lol
I'm cool with the insane as is

thanks for modding :3

updated, waiting for fycho