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Jenny Rom - The Game of Love

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Fuuko
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Mismagius
gogogogog falar português D:
Usa aí o distance snap, please. D:

BPM: 172,18
Offset: 16,942

Aí vai terum problema: Vai em Timing, lááááá em cima, na barra cinza, e clica em Resnap all notes.
Aí você vai ter que baixar a slider velocity, que vai ficar altíssima para um easy.


E o mais chato é refazer todos os sliders do mapa por causa disso.

Mais uma dica: Evite combos maiores que 6 num easy, 8 num normal, 10 num hard e 15 no insane. :)

Porém, é um bom mapa, e vai adiante. :)

Star for you :3
Gens
[Timing]
  1. 1. BPM: 170.50 - Offset: 90
  2. 2. BPM: 171.00 - Offset: 11,351
  3. 3. BPM: 173.00 - Offset: 16,965
  4. 4. BPM: 172.00 - Offset: 28,063
  5. 5. BPM: 172.50 - Offset: 39,225
  6. 6. BPM: 172.00 - Offset: 62,887
  7. 7. BPM: 173.00 - Offset: 90,783
  8. 8. BPM: 172.50 - Offset: 101,881
  9. 9. BPM: 172.00 - Offset: 125,533
  10. 9. BPM: 172.50 - Offset: 147,858
Can't mod anything else due to timing. Sorry. :(
Also, just a question, is this even related to Lucky Star? <.<
Azure_Kite
Here's my mod

Blue = Suggestion Red = Check this

[Lucky Star's Easy]
uhh... delete the first break?
00:18:033 (3) - Extend by 1/4 beat
00:25:031 (5) - Shorten by 1/2 a beat and move forward 1/2 a beat
00:28:074 (2) - Move forward 1/6 beat
00:47:089 (5) - Move forward 1/4 beat and resize the slider so it reverses every 1/2 beat
01:19:055 (1,2) - Move these back 1/4 beat
01:32:080 (4) - Reverse one more time. Trust me
01:35:059 (4) - ^
01:41:017 (4) - ^
01:48:085 (3) - Make it reverse every 1/2 beat
02:01:032 (5,6 + spinner) - Move back 1/4 beat
02:06:090 (3) - Move back 1/4 beat
02:08:099 (5,6) - ^
02:12:056 (3,4) - ^
02:15:018 (6) - Move forward 1/4 beat and make it reverse every 1/2 Beat
02:26:026 (1) - Extend 1/4 beat
Remove the final break
A good map but need a little work :)

[Ouran's Normal]
One beat. Brilliant. I will fail so hard at SSíng this

The mp3 should be cut back to 02:43:08. There is 12% of a song with silence left over.

Other than that, it's a nice song and map. Good job guys. Starred
jmaeshawn
Very good song and map :) (Although I don't see how this has to do with Lucky Star...)

Anyway, here's my mod:

Yellow = Hitsounds
Green = Timing/Beat Placement
Red = Snapping/Spacing
Blue = Misc


Easy:

Break at very beginning of song is unneeded, delete this.

00:26:535 (6): Move 1/4 beat to the left so it starts on the blue tick, then lengthen the slider by a 1/4 beat, so it ends on the red tick.
00:28:715 (2): Not snapped.
00:30:110 (4): Not snapped.
00:31:506 (2): Not snapped.

00:36:040 (1): Make this spinner end at 00:37:784.
02:01:757 (6): Move 1/4 beat to the left, so it starts on the blue tick.
02:06:989 (3): Move slider to the left 1/4 beat, so it starts on the blue tick at 02:06:901.
02:09:081 (5): Move 1/4 beat to the left, so it starts on the blue tick.
02:09:779 (6): Move 1/4 beat to the left, so it starts on the blue tick.

02:05:506 (1,2,3,4, so on...) 39 finishes in a row is quite a lot, and just doesn't sound good. Maybe alternate between finishes and claps on this part?
02:12:569 (3): Move 1/4 beat to the left, so it starts on the blue tick.
02:28:583: Break is unecessary here, as the song is already done, delete this.

It might also help to trim your mp3 to make your map's filesize slightly smaller, as the song ends at 02:43:438, but the mp3 continues for another 20 seconds afterward.
Very promising map so far, definitely has ranking potential. Good job so far, hope to see more difficulties soon!

*Star for you~*
Kytoxid
[General]

Offset should be 11,372.
Preview points need to be set for all difficulties.

[Easy]

00:21:011 (6,1) - These are detached, while 00:18:033 (3,4) is attached. Pick one and stick with it.
00:23:090 (3,4) - Too far.
00:26:051 (6,1) - Too close.
00:30:086 (1,2,3) - Ugly triangle alert!
00:40:061 (3,4) - Too far.
00:42:070 (6,7) - ^
00:46:018 (3,4) - ^
00:46:072 (4,5,6) - Too close.
00:52:029 (2,3) - ^
By now you should realize the main issue here: Spacing. Please make sure to turn on Distance Snap and then make sure it's all spaced correctly.
00:57:017 (1,2) - Too close...(not going to mention any more spacing issues)
01:43:099 (4) - Wtf, weird slider. Please snap the end onto the timeline.

[Ouran's Normal] (no, he really isn't :P)

...has nothing in it. PERFECT! (well, the one note is slightly off-tempo)
Gens
[General]
  1. Go to Setup -> Audio and choose a sampleset.
  2. You can set a preview point if you go to the menu Timing -> set current point as preview.
[Easy]
  1. You stole the background from another map! :U You should use a different background.
Ouran's Normal timing still needs to be fixed.

~ ~ ~

Yes... I am lazy. I still need to recheck stuff.
Timing still needs fixing, but at least I gave you a start. =D
Don't kudosu this post, because I am tired (too). :<
Nachy
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anonymous_old
LS's Easy
SPOILER

00:25:011 (5) : (nazi) Put it on the left side of 4, not the right side, that way, it'll have a "stair-case" shape.
01:40:049 (4) : New combo.

Ouran's Normal
SPOILER

00:58:052 (5) : Spacing.

There are few errors here, but it's just boring to play. (probably since these diffs are too easy)
This map shows potential.
Gens
Sorry, looks like I was in drugs last time I tried to time this. Here are the newest results:

  1. 1. BPM: 170.00 - Offset: 90
  2. 2. BPM: 172.35 - Offset: 11,396
I am now sure this is correct.
PLEASE do not ask me again to time while I'm tired unless you want that kind of results again. :(
And please, do NOT give me kudosu until I actually mod this map.
Ex Boy
Good BG! :D

Lucky Star's Easy
too many clap \o/ remove someone will be better

Ouran's Normal
...1/8 ? maybe you can double the bpm and use 1/4...
Hikato
[Easy]
02:05:546 - inherit previous timing settings and resnap notes.
02:27:514 (1) - end kiai
Nice map.


[Normal]
wow.. why is there so many timing sections? (are they supposed to be green ones cause they are red for me :\)
Use 1/4. This doesn't need 1/8.
00:36:034 (1) - Start on the white instead of the blue.
I'll presume it's not finished but not bad so far.

I made a diffi. Use if you want. BG here


Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Hikato's Insane].osu
Mismagius
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Kytoxid
[General]

You have 2 .osb files; one is an old one from a typo (lol Jenny Room) and the other one has a reference to a file that does not exist. Delete?

Source? Tags? (make sure to include the guest names)

Consider changing background colours to match backgrounds.

[Easy]

00:00:009 - Unused timing section; delete it.

Combos are kinda weird here; on an Easy, I'd break it into smaller combos for each phrase. For example, I'd add a new combo here 00:19:075 (4) to split up the combo.

01:41:021 (3,1) - This might be a bit tough for easy; to hold there and react when it ends.
02:05:052 - This timing section is making your timing worse, not better. Remove it, and resnap.

Map this to the end?

[Normal]

Looks alright so far.

[Insane]

Overall Difficulty feels a little high. Maybe bump that down a tick, and bump drain up a tick?

00:40:063 (8) - Line this up with the endpoint?
02:04:018 (5,7) - Uuuugly. XD
02:22:081 (2) - New combo.
02:36:021 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - Sort this out, keep direction constant please. This is pretty much a guarenteed miss on your first try.

I don't really star WiPs, so give me a call when it's done. :)
Azure_Kite
Yay for IRC mod :D
Hikato
Change it to this or remove the diff I made. Some of your edits I don't approve of.

Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Hikato's Insane].osu
Alice
I think forcing default is ok for the overlay :3 (but if you want a custom one just ask)
BTW You'll maybe have to lighten your combo colours

+Awesome song ;_;


EDIT

It works well, except with blue combo colour.


Topic Starter
Fuuko
Thanks to everyone that helped me till now.
Also, Hikato, I fixed it. I pretty much like your map now, so I will use it. Thank you.
deadbeat
y does the normal have a beat snap divisor of 1/8th......it should work fine with 1/4
Sleep Powder
Will Mod Later~

Also I played Hikato's...
it was hard to read visually
01:18:075 (12) - Add a note here instead then the next should be a slider...I got messed up here

Make sure all difficulties have the same correct offset and BPM.


Can I make a a difficulty for this? <3 I've always liked this song ever since I saw an awesome AMV with it.
Hikato
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Topic Starter
Fuuko
Yeah. Also, Alex got it right just now, he did that last part in his first go. osuplayer11, too.

Also, Azure will map the hard diff, so it's full already. @_@
Andrea
New "Detailed" modding style for help maps <3

You don't have to follow my post, remember there are not directions, but suggestions!

[File Checking...]

Background: Yes.
Source: No. (Find some source if possible.)
Tags: No. (Add some tags like "Lucky Star".)
File Size: 19,0MB/24,00MB Too big, consider to reduce the size please.)

[Overall]

- You have to set a preview point on all difficulties.

First timing is fine.
Timing: BPM: 172,35 - Offset: 11.390 (Remember to resnap all notes.)
Timing: BPM: 172,35 - Offset: 125.410 (Remember to resnap all notes.)

[Difficulties]

[Lucky Star's Easy]

Some objects are unsnapped. Resnap all notes.

You forgot to add the 2nd offset here.

All the notes are placed 1/8 backward than the normal. Move all the notes 1/8 forward.


02:05:053 (1) - Unsnapped.
02:06:092 (3) - ^
02:08:032 (4) - ^
02:09:002 (5) - ^
02:09:071 (6) - ^
02:11:011 (1) - ^
02:11:081 (2) - ^
02:12:050 (3) - ^
02:13:090 (1) - ^
02:14:060 (2) - ^
02:15:025 (3) - ^
02:16:069 (1) - ^
02:17:039 (2) - ^
02:18:009 (3) - ^
02:18:081 (4) - ^
02:19:044 (5) - ^
02:22:023 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^
02:27:085 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - ^


[Ouran's Normal]

Why a background of another anime? Doesn't fit the song. Change it.

You forgot 2nd offset here too.

Use 1/4 beat snap divisor. and adjust all the notes.

The map end is weird.


00:17:061 (3) - An example. Use 1/4 and adjust it.
00:18:031 (4) - ^
00:20:040 (7) - ^
00:23:088 (5) - ^ Etc.


[Hikato's Insane]

02:19:085 (3,4) - Spacing.
XepherX3
alright

timings i got that sounded perfect:

BPM: 172,35
offset 1: 11.483
offset 2: 125.408

awesome map :lol: 8-) :lol:

star
Alice
MY USERNAME HAS NO UNDERSCOOOOREEE ;_;
KIA
Overall:
Offset: ~11398 fine to me.
"A preview point for this map is not set. Consider setting one from the Timing menu."
Add warnings on x2 sections.
[Konata]
wth 2x bpm sections in easy?
00:53:085 (4) - end on 00:54:027
02:18:079 (4) - move to 02:18:044 and make 4 loops length.
[Tamaki]
01:40:032 (3) - move to 01:40:502 (end on 01:40:851)
01:41:002 (4) - delete(?)
[Hikato's...]
What purpose of the 1st timing section? :?
00:27:058 (7) - clap?

Star :)
F10W_old_1
I'm not a fan of any of these anime, but I have to admit, the song is quite catchy...

Easy and Normal both seem to be good, no glaring issues that I can see that detracted from the play experience.

Hard is so short compared to all the others. Is that a mistake, or did I get a wrong version? It's pretty difficult, but Insane's twice as long-ish, and is even harder.

And I can't even play enough of insane to give opinions either way...

So, yeah, as I said, not very critical, but I dug the map, so here's a shiny blue star!
PhaseMetal
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DoubleDango


Lalala.

Star for you.

Download: Fuuko's Spinner [-DD].rar
GabrielRKF
Muito kawai! :3
Pena que tem duas Haruhis, ai tem que botar o Tamaki no meio xD

Eu vou fazer o mod mais tarde mas por enquanto ta ótimo \o/

Star~
Dusty
Modding out of order...

[Tamaki]
00:36:027 (1) - Shorten by 1 white tick?
00:44:045 (6) - I don't think this finish fits. Move it to the end of (5) or something?
00:53:015 (5) - It's easier to make Bezier sliders in grid snap mode
00:55:059 (1) - Shorten by 1 tick?
00:58:072 (5,6) - Odd looking, especially since they're not symmetric.
01:01:033 (1) - Shorten by 1 tick?
01:09:051 (4,8) - Claps here sound funny. Move to (3,7)? Or add claps to (2,6) like in the next combo?
01:21:000 (5) - Remove claps from red ticks?
01:49:090 (1) - Ends awkwardly.
01:58:095 (3,4,5) - The angle it makes is weird-looking.
02:38:098 (1) - Tripped me up. :(

[Hikato's Insane]
Found nothing.

[Haruhi]
(WIP?)
00:23:091 (7,8) - Slider nazi
00:32:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Flip (2,4) to be on the opposite side of (6)?

[Konata]
01:32:084 (4,4) - Just a suggestion; rapid slider repeats make Taiko harder, so don't use them in easies.
Kerensa
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alvisto
Offset : 11395ms ( + 13ms )

TAMAKI
00:19:073 (5) - new combo
I like the map design, but somehow I don't like how you place claps. IMHO, claps on every 4 white ticks sounds better than suddenly a whole load of random clap throwing out here and there.
For example : 01:08:047 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Doesn't this sound good ?
Example of cluster of claps : 01:21:000 (5,6) - Doesn;t this sound random to you ? xD
01:32:084 (6) - ^
01:59:099 (6) - Suggestion, this would make more sense if you flip it horizontally ? (Ctrl + H)
02:13:057 (8) - Finish here

KONATA
You sure you wanna do 2x timing sections for EASY ? Other than that, a solid easy.

HIKATO'S INSANE
This diff is FUN FUN FUN ! Nothing wrong techinically, just that I want to point out a few things here...
00:35:006 (5) - Intended weird spacing ? I suggest don't do mini tiny jump here as your map is already very fast.
00:35:059 (7) - Hard to read, hidden. ;_;
00:37:050 (8) - Hard to read. Move this somewhere else ?
01:00:065 (5,6,7) - Idk whether it's just me, but it's kinda hard to read... ;_;
01:42:060 (3) - Hard to read
01:46:060 (2) - ^
02:04:001 (4) - Confusing and hard to read. ;_;
02:37:061 (1,2,3,4,5) - lol, idk about this, but I guess this would make some people mad ? quite harsh.

Wow, good map and catchy song. Enjoy modding this map. Star.
Kytoxid
IRC modding, yawn.
XepherX3
really like this :lol: :lol: :lol:

made a little change on the spinner tough (u decide if u wanna use this)

Download: spinnerimages.zip
jericho2442
EDIT: 100% done, enjoy :)

EDIT another update
Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Jericho2442's groove].osu
Lokamp
Lucky Star
02:27:848 (1) - remove kiai time from the last timing section

Ouran
00:54:898 (8) - start it with clap and end it with finish
01:00:990 (8) - maybe mote it to 01:01:164

jericho2442's groove
Sounds fine.

Haruhi
00:53:505 (3) - clap here
00:59:075 (3) - ^
01:25:185 (1,2) - add clap on the 2nd repeat of these sliders

Hikato's X-mas
01:21:718 (5) - no claps on this slider's start
02:18:811 (6) - ^

Even if the modes haven't a similar lenght, this song is well-packed. Have your star, guys ;3
jericho2442
Gens
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Teara
IRC mod~

Good job :)

Love all the diffs
Rokodo
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jericho2442
Right now, [Jericho2442's groove] difficulty has a slightly different Kiai Time interval
thats because i 100% refuse to put kiai in stupid places where it does not match -_-

02:27:848 - Kiai time should end here, to evade kiai-hater users from raging.
..................really..............you really think thats a good place to end it O_o........oh my its horrid ending there, because the beat is still within the same power, its best to end kiai when the beat becomes a little more softer which is at 02:38:988 - imo

00:28:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel these jumps are pulled out of nowhere just to make it hard... the rhythm is basically the same as the next/previous combos so spacing shouldn't change that much. At least in my opinion.
the jump is there because i like it, im not gonna copy/phaste the pattern before >_> its rankable so for now i will leave this as it is

Capitalize the word "groove" please.
oooops my bad hahahaha, fixed
Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Jericho2442's Groove].osu
konan-yoshi999
[Ouran]
00:54:898 (Beginning of 8)- add clap
00:55:246 (End of 8)- remove clap

I don't see anything else wrong
I enjoy this map :)
~star~
Gens

jericho2442 wrote:

Right now, [Jericho2442's groove] difficulty has a slightly different Kiai Time interval
thats because i 100% refuse to put kiai in stupid places where it does not match -_-
I was talking about consistency so... talk with Fuuko about that.

02:27:848 - Kiai time should end here, to evade kiai-hater users from raging.
..................really..............you really think thats a good place to end it O_o........oh my its horrid ending there, because the beat is still within the same power, its best to end kiai when the beat becomes a little more softer which is at 02:38:988 - imo
I see what you're saying, but the "chorus" ends there, so that's why I say it.

00:28:092 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I feel these jumps are pulled out of nowhere just to make it hard... the rhythm is basically the same as the next/previous combos so spacing shouldn't change that much. At least in my opinion.
the jump is there because i like it, im not gonna copy/phaste the pattern before >_> its rankable so for now i will leave this as it is
Yes, it's rankable, but not fun. Would make the map a bit more enjoyable, at least in my opinion.
[Haruhi]

02:26:107 (8,1) - Uh-uh, having two objects at the same time is unrankable, even if they're spinners.

Some things aren't fixed yet, but some are. You should know what things still need to be fixed and all, since I told you in IRC. ;)
btw, offset is still not the same in [Hikato's X-mas].
Topic Starter
Fuuko
Fixed everything, Gens~
Dusty
It's too catchy...

[Tags]
Jericho's diff doesn't have him in tags
Jericho's diff has "colourful" spelled wrong in tags
If you have colourful in tags, you might as well have colorful
Chiikaboom doesn't need to be in both Tags and Source
Dangaard

Dusty wrote:

Jericho's diff doesn't have him in tags
Yeah, please add his name to the tags.

As well you should use the offset suggested by osuplayer111 (11.390ms), remember you have to fix this on every diff separately. Together with the basic offset you should change all other timing sections (be careful though with moving all sections at once, right now hikato's diff got a different offset than the others!). Don't forget to resnap notes to the timing.

About Kiai sections: Haruhi's Kiai is ending before the end of chorus (in contrast to the other diffs), Hikato's is not ending at all. You should make them end on 02:38 on all diffs (don't forget to snap to the new offset).

Nice map, I hope this doesn't need much more mod-posts ;)
fumoffu star :3
jericho2442

Dusty wrote:

It's too catchy...

[Tags]
Jericho's diff doesn't have him in tags
ive asked many times for fuuko to add me in the tags ;_;
added them myself this time

Dangaard wrote:

As well you should use the offset suggested by osuplayer111 (11.390ms), fixed ;)

About Kiai sections: Haruhi's Kiai is ending before the end of chorus (in contrast to the other diffs), Hikato's is not ending at all. You should make them end on 02:38 on all diffs (don't forget to snap to the new offset). yes, as i was saying, the best place to end kiai XD

Nice map, I hope this doesn't need much more mod-posts ;)
fumoffu star :3
thanks

Download: Jenny Rom - The Game of Love (FuukoLover) [Jericho2442's Groove].osu
vytalibus
What's with the BG pics? You can probably find more-related ones, 'coz it's not Christmas anymore.

Otherwise, great map.
Lesjuh
Ok let's discuss first things first ~_~

+ It'd be better to map with grid enabled, it isn't bound but just easier to map/mod/make you map look good.

+ Ourans BG doesn't seem to have anything to do with lucky star/haruhi, only christmas and some other anime. I think it should be lucky star/haruhi related :3 The merry christmas stuff seems a little odd too since it's too late for that but that doesn't really matter xD

Haruhi:
Resnap all notes
This is incredibly good for a first map xD

Hikato:
01:46:593 (2) - No! > under a slider in it's ugliest way possible
02:20:013 (4) - No! > spacing
Resnap all notes
Offset 11.390

Sorry for the Oh-man-I'm-so-tired-I-might-miss-things-mod but you're definitley close to getting this ranked. I'd suggest to let another MAT check after you've fixed this, he/she might pubble ;)
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