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Nakata Yuji wrote:

And no star? *is offended*

Try to make the map more fun so you wil get that star

some people only gives stars if they like the map or think its worth it so you have to earn it

Doomsday93 wrote:

Blue = design/minor issues. you do not have to change these if you don't want to
Orange = moderate issues. it would be best if you change these, but you may be able to get away with not changing it
Red = major issues. you need to change these

timing looks good enough to me

no normal/easy? you need at least a normal

[HARD]

SPOILER

00:15:000 (2) - maybe unstack this? its hard to see that this is a slider
00:36:066 (1) - make this a whole beat longer? auto only just gets 2000 bonus

[NARUTI RE-STYLED]
00:36:034 (9) - stack this on the end of (8)?done
00:40:090 (5,1) - this jumps feels awkward to me. maybe tone it down somehow?its a smaller jump now
00:53:349 (x) - start kiai here?intresting.. fixed

[INSANE]

SPOILER

its all good.

not a bad map. you really really really need a normal or easy though maby we should

star'dThank you for your star and mod

Download: KOTOKO - Re-Sublimity (Nakata Yuji) [Naruti Re-Styled].osu

My two cents:

(I dun wanna echo others about the easier difficulty that is to be made.)

Hmm the hitsounds say normal but play soft. Dunno if you intended that.

Hard
0.40.445 (2) The finish clashes too loudly compared to the others. Adjust volume?
0.44.001 (2) ^
0.52.668 (2) Must these all be claps? I see that you want the claps, but maybe adjust the volume a bit.

Restyled
00:14:068 (1) - Remove new combo
00:20:090 (1) - ^
00:35:034 (8,9) - Why the sudden volume change
1.25.349 (1) Why whistle?

Insane
00:52:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, must these all be claps?

Mmkays. Star?

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thepianist wrote:

My two cents:

(I dun wanna echo others about the easier difficulty that is to be made.)

Hmm the hitsounds say normal but play soft. Dunno if you intended that.

Hard
0.40.445 (2) The finish clashes too loudly compared to the others. Adjust volume?
0.44.001 (2) ^
0.52.668 (2) Must these all be claps? I see that you want the claps, but maybe adjust the volume a bit.

Restyled
00:14:068 (1) - Remove new combo
00:20:090 (1) - ^
00:35:034 (8,9) - Why the sudden volume change
1.25.349 (1) Why whistle?

Insane
00:52:066 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Again, must these all be claps?

Mmkays. Star?

I agree with the claps, but I believe I'll stick with the finishes, as I intended for them to be loud. However, if a few more people have complaints, I will reconsider.

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use the same offset from Naruti Re-Styled in all difficulties

[normal]
no timing issues found
increase the distance snapping in this one

[hard]
nothing found

[insane]
nothing found

[Naruti Re-Styled]
awesome


***** Starred *****

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[Normal]
Hitsounds are messed up somehow. They say normal but they play soft and strange. Going into the timig set up panel and looking at the offset, the first timing section, neither Normal or Soft are selected, press one to fix this. Sliders sound weird otherwise. Maybe it's just my osu messing up. Strangely it seems to be only Normal that does this.

00:35:011 (4) - This note is sticking out. On purpose? Makes it hard to read.
00:49:077 (1) - A bit too hard to see this note and to time it right while clicking for normal. Maybe extend the slider or an extra repeat?
01:04:000 (3) - Too far from (2)

[Hard]
Is ok.

[Re-styled]
Is very hard.

[Insane]
00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - No hitsounds at all here. Dull.
01:12:089 (1,1,1,1,1) - Perhaps make these into one combo?
01:15:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spice up this final stretch of the map with some hitsounds.


Star'd.

Real1 wrote:

[Normal]
Hitsounds are messed up somehow. They say normal but they play soft and strange. Going into the timig set up panel and looking at the offset, the first timing section, neither Normal or Soft are selected, press one to fix this. Sliders sound weird otherwise. Maybe it's just my osu messing up. Strangely it seems to be only Normal that does this.

00:35:011 (4) - This note is sticking out. On purpose? Makes it hard to read.
00:49:077 (1) - A bit too hard to see this note and to time it right while clicking for normal. Maybe extend the slider or an extra repeat?
01:04:000 (3) - Too far from (2)

[Hard]
Is ok.

[Re-styled]
Is very hard.

[Insane]
00:58:000 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3) - No hitsounds at all here. Dull.
01:12:089 (1,1,1,1,1) - Perhaps make these into one combo?
01:15:033 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Spice up this final stretch of the map with some hitsounds.


Star'd.

That's weird. I'm sure I had the sound set at soft. This has happened before too, I don't know what's wrong.
I will fix this tomorrow.

Erm, I don't think this has been mentioned yet, but in Normal, you have a slider from 00:52:67 to 00:54:00 but you have two hit markers appearing during that slider at 00:53:56 and 00:53:78.

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[Timing]
Not a timing expert, but I'd recommend getting a second opinion on it, offset looks wrong for me~

[Normal]

The finish/clap hitsounds are really loud compared to the rest of the song~ I'd suggest lowering the hitsound volume at each finish you have~

Again no offense, but the end slider is ugly.

[Hard]

The finish/clap hitsounds are really loud compared to the rest of the song~ I'd suggest lowering the hitsound volume at each finish you have~

Again no offense, but the end slider is ugly~ Maybe try to use some kind of slider art?

[Naturi Re-Styled]

The finish/clap hitsounds are really loud compared to the rest of the song~ I'd suggest lowering the hitsound volume at each finish you have~

and really hard diff~ with some hectic jumps~

I like it~~!

[Insane]

00:26:066 (1,2) - Align with [00:25:066 (6,7)]

Yup
same as the others, finish/clap are really loud.

not much but ok...
Download: KOTOKO - Re-Sublimity (Nakata Yuji) [Naruti Re-Styled].osu

Oh man that drain on insane is well.....Insane.

Though, it's a good map, so here's a star.

Normal~
Insane is way easier to read than Normal.

1. 00:16:884 (4) - Every slider that is this short with no reverse arrows, change it to something else. It's very hard to see if it's slider or 2 notes.
2. 00:36:328 (6) - Stack this note right on 5's endpoint.
3. 00:40:217 (1,2) - The spacing change is really not necessary in the easiest difficulty. Move the slider closer to 1.
4. 00:43:773 (1,2) - ^
5. 01:12:884 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo
6. 01:13:328 (1) - ^
7. Overall, just make this difficulty easier to read unless you're just dying to make an Easy difficulty.
8. Also the loud finishes kill my ears. Reduce the volume of the timing sections that have finish sounds in them.

Hard~

1. 00:14:995 (2) - Same concept as Normal. Slider's too short.
2. 01:05:551 (1) - Especially here. It's really hard to tell that this is a slider.

Naruti re-styled~

1. Add naruti to the tags for this difficulty.

Insane~

1. 00:33:773 (1,2) - Hidden by the slider.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Normal~
Insane is way easier to read than Normal.

1. 00:16:884 (4) - Every slider that is this short with no reverse arrows, change it to something else. It's very hard to see if it's slider or 2 notes.
2. 00:36:328 (6) - Stack this note right on 5's endpoint.
   00:40:217 (1,2) - The spacing change is really not necessary in the easiest difficulty. Move the slider closer to 1.
3. 00:43:773 (1,2) - ^
4. 01:12:884 (1) - Suggestion: Remove new combo
5. 01:13:328 (1) - ^
6. Overall, just make this difficulty easier to read unless you're just dying to make an Easy difficulty.
7. Also the loud finishes kill my ears. Reduce the volume of the timing sections that have finish sounds in them.

Hard~

1. 00:14:995 (2) - Same concept as Normal. Slider's too short.
2. 01:05:551 (1) - Especially here. It's really hard to tell that this is a slider.

Naruti re-styled~

1. Add naruti to the tags for this difficulty.

Insane~

1. 00:33:773 (1,2) - Hidden by the slider.

For the bold on normal, apparently I have the spacing at 0.8 consistantly. I know that it feels weird though. How should I rectify this?
EDIT: I just changed them to sliders so it feels better.

BPM: 135 / Offset: 2
Make sure you resnap everything and CAREFULLY CHECK THAT EVERYTHING IS WHERE IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE. Resnap all has a tendency to shift some things back or forwards a 1/4 if the offset is particularly quirky.

I think you'll find with the proper offset that you can make sliders with absolute lengths (that is, red to white, or white to white, or red to red) and not have to shift things into the 1/4's, which I notice you're doing alot.

Across all difficulties (non-guest):
00:04:044 (1) - I cannot fathom why you would start the song off on a single note tap followed by a break. While I am here to judge the objective and not the subject, this is a design issue I cannot ignore. Map these sections properly across all of your maps.

Anyway, start with the offset and we'll work from there. There's lots of things which seem to be products of a faulty offset rather than definitive mapper error.

Ephemeral wrote:

BPM: 135 / Offset: 2
Make sure you resnap everything and CAREFULLY CHECK THAT EVERYTHING IS WHERE IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE. Resnap all has a tendency to shift some things back or forwards a 1/4 if the offset is particularly quirky.

I think you'll find with the proper offset that you can make sliders with absolute lengths (that is, red to white, or white to white, or red to red) and not have to shift things into the 1/4's, which I notice you're doing alot.

Across all difficulties (non-guest):
00:04:044 (1) - I cannot fathom why you would start the song off on a single note tap followed by a break. While I am here to judge the objective and not the subject, this is a design issue I cannot ignore. Map these sections properly across all of your maps.

Anyway, start with the offset and we'll work from there. There's lots of things which seem to be products of a faulty offset rather than definitive mapper error.

When you mention the sliders with absolute lengths, after I fixed the offset I didn't really see the need to move them.
I probably just don't have a full comprehension of what you mean, so could you please elaborate?

EDIT: I went into normal and I saw what you mean. Thanks!
Wait, when I try to change them to absolute sliders, they don't seem to fit as well.

[General]
- Change offset of every diffs with Ephemeral's one.
Offset is not always setted on first note.
naruti's one is on start point of phrase. But your diff's one are on middle of phrase.
Remind checking 'Snap to new timing' before click OK button in 'Timing and Control Points Pannel'.
- I suggest add letter '(TV Size)' at title. Also, remove 'opening tv size' at Tags.
- Add tag guest name at all diffs.
- I think audio lead-in 2 seconds is best.


[Normal]
00:04:066 - remove break
00:36:033 (6) - stack it correctly.
TIP : Make distance spacing to 0.0x. Then hold 'shift'(off grid snap temporary) and move it.
You can stack note correctly at end of slider.

00:51:055 (1) - redo this slider
00:58:044 (3) - spacing
00:59:055 (4) - ^


[Hard]
01:05:057 (1,2) - unsnapped
01:07:077 (4) - new combo


[Insane]
00:49:077 (1) - finish
00:50:021 (1) - ^
00:50:066 (1) - ^
00:51:010 (1) - ^


[Naruti]
00:16:023 (3) - spacing. or new combo
00:40:023 (1) - too close to previous note

Ephemeral wrote:

BPM: 135 / Offset: 2
Make sure you resnap everything and CAREFULLY CHECK THAT EVERYTHING IS WHERE IT IS SUPPOSED TO BE. Resnap all has a tendency to shift some things back or forwards a 1/4 if the offset is particularly quirky.

I think you'll find with the proper offset that you can make sliders with absolute lengths (that is, red to white, or white to white, or red to red) and not have to shift things into the 1/4's, which I notice you're doing alot.

Anyway, start with the offset and we'll work from there. There's lots of things which seem to be products of a faulty offset rather than definitive mapper error.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Change offset of every diffs with Ephemeral's one.
Offset is not always setted on first note.
naruti's one is on start point of phrase. But your diff's one are on middle of phrase.
Remind checking 'Snap to new timing' before click OK button in 'Timing and Control Points Pannel'.
- I suggest add letter '(TV Size)' at title. Also, remove 'opening tv size' at Tags.
- Add tag guest name at all diffs.
- I think audio lead-in 2 seconds is best.

[Naruti]
00:16:023 (3) - spacing. or new combo
00:40:023 (1) - too close to previous note

*YAWN*
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ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
- Change offset of every diffs with Ephemeral's one.
Offset is not always setted on first note.
naruti's one is on start point of phrase. But your diff's one are on middle of phrase.
Remind checking 'Snap to new timing' before click OK button in 'Timing and Control Points Pannel'.
- I suggest add letter '(TV Size)' at title. Also, remove 'opening tv size' at Tags.
- Add tag guest name at all diffs.
- I think audio lead-in 2 seconds is best.


[Normal]
00:04:066 - remove break
00:36:033 (6) - stack it correctly.
TIP : Make distance spacing to 0.0x. Then hold 'shift'(off grid snap temporary) and move it.
You can stack note correctly at end of slider.

00:51:055 (1) - redo this slider
00:58:044 (3) - spacing
00:59:055 (4) - ^


[Hard]
01:05:057 (1,2) - unsnapped
01:07:077 (4) - new combo


[Insane]
00:49:077 (1) - finish
00:50:021 (1) - ^
00:50:066 (1) - ^
00:51:010 (1) - ^


[Naruti]
00:16:023 (3) - spacing. or new combo
00:40:023 (1) - too close to previous note

Done.
On what I've bolded, I just want to let you know I have had it that way before. If you look to the beginning of the thread, there is a pretty sizable discussion on the offset, and I had it at 0 or something close to that, but SteRRum told me to change it. Some others told me to change the finishes on insane too.

For KOTOKO ~ <3

orioncomet wrote:

For KOTOKO ~ <3

<3

[General]

Remove excess .osb file and do a full submit.
Change the background colour to black on all difficulties.
"Kannazuki no miko kotoko" all of these tags are in the source/artist fields already, remove them.
What's up with the messed up storyboard referencing nonexistant files? o_O Please fix that.

Change TV-Size in the title to TV Size, and make the brackets round brackets, like "(TV Size)".

[Normal]

Remove the opening break.

[Hard]

There are 2 unsnapped notes.

The other difficulties look okay.

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Remove excess .osb file and do a full submit.
Change the background colour to black on all difficulties.
"Kannazuki no miko kotoko" all of these tags are in the source/artist fields already, remove them.
What's up with the messed up storyboard referencing nonexistant files? o_O Please fix that.

Change TV-Size in the title to TV Size, and make the brackets round brackets, like "(TV Size)".

[Normal]

Remove the opening break.

[Hard]

There are 2 unsnapped notes.

The other difficulties look okay.

Could you please specify these two unsnapped notes? It helps that you tell me that they're there, but not so much that you don't tell me where they are.

Konnichiwa!!! Nakata Yuji-chan!!

[Normal]
00:11:997 (4) - No new combo
00:15:775 (1) - ^
00:16:219 (2) - New combo

[Hard]
00:11:997 (1) - No new combo
00:15:775 (1) - ^
00:16:219 (2) - New combo
00:50:219 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - No new combo
01:12:886 (1,1,1,1) - ^

[Naruti Re-Styled]
00:50:224 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - No new combo
01:12:890 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^

[Insane]
00:06:330 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - No new combo
00:55:219 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:13;330 (1,1,1,1) - ^

Good song! STAR!!!

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa!!! Nakata Yuji-chan!!

[Normal]
00:11:997 (4) - No new combo
00:15:775 (1) - ^
00:16:219 (2) - New combo

[Hard]
00:11:997 (1) - No new combo
00:15:775 (1) - ^
00:16:219 (2) - New combo
00:50:219 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - No new combo
01:12:886 (1,1,1,1) - ^

[Naruti Re-Styled]
00:50:224 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - No new combo
01:12:890 (1,1,1,1,1) - ^

[Insane]
00:06:330 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - No new combo
00:55:219 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - ^
01:13;330 (1,1,1,1) - ^

Good song! STAR!!!

Basically, this is new combo issues. I will take a look at it later, but the 1,1,1,1,1 ones are probably going to be kept.
Thanks!

tada~
Download: KOTOKO - Re-Sublimity [TV-Size] (Nakata Yuji) [Naruti Re-Styled].osu

[Normal]
lol It's strange that circle is smaller than [Hard].......
0:50:164(kiai)-> I think this is unnecessary.

[Hard]
0:50:164(kiai)-> I think this is unnecessary.

[Naruti]
00:19:066 (2) - Is this a jump?(Just asking)

I would be happy if this post helps you ^^

minyeob wrote:

[Naruti]
00:19:066 (2) - Is this a jump?(Just asking)

I would be happy if this post helps you ^^

nope not a jump

minyeob wrote:

[Normal]
lol It's strange that circle is smaller than [Hard].......
0:50:164(kiai)-> I think this is unnecessary.

[Hard]
0:50:164(kiai)-> I think this is unnecessary.

[Naruti]
00:19:066 (2) - Is this a jump?(Just asking)

I would be happy if this post helps you ^^

I know what you're saying about the Kiai, but I think I'll leave it as is, unless another person agrees with you.

Star0.0

[General]

Please remove audio from the .avi.

In my opinion, Normal's rhythm is too hard to follow for the easiest difficulty. Please make an Easy.
01:11:890 - This section seems to should have kiai.

[Normal]

00:40:446 (2) - This 2x section is way too surprising, especially because of the doubled spacing.
00:43:779 (1,2) - ^

[Naruti]

00:19:113 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:28:890 (1) - I'd consider using a custom silent hitsound for the end of this slider.

[Insane]

Total score is lower than Naruti by 300k, consider changing it up so that star rating goes below Naruti's. I recommend dropping HP drain a whole bunch and OD a little. Drain is killer right now.

00:06:224 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I'd say this is just combo abuse. =/

I'd star this, but apparently I already have posted. XD

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Please remove audio from the .avi.

In my opinion, Normal's rhythm is too hard to follow for the easiest difficulty. Please make an Easy.
01:11:890 - This section seems to should have kiai.

[Normal]

00:40:446 (2) - This 2x section is way too surprising, especially because of the doubled spacing.
00:43:779 (1,2) - ^

[Naruti]

00:19:113 (1,2,3) - Spacing.
01:28:890 (1) - I'd consider using a custom silent hitsound for the end of this slider.

[Insane]

Total score is lower than Naruti by 300k, consider changing it up so that star rating goes below Naruti's. I recommend dropping HP drain a whole bunch and OD a little. Drain is killer right now.

00:06:224 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - I'd say this is just combo abuse. =/

I'd star this, but apparently I already have posted. XD

I have meant the map to be difficult, hence the title "Insane." Naruti's just has more notes because of streams, and I don't want to compromise the way the map was meant to be played. I fixed the video, but I want to see if it is acceptable for me to not make an easy.

Also, when I play the map with my non-dominant hand, it seems fairly simple; the map is simply about reading. I got better by playing harder maps, and I think this map isn't too hard for a beginner to begin with.

Is it just me or are the hitsounds very loud in comparison to the music?

Also, please delete your .osb files and do a full resubmit

Normal:
Combo mod:
00:12:002 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:14:002 (3)
01:17:113 (6) - new combo to make this combo shorter and follow the lyrics?

I really wish there was an easier diff, but this is probably rankable. The rhythm did throw me off at times though.

Hard:
Normal mod:
00:26:001 (6) - hard to read and makes the combo feel cluttered

Combo mod:(same as normal basically)
00:12:002 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 00:14:002 (3)
01:17:113 (6) - new combo to make this combo shorter and follow the lyrics?

Naruti Re-Styled:
Normal mod:
00:53:557 (1,2) - the high stack leniency makes these circles look bad
00:53:557 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - places like these were hard to play though because the 300s keep covering the next few notes, so it was difficult for me to read the stacks
01:13:779 (1) - I was really expecting this to be on the y-axis

Timing section mod:
00:36:392 - 2 timing sections at the same location. Please remove one of them.
01:05:571 - add another timing section a quarter note before this one with the same settings but no kiai

Insane:
I am actually fine with the score since I feel this diff is slightly easier than Naruti Re-Styled (mostly because of the minor trouble I had reading Naruti Re-Styled)

Normal mod:
00:17:779 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - this part is a little boring

========================
Nice map overall. I am a little worried about the hitsounds and readability at some places, but that is probably my only concern. Star.

Nakata Yuji wrote:

I have meant the map to be difficult, hence the title "Insane." Naruti's just has more notes because of streams, and I don't want to compromise the way the map was meant to be played

WEL done nakata the beatmap spirrit
if i got time i will fix my diffi

General
MP3 way too quiet. =|

Normal
Didn't even play, but I suspect it's too difficult to be called Normal.

Hard
IMO too hard for a Hard.

Naruti Re-Styled
This is Insane but even more stupid.

Too many kiai spots. Merge or remove them.

00:11:335 (5) - Because of 00:10:001 (1) I thought this was more to the left, thus missing the entire stream.
00:51:113 - Too loud!
00:51:557 - TOO LOUD!
00:53:557 - TOO FUCKING LOUD!
01:28:890 (1) - Why?

Rest of the map? I don't care; sorry.

Insane
Too many kiai spots. Merge or remove them.

00:08:002 (1,Break) - Wha?
00:17:779 - Hitsounds too quiet, pal.
00:24:890 (1,2) - Why a double?
00:28:446 - Empty...
00:32:224 - Why no note here?
00:36:668 (1) - What purpose does this serve?
00:40:224 (1,2,3) - What purpose does this serve?
00:41:113 (1,2) - What purpose does this jump serve?
00:43:779 (1,2,3) - What purpose does this serve? If you wanna keep it, unstack, please.
00:49:113 (10) - New combo.
01:02:446 - Empty. =S
01:04:890 - Empty...
01:13:779 (1,1,1) - Unstack?
01:16:668 (6,7,8) - Why a triple?

[General]

This needs an Easy to be ranked...
Delete the .osb and re-full-submit.
I recommend adding a pure black storyboard element in the background that fades out once the video starts; that way, the video looks more natural, and no-video users can still see the BG.
Make sure kiai starts on the beat; if you change audio with kiai, put it in 2 different timing sections; an earlier one for audio and the right timing for kiai. Kiai use did feel a bit messy though.

Slider velocities felt kinda low in general.

[Normal]

Doesn't really need lead-in.

Ehh, still same concerns about readability.

00:34:557 (3,4,5) - Spacing.

I also found consistency to be an issue; you occasionally play the 1/4 (e.g. 00:35:335 (5,6)), occasionally skip it (e.g. 00:39:113 (3,4)), and occasionally just replace it with 1/2 (e.g. 00:43:113 (5)). This might contribute to the feel of unreadability; if it was consistent, you screw up once and not again.

In general, I felt that many of the notes landing on 1/4 would be better replaced by sliders (e.g. 01:13:779 (1,2,3) can become a slider with a repeat), which are much friendlier on timing.

01:18:668 (3) - Weird shape, lol.

I'd recommend remapping this difficulty; possibly with bigger circles too, but the main thing is to play more intuitively. If you can get it into an intuitive map in the 3-4 star range, it'll probably suffice as the easiest difficulty.

[Hard]

Doesn't really need a lead-in either.

00:08:002 (1) - Same thing as what strager said about Insane; it's pretty weird to hit the first note of a phrase, then ease into a break for that phrase, and immediately pick up again.
00:11:335 (4) - Could be snapped neater with 0.0x distance snap and no grid snap.
00:14:002 (3,1,2,3) - Doesn't fit very well, in my opinion.
00:25:668 (5,6) - The fact that this bends back disturbs me a bit.
00:27:446 (3,4) - I'd recommend not putting this under the slider end; the timing is a bit hard to predict.
00:32:335 (2) - The hitburst of 9 covers this slider up.
00:49:113 (6) - Music is doing something totally different from this slider.
00:58:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same thing about unpredictable rhythms not placed in stacks.
01:18:668 (3) - lol weird slider again.

[Naruti]

Turn stacking down a bit; some of your formations are going out of shape.

00:08:113 (1) - Doesn't fit well, imo.
00:36:392 - Two stacked timing sections; please remove one.
01:24:668 (1,2,3) - Why is this differently spaced?

There're 6 spinners in this 1.5 minute map, 5 of which are at the bare minimum for spinner length, and 4 of which have a note 1/4 before and 1/2 after it.. That's not very playable, or at least, not very enjoyably playable. I spin at 400 and still couldn't 300 more than half of them.

[Insane]

00:17:779 (1) - Please don't. Puppies are crying at these 2x sections.
00:34:890 (6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing; watch out for the 0.5x BPM section borking spacing.
00:39:668 (8) - A bit closer to 7?
01:12:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ehh, didn't like this. I guess it's okay though.
01:13:779 (1,1,1) - Make the jump spacing consistent?
01:17:335 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remove 3 and 6?
01:18:668 (1) - Start this 1/2 later, and put a note where it once started.

Well, most of that was probably opinion; the maps just don't flow very well, I guess is the biggest issue.

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

This needs an Easy to be ranked...
Delete the .osb and re-full-submit.
I recommend adding a pure black storyboard element in the background that fades out once the video starts; that way, the video looks more natural, and no-video users can still see the BG.
Make sure kiai starts on the beat; if you change audio with kiai, put it in 2 different timing sections; an earlier one for audio and the right timing for kiai. Kiai use did feel a bit messy though.

Slider velocities felt kinda low in general.

[Normal]

Doesn't really need lead-in.

Ehh, still same concerns about readability.

00:34:557 (3,4,5) - Spacing.

I also found consistency to be an issue; you occasionally play the 1/4 (e.g. 00:35:335 (5,6)), occasionally skip it (e.g. 00:39:113 (3,4)), and occasionally just replace it with 1/2 (e.g. 00:43:113 (5)). This might contribute to the feel of unreadability; if it was consistent, you screw up once and not again.

In general, I felt that many of the notes landing on 1/4 would be better replaced by sliders (e.g. 01:13:779 (1,2,3) can become a slider with a repeat), which are much friendlier on timing.

01:18:668 (3) - Weird shape, lol.

I'd recommend remapping this difficulty; possibly with bigger circles too, but the main thing is to play more intuitively. If you can get it into an intuitive map in the 3-4 star range, it'll probably suffice as the easiest difficulty.

[Hard]

Doesn't really need a lead-in either.

00:08:002 (1) - Same thing as what strager said about Insane; it's pretty weird to hit the first note of a phrase, then ease into a break for that phrase, and immediately pick up again.
00:11:335 (4) - Could be snapped neater with 0.0x distance snap and no grid snap.
00:14:002 (3,1,2,3) - Doesn't fit very well, in my opinion.
00:25:668 (5,6) - The fact that this bends back disturbs me a bit.
00:27:446 (3,4) - I'd recommend not putting this under the slider end; the timing is a bit hard to predict.
00:32:335 (2) - The hitburst of 9 covers this slider up.
00:49:113 (6) - Music is doing something totally different from this slider.
00:58:001 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Same thing about unpredictable rhythms not placed in stacks.
01:18:668 (3) - lol weird slider again.

[Naruti]

Turn stacking down a bit; some of your formations are going out of shape.

00:08:113 (1) - Doesn't fit well, imo.
00:36:392 - Two stacked timing sections; please remove one.
01:24:668 (1,2,3) - Why is this differently spaced?

There're 6 spinners in this 1.5 minute map, 5 of which are at the bare minimum for spinner length, and 4 of which have a note 1/4 before and 1/2 after it.. That's not very playable, or at least, not very enjoyably playable. I spin at 400 and still couldn't 300 more than half of them.

[Insane]

00:17:779 (1) - Please don't. Puppies are crying at these 2x sections.
00:34:890 (6,7,8) - Inconsistent spacing; watch out for the 0.5x BPM section borking spacing.
00:39:668 (8) - A bit closer to 7?
01:12:224 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ehh, didn't like this. I guess it's okay though.
01:13:779 (1,1,1) - Make the jump spacing consistent?
01:17:335 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Remove 3 and 6?
01:18:668 (1) - Start this 1/2 later, and put a note where it once started.

Well, most of that was probably opinion; the maps just don't flow very well, I guess is the biggest issue.

I agree with almost all of this. I'm going to start making changes accordingly, thanks for the honest mod.

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Here's my mod!

First of all, why is the kiai times different for all the diffs.
Easy has none, Hard and Insane has the same placement and Naruti has another kiai time placement.
Choose one for all please.

Remove the OSB and full submitt

[Easy]
4 in slider tick rate is quite high but if you like it, keep it.
00:53:779 (1) - Bugged slider, Redo it.
01:16:001 (2) - ^
01:17:779 (5) - ^

[Hard]
Can't find any big things to complain about, I kinda dislike the New combo spam at 00:50:224 (1,1,1,1,1,1) and 01:12:890 (1,1,1,1,1) though keep it if you like it

[Naruti]
...Dislike this the most of the four diffs...
I'm not found of the Slow sliders and the high spacing, i think it plays awful and it gets even worse with the slowdowns >:
The 2000 Bonus spinners are just annoying >.<
Do you have to map everything, it just felt stupid at the end...
There is some new combo spam here too but keep it if you want.

[Insane]
I think 2 at slider tick rate sounds a bit better, especially for the speed up, but keep it if you like it as it is.

That's it, pretty good.
*star*

I agree with xgor with about naruti's diff.

overall: remove .osb and full submit

Hard
is it necessary to have a lead in time on this diff

I like the map.

Irc fixes mostly slidertick rates and a few combo changes

Easy:
00:50:668 - Move this 4 grids right so it's lined up with 3 and 5

Hard:
:3.

Re-styled
01:28:890 (1) - I don't like this last slider D:.

Insane
Good <3.

Sorry that I said so little things but you said so many things about my man :3.

Anyways, go go go star.

CDFA wrote:

Easy:
00:50:668 - Move this 4 grids right so it's lined up with 3 and 5

Hard:
:3.

Re-styled
01:28:890 (1) - I don't like this last slider D:.

Insane
Good <3.

Sorry that I said so little things but you said so many things about my man :3.

Anyways, go go go star.

thanks for the mod.

[Easy]
01:04:001 (3) - One-dot slider ( ). Change this to a circle as soon as possible. Fixed.

[Hard]
All good.

[Naruti Re-Styled]
Excellent.

[Insane]
Not much to say, except this: Andrew, you are crazy.

Starred, and I gave you a reason to update your map.

Good map!

~STAR~

I hope this got ranked soon.

Star!

IRC Modding.

Your Hard worked the way you wanted it to. I like the fact it spaced up towards the end, kind of refreshing.
Insane had good flow, pretty patterns, and it was fun above all.

Have a star.

Star^^
Hard is perfect imo, insane just "insane" as it should be, very playable map, i wonder why it isn't in ranked already

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