Kibbleru wrote:

well like idk why u would want a mod from a crappy mapper like me but ok

[Hard]
00:33:406 (4,5) - ctrl g cuz im a hater thatll make the distance to (6) too short
00:34:538 (1,4) - so like, stack? too far in the timeline to matter
01:23:491 (3,3) - ^ ^
00:39:915 (2) - well something like this would look better and i would rotate the star thing you have so it stacks as well its fine
01:04:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yah this shape looks pretty fugly plays well though
01:09:626 (4,5) - i vote triplet here ._. why?
00:45:291 (4,2) - stack better alright
01:11:607 (2,3) - i dont think u should stack..? why?

[Normal]
00:03:412 (2,3) - why dont u blanket ;-; i wanted to have a nice curving effect downwards
00:17:843 (3,4,5) - more curve sure
00:30:011 (1) - touches hp bar (probably cuz of skin, but you should still fix? owo) hmm i think its alright
01:01:703 (1,3) - blanket better :I its already perfect
01:10:758 (1,2) - this looks fugly '^' why?
/me runs

skip this useless mod if u want

Naitoshi wrote:

Mod from request
5th time modding something (Holy crap a counter). Sorry if I'm not helpful I'm new at modding >.>


[Normal]
00:03:978 (3) - You can make this a blanket (keeping the slider head stationary of course ill try it out

difojaskldf can't find much. This diff is well done.

[Hard]
00:07:091 (4) - I understand it... but I'm not sure why the other piano part here 00:07:232 was ignored. you could make 4 a circle and add a slider here to the original time it ended 00:07:232 - 00:07:657 Did you do this for minimal density? its fine how it is

00:15:297 (4,5,6,7) - wouldn't this pattern make more sense if everything all the circles were snapped to 1.00xds from the 5? It's unequal spacing as it is now. Example: for this you could move 00:16:994 (2) - to 290, 86 : 00:15:297 (4) - to 229, 147 : 00:16:146 (7) - to 193, 296 : and 00:15:863 (6) - to 79, 186. With this you can retain all the stacks too. Of course 00:16:994 (2,3) - would be a bigger jump but I'm not sure if it matters or not considering the amount of spacing in time. (for 7 you could have the same distance from 6 to 7 to 1. I didn't do that though) <--- all this is just one big noob idea, don't mind it much. the triangles are all perfectly spaced, except for the notes in the middle, which is intentional

00:52:648 (1) - <3 Though it seems a bit lop-sided is all :p aw ill try to fix

01:04:250 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - weird idea I know but maybe increase the spacing between 1 and 2? keeping 1 where it is you could create a sort of triangle thing... (sorry for the bad example and really I see nothing wrong with what you have either. I just think that 6 and 1 should be spaced a bit more is all)eh not really noticeable

01:07:645 (3,4) - This is a blanket right? It looks off (3)'s approach circle says its not

01:09:626 (4,5) - you could have a stacked triple by adding a note here 01:09:768 (again I see nothing wrong with what you have but I think that having only single-tapping circles while there's material to map can get repetitive. its fine how it is


01:11:607 (2) 01:13:871 (3) - you could stack these two ? doesnt really matter since its not really stacking on anything, the hitburst is at the end of the slider and its too far in the timeline for it to be visibly stacking with the slider start

01:16:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Idea circle flow? Straight seems pretty boring to me lol. plus the way I have it is nice because it makes this slider feel so sexy 01:19:813 (1) only thing I'm sure is a good idea. Use if you want though I won't be offended. Unfortunately there are two circles that overlap a slider in that example. eh ill think about it

[Hai]
Nice maps and sorry for the bad mod >.> I think I might've lost some of the mod due to the website acting up too, but I'm not sure:( :( thanks anyways!

smallboat wrote:

As ur request

[General]
Fine.

[Nomal]

00:00:583 (1) - Perhaps this part you can use S:C1, to mute the sliderslide sound? i think it sounds fine
00:02:563 (4) - Add a note? Because have a "ding" vocal . (Like 00:01:431 (2) ) not sire what you are asking here, there is a note?
00:36:519 (4) - Feel this hitsound volume suddenly noise,turn down a bit volume? fixed
01:08:777 (1) - Remove clap? Feel can fit the vocal. i think its fine
01:19:247 (4) - Slider remove finish,there is no dowmbeat here. sure

[Hard]

00:04:827 (1,2) - Move another place? I feel stack many times here,no sense of rhtythm. i really think it gives a nice lull in the map for it to just stop
00:36:519 (4) - As the same Normal. same answer as normal
01:05:665 (6,1) - Select add , move to (248|248) will be a good pattern.
01:09:626 (4) - Add clap? Feel can fit the vocal.
01:25:472 (3) - Why not stack 01:23:491 (3) ?

all fixed except for the one i replied to

Good Luck ~ !

ColdTooth wrote:

hi ho

[Easy]

Pretty damn clean. Almost nothing wrong.

00:36:236 (3,4) - Maybe a slider would be better, idk having a bunch of sliders in rapid succession isnt very fun and intuitive to play, itll get boring after awhile!


[Normal]

00:01:714 (3) - not perfect blanket looks fine to me

00:06:242 (3,1) - Something like 00:03:978 (3) - could've fitted better oh yeah you right

00:30:011 (1,2) - Looks ugly IMO, maybe blanketing the slider begining could do looks and plays fine to me

00:32:275 (1) - Not blanketed properly what

00:39:915 (2,1) - Erm, stacks? Why? stacks are fun

00:58:024 (2) - Not blanketed looks good to me


[Hard]

00:04:827 (1) - Remove NC 00:05:393 (3) - NC here whoops fixed

00:15:297 (4,5,6,7) - Awkard triangle shape. they are cool!

00:44:442 (2) - Curve this the other way sure ill bite

00:52:648 (1) - If you move the red dot to x:244 y:72 might look better (also, you make me jelly of hearts ;c;)

00:54:629 (1) - Not blanketing 00:55:478 (2) - looks good to me

01:16:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Could be symmetrical it is though


That is all. Hope it helps and goes for rank o/ ill try my best!

Kazuya-sama wrote:

Hi, from #modreqs (My english is bad. e_e Sorry.)

[Easy]
Change slider tick rate: 2 i think its fine
HP, OD: +1 ? i think that will throw the spread off

Timing point: 00:26:898 --> Change 00:27:747 fixed
Timing point: Unnecessary: 00:50:101 actually was meant for the end of the spinner, whoops!
Timing point: ^ 00:52:790 & 00:52:931 removed

[Normal]

Remove unnecessary timing point. e.g: Spinner 00:07:374 (1) - well ok then
Circle Size: -1 (3) nah
Overall Diff: +1 (4) itll raise the stars so no

00:15:297 (3,1) - Hmm. Slider style? : http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437215 looks out of place
00:30:011 (1,2,3) - Hmm: 00:30:011 (1) - x: 404 y: 176 ? 00:30:860 (2) - x: 412 y: 88? 00:31:709 (3) - x: 212 y: 148 ? grid modssss
00:45:291 (3) - Add clap? sure
00:52:648 (1) - Remove unnecessary timing point. done
01:15:002 (1,3) - Slider style? e.g: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437228 looks out of place
01:24:906 (2) - Better blanket: Slider center point: x: 184 y: 296 ? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1437231 fixed

no changes on hard

Good luck! thanks!

CloudSplash16 wrote:

Hi Lust, modding as you requested.

[General]

1. Diff spread is a bit weird but it works. Feels like everything is a little bit harder than what you named it. No need to change anything, just a speculation.
2. Umm.. are you sure the BPM of the song is 106.02 and not 106.00? Maybe check this... its charles's timing, so im sure it must be correct
3. 01:10:758 - A kiai fountain might be nice here :3
4. 01:29:717 - Change the last inheriting section to S (default) and reduce volume to 5%, otherwise the player might hear the drum sound of SC:1

[Easy]
This mapping style is quite foreign to me, so I don't think I'll be able to say much.
Some rhythms are a bit advanced to be considered "Easy", but okay.
Beginners everywhere will be cursing you for starting with a circle on the first note of the song.

1. 00:06:525 (2) - Newbies will almost definitely hit this note late since the piano note on the blue tick is stronger. I'd suggest a rhythm like this: http://puu.sh/7I2x3.jpg to make it easier for the beginner players to understand. It would also allow you to put a whistle on that blue tick for the consistent hitsound pattern. im actually quite unsure what you mean here, the picture you provided me isn't too clear
2. 00:07:940 (1,1) - The note is too soon after the spinner for Easy diff. Consider removing the spinner.
3. The start of the first break is kinda awkward imo, and I think you could map out this section even though there's no vocal. It's such a short song, and there's really no need to have two breaks. This one just has an awkward start because of how the slider ends with weird timing. to make the difficulty easier I included the breaks
4. 00:39:915 (2) - May be too difficult for a beginner player to hit this after the 3/2 beat spacing, so I'd suggest this: http://puu.sh/7I2Lu.jpg since there is also a note on the white tick, and this makes it much easier to the player to hit it in time. i think the way how it is now is sufficient and more interesting to play
5. 01:24:906 (2,3) - Maybe it would be better to follow the instrument (probably e. keyboard?) here. I think it would make more sense to beginner players. http://puu.sh/7I3VK.jpg I think this follows the rhythm accurately enough
6. 01:06:796 (5) - I suggest to shorten this by a 1/2 tick to match the instrumental in the music. Try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/7I4RD.jpg
7. 00:07:657 (1) - Add a whistle for piano?
8. 00:52:648 (1) - Clap on end for drum.
9. 00:53:497 (2) - Whistle on both head and end for drum (Matches with the rest of your hitsounding in this section).

I don't know if you care or not, but I think this map could use more attention to aesthetics (blankets, slidershapes, alignment, etc.). Especially since it's a slow song, players will have more time to look at and appreciate (or not) the visual appeal of the map, so maybe you want to work on those details.

[Normal]
Wow, what a style contrast from the Easy.
This style reminds me of some of my old Hard diffs
It wouldn't hurt to use higher HP drain lol I made a joke huehue I'm so funny I think HP4 would work nicely here.

1. 00:00:583 (1,2,3) - Doesn't flow so well. Kinda has a wavy/zigzaggy feel, which doesn't really fit well here imo. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/7I7fS.jpg
2. 00:02:563 (4) - Maybe this can be moved left a bit to become aligned with the end of (3) and next combo's (1) (and optionally, parallel with (2) of the next combo). It'd be prettier.
3. 01:07:928 (3) - I feel like this slider flows better inversed. Just my opinion. i dont think so
4. 00:03:978 (3) - Whistles on head and repeat for piano (match with Hard diff).
5. 00:06:242 (3) - ^ Same here.
6. 00:18:126 (4) - Add a clap. It matches with 00:13:599 (3)
7. 00:23:786 (1) - A bit quiet here.. I think you should continue the pattern through here and place whistle on heads of (2) and (4). i like this sort of lull here, kind of goes with the song (and keeps note density down lol)
8. 00:33:972 (4) - Whistle on head to match with 00:28:879 (3)
9. 00:37:934 (3) - Whistle on end. Goes with the rest of your hitsound pattern.
10. 01:05:948 (5) - Whistle on repeat.

While I was modding this, I kept almost suggesting changes that would break DS because I kept forgetting this was a Normal and not a Hard

[Hard]
CS5 ♥

1. 00:04:827 (5,6) - It's probably better to move these somewhere else, because in their current position (stacked under (3,4)), the rhythm is a bit hard to read. The player could mistakenly think that (5,6) are 1/4 earlier than they actually are if they don't know the song, since that is a much more common rhythm than what's actually in this song.
2. 00:11:901 (1) - nazi/ Align the corner perfectly with 00:10:628 (3)
3. 00:22:371 (3,4,5) - Just an idea (feel free to ignore), but since this is kinda detached from the phrases previous to it, I think it may be nice to switch around the positions of (4,5) for a direction change in flow.
4. 00:39:066 (1,2) - Doesn't look very good imo. Maybe you can rotate them a bit to do this: http://puu.sh/7IabO.jpg which I think looks much nicer because of the symmetry.
5. 00:42:178 (3) - Ctrl+G for smoother flow?
6. 00:52:648 (1) - Cool. But the shape could be improved a bit. While maybe you want a stylized heart with one side larger than the other, I think you should still try to make both sides as round as possible (look at the inner edge). Gotta use the secret techniques :3 You gotta make the heart a lot prettier if you wanna impress the girls
   

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7. 01:18:964 (1,2,3,1) - The constant spacing here doesn't really do justice to the accented cymbal crashes. I think you should make a jump between (1) and (2) and make another jump between (3) and (1) for emphasis on the strong beats.

Nice.

Good luck!

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Cloudchaser wrote:

Hi Lust ~ :3

General
Can you increase the general volume? 20% is quite low x.x I barely can hear. I love the hitsounding in your diffs.

Hard

1. 00:48:121 - Add a note and move the spinner to the blue line ok
2. 00:52:648 (1) - <3 <3
3. 01:08:777 (1,2,4) - these notes have different spacing making them look a bit weird for me plays fine

Normal
[*]00:16:146 (4) - Put this note in the middle of the grid hum hum alrighty
[*]00:19:824 (3,1) - *Nazi*: make a better blanket and curve (symmetric more than anything) in these sliders. eh its fine (im only saying this because itll take me forever to rearrange everything, sorry for the laziness!

Easy

• I think you could make more easiers patterns, actually this is looks a bit as a Normal diff. It's just my opinion. eh its fine imo

1. 00:28:313 (2) - Don't stack here this slider, it's confusing to read. Try to do something like this pattern 00:32:275 (1) - pretty far apart in the timeline for it to matter
2. 00:54:629 - I'd like to add here a note here with a whistle. nah dont think it matters much, plus im trying to keep the note density a bit lower to compensate for its difficulty

Sorry, I'm noob modding. Good job <3 <3

SuperMICrophone wrote:

why do tv sizes get so many mods ;_;

btw you promised me a mod for this o3o

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[Easy]

00:22:937 (1) - RNC used to signal the break, same goes for the second break later on
00:35:387 (2,3,4) - This pattern would flow better if (2) better followed the direction from (3)-(4). I'm not saying it has to be exact, but anadjustment in that direction wold help. eh its fine, too slow for newbies to care imo
00:53:497 (2,3) - Why not just put (3) at the end of (2)? (So (2) points at (3)) the flow carries to (3)
01:03:118 (3,4) - This looks a little awkward, and may play a little awkward for Easy players. Why not just make (3) a repeat slider? fixed
01:18:964 (-) - This beat should get a note. You've already used 1/2 doubles so it shouldn't be a difficulty problem. its used to create a bang effect with the next note

[Normal]

00:15:297 (3,4,1) - The fact that this isn't symmetrical across the y-axis makes me sad ;_; Why not move (4), respace (1), and then the following (2) can be put in the same spot as the previous pink (3). fixed in cloud's mod
01:24:057 (1,2) - The flow between these sliders is quite choppy, as the direction switches too choppily. Why not move (2) and the consequent notes to the left of (1)? You could even reuse the pink slider, no one will notice.... o3o3o3o3o3o eh its fine LOL

Wow this is a really clean diff. I like the flawless seeming nature of it. thanks!

[Hard]

00:00:583 (1,2,3,1) - The second (1) isn't perfectly centred, disable grid snap and try x:166 y:128 fixed
00:20:673 (5) - The flow going to these notes, then to the following slider seems awkward. I think it'd be preferrable if this note were actually blanketed by these two sliders. Consider moving it to x:196 y:196 and maybe readjusting the sliders. eh its fine
00:25:483 (1) - RNC ok
00:27:181 (1) - RNC ok
00:32:275 (1,2) - In my first playthrough of this this antijump tripped me up. While I suggest you change it, this is more of a warning for this pattern. well I think its fine, the anti jump is far out in the timeline so gives enough time for players to read
00:39:066 (1,2) - These two sliders look really awkward as they don't reflect each other perfectly across a line. Try and make a circle with them. not really noticeable imo
00:46:989 (4,1) - I really, thoroughly enjoyed in the Normal when you clicked along to the Ahs. A similar effect in this difficulty would be very nice. If you don't wish to change the repeating slider, consider shortening the spinner by 1/4 but also moving it forward 1/4, and then placing a NC'd beat on 00:48:121 fixed in cloud's mod
00:52:648 (1) - you suck http://puu.sh/7Nnrc.jpg </3

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01:10:475 (7) - Remove the Finish. gotcha
01:16:700 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - Why not make these two lines of hitcircles symmetrical? nah to make it more interesting to play


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Nice map

-SMIC