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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on jeudi 29 janvier 2015 at 21:20:04

Artist: deadmau5
Title: Orange File
Tags: techno dubstep dnb drum and bass Gabe Nozhomi Veus Project 56 deadmaus
BPM: 182
Filesize: 8004kb
Play Time: 00:35
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,16 stars, 32 notes)
  2. Extra (4,68 stars, 226 notes)
  3. Hard (2,74 stars, 90 notes)
  4. Noz's Insane (3,85 stars, 125 notes)
  5. Veus' Normal (2,07 stars, 62 notes)


Download: deadmau5 - Orange File
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Have you considered Orange ?
posted
Hi, I can Make 2 diff in taiko? thanks
posted
Ok let's go !

Esay : pas grand chose à dire ^^'

Hard :
~ 00:04:747 et 00:15:296 - je rajouterais un circle ici pour lier les 2 patterns (mais c'est peut être de l'overmapping)
~ 00:09:197 (1,2) - Ne les superpose pas. Je trouve que c'est étrange à la suite des 2 précédentes qui ne le sont pas.
~ 00:21:56 (1,2,3) - Interverti la position du 1 et 3 pour plus de fluidité


Insane : omg ces streams :D (tu m'as fait mal)
~ 00:17:604 (10) - Décale la pour être un peu plus près de la fin du silder 9 (par exemple en x:100 y:132)
~ 00:20:406 (4) - Décale la fin du slider en x:251 y:206 (plus fluide je trouve)
~ 00:31:780 - (1,2,3,4,5) - je trouve l'espacement des 3 groupes un peu trop grand mais c'est purement suggestif

En espérant que ça t'aide un peu.
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Nozhomi's mod

Nozhomi wrote:

Ok let's go !

Esay : pas grand chose à dire ^^'

Hard :
~ 00:04:747 et 00:15:296 - je rajouterais un circle ici pour lier les 2 patterns (mais c'est peut être de l'overmapping) non je garde la même cohérence dans le rythme
~ 00:09:197 (1,2) - Ne les superpose pas. Je trouve que c'est étrange à la suite des 2 précédentes qui ne le sont pas. 00:07:878 (3,4) - le sont
~ 00:21:56 (1,2,3) - Interverti la position du 1 et 3 pour plus de fluidité mais ça modifierait trop le spacing


Insane : omg ces streams :D (tu m'as fait mal)
~ 00:17:604 (10) - Décale la pour être un peu plus près de la fin du silder 9 (par exemple en x:100 y:132) ok jai décalé un peu
~ 00:20:406 (4) - Décale la fin du slider en x:251 y:206 (plus fluide je trouve) ok
~ 00:31:780 - (1,2,3,4,5) - je trouve l'espacement des 3 groupes un peu trop grand mais c'est purement suggestif non x)

En espérant que ça t'aide un peu.

merci pour le mod ;)
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04:34 Jethh: hi there !
04:34 Jethh: a friend told me you are a nice modder :3
04:34 nya10: Hi
04:34 nya10: Lol
04:34 nya10: Not really
04:34 Jethh: maybe could you please have a look on my map :3 ?
04:34 Jethh: :o
04:35 nya10: Yes
04:35 nya10: :)
04:35 Jethh: it lasts 33 seconds :x
04:35 *Jethh is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386140 Deadmau5 - Orange File]
04:36 *nya10 is watching [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386140 Deadmau5 - Orange File [Insane]] |Autoplay|
04:36 Jethh: would be really kind :3
04:36 nya10: grumd #2
04:37 nya10: You kill me D:
04:37 nya10: lol
04:37 nya10: Well
04:37 *nya10 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386140 Deadmau5 - Orange File [Insane]]
04:37 nya10: This map is well made
04:37 Jethh: i kill you ?
04:37 Jethh: what do you mean lol
04:38 nya10: You kill me with your streams D:
04:38 Jethh: hahaha
04:38 nya10: The first one is a suggestion
04:38 nya10: How to make some 1/8 kick slider?
04:39 nya10: I think it'll be fit
04:39 nya10: 00:08:538 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please make circle 1-3 , 4 and slider 5 in a linear line
04:39 Jethh: hmm i dont understand well
04:40 nya10: Well, save the 1/8 part for later
04:40 Jethh: okey
04:40 nya10: 00:08:538 (1,2,3,4,5) -
04:41 nya10: In a linear line = make it neat (move circle 1-3 to a bit below)
04:41 nya10: I'm not sure what to be exact coordinate
04:41 nya10: Get my idea?
04:41 Jethh: ok i understand this
04:41 nya10: If not, I'll screenshot lol
04:42 Jethh: its fine ^^ i got it :p
04:43 nya10: 00:22:549 (2,3,4,5,6) - In kiai time, I'd suggest to put the streams at the higher distance snap
04:43 nya10: If you don't want to do it, it's okay though
04:43 nya10: Not bad in overall :)
04:44 Jethh: hmm i increased distance between streams
04:44 Jethh: but i dont wanan change stream
04:44 Jethh: thx !
04:44 nya10: Yeah, just increase the distance
04:44 nya10: You don't need to change the streams, but maybe it'll break the flow though lol
04:45 nya10: What I mean by 1/8 kick sliders
04:45 nya10: See the timing grid only
04:45 Jethh: i ll try 0.42 -> 0.5
04:46 nya10: You're free to put that slider where
04:46 nya10: Why my uploading speed is so low `-`
04:47 Jethh: :3
04:47 nya10: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1428197
04:48 nya10: In my opinion , would be better, especialy if you combine the streams and 1/8 sliders (You're free to change it or not)
04:48 Jethh: hoooo i see
04:48 nya10: Slider 9
04:48 nya10: Although it will be less torturing lol
04:48 nya10: That's all for insane
04:48 Jethh: ok
04:48 *nya10 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386139 Deadmau5 - Orange File [Hard]]
04:50 nya10: 00:32:604 (4,5) -
04:50 nya10: See the timing grid
04:50 nya10: I don't give any attention to the mapping field lol
04:51 Jethh: yup
04:51 nya10: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1428208
04:51 nya10: Hard is good
04:51 nya10: I won't check normal , I'm pretty sure it's good lol (GD)
04:52 Jethh: :D
04:52 nya10: And I'm true :>
04:52 *nya10 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386172 Deadmau5 - Orange File [Gabe's Normal]]
04:52 *nya10 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386138 Deadmau5 - Orange File [Easy]]
04:54 nya10: Easy also good
04:54 nya10: Lol I love it to be ranked <3
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nya10's mod
04:37 *nya10 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386140 Deadmau5 - Orange File [Insane]]
04:39 nya10: 00:08:538 (1,2,3,4,5) - Please make circle 1-3 , 4 and slider 5 in a linear line FIXED

04:43 nya10: 00:22:549 (2,3,4,5,6) - In kiai time, I'd suggest to put the streams at the higher distance snap
04:48 nya10: In my opinion , would be better, especialy if you combine the streams and 1/8 sliders (You're free to change it or not)
I ll keep in mind those 2 suggestions, no change atm.

04:48 *nya10 is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/386139 Deadmau5 - Orange File [Hard]]
04:50 nya10: 00:32:604 (4,5) - FIXED


04:54 nya10: Lol I love it to be ranked <3


fixed few things, thx again for mod :)
posted
Bon j'ai fait un petit check franchement très rapide. J'en ferais peut être un plus poussé si j'en trouve la motivation o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:20:735 (1) - Supprime donc ce New Combo, il est pas nécessaire.


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:098 (5) - Tu peux peut être essayé de faire une plus jolie courbe pour ce slider. Pour pouvoir faire des jolies courbes, fait des sliders avec juste 2 point entre le début et la fin du slider. http://puu.sh/7zto7.jpg
  2. 00:13:648 (1) - Pareil ici
  3. 00:15:790 (6) - Commence le New Combo ici comme tu l'as fait pour 00:05:241 (1).
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Kurai's mod

Kurai wrote:

Bon j'ai fait un petit check franchement très rapide. J'en ferais peut être un plus poussé si j'en trouve la motivation o/

[Easy]
  1. 00:20:735 (1) - Supprime donc ce New Combo, il est pas nécessaire.


[Hard]
  1. 00:03:098 (5) - Tu peux peut être essayé de faire une plus jolie courbe pour ce slider. Pour pouvoir faire des jolies courbes, fait des sliders avec juste 2 point entre le début et la fin du slider. http://puu.sh/7zto7.jpg
  2. 00:13:648 (1) - Pareil ici
  3. 00:15:790 (6) - Commence le New Combo ici comme tu l'as fait pour 00:05:241 (1).

Fixed everything, thx a lot :oops:
posted
hi :3

[General]
  1. try setting combo color 'Gabe's Normal' and 'Hard' and 'Insane' diff o,o try add combo color (like easy diff)
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,255,0
    Combo2 : 255,128,0
    Combo3 : 255,128,64
    Combo4 : 128,64,0
  2. BG 1366x768 or 1024x768 or 800x600 better. try change these.
  3. Remove Letterbox during breaks all diff.


[Easy]
  1. Remove widescreen support.


[Gabe's Normal]
  1. PreviewTime is '-1' now. try change '22878'
  2. Remove widescreen support.
  3. 00:15:790 (2) - this spacing is sure? i think (1) perfect stack more readable imo.
  4. 00:31:615 (2) - same as ↑
  5. 00:33:098 (5) - change 1/2 slider more good sound imo.


[Hard]
  1. Remove widescreen support.
  2. 00:05:736 (2) - add clap slider end.
  3. 00:10:516 (3) - add clap.
  4. 00:32:109 (2) - move (x:112 y:168). stack 00:30:790 - this better.


[Insane]
  1. 00:28:318 (2) - add clap slider end.
  2. 00:12:329 - unsnapped green line. change should time 00:12:339 → 00:12:329


I like this song and cool BG!
good luck!
posted
P o M u T a's mod

P o M u T a wrote:

hi :3

[General]
  1. try setting combo color 'Gabe's Normal' and 'Hard' and 'Insane' diff o,o try add combo color (like easy diff) OK
    [Colours]
    Combo1 : 255,255,0
    Combo2 : 255,128,0
    Combo3 : 255,128,64
    Combo4 : 128,64,0
  2. BG 1366x768 or 1024x768 or 800x600 better. try change these. E/N/H are 16/10 and I is 16/9, seems fine for me
  3. Remove Letterbox during breaks all diff. 0 break in all maps lol, anyway why not x)


[Easy]
  1. Remove widescreen support.
ok

[Hard]
  1. Remove widescreen support.
  2. 00:05:736 (2) - add clap slider end.
  3. 00:10:516 (3) - add clap.
  4. 00:32:109 (2) - move (x:112 y:168). stack 00:30:790 - this better.

ok

[Insane]
  1. 00:28:318 (2) - add clap slider end.
  2. 00:12:329 - unsnapped green line. change should time 00:12:339 → 00:12:329

ok

I like this song and cool BG!
good luck!


fixed. thx for mod ! :3
posted
Only changed for a 1/2 slider, fixed combo colours and disabled the letterboxes.
http://puu.sh/7BDBj.txt

Thanks (:
posted
Quick random irc mod
21:21 No Dap: 00:16:285 (1,2) - this kind of sliders often get beginners
21:21 Jethh: especially for easier diffs, cause i worked a lot on insane, not that much on others x)
21:21 No Dap: because they usually tend to hit whatever is closer
21:21 Jethh: i see... how could i fix this ?
21:22 No Dap: mm i think you'd have to rearrange a bit
21:23 No Dap: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1440200
21:23 No Dap: i truned slider 4
21:24 No Dap: didn't move it
21:24 No Dap: i mean rotate
21:25 No Dap: let me know when you finished changing it
21:26 Jethh: ok done
21:26 Jethh: may i update ?
21:27 No Dap: uh im not done modding though
21:27 No Dap: do you want me to stop here?
21:27 Jethh: nope go one please !
21:27 No Dap: ok
21:27 No Dap: 00:22:878 (1) - this can be blanket much better
21:28 No Dap: 00:19:911 (2) - i would also move this down a little bit for drop flow
21:29 Jethh: increasing spacing ?
21:30 No Dap: no dont increase it
21:30 No Dap: just move it down like this
21:30 No Dap: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1440215
21:31 No Dap: and move 00:20:735 (3) - to somewhere it fits the DS so you dont have to change the rest
21:33 Jethh: ok
21:35 No Dap: mm i just looked over hard and some of your pattern doent make sense to me
21:35 No Dap: 00:26:505 (2,3,4,5,1) - this part is way too empty compared to other part, and this is KIAI time.
21:35 No Dap: you should fill in notes i think.
21:37 Jethh: hmm yeah i know i have bog troubles with this diff
21:40 No Dap: 00:32:604 (4,5,6) - and this pattern
21:41 No Dap: http://puu.sh/7Evs7.jpg this is what i suggest
21:44 Jethh: ho yes seems better
21:47 Jethh: thx a lot for your help
21:47 No Dap: no problem~~
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No Dap's Mod

No Dap wrote:

Easy
21:21 No Dap: 00:16:285 (1,2) - this kind of sliders often get beginners Fixed
21:27 No Dap: 00:22:878 (1) - this can be blanket much better Fixed
21:28 No Dap: 00:19:911 (2) - i would also move this down a little bit for drop flow Fixed
21:31 No Dap: and move 00:20:735 (3) - to somewhere it fits the DS so you dont have to change the rest Fixed
Hard
21:35 No Dap: 00:26:505 (2,3,4,5,1) - this part is way too empty compared to other part, and this is KIAI time. Fixed
21:40 No Dap: 00:32:604 (4,5,6) - and this pattern Fixed


Thx a lot, very kind modder :o
posted
yop yop à la demande de Gabe je suis la :3/

General

  1. Alors les BG sont vraiment cool, mais les dimensions c'est pas du tout ça D: ça doit etre soit 1024x768 soit 1366x768, ni plus ni moins, c'est unrankable sinon, j’espère que tu vas réussir à trouver avec les bonnes dimensions :/
  2. Utilise ce mp3 plutôt > http://puu.sh/7EZ3t/fc1cf13a18.rar 192Kbits/s pour une meilleur qualité :3
  3. Le soft clap que tu utilise est assez bruyant. Essaye celui la je trouve qu'il fit parfaitement avec la musique > http://puu.sh/7F3pa/2d6e2ccdf9.rar met le dans ton dossier, puis sur tes diff dans timing setup passe de S à S:C1, demande à gabe de t'expliquer si tu comprend pas :3

Easy

  1. HP+1
  2. 00:14:966 (4) - il devrait pas y avoir un clap ici ? comme tu as fait 00:04:417 (4) -
  3. 00:24:198 (2,5) - évite ce genre d'overlap c'pas trés jolie, et confus pour les nouveaux joueurs
  4. 00:25:516 (3,4,5) - clap sur ces trois notes
  5. 00:26:505 (5,1) - je les stackerai si j'était toi, ça se joue bcp mieux
  6. 00:30:790 (2) - clap
  7. 00:30:790 (2,3) - erreur de spacing entre ces 2 notes on passe de 0,97 à 1,23 de Distance spacing
  8. 00:35:406 - ajoute une green line avec volume 5%

Gabe's Normal

  1. HP & OD +1 pour améliorer le spread
  2. Ouh ouh, check AiMod xD t'as pas mal de truc à fixer x)
  3. 00:04:417 (1,2) - anti jump sur une normal diff ? hum '-' aprés si tu veux vraiment le garder tu voudrais pas mettre un petite écart comme tu as fait 00:14:966 (1,2) - et 00:30:790 (1,2) - pour la consistance aprés si tu réajuste un peu le pattern tu peux enlever l'anti jump facilement. up to u !
  4. 00:06:230 (4,5) - essaye ce rythm ça fit mieux la musique imo
  5. 00:08:373 (4) - tourne le dans ce sens pour un meilleur flow
  6. 00:16:285 (3) - same as before-
  7. 00:18:098 (2) - je bougerai cette note en x:226,y:16 si on suit la trajectoire du slider précédent ça flow bcp mieux.
  8. un peu hard pour une normal mais nice diff :3

Hard

  • je vais faire majoritairement des suggestions de new combo ici
  1. 00:03:098 (5) - Add NC
  2. 00:04:417 (9,4,5) - la blanket est un peu raté, juste un anchor point suffit pour faire une courbe parfaite regarde
  3. 00:08:703 (5) - Add NC
  4. 00:11:010 (4) - ^
  5. 00:11:999 (1,2,3,4) - ça serait un petit bpm je dirai rien mais considérant le bpm actuel c'est un peu trop dur pour une hard diff remplace par ce rythm, et si tu as fixé les NC d'avant, delete le NC ici
  6. 00:12:329 (5) - Add NC
  7. 00:17:933 (6) - ^
  8. 00:18:428 (1,2) - stack parfaitement
  9. 00:18:428 (1) - delete NC
  10. 00:19:252 (5) - add NC
  11. 00:20:241 (7) - ^
  12. 00:22:219 (1) - delete NC
  13. 00:22:549 (2,3,4,5) - comme pour 00:11:999 (1,2,3,4) - remplace par ce rythm
  14. 00:22:878 (3) - add NC
  15. 00:23:703 (1) - delete NC
  16. 00:24:197 (2) - add NC
  17. 00:26:834 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - D: bcp trop dur pour une hard ! 00:26:917 (4,7,10) - delete ces 3 notes
  18. 00:28:483 (2,3) - stack mieux
  19. 00:29:472 (5) - add NC
  20. 00:33:098 (6,7,8,9) - encore une fois remplace par un slider stream.
  21. 00:35:406 - ajoute une green line avec volume 5%
  22. niveau placement rien à dire ça joue trés bien!

Insane

  1. 00:07:054 (12) - t'as oublié sampleset normal ici
  2. 00:16:120 (1) - ^
  3. 00:13:318 (5) - il manque un clap
  4. 00:17:604 (10) - sampleset normal
  5. 00:22:054 (1) - c'est quoi ce petit NC tout seul ici ? x) delete
  6. 00:32:604 (6) - sampleset normal
  7. 00:33:428 (1) - add a green line avec volume 5%
  8. orz rien d'autre à dire cool diff =w=b
Pour quelqu'un qui débute en mapping c'est vraiment bon! Good luck pour ranker cette map ;)
posted
Umi's mod

Umi wrote:

yop yop à la demande de Gabe je suis la :3/

General

  1. Alors les BG sont vraiment cool, mais les dimensions c'est pas du tout ça D: ça doit etre soit 1024x768 soit 1366x768, ni plus ni moins, c'est unrankable sinon, j’espère que tu vas réussir à trouver avec les bonnes dimensions :/
  2. Utilise ce mp3 plutôt > http://puu.sh/7EZ3t/fc1cf13a18.rar 192Kbits/s pour une meilleur qualité :3
  3. Le soft clap que tu utilise est assez bruyant. Essaye celui la je trouve qu'il fit parfaitement avec la musique > http://puu.sh/7F3pa/2d6e2ccdf9.rar met le dans ton dossier, puis sur tes diff dans timing setup passe de S à S:C1, demande à gabe de t'expliquer si tu comprend pas :3

Easy

  1. HP+1
  2. 00:14:966 (4) - il devrait pas y avoir un clap ici ? comme tu as fait 00:04:417 (4) -
  3. 00:24:198 (2,5) - évite ce genre d'overlap c'pas trés jolie, et confus pour les nouveaux joueurs
  4. 00:25:516 (3,4,5) - clap sur ces trois notes
  5. 00:26:505 (5,1) - je les stackerai si j'était toi, ça se joue bcp mieux
  6. 00:30:790 (2) - clap
  7. 00:30:790 (2,3) - erreur de spacing entre ces 2 notes on passe de 0,97 à 1,23 de Distance spacing
  8. 00:35:406 - ajoute une green line avec volume 5%

Hard

  • je vais faire majoritairement des suggestions de new combo ici
  1. 00:03:098 (5) - Add NC
  2. 00:04:417 (9,4,5) - la blanket est un peu raté, juste un anchor point suffit pour faire une courbe parfaite regarde
  3. 00:08:703 (5) - Add NC
  4. 00:11:010 (4) - ^
  5. 00:11:999 (1,2,3,4) - ça serait un petit bpm je dirai rien mais considérant le bpm actuel c'est un peu trop dur pour une hard diff remplace par ce rythm, et si tu as fixé les NC d'avant, delete le NC ici
  6. 00:12:329 (5) - Add NC
  7. 00:17:933 (6) - ^
  8. 00:18:428 (1,2) - stack parfaitement
  9. 00:18:428 (1) - delete NC
  10. 00:19:252 (5) - add NC
  11. 00:20:241 (7) - ^
  12. 00:22:219 (1) - delete NC
  13. 00:22:549 (2,3,4,5) - comme pour 00:11:999 (1,2,3,4) - remplace par ce rythm
  14. 00:22:878 (3) - add NC
  15. 00:23:703 (1) - delete NC
  16. 00:24:197 (2) - add NC
  17. 00:26:834 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - D: bcp trop dur pour une hard ! 00:26:917 (4,7,10) - delete ces 3 notes
  18. 00:28:483 (2,3) - stack mieux
  19. 00:29:472 (5) - add NC
  20. 00:33:098 (6,7,8,9) - encore une fois remplace par un slider stream.
  21. 00:35:406 - ajoute une green line avec volume 5%
  22. niveau placement rien à dire ça joue trés bien!

Insane

  1. 00:07:054 (12) - t'as oublié sampleset normal ici
  2. 00:16:120 (1) - ^
  3. 00:13:318 (5) - il manque un clap
  4. 00:17:604 (10) - sampleset normal
  5. 00:22:054 (1) - c'est quoi ce petit NC tout seul ici ? x) delete
  6. 00:32:604 (6) - sampleset normal
  7. 00:33:428 (1) - add a green line avec volume 5%
  8. orz rien d'autre à dire cool diff =w=b
Pour quelqu'un qui débute en mapping c'est vraiment bon! Good luck pour ranker cette map ;)

Fixed everything.
Merci beaucoup Umi :oops:
posted
Je t'avais dit que ma prochaine star serait pour toi, et ben voila ^^
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Random Mod from modreqs since the song is awesome!
  1. Unrankable Issue
  2. Highly Suggested
  3. Suggestion
  4. Just my own opinion (feel free to ignore)
General
  1. Gabe's Normal has a different Preview Point than the other diffs.
Insane
  1. 00:05:301 (13) - Consider splitting this into 2 circles for better emphasis on the white tick at
    00:05:466 (14) - . (see the screenshot below for example)
  2. 00:05:631 (1) - A 1/4 slider and a circle OR a triplet could fit better here since the big white tick
    you mapped with the slider tail is really loud and should be mapped with a circle imo. (See the
    Screenshot below)

  3. 00:10:246 (1) - Move to 203|174 for proper stack with the previous notes.
    emphasized note here and could really take the NC.
  4. 00:17:829 (1,2,3) - Maybe make some Symmetry here? Place 00:18:158 (2) - at x:256 and 00:18:323 (3) -
    at 448|56.
  5. 00:32:664 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This stream could look way better with convert Slider to Stream. It
    looks kinda weird to me :/


    Nice diff overall! You could play some more with the volume in my eyes but not needed. Good job
Hard
  1. 00:03:158 (1) - Why using the old slider algorithm? Doesn't really fit to me here :c
  2. 00:08:103 (4) - - Consider doing as I did in the Screenshot for better emphasis at 00:08:433
  3. 00:10:576 (3) - This feels kinda weird to me since the two white ticks next to this tick are way more
    emphasized! Consider mapping it like I did in the Screenshot.



    Since the last two sections are going to repeat I wont list them! Change it for the next ones too.

  4. 00:25:576 (1) - This slider feels out of place to me since there aren't other sliders like this here.
    Consider changing it into a normal curved one for more consitency within the diff.
Gabe's Normal
  1. 00:13:708 (2,1) - This blanket bothered me a lot while playing. Consider changing it x-x
  2. 00:31:674 (2) - Object isn't snapped
  3. No more Issues to me. Gabe pro, awesome diff. Really love the choice of CS here <3
Easy
  1. Seems fine to me aswell. Some personal look issues here and there and some nlanekts could be fixed but
    otherwise nice diff.
Hope I was abke to help and Good luck!

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Insane
  1. 00:05:301 (13) - Consider splitting this into 2 circles for better emphasis on the white tick at
    00:05:466 (14) - .
    No, enough emphasized by the after stream move
  2. 00:05:631 (1) - A 1/4 slider and a circle OR a triplet could fit better here since the big white tick
    you mapped with the slider tail is really loud and should be mapped with a circle imo.

    Ok
  3. 00:10:246 (1) - Move to 203|174 for proper stack with the previous notes.
    emphasized note here and could really take the NC.
    Fixed
  4. 00:17:829 (1,2,3) - Maybe make some Symmetry here? Place 00:18:158 (2) - at x:256 and 00:18:323 (3) -
    at 448|56.

    Nope i wanna keep like this
  5. 00:32:664 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - This stream could look way better with convert Slider to Stream. It
    looks kinda weird to me :/

    Nope imo look<music in this kind of music
Hard
  1. 00:03:158 (1) - Why using the old slider algorithm? Doesn't really fit to me here :c
  2. 00:08:103 (4) - - Consider doing as I did in the Screenshot for better emphasis at 00:08:433
    Changed, but not exactly as suggested
  3. 00:10:576 (3) - This feels kinda weird to me since the two white ticks next to this tick are way more
    emphasized! Consider mapping it like I did in the Screenshot.

    Fixed
  4. 00:25:576 (1) - This slider feels out of place to me since there aren't other sliders like this here.
    Consider changing it into a normal curved one for more consitency within the diff.

    Fixed


Thx a lot for mod and star <3
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Je regarde à l'instant (:


http://puu.sh/7Qf7A.txt
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Ello, mod from queue.
[Insane]
00:05:631 (1,3) - Please move more apart, just so that your objects appear evenly spaced, without any necessary overlaps.

00:09:916 (10) - Would look more aligned with the next triplets 00:10:411 (2,3,4) - , if it was bent at an angle similar to them.

00:13:378 (5) - Move to 368:184, and adjust tail to 352:136, so it can blanket 00:13:708 (7) - 's approach circle along with 00:13:543 (6) - like this:

(It can also be somewhat aligned to 00:13:872 (8) - too)

00:17:829 (1,2,3) - Are you trying to make these objects appear symmetrical? If so, I should point out that 00:18:158 (2) - isn't properly in the center.

00:19:971 (1,4) - Move more apart.

[Hard]
AR - 1?

[Easy/Normal]
Okay.
Ergh, noob mod :( No kds.
Good luck!
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