1. Hard (4,63 stars, 293 notes)
2. j35u's Insane (5 stars, 356 notes)
3. Normal (3,04 stars, 172 notes)

jmaeshawn wrote:

This is a very nice map, good job on it!

Here's a couple of things I found:

(All Difficulties)
BPM: Change to 137.0 (136.99 BPM is off)
There are a lot of unsnapped beats right now. Resnap all beats to 1/4 snap divisor.

[b](Hard)
00:09:733 (6) Align with 00:09:295 (5)?.
00:17:616 (6) Beat is off grid and not spaced properly. Move this up 3 spaces on the grid. ~ do not think it necessary to remove this sparcing, because this part turns out to be easy.
00:18:919 (8) Same as above, but move 3 spaces down on the grid. ^
00:20:681 (1) Align this with 00:20:244 (9)? ~fix
01:29:003 (7,8,9) Spacing on these is a little off. Move slightly closer to (6). ~fix
01:44:222 (7) Also move this closer to (6) and fix subsequent spacing. ~fix

Also, you have many triplets such as 01:59:441 (2,3,4) that might be better as a stack, but that's just my personal preference.

I also think that 00:36:010 would be a good place to set a preview point.

All in all, nice job! Hope to see this ranked soon!

*Star for you~*

j35u5891221 wrote:

Interesante map perv :3 ya hice una diff. para tu map "j35u's Hard"...jejeje...

Normal: está divertido de jugar...suckeo moddeando y haciendo maps normales...jejeje
Hard: la estoy jugando en este momento...mejoraste el spacing es más facil de leer

j35u's Hard: no sé si cambiarle el nombre a insane o "trippy" o cosas así...LOL ES UN PROTOTIPO

seguid así

Star y que el map llegue a ser rankeable...
Suerte

P.D.: me suscribí al tema para cuando lleguen futuros modders, me haré responsable de mi diff. :3

• Acorta el mp3 si puedes, por favor. Si no puedes, pídemelo, yo lo puedo hacer fácilmente con audacity.

1. Puedes poner un punto de "vista previa" (preview) yendo al menú Timing -> Set current point as preview. Aplícalo a todas las dificultades.

1. Las pequeñas adiciones son buenas, sólo una cosilla me molestó: ¡el cursor! Se ve extraño ver a una estrella estar girando lentamente en tu cursor todo el tiempo mientras juegas. D=

1. Suena muy extraño con Slider Tick Rate de 3, no estoy seguro si deberías de mantenerlo. Supongo que es técnicamente rankeable comoquiera. D=

1. Supongo que ya estas consiente de que esto necesita más hitsounds. :p
2. Aah, si vas a mantener el quinto color de combo, necesitas agregarlo a las otras dificultades también.

Gens wrote:

[General]

• Acorta el mp3 si puedes, por favor. Si no puedes, pídemelo, yo lo puedo hacer fácilmente con audacity. ~~ok, ya lo hice xd

1. Puedes poner un punto de "vista previa" (preview) yendo al menú Timing -> Set current point as preview. Aplícalo a todas las dificultades.

~~ok

[Skin]

1. Las pequeñas adiciones son buenas, sólo una cosilla me molestó: ¡el cursor! Se ve extraño ver a una estrella estar girando lentamente en tu cursor todo el tiempo mientras juegas. D=

~~ok (el cursor lo puse más azul oscuro y en el cursoltrail puse la estrella)

[Normal]

1. Suena muy extraño con Slider Tick Rate de 3, no estoy seguro si deberías de mantenerlo. Supongo que es técnicamente rankeable comoquiera. D=

~~ok (de verdad tenías razón, se escuchaba raro xD)

[j35u's Hard]

1. Supongo que ya estas consiente de que esto necesita más hitsounds. :p
2. Aah, si vas a mantener el quinto color de combo, necesitas agregarlo a las otras dificultades también.

01:16:019 (10,11) - wtf spacing
01:27:068 (1,2) - wtf spacing

~ ~ ~

Muy buen mapa, ¿eh? Esta es una tonadita clásica para todos aquellos que han jugado Mario Kart.
Me pregunto comoquiera, ¿porqué está el beatmap en WiP/Help? Lo que postié no fue mucho, y el mapa es definitivamente rankable en este estado (aparte de la falta de hitsounds en la difficultad de j35u).

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi nerv! Me dio la vena moddera y me puse con tu mapa lol xD

Veamos~ De todas formas no tienes que hacer los cambios si no te parecen bien, al fin y al cabo es tu mapa xD ~ Todos me parecieron bien ;O

~Normal~
00:11:082 (6) - New combo.~ok
00:27:059 (9) - ^~ok
01:14:089 (6) - ^~ok
01:20:080 (6,7,8) - No está mal, se que el Distance Snap esta bien usado y todo eso, pero si te das cuenta la mitad del (7) está fuera de los "limites" de la cuadricula. Puede que a veces no se vean estos circulos (como por ejemplo jugando multi). Mejor muevelos un poco mas abajo :3~ok, hasta quedo mejor xD
01:28:091 (5) - New combo.~ok
01:56:006 (8) - Lo mismo de antes de los limites oxo...~ok

~Hard~
00:13:014 (9) - New combo.~ok
00:16:086 (5) - ^~ok
00:16:086 (5,6,7,8,9) - El problema de los limites de nuevo >.< Intenta que los circulos entren en la cuadricula (por ejemplo haz que el (5) quede justo encima del (9) :3)~ok
00:27:015 (5) - New combo.~ok
00:33:050 (4) - ^~ok
00:37:088 (6) - ^~ok
01:16:020 (9) - ^~ok
01:20:080 (8) - ^~ok

~j35u5's Hard~

- Cambia el nombre a Insane, creo que le pega mas xD
- Intenta que los sliders te queden "uniformes", hay algunos feos por ahi (esto es mas cuestion de estetica, pero bueno xD)

00:16:042 (9) - New combo.
00:19:093 (8) - Esto es a lo que me referia con lo de los sliders xD
00:32:019 (10) - New combo. (20 es mucho!!)
00:38:076 (6) - El circulo ese medio escondido no me gusta nada... xD
00:40:007 (9) - New combo.
01:13:036 (8) - ^
01:15:099 (7) - ^
01:21:024 (7) - ^
01:35:026 (9) - ^
02:06:090 (1) - Sinceramente veo el spinner muuuuuuy largo para una insane @.@

(Jesús hizo los cambios sin ningun problema ;o)

Buen mapa, no esta nada mal Te recomendaria que acabaras el spinner, la imagen con el negro de las barras queda un poco sosete no crees? xD

Os doy estrellita ^w^

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Change the background colour to black?
cursortradil.png is an excessive file, please remove and full submit.
The cursor doesn't look very nice, in my opinion.

I couldn't understand your new combo scheme, so it wasn't modded.

[Normal]

00:16:020 (4) - Ugly slider could be neater.
00:18:061 - Could stick a long spinner here, if you want to.
01:32:085 (4) - New combo?
01:38:010 (4) - ^

Overall, it felt very empty, kinda boring. It'd be better if it had more notes, I suppose.

[Hard]

00:49:005 (6,7,8) - Space these evenly? (move 8 down or 7 down)
00:57:015 (1,2,3,4) - Better square?

Felt nicer than Normal.

[j35u's Insane]

Add j35u as a tag.

00:18:018 (5) - Ugly slider, use Bezier and manipulate it to be smooth.
00:19:093 (8) - ^
01:21:024 (1) - Make the vertical part fully vertical?

Hitcircles are a bit small; I personally think small hitcircles are no fun to play, so I'd make it a tick bigger.

Nice overall though. Star~

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*spinner-background is from Super Mario Kart, not Nintendo 64's Mario Kart =\ ~I know, I know. But I found that looked better the image of the Super NES version of mario kart
*Timing seems to be a teeny tiny bit off, but I really can't put my finger on it. I'm probably wrong xp

[Normal]
Slider velocity is a little bit higher than what I'd like to see for the easiest difficulty, but it's fine.
02:03:028 (8) - Perhaps make this repeat one or two more times. If twice, move the spinner forward to the red tick.~Done
*I recommend adding kiai like in Insane

[Hard]
01:03:072 (1) - I really like this, but it could be improved upon a bit so that the inside yellow star doesn't look like it's malformed. Use this ss for reference if you want. ok ~Done
*Kiai please <3

[Insane]
Kinda overmapped, but that's not necessarily a bad thing. I kinda like it
02:06:090 (1) - Ends at an awkward place. Hmm... maybe just extend it for three measures and let it fade out (silence it) or something? =x
*Perhaps add kiai in the two spots in the second chorus like you did for the first?

[General]
*spinner-background is from Super Mario Kart, not Nintendo 64's Mario Kart =\ ~I know, I know. But I found that looked better the image of the Super NES version of mario kart

Blazevoir wrote:

Ahh, this brings back memories... I miss Mario Kart 64 (Why'd I have to get rid of it ><)

Anyways, you forgot to put Mario Kart on your tags Also:

[General]
*spinner-background is from Super Mario Kart, not Nintendo 64's Mario Kart =\ ~I know, I know. But I found that looked better the image of the Super NES version of mario kart

The SNES Mario Kart image might confuse those who don't know about the Mario Kart series... I'd say change or remove it, but it's up to you...

whymeman wrote:

Lets see.....

[Normal]

00:56:072 (7) - It sounds more reasonable to have this as a new combo than to have it at 00:57:015 (1).~fix
01:19:005 (2,3,4) - Not liking how these are bunched up. When you look at the pair of notes like with 01:14:089 (1,2), you can see they are spaced apart. Make sure to look into fixing that since you want to keep the spacing the same throughout the map (With the exception of jumps or BPM changes).
01:20:080 (6,7,8) - ^
01:38:010 (4,5,6,7) - ^
01:46:086 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:59:034 (5,6,7) - ^~All Fixed

[Hard]

I don't see a break in this difficulty? ~unnecessarily removed the spinner after the slider of the star

Also, make sure to add j35u5891221 to the Tags in all difficulties as well.~ok xD

whymeman wrote:

Still forgot to add j35u5891221 for the Tags (: ^_^) ....

whymeman wrote:

What the...

[Hard]

02:05:069 (3,4) - Too far apart.~ok

Also, please be very careful with edits after a bubble. Also, what is the cursortradil.png for? I see cursortrail.png next to it which is the proper name to use to make that skin object funtion......Removed!