1. Adventure (4.64 stars, 226 notes)
2. Soft (2.94 stars, 145 notes)

blissfulyoshi wrote:

BPM: 72 (I think it is flat with the new offset)
offset: 1033 fixed~

You have 3 .osb files, please remove the 2 unneeded ones Thanks~Removed~
Add a preview point to both diffs. Uh...sorry but what is preview point?

Normal:

Combo mod:
00:04:95 (5) - new combo since you usually would put a new combo on something that sounds similar ot the end of 4
00:24:33 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 00:17:67 (1)
00:54:34 (6) - new combo for consistency with previous combos
01:04:76 (7) - new combo? Do you mean 6?
Fixed
Timing section mod:
If you can have a timing section that is directly on a note, please move it back a quarter note if possible.
Sorry my english is so poor that couldn't understand what it means...who can explain it to me?
Hard:
Combo mod:
00:29:34 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 00:36:00 (1)
01:26:43 (9) - new combo?
Fixed
Timing section mod:
same as normal.

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Nice and relaxing map. Star.

alvisto wrote:

Your offset is too early. Use blissfulyoshi's timing suggestion, it's quite accurate for me.

HARD
00:39:36 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1) - Actually you could try jumps here to make 00:41:03 (1) easier to see when playing ? Like this. Fixed~
01:00:19 (3) - whistle at the start of slider ? I change the hitsound around there~

NORMAL
Perfect and beautiful.

General :

1.3 seconds audio lead in is too long I think. Make it 2 seconds ? Fixed

Star !

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Timing section mod:
If you can have a timing section that is directly on a note, please move it back a quarter note if possible.

DJPop wrote:

Suggest to silence all spinner-spin and spinner-bonus.
~Normal~
Fine.
~Hard~
01:15:82 (6,1) - too far
01:22:70 (5,1) - ^

gdeath wrote:

Overall:tags:吧game改成video game?

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Preview point: the point where the music starts playing when you click on the map.
How to set the preview point: In the editor go to to the point where you want your preview point to be and then click "timing" on the top bar, the same bar where file is, and then click the bottom option "Set Current Position as Preview." Now, that point will be your preview point.
Also, you forgot to resnap the notes after changing the timing, so please resnap all notes.

alvisto wrote:

意思就是说，假如在上面的timeline那边，你有timing section是刚刚好落在一个note的话，就把它移前一点。因为有时你玩时太早按到note的话，之前timing section的hitsound会出现。

Doomsday93 wrote:

-timing looks good (wow. a timable piano piece )
-maybe make an easy? shouldn't be hard with a short song like this I change the name of diffs',how about that?
-if you can, shorten the mp3 to get rid of the unmapped space at the end? I guess I need help again for I know nothing about deal with mp3...
[NORMAL]
all good
[HARD]
01:22:70 (5,1) - this jump feels odd to me. maybe remove it? I had shorten the spacing~
nice, relaxing map. good job . could use an easy difficulty though
star'd

Lissette wrote:

Hi!
Normal
00:43:032 (1) - too near from the end point of the prev spinner, I suggest this: 00:43:032 (1,2) - remove, end spinner at 00:43:053, and silence the spinner, its up to you
01:32:069 (1) - too near from the end point of the prev spinner
I made the spinner end earlier~
Hard
Suggestions
00:22:007 (3) - remove?
00:25:040 (3) - move to the next red tick, and remove one repeat
I like the note sound like that~so no~
Nice music and map
Star!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Starts Suggestions:
Resnap all notes on all difficulties.

[Soft]
Some objects aren't snapped correctly.
Use AIMod for some help, too much objects unsnapped.

[Relax]
Here too, some objects unsnapped.
00:02:028 (3,4) - Spacing.
00:04:099 (2,3) - ^

GbL wrote:

I suggest only use more spacing in Soft, the rest looks good.
Star.

1. 00:22:282 (3,4) - 从整体来说,重叠会比较好看

1. 建议:note大一点看起来更好
2. 00:51:032 (1,2,3,4) - 1开始的地方有被前面还没消失的note挡住,不是那么好看
3. 01:29:782 (1,2,3) - 开头都加whistle
4. 01:41:449 - 这个break完全没必要,删掉吧

Breeze wrote:

废话不多说,直接mod:

[Soft]

1. 00:22:282 (3,4) - 从整体来说,重叠会比较好看

[Relax]

1. 建议:note大一点看起来更好
2. 00:51:032 (1,2,3,4) - 1开始的地方有被前面还没消失的note挡住,不是那么好看
3. 01:29:782 (1,2,3) - 开头都加whistle
4. 01:41:449 - 这个break完全没必要,删掉吧

不错
star~

Kytoxid wrote:

Generally, there was a bit too much lead-in time, in my opinion.

[Soft]
00:11:003 (1,2,3) - Try to keep spacing within a combo to be exact, especially the difference between touching and not touching. Here, 1-2 is closer than 2-3.
If I was to be picky, you should keep the spacing consistent within the whole song (either 1/4 stacked, or 1/4 not stacked), but if you don't change around too much, it's not THAT noticeable, although perhaps more so with Easy mod.
00:30:019 (5) - Not snapped.
01:23:094 (2) - Move a bit to line up with 3?
01:29:078 (1,2,3) - Nicer triangle?

[Relax]
00:14:099 (2,3) - Angle looks a bit weird, shift 3 up a bit?
00:22:028 (4) - Right 1 grid?
00:55:040 (6,7) - There was a few shifts in 1/4 spacing up until now, but it was constant within their phrases, this was the first one I noticed while playing.
00:56:044 (1,2,3) - I like nicer triangles. You don't have to, of course.
01:03:011 (1) - Left a grid.
01:17:069 (1,2,3) - More nicer triangles? This one actually looked a little bad.

Very soothing song, and nice maps in general, starred.

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]
Artist name is a little bit weird.
OK... 'Nam Goo-min' is right in Korea. 'Nam' is family name. And 'Goo-min' is first name.
'Nam,Goo-min' seems likes Nam and Goo-min. change the artist name to 'Nam Goo-min'.

[Soft]
00:27:069 (1) - move to left by 1 grid?

[Relax]
01:12:049 (7) - How about make it likes this? I think more fit at song.
01:15:082 (6) - ^ same suggestion
01:37:069 (1,2) - I suggest this makes to a slider. Also, audio volume 10 at end of slider may works better in my opinion.
01:39:036 (1,2) - ^
01:41:003 (1,2) - ^
01:43:053 (1,2) - ^
01:43:094 (1,2) - ^
01:44:036 (1,2) - ^

Nice instrument. Star

Armin wrote:

[Soft]
Nice, the maps with the hitsounds are great

[Relax]
00:14:366 (1,2) Whistles at the start
00:18:324 Whistle at the start
00:37:699 (1,3) Whistles at the start
00:43:324 Whistle on the second repeat

Omg, I don't see problems! O_O
Starred

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

NICE MAP
没什么大毛病。
个人感觉哨音加多了，有点吵，然后hard里的3连删掉，跟曲不合。

jump设置很Nice。

Shinxyn wrote:

Wow, relaxing song

Soft-
It's quite nice, only things that I didn't like was..

SPOILER

00:41:044 (1,1,2,3) - The spinner feels too rushed, and notes came too quick after the spinner, kinda felt too fast for this section's pace, maybe (if you want) extend the spinner to 00:43:032 and keep it empty till 00:44:036 (1), the other spinner of this length (at 01:31:003) was fine since the section felt faster
01:06:086 (1) - I suggest making individual timing panels for the finish hitsounded notes (make them quieter by 2-3 more ticks please)
01:43:053 (1,1,1) - don't need hitsounds here (like Relax?~)
01:46:003 (1) - extend this a whole beat (to the next white tick), it doesn't sound right where you ended it

Relax
I am picky-

SPOILER

00:41:003 (1) - maybe lower this volume by a tick or two
01:37:090 (2,2,2,2,2,2) - completely silencing these felt odd, cuz players wouldn't know if they hit or not...
01:46:003 (1) - same as Soft

SPOILER

I honestly think using soft whistle (or any default hitsound for that matter) doesn't match the music, it would work if you used them on your own beats, but it doesn't seem that way, in other words, I think there might be a bit too much whistles >_< (ignore me in this matter). And the volume increase near the end of the map, it increased too much for my taste, it got too loud.

Lokamp wrote:

Soft
00:31:003 (7) - new combo here
01:24:036 (3) - ^
01:26:044 (6) - whistle the start and the end of this slider 0_0?Don't understand why...
01:43:053 (1,1,1) - move these beats: 1 square left (green), 1 square right (yellow) and 1 square up (red)
Fixed~
Relax
00:09:036 (5) - new combo here
00:12:069 (5) - ^
00:59:036 (1,2,3,4) - start these sliders with soft finish
01:03:011 (1,2,3) - ^
01:22:049 (4) - finish here
Fixed new combo,I add finish but its too loud,then I try to turn down the volume that part,but stll doesn't fit...so I have to give up...
Nice calm song! A star for you ^^ (maybe try to add a little more finish hitsounds...)

aerisu wrote:

Always suggestions, but :

I prefered when the finals notes are in the direction of middle screen instead of in the direction outside ( Err, I don't know how to tell this in english, but I wanted to say that I prefer the previous end )

For 1 : 37, maybe try sliders?

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Does someone has the old version of [Relax] ? I really prefer the old end

Azure_Kyte wrote:

Here's my mod, sorry it took so long


[Soft]
No Problems found. I think it's flawless. Great job

[Relax]
00:56:086 (2,3) - make 2 a whistle, 3 a finish? whistle sound well~but finish too loud>_<
01:06:086 (3) - Feels morenatural if it's moved forward 1/4 beat. Up to you Uh...I won't change~
01:12:049 (7) - Move 3 lvl3 grid spaces down? Fixed~
No problems found

Great job starred

aerisu wrote:

aerisu wrote:

maybe would i have done curving sliders for the end

In case you didn't see what I mean : I placed sliders in different angle, so you can choose what you want If you want curves ( Personnaly I like the yellow and blue one, but not the green ^^ )

( Of course, once again, I placed them randomly : change as your like, colour, sens, places, etc... )

Love

scar1410 wrote:

star~

bmin11 wrote:

Oh I remember this song. Talesweaver! One of the finenest online game <3
Probably one of the most regonizable BM (Second Run as well).
Not gonna mod, but can you change [Relax] into other names that might give you a feeling of [Hard]? It is somewhat hard you know...